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[Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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I've published a new tease: Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai!
You can find it on:
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=59641

It's a simple tease based on my previous idea of leaking/squeezing orgasm. You can find more details on:
viewtopic.php?p=320900#p320900

As I'm more willing in presenting the idea itself, I didn't spend much time on story/language and didn't design many minigames. Instead, I used quite a lot of minigames that I saw in teases written by TeasePlease (also use account Revuin), Animeat and MaidKun. I'm really thankful to their ideas.

Back to the tease itself, it's still an ongoing work with more graphs and audio to add. Yet, the whole game mechanic is completely finished. Therefore, I'd like to publish it first to receive the suggestions and the bugs.

As always, I don't have much time on debugging/testing the tease and the code. Therefore, it's very likely that there are some bugs or dead loops. Please let me know if you ever encountered one. Moreover, any suggestions on minigames/tempo/speed/language are always welcome!
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Re: [Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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Great tease! I enjoyed a lot of the minigames and I like that there are physical challenges too like stroking/palming/edging.

I do feel like staying hard for 20-30 minutes without touching at all is really hard personally so I had to ignore the "I'm sorry" button to play all the games. It'd be cool to get an option to be called something other than "Mr. Hentai" too. Maybe some other choices like "sir", "mr", or "slut", "loser" (for those who want more humiliation ;-) )

Didn't see any bugs on my 1st playthrough so good job on the scripting! Would love to see what you continue to make.
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Re: [Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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really good, enjoyed it a lot. Some interesting ideas I didn't see before. I honestly just have some nitpicking tweaks and suggestion

stroking, ballbusting, palming -> the range might be too big, unless this is intentional. Some description mentioned 1-300 (probably stroking). I think anything above 200 is close to impossible. Maybe increase the range each time a player picks the same game in a session.
edging also close to impossible (for me). It wouldn't be so bad, but the +2 -3 risk is not worth picking that game twice.
counting "You need to count the total number of feet, visible nipples and visible pussies." I found the description to be a little vague. Feet count as long as they are in view but may be covered, while visible outline of a pussy/nipple doesn't count. Once you understand the interpretation it is almost too easy. Maybe more pictures with multiple ladies or mix up the counting condition
memory I think I encountered the same picture twice in a sequence, which would be a negligible error for the easiest game. Maybe add a range and that increases with each attempt (e.g. 5-7, 6-8, 7-9, 8-10). Players shouldn't get comfortable picking the same game they are good at just to get some easy edges.
timing "You don’t need to timing it exactly. Instead, 2 seconds before or after it is acceptable." From my experience being 2 seconds off leads to a failure (e.g. count 25 and stop at 27)

The finish should have some more pictures, didn't count it but it was something like 3 or 4.
Another thing I've seen in multiple teases handled subpar. When you have to complete a task with a timer, like 'PC training', 'humping' and you fail (or succeed) at the last seconds you may miss the chance to press the button that you failed. Maybe query the user before continuing.
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Re: [Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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TeasePlease wrote: Mon Sep 05, 2022 7:16 pm Great tease! I enjoyed a lot of the minigames and I like that there are physical challenges too like stroking/palming/edging.

I do feel like staying hard for 20-30 minutes without touching at all is really hard personally so I had to ignore the "I'm sorry" button to play all the games. It'd be cool to get an option to be called something other than "Mr. Hentai" too. Maybe some other choices like "sir", "mr", or "slut", "loser" (for those who want more humiliation ;-) )

Didn't see any bugs on my 1st playthrough so good job on the scripting! Would love to see what you continue to make.
Thank you so much for your reply and I do appreciate and love your tease!

One of the main core mechanism not mentioned in the game is that:
The player should struggle himself in keep erection without much direct stimulation.
In such way, the player can pay more attention on appreciating the graph and enjoying the teasing rather than focusing on playing minigames.

Yet, I just played it for once after creating it and realized that staying hard in such case is really impossible for me too.....
I'll separate the soft part from "I'm sorry" with only points reduce punishment instead of ending the game, which may make the tease more feasible.

About the language, thank you so much for the suggestion! My English is broken and never know in what way the word may make people erotic. Shall add them once get time.

