[Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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ritewriter wrote: Fri Apr 08, 2022 5:45 am Just to make sure, if I fix things in the main file, they'll be fixed in the live file too, right?

Because I'm finding a lot of things to fix. This was supposed to be my learning tease afterall.

Lots of mistakes.

If anyone spots some, please do let me know. My goal is to get this clean then start on V2.

Thanks again to everyone who helped.
Yes, once you edit the tease the script is edited and the "live" version is changed. It is better to work on a different copy of the tease (you can create a new one and upload the script to get an identical copy; you don't have to reload images) and then update the published script with the edited one once all edits are in place.

Editing the published version straight can cause issues, if someone starts plying the tease while you are mid editing, I guess.

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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Okay, now that I know that the red switch turns ON skippable dialogues instead of OFF like I thought, there should be far fewer long, unskippable delays between SAY commands. :lol:
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Thamrill wrote: Fri Apr 08, 2022 7:12 am
ritewriter wrote: Fri Apr 08, 2022 5:45 am Just to make sure, if I fix things in the main file, they'll be fixed in the live file too, right?

Because I'm finding a lot of things to fix. This was supposed to be my learning tease afterall.

Lots of mistakes.

If anyone spots some, please do let me know. My goal is to get this clean then start on V2.

Thanks again to everyone who helped.
Yes, once you edit the tease the script is edited and the "live" version is changed. It is better to work on a different copy of the tease (you can create a new one and upload the script to get an identical copy; you don't have to reload images) and then update the published script with the edited one once all edits are in place.

Editing the published version straight can cause issues, if someone starts plying the tease while you are mid editing, I guess.

~Thamrill
It's my understanding that sharing a link of a tease will "update" all the changes made to the tease each time someone loads that link. The updates to the code should not affect someone currently playing that link.

However, this does not seem to happen for published teases. I believe edits to the code of a published tease are not updated to anyone playing or loading the tease until it is republished. However, I have noticed that changing the title of the tease causes it to not be able to load for anyone until you republish.

I am sure there are other issues working on a published tease can have so I suggest against it as Thamrill stated. Have a copy of it that you edit instead.

Edit: fapnip reminded me that uploading a backup on a published tease will also cause it to lock up before republishing.
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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UPDATED 4/9/22:

Minor Quality of Life improvements (fixed some skippable SAY timers, changed some CHOICE colors for ease of reading.)
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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When is the next release coming out? *Grins
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Amazing tease,

I haven't seen most parts of the tease yet but I'm already loving the setup.

If you do like some feedback;
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I would suggest to replace all the inspirational ' willpower' google images to the tease picture before it. The text explains enough not to need such an image for your point.

I don't know the script but it seems that most of those pages are unique to their place in the tease. In the case of the willpower factor being a landing page for several moments in the tease you could change all the willpower images to black pages.
Its just a personal preference, there's also some humor to it. So, do as u like ofc, great tease, great work and tyvm :)
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Wow, just wow!
I really loved this tease (although i am not a fan of MILFs and didn't find the model too attractive, but that's a personal taste).

The storytelling is really great and it is EXACTLY my typical fantasy of trying to resist in the urge of submitting....so, to me, this was pratically perfect :-D
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Soul3000 wrote: Sun Apr 10, 2022 12:09 am When is the next release coming out? *Grins
I’m focusing on fixes for a bit then I’ll get into new content. Probably endings?
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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imtoosexy wrote: Sun Apr 10, 2022 7:26 am Amazing tease,

I haven't seen most parts of the tease yet but I'm already loving the setup.

If you do like some feedback;
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I would suggest to replace all the inspirational ' willpower' google images to the tease picture before it. The text explains enough not to need such an image for your point.

I don't know the script but it seems that most of those pages are unique to their place in the tease. In the case of the willpower factor being a landing page for several moments in the tease you could change all the willpower images to black pages.
Its just a personal preference, there's also some humor to it. So, do as u like ofc, great tease, great work and tyvm :)
Glad you’re enjoying it!

Interesting suggestion. I like the humor of the willpower images, but I can see where they might not work for everyone.

What does everyone else think?
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Daragorn wrote: Sun Apr 10, 2022 1:34 pm Wow, just wow!
I really loved this tease (although i am not a fan of MILFs and didn't find the model too attractive, but that's a personal taste).

The storytelling is really great and it is EXACTLY my typical fantasy of trying to resist in the urge of submitting....so, to me, this was pratically perfect :-D
Glad you’re enjoying it. I’m not super into MILFs either tbh, but I used Bridgette B for the original captions that inspired the game and she just fit the idea so perfectly for me. So when I decided to expand it, it just felt right to stick with her.

Obviously I enjoy the idea of fighting and (usually) failing to resist a dominant woman too!
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Great tease. It really feels like you are having your willpower broken. I love how it is gradual and the stepmommy is very sexy.
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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ritewriter wrote: Mon Apr 11, 2022 7:40 am
Daragorn wrote: Sun Apr 10, 2022 1:34 pm Wow, just wow!
I really loved this tease (although i am not a fan of MILFs and didn't find the model too attractive, but that's a personal taste).

The storytelling is really great and it is EXACTLY my typical fantasy of trying to resist in the urge of submitting....so, to me, this was pratically perfect :-D
Glad you’re enjoying it. I’m not super into MILFs either tbh, but I used Bridgette B for the original captions that inspired the game and she just fit the idea so perfectly for me. So when I decided to expand it, it just felt right to stick with her.

Obviously I enjoy the idea of fighting and (usually) failing to resist a dominant woman too!
If i can give you suggestions for the future versions/expansion (i am excited to hear you plan on keep working on this already excellent tease), i would "expand" a bit the stroking/edging parts when she teases you and beat your willpower seducing you slowly into submission.
There are a bit too few parts where she instruct you to stroke/edge for her and they are also pretty short; it would be awesome to have more/longer imho.
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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I absolutely love it. Even though Bridgette B is totally not attractive for me I enjoyed the story a lot. Getting stuck into a womans web slowly is really hot. Is there currently any road to have Bridgette using a strap-on?
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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No, I wish. Unfortunately, I don’t think Bridgette B has ever done a pegging scene. And I definitely looked.

However….
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There are pegging scenes with others characters.

1.Escape to college, spend your inheritance, and see the professor.

2. Do all of the above but go to the police,

3. Escape, return for the funeral, go to the reception, stay at the party.

4. Hide in your rooom, play a video game, post-apocalypse, male character.

There are also some strapon images if you hide in your room and go online.

EDITTED BECAUSE I FORGOT A COUPLE SCENES.
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Re: [Release][Feedback] EVIL STEPMOMMY

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Hi, nice milf tease. Can u please add more endings and more routes in this tease? Can u add endings progress like 0/9 1/9 etc... and progress of the tease procentage? Thanks.
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