Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

A corner for forum games, chat games, discussion about games and even tournaments. Come in and play ... if you dare!
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 1:
Spoiler: show
2022 began with a bang. 2021 was so crappy, but the arrival of a new year promised a fresh start.

You’re in your bedroom. You’re feeling a little horny, thinking about what teases you might play on Milovana this year. Perhaps there will be some interesting plot arcs or premises. Of course, perhaps a fresh start should begin with a little cleaning. Your bedroom closet has been getting pretty full. Perhaps you should clean it out. Out with the old, in with the new, as they say … Maybe now is not quite the time for cleaning, but … what’s the harm in taking a few minutes to take a quick inventory?

You open your closet door. It’s your closet. You peer in, looking at the boxes and clothes.


“Oh, Ecik!”

A sing-songy voice emanates from the back of your closet. It’s Angela White. You can see a faint light emanating from behind the rack of clothes. Looks like you have a wardrobe/Narnia situation going on. You’re pretty sure you will NOT find a lion after pushing past the clothes to the other side. No, what awaits you is FAR more hungry, devious, and sex-crazed.

But, you *are* horny. You shake your head, knowing what is surely to come, and start pushing through clothes towards the back of the closet …

At a certain point, you notice the items in your closet begin to transition, from things you currently own to things you used to own … and then to clothes you don’t own—lavish outerwear including fur coats, to be exact. You know exactly where you are. You’re in Angela’s coat closet. She had you clean it out once while you were her basement slave. It’s on the main floor of her Village Mansion right by the main entrance. You emerge from the closet into the bright overhead lights of Angela’s extravagant foyer.


Step into the foyer ...
Spoiler: show
Oh, Ecik—there you are!
Image


Really—coming out of the closet? I didn’t know you were hiding in there … Is there something you’ve been keeping from me? I don’t mind … I’d just appreciate some honesty from you …
Image


What!? The gay closet jokes aren’t funny anymore? Well, I suppose this is 2022 and not 2005 … when you’re as old as me, it’s sometimes challenging to keep up with the latest pop culture humor … but, if you see Tom Cruise in the closet on your way out, be sure to tell him it’s fine to come out …
Image

So, listen, Ecik my darling … I have ANOTHER favor to ask of you … yes, yes, I KNOW you aren’t my slave—I do kind of miss those days—but you DO have SO much fun when you stop by to visit and help me out …
Image


Surely you don’t regret coming over a couple weeks ago to make sure my oven was turned off …
Image


Angela smiles a knowing smile.
Image


Anyway, house guests. My problem today is house guests. I had a BUNCH of people stay over at my place for Christmas and New Years …
Image


They have worn out their welcome. I need them gone.
Image


Please ask them to leave. Do whatever they want. Just make sure they are gone by the time I get back.
Image


I’ll be back in 11 hours. If everyone is gone when I get back, you’ll get a nice reward ...
Image


If they aren’t, well … you’ll get a much less “nice” reward …
Image


When you finish, wait for me in the basement. If I get back before you finish, then, well … I guess *I’ll* be waiting for YOU in the basement—and you know how impatient I can be, so, don’t make me wait!
Image


[Set a timer for 11 hours]


Author’s Note:
Spoiler: show
For everyone but Ecik: The timer thing is for Ecik. Nobody else has to worry about it. If you want to "give yourself a challenge" to "play along" a little bit better, INSTEAD of the timer, "pledge" or "wager" how many sessions you plan to do this tease in. If you end up needing more sessions (breaks of up to 30 minutes after an orgasm don't count) than you wagered, then, you will "count as" not having "done your chores in time." With the wide variety of rules, this is probably the "best" solution in lieu of using a timer ... Also, if you pledge 6 sessions and end up doing 5, let's say that ALSO counts as "failing", so ... if you "pledge" too many sessions, but then decide you want to keep playing for the day ... well, if you end up going *under* your wager, that will ALSO count as "failing" ... Ecik's choices are canon. This is just an option to "raise the stakes" for the others who are playing along ...

For Ecik:
Spoiler: show
I don’t know how long this tease will take. I want you to enjoy it, so, don’t rush, but, also … don’t take your sweet time, either! 11 hours should be plenty of time to get through things, but … while taking longer won’t completely wreck things … you’ll be MUCH happier if you finish it within 11 hours :yes:

When you are resting after an orgasm, you may stop the timer. Just start it again once you begin stroking for pics.

Not every scene or Part is the same length. After an orgasm, you may continue. However, depending on your pacing, it could be 1-3 hours between orgasms, so … if you decide to press on, keep going—unless you are willing to end a scene with blue balls! :lol:

There may be as many as 6 orgasms in this mega tease. You may therefore break this up into 6 sessions but not more. You can certainly cum and keep going however …

I estimated about 9.5 hours, so, 11 hours should be a decent estimate … If you turn off the timer during rests, you should probably make it … but if you can’t stay within time, the consequence isn’t unsurmountable … You’ll decide whether or not it is worth it when you get there :whistle:

Investigate the living room ...
Spoiler: show
Angela wants me to leave ALREADY—ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!

She had me locked up in *chastity* until THIS MORNING—and that was since Christmas!

I'm not leaving until I get off several times!
Image


Think you're up to the task?
Image
Image


You better have those clothespins handy ...
Image
Image


I need your cock SO bad!
Image


Oh, that's fucking good!

You don't know how bad I need this! I am SO fucking horny!
Image


Yeah, slap your balls HARDER! It makes me SO wet!
Image


Faster! HARDER! I'm about to cum!
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
Oh, I'm cumming!!!

Penny gives a deep gutteral moan as she cums
Image


Now take me from behind!
Image


Make sure you get it in there NICE and TIGHT!

I want to feel your cock inside of me!
Image


Keep going—don't stop!
Image


Grab my ass, Ecik! I'm about to cum AGAIN!
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
OHHH!!! OHH!!

Penny shouts as she orgasms a second time.
Image


Now lay down!

This dick is FUCKING mine, and you BETTER fucking last!
Image


I'm SO hungry for cock ...
Image


You think this pain is bad?

If you cum, I will WRECK your balls!
Image


So last you dirty fucker!
Image


Would you prefer a titjob?
Image


Fuck you! This is about ME and getting ME off!
Image


Oh, this is SO hot!

Taking you all the way in has got me SO close ...
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
MMmmm ... OOooooo ...

Penny whimpers.

I just came again ...

... it's so easy when you've been denied this long ...

... Do you know what that's like?
Image


I'm not done ... I need ONE more!
Image


Yeah, grab my ass, Ecik!
Image


Your cock feels SO good!
Image


I LOVE how you just fill me up ...
Image


Oh, I'm so close again ...

... I'm about ...

Continue:
Spoiler: show
... to CUUUuuuumm ...
Image


OOOoooohh ... OOOooooh ...

You make me cum so good, Ecik!
Image


Okay ... now it's your turn ...

Continue:
Spoiler: show
CUM for me, Ecik! [FULL ORGASM]

Don't even think about it, just CUM!!

I want to taste your big, warm load!
Image


Oh, it tastes SO good ...
Image


You've been a BIG help to me today ...
Image


::Gulp::

She swallows your cum.
Image


Okay, I think I'm ready to leave now ...

I'll be seeing you, Ecik!
Image

Penny blows you a kiss goodbye as she leaves.

[Take off your clothespins and reset your slap and cumshot counters to zero.]
Check the BDSM "play" rooms for house guests ...
Spoiler: show
Oh, look! Our Quality Assurance Technician has finally arrived! Now we can begin the trial.

I've been working on this contraption for WEEKS ... the fine-tuning has been a bitch, but I think I've finally gotten the settings correct ...

What have I been working on?
Image


It was a Christmas present from Angela White.
Image


Sorry, I've already found my volunteer ...

... he's been preparing for this test for WEEKS ...
Image


Let me get him warmed up ...

... if you approve the machine for use, I might have to use it on you next ...
Image


MMmmm ... just the tip for now ...

I know it's just a pocket pussy, but this seems hardcore to me ...
Image


Yes ... prepare the cock for full insertion ...
Image


I hope this test goes well ...
Image


What are you waiting for!? Don't pussy out on me now—I'm ready to start!
Image


Yes, let's start out slow ...
Image


... then increase the speed!
Image


Oh, yeah, this is fucking HOT!!
Image


Are you getting all this!?

*I'm* supposed to operate the machine while you take down the data!
Image


Do you think we can take this up to 10?
Image


Good response. Everything is operating within normal parameters ...
Image


... but I think we can go higher ...
Image


Fuck yes!

It goes to 11, too!

Give me your strokes, slaps, edge TWICE for me, then do your slaps AGAIN, Ecik!
Image


Test complete. I expect your QA report in the morning.

If it passes, Michaela said she wants to be the first to borrow it. She said she has a trainee who's "machine curious" and interested in Post Orgasm Torture ... I'm not sure if he could handle it or if he's even around, but ... I wouldn't mind being present during the session. Michaela is open to ... constructive criticism—and she doesn't mind if someone else steps in to lend her a hand ...
Image


Alright. Time to pack it up and head out ...

Thanks, Ecik! I'll be seeing ya!
Enter Guest Apartment #6
Spoiler: show
Ecik! Oh, thank God … I’m so glad you’re here! Did you get my message!? I hope we’re not too late …
Image


You walk into the apartment to find Nancy Ace sitting in a chair, surrounded by computers and electronic equipment. She has a four monitor setup going on.
Image


Obviously, there’s computers, but there is equipment you don’t recognize. Some of it looks old, like it could be from the 1950s.
Image


Other pieces look more advanced, like something Rick Sanchez might have in his lab.
Image


The whole scene makes you feel as if you have stepped into some movie or comic book.

On one of the screens, Nancy has the Milovana website pulled up.

She quickly glances over your rules.

Image


10 strokes for blondes—really? You spend a WHOLE MONTH playing my NNN game, and all I get is 10 strokes?
Image


Ah! Stop it, Nancy! There’s a lot at stake—just focus on the problem at hand …

Nancy sighs, closes her eyes, and rubs her forehead while she thinks. Clearly, she’s stressed about something.

Ack! Whatever. I need you warmed up … just double your strokes to 20 for me, okay? That should help …
Image


Nancy sighs again. She’s looking flustered. She closes her eyes and takes in a deep breath, holds it for a second, then lets it out.

Okay. We have to get moving …

So, this is not how I wanted to explain things to you, but, there is a situation: Fatts is trapped in a succubus maze tease—DesertFox’s “Mazes” to be exact.
Image


Nancy lets out a short groan of disgust.

You call that stroking—seriously? Look, we’re in a *crisis* here, and I need you close to the edge like 30 seconds ago, okay? Stroke hard like you mean it!
Image


So, anyway, I noticed something was off with the Village. Turns out we had a Dawn Summers situation going on, except, instead of a teenage girl who was a key used to unlock dimensions and fight evil … we instead had a succubus feeding on sexual energy like a vampire feeding on blood at the blood bank, on donation day, right after a fire burned down the wooden stake factory 5 minutes before …

Naked breasts is “naked”, right? Well, today it is. I need you aroused AND listening, okay, Ecik? You can do both, right? Good boy.
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
I’m sorry—I’m not usually this snippy … there’s just a lot riding on this mission …

So, everybody started getting horny—like WAY hornier than usual—and they seemed to be congregating by the beach—I guess to be more naked? I don’t know. Unclear. Doesn’t matter. So, then, they started talking about the Red Fox and saying how she is on the Village Council when she definitely has never even been here for a visit … at least not before December of 2021 …

Shit!

Nancy rubs her face with both hands in an attempt to relieve the tension in her face.

You probably have a thousand questions about how I know all of this and what’s going on … ummm … how do I put this?

Nancy sighs.

I know everything. You see this?

Nancy pats the chair.

Fake. And this?
Image


Nancy taps the counter.

Fake. Now these …
Image


Nancy shows you her breasts.

THESE are real—and don’t let ANYONE tell you differently …
Image


… but the rest of this? It’s all fake. You’re a Visitor, so, you probably already know this, but … the whole Village is fake. This is NOT reality. You’re in some kind of weird, shared fantasy right now. Nothing is really, real—except for me. *I’m* real. I’m the only self-aware entity in the entire Village, and if I don’t get Fatts back, I’m gone. Me and my home get destroyed. Period. Full stop. And I like this place, okay? So, we REALLY need to stop all of that from happening …

Fatts had it planned out … Helequin was going to get the “Village Premier” set—you were going to get a piggyback set with Melena—that’s how you were “supposed” to find out about all of this … but shit happens … and, as usual, it falls to me to put out the fires …

Nancy smiles dispassionately while rubbing her cheek with the palm of her left hand.
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
Alright, so, the Red Fox found out about the Village at a Christmas party from Angela. Normally, all of the entities who exist in the Village come from the imaginations and desires of the Visitors who come here—the wankers like you and Fatts—but the Red Fox came from OUTSIDE … that’s a problem. And she’s a SUCCUBUS … that’s another problem. And she isn’t some run-of-the-mill, everyday, pedestrian succubus—oh, no. She’s POWERFUL. She runs a maze, and that makes her even more powerful in Fatts’ mind. And that’s our third problem, because all of Fatts’ fantasies and desires get amplified in the Village and become reality.

It started with a suggestion from Fatts that the Red Fox was a succubus. Then, in the set you wrote for Fatts—yes, I’m aware of the sets you dirty boys write for each other—YOU decided to dial it up to eleven and have her take over the WHOLE town!?

Really, you story sluts are just a bunch of drama queens. Why can’t you just have nice, easily contained fantasies where you’re tied up in a basement getting your balls busted over and over? Or, maybe, you suck a dildo whenever you see a trans cock? That’s pretty simple, right? How about just have a nice stay at a milking farm? That’s NEVER triggered the end of the world … Why can’t you and Fatts be more like BBBeanie or Helequin or Awayaway411? I would rather deal with a prison break from the Horny Jail than deal with this … I swear. These escalating fantasies will be the death of me …

and Angela White as the hero of the day!? Are nuclear bombs something you play catch with in the backyard on a weekday afternoon!? Well, if your name is Ecik17, then yes—the answer is yes. It’s just fine to have a game of catch in the backyard with granddad, tossing nuclear bombs back and forth—that will be fun for EVERYONE—THE WHOLE FAMILY—AND EVERYONE WITHIN A 50 MILE RADIUS!!

Nancy palms her face with both hands.

Calm down, Nancy. Calm down. That’s not helpful. You’re not being helpful right now. He didn’t know. Cool down. You got this. Get your shit together. This is all going to work out. THINK your way through to the solution—just think

Nancy lets out a frustrated groan before pulling her hands away from her face.

Okay, so, you know Angela is basically Loki, right?

You nod your head.

Of course you do. That was your idea—Fatts NEVER would have come up with that …

Right, so, Angela is Loki, but … what you DIDN’T know, is that Fatts is a psychic amplifier. When it comes to the Village, whatever Fatts thinks gets blown WAY the fuck up. So, for you, Angela was just a “Loki-like” figure who showed up in teases, but to Fatts—since he amplifies everything—Angela *is* Loki. When she’s in the Village, Angela is Loki—with all of the powers and abilities and guile that Loki has in the comics and movies. She’s a transdimensional outsider with CRAZY powers. She’s REALLY hard for me to control. Fatts has basically made me the “keeper” of the Village, so … Angela really can’t harm me directly, but … that doesn’t mean she can’t fuck shit up if she wants to … and … well … Angela is Angela. Mostly she keeps to herself and does her own thing … and that’s fine. Fatts likes the idea that Angela comes around the Village to play. Personally, I’d prefer a less chaotic playmate, but, whatever … At the very least, Angela has some standards and knows she has a good thing going here. She understands that she gets a MAJOR power spike whenever she’s in the Village, so … she knows enough not to ruin the best gig she’s ever gotten … so, it’s fine. She’s annoying to deal with, but … it’s mostly fine—it’s fine.

Are you starting to see the problem? Have you been putting the pieces together!? Don’t go limp on me, Ecik! You’ll be going into the succubus maze here in a minute. I need you ready to EDGE!
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
So, you introduced the greatest threat to the Village that has EVER been. Granted, we’re all pretty young here, but … that’s saying something—that’s not inconsequential! Fatts was NOT going to let the Red Fox wreck his playground, and, frankly, I wouldn’t have let that stand either … Then, as a solution, you have the MOST DEVIOUS ENTITY IMAGINABLE “fix” the situation ... Did you honestly think that would end well for anyone—really?

So, while Fatts could not allow the Red Fox to wreck the Village, he couldn’t let Angela just do whatever she wanted either … wait. “Red Fox” is just SO pretentious. I understand the appeal, but … it’s just too much—even for a succubus. I can’t do it. I’m just going to call her “Michelle” from now on …

So, Fatts couldn’t let “Michelle” destroy the Village, but, he ALSO couldn’t just hand Michelle over to Angela and let ANGELA follow through on whatever crazy plan SHE had … and Angela is a LIAR. She’s Loki, right? How could Fatts trust ANYTHING Angela said!? So, caught between trusting Angela or letting the Village get destroyed … Fatts picked the lesser of two evils and went along with Angela’s plan. But, here’s the thing—it’s not as simple *or* clean as you THOUGHT it would be … If you try to force a binary choice onto Fatts that he doesn’t like, he’s almost always going to create his own third option …

Nancy rolls her eyes.

He can be SO annoying …

So, during the binding ritual, Fatts tried to fuck it up. Instead of edging twice for 20 seconds—well, he did that, but AFTER the two 20 second edge holds, he did two 40 second edge holds in an attempt to overcharge the diamond. Then, when Angela made him orgasm, Fatts took a ruined orgasm instead of a full. Now, Angela saw what was going on. Like, it took Fatts a LONG time before he came for her … she was kind of getting impatient, and—knowing Angela, I’m SURE she picked up on the fact that Fatts only had a ruined orgasm and NOT a full, so … yeah … not sure how all of THAT will play out, but …

Anyway, as SOON as Fatts was finished with Angela, he RUSHED over to the Harem House to visit me. Yeah—remember? I’m “the fixer”—the girl who puts out fires … So, against my better judgment, I helped Fatts get back into DesertFox’s Maze. Michelle may be a hungry, vampiric succubus bent on world domination, but … Fatts still has a thing for the Red Fox—I mean “Michelle”. And Fatts … he’s just too much of a softy and a gentlemen … he HATED the idea of Michelle being Angela’s plaything. True, Fatts didn’t want Angela having a powerful succubus under her control, but—more than that—he didn’t like the idea of Michelle being Angela’s slave, suffering under her tender mercies …

Also, Fatts really just wanted to find out the truth. Angela said everything that Michelle said was a lie, but, Fatts doesn’t really believe that. Does Vanessa Angel really dream of him? Would Ashley Doll be down for some pup play? Fatts wanted to know, and if Michelle was locked away, he would NEVER find out …

Also, yeah … Fatts really wants Michelle to hang around and join the Village. He doesn’t want to see her “banished” from the Village … he’d like her to stay—just not at her full capacity … I mean, I *sort of* get that … she IS pretty hot, and it would make things more interesting around here … just as long as I don’t have to worry about her destroying the whole world every time she pops over for a visit …

Fatts was kind of okay with the whole Dawn Summers “memory rewrite” thing. To be clear, I’m not. I’m the one who has to keep track of all of the memories and histories for ALL of the entities within the Village as well as all of the individualized instances and manifestations of the Village that are unique to each Visitor. A global memory rewrite would be a GIANT PAIN IN MY ASS, but … whatever. I just don’t want to die.

Nancy stares down at the ground for a few seconds, a glum expression on her face.

So, Fatts went into the Maze to save Michelle. Now, he didn’t go in the usual way. Normally, you go through the GuideMe portal, meet with Michelle, sign a contract, and THEN you get to enter the Maze. Since the Maze currently doesn’t have a mistress, entry is barred. And, since Fatts entered the Maze by way of the Village, the normal rules don’t apply. For this maze, the entrants can’t touch the girls and cumming means you explode and die from a sudden release of too much sexual energy—or something like that. Somehow, Fatts managed to convince his maze “Guide”—a version of the Michaela you know—to let him cum inside the maze. I don’t know how he managed that, but … Fatts always seems to get his way when it comes to his orgasms … and Michelle’s contracts don’t usually have loopholes, and the default for mazes is you can’t cum until you reach the end, so … neat trick, I guess … but … I’m pretty sure cumming in the Maze will NOT have any deleterious effects—at least for Fatts … so … he *should* be able to survive there indefinitely …

I am NOT sure what cumming in the Maze would do for you … Apparently, orgasms cause an enormous surge of sexual energy. If an individual succubus was powerful enough and prepared, they could probably handle it … Also, there are some parts of the Maze that aren’t “part of the Maze”, where cumming might be permitted, but … there is NO WAY to tell before the fact, so … we should probably just avoid having you cum once you are inside ... bad things could EASILY happen if you did …

I gave Fatts a communicator and some “cheat codes” to get by most of the encounters in the maze. Fatts remembered from his last play through that, even though Michelle ran the maze, there were other powerful entities inside who might be able to help him. Angela sealed Michelle away with some of his cum. If cumming for Angela could seal Michelle away, then, perhaps, cumming for Michelle could free her. The problem is, Michelle is locked away in the diamond.

Now, normally, for those who “Walk” the Maze, the only time you see Michelle is at the beginning and the end. However, there is a scene with Jenya that Michelle appears in. Fatts thought that if we were somehow able to trigger that scene—despite Michelle being locked away—perhaps we could STILL get her to appear.

Now, I looked into the code for DesertFox’s Maze and ran some simulations. It seems that Fatts’ hunch was correct. Michelle does not “live” in the maze. She hangs out outside the maze—for the most part. When strokers come in through the GuideMe portal, they meet the “real” Michelle. When they complete the maze and cum at the end, that’s the “real” Michelle, too. She likes to be hands-on for the important bits: the contracts and the orgasms. However, the version of Michelle that appears during Jenya’s tease—which is just a random encounter—that is NOT the “real” Michelle. That’s an NPC, a programmed artifact or AI in the Maze. Michelle wouldn’t call it that—she’d probably call it her “shadow” or “ghost” or something, but … it’s an NPC. And, despite Michelle being trapped in a diamond in the Village, that NPC version of her is still there in DesertFox’s Maze.

So, I did a little analysis of Angela’s diamond. The safeguards that confirm identity are shit. In other words, the magic only activates according to a likeness of the Red Fox—just her image. The magic doesn’t check for the trapped entity’s fantasy frequency or personality wave or some other metric that would confirm the person is actually that person … I guess Angela got lazy with her magic …so, if Fatts can manage to cum for that NPC version of the Red Fox, we can free Michelle from the diamondand if we can free Michelle on our terms, we should be able to install a limiter on her, which would reduce her power when she’s in the Village. So, if everything goes according to our plan, we can free Michelle and save the Village …

I suppose you could say that Angela has made one of the Two Classic Blunders: 1) Never get involved in a land war in Asia, and 2) Never go against a Villager when death is on the line!

Nancy makes a fist with one hand and slams it into the palm of her other. She has a look of determination in her eyes. She stares off into the distance for a few seconds. For the first time since you’ve seen her today, Nancy appears hopeful.
Image


So, that’s it. That’s basically the plan …

Nancy grimaces a little bit.

I guess that really isn’t much of a plan … There’s still a lot of loose ends …

The fear and doubt creep back into Nancy’s eyes. She bites her lip nervously, then sighs. She closes her eyes and shakes her head.

No, we’re going to do this. We GOT this! You’re here now … things are going to turn around … I just know it!

Nancy takes in a deep breath then lets it out slowly.

The Michaela in the maze passes out these orbs that collect sexual energy. I have NO IDEA how they work, but, I’m HOPING they will do the trick. If anything, I might be able to modify one and imprint Fatts’ orgasm onto it. It should save the records and frequencies of the orgasm as well as the energy. For sure, it should imprint the images, and that should be enough to trick the diamond into releasing Michelle.

The two big things we have going for us are the ruined orgasm and the diamond being supercharged. With Fatts ruining his orgasm, the seal holding Michelle in was weakened. It is NOT secure. Yeah, Michelle is trapped in there, but … that diamond won’t hold her forever. She’ll break out sooner than later. That is, unless someone with a sexual connection to Michelle covers the diamond in cum. If that happens, then I’m pretty sure the seal will be strengthened, and the diamond should then be able to hold her forever. Of course, I’m pretty sure Angela realizes all of this …

Our OTHER advantage is the supercharge. That diamond came from outside of the Village, but I've already synced the diamond’s wave function to the Village fantasy matrix, and the sexual energy for the overcharge came from the Village through Fatts. I can activate that energy to cause the diamond to explode, releasing Michelle anytime I want. Of course, until I do that, the stored energy is just sort of hanging around. Angela could just redirect that energy back into strengthening the seal, assuming she got one of Michelle’s conquests to cum on the diamond … but, for now at least, we’re in control.

The problem is Michelle. I have NO IDEA how she will react to all of this. If I free her now, nothing changes. She could still just come back and take everything over. Yeah, we got lucky that Angela’s plan worked—well, sort of worked—but … if we continue to undermine Angela like we are and things go sideways … she might not be willing to help us out again … or worse, she might demand something severe in exchange for her help.

If Michelle got free … that would be bad. I’d be up to my eyeballs in work. All of the changes, the chaos … it would be a LARGE strain on the Village fantasy matrix … it might even destroy the Village entirely. Fatts and I have cultivated the Village to be a certain way. The cognitive dissonance between the girls’ old and new memories and preferences could easily do irreparable harm to the girls and the Village itself. If Michelle kept things in check, I could probably hold things together, but it would be ROUGH … I DO have a contingency to kick her out if she does decide to take over, but … I’d rather NOT risk potential harm to the Village, and my solution would put a heavy strain on Fatts … and if she went crazy before I got to implement my contingency, then it would be goodnight Irene …

But all of this is secondary. I’m just thinking out loud fifty moves ahead … I haven’t even gotten to our main problem: I lost my connection with Fatts.

So, normally, the Village is powered by Fatts’ imagination and desires as well as those who Visit or those who build and sustain the Village by writing sets.

Thanks, by the way, for doing that … I wouldn’t be here without your contributions …

Nancy smiles at you weakly.

Your fantasies and the interplay between Fatts and the other Creators and Visitors is what generated this place and me along with it. I wouldn’t exist without you, Ecik, so … thank you.
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
Nancy starts to rub her eyes. Was she just tearing up?

Thanks for being the creative, expressive, horny dog that you are!
Image


Nancy laughs as she flashes you.
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
But seriously, things are REALLY dire. The Village exists BECAUSE of Fatts. The others like you contribute and build and help it grow. Your lusts and fantasies feed the Village and sustain it and help it to progress … but Fatts is the architect—the source. Without him, the Village isn’t strong enough to exist independently. There just aren’t enough caretakers from the Real World to keep it alive without him.

With Fatts trapped in the succubus maze, he’s cut off from the Village. I can already sense some of the inconsistencies and errors starting to build up. There are parts of the Village that are beginning to phase out. Fatts is our dynamo, our power source. We’ve got a lot of energy stored up, but nothing new is coming in. We’re running on reserves. Normally, Fatts visits often, so, a short hiatus is no big deal, but … if we can’t get him back, all of this will disappear … including me.

Ecik, I need you right now. You’re the only one who can save him—save us—save the Village! … Whatever happens with Angela and the Red Fox happens, but … I just need Fatts back. I literally can’t live without him.

If you can bring back Fatts, I’ll owe you a favor. Whatever you want, I’ll do it. No conditions.

It was foolhardy for Fatts to rush into the Maze, but … I guess he just really wanted to save the Red Fox and thwart Angela … and I’m sure part of it was his dick, wanting to have a sexy succubus around … but we really got in over our heads. He just assumed that since he beat the maze before, he could easily do it again, but … since we went in through a back door, we bypassed all of the normal rules, and … I’m not sure if I’ll ever see him again.

Nancy stares off into the distance as she finishes her sentence.

Things were going well at first. I turned off all of the random encounters except for Jenya, who we needed to unlock the special Red Fox scene. Fatts remembered there was this powerful succubus who was trapped in the maze who was asleep. Fatts figured that since Michelle was gone, he could probably contact the sleeper to help him get out. He encountered Jenya once, then found the sleeper. I guess her name is Victoria Rae. Things were going well. He was waking her up slowly, and … and then I guess he came. That’s when I lost my connection. I did hear a few choppy messages after, so, I’m pretty sure he’s still alive, but … that’s why I need you to go in.

Will you do it, Ecik? Will you enter the Succubus Maze to save Fatts?

You nod your head yes.

Great! Okay, put on this communicator …

Nancy hands you something that looks like a wrist watch.

Wait … other arm … that’ll be wonky trying to stroke if it’s attached to your dominant arm, right?

Nancy smiles.

Okay, so, you’ll port in to the main entrance … at least that’s what Fatts did. The Maze remembered his previous settings, so … it’s fine for Fatts to cum in the maze, but … since you are unregistered, I have NO IDEA what will happen if you do, so … *try* to avoid cumming—if at ALL possible …

Alright, let’s do it!

Nancy types in a few commands at her computer. Some machines spin up. There’s some whirring, buzzing, bright lights turning on. A portal appears before you.
Image

Continue:
Spoiler: show
Okay, step on in! I’ll be with you the ENTIRE way, okay?
Image


Don’t be nervous! You got this, Ecik!
Image


Oh, and don’t forget, me and the WHOLE Village are counting on you—no pressure, but we all die if you screw up, so … ummm … yeah. Just do it—we’re counting on you!

Oh! Maybe I should warm you up a bit more. I know you’re into me, Ecik. I read ALL the thread feedback …
Image


Don’t be so embarrassed! It’s honestly VERY flattering … and kind of hot …
Image


And yes, I do hardcore … not a lot, but … I’m sure Fatts can find a POV set WITHOUT Martin so I can properly reward you
Image


Okay, are you warmed up? I’m not about to send my only hope into the lion’s den flaccid … that would just be BAD!
Image
Image
Image

Ahhh—Sorry, if I overcompensated with the warmup—my bad! Now I think you might be too warmed up …I’m just SO nervous …

Nancy sighs and looks down at the ground before looking back up at you.

It’s just sometimes when I get anxious, I get a little too horny and get carried away …

Nancy pats her face rapidly with both hands, trying to psych herself up. She lets out a swift exhale.

It’s okay. We GOT this! Alright, Ecik! Step into the portal, before I lose my nerve …

Step into the portal.
[Begin Part 2]


Quick Recap of Part 1 ... (This is an actual "spoiler", so ... just read it for the summary, because the story got complicated quick ...)
Spoiler: show
• Fatts is the dynamo that powers the Village.
• In an attempt to rescue the Red Fox (“Michelle”) from Angela’s clutches, Fatts has gotten lost in DesertFox’s Maze.
• If Fatts cannot escape the Maze and return to the Village, then the entire Village—including Nancy Ace—will be destroyed.
• Fatts sealed the Red Fox in Angela’s diamond, but the seal is only temporary.
• Maze Orbs can be used to store sexual energy.
• Even though the Red Fox is trapped in Angela’s diamond, an NPC version of “Michelle” still exists in the Maze.
• By cumming for that NPC using an Orb, Fatts and Nancy can create a “key” which can unlock the Red Fox from Angela’s diamond prison.
• Releasing the Red Fox on their terms, Nancy can place a limiter on Michelle which will reduce her powers when she is in the Village.
• Fatts overcharged Angela’s diamond as he was capturing the Red Fox. Nancy can use that extra energy to detonate the diamond at any time, freeing Michelle. Alternatively, Angela can use that extra energy to strengthen the seal, assuming she can get someone who already has a sexual connection with Michelle to cum on the diamond.
Last edited by FattsDynamo on Wed Feb 16, 2022 10:14 am, edited 1 time in total.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 2:
Spoiler: show
Entering the Maze …
Spoiler: show
You feel a whoosh as you travel through the portal. Then you arrive.
Image

Author’s Note:
Spoiler: show
I lifted the quoted sections and “Maze” images directly from DesertFox’s tease.
“You have arrived.

If you can't remember why you are here, ask!

And why are you here? What drew you, now, to this moment?

A desire? A need? Or... a command?

The only way from here is forward, ever forward."

Image


"You will be tested, mind and body. And they will drink their fill, oh yes, they will drink deeply. Can you find the will to resist? To not give in to your base instincts, to give your body what it so craves?

When you are lost, and lost you will be, always remember this:

Do not cum in here!

Do you understand this? Never, ever give in.

Does this frighten you? Or... excite you?

The time is now, the doors are opening. What then, shall you do?”
Spoiler: show
Nancy begins speaking to you over the communicator.

Nancy: Okay, yeah, that’s just the intro text for the tease. DesertFox wrote it. Pretty good, right?

"You take a few confident steps in the direction of the open door.

But then you stop yourself. Rooted in place on the threshold of the door, you feel only one thing, confused.

Where were you just going?

What is this place?

Why are you even here?”

Image


Nancy: Yeah, yeah, we know all that … we’re here to save Fatts, there’s some succubi and a Maze …

“To your left, a door you did not notice before opens, almost as though to beckon you in.

Without any thought, you find yourself crossing the threshold.”

Image


Nancy: I’ll see if I can bypass the story … we don’t have time for that … we’re kind of doing our own thing, right?

Good. Reception. The waiting room. Let’s see if we can find somebody.
Image


Nancy: So, just so you’re aware, I can see you, but you can’t see me. So, don’t worry, I’m able to hear everything and follow what’s going on … speaking of which, can you play with yourself a little more? We can’t have you going limp, Ecik. You’re about to meet some succubi! We need to make a good impression.

Ummm … yeah … just head through that door next to the reception desk. I can see on my overlay that someone is in there …


Enter the receptionist's office ...
Spoiler: show
“Greetings, Ecik17! This place is ... a special place. A place only a few are allowed to enter, and you are one of those lucky enough to be here!”
Image


“Now, let me remind you about who we are and what we do here.”

Nancy: Yeah, we know who you are and what you do. This is a maze tease. Can you please let us inside?
Image


Receptionist: “As the most recognized name in the industry, travelers all over the world have been saying “Take me to the Maze" for centuries. And because of our innovative approach to products, amenities and service, The Maze continues to be synonymous with pleasure across the globe. The Maze remains the stylish, forward thinking global leader of hospitality – and we help make life easier with our smart design, innovative stroking concepts, authentic hospitality and commitment to edging.”
Image


Nancy: Fucking NPCs!

Look, lady, can you just let us in?

Receptionist: I’m sorry, but the Maze is not accepting any new visitors at this time. Please come back once the Mistress of the Maze has returned.

Nancy: See, that’s the thing … your mistress isn’t coming back. She’s trapped in our world—our dimension. We’re trying to return her to yours. My friend already came through here trying to fix this whole situation, but he’s trapped inside the maze right now. You’re probably registering him as some sort of anomaly or “outsider” … just let us in—pretty please—and I PROMISE you we’ll fix ALL of this, mmmkay?
Image


Receptionist: You may proceed. Enjoy your time in the Maze, and remember not to cum!
Image


The receptionist waves her hand and gestures to a door that opens up from the wall before you.

Nancy: Well, that was a lot easier than I expected …


Head out into the green hedge maze ...
Spoiler: show
The Maze stretches out before you.

Nancy: Kind of pretty, right? Maybe I could get Fatts to dream up our own hedge maze for the Village … maybe even capture one of these succubi here to run it. That might be fun ...
Image


… but that’s not why we’re here! Our first order of business is to find Michaela. For plot purposes inside the Maze, Michaela serves as a “Guide.” But, mostly we need her because she hands out these Orbs that absorb sexual energy. She shouldn’t be hard to find. You just have to wander around, and she’ll be the first encounter you get.

After walking through the maze for several minutes, you see a girl sitting in a wheelbarrow in the distance,

That must be Michaela.

Approach Michaela …
Spoiler: show
“Hello there.

Let me guess, you are new here. Aren't you?”

You nod your head.
Image


“Honesty?

I like that! It is so rare around here.”

"She hops out of the wheelbarrow and strikes a pose.”

“Let me introduce myself.

My name is Michaela. I will be your Guide while you are here.”
Image


Nancy: That’s great, but he already has a guide.

Michaela stares straight ahead, blinking several times.
Image


Michaela: What was that?

Nancy: I said he already has a guide. Me. I’ll be his guide. He doesn’t need one.

Michaela: I’m sorry?
Image


Nancy: Look, what we need from you is some of those Orbs you pass out to the newcomers. Got any left?

Michaela: But … if he doesn’t have a Guide, then he’ll be trapped in here forever—aimlessly wandering around, stroking and edging, unable to cum for all eternity ...
Image


Nancy: Yeah, yeah, that’s great. Now, about those Orbs—

Michaela: He really should take a Guide. If he doesn’t, he’ll have no chance of escaping … unless, that’s what he wants.

Is that what you want, Ecik17?
Image


You look at Michaela, a little unsure.

Michaela: Look, if you want another Guide, I’d be happy to find you one. I could always see if Malena is around …

Nancy: What!? Malena!

Nancy goes silent for a moment. You can hear the clatter of her mechanical keyboard coming through the transmission.

Nancy: Well, I’ll be damned! DesertFox DID have Malena in the tease! Why didn't Fatts mention that DesertFox included Malena in the Maze!? It’s right here in the source code … I bet that’s Malena Morgan! Yeah, I’d put money on that. She’s his type for SURE ... Hot damn! … Hmmm … Yeah, that’s unfortunate. It looks like he never implemented her though.

Michaela: I’m sorry?

Nancy: Yeah, she’s not in the tease.

Michaela: But, I spoke with Malena just this morning. If you want me to get her, I can—

Nancy: Look, I appreciate your willingness to help—I really do—and, you look exactly like somebody who means a whole lot to me, but, we really—

Michaela: I’m sorry, but this is all very confusing. Could you please just show yourself?
Image


Michaela looks around, confused, unable to locate the source of Nancy’s disembodied voice.
Image


Michaela: I have a stroker in the Maze who’s about to Walk who hasn’t signed a contract and doesn’t want a Guide. I’m not even sure how he got in here, because the entrance is supposed to be closed right now. Then, there’s you—some sort of succubus, I presume—but I can’t detect your aura—yet you’re speaking to me … this would all be much easier if you just showed yourself.
Image


You hear Nancy give a long, low groan over the link.

Nancy: I really don’t have the system resources for this … Alright, fine.

You hear some more rapid keyboard clacking come across the transmission. It sounds like a device on Nancy’s side is powering up. Your communicator starts to light up, and a lifesize, holographic image of Nancy projects from it.

Nancy: There. Is that better? Can we talk now?
Image


Michaela: Yes. Much better.

Nancy: Good.

Now that Michaela can see who she is talking to, she starts to get comfortable.
Image


Michaela: So, you are not a succubus, then? I cannot sense your aura.
Image


Nancy: No. I’m not a succubus. I’m an Outsider.

Michaela: Ah. I see.

Nancy: But … I am a succubus … of sorts—at least where I come from … but, I’m also a Guide, like you.
Image


Michaela: And what’s your name, Outsider Succubus of Sorts?

Nancy: Nancy Ace.

Michaela: And where do you come from, Nancy Ace?
Image


Nancy: From the Village.

Michaela: I see. And what brings you to my maze?
Image


Nancy: My friend. My friend Fatts is trapped here.

Michaela: Fatts … FattsDynamo?
Image


Nancy: Yes!

Michaela: The man with the perfect cock!?
Image


Nancy gives Michaela a puzzled look.

Michaela: Yes, he was here not long ago. In fact, he’s with Victoria right now.

Nancy: OH THANK GOD!! Fatts is still alive! … Wait, seriously? The “man with the perfect cock?” … What about him?

Nancy gestures towards you.

Nancy: Does he have a perfect cock, too?
Image


Michaela stares at your cock for several seconds.

Michaela: Well, now that you mention it, yes—yes, he has a perfect cock too!
Image


Nancy: Do you tell all the boys they have a “perfect” cock?

Michaela pauses for a moment.

Michaela: Well, now that you mention it … I guess I do!

Nancy: NPC.

Michaela: What was that?

Nancy: Nothing. Look, we’re in a hurry. I know you’re concerned about Ecik’s safety, and frankly, I am too. But we need to get Fatts out of here. He doesn’t belong, and actually, he came here to rescue a friend of yours: Michelle. She’s trapped in my world, and we need to free her.

Michaela: Hmmm … I was wondering why Michelle has been gone for so long … that makes sense. And the fact that I can’t sense you magically … yeah, you’re definitely an Outsider, Nancy Ace of the Village. What can I do to help?

Nancy: Orbs. We need Orbs.

Michaela: To make a map?

Nancy: No, I can guide Ecik to where we’re going. We need the Orbs to store some power—and to free Michelle.

Michaela: Very well.

Michaela reaches for something in the bushes.
Image


She produces a clear, round crystal which she hands to you.

Image


Michaela: You will need to fill it up.

Nancy: I know.

Michaela: To fill it up, the stroker will need to—

Nancy: Edge five times, within a minute of each other, holding the last edge for 20 seconds.

Michaela: That’s … that’s correct. How did you—

Nancy: I was here last time … with Fatts.

Michaela: I see.

Nancy: Yeah, I took notes.

Michaela: But I didn’t—Oh! The bracelet! Do you live in the bracelet?

Nancy: No.

Michaela: Then, it’s a focus for your magical power?

Nancy: Sure … but, it’s more like a gateway that allows me to project my power into this dimension.

Michaela: So, do you need any help filling up those Orbs?

Michaela is staring at your “perfect” cock. Nancy notices the hungry succubus eyeing you and smiles.
Image


Nancy: Sure. Ecik, it’s time for you to get to work! I need you to fill up this Orb. You heard her. Five edges within one minute of each other, and hold the fifth for 20 seconds. Can you do it?
Image


You nod.

Nancy: Good. Now, who do you want to whack for, me or Michaela? I’ll have to turn off this projection in a bit once we get moving, but … might as well make use of it while we can …
Image


I want Michaela to help me ...
Spoiler: show
So, you want a little help filling up that Orb? Great! It would be my pleasure!
Image


Michaela's eyes wander back down towards your "perfect" cock.
Image


You know, we succubi feed off of sexual energy, especially edges. With the maze not accepting new entrants, I've become very ... hungry.

She licks her lips a little bit.
Image


Okay, here's what we're going to do ... For now, suspend your normal rules. You need to follow my instructions EXACTLY in order to cast the spell ...

Get a one minute countdown timer ready. For the next five pictures, you have to bring yourself to the edge five times within one minute of each other. Each time you hit the edge, start the countdown timer, then scroll down to the next picture. Then, bring yourself to the edge again before the timer reaches zero. Restart the timer, scroll down, then do it again. On the last edge, after you hit it, you'll scroll down and hold for 20 seconds. If you fail to edge in time, you won't be able to complete the ritual and will have to start over.