By the way, may I know if you can reach the leaking orgasm in such a way?
I'm also looking forward to your coming works! They're always refreshing and in good quality!
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Re: [Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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Sektz wrote: Mon Sep 05, 2022 9:40 pm really good, enjoyed it a lot. Some interesting ideas I didn't see before. I honestly just have some nitpicking tweaks and suggestion

stroking, ballbusting, palming -> the range might be too big, unless this is intentional. Some description mentioned 1-300 (probably stroking). I think anything above 200 is close to impossible. Maybe increase the range each time a player picks the same game in a session.
edging also close to impossible (for me). It wouldn't be so bad, but the +2 -3 risk is not worth picking that game twice.
counting "You need to count the total number of feet, visible nipples and visible pussies." I found the description to be a little vague. Feet count as long as they are in view but may be covered, while visible outline of a pussy/nipple doesn't count. Once you understand the interpretation it is almost too easy. Maybe more pictures with multiple ladies or mix up the counting condition
memory I think I encountered the same picture twice in a sequence, which would be a negligible error for the easiest game. Maybe add a range and that increases with each attempt (e.g. 5-7, 6-8, 7-9, 8-10). Players shouldn't get comfortable picking the same game they are good at just to get some easy edges.
timing "You don’t need to timing it exactly. Instead, 2 seconds before or after it is acceptable." From my experience being 2 seconds off leads to a failure (e.g. count 25 and stop at 27)

The finish should have some more pictures, didn't count it but it was something like 3 or 4.
Another thing I've seen in multiple teases handled subpar. When you have to complete a task with a timer, like 'PC training', 'humping' and you fail (or succeed) at the last seconds you may miss the chance to press the button that you failed. Maybe query the user before continuing.
Thank you so much for the reply and suggestion!

One of the main core mechanism not mentioned in the game is that:
The player should struggle himself in keep erection without much direct stimulation.
In such way, the player can pay more attention on appreciating the graph and enjoying the teasing rather than focusing on playing minigames.

With this idea, the player is encouraged to play the Counting/Memory/Timing and CBT/PC/Humping games to struggle the balance between immersing himself in erotic stuff and playing the games. While, the Stroking/Palming/Edge game is mainly for them to keep erection with every little chance of winning them. Those games should be the last choice cause they're gonna be very risky.

However, after tested it for once, I've realized that keep erection in such a way is really impossible....

Your suggestion on increasing difficulty on stroking/ballbusting/edging/memory/counting is a really good method to adjust the difficulty! Thank you for that, I shall add them as soon as I can.

Yet, I may not be able to increase the sequence length of memory/counting for the sake of game length and coding work. Instead, I may decrease the time of each picture being shown. Besides, more pictures shall be added in memory game though it may take a while... It's a really load of work :-|

About the timing, yes, you're right... I forgot that the 25 second is a time interval not a time, which makes me get something wrong in coding. Thank you so much for indicating it!

About the query in PC/humping, this is somehow my preference to make the tease a bit more fluently without much real interface (like click the screen and so on). Yet, I'll add the query to see if that works well for others.

Again, thank you so much for playing the game and providing so much suggestions!

By the way, may I know if you can reach the leaking orgasm in such a way?
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Re: [Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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By the way, may I know if any of the players have ever reached the leaking orgasm?
I used to reach them for several times yet get quite hard to make it when playing the game.
Would love to know your guys' opinion on the difficulty of reaching it so that I can adjust the difficulty.
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Re: [Feedback] Try to empty your balls, Mr. Hentai

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IreliaDenial wrote: Fri Sep 09, 2022 8:50 am By the way, may I know if any of the players have ever reached the leaking orgasm?
I used to reach them for several times yet get quite hard to make it when playing the game.
Would love to know your guys' opinion on the difficulty of reaching it so that I can adjust the difficulty.
On my first try I ended up with like -8 edges. I probably guessed timing game twice 2 seconds off which was annoying and miscounted a lot in the counting game.
On my second try I got like 16 edges, most from memory and counting game (like aforementioned once I figured how to count it was easy to accumulate edges there. I also like the counting game a lot). I still played most games at least once, but more as self set challenge.
To my own surprise the leaking orgasm works pretty well.
Not on every edge closer to every second to third try. I actually went over the edge after the third leak, so don't know how many tries it takes to empty or get flaccid.
Maybe include a punishment for failing to leak (e.g. ballbusting) and especially going over the edge (dunno?
However, after tested it for once, I've realized that keep erection in such a way is really impossible....
I actually didn't had a huge problem with that. Didn't really think about it a lot.
Stroking game is still far better than Edging game in terms of keeping an erection and also in having a chance to win there.
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