@Skirata:
This feels like the opposite of how the joke is supposed to go. You hurt your wrist at the
gym so you have to go easy on the self pleasure? XD I hope it heals quickly regardless.
@Leeroy:
I am a switch as well, but like Misty pointed out the potential to create a reasonably engaging dominant experience for the player is very difficult. Because everything has to be pre-written, the player never has any real control and without control the dominance can feel hollow. A bunch of branching choices can give the illusion of this feeling, but they are a lot of work to make.
There are however, ways to incorporate some switch and dominance into a scene or part of a set. One way I’ve considered is having a Mistress figure who is in charge, but then a second model who might be submissive to the player. Basically, give a reason why the player’s control is restricted but let them enjoy it within those restrictions.
BBBeanie wrote: Thu May 19, 2022 6:11 am
Reply to feedback (in some detail):
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Okay lots to reply to here!
No, I doubt the end of this story will be the end of Abigail’s interest in me. Or my growing interest in her for that matter. 
Well, I never intend for Kyla to come off as ‘cruel,’ at least not exactly. I guess to me the difference is she always reasoning for what she’s doing and it’s never uncaring even when she is incredibly brutal. Nicely done on her challenge, I really debated how long to give you and it sounds like 2 minutes worked out well.
Haha, okay I don’t think Angel expected you to almost never stop at all. Just no breaks, but I suppose the white heel rule is yours to interpret. Anything practical that has to be done, like changing grips as needed, scrolling down and reading text are all completely fine. So I would say a definite pass.
Yeah, Jenya’s punishment is quite something. If you didn’t guess, I’m the one she’s heard of having to try it before (although IIRC Miss Elyna assigned it to me at 180 bpm minimum….it was brutal). In any case, I wouldn’t get anything like the Handy expressly for this. You’re likely to hit limits of how long any toy can keep operating without getting overheated, running out of power etc. Honestly, a fleshlight mounted so you can use something other than your arms for a bit might be the best bet
Okay, I maybe need to start counting more carefully when Malena is around. She was supposed to be brutal, maybe not quite that brutal. But then, it seems she made it quite the experience for you. I don’t even think Malena set out to intentionally make you cum again right away…but then again who knows for sure?
Okay, to speak to the other stuff I don’t think anyone here expects you (even with a challenge like yours) to just have no sexual activity at all if you get busy and can’t be part of the game here. But, I think the idea of coming clean and taking on a punishment for orgasms without any sort of permission makes a lot of sense. I don’t mind making a start on it either, as long as you aren’t in a huge rush. Especially since Malena will also need to visit you again as a separate punishment.
I do have a couple questions just to make sure I’m clear on things:
For the punishment for your time away, it looks like you are thinking something more game wide and ongoing than just a single set yes? Where I would get that started?
Second…how does a “full accident” happen? As in, did the busting just push you so far it definitely felt like a full orgasm even if you tried to hold back, or once you realized you went too far you just gave up and enjoyed it? This one goes for both Malena’s edges and while you were away.
Last thought, which of these punishments should I try to write first?
For Nina’s reward, I do want to stick to the fantasy I chose because it’s fun and not very common. I have no idea if she’s done anything which would fit though. I can say Baremaidens might be a useful search term. And that trying to look up anything fantasy setting in porn is awful, every term you might use has some sort of double meaning it seems
In terms of ongoing challenges and rewards I have:
For you:
Monthly trans model, Denied until HFO (and see if it can be done in 2 weeks), Kyla’s Rule (until June 18), Angel’s Heel Switch Reward (3 sets), Chanel booty call for after the HFO
And to do: Nina’s reward for me
I have:
Rules in BB mode, Jenya’s Rule and Mila’s rule (have the dates all marked). To do: Malena’s punishment and the overall punishment for you.
#MilorraboSet
#WBHelequin
This one might be fairly long. I also use description a lot for immersion, so of course just follow along with what’s happening as close as you can.
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Excited for the day ahead, you step inside the Lust B&B. There is a small lobby area for patrons to get comfortable, disrobe and store their clothes in the provided lockers. After stripping down and showing your pass to a very cute clerk showing some luscious cleavage, you step through a door and into the Lust B&B proper. - Spoiler: show
- You are immediately greeted by an entryway of enticements, the girls having fun showing off on personal stages as you walk by. Well, walk by and stop to admire of course. "Welcome hon, this is all part of the experience, so don't skimp on following those rules I know you came with."