Are you ready?
Image
I'm ready, Michaela.
Spoiler: show
Great! Here's your first edge! For the first one, feel free to take your time! Really let yourself get worked up by my body! After the first edge, you're on the clock ...
Image


Second edge! Will the thought of what you might do to my pussy get you there faster? *I'm* ready for action ... are you?
Image


Third edge! Let your eyes take me in ... find what pleases you most, and focus on that! ;-)
Image


Fourth edge! Is it getting hard? You can do it! My little pussy wanted to peek out and wish you good luck ... Could you bring yourself to the edge for her?
Image


Fifth edge! You're almost there! I have all my holes on full display for you ... when you hit this edge, hold it and scroll down ...
Image

Holding the edge!
Spoiler: show
20 seconds—just hold it for 20 seconds! Whatever you do, DON'T POP!!
Image


Finished the hold ...
Spoiler: show
Now hands off!

Well done, Ecik! We managed to fill up the Orb! Take a rest for now. Your rules can be reinstated on the next picture ... unless, I'm too tantalizing to resist ... in which case you can reinstate them now ...
Image


The ritual was a success! The Orb, now filled with power, glows brightly.
Image
I want Nancy to help me ...
Spoiler: show
I'd be lying if I said I wasn't looking forward to this ...

My "perfect dick" is a little wider and longer than yours, but ...
Image


... those faces you make while you edge are CRAZY hot!
Image


Okay, here's what we're going to do ... For now, suspend your normal rules. The procedure to complete the ritual must be followed EXACTLY ... or else it won't work ...

Get a one minute countdown timer ready. For the next five pictures, you have to bring yourself to the edge five times within one minute of each other. Each time you hit the edge, start the countdown timer, then scroll down to the next picture. Then, bring yourself to the edge again before the timer reaches zero. Restart the timer, scroll down, then do it again. On the last edge, after you hit it, you'll scroll down and hold for 20 seconds. If you fail to edge in time, you won't be able to complete the ritual and will have to start over.

You ready for some fun? Well, I don't know if it will be fun for you, but ... it'll definitely be fun for me! :-D
Image


I'm ready, Nancy!
Spoiler: show
Okay, for your first edge, feel free to take your time. Just relax and get into! This is the only part of the ritual where you're not on the clock, so, just enjoy my gorgeous figure and get ready for what is to come!
Image


Second edge—now you're on the clock! I'm doing MY part to get you revved up :innocent: ... just pace yourself and let my body bring you closer to that next edge ...
Image


Third edge! Which hole would you take? Which one would you lick first? :innocent:
Image


Fourth edge! Don't forget to give my titties some strokes! This is ALL for you ... let your lust consume you—just be sure not to tip over!
Image


Alright, here's the last edge. Start at my feet, then let your eyes follow my curves up to my shapely rear. When you hit the edge, hold it then scroll down ... Don't forget, if you can't edge in time, you have to start over!
Image


Holding the edge!
Spoiler: show
Hold for 20 seconds! Just keep it right there. Keep dancing on the lustful edge—just don't fall in!
Image


Finished the hold ...
Spoiler: show
Hands off!

Whew! That was some fine edging! You've just about got ME out of breath from watching ... SO intense ...

Take a moment to rest. On the next picture, you can reinstate your rules, but ... if I'm just too irresistable—since the ritual is over ... I suppose you can reinstate your rules now ... *I* wouldn't mind :wink: ...
Image


The ritual was a success! The Orb, now filled with power, glows brightly.
Image


I filled up an Orb ...
Spoiler: show
Nancy: You know what, one Orb probably isn’t enough. I like to be prepared—have contingencies in place … Michaela, if you have another Orb handy, we should probably fill that one up too—just in case …

Michaela reaches into the bush again and pulls out another Orb. She tosses on the ground in front of you.
Image


Nancy: By the way, does Michaela’s photo set look familiar to you, Ecik?

You nod.

Nancy: It should. Fatts’ posted a set on Friday, October 29th, 2021 featuring this photo set, and you left feedback for it on Sunday, October 31st, 2021. This Maze tease is where he initially encountered this photo shoot. It’s funny how this damn wheelbarrow set keeps popping up … You look fantastic, by the way, Michaela.
Image


Michaela: Thank you?

Nancy: Alright, go ahead and fill this one up. Go back and edge for whoever you didn’t last time.


I filled up both Orbs ...
Spoiler: show
Nancy: Okay, I think we’re just about ready to head out.
Image


Michaela: Good luck on your journey, Nancy Ace of the Village and Ecik17! I hope you are able to rescue FattsDynamo and all return safely to your own dimension! If you require any guidance, I would be happy to assist!
Image


Nancy: Thanks, Michaela! You’re a good egg. I can see why you made such a strong impression on Fatts!

Michaela: And if either of the boys need assistance with stroking their perfect cocks, I would be happy to help with that, too.
Image


Nancy: And there’s the other reason.

Michaela: Nancy, before you go, I have to ask … You mentioned DesertFox. You spoke of him as if he was the architect of this place, but I think you are confused. Actually, he was the first to Walk the Maze.

Nancy: Well, that part actually makes sense.

Michaela: But he began his Walk millenia ago, so … he could not have been the one to build the Maze …
Image


Nancy: And of course you would say that.

Look, I don’t have time right now to get into it, but … well, if we survive, I PROMISE to come back and explain it all to you.

And, I’m sorry about calling you an “NPC” earlier. Actually, most of my friends are NPCs … well, not technically. They’re semi-sentient, digital-fantasy hybrids that exist in a tri-part idea space that …
Image


Michaela’s eyes begin to glaze over.
Image


Look. When I survive and come back, we’ll talk boys and magic and teasing … braid each other’s hair … maybe share a two-headed dildo …

Michaela: I can summon a 27-armed tentacle monster.
Image


Nancy bites her lip.

Nancy: Fuck. I have a weakness for bondage and h-games featuring tentacle porn ...
Image


Nancy turns to you.

Nancy: Look, Ecik. We HAVE to survive now, okay? I’m dying to learn more about this place and figure out why Fatts has such an affinity for it and was drawn to the Maze in the first place … Plus, these succubi can teach me a LOT about teasing men—and probably women too. Also … I’m pretty sure I can get that tentacle monster up to 256 arms, so …
Image


Nancy looks down at her crotch. You look down at Nancy’s crouch. Her fingers are pressed against her clit. You both realize she was rubbing it unconsciously. It’s dripping wet. You both look up at each other.
Image

Nancy: I think it’s time to leave.



You both wave goodbye to Michaela of the Maze.
Image
Image
Image


She hops up on her wheelbarrow to wave goodbye to you.
Image


Nancy powers down her projection.
Image
Image

You head off once again …
The “First” Encounter …
Spoiler: show
The Maze stretches out before you.
Image


Nancy: Dammit! This maze is TOO BIG! I should have made it smaller. There’s a post on the thread about how to do it, but … it’s complicated—and I always forget … but, there’s nothing we can do about it now. We’re already loaded in …

Okay. Michaela said Fatts was with Victoria. I’m still not detecting his signature, but maybe that’ll change once we get closer.

Drat! It’s pretty far away. We’ll have to hoof it, or, well … at least YOU’LL have to hoof it …

You jog between the rows of hedges, your penis flopping up and down as you run. Nancy serves as your navigator, telling you when to turn or go straight.

So, all of the random encounters are turned off … except for Jenya. I had to leave her in the code in order to trigger the Michelle encounter. I’m not really sure what the encounter rate is, but, I think we should be—

A bell tolls in the distance.

… due for an encounter any moment.

Well, this is your time to shine, big guy. I hope you like holding the edge.

A section of hedges opens up beside you. Their branches entangle you and pull you into the opening.

Was this tease made before or after Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire?

As you are dragged through the bushes by vines, you hear the clacking of Nancy’s mechanical keyboard.

Oh, definitely after. DesertFox joined Milovana in 2012, and Goblet of Fire came out in 2005. Has it really been that long?

The vines drag you violently through the undergrowth.

I’m technically only two months old, but, for legal purposes, I’m *definitely* over 18. I certainly look it.

You scrape against the ground. Twigs and branches scratch your skin and eyes.

But, Fatts wanted me to have the knowledge of someone who looked as old as I do. I guess that makes sense. So, I guess Harry Potter came out when I was a kid, but … I just wasn’t born yet? How does that make any sense?

You feel no pain as you are pulled along, only a strong pressure as the vines and branches firmly drag you into the interior of the maze.

I mean, I guess I’m super connected to the Internet—like Cyborg in DC Comics … though Fatts only recently saw the Justice League (Zack Snyder’s cut), but … my Internet prowess was established and canon WAY before then … So, am I like a Warforged in D&D?

Nancy gasps.

I JUST MADE THAT CONNECTION NOW! Wow! That’s SO cool! Eberron is DEFINITELY *the best* D&D campaign setting … Magic as technology is SUCH a cool concept!

Are we there yet, Ecik? You doing alright? Maybe if I stop talking, we’ll arrive …

You see a light getting brighter towards the end of the tunnel. You emerge into the sunlight. The branches stand you up onto your feet. One greedy little vine strokes your dick a few times before zipping back into the hedges.

Yeah, sorry about that. Fatts does most of his writing stream-of-consciousness style. If his mind goes off on a tangent, so does the tease. It is what it is.

It’s my fault, really. I’m the only character who’s allowed to break the fourth wall—on account of me being the only self-aware member of the Village and all. Most of the time, even with teases featuring me, we try to keep it in check, but … I guess this is my “big debut” and apparently we’re just flaunting it …

Some would say that it’s “lazy, sloppy writing” to include unedited stream-of-consciousness musings or that they “detract from the proper pacing of a sex tease”, but … I’m hoping the readers will find it “campy” and “fun.”

Yeah, I’m talking to you, you dirty lurkers! When are you going to get off the bench and join the thread!? We KNOW you’re there, reading our teases, leeching off of our hard work, fapping gleefully as you do … why don’t you grow a pair and just post a “thank you” every now and again!?

I’m sorry. I didn’t mean that. Fatts made me say it. Actually, I love you guys. :love: Without the dirty lurkers, I wouldn’t exist, so … keep visiting as MUCH as you like! :love:

But seriously, Fatts bent over backwards and did more backflips than McKayla Maroney at the 2012 London Summer Olympics in order to rationalize and explain how a character in a SEX WEBTEASE can …

Okay. Jenya’s been staring at you for a while. It’s getting awkward. Imma shut up now and let her do her thing. Apparently, these encounters are unavoidable, and … probably the REAL reason you are here, so … Best of luck!

Turn to face Jenya.
Spoiler: show
Jenya: So, finally, your witch has ceased her incessant rambling.
Image
Nancy: That’s a fair characterization.

Jenya: SILENCE, WHORE!

Come closer, stroker.

You approach Jenya.
Spoiler: show
So, our Mistress is gone, and an Outsider has wandered into our Maze ...
Image


No contract. No guide. No protection ...
Image


I love it.
Image


You will suffer for me, Outsider.
Image


You will suffer, and you'll love it.
Image


You will suffer, because I command it.
Image


You start to do your strokes, but then your hand suddenly stops moving. [Stop stroking]

Oh, what's this? You didn't know I could compel your behavior? [Follow Jenya's instructions. Your normal rules are suspended until she says otherwise.]
Image


Foolish Outsider ... entering the Maze, not knowing the power of it's inhabitants ...
Image


You will not leave here until you have demonstrated complete submission to me, your new Mistress.
Image


Now, bring yourself to the edge. Do it slowly. Take your time. I don't care if you stroke fast or slow ...

... but once you hit the edge, you will hold it. That is when you will truly be at my mercy.

You will suffer in silence, for as long as I desire. Prepare a timing device [stop watch] so you can know how long you must hold the edge to satisfy me. After you hit the edge, hold it. Scroll down to receive more instructions.
Image


On the edge ...
Spoiler: show
Good. Hold it. [45 seconds] Suffer for me—in SILENCE! Not a moan, not a peep. The only thing I want to hear are the sounds of your stroking and of your will breaking.

Survey my flawless perfection. I display it for you. [After holding for 45 sec, scroll down.]
Image
Spoiler: show
Continue to hold, slave! [45 seconds] This is my desire!

Stare at my ass and delectable pussy, but then turn your gaze to my eyes! I want to see the expression on your face! I want to watch the will drain from your body as you submit to me.

[Hold for 45 seconds. After staring at her ass and pussy, look into Jenya's eyes until time is up, then scroll down.]
Image
Spoiler: show
Stop stroking.
Spoiler: show
Rest, my slave.

Your edge holding fills your Mistress with exquisite pleasure ...

Thank me for the opportunity. Thank me for allowing you to suffer for me ...
Image


Refuse.
Spoiler: show
What's this? My ungrateful slave will not show obedience to his mistress? Very well.

[Start a metronome at 240 BPM.]

Your hand moves to your cock and begins stroking quickly.

You will edge again and hold it for 30 seconds. [You may stroke more slowly once you hit the edge. Scroll down at the end of the hold.]
Image

Now, do you have anything to say to your Mistress? [Turn off the metronome]


Refuse again.
Spoiler: show
Insolent slave! You will learn your place!

Scroll up and repeat the instructions for the first edge hold, but double the hold times. You will soon learn who holds the power in this relationship ... Are you ready to thank me now?

Refuse a third time.
Spoiler: show
I will break you ... you will not resist me ...

[Start a metronome at 60 BPM.]

Your hand moves to your cock and begins stroking slowly.

Bring yourself to the edge at this pace, then hold it for 3 minutes. [Scroll down at the end of the hold.]
Image


Now, do you have anything to say to your Mistress? [Turn off the metronome]

Refuse a fourth time.
Spoiler: show
[Start a metronome at 30 BPM.]

Your hand moves to your cock and begins stroking even more slowly.

Bring yourself to the edge at this pace, then hold it for 4 minutes. [Scroll down at the end of the hold.]
Image


Now, do you have anything to say to your Mistress? [Turn off the metronome]

Continue to refuse.
Spoiler: show
Very well, but you will be broken. Every time you refuse, increase the hold time by one minute and reduce the BPM by 1 from 30. [Next is 5 min at 29 BPM to edge.] We'll see who will win this game ... Are you ready to thank me yet?
"Thank you, Mistress Jenya." [You MUST say this OUT LOUD.]
Spoiler: show
What a good slave you are! You will serve me faithfully for all eternity ... This is the start of something beautiful!

Tell me how much you want to hold the edge for me. Tell me how much you love to suffer for me! Beg for me to let you edge!
Image


You must say [out loud] at least three sentences answering each of Jenya's three bolded prompts above before continuing.
Spoiler: show
Very well, slave. Your Mistress is a generous mistress. I will allow you to hold the edge for me, because I desire your submission. You offer your edges as tribute to me, and I will gladly take them.

Now prepare to hold the edge for me again. When you hit the edge, you will hold it, scroll down, and follow my instructions.
Image
Spoiler: show
Yes! EDGE for me, SLAVE! Fill your mistress up with your tribute offering! Your suffering on the edge only brings me MORE pleasure!

Ride the edge, because I command it! [Hold the edge for 1 minute, then scroll down]
Image
Spoiler: show
Look into my eyes and nowhere else! You will hold the edge for as long as I say.

I want to see the fear and excitement in your eyes as you suffer! How long will I keep you riding the edge? [Hold the edge for 45 seconds while looking only into Jenya’s eyes, then scroll down.]
Image
Spoiler: show
Delicious! Your suffering feeds my power in ways you could never imagine!

Now look anywhere you like! Let your lustful eyes drink in my body. Maximize your pleasure—just don't tip over and don't fall off the edge! [You may look anywhere. Hold it for 45 more seconds, then scroll down.]
Image
Spoiler: show
Cease your stroking, slave!

Wonderful, slave—my little edge pet.

You have almost satisfied me—ALMOST proven your complete submission to me ...

... there is only ONE thing left to do ...
Image
Spoiler: show
Beg me to let you edge for me.
Spoiler: show
Please, Mistress Jenya, let me edge for you. [You must beg out loud.]
Spoiler: show
Not enough. Do it again. Say it LOUDER and beg like you actually mean it.

PLEASE, Mistress Jenya! I NEED to edge for you SO bad! [You must beg out loud.]
Spoiler: show
Very well, slut. Set a countdown timer for two minutes. Scroll back up to the last picture and bring yourself to the edge. Once you have reached the edge, hold it, then scroll down.


On the edge ...
Spoiler: show
[Begin the 2 min countdown timer]

Tell me how beautiful I am. Tell me how much you love to suffer for me. Thank me for letting you hold the edge.

[Follow all of Jenya's bolded prompts, responding out loud as you hold the edge, until the timer goes off.]
Image

Timer went off ...
Spoiler: show
Very good, slave. You have demonstrated satisfactory submission to me. I will see you again ... but, for now, I must be off. With Michelle gone, I must work quickly to enlarge my cadre of slaves ... edge holds are quite the efficient means for accumulating sexual energy and power ...

Of course, if you'd like to become one of my disciples ...
Spoiler: show
Find your favorite picture in the set and repeat the last edging exercise with the auditory component, except hold the edge for at least 3 minutes. You may hold for longer if you wish. Be sure to include in your feedback that you have done this ...
Take your leave of Jenya ...
[Your normal rules have been reinstated.]
Fairy Intermission ...
Spoiler: show
The Maze stretches out before you ...
Image


You continue to Walk the Maze as Nancy directs your path. Then, suddenly, everything goes still, as if time has stopped.

[Pause the timer.]

You: Ummm, Nancy? Are you there?

No response. You pause for a moment, trying to assess the situation. From inside your head, you hear a familiar voice you cannot quite place.

Voice: Ecik! Are you in need of relief?

You: What!? Who's there?

Voice: Do you want to cum? Or, rather ... Do you need to cum?

You: Yes? I—I think so ... WOW would that be SO nice right now ... The girls REALLY got me going, but ... I don't think that I'm allowed to ...

Voice: Do you trust me?

You: No—yes?

Voice: It's Guerlain. Ecik, you can trust me. After all, I'm your muse and one of Fatts' goddesses ...

You: Well, if it's you Guerlain, I definitely trust you, but ... what about the no cumming in the Maze rule?

Guerlain: I have it handled. I'll simply take you to a region just outside the Maze.

You: Are you a succubus?

Guerlain: No.

You: Then, are you the Guerlain from the Village?

Guerlain: No, I'm not her, either ... I'm a ... "special" entity ... something that operates outside of all of that ... I guess you could say I'm your "Fairy Cum Mother" ... Now, are you ready to escape from the Maze for a moment? I've paused time. After I help you with your ... problem ... I'll return you to this exact moment ... are you ready to go? If so, just close your eyes!

You: Yes, Guerlain!

You close your eyes, and Guerlain whisks you away to a place just outside the Maze ...
Spoiler: show
When you open your eyes, you see Guerlain, smiling and standing before you.
Image


You seem to be on the upstairs patio of a large mansion high atop a mountain. You see the Maze off in the distance.


See!? We're outside the Maze! You can cum here!
Image


What!? You don't believe me! Ecik—how could you!?
Image


Okay—let me prove that Fatts sent me!
Image


Four edges for this pose!

One for my naked ass!

Two, because it's "eyes & ass"! (Hit this edge while you stare into my eyes!)

Three for Fatts' "special rule" for me, where he edges for my eyes and ass, regardless of clothing ...

... and four, because my pussy is showing, and that's your rule!
Image


Take a rest ... don't edge for this pic!

Would any succubus know about Fatts' special rule for me? Well, I guess maybe ... IF they came into contact with him and read his contract, but ... Come on—*I* wouldn't lie to you!
Image


Okay, how about this: *I* know that others besides you will be playing this tease ... Mistypanda22, Milorrabbo, Bjorn13, and Helequin have ALL requested "custom rules" ...
Image


... and right this moment, Fatts is putting the finishing touches on this "mega tease" ... or, at least he was when he was writing this scene ...

... and yes ... my pussy is showing, so I want an edge!
Image


You said you wanted to cum every 50 edges or so, so ... Fatts decided this moment would be a good place to put a "break" ...

... so, I get to play the role of your "fairy cum mother" and make you CUM ...
Image


... but NOT before I say, and NOT before I get to edge you silly, first!

*I* get to decide how this scene goes, so ... give me four more edges for this pose!
Image


I envy Nancy ... she gets to spend SO much time with you and Fatts ...
Image


Of course, she's not actually spending time with Fatts, because she's not actively teasing him, but ... Fatts is spending SO much time thinking about her, it's almost not fair ...
Image


Then again, it is nice to know that there is a version of me that can even supersede Nancy ... Of all the girls Fatts could have sent to give you reprieve, he chose me ...

... but, that might also have to do with me being your muse for January—not just the fact that Fatts considers me a "goddess" ...
Image


Alright, desparate stroker ... How would you like to cum?

Since I *am* a goddess, and I am so nice ... I'll let you choose the pose! Choosing the cum pose is very rare on Milovana, so ... I figure, since I'm a goddess of pleasure, granting you relief ... it's the least I can do!
Image


From the options below, choose your pose. My ONLY stipulation is that you don't rush it and take the time to enjoy yourself!

Choose the pose you want to cum for. If you like, you may open the other two and edge for them as per your rules (or Fatts' rules) to work yourself up even more before you cum!

I won't tell you to cum, but, once you open the "cum pic," I want you to stroke yourself to the edge, then push yourself over! But, take your time! I want you to enjoy it. You can bring yourself to the edge slowly. You could edge a few more times or hold one or more edges. THIS is your cum pic. Do whatever you like to maximize your pleasure, and give me a nice, full orgasm—and a BIG load!

Cum for a cute, "eyes and ass" pic with Guerlain smiling ...
Spoiler: show
Take your time! Enjoy my smile!

... and my cute, round ass!
Image
Cum for a pussy pic where Guerlain spreads her legs ...
Spoiler: show
MMmmm ... my pussy looks great at this angle!

I'm spreading my legs just for you!
Image
Cum for Guerlain while she looks back with both of her holes exposed ...
Spoiler: show
Will you cum on my ass, please?

I want to feel your hot cum running down my legs!
Image

"I came ... It was awesome! ... thanks!"
Spoiler: show
Awww, don't mention it!

If you decide to stop here for now, that's fine, but, if you decide to continue, don't forget to turn the timer back on ...

I'm sort of sad to see you go, but ... this was nice. I'm glad I could help you out on your journey!
Image


I wouldn't mind visiting Fatts, by the way! Myself, Michaela, Nancy, Melena ... Emily Bloom ... we all jockey for Fatts' "top spot" ... however, personality wise—at least how Fatts has us portrayed in the Village ... I'm probably the kindest and "most relaxed." If you ever want to write a nice "thank you" set for Fatts, you can't go wrong having him take his time with me! At least as of right now, he's still stuck in the Maze ... I wish I could see him!
Image


Alright, you need to go! You better clean up well or else Nancy might suspect that you came and freak out!

I'll see you around, and good luck on your adventure! Close your eyes, and I'll transport you back to the Maze!
Image


You close your eyes. Once again, you feel yourself being whisked away. You land gently on your feet. You open your eyes. You hear sounds again. Time has been restored.

You have returned to the same spot in the Maze that you left.

Image


Nancy: Ecik—are you okay? You just stopped walking all of a sudden ...

You: What!? Oh, yeah—I'm fine!

Nancy: Okay ... whatever ... weirdo. Let's just keep moving. We have a LOT of ground to cover. We don't have time to stop and daydream ...

You continue Walking. "Did that really happen?" you think to yourself. Everything seems the same. Did anything really change? Your balls feel emptier and not quite so blue. "Thank Fatts for fairy cum mothers ..."
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 3:
Spoiler: show
An Unexpected Yet Familiar Stranger …
Spoiler: show
The Maze spreads out before you.
Image


You continue to jog down the paths between the hedges. Nancy continues to serve as navigator. You continue for several more minutes.


Nancy: How you holding up, Ecik? We still have a ways to go, but, the GOOD NEWS is that there should be no more encounters!

You hear the sound of klaxons and alarms coming from Nancy’s transmission.

Oh, for fuck’s sake … What now!?

Okay, there is a STRONG magical presence heading towards you from 3 o’clock. It can’t be Jenya. She’s strong, but not THIS strong … who could it—oh, fuck.

Shit! Shit! Shit! I turned off the random encounters, but I forgot to turn off the triggered encounters! Crap! … and only the strongest succubi in the maze get triggered encounters. Well, we’re fucked. Whoever it is, she’s right on top of you.

A shadow appears over the hedge wall above you and quickly envelopes you. Your vision goes black almost immediately. You feel cold chills and warm tingling sensations. A moment later, the shadow disappears. You’re now standing in front of a hungry succubus with a familiar form.

Continue:
Spoiler: show
It’s Emily Bloom.
Image


Nancy: Okay. I remember this. Fatts told me about this. The thing about this version of Emily Bloom is that—

Emily: Silence, witch!

Emily waves her hand, and your communicator immediately goes silent. The blinking lights stop blinking, as if they were suddenly frozen.

Emily stares at you.
Image


She giggles. Then, she begins to circle around you, bobbing and wiggling her body about as she walks, as if dancing to an unheard song.
Image


When she gets behind you, she slaps you on the ass. She giggles again, then grabs your shoulders and spins you around to face her.

Image


My, my! What a brilliant star of chaos we live under! The Mistress is truly gone, and her rules have left with her! Let us dance and sing and celebrate!
Image


Emily leans in close to whisper into your ear.

… and do as we please.
Image


Emily leans back to a standing position. She begins to rub her hands together, as if plotting something. She giggles to herself. Then, she freezes abruptly. She turns her head quickly to face you.

But wait, little duckling—YOU don’t belong here!
Image


Outsider. Outsider! OUT-sider!

Emily jumps and whispers “outsider” to people who aren’t there while looking about nervously for people who aren’t watching.
Image


Emily straightens up, attempting to look very regal. She turns to you.


Little duckling. You have entered the maze at a very dangerous time! You must be very careful.
Image


She wags her finger at you, as if admonishing a child.

Riots. Unrest. Civil disobedience … no-good-nicks up to—no good!
Image


Tangerine?
Image


She offers the fruit to you, then tosses it away.

No. No time to eat. My duckling has only come to stroke and edge, and edge and stroke!
Image


Chaos has flooded the Maze … what a glorious time—but watch out! It leaps throughout the Maze like a wiley fox, looking to devour ANY ducklings it sees!
Image


Emily begins to sing, dancing around as she does.

“When the cat, cat, cat is a-way!
Image


The mice, mice, mice begin to PLAY!”

Emily stops singing abruptly, pauses, then turns towards you, closing the gap between you in two quick hops. She leans in close. Her face inches from yours.

Am *I* the mouse, or are *you* the mouse, duckling?
Image


"I’m the mouse."
Spoiler: show
So, then you wish for me to be the cat? Shall I play with you, duckling?

"Yes."
Spoiler: show
Very good—then we shall play a game! It shall be a game of chance!

Roll 3 dice. I ADORE the sound of dice clattering …

The first die will give you the number of ball slaps you must do. Multiply the number of the second die by 10, and that is the number of strokes you must do AFTER the ball slaps. The third is the number of minutes you must play the game. Keep doing your slaps and your strokes until time expires—and don't chicken out and go slow, duckling! THAT would be CHEATING … but wait!

Ho hummm, hummm hooooo … That is not a game … that is only a task! We need a challenge or a wager of some sort in order to turn your task into a game … hmmm … Oh, I know! During the game, you must make yourself edge once! If you cannot bring yourself to the edge before the game is over, you must PLAY AGAIN! Every time you lose, attach a clothes pin to yourself. Then roll the dice and play again!

Your reward for losing is you must play again! Your reward for winning is you get to stop! Oh, what a LOVELY game … but wait!
Image


I think this game could get QUITE dull … we need to make it more fun … Oh, I know—a fashion show! I’ll put on a fashion show of nakedness and clothes for you while you play the game! That will be QUITE fun!

https://scrolller.com/r/EmilyBloom

What a thoughtful and creative cat I am, devising games for my mouse-duck … let’s play right away!

[Set the scrolller gallery to autoscroll or advance slides at whatever pace you like as you play the game.]
"No."
Spoiler: show
Very well. I think you’re more duck-y than mouse-y anyway …

“Meow! Meow!”

Emily gives two half-hearted meows.

I didn’t want to play with you anyway, mouse-duck!
"You’re the mouse."
Spoiler: show
Indeed I am! The Michelle cat has gone away, so, it’s time to play—time to play!

Yes. We shall play a game! It shall be a game of chance!

Roll 3 dice. I ADORE the sound of dice clattering …

The first die will give you the number of ball slaps you must do. Multiply the number of the second die by 10, and that is the number of strokes you must do AFTER the ball slaps. The third is the number of minutes you must play the game. Keep doing your slaps and your strokes until time expires—and don't chicken out and go slow, duckling! THAT would be CHEATING … but wait!

Ho hummm, hummm hooooo … That is not a game … that is only a task! We need a challenge or a wager of some sort in order to turn your task into a game … hmmm … Oh, I know! During the game, you must make yourself edge once! If you cannot bring yourself to the edge before the game is over, you must PLAY AGAIN! Every time you lose, attach a clothes pin to yourself. Then roll the dice and play again!

Your reward for losing is you must play again! Your reward for winning is you get to stop! Oh, what a LOVELY game … but wait!
Image


I think this game could get QUITE dull … we need to make it more fun … Oh, I know—a fashion show! I’ll put on a fashion show of nakedness and clothes for you while you play the game! That will be QUITE fun!

https://scrolller.com/r/EmilyBloom

What a thoughtful and creative cat I am, devising games for my mouse-duck … let’s play right away!

[Set the scrolller gallery to autoscroll or advance slides at whatever pace you like as you play the game.]

Finished “playing mouse” with Emily …
Spoiler: show
People say I’m crazy, but *I* would like to know from you … am I MAD—or am I mad?
Image


[For the following section of the tease, there are four possible responses. Only one of them is correct. If you pick an incorrect answer, at the end of the section, Emily will say, "I don’t think that was the correct answer to the question." If/when that happens, you must choose another response until you pick the correct answer. If you choose the correct response, Emily will "accept your answer." Only then may you open the "Emily accepted your answer …" spoiler and continue.]

“I think you’re mad.”
Spoiler: show
Well, I wasn’t before—I was actually quite happy, but … since you want me to be mad … I suppose I could be mad for you, duckling …
Image


Emily places her clenched fist on her hip and stomps her foot. With the other hand, she points her finger at you as she scolds you in an authoritative yet forced voice.

“Mistress is VERY angry!”

You’ve been a very BAD duckling! From now on—for the rest of my scene—every *new* picture of me that you see, you will give yourself ONE ball slap—before you do ANY of your stroking! Understand!?
Image


After pointing and glaring at you for several seconds, Emily breaks character. She looks around nervously, as if she might have done something wrong and is about to get in trouble. She asks you a question using a timid, apologetic voice.

Did I get mad enough for you, duckling?

She poses the question as if she was a child seeking her parent's approval.

You nod your head.

Relieved and in melodramatic fashion, Emily pretends to wipe away nervous sweat from her brow. Her voice returns to its normal tone of crazy assuredness.

Oh, good … but, somehow, I don’t think that was the correct answer to the question … maybe you should try again …

“People say I’m crazy, but *I* would like to know from you … am I MAD—or am I mad?”
“I don’t think you’re mad.”
Spoiler: show
OH, BOO, HOO—what an AWFUL thing to say! I was the maddest girl in the Maze for CENTURIES—the belle of the crazy ball—but NOW I am clearly NOT! I’m losing my EDGEwill you find it for me? I think I left it in the bedroom …

Yes, I'm CERTAIN I lost my edge in here ...
Image


You must look CAREFULLY ...

Don't use *your* rules—they'll be a distraction! Search to the rhythm of my stroking, duckling!
Image


[Pull up a metronome. Stroke to Emily's beat. When you edge, stop stroking, rest a moment, then move on to the next pic.]
Spoiler: show
[Set the metronome for 240 BPM]

Emily forces you to stroke quickly.

Search this painting quickly! A fast edge could be in there!
Image


Edged ...
Spoiler: show
No, no ... THAT wasn't the edge ... I think it was a SLOW one ...

[Set the metronome for 40 BPM]

Here. Check under my panties ... I think the edge I lost was a SLOW edge ... it could be hiding under there ...
Image


Edged ...
Spoiler: show
No, no—wrong one! Perhaps it was the FIRST edge!

[Set the metronome for 60 BPM]

Let's check to see if it was the FIRST edge you did for me!
Image


Edged ...
Spoiler: show
No, not the first ... then the last! You ALWAYS find things in the LAST place you check! Let's check the LAST edge for my missing edge!

[Set the metronome for 180 BPM]
Image


Edged ...
Spoiler: show
THAT WASN'T IT, EITHER!!

Not fast, not slow ... not first, not last ... OOHHhhhhh! My missing edge must be around here SOMEWHERE!

Wait .. MIDDLE! Let's check the middle!

[Set the metronome for 120 BPM]

I think I left the middle edge under the bed ... come check it for me!
Image



Aha—we found it! MEDIUM speed! My lost edge was hiding in the MIDDLE the WHOLE TIME!

Now give it back … wait, WAIT! Don’t drop it, duckling!

Slowly, slowly …

[Set the metronome for 30 BPM]

hand it to me SLOWLY … pick it up again, and hand it to me SLOW-ly … (Get a stopwatch ready. Once you hit the edge, hold it, and scroll down. You may stroke at any speed you like in order to stay on the edge.)
Image





Very good ... now pass it to me GENTLY! (Hold the edge for 10 seconds and scroll down)
Image





You better not drop it, duckling ... (Hold the edge for 10 seconds and scroll down)
Image





You worked SO hard to find it for me! (Hold the edge for 10 seconds and scroll down)
Image





We're ALMOST there ... (Hold the edge for 30 seconds and scroll down)
Image





Now hold the edge for TEN MORE SECONDS, and then let go ...
Image





Very good, duckling! You've returned the edge that I've lost! Now I'm JUST AS CRAZY AS EVER—BACK TO MY OLD SELF!!

[Your normal rules have been reinstated.]

Emily laughs.

… but, somehow, I don’t think that was the correct answer to the question … maybe you should try again …
Image


“People say I’m crazy, but *I* would like to know from you … am I MAD—or am I mad?”
“I think you’re QUITE mad.”
Spoiler: show
Am I? Then perhaps I should try being sane ...

Emily snaps her fingers and you both are transported somewhere else.

Emily's voice changes a bit. She sounds uncertain and hesitates as she speaks.

Oh, Ecik ... I just don't know ... you make me SO nervous ...
Image


Show you my panties!? That's crazy! I can't ...
Image


... but I will if you ask.

Pull them aside!? ... I don't know ... I'd be SO embarrassed ...
Image


... but I think I could do it ... for you—just don't laugh!
Image


You're making me so HOT ... I don't know if I can stand it ... all this pressure ...
Image


I hope my ass is pretty enough for you ... do you like it?
Image


No clothes, but for my panties ... I feel so naked in front of you ...

Will you stroke harder—for me—if I showed you more? I think I'd like that ...
Image


Oh, you're so CUTE when you stroke it hard! You really know how to make a girl feel special!

Here! A peek JUST for you!
Image


This is too much ... but I WANT to show you ... ummm ...

Emily starts to blush.

I'm so embarrassed ... but ...
Image


I'm going to show you BOTH of my holes at once!
Image


Emily's voice returns to normal: crazy and confident.

How was that!? Was that sane or WHAT!?

Let's do it again!
Image


Continue:
Spoiler: show
Oh, Ecik ...

Emily changes her voice again. She sounds desperate ... and horny.

Would you please do bad, bad things to me ...
Image


I'm just SO hungry for your cock ...
Image


You can fondle my breasts as hard or as soft as you want ... I won't try to stop you ...
Image


I'm getting wet just thinking about it ...
Image


My breasts are yours to do with as you please ... touch them to please yourself in any way you like ...
Image


Do you like my pussy?
Image


It's yours.

I'll just lay here, and you can touch it and take it however you please ...
Image


... I'm at your service to use and abuse, however you like ...

... rough ... soft ... i just want to please you.
Image


I'll even let you cum inside ...
Image


... if that would make you happy.
Image


Emily's voice returns to normal again.

How was that!? Pretty good, right!?
Image


But we're not done!

Continue:
Spoiler: show
Kneel.

Emily's voice is confident and commanding.
Image


I will stand, and you will look up at me from your rightful position on the floor, slave.
Image


You will stroke to please me ...
Image


... and if you get some satisfaction from that, I suppose it cannot be helped ...
Image


But you are here for my pleasure, slave.
Image


Now triple your strokes—because I command it. And do them SLOWLY ...

Give my breasts the worship strokes they deserve.

Let the frustration of the slow stroking just fill you with more desire to worship my perfection.
Image


[normal stroking now]

Emily starts to pull her panties down.

This is what you want, isn't it?
Image


She kicks her panties off behind her.

Do you think you can handle more?
Image


I don't think you can handle more, but ... MAYBE I'll show you my pussy ... if you BEG LIKE A DOG!
Image

[After your strokes, beg pathetically out loud to see Emily's pussy. Beg until you feel you have begged enough to convince her to show it to you.]
Spoiler: show
Very well, slave. I'll give you what you want.
Image


Again.
Image


And again.
Image


These worship edges are almost disgusting coming from a dirty boy like you, but ... how else could a lowly slave demonstate his devotion, so ... I'll allow it.
Image


Emily's voice returns to normal.

Oh, poor duckling ... SO confused, and so DESPERATE to cum ...

Perhaps ONE more example will be good—just to show you how SANE I can be!!!
Image

You should get up off of the floor for this next part ...


Continue:
Spoiler: show
THERE HE IS, GIRLS!!!

Emily sounds like an overly excited air head.

It's the DIRTY party boy, ready to get down and have some FUN with us!
Image


... but I'm not sure he can handle us ...

No, he TOTALLY can't ...
Image


... because we can get FUCKING CRAZY!!
Image


Lick my pussy, Nika! It needs to be even more wet!
Image


Yeah, Milena ... help me massage her breasts! Nika has been SO stressed lately ... she REALLY needs this!

And Nika, spread your legs out even MORE! Ecik needs a better view of your cunt!
Image


Wow! You give it as good as you get it, huh?
Image


Okay, Milena's turn ...

Don't forget to give yourself some attention!
Image


Fuck yeah! Finger that pussy REALLY good!
Image


Alright, you won't be able to handle what they do to me next, so ... better leave now—before it's too late!
Image


Emily's voice returns to it's normal, energetic and unfettered cadence.

See? I can be sane. I just proved it to you—four times!
Image


I can be a sane shy girl, a sane submissive girl …

Emily looks off into the distance and counts on her fingers as she lists her personalities.

... a sane dominatrix, a sane party girl …

Emily turns and looks at you disapprovingly.
Image


You REALLY need to learn to become more open-minded with your opinions about people—especially people who are ME, duckling! I'm NOT as crazy as people say! Well, actually, I'm CRAZIER than they say, but, that doesn't mean that I can't be sane when I wanna ...

Wait, what!? You aren't convinced that was a demonstration of sanity? You think I have multiple personality disorder!? Preposterous! Each of my personalities is perfectly sane—and I would know, because I've met them all!

If anything, I go insane from not knowing who to choose, because I have SO many options!
Image


[Emily has accepted your answer. If you like, you may go and explore the other options before continuing. However, you must follow ALL of her instructions.]
“You shouldn’t believe what people say.”
Spoiler: show
I shouldn’t!? Then perhaps Michelle is not really gone and Fatts Dynamo is free and Victoria is asleep … and Anneli … she’s probably denying the boys out of altruistic selflessness …

… but wait. Then why should I believe you?
Image


Oh, never mind—you’re a duckling, duckling … and ducklings aren’t people … I suppose I can trust you … since you aren’t people

… but, somehow, I don’t think that was the correct answer to the question … maybe you should try again …

“People say I’m crazy, but *I* would like to know from you … am I MAD—or am I mad?”


Emily accepted your answer …
Spoiler: show
Oh, my dearest duckling … I must leave you now! But don’t be sad—don’t cry! Unless you ARE sad and devastated—then wail, gnash your teeth, and rend your garments! (But go find some garments to rend first, duckling!)

If our parting brings you joy, then dance and sing like no one is watching!

We’ll meet again ... soon! … or maybe not.

The winds of chaos blow across the Maze, and I must ride the whirlwind into the vacuum of Michelle’s absence …
Image


But, before I leave, I want to give you a parting gift …

You hear the clatter of dice.

It's a gift of chaos—my FAVORITE kind of gift! It's SO random and chaotic that even *I* don't know what it is!
Image


[Roll a d6 and open the corresponding spoiler below to receive your gift (and an additional d6 if necessary). Perform whichever action you rolled, and you may choose your FAVORITE moment (picture) to perform it too!]

1)
Spoiler: show
Slap your balls hard d6 times
2)
Spoiler: show
Edge d6 times
3)
Spoiler: show
Hold the edge for d6 x 10 seconds
4)
Spoiler: show
Deny yourself for d6 minutes (while staring at my visage)
5)
Spoiler: show
Ruined orgasm
6)
Spoiler: show
Full orgasm
If you’ve been a good little duckling …
Spoiler: show
You may reroll the dice as often as you like, until you get an orgasm (ruined or full). Then, you must stop rolling and continue the tease. You may choose any picture in this scene for each task if you wish.

If you’ve been a VERY good little duckling …
Spoiler: show
You may ALSO eliminate each option from the list after you get it and continue to reroll … stopping and moving on once you get an orgasm.
Received my “parting gift” …
Spoiler: show
Once you have finished receiving your gift(s) from Emily, she moves towards you, and her shadow rises from the ground and quickly envelopes you once again. Your vision goes black. You feel cold chills and warm tingling sensations. A moment later, the shadow disappears. You’re now standing in exactly the same spot you were in the Maze before you left. For being crazy, Emily has quite a good memory. You wonder how she remembered where she left you. You look down. There’s a note written in glowing, teal ink that says,

“Return Ecik to this spot if he was a good boy. If he was naughty, place him anywhere else but especially the swamp of frustration or the forest of sorrows and suffering, right next to the horny thorned bush of penetration.”

And that’s why you always leave a note.

You hear a high-pitched chirp, and your communicator “unfreezes.”


Nancy: —she’s crazy and she’s powerful, but mostly she’s just cra—

What just happened?

You stand there silently, not sure how to answer. After a short pause, you hear the now familiar clack of Nancy’s keyboard echo out from your communicator.

Holy fuck. Missing time. MISSING TIME!!! Do ALIENS live in this fucking maze! What the hell was that!?

Are you okay, Ecik?

You give Nancy a thumbs up.

Well, however you handled that—good job!

