I see the difficulties others have put out to writing them and I agree with most of them. I think it is difficult to write a set in this game with that in mind. However, it may be because we are seeing things as the player must also be dominant. I think if we can consider that both the player and the girl as submissive it may bring interesting stories. I mainly think of another model who is dominant and is using both the player and the submissive in interesting ways. Like if the dominant model made the player use the submissive girl in the way she wants, making the player feel like their in control when really they are not. They get to top but at the same time they are being instructed how to top. So I think a submissive girl could be written into a set, however it has to come with either a lot of effort on writing it to give the player a sense of control, with "Choose your own adventure" like stated before, Or with a certain environment where the player still has no control, like with a third model or maybe even a role playing approach where the player just experiences a story.
I agree with Helequin here, I don't think being dominant necessarily means being mean. Of course they both can coincide but its only one way of being dominant. I think back to a live session I had with a Domme, she's known for being mean and can be quite ferocious. But when I sessioned, she asked me what I was comfortable with, and since I was completely inexperienced I asked for the atmosphere to be more friendly and to increase intensity as we go along. She took this and made the session amazing. She was dominant in commanding me yet seemed happy that I was enjoying the torment. Her busting was intense but she always acted based on how I was reacting. Often times telling me to slow things down as I quickly would get back up after she kicked me, Or telling me how well I was doing. She was dominant, but she also kind and we had a blast. Honestly I think that kind of dominance is way sexier than mean spirited dominance. For me I enjoy when someone enjoys the busting as much as I do. Not that a mean Domme isn't sexy, there are lots of ways being mean can be super sexy too, but for me, most of the time I love a kind Domme.
I feel like with the personalities in my favorites, a majority of them I would not consider mean. Mila can be brutal but she loves that I enjoy the brutal busting. Kyla is harsh with the crushing but is encouraging, often trying to see just how far I'll push things for her. I think the only one I could consider mean is Whitney because all she seems wants is the damage. But, I feel like many of you have caught on to this in writing sets for me as I don't see sets being written as being mean. Most of the time, the models all seem to enjoy busting or are trying to see the buzz around it. So for that I thank you all for playing the game.
Thanks again Misty, I'll take a look at those series in time. In the meantime I looked at her Induction to HFO Series and surprisingly it seems to work. I'm not on the level of orgasming just yet, but I feel like with enough listens to different audios I may be able to achieve it. The cage doesn't seem to help but all the more challenge to actually achieve this.
You awake with a minor headache
Ah you're finally awake
Sorry for the secrecy there
Tori just wouldn't have agreed to work with me on this
If she knew what I truly wanted to do...
Well, lets not get too ahead of ourselves here
For now, You are probably wondering what's going to happen
Well its simple really
My friends and I are going to fuck with you
in lots of ways
I may make you edge thousands of times
Or maybe just once and keep you there for hours
I could lock you in that cage and make you try to fuck yourself to orgasm
I might kick the cum out of those balls
To even slowly crushing an orgasm from those nuts
There's so many options
And plenty of time
You see Tori has no clue where you are
she even pressed that pain slut of hers since he helped me lure you
But why would I tell that slut my true plans when he can so easily be abused for the information
All he knows is all the lies I told him, and the consequences of snitching
He's fucked, just like you are
Now I wont be as cruel as to completely stop Tori's game
I'm not punishing Tori after all
So You'll be continuing her game but just remotely
I'll have that slut bring in your challenges as well as models willing to help me
And I'll record all your torments for Tori's viewing pleasure
One more thing before we begin
I know Brittney asked me about taking you to the Lust B&B and I said you can go, if there are certain conditions met
She agreed to my terms and that's all I'll tell you about it
Now on to your torment
Hey there Hele
How's that head of yours
Sorry, seems I hit it a bit harder than I meant to
Yes, that's right I'm the sneaky devil that got the best of you
I mean, Abigail's offer to fuck with you just sounded so fun, how could I not...
Oh don't look at me like that, its not like you wont enjoy a good chunk of Abigail's wrath
But that's all in the past, your here now so lets have some fun shall we. Slut mode bitch! Slut Mode/Bitch mode
Now, I do have a challenge for you. One that is only a problem if you can't hold in that cum of yours. If you ruin for me you are to immediately switch into Ballbusting mode and beat those balls of yours. Oh and just in case you think you can get in a free ruin at the end of my time with you, you will also go back to all the previous images and give me all the hits you would have if you had ruined it right here right now.
Now your reward if you complete accept it, I'll spread your torment to that painslut that helped get you here. I'll go on his favorites list permanently and torment him anytime you want me to. I'll go over to him right after we have our fun if you so desire it.
Now shall we start slut?
I'm to going to make this easy you know
I think we've played long enough for you to know...
That I love to watch you struggle
whether it be with seemingly endless edging
or ruthless Ball bashing
I love the way you just endure all my sadistic desires
No matter how many fun ways I come up with
You've endured it all
And you'll endure even more
Mhmmm, it gets me wet just thinking about it
Want to see just how much?
Have a look Hele
Look how much your suffering turns me on
Doesn't it make all of it so worth it?
Knowing that you turn me on must feel great
But is nothing compared to actually pleasing me
You think you could do that Helequin
If I let you, would you use this swing to fuck my brains out?
Could you make me cum with that teased dick?
Maybe a demonstration of what you should do will help?
A little show of what you'd experience
A taste of what's to come
Mhmmm... Just imagine...
How whatever I do to this toy would feel on you cock
If you think you're teased right now
Imagine how much more I could edge you with this beautiful pussy
I could make you edge before you even felt the inside
Mhmm... Fuck
And just when you can't handle much more...
That's when I'll really fuck you
Just hard and fast
You'll try and hold out as long as you can
During this time, I might cum once or twice depending on that insane edging stamina you seem to have
Of course I'll be able to feel right when your about to cum
And pull you out just as you start to go over that edge
That's right even if we fuck I'll fuck your orgasm
Haha, I can see that twitching cock leak out all the pent up cum now
Of course, one or two orgasms won't be enough for me
So while I give myself a few more
I'd have you stroke and try to get yourself worked up all over again
And after watching Ariel fuck with both you and BBBeanie, I can see just how fun this part can be
Both of us would be screaming
And with enough time
and plenty of orgasms
you'll be begging me for an orgasm, Just like you'd be doing now, if for not for my challenge
Speaking of, I hope you were able to hold off and not ruin
It'll make this next part all the more fun
If you want your challenge reward Ruin it now Helequin, Yes right now slut
Hahaha, did you think I'd give such an easy challenge so early into your set
Enjoy those sore Balls Hele
Normal Rules
Aww look at those balls
Seems Malena doesn't like to hold her punches huh Hele
But that's what sluts like you get, perving on me and Abigail like that
Sure, we were luring you in but I saw you the way you stared at us as we got even friskeir with each other
stroking that dick of yours
You were begging to be punished
And clearly Malena's torment wasn't enough...Your staring again slut
Such a naughty boy
Luckily for you I'm a bit in the mood
And honestly that dick of yours is looking mighty fine right now
So here's the deal, or maybe I should say challenge
Instead of stomping on your sore balls like I normally would, I'll give your dick some real pleasure the way I know best. All you have to do for the challenge is to give me your load at the end. Yes I want you to cum for your challenge
If you let me have my fun, Since I don't have a full on rule, rather a description I'll let you replace my description of your rules and I'll follow that description. If you want to describe me as a sexy tease that like to make you cum then I'll be making you cum more often. If you want to make me a cruel dominatrix that takes her frustrations out on you, I wont fight it.
Its a nice reward, and all you have to do is let me make you cum. Though who knows what your next tormentor has in store for you, I doubt she'll give you a break once we are done. Up to you slut
Now give me that cock
Mhmmm Use lube if you aren't already, use a lot of it and any other toys to try and best imitate her actions
Ughhhh ugh ughhhh
Mhmmm now you're nice and hard
Ohh Fuuuck Meeee
Yes like that Hele
God, you feel so good
Don't stop Hele
Pound Me...
Mhmm...
Let me take over
Yes, tell me how good I feel
Tell me how much you want to cum for me
Ahhh.... Yes
I can feel you Getting close
Will you cum for me Hele?
No rules right now just read a bit
Wow, you look exhausted Hele, Ariana can be a handful can't she
Well Lets give that cock of yours a small break...
by focusing on those balls Ballbusting Mode
How are you felling Hele?
Being abruptly brought here for Abigail's fun games
not knowing just what she has in store for you
There is just so many ways to fuck with you
Especially with those rules of yours
There's just so many ways your rules could be used to mess with you in ways you can't imagine
I mean, just look at how much we are busting your balls
when just a moment ago you were having the time of your life with Ariana
I guess only time will tell just how fucked you are
For now your balls are at my mercy
But, I'm feeling a bit generous
You see, I was watchin you and Ariana play
Now I want your cock too
So just come here and lay down
I'll take care of the rest Slut Mode Same conditions as Ariana with lube and toys
Mhmmm
A dick just tastes so much better after its balls have been busted
I bet you your cum will taste even better
You'll give me your cum won't you slut
Of course you will, you don't have a choice right now
So lets make this even easier then
Yes, fuck this tight pussy
Get right to the edge... and push over it
Oh... Mhmmm... Wow
I was right, cum from busted balls tastes way better
I wonder just how tasty I could make it...
I'll see you soon Helequin
Aw a bit drained are we Helequin
I'll be nice you don't have to use your rules right now, unless you really want to suffer for me
I just wanted to see you as you begin to realize just how big of a hole you are in
As of right now you are mine slut
And I feel like making you feel just how much orgasms can be a hinderance
I mean if you did all the challenges thus far you've came 3 times today
But I'm not totally cruel so I'll give you a choice, I can walk out right here right now and you'll be done for the day and you can begin resting up for my future plans.
Or, you can do my challenge which is yet another orgasm, no breaks. Once you accept you will begin stroking once again, no edging just stroking, you'll convert all edges you would have done to 25 strokes a piece. You'll work yourself up and when I tell you, you will stroke until you cum again. If you can achieve another orgasm I'll reward you, if you give up however I will punish you.
So what will it be slut, do you accept my challenge? Continue only if you accept
Good slut
I'm not going to beat around the bush too much here
I want your cum
however much more those balls can give me
So now that your sensitive cock had been thoroughly stroked
Mhmm What a good slut
I bet that orgasm hurt didn't it
Good now you know a small bit of how I felt when you disappointed me in your little game
As for your reward, I'll be nice and let you recover otherwise it may as well be a punishment
Pathetic slut
You had one job and you couldn't even do that
Well now you'll feel what its like to disappoint me...
In due time, linger with what I'll do for a bit
sorry this took so long, I had a plan when I wrote the last set, but I forgot it. These last few days I've been having major writers block, every time I sat down I just couldn't write anything that I was happy with. I didn't want to push out a boring story just because I wanted to get you a set fast. So after a while I got some inspiration and wrote what you have played, I hope you enjoyed it.
In the end I was very vague with the reward/punishment on purpose as I have a plan for your next set which will depend on what you were able to do today. It'll effect how the set will be played and that's all I'm willing to share .
And some more feedback on the last set you wrote me
I re-read the last two parts. And going over Ariel's part again, Yea I was so fucked, there was no way I was going to make it through even if Ariel started the set. She was intoxicatingly hot and cruel.
Aleska's final part was also really good, she obviously gave my balls their final bang after Ariel. Her reward is interesting, Obviously I don't think I'll use it until I can achieve and HFO but saving that reward might invite someone to think of a way to use it against me.
Again an amazing set. Little bit scared of what's to come after though
As for the punishment, I think its fair that since you were the one who wrote the set in which I came that you should write it the punishment for doing so. I'll save the dual punishment for the next time I fuck up, I'll try hard not to use it I promise .
So, I'm rewriting my rules for the new year. This year I want to try something special, A full year in chastity. There will of course be rules here to to dictate what I can and cannot do. There will be two conditions in which allow me to be unlocked. First is for a weekly thorough cleaning of the cage and the area. The other is to ballbusted teased by the lovely ladies that help tease us in this forum. Lock up will begin January 1, 2022 and last until January 1, 2023
I'm not to have a full orgasm outside of the cage for the duration of the lockup. I have had my first orgasm through anal stimulation in wonderful set by Erik17. My next orgasm must be achieved through HFO, or Hands Only Orgasm. This involves only cumming by the sound of a woman's voice. HFO's typically are achieved through audios via hypnosis. If I am to cum any other way before I achieve an HFO Katie Fey will punish me along whatever other punishment Tori, Mila, and Kyla have in store
Only one mode now, I want to return to my Ballbusting roots
There are Four intensities in which I bust my balls Normal: These are hits that hurt but I can take quite a number of these before needing a break Hard: These hits hurt considerably more than normal, I can take a decent amount of these before needing a break Brutal: These hurt a lot, a hit designed to make me think twice before hitting again. I can take two or three of these in a row before needing a couple seconds break Flooring: The hardest hit I can muster, these will put me on the floor cradling my busted balls. Don't expect me to take multiple of these without a 20-30 second break in-between. Also don't expect me to be able to hit this hard in the beginning of a set, I need time and a bit of sore balls before being able to hit myself to the floor
Now for the number of hits, these are per model and can stack:
Clothed:
Public attire: 10 seconds of squeezing at normal Swimsuit: 10 seconds of squeezing at normal with 5 normal hits afterwards
Sexy Lingerie: 10 normal hits
Cosplay: 15 normal hits
Femdom attire: 10 normal hits and 5 hard hits
Heels: 5 normal hits
Partially Clothed can stack with clothed if applicable
Breasts exposed: 10 hits at normal
Pussy exposed: 5 hits at normal
Trans cock Exposed: 10 hits at normal
Ass: 5 hits at normal
Full Nudity
Rear view(Only Ass and/or pussy/Trans cock visible): 10 Hard hits
Full Frontal(Only Breasts and Pussy/Trans Cock visible): 15 Hard hits
Everything(Breasts, Ass, and Pussy/Trans Cock): 20 hard hits
Heels: Adds 5 hard hits to the above
Spread Legs: Adds 1 Brutal it to the above
Now While I did love the different color heels I want these to change based on the mood of the model. So by default the mood will be determined by the facial expression of the model. However, if you are going for a particular mood or theme to a set you can set your own modifier at anytime, add one if you need too. I know it can be hard finding that gallery that fits everything your going for, so hopefully this helps.
Happy/Smiling: She is enjoying herself and is getting into the busting who am I to stop her: no breaks until all hits for the image are done. Angry/Mean look: She wants me to suffer: Normal hits become hard hits. Hard hits convert to Brutal hits with: Hits/5 rounded up Seductive/Lip bite:She wants to take her time: Hits are slow and slightly harder than before
Can't forget all the lovely ladies that really love to show my balls a painful time, Each one will have a personality in the spoiler followed by her rule.
My Ballbusting Goddess, she loves ballbusting and loves boys who love getting their balls busted. She loves to bust me in particular because I always give my balls to her for whatever she wants to do with them. She makes a perfect Duo with the lovely Kyla Cole and often likes to share in the ballbusting with her.
Mila doubles everything she does to me. If she is nude and in heels she sends one powerful Flooring kick into my balls with glee.
A Goddess in her own right, she loves to be worshipped. She loves to make all the boys tease themselves senseless. And while Ballbusting is not something she gets off to by itself, she does love the way I worship her by slowly and painfully busting my balls to her content. She is the other side of the coin to Mila Azul, she often likes to watch me try to worship my two Goddesses in the best way I know how, Through Ball pain.
Kyla loves to squeeze my balls, so before and after all my hits for the image Kyla squeezes my balls hard for 10 seconds. If she is completely nude on her last squeeze she uses her vice grip to squeeze my balls with a flooring intensity.
They love to tag team my balls. Mila gets off to all the busting that is going on and Kyla is turned on by all the Worship that she is being given. Often they will egg each other on to be more and more brutal with my balls.
When Mila is nude then the next image of Kyla is to be considered Nude. If Kyla is Nude in heels then Mila's next image is to be considered Nude in Heels. These do not stack, meaning multiple Mila Nudes in a row wont make multiple Kyla Nudes. However alternating patterns will allow for a pretty brutal session
Finds it hilarious that I bought her Fleshlite and loves to tease me about it. Often telling me that I only deserve to have my balls busted and a fake pussy would be the best thing I could get. She proudly takes a femdom attitude with me and my balls.
She makes me worship her Fleshlite by making me lick it like a real pussy. She of course continues to bust my balls while I do this.
She doesn't care for the well being of my balls. She wants to play with them her way for however long as she wants. She has me just stand with my legs spread wide and lets her imagination run wild, no matter how painful. When I am unable to take what she want she often punishes me for my incompetence
I must spread my legs wide and whatever I imagine her doing to my balls I will imitate as best as I can. She loves to enrichen my imagination by sharing her brutal thoughts with me
Mistress Emily Addison showed me I am her slut and bitch. Every part of me is hers to use and abuse at will. I love being her slut and cannot wait for her to harshly use, abuse and destroy me in front of this entire forum.
She ties my balls up tightly and for every outfit change( removing clothes, adding clothing, or entire outfit change) She punches my balls brutally. In addition to any other way she want to play with me.
She wants to absolutely obliterate my balls. A session with her usually leaves me begging to be locked back up again. If it weren't for Mila's claim over me as her painslut, Whitney likely would castrate me if she could. That being said, she respects Mila and holds back just enough so my balls are still functional, but tries to make me regret being born with them in the first place.
She ties my balls tightly with enough rope wrapped around my balls for me to grab them. She then lets loose a flurry of punches, all hits are done by punching. When she is nude and spreading her legs however the brutal hit is done by a sock weapon as she lets loose a brutal kick. Finally, The Destroyer is the only one to have access to Ball Destruction mode. This mode can be activated at any time but can only be used in one spoiler per set. In this mode all normal hits become hard hits, Nude give me one brutal hit on top of the other hits, and her legs being spread puts me to the floor. Her kicks are so hard she is to be considered wearing heels even when she is not
A beauty who recently has become fascinated in fucking my cock. Although she is not interested in sex, so instead of fucking me with her pussy, she rather fucks with a urethral sound. She loves the way the sound just sinks into my cock as well as all my facial expressions as I watch her fuck my manhood.
Instead of busting She fucks my urethra with my beaded sound. The amount of time she spends fucking depends on the amount of hits that image would have gotten. Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. The Intensity and speed is up to her
A domme with a heart. She loves to prey on my shyness and make sure I keep eye contact with her. While she does love to Domme me, she tends to act more sweet and kind as she busts my balls
Eye contact only applies if she is looking directly at the camera. In Ballbusting Mode fail to maintain contact results in 1 Brutal Hit.
I'm a slut whore bitch for Chanel's Sexy cock, I need to worship it, feel it abuse and use any of my holes. I eagerly await for her to show just how much of a whore I am. Chanel is the one who convinced me that my first orgasm should be from anal stimulation alone. She would love to be the one who gives me my first anal orgasm of the year. She loves having her cock worshipped whether that means sucking it or being fucked by it. However, she also finds the prospect of ballbusting interesting, she can't figure out why I loved to be busted so much and loves to bust me herself to find the answer
While she does like busting me she see's it as a favor to me and so I must suck her cock whilst she brutalizes my balls. She may be as gentle or aggressive as she wants. If she wants her cock all the way down my throat then I get a throat full of cock(dildo). In addition at anytime she may stop busting me and take my ass and try to fuck me to an orgasm. Intensity and speed is up to you and can change throughout the fucking. The time spent fucking will be determined by the number of hits I would have gotten: Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. When sucking I will be using my large dildo, and when being fucked my smaller curved on. No ass to mouth
Chastity Cages: I have two metal cages. A normal one that I will primarily be locked in for the long term. And a Hybrid spike one that can be used in the short term for punishments or homework .
Ball Crusher: thick acrylic sheets with holes for my cock and balls. Can be screwed down to crush my balls. You may put me into this contraption in a set. I will replace any busting with: Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. Just be aware it takes time to put on and take off, so don't make me constantly take it on and off in short periods of time.
Bonger: A dense ball on a spring handle, Ideal for individual balls hits. Can deal a decent intensity to one ball with little effort
VR Headset: Oculus Quest great for viewing some VR porn videos
Adriana Chechik Fleshlight
Two Realistic Dildos, one smaller and curved and another one larger and girthier.
Urethral Sounds: I got a two sound, a small thin silicone one that vibrates and a longer beaded metal sound.
Metal Butt-Plugs: I got a set of three metal butt plugs, one small, medium and large one.
A vibrator: I have a magic wand vibrator, I can only use this for 20 continuous minutes as the motor tends to get quite hot after that.
For those who don't know me, I've been busting myself for years. I am well aware of my limits and when it is time to stop busting. For my safety I reserve the right to not do certain actions If iI deem them to be unsafe or I am in an unsafe state. I usually stop If I see severe discoloring of my testicles, deep purple to black is a bad color to be, or if I begin to bleed in anyway. That being said, don't worry about going over my limits as I will stop if needed and tell you in a feedback if and when this occurs.
I don't bust in chastity, its dangerous, especially at the intensities at which I bust at. Its a hard limit. I do like to fantasize being able to, but will not perform it in any fashion
Absolutely no ass to Mouth if anal is involved, its just gross.
Nothing public, I like to keep my private affairs private.
Tori Black has invited me to a new challenge in which I Give my first full orgasm after my year of lock up to a special lady. This lady will be determined by a contest.
The contest will take place over this year and is simple. Each month there will be a condition to meet, every time a model meets this condition gives them a point.
At the end of the month, Coins will be handed out to the top three models, the amount will increase each month as to keep things interesting the amounts will be determined each month. The Model with the most coins at the end of the year will be given my orgasm. Now in order for a model to enter this contest she must appear in a set and state that she wants to compete, any model can join at anytime. Ill keep track of points and update them at every set.
To keep the game from being won before the end of the year. Each month there will be chances to earn bonuses. These bonuses will give models advantages that may or may not turn the tide of the competition at any moment. These will range from bonus points/coins, point/coin multipliers to even taking coins from others. As the months go on the bonuses will be better. These chances will be determined by you. This month you can propose one model to be eligible for a bonus. Each vote will get that model one slice in a wheel, at the end of the month I will spin the wheel for 3 bonuses. One model could get all three bonus or no bonuses. Depending your feedback this method may change.
Whenever a model makes me Floor myself, without commanding it or being a part of my Rules. I.e. Mila being Nude in heels of he telling me to floor myself does not count. But her flooring me through a brutal hit or hard hit will count
You look tense... Let's relax together for two hours or so. Just you, me, and that wonderfully vivid imagination of yours...
