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Horny_CHabo wrote: Tue Nov 30, 2021 9:49 pm Set for FattsDynamo
@Horny_CHabo: feedback

Well done, Chabo! Very good, very fun set!
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1 hr 7 min, 23 edges, +3 demerits
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First of all, I *do* like tits and pussies, lol. I just like asses a LOT more. :wink:

I don’t know. I like petite, skinny girls. They usually don’t have amazing racks … and I’m good with that. Big boobs don’t do much for me. Sure, I like looking at boobies and am happy to stroke for them … but … eh. I’d take one nice ass over three pairs of nice tits. Maybe once you get up to 5 PERFECT pairs of tits … then I might go for the titties … :innocent:

For pussies … I probably like them a little less than tits. There’s a South Park quote where Butters says that vaginas just look like an “old pair of sideways lips.” I kind of get that. I don’ t like bush. Pussy and tits just don’t excite me as much as asses. Asses are just at another tier of excitement for me.

The practical bit is that I don’t have crazy edging stamina. So, if I edged for every pussy and set of tits … my sets would need to be a LOT shorter! :lol: Also, I can play a lot of other people’s sets with my rules as they are because I only edge for naked asses (and again for naked ass plus eye contact!).

Now, every slide gets a base 25 strokes. I’ll typically “spend” these on boobies and then pussy. It depends on the shot. Most of those 25 strokes go to naked boobies. I stroke to titties more often than I double strokes for ass actually … So, to prevent myself from tiring out, I “save” my edges for asses, which to me is the sexiest part of a woman’s body. (The face is the “most beautiful.”)

So, enough general commentary, on to the set!

GREAT pick for the starting girl Alisa Amore is SO sexy!

She said: *Add 5 Strokes for each Tit you see, for all of the Set*
“You like how I dont care about your Rules... eventhough you used so much time on it. poor boy.”
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I told her: “I love it Alisa. I want you to dominate me!”

So, in general, we spend all this time crafting rules, but … truth be told, MOST people on this thread like it when their rules are bent and broken. It adds a level of unexpectedness to sets that increases excitement. (Leave me full O at the end rule in place, please and thank you. There is a link to a long discussion I had with Helequin in my rules about why I prefer that … anyway …) After my 2nd edge, I decided 5 extra strokes was too few. So, I increased it to +25 strokes per nipple to make it more impactful. (My stroke endurance is excellent compared to my edge endurance.) I thought there might be a thousand titty pic in there somewhere. But, I decided not to pussy out and do +25 and not +5, and I would just have to deal with that if it came … which it didn’t.

“Is this enough for you to Edge already? Well it isnt a naked ass.”
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That was my first “demerit” edge. I can edge when I want for a demerit (which the girls can spend to “punish” me via the rules in my “punishment” section). I thought she was REALLY asking me to edge, so I had to give it to her …

My other two demerit edges:
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That pic was just SO hot … and, I wanted to show the girls that I could edge for things OTHER than asses, lol …
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That pussy peaking out between her thighs … SO cute and SO hot …

“We asked ourselfs what would happen if there are multiple asses in one picture? lets find out”
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SUCH good writing … that pic killed me … BEST ONE in the set …

“Most of them would Edge to this one. but not because of the ass, like you do”
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Again, SUCH great writing …

That ass edge ladder! :w00t: I’ve done edge ladders before, but never to asses like that! SO good! SO well done! As soon as I hit two I knew what it was … I was secretly hoping it would go up to 10 … but THAT would have destroyed me! :lol: Four was good, but … I could have done 5 … probably even 6 … :whistle: Helequin’s last set for me had about 60 edges (not including the final scene which I did NOT really have the stamina to do) but, that made the set length go over 3.5 hours … which is long. I’ve been liking these shorter sets more recently. I enjoy the long sets too, but … probably best to make those less frequent. After I edge about 15 or so times in quick succession … I REALLY need like a stroking scene after for a break … but, that ass edge ladder got me SO excited … I don’t know how it would have ended up had it gone longer … I get SO worked up and want to cum SO bad … I could have gone more, but … if it went too much longer, I might have needed to stop just to cool down, and then my cock probably would have been tired and I would have needed to take a break in the middle (if it went to like 8 or something, lol). So, yeah … erring on the side of going too soft is usually the right call, so, well done on that …

The ending was great ... the zoom in to the zoom out …
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LOVED that … getting to see her sexy legs and the facial expression … it was a nice touch to end on!

I REALLY liked Alisa bending my rules and making me stroke for tits. I did a similar thing to BBBeanie in my first set for him, making him edge for eye contact. (I need to go back and fix some of the broken links in that scene, though. TheChive doesn’t allow hotlinking.)

Oh! And good job with the post cum pic! You ALWAYS gotta have at LEAST one slide AFTER the cum slide … it’s one of those little things that separate “good” from “great” sets, IMO. No set can be “truly great” if there is not at LEAST one pic after the cum pic to read while you are coming down from the orgasm high …
I'm pretty close to finishing my return set for you ... should be within the next 24 hours ...
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Ecik17 wrote: Mon Dec 06, 2021 4:43 pm For fatts
@Ecik: feedback on your last set

:thumbsup: AMAZING set! 10/10

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1 hr 21 min, 53 edges, +3 demerits, new record: 0.65 edges/minute (I'm not 100%, but ... I'm pretty sure that is a new all time record for me. :w00t:)
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Okay, so, first of all, I LOVE the way you write Guerlain! :-D I write her very innocent and naive and shy ...Your version of Guerlain is a LOT more ... "naughty." SHE was the one who came up with slut week! :w00t: Lying on the floor, jilling off with her roommates ... swimming naked in the pool! :wub: Yeah ... SO hot ... but, that's not surprising that your version of "Guerlain" is more slutty ... she IS your brain child! :lol: I would expect nothing less!

So, I started off by reading the previous set, just to refresh my memory ... only light touching while I did that, basically ...

THANK YOU for starting me off with 6 edges with Guerlain BEFORE the timer started! :lol: (Eyes@ass+Guerlain's eyes@ass rule) That got me REALLY warmed ... I was afraid I would be warming up during the hour when I was on the clock and needed to go fast ...

I LOVED the timer mechanic, by the way! :w00t: Timers get me REALLY going and pushing myself ... It added a game-like quality to the tease and ALSO made it more immersive, because I wanted to at least be able to meet with everybody ... Some teases, I get a little bored at times and my mind wanders ... NOT THIS ONE! :w00t: SO good ... I have edged like ~20 times in 20 minutes before or pretty close. (I think the Caprice scene Helequin did for me was close to that, and I've done it for others as well.) However, for a time scale of around an hour, I don't think I have EVER edged that much, so ... I decided it was a "new record." :blush:

Damn ... I'm SO WEAK for Guerlain's ass ... seeing those last two pics of hers from the first scene again as I write this ... :blush:

So, I saw that Vanessa was WAY down at the bottom. I thought that the formatting for that was intentional, so, I thought maybe that might indicate that she was shy ... and, I decided that Vanessa was the one that I REALLY wanted. Rereading her description from the previous set made me want her again, so ... I wanted to do everything I could to improve my chances with her, so ... if she was shy, I didn't want to come up to her first and make a big scene ... I assumed the scenes were all somewhat short. My original plan was to hold off and do Vanessa like third or fourth, but ... that changed.

I decided to start with Karlee. I REALLY wanted to hear more about what Guerlain was like in college! :w00t: Guerlain's one of my favorites but ... I've decided she's one of my "goddesses." No special rules for that, but ... I LUST HER SO MUCH! :innocent: Anyway, the Karlee scene was MUCH more than I thought it would be! :-O I thought I'd get through it in maybe 10 minutes ... NOPE! I was going fast ... I LOVED having to stroke fast and edge fast ... and I LOVED how you did it, that it was the days of the week and themed with all of Guerlain's college friends ... LOVED that ... each pic, I was dreading (and hoping) whether or not it would be a naked ass pic with eye contact to slow me down and make me edge twice. I thought I was good ... THEN there was the video.

