My tease - Kate proves your worthless

[toren1234]

Just my 2nd one but I'm pretty sure I'll be making more.

This one was pretty quick and easy. I try to get the pics to flow nicely with the text.


Any feedback in welcomed.

[doink]

No one is ever any good at proof-reading their own stuff. In your tease-title, "your" should be "you're."

[havemercy]

lol, it's true, cause you wrote it, it looks right to you unless you read it carefully and no one reads carefully through what they wrote cause they know what they wrote. They just do a quick scan and what is wrong looks right to them.

[JelloBoy]

I liked it, more please

[lowielowieke]

No one is ever any good at proof-reading their own stuff. In your tease-title, "your" should be "you're."

yup but thats not the only thing its "Kate proves that you're worthless". But I don't care about it, I only care about it being a good tease or a bad tease, but i like it.

[addictlion]

I liked it alot. As always I hope you turn it in to a series.