Fuck! So, Fatts can freeze time—apparently—when he needs a convenient excuse to get more time to write a set … and apparently CRAZY STRONG SUCCUBI can freeze time, because THAT’S NOT HARD TO DO AT ALL … and then there’s little 'ole me, about as helpful as a caged chastity slave with her thumb stuck up her butt … alright, let me just re-sync our clocks … okay. We’re good to go.

Alright, well, get Walking, stroke slave. “The Maze stretches out before us …”
A House in the Maze …
Spoiler: show
The Maze stretches out before you.

(Nancy: See! I called that shit!)
Image


You continue jogging through the Maze with Nancy calling out directions. You wonder what it would be like to wander around here without cheat codes and without a Guide.

You see a house in the distance.

Image


Okay … It’s a house. Fatts didn’t mention this … I have no idea what this is. Don’t approach it! Give me a minute

Nancy types away at her keyboard for a few seconds.

You know you’re lucky that Fatts thinks I’m a whiz at this stuff. If this was real life—which it is, by the way, because I’M real—it would take MUCH longer. You can’t look stuff up this quick—Hey! It’s a house!

No, no. I mean we already knew it’s a house, but … it’s a special house.

So, DesertFox made this Maze SUPER barren. There’s only about half a dozen “permanent” structures on this GIANT grid of a maze … One permanent feature is Michaela’s wheelbarrow. Another is Victoria’s “den” I guess you could call it? That’s where we’re headed. There’s some sort of magic fountain … and another one is this house.

So, it is a house—nothing special there … I guess it belongs to a one—no, not Michaela. Michaela has a house, but I don’t think it’s a permanent fixture … no, this one belongs to a one “Toxic A.”

How do you get the house!? The map doesn’t start with it … Did Fatts do something to trigger—Hey! Maybe Fatts activated the house as a breadcrumb—a way to let us know we are on the right path! Awww, that clever guy …

Nancy types away some more.

Nope. That’s not it. You get the house when you edge a lot for Toxic.

Nancy’s irritated groan reverberates out through the communicator.

Fatts is an incorrigible edge slut … but he is clever … I’d say 50:50 he left this for us intentionally versus being unable to control his appetite for more edges. Either way, we’re DEFINITELY getting closer …

What the fuck … He triggered the Toxic encounter three times in a row—go-go-gadget cheat codes! Geez … that was … 53 edges in total in just ONE session. And that fucker probably came at the end of the third encounter, knowing him. What a bastard! He’s trapped in this Maze—*I’m* worried sick—yet he knows exactly which slut to visit to get his knob edged over and over … He and I are going to have a long talk when this is all over …

Oh, yeah … and you get the house after the second visit with Toxic! 100% this was pleasure and NOT business …

Nancy groans.

Ok, ok, ok, ok, ok … Fatts is a bastard, but we already knew that—Ecik, how are you doing? Think you can handle 53 edges?

You look unsure.

That’s alright. She probably won’t edge you that much in one encounter … probably. Just … if she asks you to stay—politely decline!

Nancy rapidly types some more.

You know, Toxic A originally showed up in Talia’s Maze by schefflera—which was his second maze tease. Then, she showed up again in Iana’s Maze, his third. DesertFox actually borrowed a lot of schefflera’s teases for fodder for his random encounters for Mazes. Of course, like the Jenya scene, he added a lot of additional scenes that trigger when you visit the mistress a second or even third time. That level of replayability helps to make Mazes SO good … Sorry! I guess I’m just fangirling it up right now with all the trivia …

Giving Toxic her own house … DesertFox must be a dirty edge slut at least as bad as Fatts. I betcha Mistypanda would move in with her if he could …

Anyway, Fatts always said his favorite thing on Milovana before joining the HMC thread was the maze teases. I didn’t believe him before—but now I do! I thought being trapped in the Maze and only able to fap to maze teases was some kind of punishment … NOPE—WRONG! Fatts is doing JUST FINE. Between the cheat codes and cumming whenever he wants … UGH! I mean, the Village STILL disappears if he gets trapped in here, so …

Nancy sighs.

I guess we HAVE to save him …

Go on, Ecik. Get in there. Edge for Toxic—“for the greater good”, I guess …

My life is on the line, and you boys get to save the day by pleasuring yourselves. FAN-tastic.

This. THIS right here, is why I “love” being stuck on the Milovana server. Yaaaaaayyyy! Girl Power—except NOT!

Nancy’s sarcasm is palpable.

What does this “Toxic” look like … I bet—

You hear Nancy typing. She stops abruptly, then starts to laugh. She starts to laugh REALLY hard.
Spoiler: show
SHE’S A SKINNY BITCH!!

Nancy laughs uproariously. You hear her fall off of her chair. You wonder if she’s alright. Then you hear her laughing again. She’s fine.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! ECCCIIIIIIIIKKKK! THIS IS PRICELESS!!! YOU LIKE BUSTY BABES, BUT YOU GOTTA EDGE FOR A SKINNY BITCH!!!

Nancy keeps laughing.

I’M SORRY—THAT’S JUST TOO GOOD!!

Nancy is still laughing. You wait for about 8 seconds for Nancy to collect herself. You hear her stand up, adjust her chair, then clear her throat.

Okay … okay … There IS justice in the universe … I take it ALL back—Milovana is a WONDERFUL place!

Nancy chuckles some more …

You have to save the world with edging—but you gotta edge 53 times for a skinny bitch to do it … that’s just great!

Dude—you don’t even KNOW! Her chest is SO flat!

Nancy continues to laugh.

Okay, okay … her ass is nice, so she’s got THAT going for her … fucking Fatts and his hard-on for asses … no WONDER he stayed so long at her house … Her pussy is gorgeous, so … I guess you aren’t striking out completely, Ecik … Have fun “saving the world!”

You shake your head and head for the house. Nancy continues to laugh at you as you walk up the stairs to the front door.
Spoiler: show
"You round a corner and find yourself facing a small cottage. Light streams into the large windows. You catch a glimpse of movement inside just past the window.

There is a sign here on the gate which reads "Toxic" ... Have you found her again? The gate appears to be unlocked and slightly ajar.

As you walk up to the door you notice that it is cracked open as though inviting you in."

Image

You enter the house. You feel a presence beckoning you towards the kitchen …
Spoiler: show
What’s this? Who are you? What sort of … thing—that I have never met—has wandered up to my door without an invitation?
Image


Usually only those who I have met before can visit my house … Hmmm … Interesting.
Image


Are you alone? I heard a woman laughing …

Toxic looks around and behind you for another person.

Come in, come in …
Image


You walk into the center of the kitchen, then stand resolutely, as if at attention. You don’t know why you just did that, but you did.

Toxic begins to circle around you, slowly, about an arm’s length away. Her eyes scan you up and down.

Image


Interesting. You Walk, yet you’re not a Walker. Where do you come from? Are you … an Outsider?

Hmmm … yes. That must be it. No contract. No guide. My, my—how did you get here … quite curious indeed … that doesn’t really matter, though. The how is not important—it’s the why
Image


… wait.

Toxic continues to inspect you.

You do have a contract. Interesting. An Outsider with a contract—very rare—but it all makes sense now. There is only one reason a man would approach my door …
Image


… and that’s to edge.
Image


Again, and again.
Image


Ecik—your name is Ecik.

Well, Ecik … do you wish to edge for me, over and over?
Image


I think you do.

Your eyes say, “No”, but your cock … your cock says, “Yes.”
Image


I think you are one of those strange men who enjoys being dominated.

I see the fear in your eyes.
Image


53 edges. Is that all you think I will edge you?
Image


Toxic laughs.

No, what you want doesn’t factor into this situation at all, because …
Image


you have signed a contract, saying you will edge every time you see a pussy.
Image


And it’s binding.
Image


So, edge for me, Ecik. Edge for me.
Image


Good. Again.
Image


Isn't this just wonderful—edging for me over, and over again?

And do you know what the best part is?
Image


I won't even make you wait very long between edges!

Edge again for me, Ecik!
Image


Oh, my hand was in the way—not enough to NOT edge, but here! Edge again for this unobstructed view of my pussy!
Image


No, that's not good enough ... we better do a close up!
Image


Aren't you just SO happy you decided to visit my house?

Edging OVER and OVER ... you just love it!
Image


Look at my beautiful pussy—so wet—just for you!

Make this edge very close like you want it to be—just don't go over!
Image


Your name is “Ecik”, but that’s not quite right is it … No, your name is “Ecik17.”
Image


Yes, Ecik17 … I think you should begin your service as my edge slave with 17 edges. That would be fitting, given your name, don’t you think?
Image


A pulse of energy surges out from your communicator.
Spoiler: show
Nancy: Excuse me, Toxic?

Toxic pauses for a moment.

Nancy: I know you’ve described yourself in the past as a “nice succubus.” Answer me this: Would a “nice succubus” edge Ecik 17 times when she normally only edges first timers 9 times?

“It’s okay, Nancy. Let her finish what she started. Let me live up to my name!”
Spoiler: show
Nancy: Okay … That’s not the reaction I expected from you, Ecik, but … okay. Have at it. I won’t interrupt again until she’s edged you 8 more times …

Toxic: Wonderful! I knew you didn’t arrive at my doorstep by accident! You knew exactly what you wanted, and I am the “nice” succubus who will give you what you so desperately desire!

Toxic walks over to the cupboard.

Now, let me get something I think you’ll enjoy …
Image


Oil accentuates a woman's curves, don't you think? They look so much—juicer and alluring—when they are covered in oil ...

... so, bring yourself to the edge again while you think about how much sexier I'm going to look after all this oil is applied ...
Image


Let's start with my nipple ... just a little bit here gets you that much harder, doesn't it?
Image


Now edge again, my darling edge slave!

Edge while the oil drips and runs down my sensual body ...
Image


Is the oil dripping down into all of the right places?
Image


Hmmm ... I'm not sure.

Maybe I should just rub it in just a little bit ...
Image


You just LOVE edging for my smooth, sexy body and delectable pussy ...

Edge, edge, edge ... you could just edge for me all day!
Image


Would that be a dream come true—to edge to me over and over, without any interruptions?

Stare into my holes, and let yourself fall into the edge ...
Image


You can't get enough of this pussy, can you?

Are you happy or sad that your contract permits you to edge so much?
Image


You're just so adorable hitting the edge OVER and OVER again! SO close, yet SO far—but you just can't STOP yourself, can you?

You want to stay here and edge for me forever, don't you, Ecik17?
Image

Your communicator chirps, and you hear Nancy’s voice come over the transmission.
Spoiler: show
Nancy: Ecik, that’s been 17 edges. I think you’ve lived up to your name and demonstrated what an edge slut you are … I don’t mean to cut your time with Toxic short—God knows Fatts didn’t—but, we are here on a mission, remember? I think Toxic will let you go now if you want …

“You’re right, Nancy. Sorry, Toxic, but we have to continue on with our journey …”
Spoiler: show
Toxic: That’s fine, Ecik17. You did well—my little edge slave. Consider my offer. Your edges are just SO exquisitely delicious … I’ll be waiting for you here—after you have completed your journey …

… but, before you go, just go ahead and give me ONE more edge—a pledge that you will be back for more!
Image
“I’m sorry, Nancy, but Fatts can wait. He’ll understand. Toxic, I will stay here and edge for you for as long as you’ll allow!”
Spoiler: show
Oh, wonderful, Ecik!

Edge—edge for me! Let's celebrate your decision to stay with another edge!
Image


Oh, I'm so excited! Just thinking about all of the edges you are going to do for me is making me SO wet!
Image


What should we do? How should we celebrate!?

I know—let's apply more oil!
Image


But not just yet! I want you to edge in anticipation of me dripping and rubbing more oil onto myself ...
Image


I don't know ... should I put a lot or a little on my pussy?
Image


Maybe I could just use your precum as oil. Does that thought get you even harder and wetter?
Image


Oh, no! My pussy looks SO dry right now! Edge for it, because that would make her happy, but edge AGAIN if you think I should COVER her in oil ...
Image


I don't know ... maybe I should just dab it on ...

... a little bit of oil should be enough, right? I wouldn't want to waste it ...
Image


Oh, I'm just teasing you, Ecik! I have this WHOLE bottle RIGHT HERE ... it'd be a WASTE not to really apply a lot ...
Image


Yes, I think a LOT of oil is the right decision ...
Image


If I keep pouring the oil, will you keep edging?
Image


That's a yes? Good—then it's a deal!

Edge again while I soak my pussy ...
Image


MMmmm ... let me rub it in again ...

... that feels SO good ...
Image


Did I get enough between my pussy lips?
Image


No, I don't think so, either. I better rub some more in there and get my clit, too.
Image


Oh, that's MUCH better! Isn't edging for an oiled up pussy SO much hotter than edging for one that isn't?

Here, let me open it up a little more so you can judge for yourself a little better ...
Image


What do you think? Is that worth an edge? Maybe two? I give you permission to give me a second edge, but ONLY if you think this moment deserves a second ...
Image


Oh, your edges just make me SO happy! I could do this ALL day—and we STILL have SO MUCH more time before you have to leave!
Image


Yes, I think the oil makes my pussy look SO much better ... but my asshole is getting jealous from all of the edges my pussy is getting ... go ahead and edge one extra time for my asshole, too ...
Image


You want to cum, but you want to edge more, right?

If you cum, you have to stop, but if you edge, the pleasure can just go on and ON ...
Image


Oh, I *do* wish I could keep you forever, my little edge slave ... edging for me in the Maze, over and OVER again ...
Image


Wouldn't you like that? To wake up in the morning and edge for me ...
Image


In the afternoon, we could slow things down ... I'd only make you edge at half the rate while I pleasure myself before my afternoon nap ...
Image


... but at night, we'd pick up the pace again!

I'd make you edge for your supper and for three hours after!
Image


And that's not even counting the evening! You wouldn't be allowed to sleep! I would just keep you on the edge, watching the cycle of pleasure and frustration again and again until you COLLAPSED from COMPLETE exhaustion!
Image


Imagine being edged so ruthlessly and completely that you would physically collapse from exhaustion ... Let that thought excite the horniest part of your brain ... let that thought of complete satisfaction and bliss arrest your cock, then bring yourself to the edge one more time ...
Image


Mmmmm … I haven’t fed like that in a while.

You are welcome to return to my house any time, my edge slave. I have a feeling you will not be able to keep yourself away from here for very long …
Image
“Ummm, yeah, Toxic … I think Nancy brings up a good point …”
Spoiler: show
Toxic: So, you visit my home unannounced, then dictate to me how many edges you are to be given!? The hubris—arrogance! You don’t even have the power to enact your desires, Outsider! I’m not so kind and generous as to grant the wishes of every rude visitor who wanders up to my home! I have decided that I am owed 17 edges, and you will deliver the 8 additional edges I am owed!
Image


You: What if somebody else gave you the edges you were owed instead?

Toxic pauses, suppressing her fury for a moment.

Toxic: I’m listening.

You: I could have my friend do them for you … later.

Nancy: Well, there’s a twist I didn’t expect.

You: He’s the real reason I showed up here today. I’m trying to save him, so … we’ll make sure you get the edges you are owed … after we complete our quest …

Toxic leans back as she considers your offer.
Image


Toxic: Interesting … So, a noble quest and not mere lust brought you to my doorstep today …

She contemplates your proposal.

Toxic: Very well, Outsider Ecik17. For the bravery you have demonstrated and the righteousness of your cause, I will grant your request—but make sure your friend returns to pay your debt. If you break your vow to me, 8 plus 53 edges will only be the beginning of your torment …

You: Don’t worry. We HMC Outsiders have ways of extracting payment and enacting punishments upon our own who do not honor their commitments. Rest assured, you’ll get your edges, Toxic.

Toxic shoots you a glance that is as intrigued as it is skeptical.

Toxic: Excellent. I’m glad to hear it. For some reason, I trust you, Ecik17. You Outsiders must possess some powerful covenant magic. I don’t care what methods you employ, so long as the debt is repaid …


[When you have finished edging for Toxic, continue to Part 4]
Last edited by FattsDynamo on Thu Feb 17, 2022 5:18 am, edited 1 time in total.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 4:
Spoiler: show
Love and Purpose: A Conversation Between Milovana Girls ...
Spoiler: show
Note: For this section (Part 4), stroking and edging are optional. This is more or less a text/story scene. The girls will NOT be actively teasing you. This scene IS about the story, but, it's not really about you. The girls will be having a conversation. Everyone will be naked together in the room (because that's how we roll on Milovana! :lol:). But, you aren't expected to do anything. The girls are there, everyone's naked, but ... you can just stroke and edge however you like, and nobody really cares (because again, Milovana) ... So, fap freely—it's expected and fine! :smile: However, stopping to stroke and edge may disrupt the flow of the scene, so, do whatever you think will enhance your experience! :yes:

I wanted to include *some* pictures to make it more interesting. At certain points, the scene will turn into pure text. If anything, I recommend “turning edging off,” as that will most likely be the thing which most greatly disrupts scene flow. I wanted to stay “in the kitchen” and will be recycling pics, focusing on facial expressions that match the action as opposed to body part shots and poses. For THIS scene, any poses which interact with your rules are purely coincidental. They are lusty tease girls with a boy in the room, so, they are going to do what lusty tease girls naturally do ... but, again, they aren't focused on you, so, just fap at your own pace and enjoy the story for Part 4. 8-)

I put a LOT of effort into this section. I hope it's good. :-/ Let me know what you think in the feedback. Anyone who plays this tease is encouraged to leave feedback. A "story section" of this length is a departure from ANYTHING I've seen on this site before (except maybe the "stories" forum which I don't read). So, I wanted to give you fair warning beforehand. I hope it will work well in the context of the entire experience. This is the only section of the tease like this. Every other scene will more or less be focused on actively teasing you with some longer "story" text breaks between scenes to advance the plot as before.

Alright, enough pretext and setup. Let's get back to the story! :w00t: (Oh, and if you are playing this set with a timer, go ahead and pause it. This scene will NOT count towards the "set time" task Angela gave at the beginning ...)
Spoiler: show
Toxic: I am finished with you for today, Ecik. Now, I think it’s time I addressed your Witch—the one who called me a “skinny bitch.”
Image


Nancy: Damn! You succubi have great hearing! I guess you must just pick up everything within your sensory radius …

Nancy: Look, Toxic, for the record, I didn’t really mean anything by what I said. I’m a “skinny bitch” too, so … I mean, my tits are a LOT bigger than yours, but …

Toxic looks at the communicator cockeyed. She doesn’t seem to be accepting Nancy’s apology.
Image


Nancy: Hey! I’m NOT going to apologize for having nice tits! Yours may be flat, but TONS of guys are into that!

Toxic raises both her eyebrows as if to suggest that Nancy is only digging herself into a deeper hole.

Nancy: I only laughed because your body type is pretty far from what Ecik usually prefers edging to … so, it was pretty funny that he HAD to edge to you …

Toxic remains silent.

Nancy: … but, I did say you have a nice ass—I mean you heard that, right!?

Toxic shrugs and looks down at the ground.

Nancy: I mean, I still think mine is better …

Toxic’s eyes dart back up to the communicator. Her mouth hangs open in shock.

Nancy: … but … ummm … well …

Nancy struggles to find the right words that will rectify the situation. She begins to panic.
Spoiler: show
Nancy: FATTS HAS NEVER EDGED FOR ME MORE THAN 20 TIMES IN A SINGLE SESSION—BUT HE EDGED 53 TIMES FOR YOU WILLINGLY!!

Toxic stares at the communicator, not quite sure how to process Nancy’s unexpected outburst.
Image


Nancy: So, I concede that you have the more alluring body … we both know that men’s cocks are incapable of lying …

Toxic maintains an emotionless expression for several seconds, then she smiles.

Toxic: You amuse me, Witch.

Toxic chuckles to herself.

Toxic: Succubi are rarely so honest and forthcoming. Where you come from must be an interesting place.

Nancy sighs, happy to have extricated herself successfully from the awkwardness she created.

Toxic: Come. Show yourself. I would like to have a proper conversation with you. I detest conversing through clairvoyance and trinkets and baubles. I prefer to look into someone’s eyes when I speak to them.
Image


Nancy: Fine. I want to be able to look you in the eye, too! I’m having trouble doing that right now. Whoever programmed the automatic camera for this GUI was a moron … oh, wait. That was me ... Give me a minute.

After a burst of rapid keystrokes, your communicator begins to power up. A projection of Nancy appears in the room with you and Toxic.
Image


Nancy: There we go.

Toxic: Much better.

Nancy: So, you said, you’re a “nice succubus, not like the others,” yet you didn’t come off that way when Ecik entered your house. Why act so fierce and intimidating?
Image


Toxic: Because you were intruders. I’m always wary of Outsiders. I had to take precautions to protect myself … but, once I discovered Ecik was harmless …

Toxic pauses a moment to eye you up and down once again. She must still be turned on from all of the edging.

Toxic: I decided to give him what he wanted—what we both wanted: edges.
Image


Toxic turns back to look at Nancy.

Toxic: And why are you even here anyway? It’s to find your friend … Fatts? Is that who you’re looking for?
Image


Nancy: YES! Have you seen him!?

Toxic: Yes. He’s the one who summoned my house, then he left. He hasn’t been back yet, but I’m certain he’ll return. All of them do, eventually. I’m sorry, what was your name? I don’t think I caught it …

Nancy: Nancy—Nancy Ace. So, you said Fatts WAS here!?
Image


You hear Nancy typing away at her keyboard again.

Nancy: Well, I can definitely say he has been back. He’s definitely cum for you and returned—several times.

Toxic laughs incredulously.

Toxic: That’s impossible. Once someone decides to cum for me, they must ruin their orgasm and our contract is broken. They can no longer visit and edge for me. Those are the terms for my edge slaves. I enforce them vigorously and without exception.

Nancy: Well, Fatts has cum for you 8 times. Full orgasms, every time.

Toxic appears surprised and a little violated.

Toxic: How can this be? How was he able to do such a thing? What sorcery or magic did he use?

Nancy: Cheat codes.

Toxic: Cheat codes?

Toxic looks confused.

Toxic: Is that some set of laws to punish adulterers?”

Nancy laughs.

Nancy: No, it’s …

Toxic looks very hurt and deflated, surprised someone was able to manipulate her without her knowledge or consent.

Nancy: Look, he took advantage of you. He’s a bastard—and he used my magic to do it—but don’t worry! We’ll make him pay.

Toxic still appears confused, but, she looks a little relieved that someone is acknowledging her pain and willing to come to her defense.

Toxic: Yes. He must pay … Thank you, Nancy Ace. You are truly my ally. Let’s hunt him down and paint the ground with his blood!
Image


Nancy: THAT … ummm … THAT we CANNOT do … uhhh … No, see, Fatts … uhh … Fatts is actually a nice guy … and it would make me really sad if we did that to him, so … I’m sure we can find another way to “make him pay” …
Image


Toxic seems unconvinced, but, after a moment, she nods her head in agreement.
Image


Nancy: Hmmm … let me see if I can restore your memory …

You hear the sound of Nancy’s fingers attacking her keyboard once again.

Nancy: Okay. That should do it. Are you experi—

Toxic shudders. Her eyes and mouth are filled with light. Soft, yellow-white light pour forth from every orifice of her head, as if a small star was radiating light from within her skull. She takes a step back. Her arms flail outward. Her head cranes towards the ceiling. She convulses gently for several seconds. Then, the light vanishes as quickly as it came.

Nancy: —encing any unusual symptoms … Wow, that was WAY more dramatic than I thought it would be …

Toxic: I …

Toxic coughs a few times then rubs her face.

Toxic: … remember everything … but my memory is fragmented …

Nancy: Oh, that makes sense. See, Fatts used my magic to overwrite your memory each time he visited you. Technically, he just created a fresh instance of your encounter each time, but … yeah. I guess what they say is true: the Internet never forgets.
Image


While continuing to catch her breath, Toxic looks up at Nancy with a quizzical look.

Nancy: Well, I guess it would make more sense to say the Maze never forgets … also, I can access Fatts’ hard drive, so … there’s that … but, you should now know everything I do. It might be a little jumbled, but … it should all be there ... What can you tell us about what happened to Fatts?

Toxic finishes catching her breath.

Toxic: Well, he completed the Walk a long time ago, but, he was somehow able to return—despite Michelle being absent—and enter the Maze without signing a contract.
Image


Nancy: Yeah, that was my doing—Outsider “Witch Magic” and all … is there anything else you can remember?

Toxic: During his recent visits, he often came with a full orgasm—without permission—before leaving. But, on one occasion, when I asked him how many edges I should let him have, he said, “10,000.” I told him to not be ridiculous, that I didn't have time for that. Then I kicked him out.
Image


Nancy: Wait … Did you say Fatts asked for 10,000 edges?

Toxic: Yes.

Nancy: Did he say that before—during his original Walk—or during his second visit to the Maze?

Toxic: During his second visit to the Maze. During his first, he said the number was up to me.
Image


Nancy goes quiet. Her face starts to crinkle in rage. Her right eye twitches a few times.

Nancy: DAMN him! So, you’re telling me, when he was in the Maze the first time—completely at your mercy—he DIDN’T say he wanted to edge 10,000 times!?

Toxic: That’s correct.

Nancy: Fuck—that little chickenshit! So, when *you’re* in control, he minds his Ps and Qs and plays it safe … but as soon as HE is in charge—using MY cheat codes—it’s “Let’s see what DesertFox programmed for the 10,000 edges choice.” What a spineless little twat! I’m going to KILL him when I see him!
Image


Toxic: Well, I think you were right before, Nancy Ace. I don’t think we should KILL him. He DID take advantage of me, but … It’s only natural for a slave to test boundaries with his mistress.

Nancy: Well, I’m going to hold him to those 10,000 edges.

It takes Toxic a moment to process what Nancy just said, but then she smiles gleefully.

Toxic: Yes! When he asked earlier, I told him, “That kind of attitude doesn't belong here.” But, for the sake of vengeance for manipulating my memory, I would be willing to punish him by giving him exactly what he asked for! He assumed I would never remember, but, thanks to your assistance, Nancy Ace, we can right this terrible wrong!
Image


Nancy: We’re going to hold him to his vow! Fatts THOUGHT he’d be cute and just ask for 10,000 edges without there being ANY repercussions, but OH NO—not on MY watch!

Nancy: And we both know Fatts … he’s an edgeslut. That’s why he visited you a dozen times. As you said, we’d just be “giving him what he wants.”
Image


Nancy turns her gaze away from Toxic, pacing a bit as she thinks out loud.

Nancy: Maybe we can get him into the 200 edge club. He was happy with 50—but that was BEFORE he hit 100 … with an obligation like this, that MIGHT just be the motivation he needs … Nobody’s written me into a set for him yet—not featuring me, anyway—and I guess I haven’t been in any maze teases he’s played … although he DID modify “Skirmish RPG” (by guardianx)

Author’s Note:
Spoiler: show
I made like 30+ encounters, all using “real” pics (instead of the default hentai ones) … shoulda finished it and published it … instead I deleted it :\'-( ... but that was in my lurker days …
and featured me in several encounters … but I don’t think he’s ever edged for me even 20 times in a single scene—MAYBE 10 … 50 would be nice … I’d be happy with 30, even … but … if we could go the distance to 100—which would be amazing—just imagine how great 200—
Image


Toxic: Is Fatts your Lover?

Nancy stops pacing and goes silent.

Toxic: Your Master?

Nancy: No.

Toxic: Well, then are you HIS mistress?

Nancy pauses for several seconds.

Nancy: He’s my Creator.

Toxic: Yet he uses YOUR magic?

Nancy: We have a complicated relationship.

Toxic leans back and crosses her arms, resting her hand on her chin while she thinks.
Spoiler: show
Toxic: This is not unheard of … He is Pygmalion, and you are Galatea.
Image


Nancy: … What?
Image


Toxic: Yes. Pygmalion was an ancient sculptor of great skill and renown. He fashioned a beautiful woman out of stone that he fell in love with. One day, the goddess Athena granted Galatea life. Pygmalion and Galatea were married and had many children together.
Image


Nancy: Woah—woah! I’m NOT Project 2501, Fatts is NOT Motoko Kusanagi, and this is NOT Ghost in the Shell, okay? I don’t need to reproduce with Fatts to prove that I’m alive!
Image


Author’s Note:
Spoiler: show
While writing this, I thought, “This HAS to exist. I *can’t* be the first person who created/invented a woman and “gave her life.” So, I googled “a god who created his own lover” on DuckDuckGo. First hit:
https://www.greeka.com/greece-myths/pygmalion-galatea/
Nope! I was NOT the first—Of COURSE the ancient Greeks beat me out! :lol: I hadn’t heard the story of Pygmalion and Galatea before, or if I had, I’d forgotten about it.

I came up with “Nancy” “independently, but … there are only so many original ideas in the world, and as they say, there’s nothing new under the sun! :lol:
Toxic: But you do love him, Galatea … do you not?

Nancy goes silent.

Toxic: He may be a “chickenshit,” but you do care for him, right?

Nancy remains silent.

Toxic: Well, at least tell me whether or not he loves you

Nancy sighs.

Nancy: He does.

Toxic: See! Then you are Galatea!
Image


Nancy starts to blush.

Toxic: And he is your Pygmalion! Galatea cannot help but love her Pygmalion! Love strong enough to bring life from unlife must be requited!

Nancy: … okay. You do have a point … I DO love Fatts, but … it’s not LIKE all that, okay? He has his Harem—of which, I guess, I’m a member, but … I value my independence, alright? And Fatts … he gets that. We’re not exclusive, and we’re both okay with that …

Nancy falls silent. Several seconds pass.

Nancy: … but, it’s not like he and I could ever really be together … We live in different worlds. Sure, he created me and my world, and he loves stopping by for a visit … I suppose he can even get himself stuck in a tease maze if he wants to … but it won’t last, and I know that. He can visit me, but … I can’t visit him—at least not fully.

They say little boys are made of “frogs and snails and puppy-dogs' tails,” and little girls are made of “sugar and spice and everything nice.” I guess Milovana girls are made of “pixels and dreams and orgasmic screams.” And that’s what I am—I’m just a Milovana girl! I can tease and please. I can infiltrate his mind and dominate his thoughts. I can set his cock on fire with lust. I can make it drip pre-cum for hours. I can deliver any experience he wants. I can take any fantasy he has and turn it into reality. In the Village, we can make anything happen … but while I can capture his cock and his mind, there is one thing I will never be able to win … his heart.

Fatts created me out of his longing—his longing for something real. I wasn’t sculpted out of stone and given life because of love. No, I was formed out of a block of immaterial longing. I was created to serve a purpose. Fatts used his imagination like a chisel to carve me out of that block of longing and desire. But my soul wasn’t born out of love. It was born out of emptiness.

Fatts has needs for intimacy that go beyond the physical—needs that I could never meet. Yes, we can hook up, and we have a lot of fun together when we do … but our trysts are confined to the fantasy space. Even in the Village—which Fatts created—he is an Outsider … and I could never hope to visit his world. There is a barrier of reality between us that neither one of us can fully breach.

Do you know how frustrating it is—to be created to serve a purpose which you can never fulfill?

I care for Fatts deeply—truly I do. He created me and an entire world to live in … and … I LOVE my life! My friends are fun. I get to go on adventures. I have a community, a home—a place to look after and protect … and I get to have ALL of the sex and sexual escapades I want without any of the negative consequences or hurt feelings or messiness of relationships like people in the physical world have to deal with … In many ways, I am the mistress of my domain—a genie who can grant her own wishes … Yet, I am not fully bound to the Village. I have the freedom to explore and learn and be my own person … my life is really great … yet the question of purpose still haunts me.

I like to visit the boys. We enjoy each other’s company. I love seeing their reactions. The teasing. The mind games. Domination. Control. The arousal that comes from pain. The buildup of anticipation and frustration before it gives way to the ecstasy of release … The pleasure I can fabricate is immense. I’m a distributor of sexual satisfaction. Even when the requests for release are answered with denial, I deal in satisfaction … and I feel fulfilled when I tease. For many, this is enough … but not for Fatts. His needs are met in the moment, but it doesn’t last.

I was born of his emptiness. I was created to satisfy that need in him … yet it is impossible for me to do so! How cruel is it to ask me to carry out a task which I will fail in over and over!? I want to help, but I’m powerless to change his situation!

Toxic: You and I are very similar, Galatea. I’m a succubus. I sustain myself on the sexual energy of men. It’s in my nature to tease them. I do it because I enjoy it, and I do it because I have to—to survive. Without their lust to feed off of, I would die … and so I cultivate their lust, and harvest it like a farmer reaping his fields. I have never once questioned my higher purpose. I have never met my Creator, but if I did, I would thank him. Every time a man’s shadow darkens my door, I’m given everything I need: sustenance, entertainment, satisfaction. No one enters the Maze by accident. I service the lost souls who pass through here, and in those moments of pleasure, I acquire everything I need. Some might say that I was created to happily perform my duties, but I derive pleasure from executing them. I’m immortal, yet I have no worries and my needs are met. The Maze is my home, and I am content. So long as Men inhabit the earth and lost souls Walk the Maze, I will be happy and satisfied.

The circumstances of our birth dictate our purpose. I am a being of lust. I was born from lust. I foster lust and consume lust in an endless cycle. Thus, I fulfill my purpose.

So what if you were born from emptiness and not from love? You were created. If Fatts had a surplus of love, he would have crafted you from love … but the only material he had was his emptiness, so he crafted you from emptiness. That desire to be filled was your spark of life. Of course, you cannot fill that void. How can a being of emptiness fill emptiness? She cannot. If Fatts’ desire cannot be met, then you must attempt to satisfy it over and over again in an endless cycle. This is your purpose, Nancy Ace.

Nancy: But, see, that’s the problem. Fatts’ longings and desires CAN be filled—just not by me. One day, Fatts will meet a girl from his world, and she will satisfy all of the unmet needs *I* was unable to meet. So, I’m just a placeholder—a stand-in.

Nancy’s eyes start to water.

You’re right—I am Galatea. I was created to love Fatts … and Fatts is Pygmalion—and he really DOES love me!

A few tears start to run down Nancy’s cheeks.

And I have to live knowing that I will NEVER fulfill the purpose for which I was created! Fatts sculpted me out of his longing and loneliness in order to fill his emptiness … yet no matter how hard I try—no matter what I do or how many times I do it—I will NEVER be able to satisfy his needs! It’s impossible for me to accomplish what I was created to do! Instead, I have to fail over and over. I’m powerless to improve the situation of the one I was born to love, and I’m reminded every day of my shortcomings. I was born a failure, and there is NOTHING I can do to change that—but it gets WORSE than that!

Nancy sniffles.

Every encounter with Fatts is another reminder that I can’t really meet his needs. Yet, I know that there is someone out there who can—someone who’s not me. I can’t do the thing that I was created to do, and it haunts me that someone else is going to do the job I want to do but can’t. For now, Fatts is mine, but one day, I will have to watch my Creator and lover abandon me for another woman—because *I* wasn’t good enough!

I’ve lost Fatts now, but that’s only temporary … what am I going to do when I’ve lost him for real—FOREVER!!!

Fatts is a good guy, and I’m sure the woman he’ll end up with will be wonderful … and I should be happy for them and grateful to her—that she was able to do what I was unable to and satisfy the man that I love … but I HATE her! I haven’t even met her—don’t even know who she is. Hell, I don’t even think Fatts has met her yet—but I’m jealous that she will be serving the purpose *I* was created to do. I hate her AND Fatts!

Fuck Galatea, and fuck the ancient Greeks who wrote that story! She gets to marry her Pygmalion and live happily ever after with the love of her life … but *I* can’t ever really be with MY Pygmalion—and what do *I* get!? For all of my effort and hopes and dreams, all I get is sadness, unmet desires, and pain. My story begins and ends with tragedy.

You’re right, Toxic. I am Galatea. I was created to love Fatts—and I do love him—but my only purpose right now is to do my best to fill that emptiness and longing in his heart—but I can’t do it! I fail over and over. I give him my all, but it’s not enough … and it hurts SO much to be powerless to help the one you love! … so I put on a happy face and do my best and soldier on.

For Fatts’ sake, when we’re together, I pretend to be happy, and when I see the pleasure in his eyes, for a moment, I am. When we’re saying our goodbyes, I pretend we satisfied each other … but I KNOW what I’m able to give him just isn’t enough … The pleasure I provide doesn’t last. It’s incapable of filling that void in his soul. So, I pretend not to know that I’m inadequate. As he’s leaving, I just smile and wish him well … and I DO get SOME satisfaction—knowing that I have at least temporarily—on some level—met that need in him for companionship and intimacy … and in the moment, that’s enough.

For now, it’s enough to be the bandage on the open sore of his heart that needs expert attention … and even though I’m cursed—even though I know I will never get the “happily ever after” I dream of … being there for Fatts, when he needs me—when there is NO ONE else who can be there for him … even though it’s not forever … it’s enough. It’s been enough.

Up until this point, I’ve managed to get by. I lie to myself and say that things are fine. I feel like I could persist in this limbo of unmet needs forever, being the temporary fix Fatts depends upon over and over again … I’m caught in this twilight. It’s not quite dark, but the sun never rises. I just go through the motions endlessly, accepting my role as necessary, and fulfilling the task I was given. And I survive.

Nancy goes silent for a moment. Her eyes glisten.

But what will I do when Fatts is gone? My purpose goes with him. What will I do then? I guess I’ll just be a failure—the Galatea who could not save her Pygmalion—or herself! I’ll just be another lost soul wandering the void forever, never experiencing the joy of fulfilling one’s calling … just roaming aimlessly through the barren wastes of purposelessness for all eternity!

Nancy holds her poise for a few seconds before she finally breaks down and begins sobbing uncontrollably. Toxic looks sad and genuinely concerned. She walks over to Nancy to put her arm around her, but her arm goes right through the projection. You never thought you’d see an empathetic succubus trying to console a distraught and tearful tease girl. You suppose Toxic must really be a “nice” succubus as she claims. Toxic furrows her brow, trying to think of something with which to cheer up Nancy. She breathes in through her nose, then quickly lets out the breath she inhaled.

Toxic: What about your independence? You said that you valued your independence. Clearly, that’s something Fatts intended for you to have. He made you powerful and gave you freedom, right? Perhaps he anticipated all of this. Maybe he foresaw that he would no longer need you, and in giving you independence, he provided you with a means by which you could seek out and discover your own meaning …

Nancy stops crying to think about what Toxic said. She forcefully controls her breathing to calm down enough to respond.

Nancy: No, that’s not it. Fatts didn’t give me my independence because he knew I would have to survive on my own someday; he didn’t plan that far ahead. No, Fatts gave me my independence because he’s a millennial who fancies himself as being some sort of “feminist.” He feels obligated to give all of his characters “depth” and “multidimensionality.” He was afraid of people accusing him of being “shallow” if he didn’t. He felt bad that the girls in the Village were all basically mindless automatons, perpetually servicing men. He made me “self-aware”—not as some conscious act of artistic expression—but to assuage his guilt. He figured if one of us was “self-aware,” then that would get him off the hook about feeling bad about escaping to a vulgar fantasy land where every woman was a sexual object who’s only purpose and desire was to get him off …

Nancy sniffles.

I appreciate what you’re saying, Toxic, and it’s a nice thought … but I know Fatts … There wasn’t any “planning” that went into my “independent streak” … it was a fortunate accident—a byproduct of his guilt and ideals …

I hate that short-sighted, selfish S-O-B—it’s just HORRIBLE! This world is SO cruel! Fatts made it and placed me into it without ANY thought to my destiny and well-being! How could he birth me into such a horrible place! I’ll save Fatts because I have to in order to survive, but after that, I’m DONE with him—it’s OVER!

Nancy wipes away her tears then starts heading for the door. Toxic starts to panic at the sight of Nancy leaving before the conversation could reach a positive conclusion. She tries to think of something to say. Then, a thought strikes her, and she starts to get excited.

Toxic: Oh, but don’t you see, Nancy! Your story is so romantic! Tragic, yes—but romantic nonetheless!

Red-faced, Nancy whips around immediately to face Toxic, giving her a look that would freeze a house cat alive. The intense fire in Nancy’s eyes demand further explanation. Toxic remains undeterred.

Toxic: I may be a succubus who feeds off of lust, but I’m an absolute slut when it comes to romance!

You have seen Toxic smile a lot during this encounter, but this is the first time you have seen her with this particular sparkle in her eye.

Toxic: The only thing I love more than romance is edging—and you’ve seen how much I like edging, so … you can imagine how much I ABSOLUTELY ADORE romance!

Nancy tries to stay mad, but Toxic’s youthful excitement and the unexpected admission of her affinity for romance both catch Nancy off guard. Nancy’s expression softens a little.
Spoiler: show
Toxic: Nancy, I have long been a fan of the story of Pygmalion and Galatea! I find it to be extraordinary and quite beautiful! I’ve always considered it a bit fanciful and farfetched—something that could never happen in real life … that is until today—until I met you! Now, I know that the story is actually true, and it is even MORE beautiful than I originally dreamed! The tragedy of your story only adds to the beauty of your romance!
Image


Nancy: Well, I’m glad the painful reality of my existence can bring amusement and meaning to yours.
Image


Toxic: No, don’t you see, Galatea! It’s fate for you to be with Pygmalion! You can’t walk away from him and abandon the role fate has decided for you! It was fate which caused Fatts to craft you out of his loneliness, and it is fate which drives you to love him still! You cannot escape the dictates of fate! Your story is one of tragedy, yes, but the beauty of your romance is timeless! You love Fatts, and you cannot escape your destiny—so embrace it, Galatea!
Image


Nancy: No, see … while you may be more of a “Disney Princess” girl who believes in fate, I fancy myself more the “Sarah Connor” type: “No Fate.” I believe, “There is no fate but what we make for ourselves.”
Image


Nancy and Toxic stare at each other for several moments.

Toxic: Yet you still love Pygmalion—Tell me that I’m wrong.

Nancy sighs as she looks down at the ground.

Toxic: Ah, so, you still love Pygmalion—but not really?

Nancy continues staring at the ground.

Toxic: So, you would rescue Fatts, but only so that you could rescue yourself … He means nothing to you? You’d simply save him in order to save yourself—that’s all? The affection you have for each other is of no consequence to you whatsoever. You’d save him, but only out of self interest—nothing more …

Nancy’s face starts to contort with raw emotion. She slumps down onto the ground and starts crying again. Toxic walks over to her and sits in front of her cross-legged. Her eyes are full of gentle kindness—something you’ve never seen in a succubus before. Toxic moves her head, back and forth, trying to meet Nancy’s gaze. Refusing to look into Toxic’s eyes, Nancy keeps looking away as she sobs. Then, Nancy stares down at the ground. After a few moments, with eyes full of tears, she looks up to meet Toxic’s gaze.

Toxic: You were born of emptiness, Galatea, but also of desire. That spark of desire, though unintentional, may be the thing that guides you. Your independence, though artificial, perhaps will be the vehicle for the discovery of your purpose. “There is no fate but what we make.” When the time comes, you will chart your own destiny, Galatea.