I had NEVER seen that Guerlain dancing video before. :w00t: She is SO damn sexy ... she is SO fucking hot to me, and the way she moves her body ... DEAD SEXY! :love: I don't know if you've looked over my video rules, but, I have to stroke continuously (except for breaks after edging). At first I was happy for a break, but ... THEN I saw it was twelve minutes. :-/ At first I was concerned it would force me to edge, but ... fortunately that ended up NOT being the case but ... After 4 minutes I was like, "Okay ... I'm doing okay. Pacing myself ... how much time is left? 8 MINUTES!!" I *did* use it as a break, but she was JUST too damn sexy (girl moves her body SO well ...) so, I ended up edging 3 times. That moment where she grabbed her heels and thrusted her crotch up into the air ... :wub: She's a WOW girl for sure!

THEN there was the "oh, crap ... he's doing WEEKEND DAYS, TOO! ARE THEY ALL THIS LONG!? HOW AM I GOING TO MAKE IT!!" I had a little less than half an hour left when I finished with Karlee.

As for Karlee ... she's kind of cute. I guess Karlee is to me what Ashley is to you. :lol: Mostly, I want to hear about ANY details about Guerlain ... so ... mostly I want Karlee to come around for that! :lol: BUT, she seems really nice and upbeat, so ... especially if you like her as a model (and finding pics and sets for her) go ahead and keep including her in scenes where she reveals more Guerlain backstory! :innocent:

So, idk ... for some reason, I REALLY liked that Vanessa was "shy." It just made me want her more! I decided that I HAD to do her scene next. I set my heart on trying to "win" her ... I will do ANYTHING ... I've never wanted to add another girl to my "harem" as I have Vanessa Angel. :blush: (Specifically *your* version of her.) Turns out she WASN'T so shy! :lol: Don't know if that was a phase she grew out of, but ... I didn't mind! The 5 edges caught me off guard a little ...

So, I recognized that I edged twice for her during Karlee's set. So, my special rule is hold every 5th edge for her for 50 seconds. I had the 50 second timer already set up and ready to go BEFORE cocktail hour. Well, I kind of lost count and track ... My fifth edge for her I forgot to hold ... so then I redid it, and held the 6th for 50 seconds ... but then after the long edge hold, I lost my place, lol ... I got so flustered and lost track! :blush: Anyway, LOVE Vanessa. I would say that I want to "make her my conquest" but ... I'm too much of a gentlemen and she's too shy, and ... I just want to win her over in the best way I can ... :blush: (Can you tell how much I'm getting into this roleplaying? :lol:)

So, I was afraid that the secret visitor would be Angela. Now that I know who and what Angela is (and FYI, when Angela is in the Village, she is FAR MORE POWERFUL than she is in other places ... I have hinted at this, but ... during the "Village Premier tease" [my next set for Helequin] I will explain exactly why this is the case ...), I was afraid that if it was her and I DIDN'T greet her, there would be consequences ... instead it was Nancy Ace.

So, Nancy Ace is THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARACTER IN THE VILLAGE (for reasons that will be revealed in the "Village Premier"). She lives at the Harem House with Guerlain (in the lore). She's SUPER smart. It made sense that she would show up to a party with a bunch of Guerlain's college friends, presently being her "brainiest" housemate ... and it was SO MEAN to make her eat up my time! (I LOVED it. :blush:) I WAS so happy it was Nancy, but ... at the SAME TIME ... I was really hoping to meet some more NEW people ... well played, sir!

Okay, so, idk ... there was something about Elsa that I was just not sure about ... I was afraid she might be "mean" and "intense" like one of the typical "Helequin" girls ... NOPE! She was SUPER nice, and I kind of really like her now, so ... thanks for that! :blush:

The lesbian references Karlee made were HILARIOUS. I REALLY loved those ... Yeah, idk ... I want most of "my girls" to be "nice" (except the ones that are supposed to be "mean":wink:), so ... I didn't really have an attachment to Elsa before, DESPITE her being like PERFECT proportions for me ... but, now, I'm in! :w00t: I LOVED all of the cross-over references you made! :love: Previously, I had skipped ALL of the Elsa teases for Chabo, but ... I think I will have to go through the backlog and slowly play them all ... :whistle: (Our rules are compatible, so ... I can play his sets pretty well. :innocent:)

So, on the second to last Elsa edge, I was getting REALLY short on time. I edged a *little* too close and had ONE accidental cum drop. :-/ Didn't cum. Didn't even ruin, really. I just misjudged and went a TINY bit over ... BUT I HAD TO RUSH TO MEET ASA SO I COULD GET THEM ALL IN!! So, I did my last edge for Elsa and moved on to Asa. And then the timer went off *just* as Asa was opening her laptop ...

I chose Asa last, by the way, partly because I was least interested but MOSTLY because I thought she might RUIN ME! :lol: HAD to do Karlee, because I wanted to know more about Guerlain ... How often do I get to hang out with one of my goddesses best friends!? I was SURE Guerlain would be happy that I was chatting with her good friend, so ... trying to win some points there, too! :wink: Yeah, Vanessa Angel ... I want her SO bad! I just want to do EVERYTHING I can to win her over/romance her/"win her heart". :wub: I was nervous Elsa might be mean, and I wanted to meet her for myself, so, she was third ... and then, yeah ... Asa was the "most scary" and also the one I was least interested in, so ... saved her for last ... BUT ... I WAS able to at least introduce myself, so ... I figured THAT would show how polite I was to everyone! :-D

By the way, that cum pic...
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DAMN you picked a good one! :clap2:

There are skinny, petite girls with slightly bigger booties, but ... (though not as skinny as Vanessa's) Guerlain's is average, but ... HOLY HELL DOES SHE KNOW HOW TO WORK IT! For NOT being an ass man, I'm pretty sure you picked the BEST ass pic of that photo set. :thankyou:

So, for the cum ... I saw there wasn't much build up just the one pic. Which was fine because it was AMAZING :w00t: *and* I was SUPER horny and ready to blow after all the fast edging! :lol: So, usually I just cum on the "cum pic", but, since there was no build up, I decided to "take my three edges" for that pic and THEN cum. For some reason, lol, I decided I should attempt to hold the third edge for 50 seconds (as I do for Vanessa's fifth edge). Well, that didn't work out so well. :lol: I started cumming about 17 seconds in. I was just SO horny, SO worked up from the 50 previous edges (done in around an hour), that pic was SO hot, and I just wanted to CUM SO BAD! :lol: So, I started like dribbling out during the initial spasms before I even really hit the big orgasm. Then, when I hit the big peak, I spurted so hard I ALMOST hit my nipple! :lol: I don't often do that, so ... You worked me up PRETTY GOOD with your set, man! :blush:

DAMN was that a MESSY orgasm! SO messy ... Not like explosive messy everywhere, but ... SO MUCH CUM dribbled out, and SO many spasms ... yeah, the cum mixed with the lube and yeah ... SO messy! :lol: But, only ONE drop (somehow) got on the floor and I wiped it up. There was a part of me that WANTED to make a mess on the floor, just to see how Guerlain would react, but ... I was happy I was a "good boy" and followed her request! :blush:

I liked Vanessa the best. I want her in my "harem" as one of my favorite girls SO bad ... Now, don't tell Guerlain I used the word "harem", because I feel that would be disrespectful, but ... PLEASE tell her I would do ANYTHING to make Vanessa one of my favorite girls! :wub: And I want her to relay my joke to Vanessa, too: I wish I was her derivative so I could lay tangent to her curves! :wub: It's the OLDEST mathematician's pick-up line, but ... I just hope she would appreciate it. :blush:

Oh, man ... it's so HARD to pick just one, though!

I LOVE solving problems, and I LOVE Elsa now, the problems she solves, and the way that she solves the problems! :blush: And now that I know she is "nice", I am MUCH more interested in her how! :innocent: I was wondering before, "Why does Chabo SO HAPPY to be Elsa's assistant?" OH BOY DO I GET IT NOW! :lol: I don't think that I would want to be her assistant per se, BUT ... I would LOVE to help Elsa start a branch of her consulting business in the Village. It would be her "Village Branch." When she said I could go out after dinner with her to solve problems, I was ALL ABOUT that ... but for wanting to win Vanessa over even more ... So, it was a pretty close call ...