Get naked and get comfortable. Turn down the lights. Silence your phone. No distractions. Today we're keeping it simple. I'm going to heat you up, nice and smooth. No special supplies necessary... Just plenty of lube and your absolutely undivided attention... Ready?
Thrust your hips and present that desperate dick to me.
From now on, you will hold every edge for 20 seconds -- except for rapid-fire edges. Yes, I know you're excited... but you don't have a choice.
I brought you here, so I get to keep you here. Your mind is mine, remember?
And now your mind isn't the only thing that's mine...
Your dick is mine, too!
Yes! Your dick edges on my command... You were never in control.
You surrendered control the moment you looked into my eyes and took that first deep breath...
You knew where I would take you... You knew what I would do...
You followed me here anyway. You obeyed my every word...
You wanted this. You wanted to give me control, because you needed me to erase your brain -- to send you down -- and turn you into... this...
--my perfect goon... my mindless edgeslut!
I will melt you down to a puddle of cum, sweat, and tears. That's all that's left of you now...
I am your whole universe now. Everything is dark and silent, but me. Do not look away.
I brought you here, and you will never escape without me. I could hold you, right where you are, forever and ever...
...and you would love it.
You don't want me to bring you back, do you? You want to stay here, in your pleasure-trance... just like this...
Hmmm? You want me to stop? -- You want me to keep going?...
Confused? You can't decide. You can't think, because -- I told you -- I turned off your brain... You are just desperate sexual instinct now... riding the edge... hanging on my every word...
...waiting to see what I will do to you next...
It's ok. You're not here to think. I brought you down... I will decide if you ever go back up...
Come back to the world, now, baby... Stroke very slowly, don't edge, and focus on my face... up here... Up, up we go...
Not bad... You're not quite back yet, though, are you?... You seem a little... spaced-out...
Hmmm... Did you leave something of yourself behind? ... Ohh... Did I take something out of you?
Perhaps you should lay down and get some rest. I think you'll find it much easier to relax now...
And, when you wake up, I think you'll be hard again, and you won't know why...
I think you'll think of me and edge yourself, nice and slow, one more time, and then you'll wonder...
...Did I truly let you go?
@Bjorn13: I have yet to finish Fay's challenge. The pressure is physical, yet somehow still contained. I'm not sure how else to describe it. I'm worried that the next tease I get will be --exceptionally-- difficult to control!
Important! I do not have enough free time to do a traditional "set." I only get tiny, isolated, unpredictable pockets of free time, 15 to 30 minutes here and there, every few days or so. So if you want to make something for me, it probably can't follow the usual routine of stroking and edging for a long sequence of sexy pictures. It should probably resemble more like "homework," with short tasks.
That is a major limitation, but maybe also an opportunity for creativity. I leave that to you and to the girls who find that interesting.
Since I can't do traditional "sets" of pictures, I do not have the usual per-picture rules. Instead, I will do my best to complete any challenges, tasks, etc., that fit into 15-30 minute windows -- with pictures for narrative, inspiration, reward, or whatever you want. Multiple tasks can be included in the same tease -- I will do them separately over a few days and won't cum in the meantime.
Example Short Tasks:
Spend 10 minutes reading the narrative and looking at the pictures...
...without touching myself, or
...while stroking at a certain pace, or
...while flexing my PC muscle and trying to cum without touching myself, or
...while palming or slapping my cock (yikes!), or
...while edging (a certain number of times; repeatedly; or holding them), or
...while building up to cum at the end (ruin or full), or
...any combination of those.
Tasks like that. If a girl wants to get creative with this general idea, I totally welcome it!
Preferences:
Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun.
Sneakers, sports bras, yoga pants, high socks, and ponytails.
Sorry about the delay! Been busy with world events.
Anyway, This set is the final one for your current storyline! Of course, there are other storylines that are out there, but hopefully this resolves some of them,and you have some fun along the way! This set is designed to “drain you dry”, so if you play through without stopping, you will probably get to 100 edges and your orgasm limit. There is a natural break between part 1 and 2…but better if you go all the way through, if you can!
Hi fatts! I’ve been busy last night, fixing the village!
Why don’t you lake a closer look? You take a close look
Not at me, silly! Through the telescope! Looking through the telescope, you see that the temporary anomaly is gone…and from what you can see…people are going about their days as normal
See! I think everything is all it should be! And the inconsistencies in the maze…I think I figured It out. She swings the telescope away from the village…to seemingly,nothing.
Look into the telescope now! It’s focused on the maze! Do you see it? Your normal maze…and then…there! A shadow? It seems that there are two mazes! So yes, the timeline split into two for a little while. And when it did, it created a new maze! And you…you are able to access both!
But which one is the prime? The one you created, of course. Everyone in the maze defaults to the prime story…yours…
But if you ever need a darker…more hardcore maze…you could always go back. It could be fun! Anyway, Ecik stopped by earlier. He dropped off some of my things that I had while I was in his house waiting for all of this to end. He said that he made a choice…and told me…but we thought it would be more fun for you to figure it out. And then, he left on some quest to find the hottest redhead. I told him he should look at the red fox. He was not amused!
Now that the anomaly is gone, You can walk me home! Strolling back to the harem house, you run into a couple of familiar faces…
Hi fatts!
It’s good to see you!
Hey there!
Fatts! Hello!
Now that you are back,we can have our 1st annual village awards show! we girls have been thinking about it for awhile, but we couldn’t start without our special judge…you!
There will be little black dresses…Some competition…speeches… and champagne!
…Thinking about it…it makes me super horny!
So, why don’t you go home and get changed into something fancy! You should wear a tie…or something! When you get back to the house, we will start the awards show!
Go home to get changed into something fancy
Fatts…you seem a bit confused. Don’t worry about her…The red fox is no threat to you anymore. I just had to stop by your village one last timewith the red fox!
Why? Because Of Eciks choice! He chose to put the red fox in the diamond and make her my slave! But fatts…When doing magic, you always have to read the fine print! Yes…the red fox lives in the diamond…but I can let her out, and she has to do what I say! Kind of like a Pokémon! Me, having a slave succubus may be a dangerous thing for everyone else…especially Helequin and bbbeanie. But you? you have nothing to worry about! So, From now on, the red fox is banished from the maze, and your village unless you invite her back!
So…the cake? It was her idea, not mine. She called it a peace offering. She also had a statement that she wanted to read to you…do you want to hear it?
The red fox clears her throat. It’s clear she’s memorized what she wanted to tell you
Fatts, I’m sorry for messing with your village. I am now Angela’s slave, and will do whatever she says.
But know this…One day, I will get out. I always get out!
You see.. angela andI go way back. She captures me…and then I escape, and cause havoc in the world! Sexual havoc…my favorite kind! For example…
The sexual revolution in the United States in the 1960s? Me. Angela had locked me up in a jail…but forgot about me, and I escaped.
The outbreak of syphilis in 1495 in the French army? That was me too. Angela thought she could put a magical collar on me…it wasn’t enough.
My point is…that, I’ll come back one day…and when I do…
Drinking your cum is going to be so sweet…like this cake…and I’ll drink you until you are dry… Enough! you finally see the true extent of Angela’s power…as the world slightly darkens and the air crackles with energy as she holds out the diamond, and a blue light emerges, swallowing up the red fox. She is gone, trapped in the diamond. Angela smiles again, showing no strain from her effort...
And now that we’ve dealt with the red fox, I’m sure you have some questions. But you can only ask 3 of them. So…choose your questions wisely!
Angela holds out the diamond, and a blue light emerges, swallowing up the red fox. She is gone, trapped in the diamond.
Probably better that way. All she would tell you is filth and lies anyway. And now that we’ve dealt with the red fox, we have some remaining business, you and I. I’m sure you have some questions. But you can only ask 3 of them. So…choose your questions wisely!
Punishment? You are asking for punishment? Fatts, you kinky, kinky man! I didn’t think you had it in you to ask to be punished. But if you want to be punished, then a punishment you’ll get. You start to hear voices in your head
I hear you like to lurk, and peek in on others teases. Well…if you play a tease that is not yours from beginning to end, you can, as long as you use 1 item from your demerits list. I’m sure you will find something creative to do!
Well..she remains in the diamond. Until I let her out. Last time, my mistake was that I’d chain her up, and the forget about her… check out what happened in 1960 in the United States and 1495 in France..those were my fault. Basically, if you keep a succubus too long without precum or cum, they will become so desperate with lust that they will escape any trap! But this time, I have help.
Ecik will feed the red fox in the diamond!
But no matter what, she will stay far away from the village! So you won’t have to worry!
Angela gets slightly concerned
You think you don’t have a soul? Or part of it is missing? That’s…worrisome, but it’s easy to check. She grabs your cock and starts stroking it as fast as possible.
Have you had any big orgasms lately, in the last week? Not just any orgasm. The kind where your toes tingle before you cum? An orgasm so big, your eyes roll back into your head? Forget your name?
Drool?
Yes, I’ve had a big orgasm like that in the last week
She stops stroking you as fast as possible
Then…I think you are fine, and you still have your soul. You can only cum like that, if your soul is whole, you know! Maybe I should check in on Ecik…not that he would need his soul or anything…
She stops stroking you as fast as possible
Then…you may want to look for your soul! you can only get big orgasms like that if you have a full soul, you know!
I thought you’ve never ask! Of course you can…if you can. I’m going to show you a video of what Nancy was doing while you were in the maze.you can cum at the end! https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... bd3726f4#1
Seeing you asked enough questions, Angela begins to pack her things in a fancy car
And now that I’ve satisfied most of your curiosity…I’ll be going! You really don’t need me around. Do you remember the saying…too many gods in the kitchen? No? It may be a Midgard thing.
My point is, that is with Nancy and you…And your army of strokers…I’m sure you will be fine!
I’ll see you around fatts! Angela drives off into the sunset
Fatts! You are just in time! Welcome to the first annual village awards! There will be three awards! An award for best legs, best ass, and hottest body
The winner from each category gets the ultimate prize…your cum! I hope you have enough for all of us…because they want it!
Shall we get started?
Legs for days…wouldn’t you want these wrapped around your ears! Whew..I’m getting flustered! Let’s meet the nominees for best legs! For this award…each nominee will show you 5 of their best photos! and then, you’ll decide the winner! Ready?
My favorite trainee! Of course I’ve seen you sneaking glances at my legs…is that why you are always so distracted? Well…I guess…just this time, I’ll give you what you want! And when I win this award…I’ll get what I want! She shows you her five photos
Oh…this contest is over. The other girls don’t know it yet. Why do I know that? Because…if you don’t pick me…I’ll be…disappointed. And you don’t want that…do you?
Wow…Wasn’t that fun! Take a break, and get hard again…there are more awards! Isn’t there nothing like a nice, round firm ass? I know you like mine…but there are so many in the village. Surely you have a favorite! Now..Let’s see who are the nominees…
Finalist #1
Hi neighbor! I just came over to check in on you…I saw some mysterious people entering your home earlier…a redhead and a brunette. I hope they weren’t too much trouble for you! Oh? The competition? Yes…I entered in it after Nancy told me about it! I’ve seen you starting at my ass over our neighborly fence…so why don’t you take a closer look…neighbor!
Ha! I knew it! You wouldn’t let me down! Do you remember the first day I caught you looking at my ass? All red and slightly embarrassed? Well..let’s see if we can get that look on your face again! Stroke as much as you can, but only when holding your breath you can cum at the end! https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... =764341946
You picked me! But that’s what good neighbors do! Help each other! So…after you give me my reward, you can remove all effects from past winners that you don’t want to do https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... bd6edde9f6
Fatts! It’s the last award! I hope you still have some cum in your balls! Because this award is for The total package! Who is the hottest in the village? Let’s meet the nominees…
Thanks for giving me the award…I’d like to thank my…wait. I havent won yet? You actually want me to be a finalist? To compete? What a waste of time! I know I’m the hottest in the village. You know I’m the hottest here. The other girls know I’m the hottest here. But…if I have to participate to prove I’m the hottest…then fine!
And that concludes the awards! Thanks everyone for cumming, fatts! But…can you walk me to my room?
Wasn’t the awards fun? It’s nice to do something normal for a change! Not that I don’t like saving the village from time to time…it’s just nice to be…normal!
For the awards show, I thought about inserting myself in every category…but decided not to. Why?
Because while the girls have your cum..I have something better…you!
…and I want to see you cum…one more time. Can you do it? I think you can! From now on… Stroke using your hummingbird attachment on the vibratorHowever, every 30 seconds…turn up the level by one. Once you reach the top, keep it there until my countdown is done.. ready?
..5…
4…
3…
2…
1…
Cum fatts! Cum! Give me everything!
Color me skeptical, but ... I just don't think this is true! What do you guys think? If you have an opinion, PLEASE sound off ... I'd be curious to know what people's thoughts are on this
I identify as a switch..so I’d totally be down for a set with me domming a girl. I recognize that there are a lot of limitations in doing so through this format, which is why it is rare here. Taking a quick scan at the profiles on the side…a couple people label themselves as a switch…so assuming that’s true, there would be some sort of want for sets with submissive girls.
But at the same time, fatts, You are right. I’ve never asked for that before, and I don’t think anyone has asked explicitly for it or placed it in their rules. I know I never did because I didn’t think it was possible. I’ve at times added in a passive rule that says something like “stroke more if I think I’d dom her, slap more if I’d sub to her.” But the practical application? I’m not sure how that’d totally work. There were some good ideas by helequin, bbbeanie and fatts… using a choose your own adventure style. Maybe…using videos…it would be harder, but possible. I see this as a challenge! I may try and write one, if anyone wants
I enjoy lots of stroking, a little bit of pain, edging, predicaments, unwinnable games, being punished for edging, and choices/homework. While I like glamour shots and models, I also like nasty stuff Bondage…bdsm…cumshots…milfs…bbc..gangbangs, humiliation, etc… so if you have a lewd idea, go for it! Of if you are not sure, send me a pm with your idea, I’d be happy to respond! I’m also Open to alternative rules...feel free to stick with these or invent something entirely different!
Also, love fun ongoing storylines..,but please keep them short, (1 to 3 set max)if you want to go this route. I also do not mind just straight up photos, as in the original spirit of this thread!
Blondes 10
Redheads 15
Brunettes 10
Other color 5
Fully clothed 10
Tits (pair) 15
Nude 20
Nude with heels 25
Edging
I can only edge for pussy, or cum:
Pussy 1 edge
Cum - 1 edge
Edging without permission - if I edge before finishing my strokes, I hold the edge for the remainder.
Edging for favorite photos - after every set, I must provide feedback, and edge for every photo I really liked. This happens after the set. Orgasms
Default is denial, but orgasms can be directed by models within the tease. Can take multiple ruins.
Wildcards
You can add up to wildcards to modify the rules above, or make your own! Some fun rules in the past that I liked included: Bpm for stroke speed, Trading pain for edging, and edge ladders,for example.
Because I switch…
I’m not truly a submissive…so the first time in a set I see a model, if I think I’d dominate her, I double my strokes for her first photo. If I’d sub to her, all strokes are replaced with light ball slaps for the first photo
Videos
Default is to stroke 1 time per second, edge 1 time every 2 minutes. videos/pmvs/ audio is all good, (for videos, please keep to under 20 minutes, please)
Taking care of Angela whites succubus (optional mini game)
Due to some choices in the past, in my world the red fox is a dangerous succubus and slave of Angela white. Angela has given me the task of “feeding” the red fox, so she doesn’t escape and cause havoc on this thread.
Feeding the red fox: after every set, I have to stroke 5 times at 80bpm to a random photo of the red fox. Every time the red fox appears in a set, I must increase the number of strokes or speed by 5. Under no circumstances should I cum to the red fox, even if she asks for it. If I do cum to her, The red fox “escapes”…and Angela will be very, very pissed…
Penny pax wants more women with red hair to be in my rules! Until march 30 any redhead that makes the ”favorite photo list ina set” will get a 1 point per photo. The winner at the end of the month will become a favorite with a special rule.
Favorites most of my favorites have a special rule attached to them. Dont feel like you have to only use my favorites…you can use your own, or someone new!
Karlee grey: is my muse of the month! all photos of her counts as hardcore automatically
Angela white - my absolute favorite. triple edges for cum
Penny pax - double redhead strokes
Romi rain - one ball slap
Others I’d like to see
Scarlit scandal
Gia derza
Abella danger
Nancy ace
Adriana checkic
Elsa jean
Kenzie reeves
Emily willis
Dee Williams
Aiden starr
Isis love
Brittney amber
storylines past ongoing ideas that have been in past sets for me that I thought were a lot of fun…
I'm sorry I haven't fully finished your MegaSet with my Rules yet. But I can tell you are a pretty good writter. Also, I've enjoyed Jenya's section a lot .
Anyways, I'll go back to more targeted Sets for now as I enjoy them a bit more, and whenever I find sometime to finish it I'll tell you .
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please .
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair > Other-colour hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after lots of edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else .
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please .
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair > Other-colour hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after lots of edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else .
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
Well, too bad, because is staying on until the end of the session
Mila and Milo wanted to see what was that mode all about, so we have to show them, don't we?
And speaking of showing, do you know who will be your last Miss today?
Well, you better guess it right, because whether you Cum or Ruin depends entirely on that
A hint of some sort you say?
Okay, I'll give you one
The last model is the only one that Milorrabo and you have in common between his Favourites and your Featured Models for the Slut Mode
Oh C'mon, is not that bad of a hint
After all you are not only the mastermind behind this game
You are also the person who has made the most Sets for Milorrabo, so you are the best for the job
Oh, and before you leave...
I want you to imagine how I would tie you up and edge you with my mouth only to stop right before you cum and bust your balls 10 times with some brutal hits afterwards
I think you should do that now while fantasizing about it, hold your edge for 1 min and do 10 brutal hits afterwards
What a good boy you are
Now, get your guess ready and meet your last Mistress
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please .
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair > Other-colour hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after lots of edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else .
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and/or add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
FattsDynamo wrote: Tue Mar 08, 2022 10:51 am
I wrote a unique scene that I have NEVER seen on this thread before. (A new "scene archetype", if you will.) It is a scene where the PLAYER dominates the GIRL. YOU GET TO PLAY AS A DOM AND THE "MISTRESS" PLAYS AS THE SUBMISSIVE!! I can't say that I have never seen this style of tease on this site before (I'm pretty sure I have, though not typically to this level), but, CERTAINLY, I have never seen it on this THREAD...
I thought it was a pretty good premise ... would NOT mind if someone gave me this opportunity...
@FattsDynamo: I only sporadically keep up with the thread, so I only saw this comment today. A while ago, I made something for Helequin that might scratch your itch to switch...
I don't know what your latest rules are, so I have no idea how this set I made for Helequin would interact with your rules (I suspect it would be very difficult). Moreover, it's a long one, which again might not work well for you. And the "switch" scene is just one short scene among many others; in other words, the "switch" scene is more of a fun, short detour, rather than the main focus of the set. That's why I say it might scratch the itch, but it probably won't satisfy the desire.
You can attempt the entire set, or you can skip to the "switch" scene for a short, quick scratch. The "switch" scene is several spoilers into the set and starts with:
"The girls really like you, Helequin. Which one is your favorite so far? Think about it... Is it me?"
...
"Oh, hello! My name is Lambie. Am I the only Czech girl here?"
Ciao, Helequin! I am Nesty, from Italia, and you will come with me on a "Whirlwind Tour." You relax and enjoy this one, yes? Smile and breathe. My best friends come here to meet you -- beautiful women from beautiful countries all over the world. I hope they are friends you have not met before. New experiences for everyone! If my friends like what they see, then maybe we play together again sometime, hmm? That would be nice.
You only need lube. No clothes, baby... Very good. We begin now, yes? Are you ready to have some fun? We will take good care of you. I promise!
Tell me more about your contest -- you enjoy girls from many countries?
What do you think of my country? Have you ever been to Italy?
I can take you to my country, where it is sunny and warm, and I dress always like this. We go together -- you hold my hand, and I show you to my girl-friends. I take out your cock to show my Canadian prize -- you feel the heat of my hand, holding you in the summer sun. I say something in Italian, and my friends laugh. Oh, we will have fun, I promise!
And always I tease you, many times, every day. I promise to keep you very happy, very horny -- no orgasm for you for many days. Only for me. That is what you like, yes?
You will edge for me, many times, like this.
Bravo.
You are such a sexy boy. We will have fun together in my country. I promise to show you the beautiful secret places and tease you so many, many times. You will never want to leave. I promise to keep you and make you my favorite toy. You will see.
But first you must meet my other friends, from many other countries. Have fun, baby!
I'm soft, but I like to bite. Fuck it -- wanna cuddle, anyway?
Good. When you're done stroking, pinch those nipples and give them a good, hard twist for me!
Do it again, and don't hold back. My teeth are sharp!
My teeth are sharp, but my claws are even sharper! Edge -- no rest! -- pinch -- twist -- scratch yourself from ear to nipple (leave a mark!) -- then quickly keep going...
I could tear you apart, Helequin, and you'd love every minute of it. Edge -- no rest! -- pinch -- twist -- scratch -- slap your dick hard enough to hear it through the wall -- then quickly keep going...
I want to see your skin glow red. Feel the heat... Edge -- no rest! -- pinch -- twist -- scratch -- slap -- then edge again, as fast as you can -- and keep going!
Did you notice my boots? Torture that cockhead for my ass, then give me your balls. Don't talk... just do it.
(5 hard stomps)
Short, sweet, and brutal -- that's my style.
There's plenty more where that came from, if you're down for it. Tell Nesty that I said hi!
Whoa... look at you! Are you ok?
I'm Blizzard, and you must be the famous Helequin...
Hold on, let me get these skates off, so we can spend some time playing together. That is, of course, unless you want me to keep them on-?
Ahhh... much better. Come and join me, honey.
Mmmm... I guess I'm supposed to tell you where I'm from, huh?
Howabout you just call me, "the brown-eyed girl next door."
Which means I'm never far away...
...and I'm always ready to play. Especially with you.
And when I come knocking on your door, you better be ready, too.
Having fun, baby? My friends seem to like you so far...
There are many more. I hope you enjoy...
Hello, beautiful boy. I am Kitsu, all the way from the UK. I see you noticed my eyes...
Judging by that swollen knob, it looks like you're enjoying your tour so far...
You wouldn't mind if I amped things up for you a little, right? -- Help you have a bit more... fun...
How about you hold the edge for my pierced nipples, eh? Hold it for 15 seconds.
Good man. I see why Nesty likes you so much.
Obedient, eager, and desperate to impress... You'll do anything I say, won't you?
Let's make that new rule permanent, then, eh? Any time you edge for a woman's nipples, from now on, you will hold that edge for 15 seconds if they're pierced. Sound fair?
