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Hey all,

I finally had free time again and whipped up this quick little diddly. Hope you all like it! Let me know if there are any bugs.

Also, always happy to read comments, questions, and/or concerns!

Enjoy!

Thanks y'all! :-D
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make sure you continue this please
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Ah! A fan! :O
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Great tease!
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I haven't done the tease yet. But a new tease coming from you is a reason to be cheerful. Thank you for your effort :)
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Love the story concept and where this could lead. Really hope there will be a follow on with more friends and harder challenges. Having the girlfriend there watching as her friends torment her boyfriend (girfriend in my case)

PS: the friend model you picked is stunning and her personallity is perfect for a tease. I love her breasts. So firm and perky :love:
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Excellent work once again. Hope tomorrow comes around soon!
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Jallevaro2 wrote: Sat Jan 08, 2022 1:57 pm make sure you continue this please
I did. Just for you. :-D
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Zofia Little Flame wrote: Sat Jan 08, 2022 10:35 pm Love the story concept and where this could lead. Really hope there will be a follow on with more friends and harder challenges. Having the girlfriend there watching as her friends torment her boyfriend (girfriend in my case)

PS: the friend model you picked is stunning and her personallity is perfect for a tease. I love her breasts. So firm and perky :love:
Gyah! I'm making follow ups, but I feel bad. I don't know how to write a female oriented tease as I'm not a female... :'(
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Do not worry about this. We adapt it as we see it. Just focus on what you know. Keep up the good work.
PS: maybe for future when the friend is teasing us, the girlfriend could be watching and we could hear her moaning.
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Incredible tease! Just finished it and I feel thoroughly tortured. Love the fact that we didn't get to cum at the end. Looking forward to playing the next one. Thanks very much for this!

As Zofia mentioned, you could definitely have a bit of moaning/audio to go along with the tease. Maybe some low audio just "in the background" where you hear your gf getting off, at some points getting higher as she reaches climax. But really I have nothing to complain about. I couldn't use a fleshlight because I was too close to cumming but just stroking was more than enough teasing for me.
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forbiddendesire wrote: Tue Jan 11, 2022 3:34 am Maybe some low audio just "in the background" where you hear your gf getting off, at some points getting higher as she reaches climax.
I've been looking into this but can't find anything from brief searches anywhere online for such audio clips to use. Does anyone have any resources they wouldn't mind sharing?
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fenway wrote: Tue Jan 11, 2022 5:19 am
forbiddendesire wrote: Tue Jan 11, 2022 3:34 am Maybe some low audio just "in the background" where you hear your gf getting off, at some points getting higher as she reaches climax.
I've been looking into this but can't find anything from brief searches anywhere online for such audio clips to use. Does anyone have any resources they wouldn't mind sharing?
There are a few sounds available, for example here: https://freesound.org/people/hakera99/sounds/376194/

And here: https://thehighestproducers.com/acapell ... p-samples/

You can also find a few ASMR videos on pornhub for example, and just convert the videos to mp3 to get the audio: https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php? ... 53412e5a0c

I realise this will probably be a lot of work though, so it's definitely not something I'd demand, more like a suggestion, only because it's a feedback thread so I thought I should give some actual feedback besides "that was awesome". Because this is the only thing I could think of, the tease was awesome! :-D
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So, small tidbit. I got the ruin ending, no issue there, however I messed up and I don't know if I'm the only one so I'm gonna suggest a fix, but it's only that. You CLEARLY know what you are doing. AWESOME tease.
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where is this tease? i can't find it. Did you take it private?
Could someone share a link?
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