Karlee, I'm not really into, but ... ANY TIME she wants to show up in a set to dish on Guerlain, I AM THERE FOR IT! :w00t:

As for Asa Akira ... first of all, I think she's pretty hot. I like Asian models. My biggest complaints, though, are I don't like big hairy bushes (which seem to be SUPER popular in Japan, lol), and I feel like 90% of Asian males are tit men, because there aren't many ass shots in Asian porn :lol: ... That being said, Asa has a NICE ass, and I LOVE science. I would submit myself to ANY AND ALL scientific testing she wants to do on me ... :blush:

So, I have yet to be drained dry in a set. I kind of felt a little bad for the Melena and Guerlain set that completely emptied your balls with five orgasms ... I have often wondered what that would be like ... I mean, I've done it before ... in a long marathon session at some point some where along the way, I must have cum 4 or 5 times and started having dry orgasms, I KNOW that's happened before, but ... I've never done it in a set ... and I kind of what to try and see what that is like. :whistle: :no: :blush: :innocent: :yes:

So, after dinner, 100%, I want to do EVERYTHING I can to try to win over Vanessa Angel and convince her she should become "one of my favorites" (move her up from "Girls with Rules" to the "Favorites" section). I mean I "could" just make her a "favorite" or just will it to happen, but ... I really want to try and "win her over" and "convince her to move to the Village" ... I haven't done that with any girls that I ALSO wanted to move onto my favorites list yet (I really wanted Tori to move to the Village and she did, but ... she wasn't a "favorite" ... that was more for plot reasons) ... and there hasn't been a girl I wanted to add as much as Vanessa in a while! (She was ALREADY super hot, but ... you chose a good personality and background that REALLY appealed to me, bud! :thumbsup:)

I don't know what your plans are, but ... I REALLY wouldn't mind an "Elsa opens a branch in the Village" and an "Asa Akira experiments on me (for science)" set ... but AFTER the dinner finishes ... Anyhow, IF you do an "Asa drains me" set (for revenge for the time that I drained you :-D :whistle:), let me know in the notes before it. I will "save up" for ~48 hours before the set. Really, since I basically cum every day, that's really only denying myself for 24 hours ... HOWEVER ... if she appears in the next set (like, Guerlain tells her I want to volunteer to be "one of her tests subjects") and consents to "experimenting on me", whenever you DO eventually drop the set, let me know it's coming, and I will save up for ~72 hours beforehand. (This is for science, right? I gotta do my part! :blush:)

Lastly, I did NOT finish the final scene with Asa. Only got to the laptop. I will NOT look at it. If you want to incorporate that into the "after dinner" set, since I will NOT look at it, it will NOT spoil any surprises. :yes:

Okay. This has been SUPER fun. I'm excited for the after dinner set. :w00t: I'm excited for potential crossovers with Elsa. :thumbsup: AND I'm excited for potentially giving myself over to the whims of a sexy, mad scientist! :w00t: Lots to look forward to! :yes:

I have two big everyone sets [written for other people] coming out relatively soon. One will be REALLY soon. The other probably a week away ... They are for Chabo and PoetBird respectively. The Chabo set features Emily Bloom, so, if you like her, give it a play. If you do, drop me a short PM and let me know how you liked it. The set for PoetBird features Guerlain but as a LOT of Melena in it. :-D
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Yep. So that’s typical. I sit down to write a set. I tell myself I’ll do it in two maybe three hours most ... Nope! Instead, I spend several days on it, and it took around 19 hours to complete
Horny_CHabo wrote: Tue Nov 30, 2021 9:49 pm
So, this is a return set for @Horny_CHabo. His rules are pretty basic. (Meaning “standard, not crazy” and there is a GOOD CHANCE that if your rules are similar to his this set will ALSO work for you …) Here they are:
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Horny_CHabos Rules

Basic Rules (everything accumulating!!!)
Girl 20 Strokes (per Girl)
Pussy +1 Edge (per Pussy)
Ass +20 Strokes (per Ass)
Tits +20 Strokes (10 per Tit)
Feet +20 Strokes (10 per Foot) (You can expand the Rules for Shoes or/and Socks)
You can influence these Rules in your Sets.
You can add: Strokes, Edges, Ballslaps, clothspins.

Special Rules
Elsa Jean: doubles for Feet. (40 Strokes (20 per Foot))

Turn ONs
Check out my List of favorite Girls.
See my Profile for Turn ONs/OFFs
Wishes / Ideas:
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Censored / Beta
Story
Story is necessary!!! short, simple Storys are enough.
Simple Neighbor, School Friend, Ex-Girlfriend Storys,...,... will be fine.
Create a single Story Set or start a Set series. I like both ways.

Edge
I have pretty bad Stamina. I need breaks after Edges. Try to stay under ~30 Edges.
Iam getting better at Edges :D

Cum
The Set needs to have an Full Orgasm or a ruined one.
Can be decided by Luck, Guessing, my behaviour through the Set, Cruel intention of the Girls, etc.
Since I think that many players could manage and would enjoy this set, I am marking it as a …

#EveryoneSet
#Horny_CHaboSet
#wbFattsDynamo

In particular, I think
lmind wrote: Fri Dec 10, 2021 12:53 am
Zerg wrote: Fri Dec 10, 2021 1:59 pm
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm
would enjoy this set. Obviously, this set was written for Horny_CHabo, uses his name, and references his rules and the things that he wrote for me in the set he initiated with (link above) … but, I think the overall themes would appeal to a wide range of players. If you want some more context/details and are willing to spoil the “surprise” a little bit, read the following spoiler: (Chabo, don’t you DARE open it! :lol)
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Should take about 2 hours. The set features and is hosted by Emily Bloom. In my mind, this is Emily’s true “debut to the Village” set. Nancy Ace, Melena Maria Rya, and Jenya D all make appearances. There is some rules manipulation and a challenge. Chance for ruined or full orgasm depending on choices. About 30 edges using Chabo’s rules. More if your rules are more demanding. I think the writing is very good. If I didn’t think it could work as an “#EveryoneSet” I wouldn’t be suggesting it! :lol:

Also, I looked it up, and apparently “chabo” is just German slang for “guy”, so … Whenever Emily calls you “chabo” … you could just pretend she is calling you “guy” … :whistle:

If you play this set ...
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... feel free to leave me feedback (PM or post), even if I didn’t write it for you. I’m curious to know if these “everyone sets” that are written “for somebody else” are actually effective … if not, I’ll stop suggesting tailored sets as “everyone sets” … Either way, I’m curious to know how you liked it and whether or not and in what ways the set did and did not work for you. I’m looking for some data.

I tend towards quality over quantity with my set making. So, if I spend a long time writing a set for somebody but know that someone ELSE might be interested … perhaps I won’t tailor the set to the original recipient as much as I MIGHT have if he was the ONLY person guaranteed to play it. Also, if this works out, in the future, I can tag you in a set for someone else that I think you might really enjoy. So, yeah. Trying to figure out the best way to approach these things. I just know personally, I’ve been playing a lot of sets recently written for Chabo and Bjorn and really been enjoying those. (Chabo’s “Horny Jail” premise has been really fun!) lmind just linked me some sets he wrote that included a model I really like. I know it is not always possible to crossplay sets because most of us have VERY different tastes and preferences, but I’m just looking for ways we can maximize the value we get out of the sets we make … Thanks in advance for any feedback, and I hope you enjoy the set! :-D If I get a good response and the set works for a lot of people, I mightjust publish it as a regular webtease ... we'll see!