Good man. Now, do you think you can hold that edge while I blow your cock?
Or would that just instantly ruin you?
Not that I care if you fall apart and I end up ruining you with my mouth. I would just back off, leave you hanging, and wait patiently for the cum to finish trickling out. Then, before you have a chance to cool off, I'd go right back to sucking you...
I'd probably end up ruining you again that way. And again, and again. But I love that feeling of your dick swelling and pulsing in my throat. So you'd just have to hold on and take it.
But that would totally spoil you for the other girls. So I guess I have to wait and taste you later...
Remember my name, baby. It's Kitsu. And if you want that ruinous blowjob... Any time... Come and find me!
Oh, Helequin! You're just in time...
Pardon the sweat. I just finished my workout...
My name is Lera -- another brown-eyed beauty, representing Russia in this little game of yours.
You look a little flustered, baby. Here... take a seat and relax with me. Let's just cool off and enjoy each others' company for a while.
You don't mind if I put my leg up on the bench here, beside you, hmm? No-no, it's ok, you stay down there. I like you right where you are...
How many women have you met today, anyway? How many more do you think are still waiting for you?
I'm sure your imagination is running in circles by now...
Are you sure it's a good idea, imagining all the possibilities? Aren't you just making this harder on yourself?
Well, if you truly can't control yourself, then go ahead...
Tell me what I can do that would make this as hard as possible for you...
Want me to work you out?
I'm down for another workout, if you are...
Let's break a sweat together, baby. Just don't cum, ok?
Yeahhh... Pin me down, pound my pussy, and I'll cum hard enough for both of us. You just edge and edge...
That's the plan, Helequin. You and me, on this bench right here. Find me when you're done with your tour!
I thought this might be hard for you, but you are having fun, yes? We keep going, then...
Hello, boy. My name is Smoky, and I'm from Italy, too!
Nesty is my best friend. We share everything!
...including our favorite toys...
...like you.
I know the other girls have been asking to hang out with you after Nesty's little "tour" is done...
...but I have a special, secret idea...
...just between you, me, and Nesty...
...Let's call it... "The Italian Job."
I think you know exactly what I mean. You're an imaginative man. I don't need to explain it to you, because I know you're picturing it in your head right now...
So... when this is all over, stick with me and Nesty, ok? Let the Italian girls take total control for a while...
...Total control.
Surprise!! Hahaha, hi there!
Uhh -- hi! My name is Sonya, and I'm from Russia, too. What do you think of my outfit?? I'm dressed as a cum-addicted fuckbunny!
I heard that Kitsu gave you a special rule for pierced nipples. Sounds like fun! Add a 15-second edge for my pierced tongue, too!
Oooo... that's sexy! Make more precum for me, baby, so I can lick it from your dick like a popsicle!
I'm not kidding! Clench those muscles, milk that dick, and pump out as much precum for me as you can, baby!
You can do better than that... Or do I have to put you on your hands-and-knees and squeeze it out of you myself?
I'm pretty sure I have a precum milking machine around here somewhere, if you can't do it yourself...
Want me to bend you over and "hook you up"? Mmmmm....
Maybe this will help.
Mmmm... You know a great way to make lots of frustrating precum-? Besides edging over and over again like this...
...Not touching your dick, at all! Let go, baby... Don't touch your dick at all for one minute! But thrust your hips at the air and bear down hard with your pelvic muscles -- rhythmically, over and over again. Imagine your entire pelvic area is a powerful cum pump. Pump it out, baby!
Keep pumping, one more minute! Try to have a touchless orgasm! I won't tell Nesty if you ruin an orgasm this way, as long as you keep going after we're done...
Keep going -- no timer, now! Spread your knees, keep your hands an inch away from your dick, but don't touch. Don't stop flexing and pumping until you've made a hot droplet of precum for me, and dripped it right here on my tongue...
That's nice... Ok, back to your previous rules, baby. If we had more time, I would milk your prostate and take every last drop of cum out of your body, without ever touching your dick. But the other girls are waiting, so maybe later! Bye!
The girls really like you, Helequin. Which one is your favorite so far? Think about it... Is it me?
Aww... There is no wrong answer, baby. Think about it some more. You're not done yet, anyway...
Oh, hello! My name is Lambie. Am I the only Czech girl here?
I've been waiting for you. Did you think you were almost done meeting new girls today?
Oh... I see you met Kitsu already... We are going to have fun with that...
I'm just a small girl who likes a little role-play. What's your favorite role to play?
You obviously know how to submit to girls like us, but you also call yourself a Switch...
Does that mean you know how to dominate me? -- little me...
What would you do to me? Tell me everything...
Would you tie my legs together, so my pussy was extra tight? ...Please...
Would you flip me and spank me, like a naughty elf? ...please...
Would you put me on my back and pound me down into a silhouette of sweat on the bed?
Would you devour my pussy and make me cum??
...please...?
Oh, Helequin... If you ever need to vent that pent-up masculine aggression... If you want to just fucking dominate a bad, naughty little elf girl... Oh, baby... I'm yours...
Wait! Stand right there! But keep stroking... Don't stop...
Your cock is so hard! So sexy! Let me take your picture...
Perfect... The ladies back in Paris will love it...
My name is Pialora. You must be Helequin...
Oui... you are the one everybody is talking about. Now I see why.
You have a nice body, you know-? Very masculine... very sensual...
The way you edge... it is so beautiful... So provocative.
You come so close to la petite mort... but you never feel it...You cannot have it, until we say...
But what if we never say? What if edging you is our greatest pleasure? -- Everything we ever need...
What if I told you to edge a hundred times in a row, as fast as you can? ... What if that's what it takes to make me cum, every time?
What if I wanted to cum twice?... Three times?... Would you edge five hundred times, all night long, if that's what it took to please us?
I know another boy who would...
You are at my mercy, Helequin. And you know it. When you are ready to live the rest of your life in ecstatic agony, with no relief in sight... Give me a call.
Oh hi!
You're cute!
Come play with me!
My name's Lure. What's yours??
Oh!! You're the boy on the world tour!
This body is all-American, USA! But my heart is in Raccoon City.
If you got that joke, then you're cool with me. Keep stroking while I finish this... hold on...
All done! ...Now it's your turn to play!
...A little game I call "Hold The Edge Forever." Hahaha! Here's how it works...
I push a button on this controller, and you edge. -- You edge, and you hold it for one minute. Easy, right???
The twist is... I can push the button again. Any time... like... as many times as I want, and you have to hold another edge for a minute, all over again, every time... until either you explode (and I win) or the controller battery dies (and you win).
Got it? Good! GO! Hold the edge for a minute!
Ooo...Hot! GO AGAIN!
GO AGAIN. This game is totally rigged... You'll never beat me!
Fun! I gotta get back online now -- my friends are waiting. And Nesty is waiting for you. Come back later so we can finish, though, ok?!
Woops! Were you looking for Nesty??... Guess you found me, instead!
I'm Yuumi, your faithful Russian sexkitten!
Boy, you sure are sweating a lot...
Don't worry, I won't keep you very long. I know you want to get back to Nesty. Just stay long enough to amuse me a little.
Yeahhh... that's nice...
Good boy... Are you sure you gotta go?
Stay with me, and I promise to make you cum. Like... for real... Any way you want!
And don't worry... I won't stop fucking you, even after you cum. No matter what you say -- no matter how much you kick and squirm -- this hyper little sexkitten just keeps going...
Boys cry and scream and call it post-orgasm "torture," but I know it's what you really want, deep down inside. So I always make sure to wrap my legs around your waist, take the choice away, and give it to you!
Hey... Where are you going? -- Come back when you're ready to cum!
So, did you like your whirlwind tour, Helequin?
Did you like my friends? -- They sure like you!
Tell me, baby... Which ones would you like to hang out with more often? They can come with us to Italy, and we can bring as many as you want...
Want to get busted some more by Dainty?
(hit your balls 5 times, then slap your cock 5 times, hard!)
Want to Netflix and chill with Blizzard, "the girl next door"?
(stroke for 60 seconds)
Want to get slowly, repeatedly ruined by Kitsu's tongue?
(hold one edge for 15 seconds)
Want to get a full, exhausting "workout" with Lera?
(three rapid-fire edges)
Want an "Italian Job" from me and Smoky, at the same time?
(stroke for 30 seconds, then edge)
Want to experience what it's like for Sonya to milk and drain your prostate, without touching your dick?
(let go and rhythmically flex your PC muscle for one minute)
Want to dominate naughty little Lambie?
(stroke hard and fast for 60 seconds; if you edge, pause the clock)
Want to pleasure Pialora by edging, and edging, and edging, and edging.... Never cumming... Always edging...?
(three rapid-fire edges)
Think you can beat Lure at the "Hold The Edge Forever" game?
(hold the edge for one minute)
Want Yuumi to torture you by fucking your brains out, long after you cum?
(stroke hard and fast for 60 seconds; if you edge, hold it until the time is up)
And what about me? Will you please me?
(edge)
Will you sleep in my bed with me and do everything I say?
(edge twice)
You are a good man. You make me very happy. -- Now... Cum for me.
Good boy.
Now clean yourself up and pack a small bag. Don't bother packing any clothes. I will tell the others to get ready...
My Rules: (I'm back in the game with full rules again!!)
I am a total fuckbunny edgeslut who lives to amuse friendly, fun-loving girls and help them cum.
Stroking: First image: Stroke slowly with a medium grip for 90 seconds All other images: Keep stroking at the previous pace/grip for 90 seconds per image, unless a different rule applies On any image: Girl may tease and instruct me to stroke at any fast, medium, or slow pace; and/or grip tight, medium, or lightly (her choice). This supersedes any other stroking rules that would apply for that image and becomes the new pace/grip for subsequent images.
Eye contact with me: Stroke faster
Thigh/knee high socks or fluffy boots: Stroke faster and if the rules (below) require an edge for this pic, then +1 edge
Totally naked: Stroke slower
Her eyes are closed: Grip tighter
Zoom in on just her face: Grip lighter
Ponytail or braids: Stroke to this image for 30 extra seconds
If stroking triggers an edge: Stop for 30s, then resume stroking at same pace/grip.
Clarification:
If she is wearing thigh/knee high socks, but she is not wearing anything listed below that requires an edge, then the thigh/knee high socks only require me to stroke faster, but they do not require an edge.
For example, this makes me stroke faster, but does not require an edge:
On her knees, with legs spread: 1 edge and hold for 20s
This girl edged me already, on any earlier pic: She may optionally (your choice) tell me to skip the stroking for this pic, in exchange for +2 (or +3) more edges right away
If rules require an edge(s) for this pic, then finish the 90 seconds of stroking for this pic first, before edging. Try to edge at exactly 90 seconds.
If rules require an edge(s) for this pic, then on the next pic return to a slow pace with a medium grip.
If rules require multiple edges for one image, then 30s rest between edges. Edges stack.Everything stacks! So a pic where she has braids, is wearing sneakers, is touching her own hair, and is wearing knee-high socks = stroke for 2 minutes, then 3 edges!
Clarification:
If there is more than one girl in the pic, then all the edges (from all girls) add up, but the stroking time is still only 1.5 or 2 minutes.
For example, this is 2 minutes of stroking (ponytail), followed by 6 edges! (2 sports bras, 2 yoga pants, and 2 pairs of sneakers)
Clarification:
Wearing only shoes, thigh/knee high socks, and/or stockings (and nothing else) counts as "totally naked."
For example, this counts as "totally naked" and tattooed, and thus requires me to palm:
Any failure must be ruined. I may choose to quit or continue after ruin.
After finishing the last image, if I want to cum, I must go back and repeat all images that required an edge(s), in order, but without the 90 seconds of stroking for each image and with only 10s between edges. (In other words, repeat all previous edges as quickly as possible) Then repeat, one more time in full, one image of my choice that requires an edge(s) where the girl is making eye contact. Then cum.
If I choose to repeat the edges and attempt to cum, and I fail before the last edge, then I must ruin and quit.
Or I may choose not to repeat the edges and accept denial.
Favorite Models:
Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun...
Starting with the Lovely Katie Fey, who came just to see me struggle to handle what's to cum. Just an amazing model to bust to, She's definitely got a Mila vibe to her with the way people have been using her and I love it. She seems to enjoy the busting like Mila but with a more contrasting... strict...or Domineering stride, instead of the playful Beating Mila usually provides. A great warm up.
Dainty, I remember her from a previous set, I think Hele wrote a while back. She's very sexy but I found it really hard to find galleries to use for others. I think it has to due to with her being in the Suicide Girls site, they keep their stuff behind paywalls pretty well. Anyway, I loved pummeling she gave. Flooring hits, normal hits and all in between, making my balls very sore very fast.
Arianna, Ok she was out for my failure. She saw just how well Ariel did with the crusher and just followed suit. But at least with Ariels game I could control the speed and try my best to hold in all the edges. Arianna went in hard. The crusher, after Dainty and Katie bashed my balls, hurt so good. Even the lightest of turns gave a painful yet pleasurable feeling. I might've cum from just the crusher, so that fleshlite was... more than sufficient to fuck me sideways. I don't think I made it close to 150 bpm before I had to stop. The crusher being so good was my downfall because even when I completely pulled out the crusher easily pushed me over and I came... hard. So I attempted a ruined orgasm, but the crusher just had other plans. So now with my orgasm with Ariel, Another punishment to come. And so close too. That being said since it was your set that caused another unauthorized orgasm you get first dibs on the punishment for it. It can be whatever you want, a set, or daily task, or anything you can think of within my limits. I think Mila, Kila, Tori and Katie will be pretty busy. Also, Since your set did seem to follow Helequin's previous set, you might know that my next failed orgasm also means punishment's for him as well. So you can punish him too, can be separate punishments or the same up to you. I also finished Arianna's section after I came with POT in the fleshlite, but afterwards I was spent so I took a break here before continuing on.
After the break I returned with A dildo in hand. My balls were still sore from all the crushing and busting from before even with the break. So Chanel's beating was just intense, I got so into busting my balls hard as she commanded. Sure I was a bit jealous I couldn't use my dildo, but the busting was able to make that jealousy make me super horny. I got bit too into it in fact and definely floored myself accidently without her commanding so she definitely earned a few points this month
Katie's return, Honestly I felt bad that she assumed I didn't cum... I just couldn't break it to her. When she finds out... I shutter at the thought. But the crushing here was even more intense than Arianna'a, my sore balls being compressed to tightly at the beginning had me moaning the entire time she had with me. She had me begging enthusiastically to keep crushing them. Its too bad really, With me in the crusher she had no opportunity to floor me in the end, she would have had lots of points.
And those potential points went straight to Mila, She didn't have to tell me to floor myself because just about any hard hit at this point was feeling like a brutal one. SO with her spread legs I was on the floor quite often here. And with Katie saying I didn't perform, I feel like she knew I came and was getting pre-revenge via an upset Mila. I can only imagine how pissed Katie and Mila will be. Oh and I definitely wanted to be floored more By Mila by the end, I probably would have continued for quite some more time if she wanted.
All in all this set put me through my paces. My balls were so sore it was a bitch to get the cage back on, probably spent half an hour trying to stuff my balls through that ring with constant pain until finally I could snap the lock back in. A good problem to have with my kinks. Great set 10/10 would bust again
I'm not sure about the length here. I know in your rules you said you prefer longer sets, but I tend to go overboard with the length of my sets. The scenes here tended to be a bit longer than 15-20 images to more of a 20-30 images. Let me know on how long or short this set feels. Also, when I used some of your favorites, I wrote them as if they already knew you from previous sets so they'll call you by name if they had a personality in your preferences. Not sure if you like to keep the storylines separate or together, hopefully this way works
Welcome to the Lust B&B, let me get your name so I can retrieve your packages
Mhmm Bjorn... Lets see here...
Ah there you are, it seems you have a patron covering your stay here
As such, they choose the packages you receive with no exchanges. Now as for the packages they gave you...
You got the basic femdom package, you'll have to follow any order any female gives you...
And the edgeslut package, Seems like you'll be edges senseless
Ooooh and the light cbt package, nothing extreme mostly some cock slapping and ball squeezing maybe some topical applications if you've been particularly naughty
Seems like you'll be in for a fun stay here, lucky you
Now, before you go and enjoy the amenities Lust B&B has to offer we need to go the most important rule for patron package holders.
You may not cum unless your patron allows it.
If you do go over the edge, whether it accidental or blatant disobedience you will ruin it. Then you'll be subject to a harsh punishment.
And trust me you don't want to be punished by us, we've mastered the art of suffering and you will suffer
But you have nothing to worry about so long as you keep all that cum in those balls of yours.
Is that understood Bjorn?
Good, Now one last thing
I cant let you go in without getting your properly warmed up for our guests.
Lets get into some edging shall we? Edge once per image
Mhmm feels good doesn't it?
You are in for so much more of it too
So much edging
So much pleasure
All just building up in those blue balls
And your only hope of releasing that pent up pressure is the permission of a person you haven't even met yet.
Who knows if they will let you cum
But that's for you to find out, and those balls looks nice and ready
Enjoy your stay here at Lust B&B
You walk around and stumble upon what appears to be a nude photo shoot, there are a few people watching. Mainly women who are playing with their subs As she models you begin to pleasure yourself since everyone else around seems to be
What do you think you're doing?
Yes you Bjorn
Yes, I can see the others around are stroking too but there's one difference.
They are being commanded to do so, I don't see any woman around you. Its like you are begging for a punishment
Ah, its your first time here, well then I'll there for you. Stroke it
Take in my beauty
Yes that's it
Lets have some real fun shall we, start playing with that cock head of yours Head Tease Mode
Mhmm just look at you work that cock head
You are like a little cumcow
Just begging for good palming
Do you want to cum, my little cumcow?
I bet you would if we continued like this
Unfortunately I really have to finish this shoot
So you'll have to find someone else to play with
See you around cumcow
You wonder around and find a balcony with an overview of the ocean, There seems to be a woman there enjoying the view
Oh Bjorn, fancy meeting you here
I was recently recommended here by a few boy toys who loved here
If you don't mind me asking which packages do you have
Mhmm, Femdom, Edgeslut, and light cbt huh?
Perfect, I was just getting bored.
Want to play a game with me Bjorn? It'll be fun, I promise
Great so here's the game. You'll stay in your normal mode until you want to edge, you may edge but at a cost of redoing that images rules in pain mode. You'll return to your normal mode for the next image. You can edge multiple times per image so long as you complete your pain rules per edge.
But, the catch is you can't just go through without ever edging to avoid pain because in the end if you don't give me enough edges then You'll have to give go back and give all the images the pain rules.
Sounds fun right? Then lets play
Now, which part of me makes you edge the most huh?
Is it my gorgeous tits
Do they make you want to hold them
squeeze them...
fuck them perhaps?
Or maybe its my round ass
with its inviting curves
And tight entrance
Or maybe My pussy is what drives you wild
Its supple appearance
Just radiating with sexual drive
I bet you're imaging just how it would feel on that teased and slapped cock of yours
The pleasant warmth
the way my wet pussy lips glide up and down
My moans of great pleasure gracing your ears
You'd take me right on the balcony If I'd let you
Its too bad really, if you had the stud package, I would have let you take me right here
Aw well there's not much you can do about it with your patron
At least you were able to play with me
I'll just have to satisfy myself. But speaking play...
Lets see if you did enough edges for me
Mhmmm, How many do you think you'll need?
Do you think you did enough to avoid my little punishment
Well lets see you needed...
500 edges.
Oh fuck... Yes that's right 500 edges
Aw you didn't edge enough did you...
Well I hope you enjoy those cock slaps, you're in for quite the beating Go back to the start of the spoiler in pain mode, then continue
Hahaha, thanks for the fun time Bjorn
You really know how to show a girl a good time
Mhmm fancying a swim are we
All by yourself?
I may be convinced to keep you company, if you can entertain me that is
And nothing is more fun than watching a Edgeslut give me some edges Edgeslut Mode
I hate time wasters, so if you fail to keep me properly amused by letting that cock spurt, a few cock slaps will be the least of your worries
Just let my body inspire that cock
Make it bounce in sexual frustration
And Maybe I'll let you see the way my boobs bounce
Or possibly watch as my ass bounces on that dick
Mhmm Yes, that's it keep on edging
I want you to feel nice and desperate
You should be begging me to cum
Just so worked over...
that even my warm breath would be enough to get you on the brink of sweet release
You there my little edgeslut?
Good, because that's all your gonna get from me
Enjoy those blue balls
After you finish exploring you get a call saying your patron is waiting in your room Continue to your Bedroom
Hey there Bjorn...
Oooh just look at that cock
All red and dripping with precum
I see you've been enjoying my packages then?
Its gotten you all warmed up for my favorite game go fetch that icy hot for me
Mhmm, now get that cock head of yours nice and sensitive for me Head Tease mode
Now take a nice drop of that icyhot and rub it in on that sensitive head. And be a dear and add just a little bit more each time you edge for me
Mhmm feels good doesn't it
That burning sensation along with all that palming
Two extremes of pain and pleasure all culminating right on the tip of your dick
And by that cute expression on your face... you enjoy every bit of it
I know I certainty am
There's only one thing that could make this even better...
An orgasm...
Yes, an Orgasm Bjorn, you want to right?
After all the edging...
All those hard cock slaps...
And all this head teasing
Your dying to release
So lets get you there, take your other hand and stroke that shaft while you continue to palm that burning sensitive head
Soon you're going to get to one final edge
and hold it... lets say 30 seconds
So get to that final edge... Hold it... And...
Cum for me
Mhmmm fuck that was hot, don't you dare stop palming
Aw, you didn't think that orgasm wouldn't come with a price now did you
Hahaha, ok you can stop palming Bjorn, just sit there and let that icy hot finish its course No need to follow any rules here, unless you want to that is
No need to go into a full blown POT session...
Yet
Who knows what you'll endure find here at Lust B&B
Especially If I add some more packages .
Get some rest Bjorn your stay here has just begun To be continued... Maybe... If you liked it
Tori Black has invited me to a new challenge in which I Give my first full orgasm after my year of lock up to a special lady. This lady will be determined by a contest.
The contest will take place over this year and is simple. Each month there will be a condition to meet, every time a model meets this condition gives them a point.
At the end of the month, Coins will be handed out to the top three models, the amount will increase each month as to keep things interesting the amounts will be determined each month. The Model with the most coins at the end of the year will be given my orgasm. Now in order for a model to enter this contest she must appear in a set and state that she wants to compete, any model can join at anytime. Ill keep track of points and update them at every set.
