[Release][Feedback] Your Tinder Fuck Date Is A Domme and You Are A Submissive Anal Whore Part 1

[fnbt]

First webtease. It's unfinished. I wrote it up to a stopping point. You're in the bathroom waiting on a text from her.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=60065

I write stories that turn me on. They're not usually fully fleshed out. They're just outlines. When I write them I have scenes and images in my head. That's part of what turns me on. I initially thought I might post plain text as a "story" but I felt like that wouldn't capture the experience as well as if I added some pictures.

I created this first webtease with the default tease editor. I ran into a problem. I wanted to add a page and reorder the pages and couldn't figure out how to reorder pages. Then I read about the EOS editor which has more features. It's interesting. I can create teases quicker with the default editor but it doesn't have that many features.

In this first EOS tease, I'm trying to capture the story I have in my head with photos, text, and a little bit of interactivity. I may try a more "interactive" tease with branching story lines some other time.

I'm using "choice" and "timer" as a way to engage with the story mostly in an obedient submissive way. Examples: clicking a button which gives you a timer to "think about what you'd do for her" or clicking a button which gives you a timer while you "order her a drink". I like this mechanism as a means of femdom call and response/submission. If I turn every choice into a real choice between 2+ things I worry I'll get distracted and never finish the basic linear story.

There's the default simple editor, the EOS editor, and maybe more?

Is EOS the best editor?

Update: I re-worked this tease in the EOS editor. I re-released this tease as "Your Tinder Fuck Date Is A Domme and You Are A Submissive Anal Whore. EOS version. Part 1. Version 1.0.1" https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=60068

[Ryynn]

I just wanted to say I love the idea of this tease and can see it developing into something greater as I can tell that you are pretty good with writing an engaging story just from what you have produced so far. As for the editors I don't have too much experience with them so i could not tell you whats the best however from a users standpoint I generally enjoy EOS teases more than the default teases as, at least to me, they feel more immersive and can imagine that more people also feel this way too. Anyways, again great start and I look forward to further developments on this series!

[fnbt]

Thank you for the encouragement.

I lost some momentum while experimenting with all the possibilities of how to use the platform. I hope to finish the story some time. I'm not sure when.