richman2 wrote: Sun Jul 10, 2022 6:26 pm
So first: I really like your stuff! Great work. When it comes to dialogues - even if just random lines but especially if it makes up a story - you're way better than I could ever be. Also the setting for Destiny's house I like very much and the girls as well.
Hey, thanks. To be fair, all these quotes are from my TeaseAI House of tease, and I collect a lot of phrases from scripts from reddit GWA and old teases, just adapting to fit better in the context.
The parts I wrote, I did try my best to translate to english, but I would like to have a native speaker read proof these parts.
Didn't play through everything yet. As I said I'll be busy for the foreseeable future but still I wanted to implement as much as I could today, where I found some time. Before I note several things, this is a version which includes a lot of stuff you made. It's called 3.0 but ctually it's more ike a 2.8 or something.
Downloading now to take a look.
- Desitny's house is a neighouring place to the shrinekeeper's woodhut as you suggested and it gets activated after Destiny sidestory part 7. Quite late I guess and don't know if such a massive part which is like a whole nicely crafted world in itself should be activated only with such a massive dependence. Could you think about better dependencies? Also, I would adjust some of the storytelling about the village dependencies. As of now Destiny's house is not that much related to the village. To do so would be better though I guess. Maybe it would be better to make it accessible from the lake.
That is perfect. And yes, I started thinking would be in the village, but when became to bigger, I realise would not make sense to stay there. I will look and change some things.
EDIT: I think there is just a few dialogues about the village. I changed like that:
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show destinymoody8 (3) at truecenter with dissolve
#destiny "First, I don't know what your Mistress think about you coming to the village, but I have a deal with her, and when I call you here, you are free of any consequences." #Change this if not placed in the village.
destiny "First, you are even allowed to sleep here, if so I decide."
hide destinymoody8 (3)
show destinymoody8 (5) at truecenter with dissolve
destiny "Second, when I invite you here, you are MINE! I can do whatever I want to you. God, I can even make you cum and let you make it up with your Mistress later."
destiny "I said you are mine here, but cumming without your Mistress presence it's your problem.{w=2} But don't worry, your chances to cum here are not bigger than in the Temple."
hide destinymoody8 (5)
About dependences, yeah...I was thinking about putting the Catie/Destiny sidestory way early, so the House unlock soon. But I think we need someone playing from the start to get the full picture.
- I think in some if not all of your random teases (like dojo but also others) in the "rdteasexx_end" section there should be a "scene bg_black" command before the return. Otherwise the last picture remains.
I will look, but it's possible with the random pictures. Only later I figure how to hide random pictures correctly
EDIT: I see you already fixed.
- Question: Is it intentional that in destiny's house the option screen is not used anymore?
Damn, I forgot that. I remember about the screen in the middle, but at the same time I learned how to create a new one and did not decided what I would use. Then I forgot
I will look that too. Mine screen is only for the competition, so I will use yours.
- After playing the Dreamscape RPG I found it quite compelling to allow for x strokes instead of an edge (at least, say, if daily edge is still low) instead of an edge. From a player's perspective I find it quite hard to just start the game / day and have to edge immediately... Therefore I think to provide an alternative would be great. Implemented that in my "timededging" screens but would do so also in your static menus that ask you to edge.
Yes, I remember one day I could not sleep because I did not get an edge (Shunka was not available anymore). But I thought was because I loaded a new version to test or something like that and the new content would prevent that problem.
But Dreamscape gave me some ideas too. I start to try a 'progression menu', more to help people to not miss content. But it's hard to find the correct variables to track progression.
- Had here and there small errors, but overall from what I tested you really did a great job! Basically nothing to change! WOW!
Thanks....like I said, I loaded that one on a test file. I clean a lot of errors and made a quick way to pass the days to test the progression.
Edit: Didn't put in your chapter slides cause read too late but like the idea, will implement
No problem, that is more for the 'final version', to help people to give feedback about balance (like 'there is no much content in the Shrine part', so we could move some parts to that.).
Now, about the competition, like I said, I tested my idea and it's worked. I will hold that, so we don't get lost with all the new things (and it's not done yet). But I start to write the dialogues and
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- not sure if you will agree, but I bring Anri back to bring you to the competition. Another thing you said some time ago, about changing the main Mistress, I made some dialogues mentioning that, not a big deal, just to implement the idea. I start to think about a auction after the competition, but you could choose your new Mistress in a way. It's just an idea, since this would create a big work to continue the story, like always have a 'if' to determine who is the actual Mistress. I still don't know if it's a good idea.
I stoped the competition for now, because I played some edge focused teases and like it a lot, and of course wanted to implement that now
Not sure if will fit the story, but since I will not create the 'story' and will just adapt some teases, I will ask authorization to the authors to use it. If they say no, I don't need to worry if will fit or not. If they agree, I will see a way, maybe just create a add-on to someone to ínstall' (I will try to use only actual pictures from the game, so will be only a text file).
, that's mostly because of it seems to grow and grow, ... and grow! 
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