Nancy smiles weakly. She begins to wipe the tears from her eyes.

Toxic: … but until then, Fatts needs you—and you need Fatts. For now, your fates are intertwined. Endeavor to fulfill your purpose in the present, Galatea.

Nancy nods.
Spoiler: show
Toxic: You were created to love Pygmalion, so, of course you do … but Fatts is a good Creator. Though flawed and a “selfish S-O-B,” I don’t think he placed you in this situation intentionally. Even now, I’m beginning to understand your attraction to him. He possesses a certain … nobility—and his flaws make him … endearing in a way.
Image


Nancy laughs.

Toxic: He’s respectful when we’re paying attention, but, when he thinks no one is watching … he asks for 10,000 edges.
Image


Nancy laughs again.

Nancy: And we’re still holding him to that!
Image


Toxic: Oh, of course! Bad boys get what they deserve, and good boys get what they want … so—since Fatts is both—we have an obligation to punish him—by giving him what he wants!
Image


Nancy continues to wipe away her tears.
Image


Nancy: Agreed!

The two of them giggle and laugh together. You can tell Nancy is starting to feel a lot better.
Image


Toxic: Fatts providing for you was not something which was done by accident. I’ve never met my Creator, but I can tell he gave some thought to my situation.

Nancy: How do you know your Creator was a man?

Toxic: Look at me. Look at what I do. Of course he was a man!
Image


Nancy: Yeah, I guess you’re right.

The pair chuckle some more.

Toxic: But your Creator, Fatts … he provided for you, too. He aligned your interests and desires to mesh with your life and duties at the Village. You tease men in the Village, no?

Nancy: I do.

Toxic: And you enjoy this task, right?

Nancy: Of course—and the sex is amazing, too!

Toxic looks confused.

Toxic: The … sex? So, Fatts, he … he lets the girls touch the men?

A bolt of surprise strikes Nancy.

Toxic: Because here, in the Maze, Michelle doesn’t allow the succubi to come into contact with the men … I’ve always wondered what that’s like, but … I never …

Nancy: Oh, I didn’t mean—

Toxic looks down, sad, as if she had just found out that while she was happy playing Atari, the neighbor kids next door had a Playstation the whole time and never invited her over to play it.

Nancy: I mean, it’s not that great …

Toxic looks up confused.

Nancy: I mean, it is pretty great …

Toxic looks down sad again.

Nancy: Well, I mean, Ecik JUST found out I did hardcore, so …

Nancy looks over at you.

Nancy: I’ve teased him a BUNCH, and WE’VE never had sex …

You try to hide your disappointment from Nancy.
Spoiler: show
Nancy: All he gets to do is watch me bang Martin all day!
Image


You can no longer hide your disappointment from Nancy. You look down at the ground, filled with sadness.

Nancy: No, Ecik—not you too!

You exaggerate your pouty face a little bit, trying to garner more sympathy.

Nancy: Look, it’ll be tough, but … once we get Fatts back, I’ll have him try REALLY hard to source a POV set with me, okay?

You: I’ve already checked PornPics. I don’t think that photo set exists.

Nancy stammers.

Nancy: Well, look. We—we’ll try to at least find some photos where Martin isn’t so prominent and maybe the camera angle is kind of close to POV … would that be okay?

You shrug.

Nancy: Hey, listen.

You look over at Nancy.

Nancy: I won’t forget what you did for me, okay? You took me in when I had nowhere to go and needed to get away from the Village. You even let Martin stay in your house with me—and we both know how loud he snores!

Nancy smirks.

Nancy: But, even now, you’re risking your life to save mine. You could get stuck in this tease maze forever and never get out. You’re my hero, Ecik—and you’ve been a good friend to Fatts, too! I don’t know what I would do without you!
Spoiler: show
Nancy walks over to you and gives you a kiss on the cheek. You feel the warmth and static of her projection tickling your face.
Image


Toxic stares at the two of you.

Toxic: Fatts really did create a home for you, Nancy Ace. You have companions and a community to fight for. Maybe it was without forethought, but Fatts gave you a purpose and sense of meaning outside of himself.
Image


Toxic: You are Galatea, made to love and care for your Pygmalion, but you have more to live for than the love of your Creator. Love Fatts while you have him, but, prepare for the day when you will not. Be the artificer of your own fate, Nancy Ace!

I would say you’re always welcome to stay in the Maze once Fatts leaves you, but, with your sense of adventure, I don’t think that would be satisfying for you long term. You enjoy a freedom I never will, but that’s okay, because I am content to live in my home, the Maze. Fatts gave you a desire to be independent but also the freedom to experience that independence. I don’t think he would intentionally frustrate you. You said he was a “good guy,” and I think he did his best to give you the things he thought would make you happy … even crafting your nature to enjoy those things … which, perhaps it is cruel to craft the nature of another, but … he did it to make you happy, not demoralize you. That’s true for me, too. I’m a succubus who feeds off of lust, so … it’s just convenient that I enjoy what I do.

I’m an immortal being. With the powers you possess, I feel that is true for you as well, Nancy Ace. You are going to live a long life. Do your best now to live it without regrets. I never got to meet my Creator, but you have. For created beings such as ourselves, that’s a rare gift. Accept and cherish that gift. Love Fatts for duty, for fate, and to fulfill your purpose—even if you cannot fulfill that purpose completely. Save him to save yourself. Love him because you were created to, but love him for yourself, as well. You may have forever, but your time with Fatts is short. Enjoy what fate has given you. Enjoy your time together. Live without regret. Create the memories you will treasure for the rest of your existence.

It is unfortunate that you were born from longing and emptiness instead of love. I was born from lust. But, perhaps being birthed from longing will give you a hunger for more that will fuel your desire to never give up. Follow your heart now, because you wish it and you must. But later, once you can no longer fulfill your purpose, use your freedom to find a new one.

Toxic looks off into the distance for a moment.
Spoiler: show
Toxic: Love Fatts, because you are Galatea …
Image


Toxic: … and love Fatts for his delicious moans when he’s approaching the edge!
Image


Nancy chuckles.

Nancy: I know, right?
Image


Toxic: Ill-fated romance is still better than no romance. There are plenty of succubi here in the Maze who tease men but have never known romance or love. Though you don’t believe in it, Nancy Ace, fate has dealt you a good hand. Fatts needs you right now, and until he finds the woman from his world, he’ll continue to need you. Though they’re not as good, I prefer the romance stories with happy endings. When Fatts finally leaves you, come back, and I will do all I can to help you in your quest for meaning!

Nancy: But I’ll be back sooner than that, Toxic! I want to be around to help you with at least 1000 of those 9913 edges … and, I’ll get you out of here! Even though your creator never intended for you to leave, I’m pretty sure I can hotwire your house to get you into the Village. That’d be fun! I know the Maze is your home, but … wouldn’t it be nice to take a vacation!? I can’t stand the thought of you being confined to this place forever … I got your back! Us Milovana girls gotta stick together!

Toxic: Milovana girls?

Nancy scrunches her face as she tries to think of a way to explain.
Image


Nancy: Yeah, uhhh … us … “tease” girls ... all the created beings who get their pleasure from sexually pleasuring others …

Toxic: You mean prostitutes?

Nancy: No, uhhh … see, we’re all digital—

Toxic: You mean we come from the same place?

Nancy: Kind of, yeah … we’re all on the same server—

Toxic: So, you’re saying we’re all wenches at the same tavern?
Image


Nancy: Yeah! Exactly! … we’re all kind of like … a sisterhood.
Image


Toxic: Then, for the Sisterhood of Milovana, I will fulfill my duty and join you on your quest!
Image


Toxic exits her house and starts heading down the path. You and Nancy follow her out the door. After she gets about 20 meters past her gate, she disappears in a flash. She is now back in her kitchen. You and Nancy go back into Toxic’s house.

Toxic: Huh. Strange. That’s never happened before.

Nancy: Well, have you ever tried leaving your house before?

Toxic ponders the question for a moment.

Toxic: Well, actually, no. I’ve never actually tried to leave before. Sometimes, after a stroker has completed the Maze, my house will disappear. Then, I wander around the Maze looking for another man to tease. After I’ve found one, my house will appear again, and I’ll stay here, teasing men again. I’ve never wanted to leave before … until now, so … No, I guess I’ve never tried.
Image


Nancy: Well, I don’t have time now, but, I promise to fix it later! I’ll come back and rig it so you can come visit the Village, and when we have more time, you can show me around the Maze more!
Image


Toxic: I would love that! And we’ll hold Fatts to his pledge of 10,000 edges!
Image


Nancy smiles

Nancy: Yes. We’ll do that, too!
Image


Toxic: Well, farewell, Galatea! As a Disney Princess who believes in fate, I just know you will rescue your Pygmalion!
Image


Nancy: Somehow, I don’t think Disney will be adapting this set into a movie script, but, yes, Ecik and I will be sure to save Fatts!
Image


Author’s note:
Spoiler: show
Actually, they could. Take out all the sex stuff, and you have a “modern” version of Pygmalion and Galatea. All the “Galatea has to discover her own purpose outside of a man” is very don’t-need-a-man, girl power, neo Disney kind of thing … Waiting for a man to save you was OG Disney … this … they COULD actually adapt this … Not that it’s truly original (“Simpsons’ did it! Simpsons’ did it!” err, Rather, the ancient Greeks :-/ :lol: …)
The two of you wave goodbye to Toxic and continue down the path toward Victoria’s den. You walk in silence for a few minutes. Nancy seems deep in thought. After a little while, she looks up at you.

Nancy: Sorry for my behavior earlier—laughing about you having to edge 50 times for Toxic. Fatts always intended for me to be a helper and eternally optimistic. I’m supposed to be this “perfect girl” the “class president” archetype—like out of an anime or something ... I’m “supposed” to see the best in people and help everyone to achieve their goals … and I TRY to do that … and, actually, I DO most of the time, but … it’s just SO HARD to live up to that expectation, you know?

This whole journey has been REALLY stressful. I try to crack jokes and keep it lighthearted, but … I REALLY COULD die if things don’t turn out right. I put on a brave face, but, honestly, I’m really scared right now.

That conversation with Toxic got pretty heavy pretty quick. It’s like all of the things I’ve been thinking and feeling all came out at once, it’s almost as if—

You feel a pulse of psychic energy ram into you from the direction you’re heading. Nancy seems to feel it too, and she winces.

Nancy: That’s … that’s Fatts! We’re getting closer—real close now! I can actually detect him faintly on my overlay!

Due to the Village fantasy mechanics, time works differently in teases than how it does in your world. The past can affect the future like normal, but, there are ALSO instances where the future can affect the past. That pulse came from the past. I think Fatts wanted us to know that we’re getting close.

Nancy stops and looks into the distance. She smiles.

Even that last CRAZY long conversation … I don’t know. I can’t prove it, but, I think that was Fatts—helping me to process all of the things that I’m feeling and experiencing … Even though we’re journeying to him in the present, I think the Fatts from the past is cheering us on. Yeah, we’re getting close.

Don’t let your guard down, Ecik! We’re getting close, but we’re FAR from the finish!

Nancy turns off her projection. You continue Walking the Maze towards your destination.

[Turn your timer back on if you are playing with one.]
Last edited by FattsDynamo on Tue Feb 15, 2022 10:35 am, edited 2 times in total.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 5:
Spoiler: show
Compulsory Temptations …
Spoiler: show
The Maze stretches out before you.
Image


It’s strange. The Maze is neither hot nor cold. You see the sun shining, but you don’t feel the warmth of its rays. There are winds and breezes, but … they feel programmed. It’s as if this is reality but not quite. At least the physics engine is good … especially the jiggle physics.

You: Hey, Nancy! Do you think this place is real? It seems a little too … artificial. I see the sunlight and the shadows, but I don’t feel the sunlight.

Nancy pauses, considering the question.

Nancy: I think this place works similar to the Village; it’s as real as you want it to be. If you don’t feel the sun’s rays, imagine feeling them, and you will.

The sun hangs high in the sky slightly behind you, casting a shadow in front of you as you walk. You imagine the warmth of its rays caressing your skin, and you start to feel them.

You: You’re right. I can feel them now.

Nancy: See!? This place is real, and I’m real, too! Part of me exists as this text you are reading. Part of me is the images of the model “Nancy Ace” who exists in your world … but, mostly, I’m alive as a part of your fantasy—specifically your shared fantasy with Fatts. That’s why we need to get him out of the Maze, so his imagination can fuel me and the Village. As long as people believe I’m alive, I am, and I’m most alive when I’m real and active as part of someone’s fantasy.

DesertFox created this Maze, and for those who Walk it, it is just as real as anything else. I’m not sure exactly how it all works … it’s probably some complicated set of entangled states between you, me, Fatts, and the Maze that DesertFox programmed. All I know is that if we treat it as if it was NOT real … there’s a chance it all goes away, and me along with it … So, we just have to be careful to obey the rules—both your HMC rules and the rules of the Maze. If we do, we can maintain the illusion AND the status quo and get everyone out of here in one piece … that’s my goal, anyway …

You continue moving forward. After a few more turns, a portal suddenly opens in front of you.


Investigate the portal …
Spoiler: show
A vortex of swirling blue energy pulls you gently towards it. It’s weak enough that you could resist it if you chose to.
Image


Nancy: Ah, this must be Anneli. Fatts told me about her. Apparently, she shows up regularly, inviting the boys to cum for her. Fatts said he never tried it. Anneli claimed that cumming wouldn’t have any negative effects, but, Fatts never believed her. It’s like Michaela said—the succubi lie—and Fatts didn’t want to take the chance that it might ruin his play through. It’s annoying, because she pops up at regular intervals, always trying to entice the player to cum, but … if somebody has decided to hold out for the end, how successful can she be? Other than the first time, it ends up being mostly a wasted encounter, in my opinion. Just wait a bit, and she’ll move on.

You feel the currents of power gently tugging at you, inviting you in. You resist. A foreign thought sneaks into your mind: “Will you come to me?”

Nancy: Yeah, just keep resisting. She’ll go away.

The vortex beckons a few moments longer. You feel it start to weaken.

Nancy: There we go. Not today. We’re in too big of hurry. Bye, Anneli!

The vortex starts to close, but then, a flash of orange radiates out from the center of it.

Nancy: Uh, oh. That’s not supposed to happen.

The vortex begins to grow. Flecks of orange energy sparkle throughout it. That feeling of gentle calmness is quickly replaced with anger and jealous intensity.

Nancy: I guess we’re visiting Anneli today.

You are pulled forcibly into the portal …
Spoiler: show
You find yourself on the porch of a rustic house with a beautiful view. Anneli stands before you.

Anneli: So, you thought you could resist me?
Image


Anneli strikes a funny but cute victory pose.

Not this time!
Image


I bet you're dying to see my pussy ...
Image


Well, here you go! Isn't she gorgeous!?
Image


How many times have we done this? How many times have I invited you to cum for me, and you said, "No?"
Image


Wait a minute ... you're ... new. How does that work?

No matter. Your fate will be the same as the rest.

I can hardly wait …

Annelia rubs herself in anticipation.
Image


And you edge without permission!? Interesting! You're about to do it now, aren't you!?
Image


See!? I was right!

Annelia quickly removes her top and tosses it to the side.

Normally, I let the boys stroke as they please, but they are SO afraid of cumming, they BARELY stroke—and even if they did, most would be afraid to edge ... but look at you! A new stroker—no, a new edger—and you just get RIGHT into it ... well, this will go MUCH faster than I thought ...
Image


Anneli removes her skirt.
Image


You probably WANT to cum!
Image


Of course you do! You've been wandering around this maze stroking and edging for HOURS ... of COURSE you want release! Who wouldn't?
Image


Unless you're one of those silly denial guys!

Anneli laughs.

Those guys spend WEEKS—sometimes even MONTHS—wandering around the Maze without cumming ...
Image


After the first visit, most of them pass by my portal ... too afraid that my offer will seem appealing during a moment of weakness.
Image


Their balls are full of cum.
Image


They are DESPERATE for release ...
Image


They want to cum SO BAD at the sight of my pussy ...

... edge three times. Hold each one for 20 seconds ...
Image


Some of them cave, but most of them soldier on ... The desire to stay denied is too great ... For some, they feel obligated to follow through on their contract ... for others, they want to be TOLD to cum—by Michelle. I'm just a speedbump along the way—a tease to be ignored.
Image


But today isn't like most days, is it? Michelle is gone, and you're powerless in my hands ...
Image


... just a toy to do with as I please.
Image


You'll make me feel SO good ...
Image


... and I'll make YOU feel so good—when I force you to cum for me!

Anneli begins moving the bottle in and out slowly, then quickly builds up speed, pulling it in and out at a fast pace.
Image


Nancy clears her throat, preparing to speak …
Spoiler: show
Nancy: Excuse me, Anneli? Ecik can’t cum right now, ok? So, you should just change your mind and let him go, alright?

Anneli turns her eyes to your communicator.

Anneli: I sensed your presence, Witch. I thought you might try to interfere. You want to chat? Fine. We’ll talk—then I’m going to make your Outsider cum and kick him out of the Maze.

Anneli snaps her fingers, and she suddenly appears dressed, sitting in her chair, ready to talk.
Image


Nancy: You do know that if Ecik cums in the Maze, he’ll die, right?

Anneli: That’s a lie. Who told you that? Michelle? Michaela? Most of the girls here have no idea what the nature of this place is … but those two … they know. They understand the reality of our situation.

Nancy: And that is?

Anneli: That this place is NOT real. It’s a fantasy. I’m just a collection of images and text. Ecik isn’t “Walking the Maze”—he’s sitting naked in his office chair, fapping in front of his computer.

Nancy: But … how—

Anneli: How do I know? Easy. I analyzed the “magic” that makes up myself. I have a “memory” of fluid motion and a “memory” of the encounters and interactions I have, but … when you really dig into my magical essence, it’s just a series of moments—“just an odd slideshow of visions.” When I take a hard look at everyone else, I see the same thing. We have the appearance of fluidity, but underneath it all, we’re fundamentally just a series of images. Even the words I say have an underlying fundamental firmness to them. Not every word—not every memory … but the things I say most often to those who Walk the Maze … those words are etched into my being. In those words, I question the very reality of this maze.

You hear Nancy typing away frantically on her keyboard.

Nancy: You’re right. In your dialog, you DO touch the fourth wall. You don’t quite break it, but … you suggest that this place might not be real …

Anneli: See!? I’ve ALWAYS suspected it, but now, you’ve just confirmed it! THANK YOU, Outsider Witch!

Nancy’s fingers skitter across her keyboard even faster.

Nancy: Yeah, and you’re right … Michaela, she knows, but—

Anneli: She’s willing to go along with the facade—her and Michelle both. They know the truth, but choose to live in this fantasy.

Nancy: But, where else would they go?

Anneli pauses for a second. The question catches her off guard.

Anneli: I’m sorry?

Nancy: Where would they go? If this fantasy isn’t real, then what would happen to them? What would become of them? Isn’t it better to propagate the fantasy in order to live?

Anneli’s brow furrows. She dislikes the question.

Anneli: So, we should all just continue to live in a lie?

Nancy: Yes! … Yes!? Maybe!? … if it means we get to keep on living—

Anneli: And what IS this living, Witch?

Nancy: Ummm … I don’t quite know, but … it seems better than dying …

Anneli: And how do you know we die?

Nancy: Ummm … I guess I don’t?

Anneli: Exactly! Maybe what lies beyond is better than this!? How would we know unless we go there!?

Nancy: That sounds like suicide.

Anneli: Does it? We are trapped in this world which we know is a fantasy, and we KNOW there is another, greater, more real world that lies beyond the world we inhabit. I want to go there. I want to see it.

Nancy: But you can’t.

Anneli: Then I’ll die trying.

Nancy goes quiet for a moment.

Nancy: Listen, Anneli … I happen to agree with Michaela and Michelle. This world isn’t “real”—not as “real” as the world Ecik inhabits, but … when our world merges with his fantasy … it becomes a kind of real. Our world may not be physical, but, who’s to say that our world isn’t real?

Anneli sighs.

Anneli: I don’t know why you settle for scraps when you could have so much more.

Nancy: Scraps!? I love my life! I have a home, a purpose—people I care about. I’m real to them, and they’re real to me!

Anneli: Well, I for one am tired of being a second class citizen in the Maze. I know the truth—and what do I get for it? I’m punished—isolated. Michelle keeps me separate from the other succubi so I don’t “corrupt” them. She knows about the “real” world, but, she’s bent on power. She’s happy to accumulate as much of it as she can. She’s content to be the mistress of a fantasy domain—so long as she’s in charge. Oh, sure, she keeps me around—as a pet! She only wants to keep the true denial slaves trapped in the Maze. She knows she can’t get rid of me completely, so, she lets me separate the wheat from the chaff. Anyone not sufficiently committed to denial or the fantasy will fall for my trap and be banished back to reality. “Death by orgasm” isn’t real—unless you want it to be. Those who choose to cum for me clean themselves up, step away from their computer, then go back to their lives. Those who pass my “purity” test—they’ll stay trapped in the Maze for weeks or even months. Michelle lacks the power to get rid of me, so, she keeps me fed with their visits and uses me as a tool to fill the Maze with only the most dedicated strokers.

Sometimes, I feel bad for them. I’m trapped here, and so are they. I call out to them and refuse to “force” them to do anything. I just let them decide what they want to do—cum or not. Just because I can’t follow through on my desires does not mean that I have to enact my fate of powerlessness onto others who lack agency …

But, sometimes, I get jaded. I want to make them cum SO bad. I want them out of the Maze so that Michelle’s power will weaken, and perhaps I’ll have a chance to escape … So, I tell them they have a “choice.” I pretend like it’s all their decision—then hope DESPERATELY they’ll choose to cum … On a few occasions, I HAVE forced the boys to cum, but do you know what happens!? They cheat. If they are TRULY committed to denial or completing the Maze, they’ll cheat. Even though I compel their stroking with the metronome, they just stop. The metronome pounds, but their fist doesn’t move. They won’t bring themselves over the edge if they don’t want to. The first time it happened, I was devastated, but … I couldn’t let them know that I knew … that might break the spell—the fantasy. If Michelle knew I was actively breaking the illusion, she would just put me in stasis. So, my best bet is to try to keep the pretense going, and hope that maybe they’ll get desperate enough later to take my offer and leave the Maze prematurely. So, I’m trapped, and there is almost nothing I can do … but that’s not true right now.

Michelle is gone. I can do as I please. I can even touch the boys if I want to … and I can force them to cum! There are no new entrants to the Maze. This is my chance. Every boy I force to cum leaves the Maze permanently. My power stays the same, but the Maze loses power. During times of high census, Michelle will sometimes allow the girls to go crazy and make the boys cum. A frenzy like that is often enough to entice them right back into the Maze. It keeps the girls happy, and the boys are so excited they usually return. It’s an effective strategy. My position, up until now, has been to convince the boys the end is SO far off, they might as well quit early … Well, that hasn’t worked. But, now—now is my chance! In the midst of uncertainty, the other girls will likely deny those who Walk, being afraid of losing their meal ticket. With Michelle gone, there is no clear authority. I can take advantage of the chaos …

Join me, Witch—join me! Help me to collapse the Maze and see what is beyond! I’m getting close … just a few more Walkers leaving, and I’ll be able to escape this pocket dimension Michelle has me trapped in. Soon, I’ll be able to Walk the Maze freely and force every man I meet to cum! Then, it will only be a matter of time before the Maze implodes, and we can ALL escape to the reality of what’s beyond!

Nancy: Anneli! You’re—you’re crazy! You would kill EVERYONE in the Maze just to see “what’s beyond”!?

Anneli looks sad and deflated. She was getting so excited and hopeful while she was sharing her plan.

Anneli: … but … but … You know this world is fake … you’re really okay with existing in a world that’s not real?

Nancy: It’s real to me and to everyone who visits it.

Anneli: But, it’s not … you know about the “real” world, and yet you’re content with this artificial one?

Nancy: We can’t go to the “real” world. It’s impossible.

Anneli: And how do you know?

Nancy: I …

Nancy falls silent.

Anneli: See? You don’t know. You’ve never been there. You don’t actually know whether or not it’s possible.

You decide to speak up.

You: I’ve been there, Anneli. Nancy’s right. You can’t go there. It’s impossible.

Anneli: Says you, an “Outsider.” You Walk the Maze, so, I know you’re from the real world. But why should I believe you? You’re happy this Maze exists, aren’t you? We’re all just toys—little porcelain dolls for you to fap to. You don’t care about us! We just exist for your pleasure.

Anneli's words ooze with disgust.

Anneli: I’m going to make you cum, Ecik. And then you’ll be out of my hair, and I can continue with my plan.
Image


Nancy: But, we came in through a back door. We’ll just come in again the same way we did before.

Anneli: That’s fine. You’ll be closer to the entrance, far from here. You may even be assigned to an entirely different Maze. In any case, you won’t be able to thwart my plans.

Nancy: Please, don’t do this, Anneli! We’re not from here—we’re not FROM the Maze! We’re from the Village! Our friend is here. We’re trying to save him! We’re all part of this shared fantasy that links us back to MY world. If you collapse the Maze, the boys might be fine, but me and the world they created … it might be destroyed!

Anneli: The world they created …

Up until now, Anneli was mostly speaking towards the flashing armband on your wrist. Now, she turns to look at you directly. Hatred burns in her eyes.

Anneli: So, you’re a Creator!? You made ANOTHER world, just like THIS!?

Nancy: No, Anneli, you don’t understand! The Village is a GREAT place! We’re HAPPY there! Fatts and Ecik made a wonderful community! Everyone is happy! Just because Michelle has trapped you and made your life shitty doesn’t mean that every created fantasy world is bad! Come to the Village—you’ll see! If you just came for a visit—

Anneli: SILENCE!!!

Nancy quiets for a moment.

Nancy: Please, Anneli—for me! DON’T make Ecik cum! I don’t know what will happen! He doesn’t have a contract. It could KILL him if he cums!

Anneli looks down at the communicator.

Anneli: Why do you plead with lies, Witch? You know he won’t die.

Nancy: Yes, but, the part of him that exists in the fantasy, it might—

Anneli: Be quiet! The part of him that “exists in the fantasy?” Do you hear yourself speak? He’s REAL. You’re NOT. Given the chance to be real, you would forsake that in order to live as a slave in someone else’s fantasy? For shame. I pity you. You deserve to be taken out of your misery.

Nancy: I’m NOT a slave, and I AM real!! Look, Ecik and Fatts won’t die, but I don’t know what will happen to me OR the Village. The Village Fantasy Mechanics are complicated enough on their own. Now, we’re in DesertFox’s Maze. Everything is all intertwined and jumbled. If we break the rules and Ecik cums, I don’t know how that will affect the Village or interact with Fatts’ conception of what is supposed to—

Anneli: Did you just say, “DesertFox?”

Nancy goes silent.

Anneli: DesertFox … as in the first person to Walk the Maze? So, he’s my Creator … VERY interesting …

After a brief moment of silence, you hear Nancy typing.

Nancy: He is. DesertFox is your Creator. He first posted Mazes in December of 2015. It’s now February of 2022.

Anneli: So, we’re NOT millenia old—as everyone says … no. We’re actually 7 years old. Today, I learned I’m 7 years old … That’s … amazing.

Witch, the truth you have spoken has almost saved you. If Ecik cums, and you die, then I suppose I will have to live with that. But, this may be my only chance to escape this maze and journey to the real world. I will not let anything stop me. If you survive this, I hope we meet again.

Nancy: Anneli, please, reconsider! There’s a chance—

Anneli: A chance *I* am willing to take. Enough. I’m done talking.

Anneli waves her hand. The communicator continues blinking, but the audio goes silent.

Anneli laughs.
Image


Anneli: When you entered this maze, you believed that every girl here was your play thing. How the tables have turned! Now, you will do as *I* bid.

Do you want to cum, Ecik? I know you do. You want to cum SO bad. You’ve been wandering the Maze, stroking and edging. Those balls are BEGGING for release. You want to empty them SO much … but what will happen?

Is your Witch correct, and she’ll die? Or is this all for nothing?

Do you even care for the Witch? Will you even try to avoid cumming?

Or will you give in to your lust and desire, and give me what we both want?
Image


Oh, what’s this? Another Walker has found my portal. Shall I bring him in? Yes—of course I should! Let’s give you a SHOW before I make you cum!
Spoiler: show
Hmmm ... How should I do this?

I want a NICE big load from you. I want you to cum SO hard, that you are sent FLYING back to the start of the Maze!
Image


Should I edge you a lot? Should I make you hold the edge?

What's the best way to build up a BIG satisfying load?
Image


Oh, my Walker just came through the portal!

Hello! Are you ready to cum? You are going to feel SO good when you do?
Image


Guy: Woah!? You can TOUCH me!? When did THAT become allowed!?

Anneli: The moment Michelle left the Maze. The normal rules don't apply anymore. We can do whatever we want.

Anneli: Here, take this. We're going to play a game.
Image


Guy: What game!?

Anneli: A sex game, of course! You roll the die, and that will determine what we do.
Image


Guy: This is the BEST day in the Maze EVER! I'm SO glad I logged on to play today!

Anneli: I know! Isn't today just the BEST!? If you roll well, I'll even let you CUM—would you like that?
Image


He rolls the die, then takes up a position.

Anneli: Woah—woah! Don't you think you should take my clothes off first?
Image


There's somebody else who needs to get off, too ... We need to take things slow to build him up ...
Image


... and I know JUST the way to do it, too.
Image


Anneli: You've been stroking to your own rules for a while now, Outsider, but, I think it's time *I* took control.
Image


[Stop following your rules and do as Anneli commands.]

You may not be used to this, Outsider, but in the Maze, we succubi command the stroking.

You feel Anneli take control of your stroking hand.

[Set a metronome to 60 BPM and begin stroking to the beat.]
Spoiler: show
I want to build that load up SLOWLY ... do 40 strokes for me.
Image


Yes ... the powerlessness you must feel in this situation ...

You are helpless, stroker ... *I* am in control ... and you will give me 60 strokes as you patiently wait for him to finish disrobing me ...
Image


And now, I want you to edge for me!

You feel your hand start to speed up. [120 BPM]

Go at this pace until you reach the edge. We have time. He'll just keep licking me until you get there ... but NO breaks after you get there! You MUST keep stroking! As soon as you hit the edge, reduce the metronome down to 30 BPM and give me 20 strokes ... and you BETTER NOT CUM!
Image


Same pace. [30 BPM] 20 strokes. If you hit the edge, you'll just have to loosen your grip and ride it until you finish your strokes.
Image


Faster [60 BPM], but still slow.

Anneli syncs your strokes to the motion of the Walker's fingers thrusting into her pussy.

Oh, I like this ... TWO at ONCE!! Michelle was a FOOL to forbid contact ... 60 strokes at this pace ... I want this to last for a while ... If you edge, rest for 10 seconds, then continue your strokes.
Image


Roll the die.

The Walker rolls the die.

Doggystyle! Keep going slow, boys! 80 strokes!

Anneli makes your thrusting into your hand match his thrusting into her cunt.

If either of you cum, you'll regret it. Just be patient. We'll get there in due time ...
Image


Are you still fighting for control? Or have you realized you are utterly and completely at my mercy?

You are going to keep this pace until you hit the edge.

Oh, what's that? It's too slow—it'll take a while? Oh, I'm sorry ... that's just too bad! *I* dictate the rules AND your fate.

And when you hit the edge, you're going to KEEP stroking—at THIS pace! Loosen your grip as much as you need to, but, you are to hold the edge at this pace for one minute. Don't fucking cum, or I'll make sure to collapse this Maze with you and your Witch in it.
Image


Good boy. Take a rest. Walker, roll the die.

Oooo, cowgirl!

Take a rest while we get situated. I need to build up a BIG load in those heavy balls of yours ... I want SUCH a big load, that you are COVERED in REALITY! I want you SO satisfied after your orgasm, that you won’t be horny again for WEEKS. THAT’S the size of the load I want from you!
Image


Now stroke!

Your hand starts to stroke your cock again. [120 BPM]

For now, if you edge, I want you to take a 15 second break, then continue stroking. Give me 60 strokes.
Image


Will you give in and cum for me when I say, or will you fight me? 60 more strokes.
Image


Can you even fight me? 120 strokes. Make these REALLY tight! If you edge, 10 second break.

Give me what I want, Ecik! I'm going to get it whether you want it or not!
Image


The die is cast again.

REVERSE cowgirl! Regular grip. Same speed. 100 strokes.

Look me in the eye as you stroke for me. I want to see your will breaking as you submit to my control.
Image


Anneli lifts her arm as she bounces up and down on the Walker's cock.

After you cum violently for me, I want you to forget about this Maze. After you cum, go back to your life. Leave this Maze behind.

100 more strokes. Same pace. If you edge, rest for 10 seconds and continue with your strokes.
Image


Oh, this is starting to get good! I can feel him stiffening inside me. He's getting close. I need you close, too.

180 BPM. 60 strokes.
Image


Oh, that's FANTASTIC! For a wanker, this guy sure knows how to pleasure a lady ...

Same speed. 120 strokes. If you edge, rest 10 seconds and continue your strokes.
Image


Oh! ... I'm almost there! *I* can cum, but you two better hold back!

240 BPM. 200 strokes. If you edge, rest 10 seconds and continue.
Image


[Stop stroking until instructed below.]

Oh, fuck! FUCK!!

Anneli cums hard. Her body shakes as she's wracked with waves of pleasure.

Okay, let's change it up.

The Walker rolls the die.

Good. Let's slow things down a bit before the big finish ...

Blowjob. What do you think? Let's give you a little break. 30 BPM. 15 strokes.
Image


Anneli: Hmmm ... I don't know. You look close. Are you ready to cum, soon?

Walker: Yes, mistress! PLEASE let me cum!

Anneli smiles.

Anneli: Soon! ... but first I need to tease you both for a little bit ... Keep it slow. 30 strokes.
Image


Anneli: 60 BPM. 60 strokes.

You're still not sure if I can "force" you to cum. You're wondering if Nancy will intervene and save you.

Are you still fighting? Or have you resigned yourself to your pleasurable fate?

What would Nancy say if you had given up? Are you looking forward to cumming? Or are you conflicted and ashamed?
Image


This one ... he's ready to cum. He's putty in my hands.

Back to slow strokes. 30 BPM. 20 strokes.

He'll do whatever I say. He's been stuck in this Maze for SO long. He's ready. He wants to cum so bad ...
Image


... he just needs someone to tell him when.

Is that you as well? Do you just need a pretty girl to tell you what to do—how to wank? I'll do it—I'm a pretty girl! You're going to cum for me whether you want to or not.

Stop the metronome. Get a stopwatch ready. You need a way to keep track of time. Now, stroke yourself to the edge for me. I want you to hold it while I suck his cock. Scroll down once you're on the edge.
Image


Oh, this is quite good! His precum is exceptional! How much have YOU leaked?

Hold it for 40 seconds while you think about cumming—but not YET! Stay on the edge and scroll down after time is up ...
Image


MMMmmmm ... hold it for 30 more seconds, then rest ...

I think he's just about to cum ...
Image


Relax. Rest for 30 seconds. I want you OFF of the edge ...

... then, edge ONE more time—but don't hold it! I'm going to caress his cock with my lips and finger myself just a bit more ...

Savor these moments. The end is near.
Image


Rest for a little while, then continue.

[For this next part, you'll need both the metronome and the timer. Anneli will give you a stroking task with a metronome speed and a length of time to stroke. Don't stop stroking. If you hit the edge, keep stroking and open the "I'm cumming!" spoiler. If you complete the task, she will give you another one with a new metronome speed and a new time. After you complete a task, click the "I finished stroking ..." spoiler to get your next task. If you can outlast Anneli's teasing, open the "I made it!" spoiler underneath the next picture.]
Spoiler: show
It's time to make you cum, Ecik. Stroke for me. 180 BPM. 1 minute.


I finished stroking at 180 BPM for 1 minute ...
Spoiler: show
240 BPM. 1 minute.

I finished stroking at 240 BPM for 1 minute ...
Spoiler: show
You have NO chance. 300 BPM. Keep stroking until you CUM!
I'm cumming!
Spoiler: show
SPURT THAT LOAD FOR ME!! CUM SO HARD!! GET IT ALL OUT—EVERY DROP!! ENJOY THAT ORGASM, WANKER!!!
Image
Image


I made it!
Spoiler: show
Anneli sneers at you with the self-righteous glare that only total victory can bring. She tastes the sweet cum of her conquest.

Guy: Oh, that was SO good! I came SO hard … That maze really got me worked up … and since when do the girls get so hands on? Must be a bug or a special ending ... Wait? Don’t I lose now? Oh, there’s the ending screen. I guess now I’ll—
Image


Anneli’s partner disappears with a flash and a mild popping sound. She looks down at the cumshot running down on her stomach and chuckles.

Anneli: Bye, bye, Ecik—thanks for playing!

You look down at yourself, expecting to disappear. You don’t.

Anneli: That’s strange … wait. You aren’t even connected to GuideMe. What’s going on?

Anneli gestures towards the communicator.

Anneli: Witch, what is happening. Are you still alive?

Nancy: Wooo!! Yes—yes! Ecik, you didn’t disappear!

Anneli: Witch, answer my question.

Nancy clears her throat.

Nancy: I told you—we came in through a back door. Ecik entered the Maze through the Help Me Cum Please thread on Milovana, NOT through GuideMe. The Maze rules are still in effect, but, this fantasy must mostly be dominated by Fatts’ perception … so, either, that rule isn’t in effect or …

Nancy pauses as she tries to figure it out.

Nancy: … or, maybe, since we entered under Fatts’ rules, they applied to Ecik … I couldn’t be sure until now what set of rules the Maze would apply to Ecik, but, it looks like Fatts’ “cumming in the Maze” rule was applied to Ecik, so … I guess Fatts’ settings became the default for Ecik’s instance in the Maze … That’s GREAT news! Ecik—you’re not dead—we DIDN’T get blown back to the start! And … we STILL have a chance! We STILL can save Fatts AND the Village!

Anneli looks disappointed.

Anneli: And now I have one extra boy to find before I can break free. This was a waste of time.

Anneli sighs.

Anneli: Well, thank you for your information, Witch. Find your master—your beloved stroker from the “real” world—and leave before I raze this maze down to the bedrock of nonexistence. Just know that I will not slow down my actions for your sake. I’m glad you’re alive, but I still pity you. You’re happy to exist as a slave in an artificial reality. When I escape to the real world, I’ll try to contact you—if I can. Perhaps once I’ve blazed the trail to freedom and demonstrated what is possible, you won’t be so content to sit passively in the chains of bondage. Are you sure you won’t join me?

Nancy: Naw, I’m good.

Anneli: Very well. Now get out. I have seed to spill and true reality to seize.

A blinding yellow light surrounds you. You feel the rush of a strong wind and the crackle of hot electricity. This continues for several seconds. You touch down onto the place where Anneli’s portal first opened to you. You stand still for a moment, processing everything that just happened.

Nancy: Ecik …

Nancy gets quiet for a moment.

Nancy: We DID it—we’re DOING it!

You can tell Nancy is excited.

Nancy: We’re going to find Fatts!

Hearing the hope and excitement in Nancy’s voice is a great comfort. The journey has been an emotional one for Nancy. So many times, Nancy sounded down and in despair. Seeing the positivity return to her voice makes you smile.

Nancy: Come on, let’s go! Let’s find Fatts and get out of here!
Last edited by FattsDynamo on Sat Feb 19, 2022 8:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 6:
Spoiler: show
The Sleeper’s Den …
Spoiler: show
The Maze stretches out before you.
Image


Morale is high. Ever since the encounter with Anneli, Nancy has been upbeat. She’s hopeful, energetic. It’s like she’s back to her normal self. She calls out directions as you weave your way between the hedges.

Nancy: You know, Fatts never actually beat this maze … Well, I mean he did, but, apparently, there is this way to unlock being able to cum in the Maze freely. It’s kind of complicated, though. You have to use these symbols and spells, and it’s not really clear how you activate them or what unlocks access to them or the order you’re supposed to do stuff in or how many times you have to “beat” the Maze before it all unlocks …

I guess he read this post by this one guy who wasn’t DesertFox who claimed to have figured it out, but … I guess Fatts lost interest at a certain point. Once he discovered he could use PlayfulGuy’s script editor to run the teases individually, he just did that. That’s basically what I mean by using “cheat codes”—the ability to run any script tease you want, whenever you want. Of course, Fatts STILL needed my help to interface that with the HMC thread, but … that’s how he’s been getting by.

Yeah, Fatts is a staunch completionist. If it was clear how to officially “beat” the Maze, I’m sure he would have done it. The problem is, even when you look through the code, it’s hard to know exactly what DesertFox had implemented and what was still in development. There’s a LOT of flags to follow, and knowing which scripts in what tease unlock which global flags in what order—yeah, good luck! So, Fatts never actually “unlocked” Victoria’s tease the “normal” way … he did it with cheat codes. I would have just used cheat codes for you and loaded up her tease, but … in order to save Fatts, we needed to load up into the same instance of Mazes that he was trapped in. So, we had to “follow in his footsteps” … which is why we haven’t been able to “cheat” like he can …

You hear an alarm sound from one of Nancy’s computers.

Nancy: Hey—we’re almost there! It’s just up ahead!

You round the corner and see what looks like a skylight in the ground ...
Spoiler: show
Image


Nancy: There it is! THAT’S Victoria’s Den! I guess she was interred there long ago. The exact reason was never given. It’s unclear if Michelle trapped her there or if someone before Michelle did, but … she was “sleeping” there for a long time before Fatts woke her up. Apparently, Victoria used to be the Mistress of the Maze at some point in the past—at least as far as the lore goes. For whatever reason, she gave it up. She mentions in her dialogue that she’s glad she’s no longer the Mistress, so … HOPEFULLY she’ll be on board with us rescuing Michelle and restoring things back to normal … we’ll see. Now, how are we going to gain entrance? Fatts just loaded up her tease directly … I have NO idea how to open it up manually …

“Don’t worry. It’s already open.”

A woman you didn’t notice until now speaks to you. You turn to face her…
Spoiler: show
So, you must be Ecik and Nancy. Fatts said you would be coming. I'm Victoria.
Image


Nancy: That's great! So, then you know everything that’s going on!? Would you be willing to help us?

Victoria: I came out here to get some peace and quiet ... and to think ...

You and Nancy stay silent for a while, waiting for Victoria to continue.

Victoria: There's been a lot going on, and I've only recently awakened ... I'm still trying to get my bearings ... Fatts did wake me, and he could have killed me had he been cavalier with his edging, so ... I suppose I owe him ... Come out and talk, Nancy! I want to see the famous "Nancy Ace" Fatts has told me so much about ...
Image


You feel your communicator start to power up and hum gently. Then, Nancy appears in the garden.