A note to Horny_Chabo before starting:
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So, I would consider a typical “scene” to be about 10 to 20 pictures, so, about the size of a typical “photo set” on pornpics (that someone would include in a set and add some text to). Mostly I used one GIANT photo set for the “host” model, but … if you were to break that up and include all of the other scenes … I would say that this set has probably … about 12 scenes. If I were to play this set using MY rules, it would probably take me between 2-3 hours. If I were you, I would expect at least two hours of play time but budget for 3 hours and with breaks, it could go as long as four or five. This is probably the longest set you have received up until this point. So, be aware of that. I think you should be able to handle it alright though. I haven’t played Bjorn’s last set for you nor read the feedback. Bjorn said that one was REALLY long. This one may or may not be longer … I don’t know. I guess you’ll find out soon enough! :lol:

I’m going to start with a story (just text). Let me know how you like it. I enjoy writing, so … sometimes I like to include a story. It IS time intensive in terms of set writing. You are very honest in your feedback (which I appreciate VERY much). Let me know if you think it took away from the experience, was just okay, or really helped to get you immersed. Again, I like writing, so, sometimes I’ll just do it because I want to … but, if I KNOW it is not effective then … I’ll probably skip it more often than not. I’m not sure if it will be player specific or not. So, just let me know in the feedback what you thought about it … Thanks!

Also, only edge for NAKED pussy …

Part 1:
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It’s your day off. You’re sitting at home, alone and bored, when you get a call on your mobile phone. It says, “Unknown Caller.” You don’t recognize the area code. For some reason, the number looks like it might be international. It’s probably just a scammer. You decide to let it go to voicemail.

A few minutes later, your phone beeps. It looks like your mystery caller left you a voice mail. You decide to check it.

It’s a woman. She says you and her have a mutual friend that you both know through Milovana. She said that she knows that it’s your day off, and you’re bored. She said you should come over to her place so that the two of you can “have fun together.” She gives you an address. Then, she promises you that this is NOT some trick, and she really means to show you a good time. You will DEFINITELY not be kidnapped. She just wants to tease you ... sexually. Then, she makes a joke about how a kidnapper would DEFINITELY NOT mention the possibility that you might be kidnapped … that’s how you should know she’s not a kidnapper.

There is a certain logic to that.

Then she laughs and says she’ll see you soon. The message ends.

Intrigued, you immediately call her back. No response. You get a message saying that the number has been disconnected. Strange.

You decide to look up the address on the Internet. It’s not far. About 45 minutes away. It looks like it is in kind of a remote area. You start to wonder if her joke about being a kidnapper actually was just a cover … You quickly brush aside the thought. She sounded pretty hot, and 45 minutes isn’t THAT far away. You start to wonder how she even got your number, considering you use an alias on Milovana ...

Ah, it’s probably fine. You hop into your car and start to drive.
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You drive for about 40 minutes. You are DEFINITELY in a rural area. You pass through forests and go over hills. You see some farms. This is not what you expected. You figured somebody who wanted to tease you sexually would probably live in a city, but … you suppose country people can be kinky too. Of course, from the maps, this countryside IS *exactly* what you were expecting.

You hit a long, flat, stretch of road. Empty, grassy fields surround it on either side. It’s so strange. According to the GPS, your destination is 100 meters ahead … but there’s nothing.

All of a sudden, you start to feel a tingle go up your spine. Your hair starts to stand on end. You can feel the crackle of static electricity building up around you. Suddenly, there is a bright flash of green light. It’s blinding. You close your eyes and slam on the breaks, praying you don’t hit anything. The bright light continues for about a second. It’s so bright, you can see it through your eyelids.

You open your eyes. You don’t feel any pain. You have all of your fingers and toes. There was no crash or metal-on-metal sound. You are sitting in your car. You feel the seatbelt tight against your chest. You lean back and look around. You are on the edge of a town. To your right, you see a sidewalk and some houses spaced about 30 meters apart. On your left, there is a forest. Your car appears undamaged. You are in the proper lane on the roadway. You look in your rearview mirror. There are no skid marks. Your engine is idling quietly.

To your left, standing in the forest, you see a girl…
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She stares at you with hungry eyes.
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Not the reaction you would expect from someone who just witnessed what easily could have been an auto accident.

She looks down, striking a girlish pose. She pushes her breasts together while putting one leg slightly ahead of the other.

Is she flirting with you?
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She approaches the car.


Hey! My name is Michaela—Michaela Isizzu. You should really be more careful when you drive. You know those things can kill people, right?
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She smiles and shakes her head then walks up to the window.

So, you’re clearly not from around here … You must be a Visitor. Cool.

Are you lost? You look lost—I bet you’re lost. Here. Give me your phone.
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You hand Michaela your phone. She makes a few swipes while staring intently at it.

Oh, okay. Yeah. I know where you’re headed …

She pauses, looking confused for a moment.

Yeah, I know this address, but it’s not quite right … it’s off by a number … Oh! Right! Yeah. You must be going to see Emily. She’s next-door neighbors with Fatts. I visit Fatts all the time—that’s why the address looks familiar. Actually, yes. This all makes sense now. Emily said she was expecting a visitor when I bumped into her earlier today. You must be him.
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She leans in towards the window, looking you over, as if inspecting livestock. Her eyes linger on your crotch for several seconds. You feel yourself stiffen.

Yeah, you’ll do.

She looks back up into your eyes.

Yeah, you’ll like Emily. She’s a real nice girl. You two will have a good time.

I’d tell you to say “hi” to Fatts for me if you see him, but he’s actually at my house right now—the Harem House. As we speak, he’s probably tied up in the basement with Nancy Ace and Leona Mia teasing him silly. Say, you should come by the Harem House sometime. I’ve heard you’re into cute, petite girls. You and Fatts have a similar taste in women. I’m sure myself and the girls at the house could show you a good time.

Michaela flashes you an inviting smile.

Here, let me tell you how to get to Fatts’—I mean Emily’s house.

She gives you some instructions, then hands you back your phone.

I’m sure I’ll see you around soon. Have fun … and drive safe!

Michaela winks at you.
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As you drive away, you check her out through your rearview mirror again.

She’s back to doing that little girlish pose …
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Then she looks up at you, giving you the intense look again.
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You swerve slightly before regaining control.

Michaela laughs and waves goodbye.



You follow Michaela’s directions and arrive at Emily’s house …
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It’s a cute house. Well-manicured lawn. Bright, vibrant flowers. A few small, decorative trees and bushes. You park in the driveway. You get out of your car and walk up to the front door. You ring the doorbell.

A few seconds later, you hear a voice call out to you from inside.


“Come on in, Chabo! I’ve been expecting you. The door is unlocked.”

You open the door and walk into a modest yet classy foyer with a vaulted ceiling. There is a small chandelier overhead. To your right is a dining room. Straight ahead is a wooden staircase with a hallway to the right of it that leads further back into the house. To your left is a sitting room. You hear Emily call to you from the sitting room.

“I’m in here!”

You walk into the sitting room …
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… and see Emily lying on a couch reading.
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You know, this book is really good …
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It’s a murder-mystery novel—but there are a LOT of graphic sex scenes …
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Listen to this passage: “Detective Smith was hot on the trail of his prime suspect, Kitty LeCume. He tracked Kitty to an upscale apartment building downtown. He rapped authoritatively on the door three times. In response, he heard one word: ‘Enter.’ The woman’s voice was sultry with a quiet undertone of danger.”
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What do you think? Should I keep reading? I think I will. I bet things are about to get spicy.
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“Detective Smith paused. He knew he needed to keep his guard up. Kitty was a dangerous woman. There was no telling what he might find inside …”
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“… but Detective Smith was first and foremost a man, with all of the urges and desires of a man. He heard that Kitty was devastatingly attractive. His lust mixed with his sense of danger to form a potent cocktail of arousal that accosted his entire body.”
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I don’t know. I think it might be too much. Should I keep reading?
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You quietly nod your head.

Good boy. I can’t wait to read what happens next …
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“Detective Smith violently opened the door to see Kitty spread out on the couch before him, completely nude. ‘I’m so alone, detective. I’ve lost the fire in my soul. Make love to me, please! You’re the only one who can reignite the flames of passion in my heart! I want to feel alive again.’”
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What do you think? What would you do to me if I was lying here—completely nude—begging for you to thrust your raging dick inside my sweet, sweet pussy?

Would you arrest me? … or would you let your cock take control?
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Questions to ponder. Great literature makes us imagine what we might do if we were in the character’s shoes. I’ll let that question about what you would do to me hang in the air … for now.