"Does an ass like this really make you want to slap your balls?" She gives her hips a slow waggle.
You're in for such a treat tonight, I caught a glimpse of that pass you got in with!
I'll make sure you're nice and warm before you get on inside.
Maybe next time you can try out a fuck all the strippers until they're satisfied package!
I heard that Gina! But would it be fuck them all, or worship them all for a man like you Milo?
Ladies, it can be both!
Welcome! We both know it's redheads which really get you worked up…
Just watch and enjoy us to the fullest!
The girls seem to becoming more sultry and sexual as you passed farther down this hall of lust.
Come on…hit a little harder for me and a pose like this!
You're getting closer to the real start of your night Milo. But savour these sights too.
I bet you're dreaming of letting me do this to a different pole.
Speaking of hotter, this is the Lust B&B. Rules for only one girl just won't work. Show all three of us some appreciation! And assume you should always follow those rules per woman while you're here.
Ahhh fuck that's the spot!
Yeeeees! Fuck! Head on inside Milo, but give all us girls one last 30 second edge before you do!
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- Hello Milo, welcome to the Lust B&B. Congrats too, since this is your reward for both Beanie and Hele failing Adrianna and Tori.
"I'm sure you have an idea what section this might be, given my hair colour. Bring those balls nice and close." Lorena takes your balls in one hand, holding them so she can swat and slap them with the other. She hits with medium force, making sure you feel it but simultaneously making the slaps sensual and arousing.
"I know, I might seem like a surprise visit for a busting package. But this is a reward! The girls and I figured this should be fun and playful for you, even while smacking your nuts around." She keeps up her sensual slaps, adding a slight press and rub after each one. Just hard enough to be something other than soothing, but not really painful either.
She gives a soft giggle, keeping hold of your balls. "That and…" she trails off as she lands one more normal swat. Without warning her grip on your balls tightens hard, her other hand balls up and she slams hard as you dare punches into your balls, beating them mercilessly 8 times before hitting as hard as she possibly can on the 10th and final hit, trying to leave you on the floor.
Her eyes blaze, looking down on you. She hikes her dress up, just enough so she can free her leg to kick you in the balls now. She stays quiet, using her foot to spread your legs open if needed. This time she escalates her force, kicking you three times hard and fast, slowing down slightly to thump three very hard kicks into your nuts and then taking her time to ensure you feel each and every one of three hard as you dare kicks. She pauses, not having to say anything before snapping a full force flooring kick into your nuts.
"You can stay down there if it's easier. From now on the default with me is four hard, three very hard and three as hard as you dare," she tells you, continuing to kick or stomp on your balls as she sees fit.
"This might be a reward, but you asked for this. And normally, I might just have given you that playful, fun, wonderfully sexy busting."
"But I fail to see why you should be rewarded when the other boys failed that impossible challenge idea you had."
"Maybe it was not your intent, but…180 bpm in a fleshlight after over 100 edges? You really should know better." This time she pushes you down to more easily kick and stomp on your balls. On the final stomp, she really leans into it, crushing them under her foot and varying her weight for a good 20 seconds.
"I could just as easily give you a challenge right now. Take all the remaining hits I will give you today at try to floor yourself force. If you fail you'll be writing Hele a Lust B&B pass."
"No, not actually slut! I'm not so callous as to punish you with the same nonesense you did. Nor be so cavalier about safety. I was making a point. Si?"
"That said," she blasts your balls with another full force kick, taking you to the floor before immediately following up with the other hits. "Some lessons are best learned at my feet."
"See? Didn't that make the point so much more clear for you?"
"You might be here, you might even have that reward pass. But now you're inside and might not find all the rewards you're looking for."
"Any guesses as to what happens when my dress is completely gone?"
"A trip to the floor maybe? Maybe several?"
"Well…you have part of it." She takes your balls and rapidly hammers them with five punches escalting through normal, hard, very hard, hard as you dare and flooring. She picks you up and then does it a second time.
"But no, that's just not enough." As soon as she finishes hitting your balls she grabs them and squeezes, the pressure constantly somewhere between very hard and as hard as you dare as it pulses a little. "From now on after your hits for each pose, there will be 20 seconds of this."