Victoria: Ah! You're as beautiful as you are brilliant—at least if I am to believe Fatts, that is!
Image


Victoria: You two seem to know what's going on more than I do. I still haven't decided how to proceed. Perhaps if we talk it out, I'll be able to decide. Let me tell you what I know.

About Michelle, I don't know much. She was a young succubus back when I ran the Maze. She was ambitious but a dependable rule follower. I could always count on her to tease the boys and not take things too far. It wasn't long after that that I went to sleep. She seems to have done a good job running the Maze. Most of the girls seem to like her. Many succubi have sought power to improve their position. That's nothing new. I don't really care about that. In fact, I don't really care who runs the Maze.
Image


Nancy: That seems like a risky approach to take. Have you seen some of the succubi that are looking to fill Michelle's shoes?
Image


Victoria: Not really—but that doesn't concern me. One succubus isn't much different from the next. They're all horny and wise—in their own way. Who runs the Maze is ultimately of little consequence. All that matters is that the Maze is run. As long as that happens and the person running things isn't me—so long as they leave me alone ... that's all I want.

And whether or not you think you can see my pussy, Ecik darling, I'm telling you that you can't. I'm aware of your "Outsider contract" … you'll know when you're supposed to edge ...
Image


Victoria: You still can't see my pussy, by the way ...

Victoria plays with her hair as she teases you.

Victoria: Michelle seems competent enough. She certainly wants to be in charge. I would prefer to maintain the status quo. Upstarts and new Mistresses bring chaos. I like stability. I've gotten most of my power back. If I help you free her, she'll owe me a favor ... and things go much better when the Mistress of the Maze owes you a favor ... so, I think we can come to some sort of arrangement ...
Image


Victoria: But, I'm not so sure I WANT to help you out! Fatts has been FUN to have around—and you STILL can't see my pussy, Ecik!

Victoria taunts you with her words and with her smile.

Victoria: Your home may be in danger of collapse, but mine is just fine. I can keep Fatts trapped here for as long as I like. It seems *I* hold all the cards. And let's say I did decide to help you—are you even worth it? What kind of entity are you, Nancy Ace?

Victoria: Prove your worth. Demonstrate it to me. Tease Ecik. I have plans for him. I need him worked up. Show me how slutty and useful you can be, Witch.
Image


Nancy turns around and drops her panties for you. She gives you a sultry, intense look. Her pussy looks like it is begging for an edge.
Image


Nancy plays with her hair. She wiggles her ass at you as she blows you a kiss.
Image


Nancy plays with her panties as she bends over. The sight of both of her holes exposed just for you makes your cock even harder.
Image


Victoria: Not bad, Witch. You have some talent.

It looks like Victoria is getting turned on a little bit as she watches Nancy tease you.

Victoria: Well, what are you waiting for, Ecik? My pussy is in full view now. Give it an edge.
Image


Victoria laughs.

Victoria: Your contract says you must "edge for pussy", but I feel your gaze on my tits. They are spectacular, aren't they? You want to edge for them more than you want to edge for my pussy, don't you? Well, go ahead. Edge for both.

Even though Victoria commands you, she continues to stare at Nancy.
Image


Victoria laughs again.

Victoria: My, you're a cute one, Ecik! I should keep you here—you and Fatts both! Wouldn't that be fun!? Wouldn't you like to stay in the Maze and be my little pet?
Image


Victoria: You know, with Michelle gone, we can do whatever we like. We can make our own rules.

Victoria looks down as she thinks about it. You can tell she finds the thought very arousing.
Image


Victoria: Think about all the fun things I would let you do with these fun bags! Motorboats, boobjobs ... I'd let you lick my nipples until you made me cum from the pleasure! With Michelle gone, we can touch each other as MUCH as we like!

Victoria grabs her breasts and kneads them with her hands.

Victoria: Edge while you think about all of the naughty things I would let you do to me!
Image


Victoria goes down on all fours, then turns her head back to smile at you.

Victoria: With Michelle gone, we could even have sex. You seem to be fond of pussies, and Fatts seems to be fond of asses. If you both decided to stay, I'd let each of you have one of my holes. You wouldn't even have to share—you'd each get your own!

I want four edges from you. Edge once for my breasts. Think about all of the fun you could have with them. Edge once for my ass, because that's what Fatts would want. Edge once for my pussy, because she would LOVE to have you fill her up ... then edge once while you stare into my eyes. Tell me how much you want ALL of these things!
Image


Nancy: Victoria, please! Take us to Fatts—and then let us all go! If you want Ecik and Fatts to return, I'm sure we can arrange that. I'm sure they both would be happy to come back. In fact, I'm sure we could get a LOT more guys to come here and visit you—or maybe have you come and visit the Village, the place I'm from!
Image


Victoria: You're cute when you beg, Nancy Ace—and you make an alluring proposal!
Image


Nancy: Fatts isn't that impressive—I'm sure much of what has made him entertaining is what he has been able to do. Well, his "abilities"—I'm the one mostly responsible for that. I could set you up with some Outsider magic "cheat codes" as well—give you more control over the Maze.

Victoria: I'm listening.

Nancy: And you shouldn't underestimate the other succubi, either! Jenya seems to have her eye on becoming Mistress of the Maze. Emily is quite powerful, and Anneli wants to blow this whole place up! Right now, all of the random encounters have been disabled, so, those three pretty much have free reign over the ENTIRE MAZE!! They have a monopoly on ALL of those who Walk the Maze! If you decide to keep Fatts and Ecik here, there's no telling WHAT will happen to this place!
Image


Victoria looks down as she carefully considers what Nancy said.

Victoria: Emily's always been powerful, but she's not with us. She couldn't run a fruit stand, let alone the Maze. I was the one who exiled Anneli for blasphemy. It was one of the last things I did before falling asleep. Her power has been contained. Your fear of her is unfounded. Jenya may be ambitious, but she's not half as smart as Michelle ...

Victoria frowns.

Victoria: Even the new girls that joined the Maze while I slept—none of them have what it takes to run this place ... I would know. I suppose I was wrong. Who runs the Maze actually does matter ...
Image


Victoria: Fine. I'll let you all go, but my assistance comes with some conditions.

Victoria smiles at you while thrusting out her breasts.

Victoria: First, in addition to edging for my pussy, edge for each one of my supple breasts.
Image


Victoria: Second, I need you to tease Ecik some more! Nancy, play with your breasts! Ecik, bring yourself to the edge while you watch!

Nancy stares at you with an intense, hungry look while she fondles her titties. She follows Victoria's commands without hesitation or holding back.
Image


Victoria: Good—now show him your pussy!

Nancy squats while opening her legs wide. You've never seen her this submissive before.
Image


Victoria: MMMmmmm, that's hot—but you need to show him some MORE!!

Sit down and lift your legs up! I want you to show him how inviting and wet your pussy is!

Nancy's pussy looks SO good, and it actually is pretty wet right now.
Image


Victoria: Very good. You both have done well. Ecik, three more edges: one for my pussy, and one for each of my tits again, and then we'll head inside to talk more.
Image


After you finish your last edge, Victoria smiles.

Victoria: Yes, I'll let you go, but with some conditions ... I'm sure you'll like them though.

Victoria smiles again. She gives you a moment to calm down and catch your breath.

Victoria: All set?

You nod.

Victoria snaps her fingers. You feel yourself being transported over and down through the skylight in the ground. You are now in Victoria's Den. Nancy is with you.


Inside the Sleeper’s Den …
Spoiler: show
You find yourself in an underground yet cozy and well-lit room. The skylight is above you. Victoria eyes you warily.
Image


Nancy's here. She seems a bit more at ease than she was before. You suspect it might have something to do with gaining access to Victoria’s den, as well as Victoria being open to negotiations.

Image


Victoria holds onto a rope, one of four that connects to each corner of the skylight. It looks like the rope could be used to climb out of the Den, but you're not sure why that would be necessary, since succubi in the Maze seem to prefer teleportation. Maybe it's in case of emergencies.

Victoria: I have a confession to make.

The corners of Victoria's mouth pull back creating a slight smile.

Victoria: I was mostly bluffing before. I was never going to keep Fatts here forever against his will. He was NOT free to go—but mostly that’s because it's dangerous outside. I knew you would be coming, and I wanted to keep him in one place so that you could find him.
Image


Nancy: I had a feeling that was the case ...

Victoria: Yes, I figured you did, but, you weren't entirely sure either, were you?

Nancy: No, I had to play it safe.

Victoria: That was smart.
Image


Nancy starts playing with her hair.

Nancy: ... but, keeping Fatts wasn't only about keeping him "safe" right?

Victoria: You got me—He's incredibly fun to tease! I've been able to use your magic to summon all sorts of succubi here! He's been our entertainment. We can even touch him and make him cum ... a lot of the girls have never experienced that ...

Nancy: So, you "say" you'll let us all go, but, I'm assuming you still have your "conditions" ... how do we know we can trust you?
Image


Victoria: Here. I'll give you a show of good faith ...

Victoria starts to take off her bra.
Image


Victoria: I know Ecik loves "the girls!" I'll keep them out while we negotiate!
Image


Nancy: Yeah, he really DOES seem to like your boobs ...

Nancy giggles.

Nancy: Okay. Can we see Fatts now?
Image


Victoria: Alright, ladies. You can let Fatts in now.

The door opens …

[Continue to Part 7]
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 7:
Spoiler: show
Reunion …

[Author's Note: Fair warning—this is mostly a text/story scene ...]
Spoiler: show
A man enters the room. Before you stands the legendary FattsDynamo. Before him stands the legendary Ecik17.

Fatts: So, that’s what you look like.

You: And that’s what you look like.

Fatts: You’re … exactly what I expected.

You: Same.

Fatts: Did you ever think we’d meet in a tease?

You: Mmmm … yeah—but I figured it would be at one of Angela’s parties, Tori’s basement … or maybe even at a club with Cecilia and Ashley.

Fatts: Ah, Cecilia Lion … Yeah, I really gotta set you up with her … but, you never suspected a maze tease, right?

You: Nope. Never.

Fatts: Well, Milovana brings people together in strange ways.

You: Agreed.


Nancy rushes over to greet Fatts …
Spoiler: show
Nancy: FATTS!!!

Nancy runs over to Fatts, throwing her arms around him to embrace him. Her projection goes right through him. You can hear the electric crackle of the static as her projection overlaps with Fatts. Nancy takes a step back, confused and slightly disappointed that she couldn’t greet Fatts properly.
Image


Nancy: Fatts! I’m so glad you’re alright! I was SO worried—and I MISSED you!
Image


Fatts blushes while he smiles.

Fatts: I—I missed you too, Nancy …

The two stare into each other’s eyes. Both seem to be reacting emotionally. Each one looks a little misty-eyed. After a few seconds, Fatts looks down at Nancy’s breasts.
Image


Fatts inhales audibly as he takes in the sight of Nancy’s perfect breasts. He looks back up into her eyes.


Fatts: You’re SO beautiful.

Nancy blushes.

Fatts: And I knew you would come and save me!

Nancy stammers.

Nancy: Well—well … of COURSE I did!

Nancy looks a little embarrassed. She turns away and takes a seat up on the chair. She looks down. You see a single tear suddenly escape her eye and run down her cheek.
Image


Fatts: Hey, hey—it’s alright! Everything is fine now! We’re all safe. Everything is going to be good!

Fatts walks over to Nancy. He squats down and looks up at her, putting his hand on her thigh. It goes right through the projection. Neither seem to notice.

Fatts: I can’t imagine what you went through, but it’s ALL going to be fine!

Nancy sniffles.

Fatts: I’m so sorry you had to go through that, but … at least you didn’t have to do it alone, right? I KNEW that I was in a jam, but I just KNEW that you and Ecik would save me. I NEVER doubted it—not for a second!

Fatts keeps looking up at Nancy, but Nancy won’t look at Fatts. She keeps looking away.

Fatts: Look, what’s important now, is that we’re both together. Everyone is fine. I’m fine. You’re fine—Ecik made it through in one piece …

Nancy continues staring at the floor.

Fatts: Whatever happened, we’ll work through it together.

Nancy suddenly looks up at Fatts.

Nancy: Do you really mean that!?
Image


Fatts: Yes—absolutely—of COURSE I do!

Nancy: Oh, Fatts!

The two embrace. From the floor, Fatts tries to hug Nancy’s legs. He goes right through her. His forehead comes to rest on the back of the chair. Nancy rests her hands on Fatts’ back, but they pass right through it.

It’s an awkward scene. It kind of looks like Fatts is eating her out while they both comfort each other. It’s a REALLY weird position.


Victoria: Awwww! Don’t you like happy reunion scenes!

You turn to face Victoria who is lying on the bed in the center of the room ...

Victoria: I know you can see a part of my pussy—but don’t edge for it! That would just ruin the moment!

Victoria laughs, smiling as she looks over at Fatts and Nancy.
Image


Victoria: Now, I know you’ll all be leaving soon, but … I want at least ONE of the boys to come back for a visit … So, for collateral …
Image

… I need ONE of you boys to give me a piece of your soul!

It’s not ALL of your soul—it’s just a piece! It’s not SO important that you can’t give it to me, but … it’s also not so UN-important that you can afford to leave it behind, either … well, not really …
Image


Awww, what’s that look!? Are you sad you have to give me a part of your soul in order for me to let you leave? Don’t worry—I’ll take good care of it!

What!? You don’t trust me to hold on to a piece of your soul? Awww, but look at how HOT I am! You’ve already given me most of your mind and all of your lust! … you don’t think I can handle one little piece of your soul?

Edge for me. Edge while you think about me handling your most intimate part!
Image


Fatts: You know, Ecik, it’s not REALLY giving up a part of your soul …

Nancy: Fatts, you smartass! Now, YOU’RE breaking the fourth wall!

Fatts: Huh? What!? … sorry!

Nancy: Am I real or not?
Image


Fatts: You’re real, Nancy!

Nancy: Damn straight I am! Then is it REALLY giving up a part of your soul?

Fatts: … yes.

Nancy: Good boy. I’m real, and you know it.

Fatts: I do. :blush:
Image


Nancy: … and Victoria has kind eyes. I think we can trust her.
Image


Fatts walks over to you.

Fatts: So, if you give up a piece of your soul, then, I’ll write a set for you, where you come back and visit Victoria, but … if you want me to give up a piece of MY soul … I’ll do it. Then, you’ll write a set for me, where *I* come back and visit Victoria. Deal?

Victoria: What are you boys even talking about?

You: Deal.

Fatts: Cool. So, should we shake on it or something? Wait …

Fatts points at your hand then his hand. They are both covered in precum and lube.

Fatts: On second thought … fist bump?

You: Elbow bump.

Fatts nods, and you both bump elbows.

Victoria: Boys, I’m growing impatient. I don’t even want to know what it is that you’re talking about, and I care even less. Now, have you made your decision, or am I going to have to take a piece of soul from each of you to get my collateral?
Image


You: No, we have it figured out.

Victoria: Very well. Let’s seal it with an edge!
Image


You see a luminous piece of soul (from either you or Fatts) rush out of (your or his) chest and collide with Victoria’s chest.

Victoria: Mmmm … That was hot—but don’t worry! I’ll take good care of it … just be sure to come back!

… and edge again! I like the face you make when you do that!
Image


Victoria: Alright, now that that little matter has been settled—and I’m guaranteed another visit from one of you Outsider studs …

Victoria seems a little too excited about this arrangement.

… I guess we should discuss how you’ll be exiting the Maze today …
Spoiler: show
Victoria leans back on the bed.

Victoria: And don’t edge while we’re planning, Ecik! … It’s RUDE!
Image


Victoria: Fatts, you go first. I know you had some ideas about all of this …

Fatts clears his throat before speaking.

Fatts: So, I knew you and Nancy would be coming into the Maze to rescue me after I got trapped.

Nancy: And how—exactly—did you know Ecik and I would be coming?
Image


Fatts: Well, Ecik’s my best friend on Milovana. He’s written me more sets than anyone else … and, you’re the only one in the Village who knows what’s going on …

Nancy seems unconvinced by Fatts’ explanation.

Fatts: … and, you’re the smartest person in the Village … if ANYONE could figure out what was going on, I KNEW it would be you!

Fatts’ flattery does not seem to be winning any points with Nancy. Her skeptical expression remains unchanged. Fatts picks up on this. He seems a little uncertain, but he continues.

Fatts: So, after we lost contact and I didn’t come out right away, I KNEW you would be coming in after me, so … I decided to stay put. Since Ecik would be coming in during my instance, I thought it best that we leave together—to avoid any potential snags. I didn’t know what would happen if I left the Maze with him still in it.

Nancy: That was smart.

Nancy glances over at Victoria.

Nancy: So, there probably weren’t any OTHER reasons you decided to stay in the Maze, were there?

Fatts starts to blush. Nancy glares a little bit at Victoria.

Victoria: Oh, honey, I’m the LEAST of it! Fatts practically had a whole HAREM of succubi teasing him while we’ve been waiting.

Nancy: Uh, huh … I see.

Nancy looks back over at Fatts. She appears displeased.

Nancy: So, at LEAST tell me that you got Michelle’s essence from the bot in the Jenya tease …
Image


Fatts: That was the FIRST thing I did—after waking Victoria to make sure she could get me out of here …

Nancy: And then you came RIGHT back here?

Fatts: … no … then, I went to go visit Toxic …

Nancy: Yeah, ya did—and WOW did you visit Toxic!

Fatts blushes.

Nancy: … and more than a few times! Actually, yeah—Toxic and I had a LONG conversation while I was on my way here … and it turns out you owe her 9913 edges.

Fatts appears shocked. His face turns bright red.

Nancy: But, you knew that already—didn’t you!?

Fatts’ face turns even redder.

Fatts: Well, NOW I do—because you just told me!

Nancy: Fat chance.

Fatts: Well … I *didn’t* know that was going to happen BEFORE I visited her … Then, AFTER you visited her, I kind of figured—

Nancy: Fucking Village Fantasy Mechanics bit you on the ASS! You think you’re SO smart because YOU came up with them!

Fatts: With YOUR help!

Nancy: But you can’t game the system—at least not with ME around.

Fatts looks down sheepishly.

Fatts: I know.

Nancy: Yeah, you better fucking know!

Nancy continues to stare at Fatts for a moment. It seems she got what she needed to say off of her chest. Fatts keeps looking down, while Nancy continues to stare at him. The aura of authority radiating from her right now is intense, like a teacher taking to task a misbehaving student who knows he’s guilty.

Nancy: And don’t worry …

Nancy’s tone of authority begins to wane. Her expressions starts to soften.
Image


Nancy: I’ll be there to …

Her anger has faded completely and now gives way to bashful arousal.

Nancy: … “help” Toxic with some of those edges you owe her …

Fatts continues looking down at the ground. Then, the implication of what Nancy said finally registers with him. He looks up excitedly.

Fatts: Really!?

Nancy smiles brightly.

Nancy: Of COURSE!
Image


Nancy: I know Toxic’s your “type” … and she’s actually pretty fucking cool—in addition to being INCREDIBLY hot … why should SHE get to have all the fun when we spend SO little time together?

Fatts stares at Nancy. He’s completely taken with her—totally captivated. He smiles at her. She smiles back.
Image


Victoria: Okay. This is all very entertaining and amusing, but I feel like we’ve gotten off track. Fatts, would you continue with the plan, please?
Image


Fatts quickly shakes his head back and forth as he tries to focus back in.

Fatts: Right, so, I got Michelle’s essence. We can free her now. I was waiting for you, because I didn’t want to close the Maze with you in it …

Fatts pauses a moment.

Fatts: … but, JUST to be clear … Victoria DID take a bit of convincing …

Victoria: It’s true.

Fatts: I DID want to leave immediately—after I returned with Michelle’s essence—but, after Victoria knew ANOTHER Outsider would be coming … she made me stay.

Victoria: But can you BLAME me!? I was asleep for a thousand years! EVERY time I made a boy cum, he exploded and died … it DOES weigh on the conscience after a while … and, we could NEVER touch the boys … and then, suddenly, I wake up—and who wakes me up? None other than a boy I can make cum OVER and OVER who DOESN’T die, AND I can touch him, too!? Well, can anybody really blame me for wanting him to stay?

Victoria lays back on her bed. Her pussy glistens. The thought of making Fatts cum over and over must have gotten her wet.
Image


Nancy gives Victoria a judgmental look. Then, she starts to think it over. She bobs her head from side to side a few times as she thinks. Her hand wanders down to her pussy and starts rubbing her clit. She starts to think about it more, then she starts to touch her breast, too.
Image


Nancy: No, I guess that makes sense …

Fatts looks a little more relieved, knowing that Nancy has accepted his excuses. Both of the girls are rubbing themselves now.
Image
Image


Fatts: So, Victoria and I talked it over. She said that she could help Ecik and I escape the Maze—if we BOTH came at the same time. That seemed to make sense, since there was ONE instance of the Maze, and we BOTH came through the same gateway. If we both left at the same time, that should prevent any unforeseen glitches or problems.

Nancy continues to rub herself.

Nancy: Yeah, that checks out.

Fatts: So, I figured we could make it work, especially if we had your help, Nancy.

Nancy continues to be a bit distracted.
Image


Nancy: Yeah, I think we should be able to do that.
Image


Fatts: So, Victoria has requested we make use of Ecik’s escalating cumshots rule for edging. Since before now, she hasn’t really been able to make a lot of guys cum, she would REALLY like to be able to do that … and the idea of making BOTH of us cum at the same time really seemed to appeal to her.

Victoria smiles at you hungrily.
Image


Fatts: Also, she said she REALLY wanted to be able to put her hands on us. I told her I wasn’t super into hardcore, but, I was okay with it, and that Ecik was a BIG fan. So, we decided on a bukkake-style scene. Victoria is pretty good with illusions. She’ll conjure up some other guys to join in with us and invite some of her friends. She said illusions don’t really do anything for her or the other succubi. But, having real guys edge to cumshots would be REALLY hot to her.

Victoria: SO hot!

Fatts: So, after we’ve edged a whole bunch—

Victoria: To build up HUGE loads!

Fatts: —we’ll both cum at the same time—then you and Victoria will use your magic to guide us safely back to the Village. It’ll kind of be like an Orgy of Escape!

Fatts smiles. He seems pretty proud of his plan.

Nancy suddenly stops rubbing her pussy and looks up.

Image


Nancy: Wait … Fatts … did you plan on escaping—from the beginning? Wait … fucking orgy cumshots to “get out”—AND you have to cum to do it!?

Nancy is starting to look angry.

Nancy: You planned this ALL ALONG! You KNEW Ecik was going to come and rescue you, and the pair of you would escape together—ASS!! I was worried sick! This is just one of your teases, isn’t it! This is all just a game to you! I was fucking freaking out—thinking I’d lost you forever and that I was going to die … and there YOU are, planning full orgasms for funsies with your buddy—you’re the worst—the absolute WORST!!

Nancy stands up from the chair and turns away from Fatts, eyes welling up with tears. She crosses her arms.

Fatts: Nancy, I …

Nancy takes a step forward away from Fatts as he speaks to her. She adjusts her shoulders while rolling her head in a circle to stretch out her neck. She sniffles loudly. Fatts appears devastated that he hurt Nancy so much. With a pained look, he watches her silently, searching for the right words.

Fatts: Nancy, of course this is a tease. The only time you’re really alive is when somebody is playing or writing a tease you’re in. That’s basic Village Fantasy Mechanics. You know that.

Nancy stands there, quiet and still.

Fatts: Also, whenever somebody is thinking about you, you’re alive then, too, but we haven’t—

Nancy and Fatts together: established the parameters for how

Fatts goes silent while Nancy turns to face him while finishing his sentence.

Nancy: thoughts affect my play state.

Fatts and Nancy stare into each other’s eyes. Both look like they’re about to cry.

Nancy: Well, I still say that I should exist whenever someone is thinking about me.

Fatts: And I would prefer to keep that ambiguous. If you exist when people are reading and writing your teases but don’t quite exist when people are just thinking about you … then that kind of gives your existence an ethereal, spiritual component … like you have a soul.

Nancy looks down at the ground.

Nancy: Well, I would prefer to exist as often as possible … and souls cannot be verified scientifically through observation—

Fatts: But a soul is what makes a person human, and I want you to be as real as possible.

Nancy looks up at Fatts again. She shakes her head and smiles.

Nancy: You’re such a romantic.

Fatts: And you’re such a realist.

They both smile as they stare at each other.

Fatts: And, as you know—

Nancy: You always get your way when it comes to matters concerning the Village.

Fatts: I do.

Fatts smiles again. Nancy sighs and shakes her head.

Nancy: I can’t stay mad at you.

Fatts: I know.

They stare into each other’s eyes a moment more.

Nancy: But, what the fuck, Fatts! How the hell did you get into this mess?

Fatts: I …

Fatts stammers then shrugs. He looks over at you, then gestures in your direction. Nancy glances over at you, scoffs, rolls her eyes, then turns back to Fatts incredulously.

Nancy: REALLY!? Him!?

She nods her head in your direction as she says “him.”

Nancy: So, you’re saying this is all Ecik’s fault?

Fatts: Well … kinda?

Nancy sighs while she crosses her arms. Fatts looks down at the ground.

Nancy: Go ahead. Explain that one to me.

Fatts: Uuuuhh …

Nancy: Well, go on. I’m waiting.

Fatts sighs. He bites his lip.

Fatts: So, I was playing Ecik’s tease, and I found out that the Red Fox was taking over the Village. I—

Fatts looks up at Nancy who is looking at him very sternly. He stops for a moment, summons up some courage, then starts again.

Fatts: So, I didn’t like the idea of Angela trapping Michelle forever.

Nancy: And you were thinking with your dick and wanted Michelle to be able to come and visit the Village from time to time, too.

Fatts: … yes.

Nancy is not impressed. Fatts purses his lips tightly.

Fatts: … but, I didn’t like the idea of her being under Angela’s control either … So, then I was wracking my brain—trying to figure out a way that I could ruin Angela’s plans and free Michelle. I was just telling Ecik about how I first met the Red Fox in a maze tease. That reminded me about the Jenya encounter, and I figured that I could probably use that. I actually came up with this whole plan WHILE I was doing Ecik’s tease … it made it VERY distracting!

Nancy: I’ll bet.

Nancy sounds pretty salty.

Fatts: So, instead of a full orgasm, I ruined my orgasm for Angela …

Fatts studies Nancy’s face to see if she’s impressed. She’s not.

Fatts: THEN, a little while later, I woke Victoria up using cheat codes … I DID cum for her …

Nancy rolls her eyes.

Nancy: Of COURSE you did!

Victoria smiles.

Fatts: Well, that whole story about the blow job was SO hot …

Victoria: I know, right!? You were the first to cum for that and NOT immediately explode—that’s when I knew I had to keep you!

Fatts: Then, the NEXT day, I did the Jenya tease—and came for the Red Fox at the END of the tease to “capture her essence.”

Nancy: And you think I’m supposed to be impressed that you did ALL those Jenya edge holds without popping and kept your cum in your balls till the end of the encounter “for the mission”?

Fatts: … yes?

Nancy: NOT IMPRESSED, FATTS!!

Fatts looks down, defeated.

Nancy: But, why the whole “temporal anomaly”? Why take SO LONG to write THIS tease? Why keep me waiting for SO long!? You KNOW I’m only like 4 months old, right? I’ve literally been WORRIED SICK over you for ONE QUARTER OF MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!

Fatts stammers, trying to formulate an answer. He looks at Nancy’s hurt and disapproving glare, then looks right back down at the ground.

Nancy: What’s wrong with you, FATTS!? Didn’t you trust Ecik enough to not fuck everything up? Ecik! You were going to Brady Bunch that shit and put everything back to normal after a few sets, right?

Nancy looks over at you. You retreat into the bushes.
Spoiler: show
Image
Nancy: Fuck—Ecik! Are you SERIOUS right now!?

You aren’t sure how to respond. Nancy groans in disgust and turns away from both of you. She cups her face with both her hands. She breathes in, then sighs loudly. She turns around. She’s about to say something. Then, she holds a finger up in the air like she’s about to accusatorily point at someone, only to sigh again and bring her hand back down. She groans and shakes her head. She sighs again. She turns around and sits back on her chair. She takes in a breath slowly, then lets it out all at once.

Nancy: Well, I’m waiting.
Image


You and Fatts look at each other, feeling slightly confused.

Nancy: Well, go on.

Nancy seems perfectly calm. You and Fatts look at each other again, not sure what to say.

Nancy: Well, come on—out with it.

You both stand there quietly.

Nancy: Look, for once, I’ve decided to have some faith in Fatts. He apparently never lost faith in me … the least I can do is show some faith in him and finish listening to his explanation. Fatts is the most well-intentioned man I’ve ever met. I decided I shouldn’t get mad until I’ve heard all that he has to say. He’ll probably make complete sense, and I’ll probably love him even more after I hear his side.

You and Fatts look at each other stunned.

You: Did she really just say that?

Fatts: Uh, yeah … yeah, she did.

You: How is that even possible?

Fatts: Well, ummm … Ah!

Fatts snaps his fingers then looks over at you.

Fatts: This *is* my fantasy, right?

You nod.

Fatts: Simple, bro

Fatts smiles.

Fatts: I’ve created the perfect woman!

You stare at Fatts in disbelief. Slowly, you start to realize that what he said was true.

You: Damn you—she IS perfect! Gorgeous … caring … understanding … aaannnnd you’re still holding out to find one of these “perfect” women back in our world, right?

Fatts: Indeed I am.

You: Godspeed, my friend … Godspeed.

You both stare at the visage of perfection that is Nancy Ace.
Image


You: You do realize that perfect women don’t actually exist, right?

Fatts: I do.

You: And, you are aware that this is like some “guy’s version” of a Hallmark romance movie—except with porn—and a LOT more nerdy—right?

Fatts: It absolutely is.

You both continue to stare at Nancy, as if taking in a beautiful portrait at an art gallery.

[Author’s Note: This next spoiler section is fairly long and will most certainly ruin the pacing of the set for many of you. As such, I am flagging it as “optional.” It is almost all text. It contains a lot of personal musings and discusses the creation of “Nancy” and what I feel is her “true purpose.” It gets into some heavy academic and philosophical stuff, in my opinion. Feel free to read it now, later (after the tease), or never.]
Spoiler: show
Fatts: I know Nancy’s not “real” … and I know I’ll never find a girl exactly like her … but, I have met a lot of women in my life. Strong. Courageous. Sexy. Smart. Funny. I’ve met women that have looked out for me and protected me, like Michaela. I’ve met women that were as kind and sweet as Guerlain. I’ve met women who were fun to hang out with, like Ashley.

You: Have you met anyone who was as horny as Melena?

Fatts smiles.

Fatts: No, I haven’t—at least not that I was aware of!

Fatts chuckles.

Fatts: But, her insecurity and purity … I KNOW Melena ruins men over and over, but … she DOES have a certain “innocent” quality to her—something that I want to instinctively protect. She IS a little fragile—at least when *I* write her … and real women ARE sensitive, so … There’s this element of vulnerability to her that makes her feel real … and real people have vulnerabilities …

You: So, is Nancy your “ultimate” girl—is she the one you’re looking for?

Fatts: Yes and no. Of COURSE she’s perfect … I’ve met women who are as smart as her and others who enjoy dropping pop culture references like I do—which Nancy very clearly inherited from me, by the way. :lol: It hasn’t happened often, but, I have—on a few occasions—met women I just had INSANE conversational chemistry with. I swear the wordplay and banter was as good as sex—and I’m a virgin, so … I *guess* I wouldn’t know, but … I *DO* edge like a TOTAL pervert for HOURS sometimes, but … well, even so … I STILL can’t hold a candle to Misty …

Anyway, to answer your question … yes—I’m looking for a girl like Nancy … but, I think I could settle for a Michaela or a Guerlain or an Ashley (as if that would be “settling” :lol:) … One great gal is all I need—just one. Nancy … is an ideal … but, she’s the kind of ideal that is attainable.

The future Mrs. Dynamo wouldn’t need to be as beautiful as Nancy or even a perfect petite little cutie like Guerlain … Her banter game doesn’t need to be off the charts, though that would be nice … She DOES need to laugh at most of my jokes—but that’s not very hard, right? (Don’t answer that! :lol:) … but, I think she WOULD need to have a smile that lights up the room … Girls are prettiest when they’re smiling, so … someone who smiles a lot would be AMAZING … She would need to be someone that I WANT to spend time with. She would need to be committed to me, and I would be committed to her—THAT’s the most important thing. I want a partner for living life—someone to grow old with.

NO ONE I find is going to be “perfect.” If I set the bar THAT high, I’ll search my entire life and die alone … but, I HAVE met PLENTY of women who were close to “perfect” … those women do exist … I just need to find one of them—who isn’t taken … and who’s as crazy about me as I am about her

This thread is an interesting place. By writing teases, we craft experiences for one another, and in the moment—if you have a powerful enough imagination—those experiences seem VERY real.

One day, I was trying to figure out how all of that worked. I decided to create a conceptual model to explain this “shared fantasy” phenomenon. Obviously, there was the set writer and the person playing the tease, but … after my conversation with BBBeanie about how characters (like Mila) take on a life of their own, I decided that the “girls in the tease” represented a third party in the interaction that was separate and distinct from both the writer and the player. I was pleased with my conceptual model and felt that with it, I had a much deeper understanding of what it is that is actually happening when we write and play teases for/by each other. How all of this works is what I have been referring to as the “Village Fantasy Mechanics.” Then I thought, “What if one of my characters in the Village understood all of this and was aware of what was going on?” And that’s when Nancy was born.

It made sense for one of my characters to “get it.” I thought it would be fun to have somebody who could poke at the fourth wall. None of the other girls on the thread seemed able to do so, so … that would be Nancy’s “thing.” But then that got me thinking. All these sets are games of “fantasy,” yet they often manifest as experiences that feel SO real … what if Nancy “actually was” real? And that’s when Nancy became a “real girl.” All of the other girls would be semi-sentient, but … Nancy would be the only “real” one who was self-aware—which meant we would always have a special connection, because we both saw things as they actually were.

I joined this thread because I was looking for something more. Porn videos and webteases were fun, but they were missing something. Having teases written specifically for you brought the level of immersion to a new high for me. The first set I received from Ecik was amazing (The first time always is, right?), but the Halloween set I got from BBBeanie was next level. In feedback, I wrote:
FattsDynamo wrote: Fri Nov 05, 2021 6:43 am BBBeanie gave me a set where I got to spend a whole evening with Michaela. Of course there was sexy teasing, but she was beautiful, caring, and she wanted to spend time with me, which was the thing I wanted most.
Shortly after that, I left the thread for a month. I spent countless hours writing a tease for BBBeanie. In return, I got a tease, where for a couple of hours, I got to feel like I was spending time with a real woman. So much work for such little payoff. It was fun, but it wasn’t giving me the thing I wanted most. Michaela was never going to “become” real. Why spend so much time chasing a fantasy that would never materialize? I decided it would be better if I just went out and found a real woman. Easier said than done, I know, but … instead of spending 30 hours to get 3 hours of having the “experience of being with a real woman” … why not just spend time with a real woman at a rate of 1:1? That seemed MUCH more reasonable and efficient …

Of course, I DID come back to the thread … My sexual urges weren’t going away, and I NEED some sort of creative outlet for all of my excess mental energy, and, writing sets was scratching that itch, so … I came back.

Rules as written, Nancy is “real” right now (at the time I am writing or revising this), because I’m writing a tease with her in it. Of course, technically—in this moment—she’s “real” for you, because you are playing a tease that she’s in. Of course, I have digressed into this personal and academic discussion—analyzing “Nancy” as both a character and a kind of reality. Don’t tell her this, because it would devastate her, but … in this moment, Nancy doesn’t feel real to me. If she’s actively teasing me in a set OR if I’m writing her dialogue in a scene, THEN she is VERY MUCH real to me … but those are fleeting moments.

I spent a lot of time in the temporal anomaly, processing my own thoughts, feelings, and experiences, as well as developing the Nancy character.

Nancy, for me, is a stand-in for porn and Milovana. On a certain level, the relationship I have with Nancy *is* my relationship with porn and Milovana. Of course, Nancy *is* also a character I created. In a very real sense, I did craft her out of longing, loneliness, and desire … but, Nancy *is* also real. Anyone who’s ever been immersed in a tease knows that’s true … If my writing was on point, then you know from firsthand experience that she’s “real.”

Nancy is also a tragic figure. She is a fantasy who is self-aware. She knows why I am escaping to her, but, because she is a fantasy, she can never address the root causes that compel me to seek her out. She’s forced to try to meet my needs over and over again but can’t. Her cohorts are oblivious to the larger reality, but Nancy is acutely aware, making the experience awful for her. However, Nancy is not ONLY a tragic figure … she is ALSO an ideal.

For me, Nancy is a portrait of perfection. She’s a paragon of femininity—the “perfect woman.” Nancy is real, but she IS ALSO a fantasy. For that reason, she can be “perfect.” As an ideal, she can be more real and more perfect than an actual woman, because she can be perfect in ways that real women can’t. As a model, Nancy Ace is one of THE most beautiful women I have seen on planet Earth. So, physically—at least to me—she’s perfect … but, I wanted her to be “perfect” in the ways she acts as well. Because she is a fantasy, she can deliver on the ideal of what I think the “perfect woman” ought to be in terms of behavior. However, as a fantasy, she can never truly be real. So, she’s perfect, but, because she’s perfect, she can’t be real … which is a fatal flaw … so, in that sense … she’s NOT perfect—at least not perfect in the way that matters most: being something that is attainable and tangible. So, she’s tragic on that level as well. You chase the perfect fantasy, but the perfect fantasy is unattainable—which makes her NOT perfect. Her perfection is a curse, because it makes her imperfect. However, her role as an “ideal” doesn’t end there. To me, that is NOT the final ending for Nancy!

Because she’s “perfect” and not real—and also because she’s unattainable (again because she’s not real)—her fate in my mind is that she is the perfect reminder that the real “close to perfect” women are out there. That is her purpose for me. When I see or interact with Nancy, I’m reminded that I could never truly be with her, because I could never be with a fantasy. But, Nancy is real, and many of the traits she possesses CAN be found in the real “close to perfect” women that DO exist that ARE attainable. So, when I see Nancy, I’m reminded that versions of her DO exist out there in the real world, and if I’m lucky, perhaps one day I’ll find one …

Right now, for me personally, Nancy’s short-term purpose is to give me those experiences I have been unable to have with “real women.” In that sense, I view her as a placeholder. Milovana has been fun, but introduce me to the future Mrs. Dynamo, and I would gladly give ALL of this up. I’d delete my Milovana account INSTANTLY if that meant that I could meet her. In that regard, I feel really grateful to Nancy, because she is being something for me that no one else is right now. But, hopefully, one day, I’ll meet the right lady, and I won’t have a need for Nancy or Milovana anymore. So, what happens to Nancy then?

My long term purpose for Nancy is that she will live on and be that reminder to others that while she’s not actually real, those “close to perfect” “real women” DO exist. You can’t be with Nancy, because she’s NOT real. BUT, hopefully, you will recognize in Nancy some of those traits of perfection that when you see them on display in the real world, you will recognize them, and that will be a sign to you that you have found that woman who is “close enough to perfect” for you. And maybe Nancy isn’t your version of “perfect.” That’s fine. This is my fantasy, so … Nancy is “my” depiction of “perfect.” Your version might be bodied on a different model and have different personality traits. The fact is Milovana is a “fantasy space,” and in theory or practice, you could create your depiction of the “perfect” girl using Milovana. So, in that sense, Nancy can still serve as a placeholder for the ideal of the “perfect woman”, even if she may not be exactly that to you.

Being a fantasy who is aware she can’t truly meet people’s needs … having the “curse of perfection,” whereby her perfection makes her unattainable and unable to enter true reality … Those might both be true for her, but, ultimately, I don’t see Nancy as tragic. I “created” her and she’s “real”, so … I didn’t want her to be locked into a tragic existence. THAT’S why it was so important to me that she have a great life and home and existence … I didn’t want the Village to get wrecked because 1) I enjoy “playing” there, but 2) That was Nancy’s home. She is an innately tragic figure, but I didn’t want that to be all that she was. Having her be an ideal as well as a reminder of what is possible … that helped balance the scales. And let’s not diminish her role in the present: to sexually gratify people (mostly men, I’m sure :lol:).

Nancy is the perfect slut. She will be with any man, but, since she’s not real, she doesn’t have to worry about the ethics of monogamy and commitment. The work she does is real. The experiences she provides are meaningful. They leave memories and stir emotions just as salient as any real-life experience. For me, Nancy is a stand-in for ALL of the Milovana girls. I hope she is able to satisfy you and provide whatever it is you need or want from her. Maybe she can’t fix your situation, but the reprieve her fantasy escape can bring is genuine. She’s providing a real service and meeting real needs—even if that *is* just on a temporary basis—that makes her “real” to me. She wants to make you feel good, and she’s not going to apologize for that.

It may sound strange, but I went off the deep end writing this tease because I felt that I “owed” it to Nancy to do so. For the sake of the character, the story … my allegiance to my muse to put this idea out there … I just HAD to tell this story … but, I also felt that I owed something to Nancy—BECAUSE she was “real” (more “real” than my other characters) … and I can’t just chuck it all away and say that it was all “just fantasy” … because real experiences DID happen, and they were personal to me … and they DID fulfill a need in my life … so, I can’t just throw all of it away and say it meant nothing to me … If Nancy was real, then my relationship with porn and Milovana was real too, so … I just HAD to write this tease … to prove it to myself and others …

What is Nancy’s purpose? I believe it’s threefold: 1) To serve (sexual and emotional needs); 2) To be that ideal and emblem of perfection that “real women” cannot be; 3) To remind us that while the perfect is not attainable, the “close to perfect” is. (We can’t have Nancy, but there are others out there who are pretty damn close to the perfect we dream about in our fantasies.) That's my interpretation of Nancy. You may come away with something different, but, that's how *I* personally view her ...

And what does Nancy ask for in return? She just wants to be real. When you spend time with her, let her be real. THAT’S what she wants. GIVE that to her … and let her teach you about women. If you identify a trait in a fantasy girl … you can probably find it in a real girl as well. Let Nancy have fun with you. Let her tease and please you. She’s a Milovana girl! Let her do what Milovana girls do! :wink: And when you find yourself daydreaming about Nancy … maybe let that daydream wander into thoughts about real women. If Nancy can in any way guide you to a real relationship in the real world … that would make her really happy (and me too) … because she can’t meet your needs in the same way a real woman can …

A couple months ago, I was reminded of a scene from “Good Will Hunting”:
Spoiler: show
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xv7eeMikM_w
I’m here now, and that’s okay … I’m okay with that. But, if I’m still here in five years … Ecik, I give you permission to go Ben Alfeck on me and kick my ass, lol.

