[Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

[ritewriter]

Hi, nice milf tease. Can u please add more endings and more routes in this tease? Can u add endings progress like 0/9 1/9 etc... and progress of the tease procentage? Thanks.

More endings and routes are definitely planned.

Tease and/or ending progress counters are beyond my coding ability, but if someone walked me through how to do it, I might be able to add it.

[tom.hevenaars]

Hi, nice milf tease. Can u please add more endings and more routes in this tease? Can u add endings progress like 0/9 1/9 etc... and progress of the tease procentage? Thanks.

More endings and routes are definitely planned.

Tease and/or ending progress counters are beyond my coding ability, but if someone walked me through how to do it, I might be able to add it.

I'd love to help out. If you let me know how you'd envision the progress counters, then I'll write up some code for it with explanations. You could display an ending progress counter, but maybe it'd be cool to also see the progress of routes instead of only endings somehow? Let me know, and I'll write up the code!

[ritewriter]

I'd love to help out. ... Let me know, and I'll write up the code!

Thanks for the offer! I will probably take you up on that eventually, but for now, my main focus is cleaning up the existing tease and executing all my other planned content.

Once that's done, creating a "scoring" system like in Trials of the Succubi would be a terrific addition.

[Sisyphuster]

This tease is an all-time great. God DAMN it's so hot! Do you have work up anywhere else? I'd support your work on patreon or whatever.

[AFro62]

My all time favorite tease. I cant stop playing it. Bridgette B is so perfect in this role and she is so sexy. Can't wait for more updates.

[ritewriter]

This tease is an all-time great. God DAMN it's so hot! Do you have work up anywhere else? I'd support your work on patreon or whatever.

Thank you!

I have done a ton of femdom captions as Darkest-Muses. You can see them here:

BDSMLR: https://darkest-muses.bdsmlr.com/

Reddit: https://www.reddit.com/user/ritewriterer

I don't have a Patreon, but if you'd like, I did sign up for buymeacoffee:

https://www.buymeacoffee.com/DarkestMuses

I think it's up and running, though I've never used it.

Thank you to everyone who's given me a high rating and said nice things here. It means a lot.

[ritewriter]

Working on an update with a new character and new scenes!

Scenes are usually 5-10 pages and I have time for a page or two a day. This character has a few scenes, so it might take a bit.

Meanwhile I'd love to know what folks' favorite scenes, characters, and endings are.

[indyc]

I only now realized that I haven't shared my thoughts on this tease publicly.

A tease with TONS of photos, decisions that matter, that is not bogged down in long timers and metronomes, that actually is in a "finished" state - These alone make it a top tease for me. Add a unique setting to that (stealing your inheritance) and I really do think this deserves all the praise it is getting. I don't even care for milfs and it still gets me going.

While I still think it could be improved here and there mechanically and I wish there were more "playing with fire" scenes physically, it's still exceptional for me. I know you have a more complicated tease in mind to come and I am waiting in line for it.

Meanwhile I'd love to know what folks' favorite scenes, characters, and endings are.

There is one pic during the

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dominating her

scene that's just chef's kiss* and I love the uncertainty the scene creates.

Calling her mommy is so well executed and feels like she gets her hooks into you each time.

I like the diary and sauna scenes because you just know she saw you naked.

As stated before, my favorites are when you can touch her while still having hope that it isn't game over yet.

[ritewriter]

Thank you! I'm glad you like how it turned out. It wouldn't be anywhere near as good without your help and feedback.

And it wouldn't exist at all if I hadn't been inspired by your masterpiece.

[Skip Towne]

Yes, believe the hype... this is indeed one of the all-time greats on this site, and I cannot wait for more scenes. The concept, writing, and gameplay are all top-notch, but what really elevates this is the feeling of actually being manipulated, controlled, dominated, and broken down bit by bit. It's so well done, and I love how you actually can successfully fight back if you want, but it is significantly harder than giving in.

[ritewriter]

Yes, believe the hype... this is indeed one of the all-time greats on this site, and I cannot wait for more scenes.

Thanks! Working on them now. Hopefully the next version will be out this week.

My big goals for 1.2 are:

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Bug/typo stomping. ALWAYS IN PROGRESS
Colors for all choice buttons IN PROGRESS BUT I'M SURE I'LL MISS SOME
Introduce a new character, Elsa's little sister, Kenzie. DONE
Enable female character for "Resident Devil" video game. DONE
Add Dad's secretary Kristina to friends. DONE
Enable all phone calls to friends. IN PROGRESS

Long term goals:

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More escape routes including one for each friend (Nate, Elsa, Kenzie, Isiah, Kristina)
More content for the MC's best friend, Nate.
SIX MONTHS LATER: Customized Bridgette BROKEN and CAGED endings based on fetishes acquired.
Introducing the mysterious Institute, which may be the MC's last hope to save himself.

Once I accomplish all the long term goals, EVIL STEPMOMMY will be finished and I'll move to my next tease.

[notshyguy]

Ran into a dead end early on.

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While avoiding the kitchen in the morning and playing Resident Devil as a male character, there's a dead end soon after Kenzie shows up. Can't progress past "Oh, shit. Kenzie."

[ritewriter]

Thank you.

There was a misspelled variable in the next EVAL line.

It should be fixed.

[AFro62]

Ran into a dead end early on.

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While avoiding the kitchen in the morning and playing Resident Devil as a male character, there's a dead end soon after Kenzie shows up. Can't progress past "Oh, shit. Kenzie."

Same thing happens just a few frames later now.

[ritewriter]

Same thing happens just a few frames later now.

That's because I made the exact same mistake again one page later.

I'm a terrible coder, sorry. New version 1.22a SHOULD work.