[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Your Girlfriend's Away

[fenway]

Oh, hello there. I didn't see you. Were you looking for the next tease in the Girlfriends' Friend series?

Well, well, well. Look no further! It has just been released!

And, wow! It's basically two teases in one! That's what I call value!

...Sorry, just trying to cheer myself up as I just finished play testing this one and... well... good luck everyone.

For real, though, I hope you all enjoy!

If you stumble upon something that isn't working properly, please let me know!

Thanks y'all!

[Jallevaro2]

add an element of chastity into the tease and spread out the updates otherwise these are gonna be over very quick and that would be a shame

[Princess_HKitty]

add an element of chastity into the tease and spread out the updates otherwise these are gonna be over very quick and that would be a shame

hard disagree.

the current pace and quality is great, and it's nice to see something that isn't just about not feeling pleasure.
i would be very disappointed if this got turned into a chastity thing

[EmmalineSweet]

They seem nice, but I do read a lot faster than the text scrolls and can't seem to advance it any faster, so I end up quitting before they start typically.

[fenway]

add an element of chastity into the tease and spread out the updates otherwise these are gonna be over very quick and that would be a shame

A good suggestion. I'm not sure if I'll incorporate chastity into this series. If that's what you're interested in, check out my "House Calls" tease.

As far as the releases go, I'm doing them as one per day to challenge myself into producing while trying to maintain a consistent level of quality. If I don't make one per day, I might lose steam to work on it.

There are ten more installments coming. That means there will be a new one every day still until Sunday, January 23rd. And that's if I don't think of anything else to add. Hopefully that's long enough for you to enjoy the series.

[fenway]

They seem nice, but I do read a lot faster than the text scrolls and can't seem to advance it any faster, so I end up quitting before they start typically.

I'm in the same boat, and I wrote the dang things.

I read a lot faster than the text scroll. But I found that when I speed it to match my reading ability, I never look at any of the pictures at all. Sorry this isn't appealing for you. I made a stylistic choice to pace it this way. I hope you'll understand.

[indyc]

They seem nice, but I do read a lot faster than the text scrolls and can't seem to advance it any faster, so I end up quitting before they start typically.

I'm in the same boat, and I wrote the dang things.

I read a lot faster than the text scroll. But I found that when I speed it to match my reading ability, I never look at any of the pictures at all. Sorry this isn't appealing for you. I made a stylistic choice to pace it this way. I hope you'll understand.

Remember that you have the option for skippable text timers. (It's easy but let me know if you want another step by step) This is the main thing keeping me from completing most of them. Part of what makes a player not pay attention to pictures on a faster scroll is because they don't know when the scroll will happen so you look more at the text. If they are player skippable the concern goes away in my opinion and I would actually pay MORE attention to the pictures because I am in control.

If you are able to implement timers like that I am super eager to attempt to "wob the kob".

[fenway]

Remember that you have the option for skippable text timers. (It's easy but let me know if you want another step by step) This is the main thing keeping me from completing most of them. Part of what makes a player not pay attention to pictures on a faster scroll is because they don't know when the scroll will happen so you look more at the text. If they are player skippable the concern goes away in my opinion and I would actually pay MORE attention to the pictures because I am in control.

If you are able to implement timers like that I am super eager to attempt to "wob the kob".

Practicing this is still on the docket. However, for now it's not really viable. One thing I'm learning is... y'all are super impatient about your texts! Guess that makes these the perfect teases.

Like I said though, the pacing is a stylistic and artistic choice from me and I'd like to keep these teases as cohesive as possible.

Might have to try wobbing later down the road... :(

[kerkersklave]

One thing I'm learning is... y'all are super impatient about your texts! Guess that makes these the perfect teases.

I have just finished your latest tease, and for me, the pacing during the teasing sequences works very well and it makes sense, that the dialog timers cannot be skipped. I would have liked it during some of the introductory dialog where multiple paragraphs are dumped line by line. There, it was slower than my reading speed and I had nothing to do except just wait for the next line and there was no reason for it (the domme did not _want_ to make me wait).
I don't have too much of an issued if I have to go through a few minutes of something like that in the beginning of a tease, if the tease is worth it in the end. But it would if these monologue parts would just be larger paragraphs of text to step through, it just feels more natural to read these parts like I would read a story, and use enforced timers only, when I'm starting to become part of the action and waiting actually is part of the story and not some artifact of the presentation.

[fenway]

I can't express my gratitude enough for everyone's commentary and suggestions! Though I may not incorporate them in all of my teases, I do consider everything everyone says as well as look into every technical suggestion I receive to practice coding it for future teases. Thanks so much for all your support, it makes me love what I'm doing!

[Bee4]

Great teases! Keep it up, you’re awesome!

Can there be a blonde character somehow?

I like fast paced and vanilla teases. Too often Milovana stacks fetish’s until it is just too weird. I joined Milovana for a level up game.

Can the future teases have multiple text choices? Super ok if not.

[fenway]

Great teases! Keep it up, you’re awesome!

Can there be a blonde character somehow?

I like fast paced and vanilla teases. Too often Milovana stacks fetish’s until it is just too weird. I joined Milovana for a level up game.

Can the future teases have multiple text choices? Super ok if not.

There will be blonde characters in the future, but it will be only for one of the upcoming teases.

And yes, I know what you mean. I'm trying to make these as broadly appealing as possible.

[fenway]

Can there be a blonde character somehow?

Hey, how would you like Lauren to be blonde? Here's a quick photoshop. What do you think?

Spoiler: show

#HESTHEGREATESTMEMER

[Bee4]

Can there be a blonde character somehow?

Hey, how would you like Lauren to be blonde? Here's a quick photoshop. What do you think?

Spoiler: show

#HESTHEGREATESTMEMER

Great photo! Sure Lauren could be blonde.

[fenway]

You're a good sport. Like I said, there will be blonde characters in one of the upcoming teases.