To keep the game from being won before the end of the year. Each month there will be chances to earn bonuses. These bonuses will give models advantages that may or may not turn the tide of the competition at any moment. These will range from bonus points/coins, point/coin multipliers to even taking coins from others. As the months go on the bonuses will be better. These chances will be determined by you. This month you can propose one model to be eligible for a bonus. Each vote will get that model one slice in a wheel, at the end of the month I will spin the wheel for 3 bonuses. One model could get all three bonus or no bonuses. Depending your feedback this method may change.
Whenever a model makes me Floor myself, without commanding it or being a part of my Rules. I.e. Mila being Nude in heels of he telling me to floor myself does not count. But her flooring me through a brutal hit or hard hit will count
So, I'm rewriting my rules for the new year. This year I want to try something special, A full year in chastity. There will of course be rules here to to dictate what I can and cannot do. There will be two conditions in which allow me to be unlocked. First is for a weekly thorough cleaning of the cage and the area. The other is to ballbusted teased by the lovely ladies that help tease us in this forum. Lock up will begin January 1, 2022 and last until January 1, 2023
I'm not to have a full orgasm outside of the cage for the duration of the lockup. I have had my first orgasm through anal stimulation in wonderful set by Erik17. My next orgasm must be achieved through HFO, or Hands Only Orgasm. This involves only cumming by the sound of a woman's voice. HFO's typically are achieved through audios via hypnosis. If I am to cum any other way before I achieve an HFO Katie Fey will punish me along whatever other punishment Tori, Mila, and Kyla have in store
Only one mode now, I want to return to my Ballbusting roots
There are Four intensities in which I bust my balls Normal: These are hits that hurt but I can take quite a number of these before needing a break Hard: These hits hurt considerably more than normal, I can take a decent amount of these before needing a break Brutal: These hurt a lot, a hit designed to make me think twice before hitting again. I can take two or three of these in a row before needing a couple seconds break Flooring: The hardest hit I can muster, these will put me on the floor cradling my busted balls. Don't expect me to take multiple of these without a 20-30 second break in-between. Also don't expect me to be able to hit this hard in the beginning of a set, I need time and a bit of sore balls before being able to hit myself to the floor
Now for the number of hits, these are per model and can stack:
Clothed:
Public attire: 10 seconds of squeezing at normal Swimsuit: 10 seconds of squeezing at normal with 5 normal hits afterwards
Sexy Lingerie: 10 normal hits
Cosplay: 15 normal hits
Femdom attire: 10 normal hits and 5 hard hits
Heels: 5 normal hits
Partially Clothed can stack with clothed if applicable
Breasts exposed: 10 hits at normal
Pussy exposed: 5 hits at normal
Trans cock Exposed: 10 hits at normal
Ass: 5 hits at normal
Full Nudity
Rear view(Only Ass and/or pussy/Trans cock visible): 10 Hard hits
Full Frontal(Only Breasts and Pussy/Trans Cock visible): 15 Hard hits
Everything(Breasts, Ass, and Pussy/Trans Cock): 20 hard hits
Heels: Adds 5 hard hits to the above
Spread Legs: Adds 1 Brutal it to the above
Now While I did love the different color heels I want these to change based on the mood of the model. So by default the mood will be determined by the facial expression of the model. However, if you are going for a particular mood or theme to a set you can set your own modifier at anytime, add one if you need too. I know it can be hard finding that gallery that fits everything your going for, so hopefully this helps.
Happy/Smiling: She is enjoying herself and is getting into the busting who am I to stop her: no breaks until all hits for the image are done. Angry/Mean look: She wants me to suffer: Normal hits become hard hits. Hard hits convert to Brutal hits with: Hits/5 rounded up Seductive/Lip bite:She wants to take her time: Hits are slow and slightly harder than before
Can't forget all the lovely ladies that really love to show my balls a painful time, Each one will have a personality in the spoiler followed by her rule.
My Ballbusting Goddess, she loves ballbusting and loves boys who love getting their balls busted. She loves to bust me in particular because I always give my balls to her for whatever she wants to do with them. She makes a perfect Duo with the lovely Kyla Cole and often likes to share in the ballbusting with her.
Mila doubles everything she does to me. If she is nude and in heels she sends one powerful Flooring kick into my balls with glee.
A Goddess in her own right, she loves to be worshipped. She loves to make all the boys tease themselves senseless. And while Ballbusting is not something she gets off to by itself, she does love the way I worship her by slowly and painfully busting my balls to her content. She is the other side of the coin to Mila Azul, she often likes to watch me try to worship my two Goddesses in the best way I know how, Through Ball pain.
Kyla loves to squeeze my balls, so before and after all my hits for the image Kyla squeezes my balls hard for 10 seconds. If she is completely nude on her last squeeze she uses her vice grip to squeeze my balls with a flooring intensity.
They love to tag team my balls. Mila gets off to all the busting that is going on and Kyla is turned on by all the Worship that she is being given. Often they will egg each other on to be more and more brutal with my balls.
When Mila is nude then the next image of Kyla is to be considered Nude. If Kyla is Nude in heels then Mila's next image is to be considered Nude in Heels. These do not stack, meaning multiple Mila Nudes in a row wont make multiple Kyla Nudes. However alternating patterns will allow for a pretty brutal session
Finds it hilarious that I bought her Fleshlite and loves to tease me about it. Often telling me that I only deserve to have my balls busted and a fake pussy would be the best thing I could get. She proudly takes a femdom attitude with me and my balls.
She makes me worship her Fleshlite by making me lick it like a real pussy. She of course continues to bust my balls while I do this.
She doesn't care for the well being of my balls. She wants to play with them her way for however long as she wants. She has me just stand with my legs spread wide and lets her imagination run wild, no matter how painful. When I am unable to take what she want she often punishes me for my incompetence
I must spread my legs wide and whatever I imagine her doing to my balls I will imitate as best as I can. She loves to enrichen my imagination by sharing her brutal thoughts with me
Mistress Emily Addison showed me I am her slut and bitch. Every part of me is hers to use and abuse at will. I love being her slut and cannot wait for her to harshly use, abuse and destroy me in front of this entire forum.
She ties my balls up tightly and for every outfit change( removing clothes, adding clothing, or entire outfit change) She punches my balls brutally. In addition to any other way she want to play with me.
She wants to absolutely obliterate my balls. A session with her usually leaves me begging to be locked back up again. If it weren't for Mila's claim over me as her painslut, Whitney likely would castrate me if she could. That being said, she respects Mila and holds back just enough so my balls are still functional, but tries to make me regret being born with them in the first place.
She ties my balls tightly with enough rope wrapped around my balls for me to grab them. She then lets loose a flurry of punches, all hits are done by punching. When she is nude and spreading her legs however the brutal hit is done by a sock weapon as she lets loose a brutal kick. Finally, The Destroyer is the only one to have access to Ball Destruction mode. This mode can be activated at any time but can only be used in one spoiler per set. In this mode all normal hits become hard hits, Nude give me one brutal hit on top of the other hits, and her legs being spread puts me to the floor. Her kicks are so hard she is to be considered wearing heels even when she is not
A beauty who recently has become fascinated in fucking my cock. Although she is not interested in sex, so instead of fucking me with her pussy, she rather fucks with a urethral sound. She loves the way the sound just sinks into my cock as well as all my facial expressions as I watch her fuck my manhood.
Instead of busting She fucks my urethra with my beaded sound. The amount of time she spends fucking depends on the amount of hits that image would have gotten. Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. The Intensity and speed is up to her
A domme with a heart. She loves to prey on my shyness and make sure I keep eye contact with her. While she does love to Domme me, she tends to act more sweet and kind as she busts my balls
Eye contact only applies if she is looking directly at the camera. In Ballbusting Mode fail to maintain contact results in 1 Brutal Hit.
I'm a slut whore bitch for Chanel's Sexy cock, I need to worship it, feel it abuse and use any of my holes. I eagerly await for her to show just how much of a whore I am. Chanel is the one who convinced me that my first orgasm should be from anal stimulation alone. She would love to be the one who gives me my first anal orgasm of the year. She loves having her cock worshipped whether that means sucking it or being fucked by it. However, she also finds the prospect of ballbusting interesting, she can't figure out why I loved to be busted so much and loves to bust me herself to find the answer
While she does like busting me she see's it as a favor to me and so I must suck her cock whilst she brutalizes my balls. She may be as gentle or aggressive as she wants. If she wants her cock all the way down my throat then I get a throat full of cock(dildo). In addition at anytime she may stop busting me and take my ass and try to fuck me to an orgasm. Intensity and speed is up to you and can change throughout the fucking. The time spent fucking will be determined by the number of hits I would have gotten: Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. When sucking I will be using my large dildo, and when being fucked my smaller curved on. No ass to mouth
Chastity Cages: I have two metal cages. A normal one that I will primarily be locked in for the long term. And a Hybrid spike one that can be used in the short term for punishments or homework .
Ball Crusher: thick acrylic sheets with holes for my cock and balls. Can be screwed down to crush my balls. You may put me into this contraption in a set. I will replace any busting with: Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. Just be aware it takes time to put on and take off, so don't make me constantly take it on and off in short periods of time.
Bonger: A dense ball on a spring handle, Ideal for individual balls hits. Can deal a decent intensity to one ball with little effort
VR Headset: Oculus Quest great for viewing some VR porn videos
Adriana Chechik Fleshlight
Two Realistic Dildos, one smaller and curved and another one larger and girthier.
Urethral Sounds: I got a two sound, a small thin silicone one that vibrates and a longer beaded metal sound.
Metal Butt-Plugs: I got a set of three metal butt plugs, one small, medium and large one.
A vibrator: I have a magic wand vibrator, I can only use this for 20 continuous minutes as the motor tends to get quite hot after that.
For those who don't know me, I've been busting myself for years. I am well aware of my limits and when it is time to stop busting. For my safety I reserve the right to not do certain actions If iI deem them to be unsafe or I am in an unsafe state. I usually stop If I see severe discoloring of my testicles, deep purple to black is a bad color to be, or if I begin to bleed in anyway. That being said, don't worry about going over my limits as I will stop if needed and tell you in a feedback if and when this occurs.
I don't bust in chastity, its dangerous, especially at the intensities at which I bust at. Its a hard limit. I do like to fantasize being able to, but will not perform it in any fashion
Absolutely no ass to Mouth if anal is involved, its just gross.
Nothing public, I like to keep my private affairs private.
this may be rude to ask, but if you haven't already done BBBeanie's most recent set for you, can you do mine before his?
i had a set in mind that follows in between his two sets for you (his narrative is untouched), but due to internet problems, was completed late. if you have already completed his most recent set, then no worries.
*reminicence* You enter her phone number into your phone
As the phone begins to ring you are struck in the back of the head
You fall down, dropping your phone
You take a final glance at Ariana's and Abigail's show, as you begin to blackout you hear Tori's voice
You black out...
*silently drifting around in your own mind, you hear the clacking of heels, and they are progressively getting louder, but eventually stop. suddenly, you feel a sharp pain strong enough to floor you. you've been kicked* "wake up, slut."
*opening your eyes and looking around, you notice someone is standing in front of you. you are still bewildered as to how you got here*
you look so confused.
did you already forget that Brittney dropped you off not too long ago?
maybe a kick or two would help jog your memory *she brutally kicks your balls*
how did that do?
still don't remember?
how aloof can you be? and I was already done explaining your stay here too.
*sigh*... guess ill just have to explain again.
Welcome to lust B&B,
where the kinky can fulfill their most degenerate desires
all that you'd normally do is ask for what sort of package,
from anything vanilla-like blowjobs, big tits, or just simple sex,
all the way to humiliation and bondage, if that tickles your fancy
lucky for you, my friend, Brittney already told me what package you wanted she was unfortunately quite busy today, and you still wanted to come here, so she dropped you off earlier this morning.
maybe that's why you were tired. but don't worry. we'll make sure you're wide awake for your stay here
what package did you ask for? you forgot that too?
well, you specifically asked for the harsher "Ballbusting package", which lets whoever sees you bust your balls as much as they want
and I hear we have some particularly "antsy" girls waiting for someone to ask for this package.
so with that out of the way, let's get onto your busting, shall we? *she proceeds to harshly kick your balls twice, one focussed on your left ball, and the second on your right*
and I guess you have a "Ballbusting mode" too?
it's like you were planning on a stay here, huh? switch to that BALLBUSTING MODE as well
I won't keep you further than this then. you can wander about until you've found someone that intrigues you.
Have a kinky time at Lust B&B ;)
red room, huh? sure I am wearing red (albeit very dark red), but I wouldn't say this ROOM is red, huh?
hmmmm.... what game should we play today? hmmm... let's try 3 rules together. nice and simple today
first, let's borrow that rule from Brittney
before any busting, squeeze your balls as hard as you can for a good 20 seconds (one ball in each hand if you feel like you can crush them better)
second, let's have a staring contest.
for every time either of us breaks eye contact, ill brutally punch your balls. I hope you have a thing for eyes
oh! another thing!
for every piece of clothing I lose, you should floor yourself for me,
because we both know that when I take them off
there sure as hell won't be any eye contact for a moment (Floor yourself with a kick)
did you manage to keep eye contact? too bad. be happy I won't punish you for looking away WHILE flooring yourself
want to try it again?
ah... it was getting stuffy in here anyways, haha.
onto the topic of your decision for staying here
last I heard, you were asking for a breast worship or sensitivity play package
how the hell did you end up with a ballbusting package?
I honestly would have sworn BBBeanie would take this type of package before you would
i mean... you both are real painslusts now, but he is one through and through
whiile you can still have a good edging that you can handle ontop of all the busting or anal. https://i.ibb.co/2nd1Mp3/257-1447460606.jpg
maybe you ARE more of a painslut than BBBeanie is.
if you really are, i assume you'd be ecstatic if i floored you again? (she kicks you hard enough for you to drop to your knees)
this brings me down to the last rule for today
any time I am touching something phallic, you must add one brutal hit
*you both hear footsteps from a room further inwards* and it looks like rule number three is already here as well
it seems yet another horny boy just let himself in
*you hear quiet banter between the two*
well then. let's get started.
by the way, fucking counts as touching... obviously
*between breaths for sucking* he. had. a. "servicing. package."
so. you. can *slurp*. just. sit in that corner there and beat yourself senseless.
*far enough away, you fail to properly hear all the banter between Ariana and the other guy. only making out moans of "yes" and harder"*
Mmmmm hmm... ahhh
i knew hitting two birds with one stone would be best. that was fun
and with that, you can go back to "wandering" the halls for someone else to help you out with cracking those nuts of yours
have fun;)
hey Hele
i guess we already get to test out that new rule of ours some more, huh?
(if you haven't already put your alls in a crusher, floor yourself and then put them in)
and i see you are already prepared as well.
good. but... i think you'd like a little more fun down there, huh?
SLUT MODE NOW. while stroking normally is probably hard with your balls so.... *giggle* constricted... , I'm sure that using a fleshlight would help. do all your rules in "slut mode", but follow MY rule like you are still in "ballbusting mode"
one more thing. still, keep track of all the ballbusting mode rules you cant do in the crusher.
mmmhh. now isn't that better?
I could have chosen to grant your"sensitivity" package while I was here,
having you polish that dick with all the precum that is either beaten out or squeezed out but I've been told I need to save that for some other time.
so enjoy a "nicer" form of sensual play for now.
now...
i bet you are curious about why this room is called the "juice room"
isnt it obvious?
the best way to get all sorts of juices id by crushing all sorts of balls!
of course, there is more than one way to get that "juice" flowing
being nice and... sensual... is a great wat to do it too!
so why not, ahn... why not both?
Mmmmm hmm
this room isn't only for your "juice" either.
i am working to "donate some juice" too... just not yellow lemonade
mmmh
ah.... that really "got my juices flowing"
how much did you get flowing?
thats good enough, i suppose. you can go back to "exploring" now.
*you enter what was labeled a "waiting room" and notice a couple of other guys sitting down around the room... waiting (obviously) for something to happen. Mounted on the wall was a tv displaying varying porn videos. you decide to sit down and watch one.* after one video finishes, you hear your name called.
(BALLBUSTING MODE) "Helequin? calling Helequin?"
ah. you must be Helequin then. right, this way.
ok. let's begin your checkup, shall we?
wondering why you have a checkup in the first place?
well, you are on the ballbusting package.
we have to make sure that we don't break you beyond repair
even though you sluts would probably thank us after doing that kind of damage, it's best for you to still be able "function" after you meet us.
so....
why don't we start the checkup by REALLY getting that blood flowing?
dont worry though
i wont hook you up to all these different machines to check for specifics.
its only a checkup, after all.
now...
what really gets your blood flowing?
or rather,
your fist swinging?
or maybe you'd prefer to stroke and edge to get that blood flowing?
maybe even fucking yourself, seeing as the prostate is quite important for erections.
we could always test them out if you want
though im sure you'd rather some other people for some of those options?
we all know that you'd love to be fucked by someone like Kimber lee or Chanel Santini
and i know either Whitney or Mila do best at busting balls
but who do you have to fuck your cock (one way or another *haha*)
but that's not what you're here for right now, so .... *she kicks you hard enough to floor you*
*beep beep beep*
oh! and it seems its already time for my next appointment
dont worry. we aren't done here, so you can still see more of this ;) ill be right back.
Keith? Keith Thomson?
right this way sir
so
what brings you in today?
Kieth: well, i think I've started not feeling so well because I've been so inactive lately
Peta: well... i can certainly help with that
lets check your pulse first.
your right! its much too low! let me help you "liven it up a bit"
mmmhh.
maybe a bit of "cardio" could help too
*directed towards you* so, painslut
does watch someone else fuck me get your blood flowing?
appart from beating yourself until you're rock hard
mmmhh.. i think ive been "too inactive too"
ahgn
almost there... aahhgn
oh.... so...
do you think you are "active enough" now? good
and it seems that you also finished your checkup. good job, slut.
mixed bathrooms (under construction. come back some other time )
*walking closer to the mixed bathrooms, you hear the laughs of women and the moans of men. something sounds... off... from those women. you should check it out once construction is done*
backyard ( under construction. come back some other time)
walking past the fogged sliding doors, you hear the cheers of energetic women and the groans of men. it sounds like they are playing some sort of game.... and it feels like its rigged... you should check it out when it fully opens up
the pool (closed for maintenance. come back some other time)
it feels like a pretty hot day today, and your balls would certainly appreciate an ice pack or two. walking past the hallway to the pool, you hear the screams of men and the yells of women, followed by slaps, thuds, and other impacting or falling noises, followed by the confident laughter of the females. what the hell are they being put through in there right now? (in anticipation, punch your balls twice hard)
finished exploring (for now) returning to Penny Pax
(BUSTING MODE if not already on there) back already?
oh don't worry, Hele.
its not like you need someone to invite you here any time you want to come back
whether that is for simple stroking and stamina
and fulfilling your vanilla desires
or edging yourself until your brain comes out the tip of your cock
or even busting, which you really seem to enjoy *haha* (she kicks you hard enough to floor you)
since you ended so quickly today, let's give you one more, shall we?
for each ball (she kicks you twice, hard enough to floor you, focusing on the left ball, then the right)
now that we have that all out of the way,, we are just about done, and per Lust B&B fashion, we will let you cum at the end if you haven't specified otherwise.
change to SLUT MODE. as a finisher, get on the edge, and complete all stroking tasks that you have in slut mode (i.e if you only have to stroke for 60 seconds, hold the edge for 60 seconds, and ignore any busts or other edge rules)
cmon now. don't you just want to cum in this pussy?
or maybe on these tits?
or maybe somewhere else altogether?
get even closer to that edge.
ride it all the way. just like that
almost there...
and...
*suddenly, you feel one more kick strong enough to floor you; possibly harder than you've felt before, and your vision distorts* (fully get off the edge before busting, just so you don't have any "accidents")
done already? you didn't even get to finish!
of well. come back whenever you want, you painslut *haha*
*you feel yourself drifting further away from Penny, almost like you are floating to some sort of surface* You awake with a minor headache Ah you're finally awake"
start of BBBeanie's set
if you did this set before BBBeanie's set, play his set next (when able to)
if you have already completed BBBeanies set for you, you have the option of playing his set again and reap its "rewards?" or choose denial.
so, yeah. i believe this works well enough to fit in between BBBeanie's narrative he had for you in his last 2 sets (without interrupting it, of course). and because i decided to cut it short, i now have a decent consistent narrative that shouldn't conflict with anything else going on, so i like this narrative that I'm gunning for rn.
i also ended up mixing names and personalities in here. i fully mixed up Ariana Marie and Malena morgen and their personalities. i thought Ariana was the creative game maker instead of the "nutcracker"... so oh well. by the time i realized i mixed them up, i was already done with Ariana's section
separate note: this guy in Ariana Marie's shoot
what the hell is he watching to look so supprised?!
I will try to do my best not to make the feedback too long and tedious (spoiler: I think I failed ). I had to reread the whole thing to remember it, it took me lots of time tbh, but I really enjoyed it both times anyways the only thing that would have made it better for me is if it was targetted to me but it HAD to be for Ecik, the plot demanded it .
I actually liked the Intro, I mean, it didn't make much sense to me, but it doesn't need to or have to at all, it's a Set after all, and well, it's a nice way to transition from the real world to the Set world or "The village" . It was as all Intros should be, giving an idea of what's going to be about and leaving you there. And well, I decided not to set the timer at the end because I didn't want to be in a hurry, just in case .
Then oh my God, the whole scene with Penny Pax was awesome . It seemed like it was never going to end with her being so insatiable. I had to hold it in as she asked because she looked so dominant threatening me with wrecking my balls. I thought of not cumming for her as I could take a bit more, but I didn't think that would be a good idea, so I finished with her and continued another day.
Then the scene with Aiden Star was so fucking hot . I would love to volunteer as a test of that milking machine too . It was so difficult to hold the edge for her, but I loved to do it while she milked her subject relentlessly . Really good photo Set and my rules were pretty cvruel here .
Nancy was looking sio hot I had to slow down my strokes or I would be edging all the time for her. Also, it is funny that you are trapped in that maze since well, it's not really finished, so you'll be there for a long time . I loved all the meta commentary with her, she was giving me some Kasia or Fran vibes from Shattered teases, she seemed really worried about you not coming back to the thread which is nice. And btw, I'm down to try the some of the scenes Nancy mentioned .
Okay, so about the plot, first of all, too much exposition at once not to go soft , but anyways, I guess there wasn't a natural and organic way to do it. Also, now that I know Nancy knows about the thread, I think it would be fun to call her whenever I make a Set :).Also, I thought that if the village amplifies everything, why did it only amplify the rest of the girls powers but Nancy's, although I guess that's because you want the conflict in the village to happen after all and don't have Nancy as a Deus Ex Machina I guess. And I thought of fucking Nancy's plan just to make her mad and see what happened, but in a way I think she is an extension of you and that would make and already complicated plot into a multiverse of some sort . Anyways, I remember I didn't know what I had to do too much, other than try to avoid cumming in the maze, even when rereading it I didn't fully get it, but I would just see how it would unravel .