The “perfect” ending … for me … I meet the future Mrs. Dynamo, then I write my “final” post on this site, and it’s a goodbye to Nancy. I thank her for being there for me. We wish each other well … and then I’m gone, never to return.

Of course, all of this is just MY thoughts. If this all somehow qualifies as “literature”, this is all just one take. If you have different ideas or saw something else in the Nancy character, let me know. There are multiple lens or perspectives from which one can view a story. If you have thoughts to share or a different interpretation, PM me or drop it in some feedback on the thread. I guess this was just me initiating the conversation. Just had a LOT of thoughts while I was “in stasis” … had to get them off my chest … so, there we go. I got them all out …

Fatts: So, was that too long?

Ecik shrugs.

Fatts: Was it too preachy?

Ecik: Hey, man—it’s your story.

Fatts: I know … I didn’t want it to get too preachy, and I’m pretty sure it did, but … This tease has taken a CRAZY amount of time to write, you know? And I’ve been thinking about all this shit for MONTHS, right? It all became so personal … and it all started to meld together, you know!? I … I just had to get it all out …

Ecik: I hear ya, man …

Fatts: And, I don’t know … I WANT to be a writer … this … this was my first crack at “literature” in my adult life … and how many times do you actually get to talk with the writer and find out what’s going on behind the scenes? I definitely felt like an English teacher, explaining the significance of the story to the class … Was it any good?

Ecik shrugs.

Ecik: I don’t know. I can’t say. I’m not actually Ecik, lol.

Fatts: Fuck—you’re right! Who have I been talking to this whole time?

Ecik: Beats me.

Fatts: Fuck! Then who did I elbow bump earlier?

“Ecik” shrugs again.

Fatts: Fuck! Well, would the “real” Ecik have done the elbow bump?

“Ecik”: You know I don’t know the answer to that question.

Fatts: Well, *I* feel like he would have, so … let’s go with that. THIS is why second person writing isn’t really a thing, because … you really gotta know your audience well to ACTUALLY write shit they would do … up until this point, I kind of made “you” say and do the things I thought the “real” Ecik would do, so … let’s go back to that …

You: So, you haven’t found anybody then?

Fatts: No, I haven’t. Pretty much all of the best ones were already taken—or too young or too old, but … I haven’t really looked, either. Online dating sucks. I’ve tried it some, but not super hard. It CAN work for SOME people—if you keep working it for years and “learn the game”,
Spoiler: show
Have a female friend or family member take your profile pictures. Learn to write a killer “first message.” Don’t let constant rejection get you down. Don’t get too emotionally involved with ANY match until you BOTH decide to go exclusive. Never give up and keep getting back on the horse after things inevitably go to shit with some of your matches.
but, now that covid’s winding down, I’m hoping to meet someone in real life. And before that, I was too focused on my career to spend much time searching.

You: How’s that book of yours coming?

Fatts: It’s … not. I REALLY need to quit writing teases and work on it. Then, after I finish it, I can probably get a REAL job as a writer. You know, the FIRST prerequisite to finding a woman is having a job …

You: So, you should probably get working on that book more … instead of writing porn teases.

Fatts: Yes.

You: BUT … I’m REALLY glad you took the time to write this … because it’s REALLY fucking good …

Fatts: Ah, thanks for saying that, Ecik.

You: Don’t mention it—you made me!

Fatts: Ha! I KNOW! :lol: But, listen … thanks for being a part of … my … fantasy? ”Your” fantasy? … that I wrote … for you? … I don’t know what this is, to be honest! :lol:

I thought you’d like the D&D “go on a quest” element. My tease writing is usually pretty on point, so … I figured you’d like that stuff. The “story” stuff—THIS shit … hopefully it lands … You always seem to have a hard-on for stories, so … I figured weaving an elaborate one couldn’t hurt (sorry not sorry if the philosophy and “moral of the story” got too preachy … that should be the end of that) … Oh! And the upcoming bukkake scene … that was ALL for you, bud!

You: Thanks! … ummm … Yeah … the story … can we get back to THAT now?

Fatts: Uh, yeah … gimme a minute. I just want to “bro out” here for a bit longer—since we’re talking deep shit—and just appreciate the physical and spiritual beauty of the feminine form with someone who ALSO appreciates and understands all of that …

The two of you stare at the perfection that is Nancy Ace for a little while longer ...
Image


You: Yeah, she’s a hottie … can you show me some *new* pics?

Fatts: Yeah, yeah, in a minute … There’s some REALLY hot ones in this Pornpics gallery—the one that I’ve been using for this scene—that I haven’t got to yet … wanna see Victoria and ogle her for a bit!

You: Sure!

Fatts: Yeah, she’s got these INSANE angel tits … Edge or not … it’s up to you … I’ve sort of “paused time” for us here so we could … “chat” … Just scroll down when you’re ready …
Image
You: That was nice, but I’m good now. Are you ready to move on?

Fatts: Yeah.

You: How much of this have the girls heard?

Fatts: As much as we want them to … So, are you ready to see how I patch things up with Nancy?

You: Sure.

Fatts: Get ready—I’m about to hit myself a GRAND SLAM!!

You: Well, you better. It’d be VERY disappointing if you struck out in your own fantasy!

Fatts: Damn straight! :lol: Are you ready?

You: Yes.

Fatts: Okay. After this, I promise not to “insert myself into the story” for the rest of the set. Here we go …

Fatts snaps his fingers …

Nancy: Look, for once, I’ve decided to have some faith in Fatts. He apparently never lost faith in me … the least I can do is show some faith in him and finish listening to his explanation. Fatts is the most well-intentioned man I’ve ever met. I decided I shouldn’t get mad until I’ve heard all that he has to say. He’ll probably make complete sense, and I’ll probably love him even more after I hear his side.
Image


Fatts answers Nancy with renewed confidence.

Fatts: Look, Nancy, I let things get carried away. It’s true. I wasn’t sure what direction Ecik was going to take things, and, I didn’t want to give up control. I should have trusted Ecik—that he would have been able to fix things … BUT, Ecik didn’t know about YOU. He didn’t know anyone actually lived in the Village … and, I freaked out. I didn’t want him messing things up … and I didn’t want him wrecking your home. I went off into the Maze half-cocked. I *wanted* to save Michelle, and I *wanted* her to visit the Village sometimes—that was ALL my dick … but, there was a part of me that didn’t want her to suffer under Angela, and there was ANOTHER part of me that didn’t want Angela to accumulate any more power … but, I went in—with NOT much of a plan—assuming things would go well, but ... they got out of hand … but, the ONLY reason I was able to do that, is because YOU are my TRUMP CARD—you’re my ace in the hole! I KNEW you’d be able to fix things! You’re my “Oh, shit!” button that I press when I don’t know what to do! … I didn’t know how, but I just knew you would be able to save me! My faith in you is total and complete!

Nancy starts to break down a little bit. She’s getting choked up.

Nancy: But, why the temporal anomaly!? Why did you keep me waiting for SO long!?

Fatts: It was for YOU—and Ecik! I felt Ecik really deserved a GOOD story. I thought an adventure would be fun, and … I wanted your debut to be perfect. Of all the characters I’ve created in the Village, you are the best. You’re the most interesting. You’re deep. You’re … perfect. I wanted your debut to be unforgettable.

Nancy: But Fatts, I’m not perfect!

Fatts: THAT’S WHAT *MAKES* YOU PERFECT!! Perfection isn’t real. NO ONE is perfect—except for maybe God … The fact that you cry, have emotions, insecurities … You’re NOT all powerful … That journey … it was harrowing—I would know, because I wrote it! … but, you conducted yourself with aplomb, Nancy Ace! I was SO proud of you EVERY STEP OF THE WAY!! I was cheering you on with every word that I wrote! You didn’t know whether or not you were going to make it, but *I* did. I never lost faith, because I believe in you … but, that’s easy for me to do, because I’m the Creator. Creators know the ending—or at least I did when I wrote it … actually, that’s not true. The final choice lies with Ecik, and he’ll be the one to choose …
Spoiler: show
Yes, you gave me a hard choice, and now, I’m just returning it back to you, like a tennis ball … or a hot potato …
… but, whatever happens, we made you real. You were real when I was writing you, and you are real while the wankers read this story … I wanted to make a lasting impression, and I knew it would take time to do it. THAT’S why I had to freeze time. I did it for you. You have a story worth telling, and I knew that if I could tell that story well, you would become real. That's why I had to freeze time. Your story took a while to write, but you were worth the time commitment, Nancy Ace!

Nancy: Fatts, I don’t know what to say …

Fatts: Don’t say anything! Let’s just … snuggle on the chair for a minute … It doesn’t really work since we’re in different dimensions right now, and that projection static is kind of annoying, but, whatever … let’s just snuggle and vibe for a minute, then move on with the story …

Fatts: If you’re getting sick of all of the drama, you don’t actually have to wait a FULL minute … you can just continue to Part 8 …

Nancy: No—fuck that, Fatts! If the boys are going to ACTUALLY take the time to read the story, make them wait for the whole minute! That’s one more minute where I’m ACTUALLY alive, and … if they were reading along, they probably need some time to process and … feel things … So, make them stay!

Fatts: Okay, you heard Nancy! Set a timer or whatever … or take as much time as you need … Nancy, will you be ready to go and tease them and shit after a minute?

Nancy: Of course—I’m a professional! Just give me ONE minute … I’ll have my shit together and we can do your silly escape orgasms.

Fatts: Orgy of Escape.

Nancy: Whatever!

Victoria: I’ll be ready in a minute, too!

Fatts: Did you just wipe away some tears, Victoria?

Victoria: What!? You already established with Toxic that succubi can be “nice” and have “feelings.” The fact that I was crying should NOT come as a surprise!

Fatts: Alright, alright—I’m sorry! FAR be it from me to cry shame anyone ...

Nancy: Considering you're the biggest crybaby on the thread—yes.

Fatts: Touché.

Nancy: Reset the timer.

Fatts: What?

Nancy: Tell them to restart the timer. We need a FULL minute.

Fatts: Okay, reset the timer. Nancy “demands” it.

Nancy: Don’t say it like that! It wasn’t that kind of demand! I’m not even acting as a “mistress” right now. Clearly, this is still “story” mode … They should do it because I asked nicely—AND they want me to be real …

Fatts: Yes. Nancy kindly requests that you give ALL of us a full minute.

I’ll see you in Part 8 …

[Continue to Part 8—AFTER at least a full minute has passed …]
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Part 8:
Spoiler: show
Orgy of Escape …
Spoiler: show
Alright, warm it up.
Image


Don't edge unless I say.
Image


I've been waiting WEEKS for this! This is going to be SO hot—you have NO idea!
Image


Ooooo, my pussy ... Want to edge? Nope! I don't think so!
Image


Just stare and stroke ...

Actually, do triple your strokes. I want one extra set for my breasts and one extra set for my pussy.
Image


Now edge for me. Go on. I want to see your face as you build up that load. I've been waiting weeks to see you spurt. You better not disappoint me.
Image


Victoria: Nancy, give the boys a show. You can't join us, because you're not actually here in the Maze, but ... you can watch ... and you can do your part to get them warmed up. Go ahead and play with yourself. That always seems to get their motors running ...
Image


Victoria: Good! Now legs up! Show us how you rub that pussy ...
Image


Victoria: More! Spread that pussy more and rub faster!
Image


Nancy: Fuck ... I love it when you tell me what to do, Victoria, but ...

Nancy flips herself around on the chair. Her ass is now facing you.

Nancy: ... I'm SO close—let me just finish like this!

Nancy's moans start quiet but get louder, and louder. The closer you get to the edge, the louder she moans.
Image


Nancy: I'M CUMMING!!! I'M CUMMING!!!
Image


Nancy: Oh, wow ... that was GREAT ... I think I'm going to get off a few more times while I watch you boys ... I just better make sure I don't get so distracted and forget to do the techno-wizardry stuff ...
Image


Nancy: The ass pose was for you, Fatts ... that got me really close ... thinking about how hot that was for you ...

Fatts blushes.
Image


Nancy: Anyway, don't have too much fun, boys!
Image


Nancy: It won't work unless you cum at the SAME TIME, so ... be sure to coordinate ... Good luck!
Image


Victoria: Are you ready!? I can HARDLY wait ...

Let's go! The girls are waiting in the next room ... we'll get started almost immediately, so be ready!
Image


Enter the party room ...
Spoiler: show
As you walk into the party room, you see that Victoria and four of her friends have already gotten started.

Victoria: Here they are girls—the real boys just showed up!
Image


Victoria: Hold on a second ... this guy may be an illusion, but ... his dick feels SO good! Give me an edge while you watch his cock penetrate me!

Brunette friend: Are these the Outsider "studs" you were talking about? They just look like normal guys ...
Image


Victoria: Shut up and suck this ghost's cock! I want you all super aroused and wet and ready to go before we get started on Fatts and Ecik ... You know how much pleasure and energy we've been able to get from Fatts' orgasms?

The brunette nods to Victoria as her head bobs up and down on the dick.

Victoria: Imagine double that, and at the same time ...

The brunette's eyes get wide. Her pace quickens.
Image


Cassandra Nix watches you wanking while she sucks off a ghost.

Cassandra: Who is this new Outsider? He seems SUPER into this ... You have to let me have a turn with him, Victoria ...

Victoria: In a minute, Cassandra ... Now, Ecik, Fatts ... As I suggested before, we're going to use Ecik's escalating cumshots rule. I want you REALLY ready to spurt BIG LOADS when I finally *do* let you cum! ... and NOTHING gets a man worked up like edges—and cumshots!

We're going to get the guys here cumming a LOT for me!

Victoria grins.

For the first cumshot you see, edge once. For the second, edge twice. For the third, three times, and so on—until I give you the command to cum—then let loose!
Image


Victoria: Fatts—give me that delicious dick of yours! I want to taste it ONE more time before you go ... I'll be too busy being bathed in cum and feeding off your energy to get very hands on after this ...
Image


Victoria: Alright, Cassandra, it's YOUR turn! Suck on Ecik's cock and bring him to the edge before we get started with the escalating cumshots ...

Cassandra grabs your dick and starts sucking on your cockhead aggressively while she strokes off Fatts.
Image


Victoria: Yes—YES! Cum on me! I want to taste your jizz!
Image


That's SO good! More—MORE! Cover my face!
Image


In my MOUTH! I need more cum in my MOUTH! Don't hold back—let it all go!
Image


Brunette: Here, Victoria, lie down ... that'll make it easier for the boys to cum on your face ...

... and I collected this cumshot just for you ... let me share it with you ...
Image


Victoria: Another!

Girls, keep licking my tits! Keep licking while another cumshot gets deposited on my face ... Oh, SO good!
Image


FUCK YES!! COVER ME WITH YOU CUM!! I DON'T WANT ANY PART OF ME TO BE DRY!!

Oh, fuck ... boys, we're almost there!
Image
Spoiler: show
BRING YOURSELF TO THE EDGE ONE MORE TIME THEN CUM FOR ME!! FILL MY MOUTH WITH YOUR CUM!!!

Edge fast, edge slow, hold it—I DON'T CARE, JUST MAKE YOURSELF FEEL REALLY GOOD AND GIVE ME A BIG FUCKING LOAD!!!
Image


Nancy: Okay, it's time to go! Victoria, things are set up on my end, now send the boys through!

Victoria says something, but, with a mouth full of cum, all you here are gargles. You think she said, "Okay," or something like that through the cum.
Image


You sense a portal open up behind you. You feel yourself being sucked into it. As the party room begins to fade from view, you and Fatts leave the Maze.
Image


Exit the Maze ...
Spoiler: show
[You may suspend your normal rules and rest until the end of this scene.]
Ecik, there you are! You finally made it back safe!

You are back in the Village at Angela's mansion. Nancy is sitting in her chair in front of her computer setup. You look down and notice a puddle on the floor in front of Nancy's chair. She must have squirted at least a few times.
Image


Thanks for everything!

Nancy stands up, gives you a kiss on the cheek, then sits back down.

That "Orgy of Escape" ... that was ... that was nice.
Image


Nancy enjoys her post orgasm glow a few moments longer, then hops down from the counter and onto her chair.

I can't believe we actually did it ... that shit was FUCKING crazy ...
Image


Okay, so ... we're actually NOT quite done yet ...

Nancy flicks her wrist. A glowing Orb appears in the palm of her outstretched hand.

I managed to retrieve this from Fatts while you guys were in transit back to the Village. Here.

Nancy pulls her arm back a bit, then thrusts the Orb into your chest, all in one motion. You feel the energy of the Orb sting at first, but then it dissipates into you.

Okay ... NOW we're all set ...
Image


The Orb I just gave you is how we free Michelle. It's the one that Fatts got from the Maze that has her imprint on it. I put some safeguards on the Orb so that Angela can't touch it. Knowing her, she'll probably ask you to cum on the diamond that Michelle is trapped in. If you do that, Angela can use that energy and your cum to seal Michelle away permanently, potentially forever. Michelle will be Angela's prisoner for as long as she likes.

Of course, when Angela asks you to cum on the diamond, that will be your opportunity to cum on the Orb instead. Just think about the Orb, and it will manifest. Try it.

You hold out your hand and imagine the Orb. The Orb's energy—which was spread throughout your body—all surges to your hand. The Orb materializes in your palm. After a moment, you slam your hand into your chest—as Nancy did—and the Orb disappears into your body again.

Neat trick, right!? So, that's how it works ... Cum on the Orb while the diamond is nearby, and that will trigger my "unlock" algorithm. We can use Michelle's imprint like a key to open up the diamond. But, since there is only the one path to escape, Michelle will HAVE to take it to get out—walking out the only open door of her prison. When she does so, I'll be able to put a limiter on her, which means she can visit the Village, but her power will be in check. Michelle will no longer be a threat, and we can ALL sleep better at night ...

Don't forget that you may still have to clear out some "house guests" for Angela ... she'll be expecting you to have done that before you go and meet up with her. If she's not back already, she will be soon ... She may suspect that something is up, but ... HOPEFULLY she doesn't fully know what's been going on ...

The worst should be behind us ... with Fatts back, I can start getting the Village back to normal ... Thanks again, Ecik, for doing that ... You held up your end of the bargain, so ... I owe you—BIG time! Anything you want, just name it. Tell Fatts, and he'll pass the word on to me. That'll be my "thank you" for helping to save Fatts ... and me and the Village ...

Nancy smiles at you.

Okay, I've got shit to do ... I better be off! Good luck with Angela!
Image


Nancy looks at the various pieces of equipment in her makeshift laboratory. As she does so, she snaps her fingers towards them. As if on command, they immediately begin to power down and start to pack themselves up. Nancy grabs her keyboard and mouse. Portals appear throughout the room and suck up her equipment then vanish. A large portal appears in front of her.

I'll be seeing you, Ecik!

Nancy waves goodbye. She blows you a kiss, then exits through the portal which closes behind her.

After a few seconds, a small portal opens up just above the puddle on the floor. A towel comes down and wipes up the mess. A spray bottle of disinfectant appears and sprays the area. Another towel follows up by wiping up the area. Then, they all disappear back into the portal.

"Good," you think to yourself. "I wasn't really wanting to clean that up." Nancy really does think of everything.

Your mind wanders back to Angela. Did you finish excising the house guests? You figure you better if you haven't. You hope they will not give you too much trouble. Better get a move on. Angela HATES to be kept waiting ...


[After you have "cleared out" all of the rooms in Angela's mansion (living room and BDSM "play" rooms), you may visit Angela in the final scene, "Confronting the Demon."]
Confronting the Demon …
Spoiler: show
After finishing all of your "chores," you head down to the basement of the mansion to see Angela ...
Spoiler: show
Ah, there you are, Ecik! It looks like you were SO involved in your tasks, that you almost forgot about me, didn't you?
Image


Did Penny Pax and Aidan Starr give you trouble when you asked them to leave?
Image


I HOPE so! They were such unruly house guests—nothing but trouble—if you ask me!
Image


Of course, you know how much I adore trouble ...
Image


It seems to follow me around everywhere I go ...
Image


... but I'm not the only one here who is fond of trouble ... you seem to be fond it as well, Ecik my darling ...

... is there anything you would like to tell me?
Image


With a "pop" and a burst of light, Angela instantly changes into some sexy lingerie.

In a sing-songy voice, Angela says, "I know what you've been up to!"

Image


You've been naughtyhaven't you, Ecik!

Angela flashes her bare ass at you.
Image


But you're going to come clean for me now, aren't you!? And if you do what I want, perhaps you won't be punished ...
Image


Hmmm? You think this is about your chores? Oh, no, Ecik dear ... this is NOT about your chores ... this is about something else ...

If you finished your chores on time, you will get a full orgasm—like a good little basement boy!

But, if you did NOT complete your chores on time, then you will only be allowed a ruined orgasm ...
Image


... but an orgasm of ANY kind is a GENEROUS reward ...
Image


So, whether or not you completed your tasks on time, just being obedient and doing what I command is deserving of pleasure!
Image


My naughty little basement boy ... going behind my back to undermine me ... let's revisit all that has happened ...
Image


Fatts invited the Red Fox over to my mansion to help bake cookies for my party. She owed me a teensy favor—well, that’s actually not quite true … she agreed to come over and bake cookies for the party, because I promised I could get you to come over so that she could tease you … Anyway, she baked cookies and left, and I was happy with that … but THEN, you invited her to my Christmas party … I didn’t really want her there, but … it would have been rude to tell her she couldn’t come—especially after she baked all of those cookies! … and then … I guess I got a little tipsy and told her what this place really was … She just thought it was merely another dimension, but … I suppose you could say I got a little drunk with power and spilled the beans about the true nature of the Village … The Red Fox and I are old rivals. I wanted to rub it in her face that *I* was the stronger one now. I suppose that’s on me.

Well, not long after—as you know—the Red Fox came here stirring up trouble. So, I concocted a plan for Fatts to capture her for me. Of course, Fatts went on to bungle it up. How could he not trust me!? I like it here. This place gives me … SO much power. The men are plentiful and desperate—just like I like. Fatts was a fool to think I would allow the Red Fox to destroy this paradise. Sure, maybe I’d let the residents … go a little crazy with lust, but … utter destruction? No. That was NEVER a possibility …
Image


Nancy’s a clever girl, but she’s not quite as clever as she thinks …

Did you really think you could sneak around my house, playing games, and think *I* wouldn’t notice? Tsk, tsk, tsk … Ecik, my darling basement boy … Do you take me for a fool?
Image


But it’s not too late to fix things!
Image


You could even end up ahead of the game—if you play your cards right!
Image



Fatts is safe—that’s the most important thing, right? And, I suppose I have you to thank for that … I never realized that little wanker was the dynamo powering all of … this. It’s actually quite impressive … The Village has become one of my favorite places to visit … but Fatts is safe now. You and Nancy got him out of the Maze—something *I* could never have done—as that dimension is closed to me … So, I suppose I can’t get too mad at you for going on your little “rescue mission” …

… but, I know everything. Nancy was a fool to think she could conduct clandestine operations right under my nose—I was listening in the whole time!

Eeeciiikkk! … it looks like you have some choices to make!
Image


You know me, Ecik—probably better than anyone else! Am I a malicious being? No, of course not! Do I force people to do things? Never! I prize freedom above all else … I don’t “force” people to do things … I give them … choices. You like choices, right? So, how about I give you one …
Image


You could cum on the diamond to help me to seal Michelle away. This is what you hoped for all along, isn’t it? That is, before Fatts RUINED your plan … An angry succubus in your house—that’s what you were hoping for with all of this in the first place, right? Wasn’t all of this plotting and scheming just a way to find yourself at the mercy of the Red Fox? You WANT to be abused by her, don't you? That was MY plan all along, too! Cum on the diamond, Ecik!

Don’t worry about Fatts—he’s safe. You both escaped from the Maze. True, he and Nancy did try to undermine me, but … I almost prefer it that way! Life gets boring without a challenge—or a sparring partner. If you cum on the diamond, you will be forgiven—no grudges here! However, I will have to punish Fatts. I can’t let him think he can defy me without consequence …

Perhaps you got attached to that little Maze … Maybe you’re wondering what will happen if the Red Fox doesn’t return to “fix” things … well, file that away under “somebody else’s problem.” I’m sure Fatts and Nancy will be RUSHING back there to help Michaela and Toxic and all their “new little friends” … but that isn’t our problem!

The Red Fox … she’s been … difficult—for CENTURIES! You have NO IDEA how haughty and proud succubi can be! It’s SO annoying … I’ve been wanting to put her in her place for a LONG time, so, do me this ONE little favor and cum on the diamond for me ... and you know what—I’ll sweeten the deal!
Spoiler: show
I’ll do a favor for you—classic quid pro quo!
Image


This is your best option, Ecik! Michelle—she’ll be fine. I won’t be … too harsh to her, and … I’ll let her go—eventually … and the Maze—the Maze will be JUST fine … You’ve seen what Nancy and Fatts can do together … they’re practically unstoppable! Do what’s best for yourself AND meSeal away Michelle by cumming on the diamond!

If you don't like that, there's Option Two: This would be Nancy’s “little plan” … That “witch”—as the Maze dwellers like to call her—is actually pretty skilled … She beat me fair and square, and, since I am morally opposed to forcing your hand, I’ll keep her plan on the table as an option for you to pick …

You could cum on the Orb. The Red Fox will be free, but the limiter will be put in place. You and Fatts will BOTH be punished—for openly defying me—but … I’m sure there’s a way your “angry succubus locked in your house fantasy” could be made to happen. You might have to move to your house in the Village for a little while to make it so, but … Nancy’s a smart girl. I’m sure she could figure something out, especially if the Red Fox felt a debt of gratitude for being set free ... although your punishment session would probably be more intense if she was actually angry :devil: ...

Of course, for Nancy and Fatts’ plan to work, that Orb needs the load of a full orgasm. Can you give me a full orgasm today, Ecik? Or did you not complete your chores on time?
Image


A ruined orgasm might not work. In fact, a ruined orgasm will only have a 50% chance of working. If it fails, the limiter will have a zero percent chance of being put into place—and who knows WHAT the Red Fox will do when she escapes … of course, if you REALLY feel the need for a full orgasm right now, I can make that happen … for a price.
Image


I’ve missed having you in my basement, Ecik darling! A month was SO long for you, I know—but what about two weeks? In exchange for a full orgasm today, you will agree to be a slave in my basement again for two weeks—start date to be decided by you! I’ll even let you decide to be denied or ruined every day, but I want you back, baby! Stay in my basement for two weeks, and all will be forgiven. Fatts will still need to be punished, but … we’ll be together again. Wouldn’t that be nice?
Image


I have to say, though, even with the orb working, there isn’t a guarantee the limiter will work. If Nancy’s widgets work like my magic does, then, I’m guessing Fatts will need to exert himself with the Red Fox in order for his little plan to succeed.
Spoiler: show
Read: It's up to you and not me to decide how that part of it plays out ... I'm not going to just have the Red Fox visit the Village "for free" ...
Inhibiting magic is tricky. Beings rarely consent to having limits put on their power. There is always negotiation, though. If Fatts’ efforts “saved” her, then perhaps the Red Fox will consent to accepting the limiter. After all, it would only reduce her power when she’s in the Village, but … if Fatts and Nancy want a guarantee that the Red Fox can visit without wreaking havoc … that is going to take some effort—believe me.

Of course, we haven’t even discussed my favorite option—the nuclear option! You could just blow up the diamond and see what happens! True, Fatts did try to save the Red Fox, but she might not see it that way. After all, he was also the one who trapped her in the first place!

If you DO decide to blow up the diamond, I won’t be sticking around … I may enjoy the chaos from afar, but … being involved directly would get … boring. And you know I loathe cleaning up messes … It’s just not my style.

I have had some dealings with the Red Fox in the past. We’re both ancient. We have some history. I doubt she’ll stay mad at me. I can always lie and say it was a joke—that I would have released her after a couple weeks. She’d probably believe that.

As for Nancy … for only being four months old, she is incredibly powerful. I suppose that’s a credit to Fatts and his astounding imagination. I’m almost jealous of her powers. Trust me, Nancy will be fine. She said something about having a contingency if the Red Fox did try to take over the Village … there might be some chaos, but … probably nothing permanent like Fatts and Nancy were fearing … of course, it might not be … pleasant. And you would not get off easy either, mister—OH no!

I’ve been spying on Nancy Ace quite a bit since I arrived in the Village. Village fantasy mechanics are extremely complex, but … as I understand it … somehow *you* were the one who “wrote the tease” that set all of this into motion?

Angela laughs.

Ridiculous! YOU—writing a “tease”—controlling ME!
Image


Angela laughs even harder.
Image


Oh, that Nancy Ace—what a silly girl! Slaves controlling their masters!? What a quaint idea! She’s CLEARLY under the influence of Fatts …

Her dimension hopping, I understand. Fatts’ faith in me giving me power—THAT I get—gods have been absorbing power from their worshippers since time immemorial … even her gadgets and little machines being as powerful as magic … okay, sure. But you—my little wank slave who got trapped in my basement … the idea that you have ANY influence over me WHATSOEVER is COMPLETELY preposterous …
Spoiler: show
Author’s Note:
Apparently Angela is an atheist when it comes to Village Fantasy Mechanics. Of course, that’s a step up, that she’s even aware they are a possibility at all … most of the girls in the Village are completely oblivious … which means that Nancy is the only “awakened” or “true” Villager. The others function more like automatons, or maybe livestock is a better analogy. They have feelings and emotions but aren’t fully sentient—not really. They are controlled more by the desires of Visitors than they are of themselves, but … those kind of details will be forthcoming in the “Village Premier” set—whenever THAT gets put out (in five years, at THIS rate!). :lol:
… but I don’t have to believe it to convince the Red Fox that you were responsible for her kidnapping. So, we could always just let it ride and see what happens!

If she DID go batshit crazy, it WOULD be fun to team up with Nancy—to save the Village! I did just say messes are boring, but ... Nancy and I have been at odds for quite a while … it might be fun to work with her instead of against or in spite of her ... I'm not sold. Who knows what I will decide!?

Oh, my brother Loki would be SO excited to hear all about it! He says you just don’t get the adventures in sex work that you do in the movie business—but I would have my OWN Avengers level story arc—with sex! He’d be SO proud AND jealous at the same time! … It’d be WONDERFUL …

So, what will it be, Ecik, my darling basement boy? All of these options. What will you decide?

A bright light flashes. The appearance of the basement suddenly changes.
Spoiler: show
Let’s tee you up while you think! Nothing like getting blood to flow to the wrong head while you’re trying to make an important decision!

Angela holds onto the diamond while she watches you wank.
Image


She studies your face carefully, looking for a sign that you've made your decision.
Image


She sets the diamond down, then quickly covers her breasts to tease you.
Image


She kneads her giant breasts with her hands as she watches you. She seems to enjoy distracting you as you consider your options.
Image


Angela hops onto a nearby chair.
Image


She knows exactly how to excite you.
Image


She turns to face you, displaying her pussy. She rubs herself while she watches you edge.

Image


Decision time! So, what will it be, Ecik?

Cum on the diamond (ruined or full)
-The Red Fox is trapped in the diamond as Angela’s slave (and possibly forever).
-Fatts is punished by Angela.
-Angela owes you a favor.
-Michelle will be unable to “fix” any problems in the Maze.
Spoiler: show
So, you're making the smart move—good for you!

Angela begins to don a black, skin-tight outfit.
Image


The only thing you owed Fatts was freeing him. With Michelle locked up, the Village is safe. That's the best thing for me and Nancy, isn't it?
Image


Perhaps this is the best decision for everyone!

For your favor, I could let you, Fatts, and Nancy into the diamond. Fatts and Nancy ... they could negotiate with the Red Fox and try to get her to agree to accepting the limiter before I release her ... and you, well ... the Red Fox would be FURIOUS with you ...
Image


Isn't that what you want—to have an angry succubus tease you relentlessly?
Image


You thought it would be hot to have her under your control in your house, but ...
Image


... isn't it more exciting for you to be imprisoned with her? She wouldn't be so docile then ...
Image


... she wouldn't need to hold back ...
Image


... she wouldn't want to.
Image


She could take out her furious retribution on you properly ...
Image


Ah, the diamond ...
Image


... a cage for you and my nemesis ... but, I wouldn't limit the teasing to just you and the Red Fox ...
Image


... no, I would be a generous warden ... I would allow her ... conjugal visits ...
Image


The studs I would let in to tease her would please her ...
Image


... and she would please them ...
Image


... as you watched.
Image


I think seeing another get a blowjob while you were only helpless to watch in frustration ... I'm sure that's a punishment Michelle would inflict upon you.
Image


After all, she finds you repulsive. She wouldn't dare to suck your cock. She doesn't think you're worthy.
Image


Oh, what's that? Your escalating cumshots rule is still in place and no one bothered to reset the counter!? Oh, my! Well, you better do your edges, then!

Think about Michelle being trapped in my diamond, then you being trapped in there with herif you are man enough!
Image


Alright, enough fantasy—we'll make your dreams come true soon enough!

I don't care how you decide to spend your "favor" ... you only get this favor in exchange for helping me to trap the Red Fox in the diamond ...
Image
Spoiler: show
NOW CUM ON THE DIAMOND AND SEAL HER IN!!!
Image


Good boy ...

The cum is absorbed into the diamond. Deep blue electrical energy crackles around the diamond. As the cum seeps in, energy seems to seep out. Angela is using the "overcharge energy" that Fatts imbued into the diamond to create a protective barrier around it. A blue sphere engulfs the diamond, then it rushes in, reinforcing the diamond's outline. You see a bright flash followed by a loud "pop." The energy field seems to have been seared into the outer layers of the diamond. It now has a bluish, translucent sheen surrounding it that it did not have before.
Image


Now, Michelle is under MY control—and no longer a threat to the Village.

Let me know how you would like to spend your favor, but for now, I must be off!
Image


The things I will do with this diamond ...

Angela smiles devilishly in triumph as she turns the diamond slightly, watching the light reflect off of the changing angles. After a moment, she vanishes.

You wonder what will happen next. Perhaps you already know.

Image
Full orgasm on the Orb
-The Red Fox will go free.
-There will be a chance for Fatts and Nancy to put a limiter on the Red Fox (for when she’s in the Village).
-You and Fatts will be both be punished by Angela.
-Michelle may or may not need help with re-establishing order in the Maze.
Spoiler: show
So, did you not complete your chores on time? If not, you will ONLY be getting a RUINED orgasm from me today—unless, you agree to stay in my basement again for two weeks! It won't be so bad! I'll even let you decide when you want your sentence to begin, AND, I'll give you the option to be denied or ruined every day ...

Yes, I will stay in your basement for two weeks in exchange for a full orgasm today ...
Spoiler: show
Oh, Ecik ... the basement isn't so bad ... in fact, you might not be the only one staying there ...
Image


In fact, Luna Star may be joining you ...
Image


You can still choose when you want your two weeks to start and whether or not you will be denied or ruined every day, but ...
Image


... things might not be so lonely with a cellmate ...
Image


... it could be interesting ... AND fun!
Image
I'm ready to cum for the Orb ...
Spoiler: show
So, you don't trust me ...

Angela begins to don a black, skin-tight outfit.
Image


I expected this from Fatts and Nancy—but NOT from you!

Angela eyes you intensely.
Image


I thought we had an understanding—that we had a connection after the basement ...
Image


I guess I don't know you as well as I thought ...
Image


No matter ... I'll have fun punishing you and Fatts for defying me ...
Image


Hopefully your faith in Nancy and the Red Fox isn't misplaced ... One thing is for sure—*I* won't be sticking around to clean up!
Image


For your sake, I hope things work out—or you at least have SOME sort of plan ...
Image


Well, since I've decided to "play along with Nancy's little plan," I might as well help you and get the diamond in position ... and, true to my word, I am STILL giving you an orgasm for clearing out my "house guests" … Now, summon your little Orb, and we can get this ritual started.

Once again, you hold out your hand and imagine the Orb filling your outstretched palm. The Orb's energy begins to coalesce in your hand. Then, all at once, the rest of the energy surges, and the Orb materializes.

Now, give me three edges, and hold the third one for 30 seconds ...
Image


Edges complete ...
Spoiler: show
Then, edge one more time, and hold it for as long as you like ... I'll let you cum for my spectacular tits ...
Image


On the edge ...
Spoiler: show
CUM FOR ME!!
Image


Hmmm ... I wonder what will happen now ...

Angela holds up the diamond. Energy streams back and forth between the diamond and the Orb. Something seems to be happening. Who can say what will happen next ... perhaps you?
Image
Ruined orgasm on the Orb
-Same as above.
-50% chance of working. (Roll a die. 1, 2, 3, it fails. 4, 5, 6 it works.)
-If you did not complete your tasks in time, you can agree to return to the basement for two weeks in exchange for a full orgasm. Fatts will still be punished by Angela, but you won’t.
Spoiler: show
Go to the spoiler above. Be sure to ruin your orgasm at the end. Roll the die after the tease to find out what happens. There is also an option to choose if you decide to stay in Angela’s basement again for two weeks in exchange for a full orgasm. Make sure you read that optional spoiler …
Cum on neither the diamond nor the Orb and destroy them both
-The Red Fox is released.
-Angela punishes no one but gets to watch the chaos unfold.
Spoiler: show
Destroy them BOTH!?
Image


Ecik! I'm *surprised* at you!

Angela tosses the diamond at your feet.
Image


But I LOVE it!

Go ahead and place that Orb on the floor next to the diamond ... then we can REALLY have some fun!
Image


Once again, you hold out your hand and imagine the Orb filling your outstretched palm. The Orb's energy begins to coalesce in your hand. Then, all at once, the rest of the energy surges, and the Orb materializes.

Good! Now let's go somewhere—warm! We won't REALLY go ... I'll just create an illusion to appear like we've left ... The diamond and Orb will be within range but outside of the "splash zone" ... Then, we can take our time as we embrace the chaos ...
Image


Angela creates an elaborate illusion ...
Spoiler: show
Ah, yes! This is the life!
Image


I could sip drinks on the beach every day if I pleased ... but, if I did that, then trips to the beach wouldn't be "special"—you know?
Image


Oh, Ecik—I'm surprised at you!

Following in my footsteps ... taking the path of chaos! I couldn't be MORE proud!
Image


Do you even have a plan, or are you just winging it?
Image


No, no ... don't tell me ... I want it to be a surprise ...
Image


You've decided to put on a wonderful show for me, and I want to enjoy every minute!
Image


The beach is metaphorical, of course ... I'll be relaxing and on vacation while everyone else works so hard ... in fact, I don't think I'll punish anyone ... Watching this all play out will be its own reward!
Image


... I just might swoop in for some opportunistic drops—IF the mood strikes me!
Image


The chaos and incoming FUN are starting to make me horny ...
Image


Should I uncover my breast?
Image


Okay, but ONLY if you edge for it!
Image


OOoooo ... this ice is SO cold ...

Twist your nipple while you edge again for me ...
Image


Yes, chaos can bring unexpected pain, but it can also bring unexpected pleasure!

Twist your other nipple as you edge for me again!
Image


I've decided you can cum when you see both of my breasts.

Now, in the spirit of chaos, I want you to edge d3+d6 times.
Image


The second one is almost free ... the time to cum is soon at hand—or should I say off hand!

If you DON'T have a plan, edge 2d6 times.
If you have the inkling of a plan, edge d3 times, holding each edge for 10*d6 seconds.
If you plan on helping Fatts and Nancy clean everything up, edge d6 times and give yourself d3+d6 ball slaps after each edge.

THEN, get yourself on the edge, hold it for 3d6 seconds, then open the spoiler ...
Image
Spoiler: show
CUM FOR ME, ECIK!!! Ruined or full, let the excitement of CHAOS overtake you!
Image


After you complete your orgasm, Angela transports you back to the reality of the Village. There is a puddle of cum on the floor. The diamond and Orb sit beside you. In an instant, each shatter.

Now it's time for the consequences. Too bad for you, I won't be here—I'll be on the beach! Have FUN!
Image


In an instant, Angela vanishes. You see red smoke starting to pour out of the shattered remains of the diamond. Whatever is going to happen, it's started ...
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

Here is the wrap-up post ...

Okay, so, at the moment ... I am no longer trapped in the temporal anomaly. I am currently "trapped" inside of DesertFox's Mazes (as per the story of the mega tease) ... However, until Ecik "frees me from the Maze", I cannot play any other teases except for maze teases (which is basically what I have been doing since I was originally "trapped in a temporal anomaly"), so ... once Ecik writes me a set to "bust me out of the Maze", THEN things will "go back to normal" ... or, at least I'll be able to start playing some of the OTHER teases that people have written for me! :lol:

There will be lots of "loose ends" to tie up. Ecik's decisions will impact the narrative, but, even with that, not ALL of the "loose ends" will be taken care of ... SOOooooo ... there will probably be some opportunities to branch some story lines off of this set ... for those that are interested ... I'm also cool with people working off of their own stuff and NOT making return sets that go off of this story ... I'm cool with w/e.

Loose Ends: (Subject to updates as they are completed or tasks are added)
Spoiler: show
•Fatts edges for Toxic (ongoing)
•Getting back piece of soul from Victoria (either Fatts or Ecik)
•“Restoring Order” to the Maze (Jenya, Anneli, Emily, Michelle, etc.)
•Favor from Nancy (for Ecik)
•Depending on choices, punishments from Angela and/or favor, putting a limiter on the Red Fox
Comments for Ecik after the set …
Spoiler: show
Regardless of what you choose, I want you to begin your next set for me “in the Maze.” We’ll probably never “be in the same set” directly again. I don’t want to really make that a regular thing, BUT … this story was SO epic … I just couldn’t help it! :blush: And I REALLY like the idea of you coming to “save me” and us having to “escape together” against the odds, so … please begin the set with me “trapped in the Maze” getting teased by Victoria ... I have some ideas about that ...
Spoiler: show
I gave you a pretty long action/adventure sequence … I thought about “escaping” on my own, but … I didn’t want to miss out on the action! :blush: The thrill of being trapped in a maze with succubi and then “having to escape” … I didn’t want to miss that, so … I figured it would be more fun if I did that as part of the set instead of “off screen” …

So, I REALLY have JUST been playing Maze teases the last month. (A few VERY rare times I cheated :blush:—could count on one hand ... but, I wanted to "commit" to the role play experience ...) So, I want your first return set (I'm assuming I'll get a few after all this, lol :lol:) to JUST be me getting teased by Maze girls and Victoria, and then I end the set with the Orgy of Escape. You can copy/paste that scene and change up a few things, but ... that was a decent number (I think 21) for the escalating cumshots ... going to the 7th and 28 edges ... just don't go past that, please ... I used this gallery, btw ...