Emily sets the book down.
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So, how was your drive? I see you got here safely. That’s good. I was a little worried.
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Actually, I was kind of nervous that you wouldn’t come at all. It’s not often that I invite boys here. To be honest, I was scared that you might stand me up … It’s not just boys that worry about rejection, you know …
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… but you came! And I’m SO excited! We’re going to have SO much fun!

Emily sets the book down on the table and kicks her leg up into the air.
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So, I’ll be honest … Fatts was the one who told me that I should invite you to the Village. He said it was a place you would probably really enjoy visiting …
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We’re always looking for more boys to tease, and even if you don’t decide to move here and just want to come by for visits …
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… the girls are always happy to have more desperate slave boys on hand to torment and boss around!
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Are you starting to regret coming here? Or is all this talk of “desperate slave boys” just making you even more excited?
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Well, in either case, it’s too late. You’re here now, and you’re stuck. I invited you, and you can’t leave until I say. Leaving before then would just be … rude.
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Anyhow, I think you'll really like all of this. Why else would you come over to play at a stranger’s house?

Emily smiles mischeviously.
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I’m just kidding! Of course, we’re not completely strangers. We both have a common friend in Fatts—and don’t worry! I promised him I would take care of you, and … well, even if I didn’t promise him … I still would.
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I’m not like Malena or Mila … I’m actually a NICE person—but don’t tell them I said that!
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So, I was REALLY happy that Fatts told me about you, because having more boys coming to the Village is DEFINITELY a good thing. Fatts is all about seeing the population of the Village grow … and the fact that he thought I would be a good ambassador and represent the Village well to a prospective stroker … Well, to be honest, that’s quite an honor. So, tease a boy … represent the Village … do some community service … How could I say no!?
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But, I’ll admit … Fatts had an ulterior motive. See, there are a LOT of girls he could have asked to invite you here, and he chose me for a reason …
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See, Fatts can be a little … vindictive—not in a mean way, but in a playful way … and, also … he hates being wrong—but more than that, he hates when OTHER people are wrong, and he has this compulsion to show them how and why they are wrong …
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He ALSO doesn’t like being disrespected.

I suppose you’re starting to think that Fatts is this mean, petty person who gets off on power trips … well, that might be a *little* true, but … he’s been my neighbor for a LONG TIME, and it sounds worse than it actually is ...
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What!? What is that look!? I SWEAR—Fatts is a good guy! He actually had me invite you here to tease you as a REWARD for doing such a good job in sending Alisa and the blondes to tease him, but …
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He made me promise to set the record straight with you on a few things, so … I agreed to do the neighborly thing and help him out!
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So, have you noticed anything about me? My boobs, perhaps? Pornhub describes my breasts as “gravity-defying.” Why don’t you give them an edge? I’ve seen how keenly you’ve been eyeballing them.

Emily smiles as you stroke more intensely for her tits.
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Fatts compliments me on my breasts ALL the time. He tells me they are “Out of this world,” “Perfect,” “The most beautiful breasts he has ever seen” … and “Gravity defying.” He thinks the Pornhub description is pretty funny and accurate. He likes to tease me with that compliment all the time …
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Say, why don’t you compliment my breasts right now? Tell me at least two things you like about them. Then, just to prove to me that you aren’t lying, why don’t you give me another edge?
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MMmmm … I like that. Thank you!

Emily blows you a kiss.
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So, do you see your first mistake? You assumed that since Fatts didn’t have any rules for breasts in his basic rules that they didn’t matter to him at all—NOT TRUE! Fatts appreciates all of a woman’s curves, including her breasts …
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… he just tends to appreciate the curves of her rear a little more …
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Now for your second mistake …
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Emily adjusts her panties.

Is this enough of a hint? [Remember: You may only edge for unobscured, naked pussies.]
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Emily pulls on her panties a little tighter.

What is it they say? “Second verse, same as the first.”
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Emily tugs on her panties even more.

No, I think you need even MORE of a hint! [Don't edge yet!]
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Can you guess what your second mistake was?

That’s right. Once again, you assumed that Fatts did not find pussies very attractive!

What are you waiting for!? Edge for my naked pussy!
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Now, it’s true that most of the time Fatts edges more easily for asses than pussies … but that does NOT mean he doesn’t know a beautiful pussy when he sees one!
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Take another look at mine!
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Do you know that some boys call my pussy “the god pussy?”
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According to Zerg my pussy is
Zerg wrote: Thu Dec 02, 2021 2:34 pm the most perfect pussy, i would do just about anything for it.
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That’s pretty great, isn’t it!? Zerg is a peach for saying that … I should probably invite him over to come visit the Village next …
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But, the point is, Fatts DOES edge for pussy, and you would know that if you had read more of his rules, because he edges for mine, which brings us to your third mistake …
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How can you write a set for somebody and NOT read through the rules for their favorite girls!
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Now, I understand Alisa not wanting to read through all of Fatts’ rules. I like to read, and even *I* do not want to read through all of Fatts’ rules … but, for boys who write sets … skipping all the hairy details—THAT’s fine—but skipping the “Favorite Girls” rules section!? That’s practically unforgivable!
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And here’s the thing: had you taken more than two seconds to read that, you would have seen QUITE QUICKLY that Fatts DOES enjoying stroking and edging for pussies and tits! Even more than my tits, Fatts thinks my pussy is the prettiest of ALL of his favorite girls—that’s why he edges for it! And he LOVES Nancy’s tits. He edges for them whenever they are out along with her sexy tummy and belly button. He edges for Melena’s pussy when some of her naked ass is showing, and he even gives the infamous Angela White +25 strokes whenever her breasts are sticking out—naked OR clothed!
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So, that’s three strikes, Chabo: Assuming Fatts does not like tits, assuming Fatts does not like pussies, and not reading his Favorite Girls section!

How does it feel to be in trouble, Chabo? Do you think I should punish you for it?
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Now, just to be clear, all that Fatts did was ask me to clear up a few points about him and set you straight on a few things. I think I’ve done that. Also, I think it should be pretty clear why Fatts chose me to be the one to confront you …
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After all, I have an amazing rack and a “god pussy.” Give me one edge for each, please!
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There is no one better that Fatts could have sent to prove to you that while he is an ardent ass man, he has an appreciation for FANTASTIC tits and pussy—I’m the proof—me—Emily Bloom, topping his list of favorites—the girl he featured in the first tease he ever wrote!
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[Sadly unpublished and deleted and gone forever …]
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So, while I have done what Fatts asked me to do, I don’t think I have yet gone far enough! Painnot pleasure—is the greatest teacher. You need to suffer some in order to truly learn your lesson, and for you to truly learn your lesson, Chabo, you’re going to need to do more than just a few edges for me … MANY more!

Emily smiles brightly as she watches your reaction.
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Now, don’t worry. I won’t be doing any CBT or BDSM stuff, but … I feel obligated to stand up for my neighbor and do the neighborly thing of defending his honor! AND—as a mistress in this village—I have a duty to teach boys lessons when they mess up!
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Now, Fatts probably suspected that I might take all of this very seriously, but, rest assured, he didn’t plan any of this—not with me anyway. What is to come is ALL my idea—NOT his … he isn’t mean enough to do all of this to you, and he sure as hell would know better than to demand I treat you a certain way in one of MY tease sessions …
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Anyway, I have some devious ways to make you suffer for all of your mistakes, but … there is something that has been bothering me, and it isn’t anything to do with Fatts’ whining and being offended about some minor things in the set you made for him (‘cause he really did like that set) … it has to do with your name.
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Look, I understand if you want to call yourself “Chabo.” I think that’s fine for a nickname. But, “Horny” Chabo? Really? “Horny?” You post on a sex forum and go by “Horny Chabo” … nobody ELSE has “horny” in their name. What? Do you think that somehow you are more horny than everyone else!?