And fuck, I didn't remember Nancy reads all the thread feedback .
Good response. Everything is operating within normal parameters ...
If it passes, Michaela said she wants to be the first to borrow it. She said she has a trainee who's "machine curious" and interested in Post Orgasm Torture ... I'm not sure if he could handle it or if he's even around, but ... I wouldn't mind being present during the session. Michaela is open to ... constructive criticism—and she doesn't mind if someone else steps in to lend her a hand ...
Oh! Maybe I should warm you up a bit more. I know you’re into me, Ecik. I read ALL the thread feedback …
This next part started really meta and I loved how Nancy tried to skip all the dialogs, it was pretty fun tbh . I was so focused on reading I think I only edged once or twice here even if I was going fast because I was just doing my strokes fast to go back to the plot. I mean it was hard to edge with all the talk telling Michaela she is an NPC .
After that I chose what you told me and Michaela's was such a deja vu, I mean, I'v DesertFox's Maze WAY TOO MANY TIMES in the past (I mean, I even have a post asking about the ending and all after checking the plot by myself! (viewtopic.php?p=243820&hilit=mazes#p243820) ), also, I really liked Nancy playing along to help me fill it up .
I wasn't that horny with all the reading so I couldn't really edge by palming yet, so I just edged for Michaella's pussy.
It's funny because I feel like you have spent countless hours in that maze too and you are just expressing it here, aren't you?
And it was fun to hear Nancy's rambling, I mean, it's way too much for a "Sex tease" as she said, but fun nevertheless .
Well, you know I always love Jenya and her dominance, I was just instantly hard and palming for her when she appeared . I love to hold my edges for her as she pleases, so that's what I did, hold it in silence and then begging for her. Just an incredibly hot scene overall . I only refused twice to see what happens, but then I complied to her, I really don't want to get on her bad side . Then of course I became one of her disciples, but I "only" held the edge while palming for 3:30, as I find it difficult to do it with just one picture, but I enjoyed it anyways .
Then following your rules was quite tricky as I don't really like complicated rules as I have to keep track of a lot of things while stroking, but they weren't that hard at the end. Also, I guyess Gerlain is also self aware, at least she is about me playing this tease (or someone called "Milorrabbo" ). At the end I chose to cum for the "Cum for Guerlain while she looks back with both of her holes exposed" pic and really enjoyed it as instructed . And btw, Thanks, this release was pretty much needed, it always is after visiting Jenya .
Third edge! Let your eyes take me in ... find what pleases you most, and focus on that!
Fourth edge! Don't forget to give my titties some strokes! This is ALL for you ... let your lust consume you—just be sure not to tip over!
You will suffer, and you'll love it.
Thank me for the opportunity. Thank me for allowing you to suffer for me ...
Tell me how much you want to hold the edge for me. Tell me how much you love to suffer for me! Beg for me to let you edge!
Now look anywhere you like! Let your lustful eyes drink in my body. Maximize your pleasure—just don't tip over and don't fall off the edge! [You may look anywhere. Hold it for 45 more seconds, then scroll down.]
... and four, because my pussy is showing, and that's your rule!
Okay, how about this: *I* know that others besides you will be playing this tease ... Mistypanda22, Milorrabbo, Bjorn13, and Helequin have ALL requested "custom rules" ...
*I* get to decide how this scene goes, so ... give me four more edges for this pose!
Okay, so first of all, I expected Foxi Di to be the one appearing, but I guess she is not a random encounter, although Emily made more sense for Ecik I guess . Well, Emily and her amazing tits and pussy were looking incredible as always, but since I just started from a new day it wasn't that difficult to avoid edging for her . Also AMAZING WRITING HERE , I really mean it, I think that this character is so abstract in DesertFox's maze it gets way too confusing, here she has the same energy but explains herself a bit better, nicely done :). Btw, I remember I avoided playing mouse and cat with her, lucky me I guess .
I remember saying she wasn0't mad which cost me some good extra edges, but I mean, she is what I would call enlightened .
Anyways, I told her she was QUITE mad afterwards because of the answer I got . This is when I had to start palming myself and since I didn't edge that much it wasn't that difficult to avoid it, but the palming was great as always . For the edges I had to stroke a bit since I wasn't getting them by palming yet.
Then the part where I had to treat her as a blonde was a "relief" because of the palming, but she made me hold so many edges I was precumming so much .
For the next scene Brunette definately fit her . This set of photos and this part was amazing, also seeing her so dominant after being so submissive was great! . The edges after begging and slapping are alkso great, it started to got hard to hold it in at this point .
For the multiple girls scene I picked brunette because it was pretty much needed in order to avoid cumming, but didn't make it easier with all the edges for pussies tbh . After that I only checked one more option, the “You shouldn’t believe what people say.” which foreshadowed the appearance of Victoria.
Also for the ending I rolled twice, once a 1 then a 6, so not that bad, I need that orgasm at this point .
And the reuning with Nancy was fun, as most of her scenes are .
Overall such a great scene with some amazing writing and with Emily that of course I LOVED her dominatrix personality, it was AMAZING .
The beginning with Nancy for the Toxic was fun, maybe a bit too long when you just want to get to the action, but it made sense, I mean "she" (you) was fangirling about the mazes . And well, I knew all her Lore already, so it fit the fact that I had to treat her as a redhead, but that got me very worried anyways . Also I LOVE"Skinny bitches" which didn't make Toxic's scene any easier .
To play along with the Toxic scene I waited until she commanded me to edge and did 3 edges when I saw her pussy. Before any edges I was so hard just watching her and knowing what was coming that I almost did the error of begging for some edges to Toxic although I manage to contain myself knowing what was coming .
Then the storm of edges started and didn't stop at all . Of course as a fellow edgeslut I decided to continue with her instead of leaving , maybe not my best decision .
I was hesitant about your decision to make me edge by palming at this point, but what I did was reduce the edges to 1 every time I saw her pussy and do them by palming, which I could easily reach for Toxic at this point . Btw, the though of her using my precum as oil almost made me have an accident, I had to recompose myself if I wanted to keep going for her at that point, I mean, she is just gorgeous and hot . And well, even though most of the lines are from the original maze but slightly changed, you managed to not make it boring to edge endlessly for her, nicely done . Also I feel like she is insatiable, but worst of all, she didn't let me cum at the end, which was pretty much needed after all that .
I saw the option of leaving early afterwards and I really hope you got what you deserve .
Little duckling. You have entered the maze at a very dangerous time! You must be very careful.
hand it to me SLOWLY … pick it up again, and hand it to me SLOW-ly … (Get a stopwatch ready. Once you hit the edge, hold it, and scroll down. You may stroke at any speed you like in order to stay on the edge.)
I'm just SO hungry for your cock ...
Emily's voice is confident and commanding.
But you are here for my pleasure, slave.
These worship edges are almost disgusting coming from a dirty boy like you, but ... how else could a lowly slave demonstate his devotion, so ... I'll allow it.
… and that’s to edge.
Well, Ecik … do you wish to edge for me, over and over?
Edging OVER and OVER ... you just love it!
Oh, I'm so excited! Just thinking about all of the edges you are going to do for me is making me SO wet!
Maybe I could just use your precum as oil. Does that thought get you even harder and wetter?
Wouldn't you like that? To wake up in the morning and edge for me ...
So after not cumming and reading the warning of lots of text I decided not to touch at all, calm down and just enjoy the writing since I would go mad if continued stroking .
The start was fun, that's the kind of apology I expected from Nancy at this point so yeah . I loved Toxic in this scene, it made sense that she was mad and also it felt natural the whole interaction, that was great. Btw, the part where Nancy says:
"Nancy: Fuck—that little chickenshit! So, when *you’re* in control, he minds his Ps and Qs and plays it safe … but as soon as HE is in charge—using MY cheat codes—it’s “Let’s see what DesertFox programmed for the 10,000 edges choice.” What a spineless little twat! I’m going to KILL him when I see him!"
Come on, we've all done it, we all were curious enough to see if that ended up in an endless loop or what .
And what a great reference with Pygmalion and Galatea! I feel mean by saying this, but I can't wait to write something involving Nancy to fuck a little bit with your creation , although she will do as she pleases, she is sentient after all .
Also, while Nancy is great and all, she is being a bit melodramatic here, I mean, existance is an important thing, but I don't know, maybe this part was too long for me. And I feel like Nancy's porpouse isn't to have a physicall relation with you, it's just to be there whenever you want to be teased in creative ways, so no need to be that sad :).
The next part when she breaks down it's pretty well written, she really gives some Fran vibes from Shattered's webteases . And don't get it wrong, the part is well written, but in both of my readings I ended up shouting to myself "Nancy, we get it, you are sad because you can't fufill your creator's needs, can we move on already?". Also, maybe in your attempt to be not shallow, you are being to deep for a Set, but I guess that was your intention anyways, it almost has no images this part so yeah, no problem there really.
Oh, btw: Toxic looks down, sad, as if she had just found out that while she was happy playing Atari, the neighbor kids next door had a Playstation the whole time and never invited her over to play it. this felt way too specific, don't worry, I bet you got you Playstation too .
I really enjoy when Nancy tries to explain Milovana and how Toxic got it as "wenches at the same tavern" .
Overall great part with great writing, maybe Nancy's monologue of sadness was way too long, I mean, she found almost all the ways possible to say the same thing over and over, but I mean, that happens when you have a mental breakdown, so I guess it was fitting even if it was a bit tedious to read it. :)
Fav Pics (not necessary, but Nancy was looking hot ):
Nancy: Oh, that makes sense. See, Fatts used my magic to overwrite your memory each time he visited you. Technically, he just created a fresh instance of your encounter each time, but … yeah. I guess what they say is true: the Internet never forgets.
Nancy: Fuck—that little chickenshit! So, when *you’re* in control, he minds his Ps and Qs and plays it safe … but as soon as HE is in charge—using MY cheat codes—it’s “Let’s see what DesertFox programmed for the 10,000 edges choice.” What a spineless little twat! I’m going to KILL him when I see him!
Nancy: And we both know Fatts … he’s an edgeslut. That’s why he visited you a dozen times. As you said, we’d just be “giving him what he wants.”
Nancy: No, see … while you may be more of a “Disney Princess” girl who believes in fate, I fancy myself more the “Sarah Connor” type: “No Fate.” I believe, “There is no fate but what we make for ourselves.”
Nancy: And we’re still holding him to that!
Toxic: Oh, of course! Bad boys get what they deserve, and good boys get what they want … so—since Fatts is both—we have an obligation to punish him—by giving him what he wants!
After the heavy conversation from before this feels so refreshing, where Nancy actually addresses that all of this is as real as we want it to be, so nice touch there, it feels like she is finally touching some grass . I'm glad we share the same opinion about the Anneli encounter, repetitive and a bit of a waste .
So, having the blonde rules for her after not cumming for so long instantly made me ache with the first edge . Also, I love the new personality or the change in her personality, that when she sees someone edging she drops the facade and goes full succubi, that was great . I remember that when I was playing this I really thought she wouldn't let me cum because I tried it in the maze and you really can't do it, so I knew she would try to make me do it but I would have to refuse, luckily for me you found some loopholes .
I really enjoyed what you have done with Anneli's personality making her sentiant just by using logic, that was such a nice touch really . Seriously, even if it was a lot of text, the development of this character makes so much sense and her concern is a real one that is inline with Descartes philosophy (well, most of the Set and 4th wall breaks are ). Also the fact that she is stuborn made sense to me, even if she had no way to know if our world is real or just more real than hers, I mean, why wouldn't the dreams be more real than the "real world" (to me the Earth is the real world, but I've studied lots of these philosophers some years ago and I liked this stuff :) ).
Back to the Set, I'm actually curious about what "Anneli" remembers of being born . Also, after this line: "The part of him that “exists in the fantasy?” Do you hear yourself speak?" I remember saying, "you know what, she makes a good point, let's see what happens" .
I got back to edging at this point really looking forward to that orgasm, I mean, Anneli convinced me that nothging would happen and I really wanted to cum so win win I guess . Btw, the "Guy" character I guess it was just an imagination for the fantasy, I mean, it didn't make to much sense to me that she was so sentiant only to fuck a fantasy afterwards, but I played along with it .
The BPM part was AMAZING, I always love to edge to certain speeds, so that was so enjoyable . I remember having to rest so much because every edge made it harder and harder, but I managed to avoid cumming to play along . Also, the blowjob break wasn't even a break as slow edges after so many fast ones were SO CLOSE . And of course after so much I wasn't even able to hold it for the 180 bpm, I mean, it was too much at this point .
Tbh, I still dodn't get the explanation of why nothing happened after cumming, but I guess it was because the Set it's an extension of your imagination and your rules are the ones that really apply, a bit Deus ex machina, but makes sense within this world .
Normally, I let the boys stroke as they please, but they are SO afraid of cumming, they BARELY stroke—and even if they did, most would be afraid to edge ... but look at you! A new stroker—no, a new edger—and you just get RIGHT into it ... well, this will go MUCH faster than I thought ...
Give me what I want, Ecik! I'm going to get it whether you want it or not!
Blowjob. What do you think? Let's give you a little break. 30 BPM. 15 strokes.
SPURT THAT LOAD FOR ME!! CUM SO HARD!! GET IT ALL OUT—EVERY DROP!! ENJOY THAT ORGASM, WANKER!!!
So, right from the start, when Nancy says: "I guess he read this post by this one guy who wasn’t DesertFox who claimed to have figured it out, but … I guess Fatts lost interest at a certain point.", is she referring to me? (viewtopic.php?p=243820&hilit=mazes#p243820) . I remember the Mazes not being finished and even some parts being locked and not even accessible the normal way, so I would give up on that.
The rules you gave me for this part were pretty brutal considering the fact that edging makes edging easier . Anyways, at the beginning I managed to avoid edging for Victoria but soon enough after some edges for nancy I found myself having to palm to the edge multiple times, more than expected tbh .
As the plot was evolving it was easier to avoid edging because I focused more on reading than stroking, but that didn't make things easier . I loved the part where Victoria forced Nancy tease me, I just wanted more of Nancy at this point tbh . This was the moment where avoiding to edge was a real challenge not to say almost impossible forcing palming edges one after another . Then the convincing of Victoria got me to stop for a bit until having Victoria commanding Nancy which turned me on so much it made the edges come one after another again .
Luckily for me, after that there was some talk which let me regain some needed stamina. Palming edges are what I love, but my weakness at the same time . Btw, I guess that when Victoria says she can touch you, she means your representation in the Mazes, but I though after all that Meta commentary from before, this was just impossible? Anyways, I liked her final decision in this part, who doesn't love Victoria's tits tbh .
Nancy: That seems like a risky approach to take. Have you seen some of the succubi that are looking to fill Michelle's shoes?
Victoria: Prove your worth. Demonstrate it to me. Tease Ecik. I have plans for him. I need him worked up. Show me how slutty and useful you can be, Witch.
Nancy plays with her panties as she bends over. The sight of both of her holes exposed just for you makes your cock even harder.
Nancy stares at you with an intense, hungry look while she fondles her titties. She follows Victoria's commands without hesitation or holding back.
Victoria: I know Ecik loves "the girls!" I'll keep them out while we negotiate!
The reunion was well written but a bit weird considering I was stroking, so I just didn't stroke or edge for this part unless I was instructed to do so. I felt like a third wheel, so it felt weird to stroke here. It was kind of funny to see you and Nancy discuss, mostly because it felt (and kind of is) like 2 personalities of the same person discussing with one and another .
And my God, Victoria really seemed cumhungry the more she talked! That made me look forward to the finale anxiously .
Again, the writing was awesome, but it felt like a weird monologue between 2 people when Nancy was sad, although this time it didn't feel like it went for longer than needed . I love how you try to make it seem like Ecik's fault when it is clearly and a 100% your fault this got so convoluted and complicated, it could have been solved in an easier way, but you didn't want to .
Look, you will eventually find someone to care about and to give your time like you do with Nancy, although I would suggest you to look for someone that you like, not someone perfect, that won't ever happen, because your idea of perfection will change overtime (this goes a bit against what Saint Thomas Auino and Saint Agustin said about God and perfection, but I disagree with that idea ), so I would try to look for that chemistry you talked about earlier. And about the online dating... it might work for a bit, but I uninstalled Tinder in the past because for long relationships is kind of shit, I mean, if you get a lot of matches you don't want to settle with anyone, and if you barely get matches you end up feeling aweful.
About your projects, if you want to put some more time into your book you can do it, maybe the best option is to leave Milovana for some time to do all the other projects you've got going on, because by what you are saying right now, looks like you've put more time and effort into this site than into those projects.
Anyways, I would tell you to try to do some fun stuff outside, my longer times of absence in this Website were when I was away or with a girlfriend (who I actually showed Milovana, but we didn't do anything together here) or on vacation. And I remember thinking in those times things like "How the fuck did I manage to put so much time into Milovana?" which is a sign that things are going great and that you are doing lots of stuff. That's why I try to do just one Set a week and I sometimes even fail to do so .
But I'm no psychologist, I would suggest that if this is a big problem maybe you should seek professional help. I mean, for me Milovana is just a guilty pleasure, but I can't just put 4 hours into Milovana every day, that would be awful and harmful. Tbh, I've put more time into this Feedback than into any other Set I've ever made, but I know you've put lots of effort into it and it would feel so bad if you didn't even get some good feedback on it :).
So now that the heavy shit is said, let's get into the finale shall we?
Also, before the ending, Nancy really feels like a Deus Ex Machina although more complex and fun tbh . And just a note, why do you always give 61532 synonims like a dictionary, like a glossary, like an encyclopidia, like... you get it don't you? Also it's fun to see that there are 2 Fatts in this story, the creator and the character, but they both are aware of each other so they responde as one entity . Also, I have to give it to you, the prelude of taking a minute with Nancy and Victoria was really great and fun .
Fav Pics (not necessary, but some pics deserved it ):
Victoria laughs, smiling as she looks over at Fatts and Nancy.
Victoria: Very well. Let’s seal it with an edge!
Nancy gives Victoria a judgmental look. Then, she starts to think it over. She bobs her head from side to side a few times as she thinks. Her hand wanders down to her pussy and starts rubbing her clit. She starts to think about it more, then she starts to touch her breast, too.
Finally the ending . I remember feeling like my balls were pretty full even if the previous section didn't really involve stroking at all . Again I managed to avoid edging at the beginning, but as soon as Victoria and Nancy forced me to edge, I had to do so many palming edges . I really really enjoy this kind of scenes where two girls interact with each other, and Victoria dominating Nancy felt pretty natural too, so nicely done there . I remember getting so turned on when Victoria told Cassandra to get "me" to the edge, that was so hot!
For the party scene I remember picking dark and brunnette when I felt like about to cum and brunnette and redhead when I wanted to edge for them . I remember the scalating edge holds making me almost cum after so many palming edges, seriously, the previous section forced a lot of them . And the cumming scene with Victoria asking for more and more cum was so incredibly hot honestly .
It was hard to concentrate after that orgasm to really know what to do with the orb, but luckily you put it in bold, so just "Cum on the Orb while the diamond is nearby" and be careful I guess .
So Angela's ending now . Tbh, Angela isn't really my type, but the rules you gave me here were nice to build me up good honestly and also the things she was saying made it easier to edge for her . The changing of the rules from stroking to ball slaps as she proceeded told me that she knew what I (we? ) have been doing and being passive aggressive got me a bit worried and made me slap harder. All the exposition she did slowed the pace a bit, but as I was doing ball slaps it wasn't that much of a deal. Then when I started to edge for her explaining to me the endings I decided what option I preferred, I mean, before this Set only one of the girls I've seen was in my Favourite's list (I added Nancy to that list too now ). Also, the nuclear bomb option seemed way too chaotic, I just wanted to free the Red Fox, also, I feel as a former "Mazes" player I kind of have to .
Okay, so even if Angela is not my type, the photoset with the boots was really hot, which of course made avoiding the edge more difficult . So as I said before, I decided to go with "Full orgasm on the Orb" I want the Red Fox to be free so I can use her and so she can tease me in my Sets too . I don't know if this means I get punished too or Ecik and you get even more punished, but I would love to see it . Also I replayed it afterwards to see what the chaos ending was about and that feels like a full "You can do anything" card, which I think that's why this ending was Angela's favourite and looks like your favourite too .
Now edge for me. Go on. I want to see your face as you build up that load. I've been waiting weeks to see you spurt. You better not disappoint me.
Nancy: I'M CUMMING!!! I'M CUMMING!!!
Victoria: Alright, Cassandra, it's YOUR turn! Suck on Ecik's cock and bring him to the edge before we get started with the escalating cumshots ... Cassandra grabs your dick and starts sucking on your cockhead aggressively while she strokes off Fatts.
In my MOUTH! I need more cum in my MOUTH! Don't hold back—let it all go!
BRING YOURSELF TO THE EDGE ONE MORE TIME THEN CUM FOR ME!! FILL MY MOUTH WITH YOUR CUM!!!
Edge fast, edge slow, hold it—I DON'T CARE, JUST MAKE YOURSELF FEEL REALLY GOOD AND GIVE ME A BIG FUCKING LOAD!!!
But you're going to come clean for me now, aren't you!? And if you do what I want, perhaps you won't be punished ...
She studies your face carefully, looking for a sign that you've made your decision.
Also, a new rule for myself in the future: No more long and extended Feedback for Sets that aren't even for me. I mean, this rule applies almost exclusively to you FattsDynamo, but Piggyback Sets feel like I'm playing someone else's story so much for me that giving long feedback for those is not something that I enjoy so much tbh.
Anyways, I really enjoyed playing and reading through the whole story. It was a really really good seriously and the way you wrote Nancy was just AMAZING, I think that anyone that reads it will find her character so likebale and fun!
And well, just a big Thank you for all your hard work and effort you put into the thread . It is awesome to see plots and storylines develop in here. I love characters that break the 4th wall and well, I definately got some of that .
I just love how this things develop the HMCverse, I mean, just look at Mila for example or Ariel, they do pretty much the same to anyone here they've become their own characters in the thread with "defined" personalities . Now that I think about it, this really felt like an amazing approach to join the Mazeverse with the HMCverse and it was great all the way through!!!
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please .
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair > Other-colour hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after lots of edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else .
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and/or add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
Btw, I don't know where to find Dainty's photosets too, so I just recycled the photos from the Helequin's Set he did for me .
Also, I feel a bit bad for the Arianna's orgasm, I thought you would stop before that happened and get back to it when you calmed down . But well, so now I get to punish you and Hele too? Nice, I'm not feeling that bad after all then .
