Investigation in Lust City (v0.2)

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Investigation in Lust City (v0.2)

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v0.2 has just been released (v0.1 will likely be removed later)

It is in the continuation of Investigation at Lust House with some recurring girls and the same type of tease: a story-based tease where you have to find your way through the different locations.

It is incomplete so don't play it if you dislike being frustrated :lol:

Differences with v0.1:
- Library and Park have been implemented
- Added alternate girls for a couple of pages

Link to the tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=53593

I would like to get your opinion on the next place: the Hotel. I made a poll on my Patreon. It is currently public so no need to support my Patreon to vote for your favorite girls. So don't hesitate: https://www.patreon.com/posts/61889304
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Re: Investigation in Lust City (v0.2)

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I think there might be an issue with the woman in the pool hall next to the library.
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If I make it to the part where she tells me to "kiss her ass" (in the library), the game freezes. Is that supposed to happen?
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Super great tease!!! Of course it’s unfinished but these things take time. I just wanted to say thank you for making this. I think alot of it is humorous like the girl losing her beloved katana. Was it meant to be funny?

A couple spelling errors I can’t remember when I think with the katana girl. It freezes for one girl in the library for me too.

Thank you!!!
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Sorry for the freeze with Suzanna, it is now fixed
Bee4 wrote: Wed Feb 09, 2022 6:09 amI just wanted to say thank you for making this. I think alot of it is humorous like the girl losing her beloved katana. Was it meant to be funny?
Yes, I try to add a touch of humour from time to time, to make the tease less 'boring'. I hope people like this :-)
Bee4 wrote: Wed Feb 09, 2022 6:09 amA couple spelling errors I can’t remember when I think with the katana girl.
I double-checked very quickly but I did not spot anything obvious for me non-native speaker. If you gonna play it once more and have the patience to note them, I would really appreciate :-)
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It's a fun tease with a great use of the audio feature, great work !
Darigaaz wrote: Wed Feb 09, 2022 8:03 am Sorry for the freeze with Suzanna, it is now fixed
Unfortunately it isn't, I still get stuck on that page
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The library freeze is right after "kiss my ass" in the library looking room in billiards room and going to abandoned facility.
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Okay, I did not know the tease had to be re-published to be updated. It should be okay now.
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Great continuation of the series. I'm looking forward to completion of this episode. Still, it's fun as is.

I hadn't even noticed the typos/misspellings referred by Bee4 but went back out of curiosity. (By the way, if you hadn't mentioned it, nothing you've posted would make anyone think English is not your native language. My hat is off to you and all the others that write teases in English as a second language.)

I really only re-looked at the Katana Girl section and found these pretty minor typos:
"As you approach this georgeous ginger beauty..." - gorgeous
“Each time I hit you with my katana, you ned to edge quickly enough to parry my attack “ - need
“Let's get more confortable “ - comfortable
“I gonna reward you with my katana “ Awkward English, should be “I’m going to…” or more slangy vernacular: “I’m gonna…”, though certainly some people speak the original way.
Looser! I gonna keep practicing without you. “ - “looser” means less tight, you mean “loser”. This misspelling shows a few other places in the tease too.
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Thanks for your hat off :blush:

And bigger thanks for proof-reading this part. I took note of all typos and am going to fix them in next update or version.
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Re: Investigation in Lust City (v0.2)

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Hi,

v0.3 is progressing, not as fast as I'd like to but it progresses
I just finished the Hotel (7 different scenes) and I am starting one of the two "secret" locations.
I am waiting to complete this location to release a v0.3 (unless you all scream to get it right now=

I opened a new poll opened for a couple of days to choose which girl(s) you want to meet:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/65499930
The poll is open to everyone but you may want to become a patron to get access to more insights on the tease. Also I offer to the first patrons the possibility to co-create with me one of the final scenes of "Investigation at Lust City". Choice of photos among my proposals, writing of the scene, and audio; you will be part of the creation!
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Re: Investigation in Lust City (v0.2)

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any update on the state of the tease?
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