"Feel free to kneel or sink to the floor any time you need slut. This is an extravangaza after all, and those do not stop early."
"Do I have a bias? Of course. Hele is usually a good, devoted sub. So as much as I dislike impossible challenges in general, I’m more likely to notice when if he’s the one having to do such a challenge."
"But, I'm in control. So I can do whatever I want with my bias. Don't forget it slut." This time she crushes your balls as hard as she can, trying to drop you to the floor.
"I've been told that's more painful than being busted to the floor. And that some viscious squeezing in between makes everything feel more painful."
"From that look, what I heard is right too."
"No, we're not done. I think you understand me, but we're not done yet. And you can feel lucky."
"Because I won't assign you any further tasks to make up for all this."
"I will however," out of nowhere she snaps the third kick into your balls with flooring force. "Leave you with an ache," the sixth kick arrives just as hard. "To fucking remember," kicks nine and ten both land with flooring force, the 10th delivered when you are on hands and knees trying to get back to your feet.
"And maybe best to remember that even if a girl is usually fun, playful and nice."
"She probably still knows how to fuck up your balls. It's not a hard thing to work out." She laughs.
"For instance," again she holds your balls in one hand and balls her other into a fist. She fires two hard as you dare punches followed immediately by a flooring one. She gives you no rest, immediately crushing your balls harshly and using that agonizing grip to drag you by the balls up to at least your knees. She simply gives a small smile and says, "Two more times just like that, I'll even forget the 10th hit."
"Let's finish you off," she says with a sultry edge to her voice. "Simple this time," she adds. She then hammers rapid, hard as you dare hits into your balls without stopping until you inevitably drop to the floor. When you do she holds your legs open and only then starts to count each of the 10 punches, each one delievered as hard as she thinks you can still endure. "Now we're done. Have fun with the rest of your visit and make sure the next time I see you it's for more fun reasons!"
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- Hello Milo! Welcome back to the Lust B&B. I see Lorena already found you. Well, since this is my place and I take pride in its reputation…
Allow me to personally ensure your cock still works!
Which a little flash here and there and my lovely red hair should take care of nicely!
Good. Now as I was saying about the reputation of this place…
I want it to be clear I would not usually let any of the girls punish someone here on a reward pass. Unless of course…
That punishment was exactly in line with what the pass holder asked for. So congrats I guess Milo….
I have yet to see any other boy put Lorena in the mood to savage their balls like that!
Now I won't spoil what else is all on your schedule today.
But I will make sure you are properly wound up for it.
Hmmm…
Your host so totally nude…I think we can add in an extra edge for that.
Good. I've made sure there will be nothing shy about the edges you get today.
At this point, I'll even tell you this isn't just a courtesy tease.
Edging you senseless while I use the best sex toy there is, a skilled man, to get off is part of your schedule!
Mmmph
Fuck this particular toy is ridiculous don't you think? You are going to owe me when I slip it inside me.
Oh fuck yes! Add one more edge any time there's a dick inside me. Let's really get you going!
Come on Milo! Can you edge as hard and fast as I fuck?
Pump faster! I don't care if it's only one stroke between edges.
I promise this is…a key…part of….your schedule…
Fuck…fuck fuck….
Shit…he's throbbing so much.
Fuck! Yes! Just make it a total of 10 edges as fast as you can for me Milo! Then it's off to the next girl for you, enjoy the stay and please leave us a like if you enjoy!
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- You head straight out onto the patio, cock still throbbing from Penny's show. "Milo! I know my hair might look a little lighter out here in the sun, but stick with those 30 fast, full and definitely firm strokes for me. If you like me at all, you should be hitting the edge!"
And that is our game for today, edgeslut. If you edge in the 30 strokes, you pause until you can stroke again before finishing the strokes, but you also owe me an edge directly after those strokes are done. If you hit the edge a second time in the 30 strokes, it adds 2 additional edges at the end. And so on. To make it clear if you say, edged 3 times getting through the 30 strokes you'd owe me 1 + 2 + 3 = 6 edges after the strokes are done.
Now, don't you dare slow down or loosen that grip.
I'm going to make Penny's tease feel like a warm up.
And I can do it without ever ordering you to the edge.