Everyone who posts on Milovana is SOME kind of horny … but you … YOU decide to claim the word “horny” for yourself and declare to everyone that somehow YOU are more horny than they are—the ARROGANCE of it!
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So—“Horny Chabo”—we’re going to test just how “horny” you actually are, because I DON’T like braggarts, and I DON’T like people who make false claims!
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Now, I’m a clever girl and a *little* bit of a genius—I said “little bit”—don’t go saying I’m a hypocrite—those are even WORSE than arrogant people!

So, here is what we are going to do. I have figured out a way for you to pay for ALL of your mistakes at once! You didn’t read Fatts’ rules for favorite girls, so we are going to borrow some of those rules. You think he only likes asses, so, we are going to make you edge for tits and pussies—as he does.
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Finally, you claim to be “horny.” Well, I don’t believe you. Every boy who visits the Village is horny, yet you wear it proudly as your title, as if you were “more horny” than everyone else. We’ll just see about that. We’ll just see if you are ACTUALLY as “horny” as you claim to be …
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Starting now, your normal rules for edging are suspended. You will only edge when *I* say. If your rules would normally require you to edge, do an extra 50 strokes instead.

And yes. I exposed my pussy JUST NOW to taunt you—I LOVE teasing naughty boys!

Emily smiles and blows you another kiss.
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So, we will “test” your horniness in the standard way …
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How many edges are you willing to do, Chabo? “Horny” boys who are truly horny are willing to edge a lot.
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Are you horny, Chabo? You will edge a lot for me … that is guaranteed … but will you edge enough—enough to convince me that you are truly worthy of being called “Horny” Chabo?
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Well, that will be up to you, and just remember: horny boys get rewarded

Emily smiles again. She is really enjoying this.
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So, here is what we are going to do. This is your first time visiting the Village, so, I should give you a little introduction to some of the girls who live here. They are all busy teasing other boys right now—and I’m happy to have you to myself—so, I am just going to show you pictures of them and tell you a bit more about them. There’s not enough time to tell you about EVERY girl who lives in the Village, so, I will just focus on a few … ones from Fatts’ list of favorites … that list that you didn’t bother to read before making him a set …
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Of course, I’m not the ONLY girl on Fatts’ list with amazing attributes beyond her scrumptious ass … So, to further drive home my point about Fatts enjoying OTHER parts of women’s bodies, I have selected some models with either nice tits, pussy, or both …
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… and to prove just how horny you are, you will be doing EXTRA edges in accordance with Fatts’ favorite girl rules … but only if you want to prove you are worthy of the title of “Horny” Chabo. So, do you understand?

You nod your head yes.
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Good! Remember: your regular rules have been suspended. You ONLY edge when *I* tell you.

Hmmm … you’re looking a little … too horny, Chabo! You do know that if you cum without permission, you have to ruin it and STILL finish the tease, right?

This is a punishment, but … I want to give you a fighting chance. If you need to, you may take a break of up to 30 minutes … to cool off. We have a LOT more teasing ahead, and I want you to … last through it. After all, it’s not a punishment if you can’t endure it!

Emily laughs.
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We’ll continue when you are ready.

Ready to continue …
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Our first beautiful vixen is Nancy Ace. You may recognize her as the host from this year’s “No Nut November” Milovana forum game.
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Nancy is widely considered to be the most intelligent of all of the Village residents. In high school, she was the class president. Smart, beautiful, always willing to help out a classmate, Nancy did quite well in school and was very popular. After she graduated, Nancy continued to help her friends as well as strangers. She always pushes herself and those around her to do their best.
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Will you give her an edge? There’s her pussy, so tight and inviting. Normally, you would give her an edge with your rules, so you must edge for her at least once … but Fatts would give her TWO: one for her naked ass and one for the eye contact. Give her two edges if you want to prove yourself worthy of the title “Horny.”
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How about her tits? Aren’t they just SO round? They look soft, too. And what about that sexy tummy? Nancy is so fit and thin. Normally, you wouldn’t edge here, because her pussy is not showing … but Fatts would edge here. For Nancy, his rule is: “1 edge when BOTH her naked breasts and belly button are showing.” If you aren’t feeling horny, then please DON’T edge … but, if you are, give Nancy an edge
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OOooo! What about this one!? I’d say her pussy is out of view, but her tits are on full display! You may give her an edge if you like—but ONLY if you are feeling horny!
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Take a short break. I think you need it!

Emily laughs to herself a bit.

Do these strokes nice and slow. Fatts wouldn’t edge here and neither would you. Let’s take this as a brief pause in the action …
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Nancy takes dick like a goddess, too! Edge once because you have to, then again if you are feeling horny
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Get a load of this position! Fatts NEVER thought he’d be able to edge THREE times for Nancy with his rules—but then Ecik showed him THIS picture! Eyes. Ass. Boobs and belly button. One edge minimum, for her pussy as per your rules, but … if you TRULY want to prove you are a horny chabo, edge three times!
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Well, I think that’s enough of Nancy for now … perhaps if you’re lucky, you’ll get to meet her on your next visit to the Village … but, mostly I just wanted to show you a gorgeous model with shapely tits and a delicious pussy …
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How are you doing, Chabo? If you were “feeling horny” that would have been 9 edges for Nancy. If you weren’t, that would have only been 3 edges. In either case, feel free to take a short break here. We are only getting started, and I don’t want you to blow your load … at least not THIS soon, anyway!

Let me know when you are ready for the next girl.
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I’m ready for the next girl …
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Meet Melena Maria Ryabushkina. For short, she goes by “Melena Rya” or sometimes “Maria Rya”.

Of course, you aren’t actually meeting her right now … and be grateful for that!
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Melena has a reputation for being crazy! Lorena calls her, “La chica más cachonda,” [the most horny girl] and it’s well deserved! Whatever level of horny you think you are, I guarantee that you cannot hold a candle to Melena! If achieving multiple orgasms was an Olympic sport, Melena would win the gold for Russia EVERY year. [Don’t edge.]
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And that’s not all! This self-proclaimed “O-queen” isn’t just satisfied with orgasms for herself—oh no. She’s a pleasure slut. She gets off best when OTHER people are getting off, so … she LOVES to make the boys cum …
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… but it isn’t what you think! You are just a toy to Melena—something to be played with. She understands that boys don’t last long after a full orgasm, so …
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… she ruins them again and again, in the hopes that they will last longer in order to give her more time to get off …
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… and just look at her pussy! It’s exquisite!

Look at that steamy, uncaring look in her eyes! Think about what she would do to you. Give her an edge!
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And check out her titties—small and perky—just like you like!
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Fatts’ rule for Melena is: “1 edge when her pussy and any part of her ass are showing.” This pose from Melena would get one edge using your rules. Do that now … but, if you are “feeling horny,” adopt Fatts’ rule and give her a second.
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Isn’t she amazing! That flexibility! Cute little titties … a round, shapely ass … and just look at her! She’s moaning softly as she gently spreads her juicy pussy lips open for you …

Same as before. Give her one edge, but two if you are “feeling horny.”
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Oh, fuck … now she’s fingering herself! No edges here if you follow your rules, because her pussy is blocked … but … if you are “feeling horny,” you could borrow one of Fatts’ rules and edge for her ass … “Hands obscuring an ass never count as ‘being in the way.’”
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Stop! No edging here—just strokes!

Melena may want you to cum, but this is my tease, and *I* want you to last
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I don’t know, Chabo … you’re looking pretty rough … I’ve got one more picture of Melena, but … I don’t think you could handle it …
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Well, a normal, regular chabo couldn’t handle it … but … that’s not you—no, not at all! You’re a “horny” chabo, and I definitely think a horny chabo could handle the pic …
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Show me the pic! I can handle it, Emily!
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Eyes. Ass. Pussy. Edge three times, and make them HARD! Edge harder and faster than Fatts would! Impress me. Prove to me that you are worthy of the name “Horny” Chabo!
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Well, I think that’s good enough … for now. You’re looking a little winded and sweaty there, Chabo! Is that a little pool of precum that’s dripped down?

Emily giggles.
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Am I keeping my promise? I did say that we would “have fun together.” I know I’m having fun. Are you? Your cock looks like it’s crying, but … something tells me YOU are enjoying yourself despite all of the teasing …

… or maybe it is because of the teasing. It’s really hard to know for sure!
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Okay. Take another break. At least a two-minute, mandatory break, but … you can rest for up to ten minutes if you need it.