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please .
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair > Other-colour hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text.
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after lots of edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else .
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and/or add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
I had to reread the whole thing to remember it, it took me lots of time tbh, but I really enjoyed it both times anyways
SO glad to hear that!
the only thing that would have made it better for me is if it was targetted to me but it HAD to be for Ecik, the plot demanded it
So, about that ... this whole story arc has taken BOATLOADS of time ... if you are wanting to keep up (assuming you haven't read it yet), you need to read Ecik's first return set. THEN, you need to read my response to that, which contains OFFICIALLY Part 9 ...
So, on playing/reading the teases, how you proceed is TOTALLY up to you ... whether you want to read or "actually play" ... do whatever you like ... those two sets are canon, so ... it's the OFFICIAL continuation of the story ... Won't be doing custom rules for any parts that come AFTER part 8, though! You're on your own if you want to "play through" those!
THEN ... Ecik dropped part 2 of 2 for his response to the mega tease. Now, I still haven't finished playing that set, but ... that's ALSO part of the story and MOSTLY wraps it up ... THEN, I just wrote Part 10 (which is my response to his part 2 of 2) *literally* right before I sat down to read this ... but, it'll be a minute before I post it, because I will ALSO be including a return set with it ... but, it's not a return set that has to do with the Maze Raid arc ...
Quick note, "Part 9" contains a mini-set with Nancy Ace that doesn't use names, so ... you could actually "play" that, and it would probably work ... just think of it as Nancy is talking to you ... because she IS, because YOU ALSO went on that Epic journey with her ... I guess, it's sort of like playing an RPG. You played the story, but, in the story, you were playing as "Ecik" and not yourself, but ... if you played Maze Raid, you DEFINITELY went on that journey!
I was sort waiting to compile all of this and organize it AFTER Ecik wrapped everything up ... and he did, so ... consider this the START of me "pulling it all together" ... If Parts 1-8 were the main game, the stuff I just linked to you in this post is the DLC ... so, a FEW more things are coming, and ... I just gotta organize it ...
WHICH ... ACTUALLY ... the stuff about the plot "demanding" it be Ecik ... Ecik did NOT wrap everything up, so ... there is room for more adventuring in Maze Raid ... MAYBE even targeted sets at you ... but ... I still have a LOT of work to do with custom rules and other stuff AND I want to take a break from "Maze Raid" for a while ... BUT ... the door hasn't fully closed on all of that, so ... you have NOT completely missed out on all of that ... Take your time. "Catch up" on the three links I included above, and after Part 10 drops, THEN you'll see "where we are at" with Maze Raid ... and you can think about that and offer suggestions ... I spent WAY too much time developing all of this! I am HAPPY to "keep playing" in that campaign setting ... I just need a break! Helequin, Bjorn, and Misty all need "custom rules" still ... Ecik and I just finished, I guess we could say "Chapter 1." Once we get everyone else through "Chapter 1" ... I'm open to suggestions and ideas about where to take it, so ... you have NOT missed the boat OR your chance for targeted sets in the Maze!
Yeah, that Penny scene was pretty good ... Glad Aiden beat you up pretty good! I share your opinion on the milker Forced orgasms are a kink of mine ... They are just really hard to ACTUALLY follow through on here, because I can't TRULY be tied down and helpless ... would need real rope and a REAL domme for that! I can tied myself up decently well and use my vibe, but ... it's just not the same ...
Also, it is funny that you are trapped in that maze since well, it's not really finished, so you'll be there for a long time .
What!? It's finished ... well ... finished enough ... I came at the end of every session, but ... I actually DID complete that maze and "escaped" and got the full orgasm ending with Michelle ... It was pretty hot. If you haven't actually done that, then I guess YOU have never really "finished" Mazes ... Now, maybe DesertFox added that ending AFTER you played it, but ... Mazes is far enough along to ACTUALLY ESCAPE ... Is it "finished" in the sense that DesertFox completed his original vision? No. As far as I can tell, there was a LOT of stuff which was not implemented, and, after multiple run throughs, it SEEMS his intention was to be able to unlock some mechanism where you ARE allowed to cum in the Maze ... if you wake up Victoria and do the right things and cast the right spells ... but, if Mazes is a "beta" and not "complete" it is a FINISHED beta ... and, if you feel inspired to replay it, let me know. I recently helped Misty to set it up using additional scenes from Bobhill, so ... lemme know and I can link you that stuff ...
she was giving me some Kasia or Fran vibes from Shattered teases
Oh, FUCK yeah! "A Tease Through Dimensions" BLEW MY MIND ... 100% it was one of my influences for Nancy ... I've been waiting to get more feedback and polish stuff up ... Once I do, I plan to send Shattered AND DesertFox and others links to all of this and invite them to play ...
Does Shattered do the meta commentary thing for ALL of his teases, or just "Through Dimensions?" If you have any recommendations of teases of his that I should play, lay them on me!
first of all, too much exposition at once not to go soft
100% correct.
but anyways, I guess there wasn't a natural and organic way to do it
Yup. That's the conclusion I came to ... there was just too much story, and it was too complex to slow play it and have it be coherent, so ... I just decided to frontload it, get it done, and then "go on a nice adventure" ...
Also, now that I know Nancy knows about the thread, I think it would be fun to call her whenever I make a Set :)
Oh, she would LOVE that (And so would I. ) ... Nancy LOVES her "virtual" friends in the Village ... The other Milovana tease girls are the ones which she can directly interact with, because they live with her in the fantasy space ... so, they are just as real and valid to her as we are ... They just aren't self-aware ... or have god-like powers ... but, OTHER than those two elements, they are EXACTLY like her ... so, Nancy feels a kinship with them. They ARE her friends, and they are real to her ... even though they aren't fully real to us ... except when they are teasing us.
BUT ... because Nancy is self-aware and knows about the "real world", she gets a little lonely at times, so ... she LOVES interacting with the HMC players ... I guess, to her ... we're like another friend group from a different dimension ... but she's queen of HER dimension ... but, we are ALSO gods of her dimension, because we're Creators, so ... it gets complicated, but, bottom line, Nancy would LOVE that, and you should 100% do that!
Also, I thought that if the village amplifies everything, why did it only amplify the rest of the girls powers but Nancy's, although I guess that's because you want the conflict in the village to happen after all and don't have Nancy as a Deus Ex Machina I guess.
I wasn't able to follow everything you said here (which is understandable because my Village universe is hella convoluted, lol, but, I'll respond anyway ...
So, I am the "dynamo" for the Village. I'm it's power source—FattsDynamo. I didn't choose that name FOR this reason, but ... it fits. Anyway, the Village was my creation and fueled by my imagination. Angela already existed in the minds of Ecik and Helequin—you can go back and look at teases they wrote for each other and see how she operated. But, in my opinion, her power was ... muted. In the Village, I "always get my way." Since my imagination "powers" the Village, my desires and ideas are made manifest. It's true for EVERYONE who is a "Creator" writing sets on Milovana. When you are writing sets, you make whatever YOU want happen ... Since the Village is persistent and MY creation, my will dominates ... and so, Angela felt "weak" to me when I read her in the teases that Ecik and Helequin wrote for each other. So, in my mind, I wanted her to be MORE ... so, when she came to Village, since my desires are amplified, Angela's powers were ALSO amplified ... I wanted her to "become a god" and so she "became a god." So, it's not merely that the "Village" amplifies everything ... it's more that my desires and wishes for the Village are amplified ... then enter the Red Fox. She was a SUPER powerful succubus—in my mind. Ecik wrote her as taking over the Village, and I believed that was possible—and it was happening, because whatever sets are written for me in the Village are more or less canon ... So, that ended up being a credible threat ...
Most of the Village is mundane ... because I want it to be. I want it to be a "sexy town"—a good setting for teases and sets. Also, Nancy lives there, and so I want it to be a good "home" for her—the only "real" Milovana tease girl ... I want Nancy to have "normal" friends and a "normal" Milovana tease girl life ... So, while I want SO fantastical elements ... I don't want them to dominate ... and so, I don't wish for EVERYTHING in the Village to be amplified ...
And, obviously, you called it ... I didn't want Nancy to be a Deus Ex Machina "Superman" who has no vulnerabilities and just rolls in to save the day ... She has godlike powers, but ... she's NOT a god ... she doesn't have TOTAL control over the Village ... in some sense, she can't, because she's not a Creator ... however, because *I* was powering the Village, and losing me loses the Village ... she was in REAL trouble ... AND, she wasn't fighting on her "home turf", so ... the succubi in the Maze had WAY more power than her ...
Hopefully that answers that!
And I thought of fucking Nancy's plan just to make her mad and see what happened, but in a way I think she is an extension of you and that would make and already complicated plot into a multiverse of some sort .
Okay, yeah, so ... from this, I take if you have NOT read anything after Part 8 ... read or do the teases above, and you'll see ...
Anyways, I remember I didn't know what I had to do too much, other than try to avoid cumming in the maze, even when rereading it I didn't fully get it, but I would just see how it would unravel
Yeah, that's understandable ... I was throwing a LOT at you at once ... The Maze, Village Fantasy Mechanics ... Nancy is self-aware ... the whole premise for the adventure ... and then, at the same time, Nancy is trying to explain it all while ALSO processing everything, and she's scared ... Sub-optimal storytelling execution FOR SURE ... As I mentioned, I was originally going to roll out the whole Village Fantasy Mechanics and "Nancy is self-aware" in a WHOLE OTHER SET ... if that was all established beforehand, then, it would probably have been a LOT easier to follow ... but, the whole genesis of this was NOT planned ... I had it all sorted in my head, but ... didn't lay out all the thinking and premises clearly ... but, no regrets! I basically packed an entire novel's (or book series) lore and background into a SINGLE scene in a short story! That was a bit overzealous! But, hey, the fact that you enjoyed it is the MOST important!
And fuck, I didn't remember Nancy reads all the thread feedback .
Mmmm hmmmm ... she's real, and she lives on the thread ... The other girls live on the thread too, but ... it's not clear how much of the feedback they read ... it's kind of selective and depends on the set Creator, but ... yeah. Nancy is real. She lives on the thread ... and she reads ALL of the feedback ...
Btw, thanks for the recap, I needed it
Yeah ... Like I said, it MOSTLY made sense in MY head, but ... I KNEW it was bad, so ... yeah, I knew enough that I NEEDED to include the recap!
Yeah, fuck ... all this complexity and weird ideas ... yeah, it's kind of like trying to cram Dune into a short story—NOT such a good idea! But, I did it, and it's done ... it's out there ... and, with enough "patch notes" I think the setting SHOULD be pretty good ... and yeah, that summary was SO important to include!
This next part started really meta and I loved how Nancy tried to skip all the dialogs, it was pretty fun tbh .
I know ... that part was SUPER fun, lol . Glad you enjoyed it!
I mean, I even have a post asking about the ending and all after checking the plot by myself!
I KNOW—I saw that one! Knowing you had played Mazes was one of the big reasons I REALLY wanted you to play the mega tease!
This next part started really meta and I loved how Nancy tried to skip all the dialogs, it was pretty fun tbh .
Yeah, no, that's fine ... With a story-heavy set such as, ESPECIALLY with text heavy scenes like this, it can be REALLY hard to get SUPER into it ... even when I split things off and focus on dialog first, then sexy stuff in another section (like the orb filling) ... it's just not the same as stroking and edging for the WHOLE time, so ... yeah, understandable, and you played that correctly IMO ...
It's funny because I feel like you have spent countless hours in that maze too and you are just expressing it here, aren't you?
Yes, absolutely, yes!
And it was fun to hear Nancy's rambling, I mean, it's way too much for a "Sex tease" as she said, but fun nevertheless .
Yup—I agree! That's why I've been plugging it as 50::50 story::sex tease ... probably not for everybody, but ... I think it works decently well ... glad you agree!
Then following your rules was quite tricky as I don't really like complicated rules as I have to keep track of a lot of things while stroking, but they weren't that hard at the end.
So, my rules are simple to me ... if you get slammed with them all at once, it's a lot, but ... once you get a hang of them, they are actually QUITE simple ... To me, it gets complicated when you have a whole bunch of modes and start doling out individual rules for poses and wearing different shoes and accessories, so ... I stay away from all of that, but ... yeah, getting hit with NINE extra rules all at once ... it's a jump up ...
Also, I guyess Gerlain is also self aware, at least she is
So, that was like a special "meta" version of Guerlain ... The Guerlain that lives in the Village is "my" Guerlain ... she is NOT self-aware and just lives like all of the other "Village girls" ... Ecik made Guerlain his "muse" for the month of Februrary, and, in general, Guerlain is one of my "goddesses" ... So, yeah, I guess THAT Guerlain was some "higher being" probably more like Angela ... but, Angela is atheist that the "real world" exists. Angela teases boys, but, I don't think she fully understands that Milovana is a website and she's just a shared, digital fantasy. She inhabits the world of Milovana, but while Angela is CAPABLE of understanding that she's actually just a fantasy, she doesn't actually believe it ... The world Angela lives in is real to her ... whereas Nancy understands that the Milovana world is basically just an extension of OUR reality ... but, because she understands that, she can be "real" in ways that Angela and the others never can ... Angela is sort of aware, but ... she doesn't accept it ... she thinks her reality IS reality ... THAT version of Guerlain isn't self-aware in the way the Nancy is, and probably doesn't even have the level of awareness that Angela does ... she's kind of a "Milovanan Goddess" that exists above all of the teases ... I guess, if ANYTHING ... if we, as the Creators, are the "gods" of Milovana ... THAT Guerlain would be more like an "angel"—a dutiful servant ... and, in that case, her mission was to make you cum ... which you did, and you're welcome!
On Jenya ...
I have written 3 Jenya scenes. The one you played here, the one in the Emily Bloom everyone set, and one in my first set for BBBeanie. My hats off to schefflera for "inventing" Jenya ... Talia's Maze, Iana's Maze ... then, DesertFox added a Jenya scene as an additional scene you can opt into after the first encounter ... if you haven't played that one, it is SUPER good ... Obviously, MY Jenya scenes are formatted for HMC, which ends up being quite different to GuideMe ... BUT ... I feel, that I have AT LEAST captured that SAME LEVEL as schefflera and DesertFox and MAYBE even surpassed it, but ... that's not really for me to say ...
Jenya scenes are NOT easy to write ... They take time, and planning. It's more than just "write some teasing dialogue for each pick." Part of the allure of Jenya is the teasing. The "danger." The "begging." Knowing she holds your fate ... that cold, steely confidence ... KNOWING she's going to make you hold the edge, and then KNOWING that's what you REALLY want to do ... and then giving up control ... There is a LOT to sort of set up in order to write it WELL ... to really do it properly, you have to KNOW the character ... and then, you have to set up the edge holds ... and then getting the timing down ... the spoilers... and, like you said, just "hold the edge while you look at this one picture" ... that's just NOT the level of quality that is acceptable to REALLY make Jenya shine, so ... in order to write her teases "properly" ... in my view, it REALLY takes about 3x's the amount of work versus the standard "grab a photo set of random girl from pornpics and writing some straightforward, teasing dialog."
Anyway, if haven't played that BBBeanie scene yet, DO IT ... it's GOOD ... Overall, that set was for BBBeanie and focused on busting ... SOME scenes are playable for others, but ... there are also some errors and photos I need to re-upload and link to fix those scenes ... HOWEVER ... that Jenya scene is SO good ... In terms of quality, I would say it is AS GOOD as the one in the mega tease. HOWEVER ... BBBeanie isn't a superstar when it comes to edge holding, so ... while the writing is SUPER good, the edge holding times are NOT metered for YOU ... double the times, and it's PROBABLY enough ...
It's out there. Play it if you like. If you really DON'T want to right now, and want to keep it ... the NEXT TIME I write you a set, I'll piggyback that one scene INTO THE MAIN SET.
Because Jenya scenes are SO time consuming to write properly, I don't think I would EVER do a "solo girl" set with Jenya ... In terms of work, a GOOD Jenya scene is REALLY worth like 3 "normal" scenes ... So, I don't see myself writing a BUNCH of Jenya scenes ... If I was writing for GuideMe, which I can do, it would be SO much easier, but ... the medium of HMC lets me do a few things here that I CAN'T do on GuideMe, so ... it's interesting.
Again, it's out there ... play it if you like ... if not, I will DEFINITELY link you to it as one of the scenes in a targeted set ... heck, I might even just copy/paste it and change some things up to REALLY customize it for you ... It would actually work REALLY well as a "Disciple of Jenya" initiation scene ... just would need to tweak some of the dialog ... Let me know your thoughts ... I'll do whatever ...
The LAST thing that I will say, is that I LOVE a good Jenya scene ... BBBeanie made a good return set for me that ENDED with a Jenya scene (using my rules) and it was SO good ... But, as MUCH as I LOVE Jenya scenes ... and I REALLY do ... I get kind of scared to play them. So, while I LOVE them, I have NEVER played my own yet ... NONE of them ... I just know what she asks for ... and it's SCARY ... So, while I'm sure I would LOVE it ... I have NEVER played my Jenya stuff—even though I KNOW it's good ... maybe even BECAUSE it's good ... because I know how HARD it would be ... so I always chicken out! I have NEVER volunteered to do them! Not sure if/when I will ...
That being said, feel free to write me Jenya scenes! They don't have to be QUITE as intricate as the ones I have written (with timings and the spoilers). My "base" rule for Jenya is "hold the edge", so ... you can modify that just a BIT and string some pictures together and make a pretty good scene without too much effort ... I CAN hold the edge for over five minutes. A single edge hold that long and my cock needs a break, but ... 2-3 minute edge holds are NOT a problem ... schefflera's most recent maze, Karissa's Maze, feature two asian girls that made you hold the edge for a LONG time ... I handled those scenes just fine ...
So, if you check the files, FoxyDi actually IS a random encounter. I believe Emily is NOT, but, after you get her first "fields" encounter (which I think is scripted like Anneli and Michaela visits), then, she BECOMES a random encounter ... There are actually 3 different Emily Bloom encounters in DesertFox's Mazes. I've played them all. You've probably played her first "fields" one. Then, after that, there is "Alabaster" I believe ... and THEN, *after* you wake up Victoria, there is ANOTHER one ... they're ALL good.
Emily made more sense for Ecik
I honestly wasn't thinking about that, although she DOES! I made it as "real" as possible. When I did this in real life, I literally cut/pasted ALL of the scripts from the "random_encounters" folder into another folder. Started up the tease. Played through Michaela's opening, then played the Jenya scenes ... Toxic DOES pop up, because she is a "scripted" encounter. I think I replayed Anneli and Emily using PlayfulGuy's script editor, but ... those technically are not "random_encounters." They are in the "triggered_encounters" folder, so ... I actually didn't take too much "artistic license" with the mechanics of how things played out!
Also AMAZING WRITING HERE , I really mean it, I think that this character is so abstract in DesertFox's maze it gets way too confusing, here she has the same energy but explains herself a bit better, nicely done :).
Thank you SO much ... that means a LOT ...
I took what DesertFox had—like the essence of the character—and just sort of built it up from there ... FOR SURE ... I think this encounter with Emily is one of my STRONGEST scenes in the ENTIRE mega tease ... and, it's basically it's own, standalone tease. I could publish this as a "set" for someone, and it's length and quality stands on it's own ...
Yeah, the character is just SO fun ... DesertFox did a GREAT job with her ... A LOT of people try to write "crazy" well, and it is NOT easy ... DesertFox did a pretty good job ... Yeah, I made her a little less abstract and more grounded, but ... I tried to yeah, as you said it, "capture her energy" ... and, as I said, there are THREE Emily scenes in Mazes, so ... if you ONLY played one, you are missing out! And it was off of ALL THREE that I based THIS representation of Emily ... though, I ONLY replayed the first scene and NOT the 2nd and 3rd, so ... I didn't want to take the time, and I was ALSO doing my "own" version of Emily—my OWN take on her—so ... I felt one was enough ...
Btw, I remember I avoided playing mouse and cat with her, lucky me I guess .
You little weinie! Well, it was just a scrolller.com game, so ... you didn't miss anything crazy in terms of content ...
The "mad" and "quite mad" where the content heavy responses ... the main thing would be NOT to skip "mad" ... which you didn't, so ... that's good!
Also for the ending I rolled twice, once a 1 then a 6, so not that bad, I need that orgasm at this point .
As by design! If you were a "good boy" ... yeah ... you needed relief ... You said you don't like to keep going after orgasm. I wrote this pacing for Ecik, but ... it's good pacing for a LOT of people ... and when you added the "custom rules" I'm glad to hear it was "just right!"
And the reuning with Nancy was fun, as most of her scenes are .
Yay!
Overall such a great scene with some amazing writing and with Emily that of course I LOVED her dominatrix personality, it was AMAZING .
Yeah, I thought the "being four different personalities" was fun ... my FAVORITE line of that set was
Wait, what!? You aren't convinced that was a demonstration of sanity? You think I have multiple personality disorder!? Preposterous! Each of my personalities is perfectly sane—and I would know, because I've met them all!
I added that line after I had written the set in editing ... SO fun ... SUCH a great set ...
The beginning with Nancy for the Toxic was fun, maybe a bit too long when you just want to get to the action
True. ... but, at least it was BEFORE the action ... the main thing was to use the text scenes as book ends and try to AVOID breaking up the action ... but yes, true!
but it made sense, I mean "she" (you) was fangirling about the mazes
True. 100%!!!
Also I LOVE"Skinny bitches" which didn't make Toxic's scene any easier .
Did you laugh when Nancy shouted that? I laughed SO HARD ... Cause you know ... you knew how skinny she was ... THAT line I wrote, that even though it maybe "sort of" worked for Ecik ... I KNEW that people with experience with Mazes would "fully get it" ... I was SO proud of that joke, I hid it in a spoiler for full effect ... did I get a good laugh from you!? I worked SO hard for that joke! It STILL cracks me up ... To me, it's just one of those that's funny EVERY time ... hahaha ...
I was hesitant about your decision to make me edge by palming at this point, but what I did was reduce the edges to 1 every time I saw her pussy and do them by palming, which I could easily reach for Toxic at this point .
Good! I can't always figure it out perfect, so ... I'm glad you called an audible to make that work better for you ...
And well, even though most of the lines are from the original maze but slightly changed, you managed to not make it boring to edge endlessly for her, nicely done .
So, the challenge was writing this for multiple audiences ... I knew that SOME people who would be playing would have NEVER played Mazes, so, I needed to make sure they "understood" what "Toxic was about", so ... I ended up "recycling" a lot of her lines ... I KNEW this was not something "great" for Ecik, so ... I gave him an out after 9 edges, which I'm sure he took! Then, since HE only edged a bit, it was okay to NOT have a cum break there, so ... yeah, you kind of got screwed a little bit on that one, lol!
