[FEEDBACK][TESTING] The Letter of Acceptance

[Laroque]

I'm opening this thread to gauge interest in "The Letter of Acceptance" tease that has not been published yet.
Here is the link:

https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... f1c466ecd7

I know there are still some errors, but i wanted feedback to find out if I should continue putting anymore time into this or scrap the project. Most of this should flow on its own without clicking, but there is a name prompt and a few choices later on.

Really the tease as it stands is just a sort of Story driven Intro not meant to have a huge amount of choice or variation, but i'm easing myself into the mechanics of making a more complicated tease. It is just meant as an intro to the rest of the tease.

To start during the intro it is encouraged that you stroke freely as you like, but especially during the scenes where the avatars cock is being stimulated in any way. The challenge here is to continue stroking and edging freely as the story unfolds.

Thoughts and Goals:

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The overall theme of the tease is one of edging and building up the "energy" that stores for an overarching purpose that the school has for the "chosen" one. The player will be taught how to push himself further and challenged around every corner. There will be opportunity for release, but only if you want it. As you'll see in the intro there is opportunity for release.

There will be a mix of instructional tease and story driven that you can do whatever you like. One of the main soft rules of the game would be that you should cum when the player in the game cums. Sometimes it will be accompanied by NPC instructions telling you to do so or sometimes it will just happen in the story and you should feel encouraged to cum during that part.

I do want to keep the instructions relaxed throughout the tease with not many specific number requirements.

I'm working through the basic coding and variable options now because i do intend to add stats once the player arrives at the school.

The general idea is that the content will be driven by the players choices in each encounter. A sort of hidden stats counter that will take edge counts into consideration for future content.

There will be shops and villages

Competitions of reinvented sports

Different classes on the players schedule with reinvented teachers and course work

The player will also have stats in specific kink roles that would equate to learning things like potions, defense against the dark arts..... etc...

Above everything else i want to keep the selection of pornstars on a very premium level.

I want variation in how much tease there is to gonzo encounters.

The overall idea would be you can play with mystery on when you are allowed to cum or you can choose to not cum and the ejaculation scenes would be altered for that scenario.

The player will level up and gain stats based on encounter results. Those stats will not necessarily affect encounters directly, but act as more of an influencer on the story. For instance the player has built up a stat that is based around how many edges he's held over a period of time. Once that stat reaches a certain threshold it will trigger a main story event.... This will be a huge part of the story.

There will be a huge amount of side quests that are repeatable with slight variations. Certain practice sessions with school staff that you can repeat whenever you like once you encounter them because they help level up your stats.

I have alot more i'm thinking about, but first I wanted to get some kind of input on the ideas.

Please let me know your thoughts and help me build this if it is worth while.

[RandomName]

First and foremost, that teletubby is probably going to haunt my dreams...

Second, I noticed quite a number of grammar mistakes and missing words, but as a proof of concept, this isn't a problem, more a note.

Third, for most text boxes it proceeds automatically OR if I click, as a fast reader who doesn't really like waiting around especially without a timer, this is kinda annoying, it would be nice if all of them were auto or click instead of some of then only being auto.

Fourth, I didn't get much of the concept from your demo since I just ended up fighting a teletubby in hell, but your description is quite appealing. Albeit, it will likely take you quite a while.

Fifth, your model/image choices were by no means my cup o' tea. Not a problem, just a note.

Sixth, you might want to not use the name "Flu" as a portal thing without describing it, since anyone who doesn't know Harry Potter would just be left assuming they got really sick and teleported home or some shit.

Ultimately the only thing that I consider to actually be a large turn away for me is the random waiting. By the very nature of what you've described for the final version, most fetishes could be avoided, at least to a degree I presume? While I am quite interested, to make this include everything you listed especially without sacrificing quality, or adding mechanics only for them barely to used. This will take you quite a long time, but none the less, I am in fact interested to see where this goes.

[ritewriter]

Cool start. It’s seemed to end at the

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point you’re supposed to choose schools? Is that right?

I’d keep going!

My 2 suggestions:

Perhaps add more action choices inside the scenes from time to time. Once a scene starts, the player can’t do much, not even control pace. Check Trials of the Succubi as an example.

The POV shift from the MC to his secretary is a bit odd. Not sure how to fix it. Maybe

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given this is the Potterverse a spell or potion or magical effect could overwhelm her, so the MC witnesses her masturbate but can’t stop her

Fun premise!