Fuck, that cock of yours is throbbing. Still glad you asked to be edged into oblivion more or less?
Isn't is so much fun what a sexy body can inspire?
I'm going to leave you drooling with desperation from the edging…
And you won't even have held an edge since getting past the entryway.
I know these are at least some part of the inspiration.
Oh you'll see them, once I know you need just a little bit more.
To totally lose your mind.
For an edgeslut like you, not to mention some of the others around here, I'm surprised how little the idea of gooning comes up.
I bet you could goon an entire day away just staring at me.
And how many favourite women are on that list of yours? Hahaha
More than enough to have you constantly gooning if you wanted it.
Mmm what a fucking view. Worship me with that edge! There better not be any way you're only stroking for me by now.
Good boy.
Of course we're taking our time!
With a stroking section like this, it's the only way to absolutely ensure you hit the point of uncontrollably edging.
Of pushing you towards the point where you can barely touch your cock without heading right for the edge.
And just in case it hasn't been enough so far…
Have a look at something I know you desire.
And now give me 5 edges as fast as you fucking can before your strokes for them!
If you weren't edging like mad before…
You better be now!
Let everything other than stroking, hitting the edge repeatedly and these fucking incredible tits go.
You might leave me in a desperate, horny, mess.
But I'll make sure the getting there was oh so worth it.
Oh I just realized edgeslut…
If you're in this state now…
How is it all going to feel when these slip off?
Mmmm…give me more!
Hahaha yes, you don't even have a clear view of my ass but it really doesn't matter.
Just let the edges flood over your, who cares how high the numbers get?
Use them to show me what a goddess I am.
Not a shred of clothing left. Edges are double for this perfect fucking moment.
Mmm good boy. I love being worshipped like that.
So I'll keep you just a little longer…although you have other places to be I know.
I hope you got what you were looking for here today Milo, because I will come turn you into an edgeslut any day.
Now you best get going to the next item on your schedule! But do come back soon.
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- Mmmm
Lexi: You're here! Great! You can treat Abigail's lovely hair as red, our focus is going to be all on your cock. We have just a few other rules while you're with us.
Oooh fuck..guess I will keep explaining. No more…touching that shaft. You are only allowed to stroke the head. You should already know this, but you will give Abigail the edges for red hair and me the held edge for blondes.
Other than that, you might get a choice or two to make along the way. We won't be decpetive about what you're getting, but if you make a choice…
Abigail: You have to stick with it and see it through. No matter what. Do that and we can all have a good time. But if you make a choice and then go back on it…well just don't.
Besides, Lexi thought of a nice little bonus for you today.
Lexi: Sure you could call it that! Anyway, since your little challenge made both those sluts Beanie and Hele cum, I thought what better way to add some extra humiliation in…
Than taking the woman who has Hele in her clutches and tormenting him every chance she gets and fucking her like a wanton slut!
Abigail: Oh I bet he'd be hard just hearing about it. But it's you who gets to really enjoy the show Milo.
And we definitely have a show planned.
We may even make you cum.
Lexi: Just pick the right option! I really want to see it happen…
Abigail: Oh come now, what are the odds he turns down an orgasm?
Lexi: Mmm good point!
Abigail: Damn Milo, your blonde Goddess really has a nice ass.
Lexi: There's a lot that's nice in this room…
Mmm
And all of it is nicer…
Without these!
Fucking hell Abigail…speaking of nice ass.
Abigail: Don’t you dare lose control, as easy as it must be with these coming down.
Lexi: I'm not even quite naked yet so definitely don't lose it!
Abigail: Let's fix that.
Lexi: So much better! And now it's time to switch to palming. Yes for everything. Yes constantly. You are about to see a Goddess fuck another Goddess!
Abigail: Overload that dick. Edge, squirm and keep on palming.
Lexi: Ohhh fuck yes. That feels so good…and watching you palm to that edge over and over is always so…
Fucking hot.
Fuck right there yes…
More, more more….yes…
Don't slow down!
"FUCK!" Lexi screams, shivering as she cums on Abigail's tongue.
Ohhhh fuck…it's your turn now…why don't…you explain…while I catch my breath?
Abigail: Yes Miss. Okay Milo, you might be the edgeslut here but it's almost time I show off my slut side too. This is where you get to make your choice.