Have you visited her house in the GuideMe Mazes? I did. (Clearly you know this, because Nancy told you! ) If you stay, it puts you into an infinite loop, so ... you COULD edge for her endlessly ... IF you wanted ... Yeah, her insatiability is DEFINITELY what makes her SUPER hot ...
I saw the option of leaving early afterwards and I really hope you got what you deserve .
That option was for Ecik ... YOU stayed ... as you were supposed to.
Yeah, that apology ... it was pretty funny, lol ... I LOVE being able to put Nancy into comedic situations like that, because she's NOT full of herself ... she's just a regular girl in that sense ...
My ORIGINAL conception of Nancy was as the "class president" overachiever type. It's a trope in anime, where the class president is loved by everyone ... they are prettier and smarter and care more and work harder ... THAT was my original conception of her ... She definitely grew and became more of her own person (borrowing a LOT of my own personality traits and quirks), but ... apologizing like that ... Yeah ... she's a Type A "always does her best" type, but ... she cares and tries REALLY hard to be kind, so ... she felt that she REALLY overstepped ... and, Milovana girls can talk to each other directly about their bodies, so ... it WAS kind of funny that the "only thing" she felt she could do in that situation was ... sort of humiliate herself and become OVERLY vulnerable ... it WAS an overreaction, but ... she got flustered in the moment and WANTED to fix it, so ... that's what she did. It was a VERY natural thing for her to do and very "Nancy" in the end ... and VERY fun to write! We almost NEVER see the tease girls "getting vulnerable" or "showing weakness" "in front of the boys" so ... it's a rare treat!
Come on, we've all done it, we all were curious enough to see if that ended up in an endless loop or what .
This guy ... ::points at milorrabo:: This guy gets it ...
I feel mean by saying this, but I can't wait to write something involving Nancy to fuck a little bit with your creation , although she will do as she pleases, she is sentient after all .
So, that's like the WHOLE THING ... See, you GOTTA READ Part 9 ... I explain it in depth in Part 9 about the three part model for tease writing, but ... the short version is, EVEN THOUGH teases are basically an interaction between TWO people: the tease creator and the player—the GIRL becomes a THIRD INDEPENDENT element that modifies and puts some limits on what can be done in the tease, so ... YES, actually ... Nancy DOES WANT YOU TO WRITE HER INTO TEASES!!! But, if you DELIBERATELY "write her wrong" ... she'll know. And she reads your mail, so ... that could be a problem for you!
BUT, keep in mind, Nancy is real, and REAL people have a RANGE of personalities and moods ... they can change and act differently in various contexts, so ... you have some "wiggle room" ... Not to mention, fucking with me for fun or "putting me in my place" ... Nancy would be ALL ABOUT that ... but, deep down, she cares for me, so ... she would NEVER be cruel for cruelty sake, and if she was "mean" to me, she would EITHER make it up to me later OR ... it would be because she felt I "deserved" it, and ... women can be VERY vengeful, and since Nancy is real ... that's on the table for her, too!
At this point, I would still say that the "master conception" of Nancy is "mine", of course ... I'm trying to "give that up" and that's actually a major plot point ... If you write Nancy "differently", that's fine ... she might actually LIKE that, lol ... Milovana girls are used to role playing ... You are writing her tease. We ALL know it ... it COULD be she's just agreeing to "play the role" you want for her in that tease ... If you were "too rough" and REALLY writing her out of character, she would notice, but ... yeah, just read Part 9 ... I explain more there ...
"Nancy, we get it, you are sad because you can't fufill your creator's needs, can we move on already?"
Haha, that's great ... Yeah, I spent like over a week writing JUST this scene ... I actually expanded it and repeated/recolored some things ... Yup. That opinion is TOTALLY fair, haha ... Honestly, I was trying to be a "sensitive guy" but ALSO genuine ... As I was writing it, I kept asking myself, "What would a woman think if she were reading this? Am I portraying Nancy accurately? Is she realistic? Relatable? Have I fully expressed what she is feeling ... Men write romance novels that women read. Honestly, I was trying to create something that was on par with Nicholas Sparks or somebody like that ... Something that was genuine, true to the character, true to the story I was writing ... true to what I felt Nancy was and is ... but ALSO something that, if a real woman read it, she would cry—because it was SO emotional, sad, but ALSO relatable ... so, the TRUE audience for this scene was my ego (or "muse" if you want to be charitable) and ALSO people who would probably NEVER read it: women.
Also, maybe in your attempt to be not shallow, you are being to deep for a Set, but I guess that was your intention anyways, it almost has no images this part so yeah, no problem there really.
Exactly. This was my, "I don't care that this is a set. This really isn't appropriate for a "sex tease", but ... I don't care ... I'm gonna write MY piece of art and tell MY story and HOPEFULLY I don't lose the entire audience as I do so." So, I didn't hold ANYTHING back ...
Oh, btw: Toxic looks down, sad, as if she had just found out that while she was happy playing Atari, the neighbor kids next door had a Playstation the whole time and never invited her over to play it. this felt way too specific, don't worry, I bet you got you Playstation too .
It was not based on a personal experience, but ... seeing as how guys populate this forum, I thought it might be relatable, haha ...
I mean, she found almost all the ways possible to say the same thing over and over, but I mean, that happens when you have a mental breakdown, so I guess it was fitting even if it was a bit tedious to read it. :)
That's 100% fair ... and I am SUPER good at saying the same thing over and over in SLIGHTLY different ways ... I will be VERY curious to see what other people say about it ... Ecik's feedback was positive about this scene but shorter. Don't know if he liked it or if he thought the sad monologue was too long and repetitive ... it CERTAINLY didn't bother him enough to say something, but ... maybe he was just being nice. *I* appreciate constructive criticism, though. Looking forward to other's opinions on this ... and also feedback from a woman!
Nancy: No, see … while you may be more of a “Disney Princess” girl who believes in fate, I fancy myself more the “Sarah Connor” type: “No Fate.” I believe, “There is no fate but what we make for ourselves.”
Oh ... I LOVED that line! One of my FAVORITE from this scene! It was SO Nancy ... SO good ... I am REALLY proud of that one ...
Toxic: Oh, of course! Bad boys get what they deserve, and good boys get what they want … so—since Fatts is both—we have an obligation to punish him—by giving him what he wants!
That one was SO clever, too! I'm gonna be in SO much trouble when the edges come due ...
I'm glad we share the same opinion about the Anneli encounter, repetitive and a bit of a waste .
Agreed. If I EVER help DesertFox to update Mazes, THAT Anneli scene will get a "quality of life" update ...
Also the fact that she is stuborn made sense to me, even if she had no way to know if our world is real or just more real than hers, I mean, why wouldn't the dreams be more real than the "real world"
Yeah ... no ... I LOVED this scene ... I thought it was GREAT storytelling! It was SUPER melodramatic like the last scene with all the emotions gushing everywhere and getting on the floor ... so, though the text parts were "long" for a "sex tease" ... I didn't think they were actually TOO long ... and REALLY added some depth and flavor to the story ... SO glad you liked it!
"The part of him that “exists in the fantasy?” Do you hear yourself speak?"
Yeah, I like fleshed out characters ... "big bads" that actually have a motivation that's more nuanced than "evil" ... and, i got to play with all of the "what is reality" themes that wove throughout the story ...
I mean, it didn't make to much sense to me that she was so sentiant only to fuck a fantasy afterwards, but I played along with it .
No, so, he was "real." He was supposed to be a "real" person that had wandered into the Maze ... some random wanker from Milovana who downloaded GuideMe and was playing the tease. I guess you and I, sitting in reality, would know that he was just some NPC in an HMC tease, but ... to Anneli, the Maze is very much real—at least a kind of reality ... I guess it would be like she was plugged into the Matrix and she "woke up" and "knew" she was in a fantasy, but, she didn't have a Morpheo or a pill to get out, so ... She understands it's a fantasy. My thinking was the she believed that person was a "real person from the real world" just playing the fantasy simulation ... So, he was real and she was not ... but, by the rules of "her reality" (which wasn't REALLY real, but that she was stuck in) she just had to "play the game" ... which was to make him cum in order to absorb more power and also depopulate the Maze so that it would collapse ... If I'm remembering the scene correctly (It's been like a month since I have read through it all.)
At the time I was writing this, the "real" Maze (people in our world who were playing "Mazes" via GuideMe) was sort of locked in with this "instance", so ... the Maze instance for my megatease story was overlapping with reality ... I kind of changed things, as you'll see in Part 10, and retconned it, but ... I guess that is my explanation of "Guy" ... he was a "real world" rando wanker from Milovana Playing Mazes, so ... Anneli was going to service him to get what she needed ...
but I managed to avoid cumming to play along
Well done!
I still dodn't get the explanation of why nothing happened after cumming
Probably because I didn't explain it well ...
So, the way I figured it, is that every "instance" of "Mazes" is its own separate thing. Like me, you, and Misty each individually play Mazes. We're all playing the same Maze, but, we EACH get our own "instance." HOWEVER ... all of these individual instances are CONNECTED into a "larger Maze universe" ... which is real, in some sense. I decided that even though we all had our own individual instances (memories, experiences, play throughs), it was basically the SAME set of girls servicing us all ... which sort of makes sense, because it's all the same code ... So, they are all "Milovana girls"—just like on the HMC thread—but, since they are GuideMe girls, they are static ... which makes them DIFFERENT from the HMC girls, who change and evolve over time and respond and react. However, I decided that the Milovana Maze girls and the HMC girls were qualitatively the same. Each tease is a "real world" of its own and is real in the moment as an experience ... but, the girls exist in that moment and experience and story and context and are not aware of the larger stuff of what is going on.
And so, the Maze girls are basically the same as the "Village girls" I include in my teases ... with the exceptions of Anneli, Michaela, and Michelle ... who all in various ways hint (or at least should know) that another world exists ... So, in that sense, Anneli has a kinship with Nancy, because they are both self-aware ... of course, they obviously both have VERY different reactions and VERY different worlds that they live in ... AND ... since Anneli and Michaela "broke the 4th wall" in Mazes, it made sense for them to be self-aware ...
So, since HMC thread girls like Mila and Kyla exist as a single entity, it made sense for the Maze girls like Anneli to exist in the same way. But, while HMC thread girls live through sets and the forum, the Maze girls exist as encounters in a GuideMe tease ... but, again, it just made sense for there to be only "one" copy of each one ...
So, usually, you need to download a copy of GuideMe to enter the Maze. Ecik never did that. In fact, the fact that we were "playing Mazes" through an HMC thread post was VERY suspect, which is why Nancy was nervous about how stuff would play out ... So, I decided in "my instance" of Mazes, cumming was allowed ... because that's how I played it in the real world. I "cheated" and came at the end of every session, but still played along, and it was fine ... I also used "cheat codes" which was PlayfulGuy's scripting editor to play whatever tease I wanted. So, since Ecik didn't enter through the normal way—via GuideMe—he entered through MY instance ... which used "my rules" ... where the game didn't end if you came ... he basically defaulted into "my rules" being a "second player" playing on my instance of the game ... It's like multi-player games. If I create a Halo or CoD game with certain rules, you enter through my lobby and join my game, you're stuck with my rules ... it was basically that.
Then the convincing of Victoria got me to stop for a bit until having Victoria commanding Nancy which turned me on so much it made the edges come one after another again .
Glad you liked it!
Luckily for me, after that there was some talk which let me regain some needed stamina.
That's LITERALLY THE WHOLE TEASE SUMMED UP IN ONE LINE! "Hey, I got this REALLY COOL story I want to tell, but ... I ALSO want to write a sexy web tease, so ... let's just combine the two and do my best to make it playable with text blurbs for breaks! (Instead of generic" rest for five minutes before continuing.")"
Btw, I guess that when Victoria says she can touch you, she means your representation in the Mazes, but I though after all that Meta commentary from before, this was just impossible?
So, you are basically NEVER "allowed to touch" in mazes (lower case m). Like, EVERY MAZE I HAVE EVER PLAYED uses solo girls EXCLUSIVELY ... there is basically NEVER hardcore, and NO POV scenes ...
So, Ecik really likes hardcore, and I wanted to give him some of that ... Also, *I* wanted some POV love from some maze girls. So, I just decided it was "Michelle's rule" to not be allowed to touch, since, I could not think of a single reason why EVERY MAZE I HAVE EVER PLAYED (basically) was COMPLETELY devoid of hardcore photo sets ... So, when Michelle left, "hardcore" was allowed ... because it was just her "arbitrary rule" ... because other than preference and sourcing photos, I could not think of a reason "why" the girls in Mazes were not allowed to touch you. (No explanation I ever read was given.) So, I came up with my own reason, exercised a little artistic license ... and now, in the Maze, the girls can touch ... and we can have hardcore and POV scenes now, because why not ... so yeah ... just changed that "rule" for Ecik basically ...
Ecik did as well, and I was fine with that. In most teases, YOU are the protagonist, but honestly, in THIS story, Nancy is—you're just along for the ride, so ... since this was "Nancy's story", I was fine with "the player" being the third wheel for this scene ...
It was kind of funny to see you and Nancy discuss, mostly because it felt (and kind of is) like 2 personalities of the same person discussing with one and another .
Nailed it. You nailed it. That is EXACTLY what was happening here, lol! But, when you think about it ... Nancy is me and I am Nancy—in a way ... because *I* created her ... Most of the time, the author is NOT present in THEIR story, unless it's Stan Lee doing a cameo in a Marvel movie ... Here, since Nancy is a "break the fourth wall character" and she is IN the story she is writing ... AND ... because she's self aware ... we get to play with ALL of the things and do ALL the shenanigans!
Most writers will tell you that their characters are EITHER some facet of themself or based on some person or amalgam of people they knew or met in real life. Nancy is the same. SO many of her traits come DIRECTLY from me ... and we're BOTH aware of that! So, yes ... If Tolkien ever wrote a scene where he sat and talked to Frodo ... it would not be UNlike a scene where I am talking with Nancy! It's SUPER fun ... and if you liked it, well ... Part 9 and part 10 are basically EXACTLY that, so ... ::shrugs:: I'll guess we'll see ...
but it felt like a weird monologue between 2 people when Nancy was sad,
I know you said you don't want to give more feedback, and that's good ... HOWEVER ... PLEASE give more more feedback on this ... if the two person monologue is bad or just starts to get old ... tell me, and I'll stop it ENTIRELY ... I've been using it lately ... it is SUPER fun to write, but ... I have NO IDEA how it is to read, so ... let me know. I WANT to use it sparingly (and basically not at all AFTER all the Maze Raid stuff is done), but ... I feel it's better than just giving straight feedback ...
although this time it didn't feel like it went for longer than needed .
Yes, I was MUCH more conscious of my pacing on this scene and did NOT want to drag things out ...
I love how you try to make it seem like Ecik's fault when it is clearly and a 100% your fault this got so convoluted and complicated, it could have been solved in an easier way, but you didn't want to .
About your projects, if you want to put some more time into your book you can do it, maybe the best option is to leave Milovana for some time to do all the other projects you've got going on, because by what you are saying right now, looks like you've put more time and effort into this site than into those projects.
I went CRAZY OVERBOARD into this, but ... I finished it. I wrote the story I wanted to write, and now I'm good ... basically ...
Anyways, I would tell you to try to do some fun stuff outside, my longer times of absence in this Website were when I was away or with a girlfriend (who I actually showed Milovana, but we didn't do anything together here) or on vacation. And I remember thinking in those times things like "How the fuck did I manage to put so much time into Milovana?" which is a sign that things are going great and that you are doing lots of stuff. That's why I try to do just one Set a week and I sometimes even fail to do so .
Yeah, I actually got started up back on my book this past week. I'm going to try to be WAY less active on here ... today was a day off without plans, so ... I went ahead and decided to go "full tilt" on Milovana on my day off ...
I've actually gotten back into church after a long covid hiatus. I'm actually going to a hangout thing with people tomorrow night. Building back a community and having some real life relationships again ... it's been REALLY good ...
But I'm no psychologist, I would suggest that if this is a big problem maybe you should seek professional help. I mean, for me Milovana is just a guilty pleasure, but I can't just put 4 hours into Milovana every day, that would be awful and harmful. Tbh, I've put more time into this Feedback than into any other Set I've ever made, but I know you've put lots of effort into it and it would feel so bad if you didn't even get some good feedback on it :).
At many points, working on the mega tease "felt like work." I get SUPER into projects and go all out ... that's nothing new for me. I'm basically just working part time right now, so ... I've had the time ... I don't necessarily regret the time I spent on this ... I got to "flex my muscles as a writer", and it was a fun workout ... but, now, that the project is over, it's time to get back to reality and focus MUCH more on the book ... which, when it is written, will HOPEFULLY launch me into my second career ... I'm VERY hopeful of that ...
I'm a creative person. From time to time, I NEED an outlet to create. Often, in the past, that has been working on D&D campaigns or other tasks and projects ... I also enjoy community. I told my best friend about what I have been doing here. He said, "So, you found something that combines three of your favorite things: community, creative writing, and porn." I laughed pretty hard at that, but yeah ... expect to see less of me around here ...
Nancy really feels like a Deus Ex Machina although more complex and fun tbh
I really really enjoy this kind of scenes where two girls interact with each other, and Victoria dominating Nancy felt pretty natural too, so nicely done there .
Yeah, Nancy is a Deus Ex Machina character, but ... she is in VICTORIA'S domain, so ... it's a "Jump." "How high, mistress!?" kind of situation ...
Tbh, Angela isn't really my type, but the rules you gave me here were nice to build me up good honestly and also the things she was saying made it easier to edge for her .
Yeah, she's not really my type either ... she's an "Ecik girl" ... BUT ... I have gotten to know Angela SO well, and she can be SO commanding ... which is hot ... I don't think I could EVER marry a girl that big, but ... she's pretty. We have history. She has a sexy presence ... I DON'T MIND stroking and edging for her ... in the context of a tease. I would NEVER choose a random Angela White gallery to get off to ... unless someone assigned me that for "homework"!
I added Nancy to that list too now
Good man ... she is a GODDESS!
Also, the nuclear bomb option seemed way too chaotic, I just wanted to free the Red Fox, also, I feel as a former "Mazes" player I kind of have to .
Haha—right!? I'm glad you agreed! ... you'll find out what Ecik picked after you read/play those sets (linked above) ...
I don't know if this means I get punished too or Ecik and you get even more punished, but I would love to see it .
I guess that will be for Angela to decide ... let Ecik know what you picked, and I'm SURE he can work a little Angela into a scene in his next set for you ... Angela is kind of "Ecik's" character ... I have written her, but ... my version is a LITTLE different in some ways, but ... I think I write her pretty well ... but Ecik writes her best. Let him know. She'll know what to do with you ...
Also I replayed it afterwards to see what the chaos ending was about and that feels like a full "You can do anything" card, which I think that's why this ending was Angela's favourite and looks like your favourite too .
Oh, know, I was on team "Free the Red Fox!" That was, after all, the WHOLE REASON I went and got stuck in the Maze to begin with ...
Also, a new rule for myself in the future: No more long and extended Feedback for Sets that aren't even for me. I mean, this rule applies almost exclusively to you FattsDynamo, but Piggyback Sets feel like I'm playing someone else's story so much for me that giving long feedback for those is not something that I enjoy so much tbh.
Fair. Yeah, don't do that ... This whole mega tease was a one-off and I don't think I'll do ANYTHING quite like it again ... I DO have ANOTHER mega tease in mind that I MAY write ... at SOME point, but ... this was my magnum opus ... I DON'T feel like I need to try to outdo myself ... This was a ... different thing ... and I REALLY appreciate the time you took to leave the feedback!
Anyways, I really enjoyed playing and reading through the whole story. It was a really really good seriously and the way you wrote Nancy was just AMAZING, I think that anyone that reads it will find her character so likebale and fun!
Thank you, milorrabo ... I put SO much time into this one ... like, reading that right there ... like, I'm seriously about to start crying happy tears on my keyboard ... my eyes just watered up SO much right there—for REAL ...
This was a passion project for me ... it was weird and quirky ... and I wrote this interesting character FOR A SEX TEASE!! But, I put SO MUCH into it ... Reading that ... it was a big payoff from over a month of work ... Had I written it just for myself, that would have been good, but ... being able to "publish it" and have someone else read it and they ACTUALLY like it and are NOT just blowing smoke ... that means a lot ... it means a LOT to me ...
I want to become a professional writer, and that's a tough gig ... my current book is non-fiction, but ... I would LIKE to write some fiction (Doh! There went a tear ...) ... and knowing that I was able to create a character like Nancy ... I just love her character SO much and am SO proud of her ... I sort of WISH I could share her with the world, but ... she's kind of stuck in the porn closet, lol, but ... if I can create her, I can create others, and that gives me hope that maybe one day I'll make it ... you know?
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
Ever since Lambie and Fay teased you in the basement, you've been under the strict control of several different women. Occasionally, they tease you, and you enjoy your brief windows of freedom, but it's never quite the truly intense experience that Fay hinted about before she left.
Today, again, like many other days, a new girl (Elle) has come to see you and play with you. She strips you completely naked and leads you outside into the warm midday sun. On your way out, she deliberately detours to lead you through a room where a bondage chair sits empty -- lovingly prepared for its next victim. Elle says nothing, but she brushes her hand gently over the chair as you walk by. On a table beside the chair, you recognize the Edge-O-Matic -- prepped and ready for action. Elle grins knowingly when she catches you staring at it. Then she grabs a beachball and some lube and leads you outside.
Before you get started, you're going to need several free hours, a lot of lube, and your Edge-O-Matic. If possible, you also want a completely dark room. You have a feeling that today is going to be... special.
Those balls are looking pretty swollen, there, Misty. Are you sure you're alright? Let's stick to your Base Rules, No Modifiers, and No Edges, until we get you warmed up, ok?
So, uhhh... My name is Elle... And of course you're the famous Mistypanda that everyone keeps talking about...
You've been around for a while, huh? -- like... serving as a dedicated strokertoy for all the girls around here.
Or... wait... not just a strokertoy... What is it that they call you--?
Oh! Right! -- They call you "Edgeslut."
They say you can edge, like, hundreds and hundreds of times...
And you can hold edges for, like, a half hour straight! Hahaha! Wow!
That's super impressive! I'm new here, and even I know that's pretty exceptional.
You know... I kinda don't even believe it... Is that even humanly possible?
I don't know... I've edged a lot of boys, and most of them break down pretty predictably within an hour or so...