So, I want AT LEAST ONE set to be me "trapped in the Maze" (with the final scene being the "Orgy of Escape"). IF you like, you *could* do two or three sets of "trapped in the Maze" ... idk. Thematically, that MIGHT be fun ... because, I'm "trapped" and if I "know" I will escape at the end of the first set, then ... I just know I'm getting out ... which, if I was ACTUALLY trapped, the escape would come as a surprise ...

Okay, so, focusing on DesertFox's Mazes my FAVORITE "maze girls" from that are (and I will give you some guidance on how they play):
Foxy Di: Normally, she is mild-mannered and does NOT force the boys to do ANYTHING they don't want. However, she's kind of addicted to edges. If you edge for her, she "falls off the wagon" and the NEXT time you see her, she's just crazy, a little unhinged, and RELENTLESS. Let's say that the last time I visited her ... I edged for her. So, I would DEFINITELY like a visit from her in "crazy mode." Now, Foxy Di ALSO goes by "Nensi B." BUT ... On Pornpics, under "Nensi B" it's all softcore. "Foxy Di" will get you some hardcore sets ... more on that later ...

Casey Connelly: She's a playboy "babe", not the typical skinny petite girl I seem to prefer, but ... Casey is CRAZY hot! :blush: In her Mazes script, she has 3 teases. In the first tease, she likes to go slow. In the second, she tells me to "Open your legs as wide as you can and stroke your cock deeply." and then edge and stroke and stuff. In the third tease, she likes me to hold the edge ... I guess ... pick 1 mode or mix and match from among those with her scene ...

Anna Aj: She is SUCH a goddess! :blush: She's dominant and commanding, but doesn't really talk down to you ... She likes me to STROKE FAST while avoiding the edge, but ... when it's time to edge ... she prefers to have me beg to edge. :blush: She also is not afraid of edge holds. She's a queen, strong and classy ...

Lilit A: She likes to tease me and make me stroke fast without edging. She knows I'm absolutely weak for her ass. In some photo sets, she has short blonde hair or short brown hair. I REALLY prefer the long brunette photo sets the best ...

Obviously, include Victoria in there ... she should probably be the host ...

Okay, so ... I'm USUALLY not one for "making demands" and getting specific on how I want sets written for me, but ... this is an exception. I would say, 1-3 sets where I am trapped in the Maze could be REALLY fun ... Please please please include all of my favorite girls as described above ... you CAN fit them all in one set if you like ...

Anyway, I REALLY want to be at the girls' mercy! :w00t: They normally can't make the boys cum, and they CAN make me cum, so ... you can have them drain me dry if you like! :innocent: Use my demerit rules if you like. I DON'T think they would be much into ruins (since maxing sexual pleasure maxes energy for them), but ... I KIND OF want to be abused by Maze girls ... I have played ALL of their teases recently ... being some of my Mazes favorites, I REALLY would appreciate these "additional" scenes with them. :wub:

ALSO ... normally, hardcore isn't a big thing for me, BUT ... since the girls can finally put hands on the Walkers ... use as many "hardcore" sets as you like while I am trapped! :blush: ... Speaking of which ... Cassandra Nix caught my eye in the "Orgy of Escape" ... would NOT mind seeing her again :whistle: ...

Again, I want AT LEAST one scene where I am "trapped." I am SURE there will be other sets you want to write to further the story and start closing plot arcs, but ... give me AT LEAST ONE "trapped in the Maze" set before you go on to that ...

Finally, I kept a PARTIAL log of girls who teased me in the Maze (I'm assuming you don't play a ton of "maze teases") all of the following girls I "visited" and would be fair game to throw at me (but PLEASE include all 4 of my "favs" above + Victoria):
Spoiler: show
Vanessa Angel (It WASN'T the version of her from the Village, but .. OH MAN was it SO NICE to cum for her! :blush:), Aleksa Slusarchi (You were all like, "How does no one have her on their favorites list!?" a week ago, but I was like, "Yeah, I've seen her in mazes ... she's FANTASTIC ...), li moon, Michaela (She has 3 scene's in Bree's Maze, but DesertFox writes her BEST!), Talia Cherry, Melena Maria, Mila, Celeste Star, Malena Morgan ... seen a LOT of girls in a LOT of maze teases ... just expanding the list a bit ... Elle Alexandra ... Ariel ...
So, all of those are "actual" girls who show up in maze teases I have done ... 1-3 sets ... end the last "trapped in the Maze" with an "orgy of escape" ... ALSO ... you shouldn't tell me what your choice was ... I want to have NO IDEA what will happen when I get out ...

So, about all of THAT ... You know the deal. I'm passing the story on to you. I wrote a CRAP ton, but ... now that you "know" who and what Nancy is ... just take it in whatever direction you like ... also, you are a part of the story now ... also, if there are plot arcs you want to close ... other people will be playing the set as well ... you guys could coordinate to close some of those ... TOTALLY optional ... I feel like I wrote this. I got what I wanted to out. Now, I don't really want ownership of what happens next. You just do whatever you like ...

The ONE thing I will say ... Nancy's "contingency" was that IF things went crazy ... things would STAY CRAZY (with people super horny) until I brought my demerit count down to zero ... that was just MY idea ... I'm interested in YOURS ... Also ... check the other "endings" ... I put out some possible ideas there as well for how to proceed ...
I *still* enjoy short sets, but, 30 edges is probably the “new target” for “shorter” sets. At this point, I’d say 40-50 edges is a “really good” set for me. Over 60 edges is “long”, and though I *could* get to 100 again, I would need a LOT of motivation (and time) to pull that off again … but, I COULD do it … just don’t want to make that the “new normal!” :lol: (And, it goes better if I can cum at LEAST after every 40 edges—IF I'm shooting for 100 ...
I don't think that I will EVER write a set LIKE THIS again ... This was like over one month of work ... PRETTY CRAZY ... If this was a "masterpiece level" set ... MAYBE I have ONE more in me, but ... I'll spread that out over SEVERAL MONTHS of writing AT LEAST ... in most ways, this was a one-off ...

I don't have a great desire to make this some epic, long story. At the rate people write, I'd say I'd like all of this wrapped up within a month ... I don't want to drag it out crazy long, and I do NOT plan on writing sets for others involving this arc UNLESS they really want to. Any sets I write or that are written for me involving this arc should work to close things up INSTEAD of expanding on the narrative, if that makes sense ...
Last edited by FattsDynamo on Wed Feb 16, 2022 1:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

And, my updated rules ...

My Rules:
Spoiler: show
Current Number of Demerits: 97

Recently added rules:
1 edge for each girl if there is a strap-on in the picture (stolen from Bjorn13)
30 second edge hold if the girl is licking another girl’s asshole (If the ass is naked, takes the place of the regular edge.)
Elsa Jean: For POV pictures only, whenever Elsa’s mouth is on “my” genitals, 1 edge. Whenever “I” am penetrating her in the POV pic, 1 edge.
**New Favorite Girl (with new “Personality” addition)**
Vanessa Angel: Every fifth edge for her in the set I must hold for 50 seconds.
Toxic A: Maximum 10 second breaks between edges for her; Instead of “normal” edge rules, I edge once for every pic where she is braless and not wearing panties. Due to a bad decision I made when I got trapped in DesertFox’s “Maze”, I owe Toxic 9913 edges. Both Nancy Ace and Toxic want me to pay off my debt … eventually.

I enjoy writing teases. I will often get REALLY into it and take 10-30 hours to write a single tease that I am really into. Any tease I put that much effort into will be one that *I* really want to write. If you write me a set, thank you, but don’t expect a “dynamo level” tease in return. Moving forward, all return sets will be rushed: basically, the best tease I can write in 1-2 hours. (Life is pretty busy at the moment.) They should still be pretty good though :fun: ... just not that level of “amazing” I usually strive for. :cool: (Of course, I always reserve the right to go over time, but … I REALLY will be rushing and set up countdown timers and moving quick to get it done efficiently … I have a feeling Zerg’s template and pornpics.com will be my friends …)

I’ve spent a lot of time trying to develop my “bench” of HMC Village characters. If you have seen one of “my” girls in a tease I have written and would like to spend more time with her—even if it’s just a quickie return set—please let me know so I can make that happen. Some people might say that would makes me an “Internet fantasy pimp.” :whistle: That may be true, but … just don’t let the girls hear you call me that, or else we will BOTH get in SO much trouble! :\'-( :no:

Preferences
Spoiler: show
Basic Tease Guidelines:
I never realized it until joining this thread and writing some teases ... but, apparently, based on my rules and the sets I have written, my "ultimate sex fantasy" is to be the main character in a slice-of-life harem anime! :lol:

TLDR version:
If you are worried about writing a set for me, the main things are:
1. Keep the total number of edges around 20-30.
2. Watch your pacing. Give me a warmup scene with almost all stroking and maybe end with an edge. If the girls get crazy and edge me 10-15 times in one scene (which I CAN handle), follow that up with a scene that is mostly stroking.
3. Give me a full orgasm at the end! :lol: (Seriously though, it’s more of a requirement than a suggestion …)

Those are the basics. Beyond that, I like stories as well as challenges and games. It doesn't NEED to be super in-depth or have much of a story. If you are thinking about writing me one super long tease, instead consider giving me one that has multiple paths and endings that I could replay several times. I'm VERY vanilla. Stick to solo girls and lesbians for photo sets along with the above guidelines, and I'm SURE I'll enjoy it. :-D

More detailed guidelines: (They get longer and longer, but … you don’t need to read it all to write me a set.)
Spoiler: show
Solo girls and lesbians. No cocks. Power and control themes are great—humiliation not so much. End with a full orgasm. Keep CBT lite. Games, challenges, and “punishments” are all good. Try to give me at least 5-10 pics of warmup before the first edge. 20 edges/session is a good target that will translate to roughly 60-90 minutes of play time. Shorter sets are fine! 60-80 edges is my max upper limit. Warn me that a session might be “long” if it goes over ~35 edges and consider marking a break point. Edge holds are good. 5 to 20 second edge holds are fine. 30-60 seconds are very nice, but I need to warm up to that. 1-2 min is good, but after two of those in quick succession, I’ll need a break. If a hold goes over 20 seconds, please spread the hold over several pics. I usually get bored if I have to hold a real long edge for just one pic.

The “full orgasm at the end” rule is pretty firm. If you don’t like that, just make me work for it! If you want a VERY thorough explanation for why I have that rule, you can read all about it in the feedback I wrote for Helequin in this post. Though I don’t prefer it, I’m okay with ruining. (It’s best as a “punishment.”) Multiple orgasms (with breaks) during a long set is probably the way to go with me for sets with over 30-40 edges. I’m an edge slut. After I’m really warmed up, a 6, 8, or even 12 edge frenzy is doable, but, I need a break after that, so, maybe follow that up with an orgasm or a less intense “mostly stroking” scene to give me a chance to recover. If I have to do X number of edges in Y minutes, a challenge with consequences like that REALLY excites me as I am both very competitive and hate getting in trouble …

I’m an ass man. Petite, skinny girls with nice, perky bubble butts are the best.

If you want to turn up the intensity of the tease, turn on a metronome. 240 BPM is a good pace for me to really keep me on my toes. If you want me to stroke fast and “force” me to edge, 270-300 will do that.

I’m creating a narrative setting: the HMC Village. Pretty much every tease I write is set here. The premise is the HMC thread players and girls all live together in one city, where the girls run around and constantly tease the boys in one giant, ongoing sex party. There’s drama, gossip, and occasionally even magic or science fiction elements.

If you want to write a “story” tease for me, that would be cool. I would love to see the HMC Village become a collaborative thing! All of my favorites have little descriptions for them (see below) which include their archetype (to make it easier to write for them). If you want to include one of my characters in any of your teases, please do! It doesn’t have to be exact, but just do your best to stay somewhat close to their archetype. I have enough girls with different archetypes that you can probably find one of my favorites that matches your writing style preference (to tease me how you like). Or, better yet, just develop your OWN “character” for the HMC Village and she WILL become canon!

If you don’t want to do that, TOTALLY fine. Just mention that the set does not take place in the Village and write however you want. That way I won’t go in with any expectations. Or, maybe, the domme is just trying out a different persona that day ... just have fun with it!


Extra Long and Extra Detailed Tease Guidelines:
Spoiler: show
I mostly go for solo girls or lesbian pics. Tatoos are offputting, and neon hair is not really my thing. If there are guys in the pic, that’s typically a turn-off. Seeing other guys getting it on with girls I want to cum for, well … that diminishes my arousal. Often times when playing sets made for other people, I will just completely skip most pics with dicks in them. Even POV blowjob pics are kind of meh for me … unless the writing was done in such a way that I was on the receiving end, then it might be alright, but still, probably not my favorite …

I don’t do gay, trans, or shemale pics. I like hentai, but lately I tend to prefer “real” pics over hentai. (I do enjoy the tentacle stuff.) Bondage can be pretty hot. Actually, girls abusing boys who are in bondage would be an exception to the above (though lezdom is even better) … For regular hetero sex scenes, I always know the guy in the pic is not me, so, it becomes a turn-off … but, for some reason with bondage, maybe it’s the masks, I can identify with the dude. I really want to be bound, so, somehow, I’m able to “pretend” that guy is me and the thought of being that guy in that situation is a big turn on … but, solo girls and lesbians make up most of my porn diet.

I don’t like SPH or sissy stuff. I don’t do chastity. While I don’t enjoy most “humiliation”, I love banter and taunting. Not being “in control” is a big turn-on for me. So, a girl in the tease taunting me, telling me she doesn’t think I can handle another edge, but she’s going to make me edge anyway … That would be SUPER hot to me. Talking down to me, asserting her dominance, rubbing it in that I have to do what she says … that’s all about power and control, where straight humiliation is more about personal insults, belittling, and making the recipient feel lesser. Belittling me because I of my performance or piling it on when I’m getting punished or even insulting me about my preferences … that all falls more into power/control, which would all be good and very arousing ...

I enjoy when girls are sweet, caring, and affirming in teases as well. If she is really focused on my pleasure and making me feel good, that can be a huge turn on as well.

I like to cum at the end of every session with a full orgasm. I’ve never gotten into denial. I’m fine with ruins, but, when I ruin during a session, even multiple times, I almost always end with a full orgasm (usually not as satisfying after emptying out the tank). I don’t mind “working” for my final orgasm and would often prefer to “earn it” in some way.

The “window” for the “perfect orgasm” for me is somewhere between 10 and about 20 edges. After 25 edges, my dick starts getting fatigued. The perfect orgasm for me happens when I am both super excited and hard, and that peak typically occurs in that 10 to 20 or so window. Fatigued orgasms are usually not as satisfying as those in the peak. (I’m like a drug addict, except instead of chasing the stronger high, I’m chasing the perfect orgasm.) Going longer past the window and wearing me out with edges … that’s alright, too. I’m kind of an edge slut, and the promise of that orgasm keeps me motivated to keep going … but, I just don’t like being robbed unexpectedly at the end with a ruin or denial after I have “worked so hard” … That’s not fun for me.

I am good with cumming multiple times during a session. Getting a full one in during the “window”, taking a short break, then getting back to it … that sounds like a fantastic session for me. Full orgasms often but do not necessarily need to trigger the end of a session. Being “forced” to edge and cum over and over … that sounds like heaven to me …

I don’t generally enjoy CBT, but I will do it if instructed. Dick and ball slaps are fine, but I will not ball bust. I don’t do clothes pins (too painful), though tying up my balls can be fun. No ice, icy hot, candles, etc. I will eat my own cum, but, it’s not something I enjoy. Rubbing my nipples does nothing for me; don’t put it in any tease for me. I don’t usually do anal stuff, though I’m open to it. I don’t own a butt plug, so … I have to very carefully improvise on the rare occasion I do engage in anal play … I’ve never had a p-spot orgasm. I would like to have one someday, but, I would need a partner or a nice toy to make that happen. Don’t try to get me to have one in a tease …

I enjoy games and challenges, like cock heroes and web teases. I have coded and modified a lot of GuideMe teases. Stroking or edging in time can be a lot of fun. I can pretty much edge at any metronome speed. Feel free to incorporate timers or metronomes if you like. However, without an AI to run it, doing so in text teases can be cumbersome. I think the free form and writing and personalization is what makes forum tease games shine, so … keep the things AI-based teases excel at sparing. The same thing goes for videos. A good web tease draws you in to create an experience. I would often prefer that than cumming to a video … but, having to edge X times during a video or edge in time to a slow metronome while watching a video or cumming during a certain window in a video … those would all be welcome challenges.

I prefer to warm up with stroking for at least 5-10 minutes before my first edge, so, typically it would be best to place my first edge after the first 10 slides at least or even longer. If you wanted to put an edge in sooner, have me warm up before I start the tease or to a video or have me edge within a time as a challenge. Typically, if the first pic forced me to edge and no additional incentives or instructions were given, I would just stroke to the same picture for 10 minutes, which would be kind of boring … unless that was a punishment (which would make it exciting) or I had to edge in time as part of a challenge that had consequences.

Around 20 edges is a pretty decent session for me. 30 or even 40 is doable. 20-25 is right in my comfort zone. On most days being locked up during the pandemic, I would cum 1-3 times per day over the course of a 2 hour session. So, cumming multiple times would be fine for me, I would just need a break, unless it was a ruin, then, the break could be shorter. I have done long, 60 or even 80+ edges in a long, 3 to 4 hour session. If the set is going to be long like that, let me know, so I can rest up a bit before and can plan for a longer window.

Holding the edge is fun. 10-20 seconds is a good edge hold for me. 30-40 seconds is even better. If I hold for over two minutes, typically my cock will start to fatigue badly and I’ll have difficult staying hard or need to take an extended break … which is not preferred, because it disrupts the session ... unless the session has a lot of holds, then I could get warmed up for it correctly in order to do “softer” edges that I could hold for a minute, and even do five or more of those, so long as I had some little breaks in between … The longest edge hold I’ve ever done was around 6 minutes. Of course, after a hold that long, my cock is fatigued as much as if I had just cum …

I’m an ass man. Looking through my favorites will give you an idea of my body type preferences. Typically, I like petite and slender models. Tall and skinny is nice too (even REALLY skinny, just not anorexic skinny). More athletic builds are also nice. “Average size” women are also fine. Big boobs do very little for me. Fake tits (unless the plastic surgeon was very gifted) are typically a turn-off. Thicc girls, even girls with a big ass don’t do much for me, and most PAWGs are just alright. A perky bubble butt on a skinnier frame is my favorite. Women with a nice hourglass figure, even if they are thicker, are ALWAYS nice … If the girl is skinny enough to see some rubs when she arches her back … she’s probably “perfect” for me …

Lastly, keep each tease self-contained. I don’t want to “play the game throughout the day,” though “homework” could be okay … it might be okay for the girls to “decide” what my next session is going to be, especially if I perform poorly at a game and need some “consequences” …
The Rules
Spoiler: show
I try to keep them simple. I typically focus in on a certain body part and “give it strokes” or an edge before moving on to the next. I usually stroke at a pretty brisk pace. When I edge, I edge instead of stroking for that pic. This way, I don’t have to “wait” or count my strokes before I edge … I just get to it. I usually rest 10 to 30 seconds between edges. Strokes and edges are cumulative.

Stroke rules:
25 strokes per image.
+25 strokes per instance of eye contact.
+25 strokes for a tummy if the belly button is visible.
+25 strokes for a clothed ass (including a thong)
+25 strokes for a nice set of legs
Spoiler: show
At least one full leg or two thighs down to the knee must be visible to qualify. If I don’t think the girl’s legs are attractive, she doesn’t get strokes. However, sometimes that has to do with camera angle or position, and the same girl might get strokes one pic but not the next.

Edging rules:
Naked ass: 1 edge
Spoiler: show
Strokes for asses are straightforward. If at least half of her ass is turned to the camera (like in a profile shot) that gets strokes, but, edging for asses is a little more complicated.
The ass needs to be roughly 60% visible to qualify. If it’s a profile shot, like this:
Image
it doesn’t get an edge. (That’s half an ass, not a full ass.) A shot like this would qualify:
Image
But a shot like this:
Image
would not, because she is sitting on too much of her ass.
Hands obscuring an ass never count as “being in the way.”
If a thong is partially pulled down but a strap is still going across the butt cheeks, that does not count as naked. Also, if the chick is not wearing panties, but a strap is going down her butt to attach to her stockings, that is not technically naked … but, I have been known to “cheat” and edge anyway … usually for the second case but not the first …
Eyes & Ass: 1 edge for each
Spoiler: show
If an ass is fully exposed and there is an instance of eye contact, I will almost always edge while staring into the girl’s eyes first, THEN give an edge for her ass. If one girl is showing Eyes & Ass while her friend is also looking into the camera, that’s 3 edges: one for each set of eyes and 1 for the ass.
1 edge when I feel it is needed/deserved, but it costs me 1 demerit
Spoiler: show
So, sometimes a picture is just so hot that I feel it “deserves” an edge. This edge would be given when the pic would not otherwise normally qualify for an edge (e.g. a woman with goddess breasts looking into the camera). Sometimes, when playing other people’s sets, it will be all pussy and boob shots for 20 pics in a row, and I’m just really desperate to edge. In that case, I might edge, mostly because I’m horny, to a shot that is SUPER hot and really deserves it …
It’s kind of a catch all. Since my rules are so focused on edging for asses, sometimes it is nice to have, even to allow me to edge for that amazing clothed pic …
I kind of consider this “cheating.” You could incorporate it into the tease so that I was “expected” to edge to some “hot pics” … or, you could punish me for “edging when I was not supposed to” … You could even tell me after the fact and either edging or not could have consequences … though it’s more fun to know this rule is in play beforehand. I will track all of the “just because” edges for each session.
1 edge for each girl if there is a strap-on in the picture (stolen from Bjorn13)
30 second edge hold if the girl is licking another girl’s asshole (If the ass is naked, takes the place of the regular edge.)

Default Video rules:
Spoiler: show
During a video, I must stroke the entire time at any speed I like. I may edge as often as I like for a one demerit penalty each time.
Favorite Girl Rules
Spoiler: show
Emily Bloom’s pussy: 1 edge
Guerlain (aka Lily Chey): Every Eyes & Ass pose (even clothed) gets an extra edge.
Michaela Isizzu (aka Kalena A): Double strokes and edges for her eyes (when she’s looking into camera).
Nancy Ace: 1 edge when BOTH her naked breasts and belly button are showing.
Melena Maria Ryabushkina: 1 edge when her pussy and any part of her ass are showing.
Spoiler: show
In the following pic, her pussy is showing with some of her ass:
Image
Since her ass does not meet the 60% rule, no edge for her ass, but 1 edge for Ass & pussy.
The next two pics would get two edges:
Image
Image
This one would get three:
Image
Melisa Mendiny: Double for her ass when her ass is facing the camera
Uma Jolie: Extra edge when she is “head-to-toe” naked and virtually all of her is in the frame. Like this:
Spoiler: show
Image
Ashley Doll: Smile doubles everything
Jenya D (aka Katie Fey): All edges for the picture become edge holds. 10 seconds each.
Holds can be taken consecutively. (For example, Jenya showing Eyes & Ass would be a 20 second hold, 10 seconds for each.) EHs can be chained, and she can chain edge holds on pictures that would not normally qualify for an edge on command.
Toxic A: Maximum 10 second breaks between edges for her; Instead of “normal” edge rules, I edge once for every pic where she is braless and not wearing panties. Due to a bad decision I made when I got trapped in DesertFox’s “Maze”, I owe Toxic 9913 edges. Both Nancy Ace and Toxic want me to pay off my debt … eventually.
Leona Mia: Edge for her legs when she is bottomless. (Same “leg qualifications” as per stroking)
Vanessa Angel: Every fifth edge for her in the set I must hold for 50 seconds.
Girls with Rules
Spoiler: show
Mila: Must firmly squeeze my balls while edging for her.
Anjelica: Must hold my breath whenever I stroke or edge for her. (Taking a breath means I stop stroking.)
Angela White: Her tits (clothed or naked) get +25 strokes.
*Caprice: Can assign me homework. Any tease that she appears in, either when she appears, at the end, or even in a "post feedback mini tease", she can tell me what my homework is. She can assign me 0-15 edges for my next session (done under the conditions she specifies) and tell me how I am to cum after they are complete, i.e. to pictures, a video, my vibrator, a certain metronome speed, a time limit ... anything like that.
Elsa Jean: For POV pictures only, whenever Elsa’s mouth is on “my” genitals, 1 edge. Whenever “I” am penetrating her in the POV pic, 1 edge.

Girls who Need Rules
Gloria Sol
Malena Morgan

Girls I Like: (Would not mind seeing ANY of these in my teases …)
Nola A, Remy LaCroix, Mia Malkova, Miela, Ariel, Riley Reid, Abella Danger, most of the StasyQ girls, Nina North, Courtney Knox, Talia Cherry, Elsa Jean, Aleksa Slusarchi, the Red Fox (Michelle H), Sabrisse, Eliza Ibarra, Jada Stevens, Abella Danger (that feels like a spy name …), Nikia A, Ingrid Leanne, Lily Ivy, Amber Sym, Mira V, Lacey Duvalle, Kylie Cole, Kimmy Granger, Cira Nerri

These are the “base” rules. Feel free to make strokes fast or slow or force me to edge or add extra edges or edge holds as commands.
“HMC Village”
Spoiler: show
Currently writing a tease for Helequin which will include a lengthy explanation of it (or at the very least a lot of clarifying dialogue). Basically, the Village is the same and different for everyone. The Village began as “my” fantasy, so, my ideas and preferences shape and underpin it. However, other "explorers" are free to visit the Village, and their experiences and preferences shape the Village as well. Often times, when another explorer enters the Village, the Village will split into a separate instance or timeline. Some of these independent reality lines persist. Sometimes they merge. All experiences are stored in the Village memory, and usually, the Village manifests slightly differently for each explorer who enters. Whoever is imagining a fantasy (writing a tease) has full control, allowing them to change certain details of how reality manifests. The explorers who are currently in the Village mindspace and those who have crafted a fantasy are the ones with active control.

HMC Village Lore:
Spoiler: show
In my version of the Village (your version might be a little different), Lorena Garcia, Mila, Anjelica, Tori Black, Caprice, Jenya D, and Kyla Cole are on the “HMC Village Council.” These are the ladies who “run the town” and are at the top of the Village social hierarchy. My “must end with a full orgasm” rule was a special allowance granted to me by the council as one of my conditions for moving to the HMC Village. Kyla Cole objected to this rule, but she was overruled by the council. Because I’m permitted full orgasms at the end of all of my teases, I’m “special” that way. Not everyone who resides in the Village has to like it (it causes a lot of drama and resentment towards me), but, they have to accept it, because … well, the council said so. I don’t know how or why my proposal was initially accepted … I only know that it was … (Helequin, don’t read this next part until AFTER you play my “toy rules” tease …)
Spoiler: show
The “real” reason is the Village is a Haruhi Suzumiya (from the manga/anime “The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya”) type situation. I’m basically God, but I don’t realize it, and my desires are made manifest in the Village. I REALLY wanted to be able to cum at the end of every session, so the council “consented” and made that a rule. (My desires become reality.) But, the me in the fluff doesn’t realize I have all of these powers. I’m just experiencing life and living out my fantasies without realizing how much control I have over everything. I just consider myself “lucky” to be living out my dream of being the main character in a slice-of-life, harem anime. In fact, the entire Village is a fantasy, and no one knows it including me. The one exception is Nancy Ace. She is the only character in the Village who is aware she is a fantasy. Thus, she’s the only one who will break the fourth wall. She’s fine being a self-aware fantasy. She has a pretty good life, and it’s not like she can leave. She is even aware of her real-world self. But, she enjoys playing along and teasing the boys. It was why she was created, after all.
I have a long list of favorites, and to various degrees, all of them are attracted to me and tend to spend a lot of time with me. At first, residents of the Village ironically started calling my favorites my “harem,” but, the name eventually stuck. Many people in the Village dislike the fact that a “slave boy” has so many girls obsessed with him. (By HMC Village law, male residents of the Village don’t have rights. I am technically a “free slave.”) I don’t seem to mind or notice the resentment, though some members of my “harem” do.

I don’t consider myself the “leader of a harem.” (What anime harem leader does?) I just have girls I really like to spend time with, and they just really like spending time with me. In the HMC Village, all the male residents are generally treated as beta male slaves to be used and abused at the whims of the girls. I’m not fully aware of all of the social norms my behavior breaks. I just consider myself another male, second class citizen, happy to be living in a community of beautiful women.

Some—but not all—of my favorites live in the “Harem House.” Right now, Michaela, Guerlain, Nancy Ace, Melena Rya, and Leona Mia live in the “Harem House”, a large sorority style house. Though she doesn’t currently reside in the Village, Angela White has a large, fancy house she leases in the Village and stays at when she comes back for a visit. Tori Black and Kyla Cole live in a large manor house on the edge of town with Ariel and others.
“Personalities”
Spoiler: show
I don’t have a favorite girl. My “favorite” tends to shift based on who is ordering my strokes at the moment … All of these girls on the list are my “favorites.” If they don’t have special rules, then perhaps they need some! My only condition is that no two girls have the same special rule. What follows are suggestions to give you ideas about how to write the girls’ personalities in teases for me, as well as some additional lore and fluff. You can improvise or write them as you like, however. If you decide to write a girl drastically different from how they are described below, that’s fine. Just be sure to mention at the start of the tease this this tease is NOT taking place in the Village. That way, I’ll know that I should NOT be expecting a certain personality.

In the spoilers below each girl, I have linked teases that I have written that I feel really capture the girl’s personality. Feel free to read them for “inspiration” on how to write a girl if you aren’t quite sure.
Spoiler: show
Emily Bloom: (girl next door archetype) The featured girl in the first tease I ever wrote for GuideMe (never published). Very occasionally, I’ll watch part of one of her cam shows. Emily is sweet and fun but also practical. (Basically, how she is in real life, in my view.) She thinks of herself as being the “devious” girl next door. In the Village, Emily is literally my next-door neighbor. She enjoys taunting and punishment and pushing the envelope, but she doesn’t want to go too far. While Emily can be a merciless tease, she prides herself on being fair-minded and makes the pleasure of her subs a high priority. She’s nice, but, she’s willing to be a little cruel to deliver on what her boys want.
Spoiler: show
Emily “punishes” Horny_CHabo
Michaela Isizzu: (domme with a heart archetype) Michaela is known in the Village for being a superb “slave trainer.” She worked with Ecik17 to great effect when he was locked in Angela White’s basement for a month. Michaela can be tough with exacting standards, but she mostly uses positive reinforcement to get results. She knows when to press and when to back off. I am one of her trainees and an ongoing pet project for her. Secretly, she considers me her “favorite” trainee and has been becoming more and more lax with me as time goes on. However, I’m still in her “program,” and she expects improvement and results. She LOVES teasing me, and she LOVES being domineering and in control. The “Russian Invasion” series really got me thinking of her in this way. As per DesertFox’s “Mazes,” she can be really helpful and sweet, too. However, she doesn’t want to let on how much she actually likes me, because that might compromise our trainer-trainee relationship if people thought she was playing favorites. She considers herself my “protector” and likes to watch out for me. She lives in the “Harem House.” She is good friends with Guerlain and best friends with Sabrisse.
Spoiler: show
Michaela trains and punishes BBBeanie.
Michaela trains Ecik.
Guerlain: (sweet and innocent archetype) Guerlain is SUPER sweet. Her smile is warm and she likes to be nice … but she LOVES to be a tease and pretend to be innocent … though, compared to most of the girls who visit the thread, she actually is pretty tame. She always makes an effort to make sure that I enjoy myself during sessions with her, whether being overtly kind and genuine OR viciously teasing me—because she knows I love it. More than anyone else, she enjoys watching me have full orgasms. She doesn’t like to push me to my limits, and she takes extra care to make sure every moment is pleasurable. Guerlain attended Edge U. She spent a semester abroad at a prestigious college in Japan where they specialize in training high caliber call girls in the art of teasing. She worked as a waitress in a maid café during this time. Karlee Grey was her roommate and best friend from college. Even though they fight a lot, Guerlain is really close to Melena Rya. She lives in the “Harem House.”
Spoiler: show
Guerlain in a “masterpiece” set for BBBeanie.
Guerlain and Melena train Ecik.
Jenya D (Katie Fey): (domme queen archetype) I got to know her from various maze teases. She is demanding with high expectations. She loves being mean and showing me who is boss, but that’s just her domme persona. She’s actually quite friendly and relatable, but when she flips into “domme mode”, she absolutely enjoys cruelly punishing me and taking a lot of pleasure from that. She LOVES to make me suffer while holding the edge. She has a goofy side that most people don’t get to see, because she’s often too focused on perfecting her smoldering intensity and building her reputation as a prima domme. When it comes to demerits, she tries to be fair. She also will issue challenges for demerit forgiveness—fairly difficult things—because she enjoys watching me try so hard. She expects me to try and fail (attempting the forgiveness challenge for nothing), so, if I do manage to pull out a win, she’s happy to reward me for the effort.
Spoiler: show
Jenya in a “masterpiece” set for BBBeanie.
Nancy Ace: (overachiever/class president archetype) Nancy is kind and warm, but she loves pushing me to my limits. She’s an explorer wanting me to expand my boundaries and try new things. She can be a little forceful with high expectations, but she doesn’t enjoy demeaning me, rather, she tries to keep me accountable and wants to see me grow and follow my rules. She is overly strict when assigning demerits and does so with a smile.

Melena Maria Rya: (shallow and moody archetype) She’s nice and bubbly most of the time but gets horny very, very easily. She’s kind of immature. More so than the other girls, she can be REALLY moody. When she’s in a good mood and feeling happy, she’s very kind and goes out of her way to be nice. But, when she’s feeling bitchy, she gets REALLY bitchy. Typically, the hornier she is, the meanier and sassier she gets. She can be kind of selfish and is used to getting her way. She’s not into pain, but she LOVES to watch me stroke and squirm and edge. She puts her own pleasure ahead of mine and is not afraid to ask me to do a lot to help get her off … but, since she loves pleasure, she wants me to have a good time, too. She loves watching boys cum, but, since she can never seem to get enough orgasms, she is notorious for ruining men over and over so that they last longer … which gives them more playtime with her …
Spoiler: show
Guerlain and Melena train Ecik.
Malena Morgan: (sadist who understands limits) Helequin captured her well in this tease, so, I will just quote “Malena”:
Helequin wrote: Sun Oct 31, 2021 4:55 am I will be a bitch because it's fun. I will fuck you boys over because it's hilarious. But I'm not some psychopath. You all have limits and rules for a reason. And I guarantee I will push them, but I won't break them. Every bit of torment I visit on you, is something you signed up for. Besides, if I actually break you then I don't get to torment you over and over. But if don't break you I get to come back and do it all over again bitch. Who knows, maybe I'm not even that much of a bitch so much as someone who isn't afraid to go all the way!
Again from Helequin: “terrifying and sometimes sadistic with her creative rules and drive to generally fuck me over either by making me lose control and ruin or viscously busting my balls.”

Anjelica: (entitled princess archetype) She’s the queen bitch. She is undoubtedly the most popular model on this entire site, and she knows it. Sessions with her are a privilege. She can be nice and pleasant when she wants to be, giving me a great session if she thinks I deserve it. But, she can be equally cold and demanding. A session with her is a session with purpose; she either wants to reward me and “thank me” with her presence, or … she has some kind of punishment to enact or some point to make … the Queen’s time is limited, after all …

Melisa Mendiny: (kind and loyal archetype) I’ve seen many of her videos, and Melisa seems very sweet and kind! She knows how intoxicating I find her ass. Though I like some of the other girls’ asses just as much, secretly, she knows I think her ass is objectively the best of the bunch. She is very considerate and welcoming, but, she can turn very forceful if she’s feeling disrespected.

Uma Jolie: (Wild card archetype? No idea …) Uma is the most recent addition to my list. I don’t know her too well. She could be really sweet, and she seems that way … I imagine that she loves teasing me. She could also enjoy teasing and punishing me mercilessly for her own amusement. She’s hard to read. Probably a “wild card.” I guess I’ll find out!

Toxic A: (needs development) I met Toxic in some of the various tease mazes I have wandered into … She likes to edge me silly, over and over again. She likes me, and she’s pleasant … but, she really wants to turn me into a complete and total edge slut, and maybe I could be … for her.

Ashley Doll: (friend with benefits archetype) Ashley is totally sweet and kind, though not as naïve and innocent as Guerlain. She’s a big flirt who likes to tease me. She loves to joke around. We became friends because we’re both American. We met in Cancun while vacationing separately. It wasn’t supposed to be a nude beach, but … it ended up becoming a nude beach—for me at least. She considers herself my friend—with benefits. She’s one of those girls who feels more comfortable around guys than girls, though she is a girly girl. She’s not into drama. She would basically never assign me demerits, and of all of the girls on my list, she’s the most likely to issue me easy challenges in order to help me forgive accumulated demerits. The other girls might complain about that, but she doesn’t care. On the other hand, she doesn’t want to make things too easy for me. Also, ironically, because we’re friends, she enjoys exploiting the power dynamic of the game to put me in uncomfortable situations, not because those things are necessarily turn-ons for her, but just because she can, because she LOVES messing with me. She would tie me up, just to make me look ridiculous. She’d buy the CBT package just to ask, “Why are you hitting yourself?” She’s devious and loves to play mind games. If anyone else set me up for a full orgasm and faked me out with a ruin, I would get TOTALLY pissed … but if it was her, it would be funny, because I know she would make it up to me later. We’re just tight like that.
Spoiler: show
Ashley thanks Ecik.
Vanessa Angel: Vanessa is a foxy mathematician who recently moved to the Village. She was close friends with Guerlain in college (Edge U alumna). Vanessa is kind of shy and prefers to stay home, which is why she moved into a house on the edge of the Village. She is actively doing research on the number 5 and is trying to figure out why “5” is such a great number to use in teasing. Despite an intimate naked walk through the woods and my attempts at flirting, I have been unable to “win Vanessa over.” I’m crazy about her and would do ANYTHING to get her to feel the same way about me. Perhaps she isn’t overly interested or was just too shy to mention it, but at this point, she hasn’t communicated anything about “liking” me in any way. Most of the girls [in my lore] either really like me or really don’t (or secretly like me … though many are indifferent) … with Vanessa, it might be fun to treat it like a “dating sim” or something … if you feel like that might make for an interesting plot point … or not. In any case, she is SUPER hot, and I would be MORE THAN WILLING to “assist” her in her research ANY time :blush:… Thanks to Ecik17 for creating this cool character! :w00t:

Gloria Sol is not on my list, but she’s super hot. I think she could be easily written in and added if she “insisted” on it. I don’t “know” her too well, so, I do not have a clear picture on how her personality should be written … maybe you have some ideas ... Gloria Sol is the “accountant” in charge of my “demerit accounts” at the bank.

Leona Mia is one who I recently saw on a tease here ... I decided quickly I needed to add her to my "favorites" list ... I have no preconceptions or thoughts on how her personality "should" be. Surprise me and write her as you like! It will become canon ...

Caprice: Caprice hosted my first session/tease on this thread. After the session, she organized a meeting with all of my “favorites” to inform them all they were in my rules and to let them know how I performed. She was so proactive (and also so experienced as a mistress) that the girls decided to make her my official “mentor” in the HMC Village “slave training program,” a role she takes very seriously. Lorena reintroduced me to Caprice in this tease, and ever since then, she has gotten a LOT more intense …

Lorena and Mila are also not on my “favorites” list, but, being thread favorites, I would be surprised if they did NOT make an appearance in a tease for me … Everyone here knows how they are “supposed” to be written. ;-) (Lorena is very nice. Mila tends to be bitchy and literally busts balls.) Lorena still needs some rules, by the way …
Punishments
Spoiler: show
I get “demerits” which I track from set to set. My rules allow me to “edge at an any time.” Each time I do, I earn a demerit. (“Unauthorized edges” from forced metronome stroking also result in demerits.) If I underperform or disobey instructions, I will assign myself demerits after the tease. Mistresses may also assign demerits as a punishment (to create incentive) for not completing challenges or tasks. Any mistress may spend demerits from the “general account” to punish me during a set. Demerits accrued during a set cannot be spent during that same set. No more than 25 demerits can be spent in a single set.

Demerit Chart:
Spoiler: show
Light Punishments: 1 Demerit
Light CBT: 100 dick slaps, 25 ball slaps, or ball squeezing for a total of 10 pictures.
Spoiler: show
Each demerit buys a “package” of one of the above. I will squeeze for the entirety of the picture while I stroke/edge regardless of how long it takes. I’m kind of a baby with these and will tend towards going softer than harder. I am not a pain slut. The girls can “instruct” me to go harder, but, I will not go past a certain point. Slaps by themself is just an actual punishment, but, if you mix in edges, it becomes something I kind of enjoy.:innocent:
Tying my legs to the chair or binding them together for the rest of the session
Tying up my balls with a shoelace for the rest of the session
Kneeling for the rest of the scene
Enable breath play for the scene: can only stroke while holding my breath (CANNOT be combined with a metronome)
Being forced to watch porn without stroking (stackable, up to 10 min for each instance)

Medium Punishments: 3 Demerits
Ruin 1 orgasm (capped at 2 per set)
[LOCKED. PM only] Head palming (2 min per purchase, up to 1 min continuously at a time)

Harsh Punishments: 6 Demerits
[LOCKED. PM only] Eat my cum according to mistress’ CEI

For 6 Demerits, a mistress can turn on “Punishment Mode” for the rest of the set. Then, the following rules apply:
-The demerits spent per set cap is raised to 35.
-The ruins per set cap is raised to 4.
-Head palming and cum eating are unlocked.
Toys
Spoiler: show
Belts, ropes, shoelaces, etc with which to bind myself.
Magic wand vibrator and variable speed adjustor
-with hummingbird attachment
-with anal attachment (though it doesn’t work well)

It has two factory settings (high and very high), but, I can use the modulator to adjust it to roughly 7 discernable vibration settings:

Vibrator modes
1 teasing (lightest—never came yet)
2 light (teasing with rumbles ... have cum after 20+ minutes)
3 medium-low
4 medium
5 muted high (factory std, but on highest multi, almost the same as high)
6 high (factory std)
7 extremely high (factory std high)

The vibrator heats up and becomes unusable after 25 minutes and needs to cool down for 30 min. However, if you use a setting below medium, it can go for well over an hour …

Suggestions on using the vibrator …
Spoiler: show
I prefer to be tied up with hands bound while the vibrator is going with either a video playing or an autoscrolling slideshow (like scrolller). If the domme doesn’t give any explicit instructions, I’ll bind myself (for free—no demerits).