When Lexi starts fucking me you can keep palming, or you can switch to your fleshlight. If you stay with palming we will edge you into a gooner's sort of bliss and then deny you at the end. If you switch to the fleshlight, we will still edge you senseless but you will also get to cum! It really is a no-brainer, just pick the fleshlight.
Lexi: Ha! I agree. But you do still get the choice Milo, forgive us if we get a little bit focused on each other and just assume you're using your fleshlight. Get it ready unless you're really going to pass it up and settle for palming to a nice view. We both really want you to use that toy!
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- Lexi slides her strap-on easily into Abigail's soaking wet pussy. "Fuck yeah, a good slut takes this so easily. Milo, do your best to only stimulate the head even with that fleshlight. Make sure you're lubed and can go to the hilt any time though."
Abigail: Oh fuck…please go all the way in. Rail me!
Lexi: Show a little bit of patience slut.
See? Just the tip and you're moaning as much as Milo is!
Now…
Good…spread wide slut!
Abigail: Fuck…please give me more! I need it…
Lexi: Hmmm….
Abigail: Please…please oh god you're such a tease fuck….
Lexi: Take it to the hilt slut! Milo, full length strokes with that fleshlight!
Abigail screams in pleasure as Lexi pumps her dildo in and out.
Lexi: Now take that toy and fuck it as hard and fast as you can and don't you dare fucking stop until I say! Cum, cum just like you were filling Abigail's cunt and do not let up for a second after. Full speed, and don't you dare pussy out us even if it makes you scream!
Your screams of pleasure and agony join Abigial's as Lexi takes her hard and fast for 30 seconds.
Abigail shudders and cums hard, but Lexi is just as relentless on her pussy as she is on your dick. "Do not slow down! 30 seconds slut! SLUTS!"
"More! This is what you wanted both of you! Do not slow down" Abigail is just panting and moaning, eyes rolling. (30 seconds again)
Lexi finally lets up on Abigail, takign the dildo in hand to keep sensuously stimulating the other woman. But they both look at you and say, "Don't slow down yet slut!" (30 seconds)
Lexi: Fuck you are so hot Abigail. And the best part is he has to just keep on going! (30 seconds)
Abigail: So he does! But I also think we've made our point to that poor tortured cock. One more minute Milo, then you can finally stop. And not one word of complaint, or I'll put you on the same plan to show you how agonizing an orgasm can be I have Hele on.
Lexi: *giggles* Ooooh you get extra feisty after being fucked Abigail. Care to relax a while with me? Milo, I hope you got everything you wanted, I'm pretty sure we hit at least four of your packages all in one! You can head back out to Penny now, she'll show you to where you can get cleaned up and relax a bit before heading home. See you soon.
Giving both GoodGirl and Leeroy Credit for the multi day set.
Active Players for May
Name (Last Month’s +/-) | Waiting Since | Sets Created | Created/Received +/-
Ecik17 (-1) |May 5| 3 | +2
Censor_Slut (0) | May 12 | 2 | +2
GoodGirl (+1) | May 10 | 3 | +2
Helequin – (-1) | May 5 | 3 | +1
BBBeanie (0) | May 18 | 4 | +1
Ddevil (+1) | May 3| 1 | 0
Mistypanda22 (0) | Mar 22 | 0 | 0
Lmind (0) | May 15 | 1 | 0
Brian (-1) | 1 set to do | 2 | +1
LeeroyJerkins(+2) | Some sets to do (I lost track how many) | 5 | 0
Skirata (-1) | 2 Sets to do | 3 | +2
Players with sets to reply to:
Milorrabo (-2) | 1 set | 1 | -3
Bjorn13 (0) | 1 set | 1 | 0
Milofaul (0) | 2 set | 0 | -1
Geekymathstudent (-2) | 1 set | 0 | 0
Caught!
. Malena got what she wanted, she knew those edges would fuck me and here we are.
in your heart, send it GG’s way! 
For you … it should be FIRE! 
I vouch for the quality of the work!! 
I got ANOTHER story arc that imma reveal in the massive set, and imma tie that to a 5 Day Set I wanna make for Skirata that I have committed to, so … 
… I figure I should develop some rules for a “dom mode,” but … how do you do that? 
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