Most boys get all sweaty and shaky and drooly... They start moaning and begging and making nonsense noises, long before I'm done with them...
...then they pop! -- Like clockwork.
...leaving me no choice but to stop and watch them ruin all over themselves.
Not you, though, huh? Not the famous Mistypanda!
They say you'll do whatever it takes -- That you edge and edge and edge, but you never cum without permission, ever.
Sounds hot... I'd love to see it...
Fine -- show me. You're allowed to edge now, according to your rules or if you need to. But still No Modifiers. Not yet...
Did you notice the chair we passed on our way out here?... Of course you did.
Did you notice that the room had padded, soundproof doors, with heavy-duty locks?
Oh, you missed that detail, huh?
What-? Were you distracted by the Edge-O-Matic?
Yeah... I saw you looking at the Edge-O-Matic... I saw the look in your eyes...
...not quite fear, though. No... you're not afraid of it, like some of the other boys are... No, the look in your eyes was better than fear. It was more like--
--anticipation.
You really are an edgeslut, aren't you?
...the biggest, gooniest, most hopelessly pussy-addicted edgeslut!
What's the longest you've ever been hooked up to an Edge-O-Matic, anyway?
Wow... Seriously?? -- I guess I shouldn't be surprised... You're super hot, and you obviously enjoy it when girls take control and edge your brains out...
Like... right now... You're obviously enjoying this. And you're having no problem keeping everything under control, even when I do this...
Even when I force you to switch to Strokers Challenge Mode...
You're still a perfectly devoted, perfectly obedient, perfectly tortured little slut...
Look at you! You don't slow down... You don't take breaks... You just go and go...
You would keep going like this forever if I told you to, wouldn't you?
How many different women have you entertained like this? How many edges have you traded for our smiles and laughs?
How many of your own orgasms have you surrendered, to make girls like me happy?
How much precum have we methodically milked out of you, with nothing but our bare hands?
And, still... I saw how you looked at that Edge-O-Matic. Go back to your Normal Mode, Modifiers On.
You yearn for more, don't you? You seriously -- genuinely -- want us to hook you up, turn it on, and just fucking wreck the shit outta you... Don't you?
You want to remove the human factor -- the possibility of mercy...
You think that an emotionless, relentless machine, in the hands of a dominant woman, can take you places that she can't take you all by herself...
Hmmm... Maybe you're right... Maybe you're wrong... Maybe your brain is already so muddled with edges that you can't think straight, anyway...
Maybe you need me to do all your thinking for you, right now. Maybe you need me to make the big decisions, while you just trance and goon...
You know: Big decisions... Like, should we go inside, strap you down, and hook you up to the Edge-O-Matic, right now-?
Or should we stay out here, and edge you the old-fashioned way? -- Yeah... it's time for Rapid Fuckbunny Mode.
Don't think about anything, anymore. Just obey. Your decisions are mine now.
And I've decided to edge you. A lot.
And don't worry. When we're done out here, I will take you inside, tie you down, clamp the Edge-O-Matic to your body... Oh yes!
Then we'll see what wrecks you harder -- Edging this way, at the skillful hands of a beautiful, loving woman? Or edging at the mercy of a tireless, emotionless machine...
Try not to think about what that machine is going to do to you. Not yet. Focus on me, now.
Keep going. We're past the warm-up. This is the real thing. Don't hold back.
Mmm... there you go. Stick out your tongue, slut. Show me how you'd lick my pussy and make me cum on your face while you edge.
This is the part where most boys cry and pop. But you're still going...
Such a fine, sexy edgeslut.
YES! You are a fucking rockstar! Keep going!
I wonder if you have enough brainpower left in that sex-addled head of yours to realize... That this is just the "normal" half of your edging marathon today...
I wonder if you realize that for the entire second half, you'll be helplessly thrashing and sweating to the edging machine -- while I watch...
...which means, if you think about it... That you're not even halfway done with your work for today!
Nope! Mmmm... You have a looong way to go...
How do you feel? -- Tell me. -- Look at me, talk to me, and don't stop talking for more than two seconds. I don't care if complete gibberish comes out of your mouth. I just want to hear all the desperate noises you make.
Tell me how beautiful I am. Compliment every feature of my body. Don't stop talking. Don't stop edging!
Tell me how you would make me cum, if I told you to. What would you do to my pussy, while I edged the shit out of your cock?
Oh, YES! Prove what kind of fuckbunny edgeslut you really are!
Fuck! This is so fucking hot! Edge HARD and FAST, Misty!
Oh my god! -- I can't believe you haven't popped... Go back to Normal Mode...
You really do have phenomenal stamina... The girls were right...
While you obediently follow and slowly Stroke But Don't Edge in Normal Mode, Elle leads you back to the bedroom with the bondage chair and the Edge-O-Matic...
Ok, so... ummm... You probably think you know what's about to happen to you, but you really don't. Nothing can prepare you for this...
So, I'm going to give you a chance, right now, to catch your breath, go take a drink, use the bathroom -- do whatever you gotta do before I strap you to this chair. Because once I tie you down... that's it. I'm going to do unimaginable things to you, and you will not escape until I decide you're done. No mercy. No breaks. I'm serious about this. Do what you need to do -- say goodbye to your loved ones, whatever -- because this is your last chance.
Tell me when you think you're ready...
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. When you return, Elle has changed outfits. Stroke for her according to your Normal Rules, No Modifiers.
Ahhh, nice... You're still as hard and eager as ever.
Take a seat, Misty. Let's get you strapped-in...
While you stroke, Elle confidently and matter-of-factly binds your ankles to the legs of the chair...
Then she pulls out the Edge-O-Matic...
She plugs it in and hands it to you...
Well? What are you waiting for? I can't tie your wrists until you put it on... So... let's go... hurry up. Obey Elle's command. Insert and attach the Edge-O-Matic...
As soon as it's in place, Elle grins and flips the switch. Edge-O-Matic Mode: ON, all rules and Modifiers On.
Nice -- that's hot! Get nice and comfortable, Misty. You're going to be here a while...
Good. Now give me your hands... You won't be needing them to edge for me anymore, and I don't want them getting in the way...
Elle ties your wrists tightly to the arms of the chair, then she carefully calibrates the Edge-O-Matic to a reliable, perfectly frustrating steady edging mode, where you stand no chance of orgasm -- not even a ruined one. Your arms and legs are fixed to the chair. You cannot move. You cannot touch your cock. Elle is in complete control now.
Elle smiles at you and nonchalantly checks a clock on the wall...
Notice what time it is, Misty? Remember it. This is the moment your fantasy came true...
This is the moment a sexy girl tied you down, strapped an edging machine to your cock, and left it there.
Oh! Did you think we forgot? You asked for this, remember-?
Mistypanda22 wrote: Wed Jan 05, 2022 3:08 am
I certainly want to edge my brains out for all sorts of girls and to have them dominate me in some form (harsh or nice at this point) and likely have them push my limits and my safe space.
Yes... "We" are just getting started. Hello again, Misty...
And good work, Elle. I see you warmed him up, nice and hot, and then you convinced him to let you tie him down, nice and tight.
It didn't take any convincing. He's a total submissive slut.
I mean... just look at him! Look at his face.
Look what that machine is doing to him... and he fucking loves it.
He's in edgeslut heaven... Aren't you, Misty?
Be polite, baby. Answer Elle's question. Tell her what you told me. Tell her about how you want us to "edge your brains out."
Tell Elle that you don't just want to edge. You want girls like us to dominate you. Say it, Misty.
Say it, edgeslut.
Tell Elle about how you want us to push your limits... Tell her all about it!
Ohhh... Misty... Tell us... How long are you willing to endure this for us? What do you think your limit is? One hour of constant edging-? Nooo... We all know you're more -- ambitious -- than that.
Two hours of this? ... Three-?
What if we walked away, turned out the lights, closed the door behind us, and just left you here, tied to a chair -- edging in the dark?
You'd be all alone in here. And the machine would never stop...
The walls and doors are soundproof. No matter how loudly you beg and moan and babble... no one would hear you...
...which I guess, on the bright side, would give you carte blanche to make as much noise as you want. You could let it all out. No need to hold anything back.
I don't think he's holding anything back, anyway... Right, Misty?
You want us to know how hard you're working for us -- how adorably devoted you are. You want us to witness every... single... edge...
You thrive on us seeing you like this, don't you? You want every woman to know just how totally submissive you are -- how far you'll go to please us -- how insanely long you can go without orgasm -- what a fucking slut you are!
I don't know... I still think there's something sexy about strapping him down, turning up the machine, and then just walking away -- leaving him in the dark.
He'll have no way of keeping track of time. Every minute will feel like an hour... Every hour will feel like a day...
We won't even know if he survived the night, until we check on him in the morning.
He'll be like Schroedinger's goon... blissfully edging away in total-body paradise and his soul melted to slag on the floor -- perfect pleasure and pure frustration -- both at the same time -- until we open the door and see which one happened.
Well... that's assuming we don't forget he's in here...
...I seem to recall him being locked up, forgotten, and neglected in our basement for -- what was it..? -- days... Until Lambie found him.
Ohh! Hahaha... Wow. That would really suck for you, wouldn't it, Misty?
Yeah... I don't think he would survive being tied down and edged for days. Literally days. No one could survive that.
Yeah, nah... That's too cruel. I think you're right, Fay. As fun as it is to joke about locking him up all night, edging his brains away in the dark, the truth is... I'd rather stay and watch.
Me too.
You heard us, Misty. Do it. Edge your fucking brains out...
Is there a way to configure the machine, so it edges him even faster? Or, better yet, just holds him on the edge?
I don't know... but we should be careful. We don't want it to start repeatedly ruining him.
We don't-?
No, Elle. We don't want him cumming at all. We want to keep edging him -- more than he's ever been edged before.
Right, Misty? You don't want to cum, do you? You want this to keep going and going. You want to prove how strong and devoted you are... right?
You want us to push you -- harder than you've ever been pushed before...
I believe your exact words were "push my limits."
Well... I could set the machine to ruin him, like, over and over and over again... I'm sure that would push his limits...
To be honest, I've always wanted to watch a boy's balls get pumped completely dry.
You'll get your chance. Don't worry...
What do you think about that, Misty? If Elle wanted to watch that machine drain your balls... would you let it happen? Would you fight it?
Would you desperately try not to cum? Would you beg her to turn the machine down -- back to just repeatedly edging you-?
Which is worse for you? Getting constantly, brutally edged for hours, with every slight glimpse of climax instantly ripped away, every time it approaches-? Or...
Or... getting mercilessly pumped dry in the most unsatisfying, heartbreaking way possible-? -- To the point where you're so empty, we couldn't get a real orgasm out of you even if we tried.
They say he's done multiple ruins in a row before... It's not like some totally new thing for him.
I'm sure if we commanded him to cum and cranked up the machine, he would do it. His dick would ruin over and over again for us, in a heartbeat.
Of course it would... His body does whatever we tell it to do.
That's not what I'm wondering, though. I want to know... Where's his absolute breaking point? His true limit. Is it a few more hours of forced edging, just like this-?
Or is it some unthinkable number of brutal ruined orgasms... all in a row-?
Hmmm... Those both sound hot as hell. But you forgot the third option...
...we could just park him... perfectly on the edge of orgasm... and see how long he can stay there, before he passes out.
I think he's basically almost there already... The machine has been working him over for a while now.
In fact... if I tweak the settings just a little, tiny bit at a time... We can work our way slowly up to what will feel to him like a single, long, permanent edge.
Do it.
But do it slowly. Carefully. DO NOT let him cum!
Mmmm... Ok... Here we go...
He's totally fucked now. Carefully adjust the Edge-O-Matic, if you can, toward the most sustained, excruciating edging possible. If necessary, make tiny, careful adjustments for the rest of the session, as you go, so that it keeps you near that level. But err on the side of caution. DO NOT CUM! - No matter what!
Hey Lambie... You're just in time. We just started edging him!
You just started, huh?
Yup. Elle and Fay wink at each other...
Wow! Looks like you're edging him really hard! -- He's a mess! -- Can I join in?
He's all yours. In fact, I've seen all I need to see... for now. Seeya around, Misty!
And, seriously, Elle... keep that machine on Edging Mode only. Promise you will NOT let him cum! No matter what.
Damn... I promise.
Sorry, stud. I told you that you were fucked.
If it was up to me, now that Fay's gone, I would totally ruin you, like ten times in a row...
I would release that excruciating pressure in your balls -- every last drop of it. But Fay's in charge around here, so oh well...
Good thing you're such a depraved edgeslut!
Look at him go! That machine is amazing!
Are his legs shaking?? God, I love watching boys edge!
Smart move, tying his hands down so he can't finish himself. He wants to cum so bad! How many times did you and Fay edge him already?
No clue. A lot... but not enough.
How will you know when you reached his limit?
We'll know. He's got plenty of energy left in him. Don't you, Misty? -- Say "Yes."
Tell Lambie what a total fucking brainless slut you are right now. Tell her you'll do anything to keep edging for us...
Ohhhh... That's sexy! Look at all that sweat! I've never seen him like this before!
Tell us how badly you want to cum, Misty.
Beg for it.
Louder...
Holy shit! -- Misty! -- You are insanely hot right now!!
Now tell us how badly you DON'T want to cum, baby. Tell us you want more edges, instead...
Beg us to NEVER let you cum, so this feeling can go on forever.
Nnnhh... Louder...
God damn... This is too much! I want that pulsing dick inside me!
Me too...!
Can we fuck him? -- Please?
You heard what Fay said... He can edge all night, but we can't let him cum -- no matter what.
What does that have to do with him fucking me silly? What good is a fuckbunny boy-toy if we don't put him to use? As long as he doesn't cum...
Think you can handle that, stud? Can you fuck me -- right here, right now -- and fight back your orgasm while I climax on your cock?
Want to be my new fuck-puppy, starting now? Or are you too busy getting wrecked by a fucking ruthless forced-edging machine?
He wouldn't last ten seconds inside either of us right now... Look at him...
Too bad... I would've cum so hard on his cock...
My legs wrapped around his waist... my whole body flexing and clenching... I would've made him fuck me till we both passed out.
Maybe next time, huh Misty?
Ohh... I think he's almost there...
Almost where?? His limit-? No way. He's not even close.
Don't let all his panting and sweating and moaning fool you. He's got at least another hour left in him. At least!
Yeah, but look at his eyes... Misty, baby, focus on me... Breathe... Look at me while you're edging. Don't look away. Don't zone out on me...
I need you to stay here, Misty. Stay with me. No matter how hard this is... Keep edging... Keep going... Don't cum...
Lambie... go find Fay. I think he needs a break, and I'm not allowed to turn off this machine without her.
Why would you want to give him a break? -- Ahh, whatever, ok. I have no idea where Fay went, though, so it might take me -- you know -- a while to find her... Will he be alright?
Well, baby... When we stated playing together today, did you think you'd still be going, this hard, for this long?
Look, regardless of what you're going through right now, you and I both know that you wanted this. You fantasized about one of us strapping that Edge-O-Matic to your dick and just straight-up, no bullshit, wrecking you with it...
You're not the only boy-toy with fantasies about surrendering control like this. You're not the only denied, pussy-licking slut looking for hot girls who get their kicks from edging the shit out of you.
For boys like you, it's not just about this incredible feeling of dancing on the ragged edge of orgasm, is it? It's more than that...
...it's about being forced to dance on that edge. It's about a spunky little girl like me, forcing you to do it, because it's not about what you want at all. It's about what -I- want.
-I- want your wrists tied down and your dick strapped to a machine incapable of showing mercy. -I- want to see you edge your brains out.
This is your fantasy because it's my fantasy. You'll do anything to make me happy, and pushing you to your limit is what makes me happy. You'd go another hour, just like this, if I wanted you to. You'd go all night.
As insane as it sounds, there's a part of you, right now, that doesn't want this to end -- ever. Tell me I'm right.
Tell me who you really are. You're my submissive, hard-working, devoted little edgeslut, aren't you? And not just mine -- You're devoted to every single girl in this place.
We own your cock, because you willingly gave it to us. You willingly strapped yourself into that chair. You asked us to do this to you.
Congratulations, baby. You got what you asked for...
Well, Misty... It looks like Lambie couldn't find Fay. So the "boss" won't be coming back to set you free...
I guess that means I can ignore her order not to let you cum... I can do what I wanted to do to you an hour ago... Your hands and ankles are still tied. Elle reaches down and adjusts a setting on the Edge-O-Matic. It goes into Multiple Ruin Mode!
Start RUINING for me, baby! -- That's right -- One ruined orgasm after another...
Your wrists are tied down. Your hands can't move. You're fucked. This is happening, and there's nothing you can do about it. I'm going to pump you dry.
Keep going. Let the machine do its work. I'm not stopping until there's nothing left in those balls...
Look at me. Focus. Keep going. I'll let you know when you're done.
I want that machine to keep pumping ruined orgasms out of you until you are 100% absolutely sure that there isn't a single drop of cum left in your body. I want to see at least one completely dry ruined orgasm. Give me as many as you can. Let the machine do the work.
Ooo... so much cum! Good boy... Let's make that our little secret, ok? Only after the Edge-O-Matic has finished extracting as many ruined orgasms your body can physically produce, Elle finally turns it off. Then she unties your wrists and ankles. Edge-O-Matic: OFF, no stroking rules apply. Just gently massage your exhausted dick.
You should probably get out of here now, Misty. As far as Fay knows, I didn't make you cum, and you're still desperately overflowing and frustrated. She probably wants to edge you some more -- double-down on that frustration -- and you don't look like you're in the best condition for that right now. If Fay does find you... well... ummm... I don't know... Make up a lie or something... Tell her you gotta go, but lmind volunteered to take your place... or something... I'm sure you'll think of something. You're a clever boy.
Last night... finally!!... I reached the divine touchless orgasm that Fay so lovingly and patiently crafted for me. It took weeks to get there, but the long denial was mainly because I didn't have time or opportunity for many sessions (sometimes only one per week), not for lack of eagerness to please. Recently, my schedule opened up a bit, so I was able to make several attempts in a row over the course of a couple days, which helped me build the necessary (frustrating!) "momentum." Then I randomly came across a new picture of Fay online, that I hadn't seen before, which prompted me to immediately begin a midnight session, and I could tell right away that this might be "the one." This was the pic:
I returned to that pic for the final "push" to the finale, and she slowly, steadily guided me the rest of the way.
The totally touchless, PC-flex orgasm is a phenomenal experience. I love it so much... It gives me the absolute longest-physically-possible ruined orgasm hangtime. Complete brain obliteration. Total loss of self... total submersion into subspace. I become nothing. Fay becomes everything. (Or whoever else wants to take me there)
I just wish it was easier to achieve. I need more practice, I guess!
My Rules: (I'm back in the game with full rules again!!)
My rules require continuous stroking and edging at a certain pace for a certain amount of time, instead of counting strokes. I am a total fuckbunny edgeslut who lives to amuse friendly, fun-loving girls and help them cum.
Stroking: First image: Stroke slowly with a medium grip for 90 seconds All other images: Keep stroking at the previous pace/grip for 90 seconds per image, unless a different rule applies On any image: Girl may tease and instruct me to stroke at any fast, medium, or slow pace; and/or grip tight, medium, or lightly (her choice). This supersedes any other stroking rules that would apply for that image and becomes the new pace/grip for subsequent images.
Eye contact with me: Stroke faster
Thigh/knee high socks or fluffy boots: Stroke faster and if the rules (below) require an edge for this pic, then +1 edge
Totally naked: Stroke slower
Her eyes are closed: Grip tighter
Zoom in on just her face: Grip lighter
Ponytail or braids: Stroke to this image for 30 extra seconds
If stroking triggers an edge: Stop for 30s, then resume stroking at same pace/grip.
Clarification:
If she is wearing thigh/knee high socks, but she is not wearing anything listed below that requires an edge, then the thigh/knee high socks only require me to stroke faster, but they do not require an edge.
For example, this makes me stroke faster, but does not require an edge:
On her knees, with legs spread: 1 edge and hold for 20s
This girl edged me already, on any earlier pic: She may optionally (your choice) tell me to skip the stroking for this pic, in exchange for +2 (or +3) more edges right away
If rules require an edge(s) for this pic, then finish the 90 seconds of stroking for this pic first, before edging. Try to edge at exactly 90 seconds.
If rules require an edge(s) for this pic, then on the next pic return to a slow pace with a medium grip.
If rules require multiple edges for one image, then 30s rest between edges. Edges stack.Everything stacks! So a pic where she has braids, is wearing sneakers, is touching her own hair, and is wearing knee-high socks = stroke for 2 minutes, then 3 edges!
Clarification:
If there is more than one girl in the pic, then all the edges (from all girls) add up, but the stroking time is still only 1.5 or 2 minutes.
For example, this is 2 minutes of stroking (ponytail), followed by 6 edges! (2 sports bras, 2 yoga pants, and 2 pairs of sneakers)
Clarification:
Wearing only shoes, thigh/knee high socks, and/or stockings (and nothing else) counts as "totally naked."
For example, this counts as "totally naked" and tattooed, and thus requires me to palm:
Any failure must be ruined. I may choose to quit or continue after ruin.
After finishing the last image, if I want to cum, I must go back and repeat all images that required an edge(s), in order, but without the 90 seconds of stroking for each image and with only 10s between edges. (In other words, repeat all previous edges as quickly as possible) Then repeat, one more time in full, one image of my choice that requires an edge(s) where the girl is making eye contact. Then cum.
If I choose to repeat the edges and attempt to cum, and I fail before the last edge, then I must ruin and quit.
Or I may choose not to repeat the edges and accept denial.
Favorite Models:
Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun...
Favorites rarely, in exceptional cases, may demand a different ending. (denial, ruin, touchless orgasm, or full orgasm)
Touchless, PC-flexing orgasm is extremely difficult and supremely frustrating, but it also gives me the longest, most mind-melting hangtime physically possible. Nothing else puts me in a more devoted, brainless, submissive headspace. I love it, but it requires a lot of time and intense build-up by one of my favorites at her absolute sexiest best. Even then, the odds of "success" are low, but I give it my all.
The pressure is physical, yet somehow still contained. I'm not sure how else to describe it. I'm worried that the next tease I get will be --exceptionally-- difficult to control! 
. Anyways, I'm back and to give and recibe some Sets! 
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Stroke to this image for 30 extra seconds
she was unfortunately quite busy today, and you still wanted to come here, so she dropped you off earlier this morning. 
). At the end I chose to cum for the "Cum for Guerlain while she looks back with both of her holes exposed" pic and really enjoyed it as instructed 
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so much 
I worked SO hard for that joke! 
... you'll find out what Ecik picked after you read/play those sets (linked above) ...