You edged at least 3 times for Melena and 9 times if you were “feeling horny.” I’m going to back off from doing any more “edge frenzies” … for now. We have one more girl to get through before I finish “teaching you a lesson.” This girl will require you to edge, but … it will be a little … different than how you might be used to edging. After that, I have a fun stroking game planned, and then I suppose we’ll have to decide how you will cum, either a ruined orgasm or a full. It’s right there in your rules, clear as day: “The Set needs to have an Full Orgasm or a ruined one.”

Now, lucky for you—unlike Alisa—I actually read the rules of the boys that I tease. I’m even trying to follow your “Try to stay under ~30 Edges” advice … Of course, you wrote “try” and not “must” … and, well … I really *am* trying, but … I just don’t know. See, you seemed more like a “regular” chabo to me, and for a “regular” chabo, I would DEFINITELY try to keep it around 30 edges … but … for a “horny” chabo that was actually horny, going over 30 edges is something he would want to do … so, I don’t know. We’ll see. Just remember: horny boys get rewarded


I’m done with my break. I’m ready for the next girl …
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This is Eugenia Diordiychuk, also known as “Katie Fey,” though everyone in the Village calls her “Jenya D.”
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Do you notice anything in particular about her, say, perhaps, her spectacular breasts?
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Well, Fatts noticed them too, but there is something else that most people find memorable about Jenya …
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She likes to make boys hold the edge.

Go ahead. This is a pussy shot. Get on the edge, and if you’re feeling horny, hold it for ten seconds.
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Delicious.

Now, Jenya isn’t typically known for short edge holds—oh no. She likes to make the boys stay on the edge for a long time. I don’t know how long you can hold the edge. Maybe only a short time, but, maybe, you can hold it for a while. None of that really matters though. All that is important for me to know right now is that a chabo who was truly horny would hold the edge for a while …
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… and beg for the privilege to hold the edge.

You are going to bring yourself to the edge. When you arrive, you are to hold it, then scroll down. The first number you see is the length of time a “normal” chabo would hold the edge … but, a horny chabo will hold the edge for the length of time given in the parentheses that follow.

If you have an accident or cum, you are to ruin it. If you cannot hold the edge that long, you can either try again after a rest or give up and move on. Of course, it goes without saying that a “horny” chabo would edge for the full time without cumming … because a horny chabo wants to experience life on the edge.

Now beg. Beg to be allowed to hold the edge for Jenya. Stroke and beg, and beg while you stroke, and when you hit that edge, scroll down.
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Hold the edge for 10 seconds (20 seconds), then scroll down.

Thank Jenya for letting you hold the edge!
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Continue holding! 10 seconds more! (20 seconds!) Then scroll down.

Tell Jenya how much you LOVE holding the edge!
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Stop touching. Very good.

You almost convinced me that you like holding the edge … almost.
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Rest awhile, and then we are going to do this again.
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Say, “Mistress Jenya, I love holding the edge for you. May I hold the edge for you one more time?”
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Hmmm … I think the answer to your question is, “Yes.”

Before you start stroking, say, “Mistress Jenya, thank you for letting me hold the edge for you.” Then, stroke yourself to the edge, scroll down, and prepare to hold.
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Hold the edge! 10 seconds! (20 seconds!)

Say, “Mistress Jenya, I want to hold the edge for you longer!”
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Granted. Eyes, ass, and pussy. Hold the edge 15 seconds (30 seconds).

Tell Jenya how much you love holding the edge for her. Tell her you wish you could hold it longer!
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I’m sorry—times up! Stop stroking.
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You’ve done well, Chabo, but remember, this was just a test. If you meet Jenya in person, I can guarantee she will do FAR WORSE than this …

Jenya is quite nice and actually kind of goofy when she is hanging out with the girls, but, around the boys … She’s a force of nature. A cold, demanding domme who will make you suffer longer than you can imagine … and make you love every second of it.
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And that’s it—we’re done! Chabo—my “horny” Chabo ... was I too hard on you? Or was your suffering just the right amount?
Emily’s Game:
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I think you’ve been punished enough for making assumptions and not reading rules—and don’t worry—you won’t be edging for a while … at least not for a little while … you need to rest. Stroking only for a bit while we talk some more …
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Now, as I mentioned, I read your rules before inviting you over here, and I noticed something interesting—VERY interesting …
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You berated Fatts for liking asses, while you yourself—in your preferences—wrote “ass>tits”. That smells a bit like a hypocrite to me …
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So, as your punishment for “being a hypocrite”—now that you’re all worked up and probably want to edge some more—I’m going to show you some pictures of very sexy asses, and all you will be allowed to do is stroke for them. No edging allowed!
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Now, I’m Fatts’ next-door neighbor. We’ve been friends for a while. He trusts me—so much so—that he gave me a spare key to his house. Mostly I bring in his mail if he is gone for a while, but one time, I decided to bring Nancy over with me. We hacked into his computer and found the folders where he keeps all of his “dirty pictures.” Of course, we brought a flash drive to make a copy.
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We found this one folder that was very interesting. It was called “TributeGirls.” We had no idea what that folder was, SOOooo … we asked Michaela. (Michaela is kind of an expert on “all things Fatts.” He tells her everything.)
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So, Michaela told us that the “TributeGirls” folder was a CUM TRIBUTE folder—full of pictures of girls that Fatts believed were SO HOT that they DESERVED to have a cum tribute from him!
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I am going to show you a special gallery of just ten of these pictures. In a way, these pictures are Fatts’ version of Helequin’s 11/10 photos. All ten will be ass pictures—since you think “ass>tits”. This is your punishment for being such a hypocrite—so NO edging allowed! You may stroke at ANY speed, however, you have to double all of the strokes for these sexy ass pics. Don’t forget: the +50 strokes instead of edging rule is still in place. You may begin.

Ready for the “special ass gallery" …
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The first few are clothed, but STILL super hot …
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This chick drives Fatts WILD … those big eyes … that cute, round little ass …
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Fatts thinks THIS girl has a 10/10 ass. How would you rate it?
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This pose shows off her ass AND pussy. I’m sure that you find it … pleasing.
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This is Ashley Doll. She’s one of Fatts’ favorites. Small and petite, but … DAT ASS!!
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I’m sure you’re familiar with Gloria Sol …
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Say, I was only going to do ten, but … since I know you’re a fan of Gloria … maybe I should show you some more of hers that were in the cum tribute folder … Would you like that? I know what a “horny” chabo would say




Yes, please!
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Good boy.

Wow. There are quite a few of these! Clearly, Fatts could not decide which photo from the set was best, so … it looks like he just picked them all! :lol: Can you pick a favorite?
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OOoooo … this is Toxic A. Fatts met her in a Maze. She likes to edge boys over and over and over. Would you be excited or scared if you met her in a tease maze? Maybe a bit of both!?
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Wow! Look at Lorena eat out that pussy! Yes, this counts as a Lorena pic, and yes, it counts as a “pussy” pic, but … for the purposes of this “special” gallery, it should ONLY be classified as an “ass” pic …

… but, there IS a pussy, so … make sure to do those extra strokes!
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Oh, boy! Michaela and Sabrisse. I know it's crazy hot, but don’t edge!

Ass on ass … DOUBLE eye contact … cute little pussies peeking out ... there is SO MUCH in this picture that is just SHOCKINGLY hott … if you need to slow down your stroke pace to avoid the edge, you have my permission!
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Mmmm, the final pic. Are you a fan of cumshots? Fatts usually not so much, but THIS pic … wow. It’s basically flawless. I think it won a duel over on the “dueling thread.”
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I finished the “special ass gallery" …
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So, what did you think? Did you see any 11/10s in there? How frustrated were you that you couldn’t edge to those hot, hot pictures?
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Well, I have a consolation prize of sorts for you—but it’s totally optional!

