Asian Fire, Feedback?

Post by **seraph0x** » Fri Aug 11, 2006 11:28 am

Rate this tease: 1 2 3 4 5
Please only rate teases you have actually seen!

Hey guys,

If you tried out Asian Fire please let me you what you thought!

I wanna improve my Webtease writing skills.

seraph!

willingtoy · Post by **willingtoy** » Sun Aug 13, 2006 1:38 pm

Nice work. I love the story, provided some form of interaction for the user of the webtease. Being an asian myself, this has quite the bit of meaning for me.

Looking forward to more good work of yours. =)

But, hmm .. the main page listing of webtease does not show the thumbnail of the first image? I think that should be fixed.

stormeagle · Post by **stormeagle** » Sun Aug 13, 2006 1:52 pm

Oooh, thumbnails - that'd be good.

Post by **seraph0x** » Sun Aug 13, 2006 2:49 pm

Nice work. I love the story, provided some form of interaction for the user of the webtease. Being an asian myself, this has quite the bit of meaning for me.

Glad you like it, thanks!

But, hmm .. the main page listing of webtease does not show the thumbnail of the first image? I think that should be fixed.

You're absolutely right, it's fixed now.

Oooh, thumbnails - that'd be good.

Hehe, if thumbnails impress you, try posting a tease, that's where I put in most of the effort.

doink · Post by **doink** » Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:45 pm

Asians turn my crank! SHE is FABULOUS! I like to see some pink, though. As for the text: a nifty new angle, in my opinion. Some spots, the text was a bit long and distracting. Overall, high marks for that one!
----Doink.

Post by **seraph0x** » Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:11 am

Hehe, then you will like my next one, too. I'm going put a bit more effort into it though, so it'll take a while to finish it.

whacker44 · Post by **whacker44** » Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:50 pm

asian fire was really hot...i had a multiple !!!