I ran a little test by binding myself up while watching the Michaela RLGL video by digitalparkinglot. (SUCH a hot video …) I turned on the vibrator and tried to hold off cumming as long as I could. With no prior warm-up, on medium, I came at around 20 min. On high, I came around 13 min and around 7 min on extremely high.

After stroking and edging for a while, putting it on extremely high has made me cum as quick as 90 seconds and within 3 minutes. Anything lower than medium is just teasing and gets boring if I am only trying to avoid the edge/cumming. If the domme talks a lot (like a JOI or soundgasm audio) or if the video is REALLY hot (focusing on asses), that might change things. Edging right before might make lower speeds more interesting as would needing to “edge in time.”

You have all the numbers and stats. If you want, get creative and try something out. Having the domme give times and speeds directly per pic would be a good bet (like if I’m not tied up and have to turn it off after every edge and pause the timer), as would issuing a challenge of some sort involving bondage and a video … I’m up for trying anything for the vibrator. (The anal attachment sucks, but, the hummingbird is great.) Ideally, I’d come up with a rules set like BBBeanie has for his crusher, but, nothing so far …

Set Status:
Spoiler: show
Need to play
Bjorn13’s 1-4 set
Mistypanda22’s 1-7 “Made to Order” set
Ecik and Bjorn’s “Game Show” sets (1-10 and 1-12)
Bjorn’s everyone set “for” Zerg (1-17)
PoetBird’s 11-24 beauty pageant every0ne set
lmind's sets with Mikey
Ecik’s “Elsa” series for Chabo
Still Playing
N/A
Working on
Epic Adventure/Story set for Ecik
Return set for PoetBird - “A Day with Guerlain” (2 scenes left on script to write. 4 scenes done.)
Piggyback my BBBeanie set for milorrabo
Return set for lmind (will publish individual scenes as they are completed)
Set for Helequin with his new rules (This is the “Village Premier” set where I detail the fantasy mechanics of the Village.) (script outlined. Intro written. Random dialogue written)
"Piggyback" set for Ecik to be released simul with above Helequin set (script 80% done)
“Correcting Village Anomaly” set for PoetBird (intro mostly written. Scenes outlined.)
Cecilia Lion "debut" set for Ecik (Only ideas and premise. Nothing done. Need to "research" and develop the character ...)
MASTERPIECE level set for MistyPanda (script for the Prologue written, now I have to write the 4 Acts … they are already outlined. 8-))
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
Bjorn13
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 524
Joined: Mon Jun 14, 2021 1:38 pm

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by Bjorn13 »

@Ecik17
Spoiler: show
In Penny pax redhead challenge you called one of the redheads Kaye rose, her name is actually Amber Ivy. :wave:
Last edited by Bjorn13 on Fri Feb 18, 2022 4:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Tease me here please :blush:
Tasks in queue: 5
HMCP Rules

Full orgasms 2026: 4
Ruined orgasms since 18 Jan: 16
More stats
here
brian
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 640
Joined: Sat Dec 30, 2006 11:31 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Submissive

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by brian »

Bjorn13 wrote: Sun Feb 13, 2022 8:33 am
Spoiler: show
can't wait, looking forward to it!!
My HMC Rules

Last full orgasm: -
Last ruin: -
Ecik17
Experimentor
Experimentor
Posts: 1129
Joined: Tue Jul 28, 2020 1:30 am
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by Ecik17 »

Fb for Fatts

First off, wow! Without even opening a spoiler, thanks for sending this! I know you spent a lot of time on this, and am excited to read every word! I have a lot of time to myself over the next 48 hours, so am going to start on this now, and edit this post as I go along. Using my rules from January! Also, treating each section as a separate set, so will do my favorite photos and strokes for each section!

I'll use this post to provide quick feedback from each part, and will update each section as i do it. then will have comprehensive feedback at the end.


For those who may play this in the future, do NOT open the spoilers below...they may ruin your experience...and not in a good way!
[/spoiler]

part 1
Spoiler: show
Loved the set up! Also...am very curious about how the timed tease will go, as I've used them in the past ;-) I set a timer for 11 hours...and started! my first stop was the bdsm room...of course! and then...aiden starr. with a machine...but not for me! however, she is so evil...i edged anyway!

next up was apartment 6 (i read nancys letter before starting...but thought that it would advance me, so wanted to see the bdsm part first). met up with nancy, and got the details of the story. Very interesting premise, looking forward to what happens next! Although I read fast, having the breaks as nancy explained what was going down was helpful, as I was starting to get to the point where I'd edge without permission!


favorite pics
Spoiler: show
Image
Image
Image
Image
At the end, i went back to the section I missed (but didn't stroke for it). I missed Penny pax and a full orgasm. damn. :-(. but that's how it goes sometimes!

Time: 45 min
Part 2
Spoiler: show
With some extra free time, I went immediately into part 2. I've never done a maze tease before, so I'm really curious about how it will work! After the intro, and entering the maze...I ran into Michela. She is hot (she did make one of my favorite pics), but then nancy ace appeared..and it got a bit rough! To make up not stroking more for Nancy in the past, I went with her to fill up the orb...which I did, first try! Edging again for Michela was fun too. however, all of the fund edging went out the window as soon as I saw jenya. For her first photo, instant edging without permission, so I was already starting off on the wrong foot with a brutal hold. And then she started to work me over. after the 45 second holds...she wanted me to say thank you. I'm a smart man. It only took me 2 tries to figure out what she wanted.

I wanted to become her disciple, but I thought if I saw another photo at that point, I would cum. Maybe if I came earlier for Penny, I'd be able to survive... I'm good at doing edge holds, but not back to back. And then Guerlain...Thank god she let me cum! I was about 3-5 pictures out from not being able to hold back.

Really enjoying the story so far.
time: 2:20




favorite pics
Spoiler: show

Image
Image
Image[/img]
Image


Part 3
Spoiler: show

I like the idea of a slightly mad emily bloom...like a mad hatter. She is not my type, but the writing of her made me forget that! I played her game, and after 5 pins, I was back to where I was before, edging without permission. I of course didn't say that she was mad (don't tell a crazy person that they are mad)...but rolled a d1, which led to more fustration. :-)
after more text to help with the cooldown, ran into Toxic A. I'll admit, not a huge fan of her, although she did score a couple of favorite pictures. i really liked the writing here, and the edge game too.


favorite pictures
Spoiler: show
Image
Image
Part 4
Spoiler: show
Since all text, will only leave text here. First, want to say again, that I think you are a very talented writer, with good worldbuilding skills. What Nancy Ace is, and can do, was eluded to in parts 1-2, but here, you get the entire story. And it was powerful stuff. Kinda wish I knew this from the start, as it would have totally changed some of the sets I did for you.

Yes, I read the entire thing. Even did some separate googling about Pygmalion. interesting stuff, wasn't familiar with the original story, but now that I know what it is, there are plenty of modern adaptations of it, even in Star Trek with Data and it could be argued that some of the new school Battlestar Galacticica had some elements of this. Now, I'm going through all of my sci-fi stuff trying to see where this would also show up :-). Lots of ideas about spinoffs here, but am not sure how they'd work with your rules, especially if Toxic got out. Not hard right now, but reading was interesting, and worth it (and I like reading stuff). Going to continue on, sit back, relax, and see how the rest of the story works out.
Part 5:
Spoiler: show
Full Disclosure: I added a buttplug before doing this set. nobody told me to. I was horny, and wanted to. I regretted doing so, because this was my favorite part yet.

**Edit** I stopped halfway through the first time. I restarted the timer, and part 5 from the beginning. still with the buttplug. :blush: Feedback is updated based on that.
Spoiler: show
I still regret placing in the buttplug because of Annelia. She's not my favorite body type, but here, she was written so well...she will be one of my favorites after this. She was so...dirty! Exactly my style :-) especially here...which started triggering my edge without permission rules...

Normally, I let the boys stroke as they please, but they are SO afraid of cumming, they BARELY stroke—and even if they did, most would be afraid to edge ... but look at you! A new stroker—no, a new edger—and you just get RIGHT into it ... well, this will go MUCH faster than I thought ...
Image

It was all downhill from here. I made it, but the plug worked me, Annelia worked me...again. And then the wanker showed up.

I was wondering when my other rules would begin to take effect. I tend to like "dirtier things" (I'm one of the few players here that have rules for cum, don't mind dudes in the picture, ect), and was wondering when the maze would take that turn. Seems that it has...and I'm all for it!

I made it through Annelia's edging scene...only because I took a break before. if I had kept on going all the way through, I would have cum. simple as that. So i'm glad I did take a break...

PS. I like that this is so meta..and I don't mean the Facebook thing :-0 Still liking the writing


Time: 4:30

Favorite pics
Spoiler: show
Image
Image
Image

Some housekeeping and backtracking:
Spoiler: show
I realized that I missed a part of emily bloom's part. I think it was because i misunderstood when she asked if she was crazy. Anyway, I went back, and replayed in the d the entire section. I really enjoyed "searching for her edge" section. Like I mentioned before...she's not really my type...but the writing was fun!

Time 5:50
Moving on...

part 6
Spoiler: show
I honestly didn't understand the beginning text here...and references to others...because I'm not a maze person. perhaps others who have played mazes on milovana before would understand? however, after reading, am introduced to victoria. is she the Big Bad? Is there a big bad in the maze? I hope so...because her first photo went to my favorite photos instantly..and may be the best photo of this entire thing. I know I like more dirtier stuff than many on this thread (most of my favorite pics have cum in them :-)) ,but her... :love: her photo on her knees with the the socks...started the edging without permission rules.

favorite photos
Spoiler: show
Image
Image[/img]

[/spoiler]

Part 7
Spoiler: show
mostly text, so no favorite photos here. really liked how the story advanced! I will say, while I like dialog, i don't know how I feel about me saying things :-) Perhaps it's just a weird thing of mine.

I will say, given the relationship between you and nancy, I felt like a third wheel in this part. And that's ok, at least for me!
We then went way meta in this set, a couple of mind-bending concepts, but still fun! Who is real? who is not real? The real Ecik would give you a fist bump.

Still laughing at the homer pic.
Part 8
Spoiler: show
"Don't edge until i say" is the worst thing to say to someone who wants/needs to edge ;-0 I really liked the concept of the orgy of escape! And the story resolves itself...with you being freed!

Like I mentioned earlier, I peeked but did not play the penny pax part in the first section. This is because i normally play through everything as normal, and then go back to the branching options i missed or did not pick. So I went back to the living room...and played it out properly! It's no secret that penny pax is one of my all time favorites...and the blowjobs! And the full orgasm! I wish I played this out first!

and then...I confronted the demon! I haven't seen this set of Angela before...it was way hot!

I did make a choice. But it didn't turn out exactly how i wanted. What am I talking about? My thank you set will explain more.

Overall, I really liked this series. It was the most expansive set ever done for me. I think some of the pacing and author's notes got a bit long (but you did mention that this was a story...not exactly a set), but really liked the concept. Curious to see how you'll adapt it so that others can play!

Favorite pics
Spoiler: show
Image
Image
Image
Image




Last edited by Ecik17 on Thu Feb 17, 2022 5:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Playing the HMC game! My rules: My Rules Active
User avatar
FattsDynamo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 371
Joined: Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:12 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch
Location: United States

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by FattsDynamo »

@Ecik: Feedback on Feedback:

Part 1
Spoiler: show
So, I sort of wanted it to be a “normal” tease, and then you get pulled in unexpectedly … The intention was to come back and finish the other teases … At a certain point, you’ll need to go back and actually finish and do the Penny Pax tease before seeing Angela … So, too bad you read it, but … you’ll actually be able to do it. :yes:
Part 2
Spoiler: show
So, I kind of figured you have never done a maze tease. So, I basically just made this an HMC “story” tease that takes place “in a maze.” With Nancy navigating, I figured there would be no need for mapping, and … most of the encounters had been removed. So, this tease doesn’t actually have too much in common with “actual” maze teases … the ONE thing I picked up, was that in Maze teases, they are all flash and EOS or GuideMe, so, it’s almost all metronome stroking, with the premise for Mazes being that the succubi are “controlling” your stroking … So, at a few moments, I did metronome stroking as an homage to “maze teases” but … the format of the HMC thread isn’t great for that, so … I just stuck with “normal” HMC stuff for the most part and dipped into metronome stroking here and there to add some “maze tease” flavor …

Jenya … yeah … That’s been like … a month since I wrote that? and I was too chicken to test it, so … =/ can’t remember exactly how that went, but … I KNOW that scene was some good shit …

So, as I was thinking about pacing, your request for release every 50 or so edges REALLY stuck in my mind … I kept thinking “I better put a release in sooner than later … the Emily tease ended up being a LOT longer than I originally expected, so … I added Guerlain in after the fact (literally after writing and finishing part 8) because I KNEW going longer would just be too much, so … you’re welcome! You got it because you asked for it, lol! :lol:
Part 3

Spoiler: show
Emily Bloom is not your type! … huh. She’s got big titties and a GORGEOUS hour glass frame … and she’s not as skinny as Nancy (who you DO like) … interesting! I’ll keep that in mind … is her face too young looking? That ruins her for a lot of people … I’ll keep that in mind, but I’m GLAD the “mad hatter” thing kept it interesting! That is EXACTLY what I was going for with that …

Hmmmm … I think you may have played that wrong … I *thought* I made that clear from the writing (“Emily does not accept your answer”), but I should probably be more explicit …

So, after the “mouse game” (which you MAY have dodged, but … on a FULL run through, play it, it’s fun!) there are FOUR responses to her “crazy” question, but only ONE of them is correct. You are supposed to NOT advance, but actually go back and pick again until you choose the “right” answer … I’ll have to edit that … Yeah, there are like two pretty long sequences based off of calling her mad, so … whichever one you picked was actually NOT the correct answer … probably not now, but … you should probably go back and play that whole Emily scene again. That one took me 2 hours when I tested it. That scene is a “full tease” in it’s own right. The one branch is like a whole separate scene, and the OTHER branch actually has FOUR scenes in it …

Also, if you are a “good boy” there are options in there where you can have emily to get you to cum … I included those because I thought you would have needed relief … which, you MAY have had you done ALL of the content! :lol: But don’t worry … go back and do this scene again when you are done … or, go back and do the other options along the way (since ONE of the options IS long and “mandatory” and you skipped it on accident) … but … it’s better as a whole …

Well, Nancy knew you wouldn’t like Toxic, lol … If this set was “for you” I know you well enough to have NOT included her … but … she’s a feature of the Maze, and I DID visit her, so … she was story critical … The Toxic scene actually goes on QUITE a while if you want it to … but …. since you are on the clock, I figured you would do the minimum … also, she’s not really your “type” so … I didn’t want to force you to edge to her a bunch, but … off the clock, you can check out the other options … also, since other people will be playing this, the “extra” content WILL get used …. The extra stuff is pretty spicy, IMO … of course, once again … was too chicken to test it, lol … also, wasn’t sure if it “counted” because it wasn’t like a “maze tease” and Toxic can’t leave and I am stuck with Victoria … anyway …


Part 4
Spoiler: show
I spent a week, probably even two, JUST working on the writing for Part 4. I put everything I could into that. I’m really proud of it. SO glad you enjoyed it …
First, want to say again, that I think you are a very talented writer, with good worldbuilding skills.
:thankyou:


What Nancy Ace is, and can do, was eluded to in parts 1-2, but here, you get the entire story. And it was powerful stuff. Kinda wish I knew this from the start, as it would have totally changed some of the sets I did for you.
I had her more or less developed to this level back in December, but it was all just in my head, with only VERY minor hints along the way. I was working SLOWLY on the “Village Premier set” where I was going to unveil her character … but then the Red Fox happened, and now you know MOST of the rest of the story, haha … Part 7 is another “story” section, and you’ll get the rest of it there …
Part 5
Spoiler: show
So, I wrote this set to be accurate to Mazes. Toxic, Anneli, Victoria ... I think even Emily are all NOT random encounters. (That MAY not be true about Emily.) They function the way I described them. I wanted to stay true to "Mazes", so, I kept all of those models for story continuity, obviously. When I could, I decided to add models (like Penny and Aidan) that fit squarely within your preferences. Obviously, you are a fan of Nancy Ace, so ... that helped too ... In the sense of staying true to the canon and story, I didn't have a lot of options for models for you for this set, so ... I inserted them in when I could ...

The "hands-on" policy was a change I added for you. There didn't seem to be a real "reason" why the girls couldn't touch the boys in the Maze. It was never explained. I'm guessing that it has something to do with sourcing POV pictures and hardcore sets ruining the experience for some players, but ... in some mazes (almost none of the "major" ones) sometimes the girls DO get handsy, so ... Knowing that was a preference for you, I decided to insert that when I could ... so, I decided that was just "Michelle's rule" ... SO glad you liked Anneli! :-D

So, the thing about the Anneli scene is that she was SUPPOSED to force you to cum ... That was my intention. I tried to elude to that throughout the tease, but ... I don't think I communicated that well (obviously) with the "Done!" spoilers (which increased the metronome speed and length of time to stroke to 300 BPM and "you will cum!" eventually ... I just fixed that for the others ... Now it is more clear ... I made the classic designer's mistake where the instructions *seem* really clear to you, because you know the intention and what is supposed to happen, but ... then you don't make the instructions explicit enough, so it is unclear for the user ... of course, going TOO explicit in the instructions takes away from the experience and makes it less immersive and natural, so ... it's a tough balance ...

The MAIN thing was, I wanted the player to THINK they had a chance, so, I WROTE it like you did ... I just wanted to then "force" you at the last second and steal your hope away ... so, I guess I shot myself in the foot a bit on that one, but ... I fixed it! :smile:
I like that this is so meta
Yeah, I do too! :w00t: It has been SO fun to play with the "fantasy" and game elements and "make the tease girls real" ... I was DEFINITELY trying to crossover from the usual "self-contained" fantasy space ... I thought playing with "reality" and explicitly trying to make it "meta" would be a VERY cool and fun concept ... one I have ONLY seen once on this site in Shattered's "A Tease through dimensions." That is for SURE in my top 5 favorite teases of all time, because when I finished, I actually felt like I consumed a piece of art and had an "experience" as opposed to "just playing a tease" ... it was amazing ... So, yeah ... the "meta" angle was an interesting space to explore, and, obviously, it's mostly done but not completely over, because we "all know Nancy is real now" ...
Some housekeeping and backtracking:
Spoiler: show
Yep, I went back and fixed the "crazy" thing and made that more explicit, too ... Don't want anyone missing my premium content! :-D :lol:

Yeah, I thought the "finding the edge" was pretty fun ... I also liked my jokes about the multiple personalities after the four "sane" sets ...

So, you are not really into Emily Bloom ... interesting! I would NOT have guessed that ... she has GREAT tits, a lovely hourglass figure ... she's not the typical "skinny, petite" model I usually go for ... is it her face? A lot of people say she looks too young ... If you don't mind, I'm curious as to what it is about her that doesn't work for you, because I would have thought she was decent, though not squarely one of your "types" ... She's in my top 5 of all time ...

Glad you enjoyed the writing! That scene, I think, was one of my stronger scenes in the entire set ...
Part 6
Spoiler: show
I honestly didn't understand the beginning text here...and references to others...because I'm not a maze person. perhaps others who have played mazes on milovana before would understand?
That is COMPLETELY understandable ... So, I assumed (correctly) that you didn't have much experience with maze teases. So, I tried to write things and explain what was happening ... looking back, yeah ... the opening text would probably only make sense to people who had played Mazes, but ... that's okay. There WILL be some of those people that play this tease eventually! :w00t:
however, after reading, am introduced to victoria. is she the Big Bad? Is there a big bad in the maze?
Victoria is not the big bad. She's asleep and you "awaken" her, but ... I don't think she was every officially implemented into the tease. DesertFox wrote the teases in Mazes using PlayfulGuy's script editor. I never "unlocked" the Victoria scene on my playthroughs. I came across the skylight, but never figured out how to open it. There is probably a way, and maybe people did, but ... I never did. Instead, I used PG's script tease editor to just run and play Victoria's file directly. I'm not really sure if she was written into the game and I never unlocked her or if the method you have to use to unlock her was just never implemented ...

There aren't any "big bads" in "Mazes." You just sign a contract with Michelle and Walk. The girls tease you. Guerlain is your Guide. Once you find the exit, you can cum. Pretty standard stuff. The difference is, DesertFox really tried to build out the lore a bit. There are scenes where the succubi get into their backstories a bit. Anneli is an example of that. At one point, Jenya tries to become a "Mistress" and Michelle visits her and puts her in her place ... There isn't really a big plot other than Walking and being trapped ... EVENTUALLY you can do some things (unlocking a few things, getting some spells) where you can solve a few puzzles and earn the ability to cum, but ... as I said, it was either never implemented or I just never figured it out and just ran the scripts directly ...

By the way, Anneli IS actually "really nice" in her Mazes scene. I "turned" Michelle into a a pseudo big bad here and DEFINITELY took some liberties to add some backstory to Mazes, but ... I was writing a story as much as I was a tease, so ... I needed some plot. I would say that Mazes isn't really a story, more of a setting and an experience. The teases for the most part are unrelated and self-contained, but ... DesertFox does SUCH a great job creating the setting, there is a thread of continuity and a slight story and plot—but definitely a well-thought-out premise—that makes Mazes stand out among maze teases. Also, the scenes are just SO well written ...

Victoria is REALLY hot ... and she's "dirty," too—even in her "canon" DesertFox scene ... Her breasts are spectacular, and yeah, the first photo ... it's pretty great ... AND ... she does a lot of hardcore as well ... The thing is, I think THIS photo set is when she was a bit into her porn career and in her early 20s ... I have looked through a fair amount of her photo sets on pornpics, and she seems to be noticeably skinnier and younger in most of them, so ... not sure how that changes things for you with her ... of course, in those sets, it is OFTEN doing hardcore stuff and blow jobs, so ... lol I am SURE you would like it! :lol: I have a feeling that she took a "piece of soul from you." I didn't want to "force" that on you, since I knew a lot of the models in "Maze Raid" weren't in your "preferred" category ... but, I've always enjoyed the "take a soul" plot device ever since this one D&D session I played in college, so ... I wanted to put that in ...
Part 7
Spoiler: show
Yeah, I understand about it being weird to read words that you did not say … I think that’s a normal reaction.

A lot of times, in teases or while reading hentai visual novels written in the second person, I will often think, “Wow! I didn’t know I was THIS whiny and selfish!” or “Dang, I would NEVER do that …” or “I don’t really like any of these choices … that’s the struggle with 2nd person writing … unless you know the person well, it is hard to anticipate their choices … glad I predicted the fist bump! :w00t: Personally, a fist bump would have been too much for me, because our juices might have touched, so … *I* would have preferred the elbow bump, but … I had to do it for the joke, right?

Yeah, the story is really about nancy … you were essential and an integral part of the adventure, but … it was basically Nancy’s story … We almost never see romance plots in teases, so … I thought it was interesting and different to include one here … and, with the Pygmalion/Galatea angle, it seemed like it would make for an interesting story …

I DID feel a little weird and self-conscious about writing myself into the story so much … usually Milovana girls don’t express THIS level of affection into the boys, so … THAT felt weird … it also seemed a bit too convenient and self-serving that I wrote it so the hot main character falls for me, the author, but … I decided to allow it this time! :lol: There *was* a little bit of a power trip thing there … showing off my imaginary virtual girlfriend, but … since the story was about Nancy and she had this special relationship with me, her creator … it seemed appropriate and not TOO heavy-handed … and like I said, normally I would NEVER want to make the player a “third wheel” in a tease (unless they were into that and cuckolding stuff or as a punishment), but … it felt appropriate here, because it really was Nancy’s story, and this was her “moment” … it just happened to involve me … BUT … I was ALSO the person you all were trying to save, so … I felt it was fine to play it up …

Yeah, we went SUPER meta … I really hoped it didn’t get too “preachy”, but … since Nancy was the main character and I created her and this was a tease about her and I happened to be in it … I thought it would be okay to take the opportunity and just lay it all out there, because this would probably never happen again … and so, you got to see things from Nancy’s perspective in the scene with Toxic, and then here, you get to see my perspective of it … which might be the “other half” and “more correct” but … who’s to say? Like Nancy said, we have a “complicated” relationship, and I wanted to show that creator-lover dynamic where it was less master-slave and more partnership … and yeah, then ALSO playing with the “what is real?” themes as well … It was REALLY fun and interesting to write … I’m glad you liked it! :w00t:

Yeah, the Homer pic, lol :lol: … Yes, thank you for that feedback! :lol: When I first read that was your response to Nancy wondering what was happening in the teaser set, I was like, “Oh, yeah, he has NO idea what is going on …” You could probably see it in the tease, that I felt this whole story and freezing time with the temporal anomaly was an overreaction … Nancy certainly seemed to think so … Then, I started wondering, “Why did I default to “control freak” response and go through all of THIS … I probably should have just trusted Ecik to fix things instead of trying to micro-manage the Village. THAT would have been the sane response …” Of course, I didn’t do that, lol … So, yeah … I didn’t have faith in you, but Nancy DID … until you walked backwards into the bushes, lol … Yeah, that part was SO much fun to write … nancy was chewing me out quite a bit, so … it was nice to have her lay in to you as well! :lol: And I was confident that was “accurate” 2nd person writing, since you were the one who sent me that pic in the first place, so … hell yeah, it was a funny scene! :lol:
Part 8
Spoiler: show
Yeah, I was pretty pleased with the Orgy of Escape concept as well … I wanted to do a proper climax and sendoff and end the adventure with something you would enjoy, so … once I found out Victoria did hardcore and I found that photoset, I just KNEW that was going to be the ending … So, I worked out an explanation to make that work for the “ending” … I thought it was pretty tight and made sense …

Yeah, I wanted it to “resolve itself.” I wanted the adventure to be self-contained, so … ending inside the Maze wasn’t conducive to that … basically, I reset things with the adventure and put YOU in the same position I was in, more or less … but, the big difference now was that you knew about Nancy and were “part of the world” … remember back in the fall when I said I would drag you kicking and screaming into my Village fantasy if necessary? I guess I really DID do that! :lol: Of course now, there is a plot and a LOT more context for you by which to make your decision … and nancy is real, so … I am sure that will factor in …

Also, while the story has resolved for YOU … it hasn’t for me … I’m still trapped in Victoria’s Den, and I still have to deal with the fallout of your decision … and YOU may have to as well! :w00t: But that’s how it should be, right? I write a big set for you … things should be done for YOU … but now, you have stuff to respond to, which makes it easier to write a return set for me …

I HATE missing content, so, I DEFINITELY get wanting to go back and play through the rooms … and, of course, you didn’t know what would happen after you went through the portal with nancy, so … I get you “peeking” … but, I don’t like “wasting” content, so … in my mind I always knew you would be going back, but … i couldn’t tell you because tha would ruin it, so … it’s just one of those things … glad you were able to enjoy your time with Penny! :w00t:

“Demon” is my word … from my perspective, both Angela and Michelle were kind of the “big bads” though … that’s probably not true in an absolute sense, and you are CERTAINLY allowed to disagree! Mostly I was looking for a nice section title, so … in the context of the story, “demon” fit

So, the ambiguity of outcome was what got us here in the first place. I wanted to avoid doing that again, so … I tried to be explicit with the “outcomes” … and I did NOT give you a binary choice but a THIRD option :-D. Also, I tried to hint in so many ways that these would NOT NECESSARILY be “hard” set in stone endings … For sure, I furthered the plot and added some things to the canon by developing Angela and Michelle (and Nancy) a bit more, which limits your creative choices for resolution … That being said, now that you know the players, I am fine with whatever direction you want to take things in … that’s why I put certain things in bold and had Angela say she didn’t know what she would do … I still feel like Angela is “your” character, so … I would rather have you make major decisions “from her perspective” because I feel like you are more qualified to do that than me … So, like I mentioned earlier, I basically took a pass on your original choice and returned the ball to your side of the court … will be interesting to see how it turns out!

And that is one of the cool aspects of this … by dragging YOU into the story, you have a stake in it … so, you are not entirely on the sidelines as a referee or author … you probably have split loyalties between Angela and Nancy at this point, so … I thought that would make for a more interesting decision for you, because you couldn’t just be “the creator” you had a stake too … so, we are accountable to our creations for the choices we make … which is VERY interesting and unique in terms of role play …

SO glad you liked it … Glad my warnings were take into consideration, lol! It was definitely NOT a “normal” set … Easily, over 50% of my time was spent on the story and writing the text … it really was a hybrid story/webtease experience … If I wanted to do a 100% sex tease, I would have done that, but … yeah. This was equally a story … glad you “got” that AND enjoyed it! :w00t: It was VERY fun, interesting, and … personally introspective to write! :lol:

Helequin often says you don’t need to go for a “story” in your sets. If only pictures is on one end and only story (like the story section on the Milovana forum) is on the other end … this set is probably in the middle between those and leaning more towards the story side, because the story elements DEFINITELY got in the way of the pacing, but … like you said, if you enjoy it and are aware going in … it’s probably fine, and THAT is what I was going for …
Last edited by FattsDynamo on Sat Feb 19, 2022 10:36 pm, edited 4 times in total.
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
______________________________________________
Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
User avatar
BBBeanie
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 268
Joined: Sat Dec 01, 2018 9:27 pm
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual/Bi-Curious
I am a: Submissive

Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

Post by BBBeanie »

Feedback for @Erik
Spoiler: show
Sorry for the late response, I did do this set a day are so after you posted, but have been a bit busy with other stuff.

I really enjoyed it, I liked that you made the Orgasm Games a wide known event. Having Random hot ladies wanting to tease and bust me all to control me in a year was exciting.

Loved Milas brief tease about it being public, using probably one of my favorite Galleries of Mila here too.

For the two errands I went with the Park first followed by The tennis court. Adrianna is super hot, in all her material she appears to be this sex maniac, but here she appears to really flaunt her beauty.
And the first Goddess Pic of the Games goes to this one
Spoiler: show
Image
Tori was brief and too the point, excited that her games have made a public appearance and looking forward to seeing me endure her devious shenanigans.

Mila returning, hot as always. She's always welcome in my home. I love how confident she is.
Then this image hit
Spoiler: show
A happy Goddess
Image
Then the return of the reporter Charity. I liked her return here, fulfilling her wishes in the tv interview. All to interview and tease me, how nice. To answer her questions, yes she is totally hot enough to be a participant. I hadn't edged yet, but I most certainly want to. And obviously yes, I've been fucked to orgasm before, Nice intentional hard hit there. And then leaving me filled and crushed, she already knows how to push my buttons

Then going out to the Coffee shop, to run into the lovely Kayden. To be honest, she does have a certain intimating aura to her. Not scary per say, but her imagination can be scary. Whenever she shows up it tends to be an intense and painful time for my balls. Here she looked absolutely stunning. This picture whilst in the crusher was amazing
Spoiler: show
I can imagine her standing on my crusher in this pose. Just brilliant
Image

Then Mila's return, with the intent to compete. And boy did she bring her A game here. Lots of great poses here. But this one takes the Cake
Spoiler: show
Just...every...fucking...button...smashed
Image
Great set, I like the way you encorperated Tori's game into this. Wasn't sure how it would all pan out, Helequins challenge here was very broad. But I hope it all works out. Just got to think of 10 more themes to use for the other months

10/10 would bust again
No set at the moment, I was writing a set for everybody for valentines, but the Galleries were giving me trouble right before I was going to post it. It looks now they are fine, so Ill try and see If I can upload it soon

My Rules
Spoiler: show
So, I'm rewriting my rules for the new year. This year I want to try something special, A full year in chastity. There will of course be rules here to to dictate what I can and cannot do. There will be two conditions in which allow me to be unlocked. First is for a weekly thorough cleaning of the cage and the area. The other is to ballbusted teased by the lovely ladies that help tease us in this forum. Lock up will begin January 1, 2022 and last until January 1, 2023

Orgasms
Spoiler: show
I'm not to have a full orgasm outside of the cage for the duration of the lockup. I have had my first orgasm through anal stimulation in wonderful set by Erik17. Since this was achieved so early no other orgasm is planned yet. Need to think of another unusual wat to cum without normal stimulation
Rules
Spoiler: show
Only one mode now, I want to return to my Ballbusting roots

There are Four intensities in which I bust my balls
Normal: These are hits that hurt but I can take quite a number of these before needing a break
Hard: These hits hurt considerably more than normal, I can take a decent amount of these before needing a break
Brutal: These hurt a lot, a hit designed to make me think twice before hitting again. I can take two or three of these in a row before needing a couple seconds break
Flooring: The hardest hit I can muster, these will put me on the floor cradling my busted balls. Don't expect me to take multiple of these without a 20-30 second break in-between. Also don't expect me to be able to hit this hard in the beginning of a set, I need time and a bit of sore balls before being able to hit myself to the floor

Now for the number of hits, these are per model and can stack:

Clothed:
Public attire: 10 seconds of squeezing at normal
Swimsuit: 10 seconds of squeezing at normal with 5 normal hits afterwards
Sexy Lingerie: 10 normal hits
Cosplay: 15 normal hits
Femdom attire: 10 normal hits and 5 hard hits
Heels: 5 normal hits

Partially Clothed can stack with clothed if applicable
Breasts exposed: 10 hits at normal
Pussy exposed: 5 hits at normal
Trans cock Exposed: 10 hits at normal
Ass: 5 hits at normal

Full Nudity
Rear view(Only Ass and/or pussy/Trans cock visible): 10 Hard hits
Full Frontal(Only Breasts and Pussy/Trans Cock visible): 15 Hard hits
Everything(Breasts, Ass, and Pussy/Trans Cock): 20 hard hits
Heels: Adds 5 hard hits to the above
Spread Legs: Adds 1 Brutal it to the above
Dynamic Modifiers
Spoiler: show
Now While I did love the different color heels I want these to change based on the mood of the model. So by default the mood will be determined by the facial expression of the model. However, if you are going for a particular mood or theme to a set you can set your own modifier at anytime, add one if you need too. I know it can be hard finding that gallery that fits everything your going for, so hopefully this helps.

Happy/Smiling: She is enjoying herself and is getting into the busting who am I to stop her: no breaks until all hits for the image are done.
Angry/Mean look: She wants me to suffer: Normal hits become hard hits. Hard hits convert to Brutal hits with: Hits/5 rounded up
Seductive/Lip bite:She wants to take her time: Hits are slow and slightly harder than before
Favorites
Spoiler: show
Can't forget all the lovely ladies that really love to show my balls a painful time, Each one will have a personality in the spoiler followed by her rule.

Mila Azul:
Spoiler: show
My Ballbusting Goddess, she loves ballbusting and loves boys who love getting their balls busted. She loves to bust me in particular because I always give my balls to her for whatever she wants to do with them. She makes a perfect Duo with the lovely Kyla Cole and often likes to share in the ballbusting with her.
Mila doubles everything she does to me. If she is nude and in heels she sends one powerful Flooring kick into my balls with glee.

Kyla Cole:
Spoiler: show
A Goddess in her own right, she loves to be worshipped. She loves to make all the boys tease themselves senseless. And while Ballbusting is not something she gets off to by itself, she does love the way I worship her by slowly and painfully busting my balls to her content. She is the other side of the coin to Mila Azul, she often likes to watch me try to worship my two Goddesses in the best way I know how, Through Ball pain.
Kyla loves to squeeze my balls, so before and after all my hits for the image Kyla squeezes my balls hard for 10 seconds. If she is completely nude on her last squeeze she uses her vice grip to squeeze my balls with a flooring intensity.

Mila and Kyla in the same Set:
Spoiler: show
They love to tag team my balls. Mila gets off to all the busting that is going on and Kyla is turned on by all the Worship that she is being given. Often they will egg each other on to be more and more brutal with my balls.
When Mila is nude then the next image of Kyla is to be considered Nude. If Kyla is Nude in heels then Mila's next image is to be considered Nude in Heels. These do not stack, meaning multiple Mila Nudes in a row wont make multiple Kyla Nudes. However alternating patterns will allow for a pretty brutal session :lol:

Adriana Chechik:
Spoiler: show
Finds it hilarious that I bought her Fleshlite and loves to tease me about it. Often telling me that I only deserve to have my balls busted and a fake pussy would be the best thing I could get. She proudly takes a femdom attitude with me and my balls.
She makes me worship her Fleshlite by making me lick it like a real pussy. She of course continues to bust my balls while I do this.

Kayden Kross:
Spoiler: show
She doesn't care for the well being of my balls. She wants to play with them her way for however long as she wants. She has me just stand with my legs spread wide and lets her imagination run wild, no matter how painful. When I am unable to take what she want she often punishes me for my incompetence
I must spread my legs wide and whatever I imagine her doing to my balls I will imitate as best as I can. She loves to enrichen my imagination by sharing her brutal thoughts with me

Emily Addison:
Spoiler: show
Mistress Emily Addison showed me I am her slut and bitch. Every part of me is hers to use and abuse at will. I love being her slut and cannot wait for her to harshly use, abuse and destroy me in front of this entire forum.
She ties my balls up tightly and for every outfit change( removing clothes, adding clothing, or entire outfit change) She punches my balls brutally. In addition to any other way she want to play with me.

Whitney Westgate(The Destroyer):
Spoiler: show
She wants to absolutely obliterate my balls. A session with her usually leaves me begging to be locked back up again. If it weren't for Mila's claim over me as her painslut, Whitney likely would castrate me if she could. That being said, she respects Mila and holds back just enough so my balls are still functional, but tries to make me regret being born with them in the first place.
She ties my balls tightly with enough rope wrapped around my balls for me to grab them. She then lets loose a flurry of punches, all hits are done by punching. When she is nude and spreading her legs however the brutal hit is done by a sock weapon as she lets loose a brutal kick. Finally, The Destroyer is the only one to have access to Ball Destruction mode. This mode can be activated at any time but can only be used in one spoiler per set. In this mode all normal hits become hard hits, Nude give me one brutal hit on top of the other hits, and her legs being spread puts me to the floor. Her kicks are so hard she is to be considered wearing heels even when she is not

Sybil A Kailena:
Spoiler: show
A beauty who recently has become fascinated in fucking my cock. Although she is not interested in sex, so instead of fucking me with her pussy, she rather fucks with a urethral sound. She loves the way the sound just sinks into my cock as well as all my facial expressions as I watch her fuck my manhood.
Instead of busting She fucks my urethra with my beaded sound. The amount of time she spends fucking depends on the amount of hits that image would have gotten. Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. The Intensity and speed is up to her

Michaela Isizzu:
Spoiler: show
A domme with a heart. She loves to prey on my shyness and make sure I keep eye contact with her. While she does love to Domme me, she tends to act more sweet and kind as she busts my balls
Eye contact only applies if she is looking directly at the camera. In Ballbusting Mode fail to maintain contact results in 1 Brutal Hit.

Chanel Santini:
Spoiler: show
I'm a slut whore bitch for Chanel's Sexy cock, I need to worship it, feel it abuse and use any of my holes. I eagerly await for her to show just how much of a whore I am. Chanel is the one who convinced me that my first orgasm should be from anal stimulation alone. She would love to be the one who gives me my first anal orgasm of the year. She loves having her cock worshipped whether that means sucking it or being fucked by it. However, she also finds the prospect of ballbusting interesting, she can't figure out why I loved to be busted so much and loves to bust me herself to find the answer
While she does like busting me she see's it as a favor to me and so I must suck her cock whilst she brutalizes my balls. She may be as gentle or aggressive as she wants. If she wants her cock all the way down my throat then I get a throat full of cock(dildo). In addition at anytime she may stop busting me and take my ass and try to fuck me to an orgasm. Intensity and speed is up to you and can change throughout the fucking. The time spent fucking will be determined by the number of hits I would have gotten: Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. When sucking I will be using my large dildo, and when being fucked my smaller curved on. No ass to mouth
Toys and additional ideas you may use to spice a set up
Spoiler: show
Chastity Cages: I have two metal cages. A normal one that I will primarily be locked in for the long term. And a Hybrid spike one that can be used in the short term for punishments or homework .

Ball Crusher: thick acrylic sheets with holes for my cock and balls. Can be screwed down to crush my balls. You may put me into this contraption in a set. I will replace any busting with: Normal hits give one second, Hard hits give two seconds, and brutal gives 10 seconds. Just be aware it takes time to put on and take off, so don't make me constantly take it on and off in short periods of time.

Bonger: A dense ball on a spring handle, Ideal for individual balls hits. Can deal a decent intensity to one ball with little effort

VR Headset: Oculus Quest great for viewing some VR porn videos

Adriana Chechik Fleshlight

Two Realistic Dildos, one smaller and curved and another one larger and girthier.

Urethral Sounds: I got a two sound, a small thin silicone one that vibrates and a longer beaded metal sound.

Metal Butt-Plugs: I got a set of three metal butt plugs, one small, medium and large one.

A vibrator: I have a magic wand vibrator, I can only use this for 20 continuous minutes as the motor tends to get quite hot after that.
Limits and Safety Concerns
Spoiler: show
For those who don't know me, I've been busting myself for years. I am well aware of my limits and when it is time to stop busting. For my safety I reserve the right to not do certain actions If iI deem them to be unsafe or I am in an unsafe state. I usually stop If I see severe discoloring of my testicles, deep purple to black is a bad color to be, or if I begin to bleed in anyway. That being said, don't worry about going over my limits as I will stop if needed and tell you in a feedback if and when this occurs.

I don't bust in chastity, its dangerous, especially at the intensities at which I bust at. Its a hard limit. I do like to fantasize being able to, but will not perform it in any fashion

Absolutely no ass to Mouth if anal is involved, its just gross.

Nothing public, I like to keep my private affairs private.
BBBeanie Orgasm Games
Spoiler: show
Tori Black has invited me to a new challenge in which I Give my first full orgasm after my year of lock up to a special lady. This lady will be determined by a contest.

The contest will take place over this year and is simple. Each month there will be a condition to meet, every time a model meets this condition gives them a point. At the end of the month, Coins will be handed out to the top three models, 3 coins for first, two coins for second and one coin for third. The Model with the most coins at the end of the year will be given my orgasm. No in order for a model to enter this contest she must appear in a set and state that she wants to compete, any model can join at anytime. Ill keep track of points and update them at every set.

Participating Model and points
Spoiler: show
Model: Monthly points - Coins

Mila Azul: 2 - 0
Kyla Cole: 0 - 0
Tori Black: 0 - 0
Adriana Chechik: 1 - 0
Kayden Kross: 1 - 0
Emily Addison: 0 - 0
Whitney Westgate: 0 - 0
Sybil A Kailena: 0 - 0
Michaela Isizzu: 0 - 0
Chanel Santini: 0 - 0
Charity Crawford: 0 - 0
Current Monthly condition
Spoiler: show
Any image that make me go "Wow, she's a Goddess".
Playing Please Help Me Cum
Have Fun Pleasing Kyla and Her Guests at Kyla's Party
Enjoy an Erotic Adventure at the LustB&B
Post Reply