If you like—which is to say—if you are a “horny” chabo, you are to go back up to the “special ass gallery” and pick the THREE pictures that you thought were the hottest and give them TRIPLE your normal strokes! Still, no edging and the +50 strokes in place of each edge rule is still in place, but … at least you can go back and spend more time with them!
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Done with the “special ass gallery” …
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We’re nearing the end of our time together, Chabo. I’ve had fun—have you!? You’ve been SUCH a great sport … I really wish you would come by and visit the Village more often … you’ve been SO much fun to play with …
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Our final task before we get to the issue of how you will end your session today is a test of sorts. This test is very important—about as important as it is for you to prove how horny you are to me. (That should be a pretty good hint, since you know that “only horny boys get rewarded.”)
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Now, I’m not going to tell you what the test is—at least not until the test is over.

I know, I know … you think I’m “unfair” … Well, I don’t care! You came into MY house, and in MY house *I* make the rules … but don’t worry … *I* think I’m fair, and, when we get to the end, I’m sure you’ll agree that I made the right decision!

Emily smiles warmly.
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So, we have ONE MORE “special” gallery. This one has 9 pics. Once again, they are all from Fatts’ “Cum Tribute” folder. Since this tease has been about ass, tits, and pussy, we are going to include 3 ass pics, 3 boobie pics, and 3 pussy pics. Right now, you are only allowed to stroke for them. Same rules as the last gallery, except you do NOT have to double your strokes. Just do +50 strokes instead of any edges you might have normally done following your rules.

Look at the pictures carefully. This isn’t some memory game, but … at the end of the gallery, you will have to choose some of the pics, so … make sure you take note of your favorites!
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Let’s begin with your least favorite group and move up to your favorite. So, based on my understanding, that would be tits, ass, and finally pussy. Let’s begin.

I’m ready to start the second gallery …
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This girl really caught Fatts’ attention. The heels. She’s relaxed, leaning back. She has a certain swagger. And her titties are flawless.
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This little cutie in the choker necklace is just breathtaking. Those ta-tas are the cherry on top!
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This girl’s jugs are SO shapely and PERFECTLY round … just big enough to motorboat or give a boob job … DEFINITELY slightly more than a handful …
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Ass. We’ve already seen a lot of ass pics, but what’s three more?
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Let’s start with this one of Lorena. GORGEOUS! Her ass is DEFINITELY her best feature …
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Mikey, OH Mikey … Aren’t girls with boys’ names kind of hot? I’ve always thought so, and Mikey is NO exception … SO beautiful …
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Check out THIS little cutie! That hips-to-waist ratio is CRAZY! How do you fit such a BIG little booty on such a small frame!?
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And the last three … PUSSIES!
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Here’s Karissa—a beautiful girl with a BEAUTIFUL pussy to match!
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This girl is cute enough, and that asshole is cute too …

… but really, that GIANT dildo in that TINY hole is the real winner here …

… I bet the asshole is jealous of the pussy …
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Do you recognize THIS pussy? It belongs to Melena from earlier. It’s closed now, but … I bet she would open it for you …
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I finished the second gallery …
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And that’s it! The end of the SECOND “special” gallery … but are you REALLY done with them … well …
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Not quite. While you were stroking along, I’m SURE you just saw some pics that were SO hot that you REALLY wanted to edge for them, but … of course you were not allowed—awww, poor baby!

Well, I’m a nice girl, and I have decided to let you go back and edge for THREE pics. ONE edge for THREE DIFFERENT pics from ANY of the 19 pics in the two special galleries. (24 if you went for the extra Gloria Sol pics.) BUT, there is a catch … [Wait until Emily finishes the instructions before scrolling up to deliver the three edges. She will tell you when.]
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The choice of what pictures you edge for will determine how you cum, AND … I’m not telling you what the criteria are until AFTER you do your edges!

Emily flashes a big smile, enjoying every moment of your reaction.

I wonder how you will choose …
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Will you spread them out evenly, between ass, tits, and pussy? Keep in mind, ALL of the pictures from the first special gallery count as “ass” pictures.

Your rules only give edges for pussies … will you “stay loyal” to your rules and only give edges to pussies?

Or, were there some pictures that were just too hot, that you wanted to edge for SO BAD but wasn’t allowed to … will you go back and edge for them now?
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Think carefully. Your decision is important. You cannot edge for a picture more than once, and you can only choose from the 19 (or 24) pictures in the “special" galleries.

Will you edge for ass, tits, or pussy? Does one have a better outcome than the others? There are 13 (or 18) ass pics, but only 3 tits and 3 pussy pics. Does that mean I secretly WANT you to edge for ass? Does that have the best outcome, and so because I like you so much, I want to increase your chances for that? Or maybe that’s a trap, and I WANT you to fail …
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… or, maybe, your outcome has already been decided, and this “test” is just a ruse to play mind games with you …

Emily shrugs.

I know the answer … but I’m not telling you!
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Alright—enough talk! Give me my three edges! Scroll up and edge once for three different pics, then contine.


Edges are done …
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Hmmm … Are you ready to cum? I’ve worked you up quite a lot already … and you have been a good boy …
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So, what do you think? Will you cum for my ass, my tits, or my pussy? Fatts would be equally happy to cum for any. What about you? Would you like to cum for my …
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… ass …
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… tits …
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… or pussy?
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Of course, I’ll let you pick.

Are you excited? Have you decided which one you’ll cum for?
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Or is the choice SO hot that you STILL can’t decide? I’ll leave it up to you …
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Well, that’s not exactly true. It WILL be your choice, but …
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… you’ve kind of already decided.

Remember those three edges you did? I *am* still leaving it up to you, but …
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… you’ve already decided your outcum.

Now, first things first … the ONLY way you are getting a FULL orgasm today is if you did ALL of the extra “horny” tasks. I believe strongly that only “horny” boys deserve to cum. I was skeptical, Chabo, whether or not you were deserving of the title of “horny”, but …
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… if you managed to do ALL of the tasks, then I suppose I will have to call you “Horny Chabo” from now on and give you a full orgasm today.

Well, there is still a chance I might ruin you, but … if you did NOT complete ALL of the horny tasks, then even if I SAY “cum for me” you STILL MUST ruin it.
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Now, again, I’m a nice person. If you skipped some of the “horny” tasks, I’ll let you go back and do them right now. It will only increase your chances of a full orgasm … and, if you complete them ALL in one session (That is, complete the entire tease with all optional “horny” parts within 5 hours), I will admit that you are indeed a “horny” Chabo. I’ll even let you take some breaks if that is what you need. I’m not a monster … just the devious girl next door!

Go back now and do them … but “only if you are horny,” haha …
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I’m ready to move on ...
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I’ll be honest. I got jealous applying all of Fatts’ special rules to the other girls but not to me! So, in addition to your “+1 edge per pussy”, we’ll add Fatts’ “+1 edge for Emily Bloom’s pussy” rule. Now give my magnificent “god pussy” TWO edges, please!
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Okay. I think we’re ready to unveil your fate.

You will be cumming for either my ass, tits, or pussy—depending on how you spent your three edges. Whichever category you gave the most edges to, THAT will be your choice. If you spread them out evenly, 1-1-1, only THEN may you ACTUALLY choose which body part to cum for at this time. If you gave 2-1 or 3-0, then you MUST choose that category to cum for.

When you open the spoiler for your choice, I will give you one more pic. Get on the edge for that pic, hold it for as long as you like, then open the next spoiler and I you tell you how to cum, either ruined or full (but if you did NOT complete ALL “horny” tasks, then you must ruin no matter what).

Now, two more edges for my pussy, then choose.
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Ass …
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Oh, so you decided to edge for asses, huh? How do you like mine? Does it meet your approval? I hope so. Now, get on the edge, hold it for however long you like, then scroll down and open the spoiler. Will it be a ruin or a full orgasm?
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RUIN IT!!! RUIN THAT ORGASM FOR ME!!
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Cha-boooh! Chabo, Chabo, Chabo … You gave Fatts SUCH a hard time for his ass obsession, saying nobody else is like that … but THEN, in YOUR preferences, you put ass>tits. Hypocrite much?
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And THEN, your rules have you edging for pussy. Now where is your allegiance to pussy? Are you secretly an ass man? Or did all those extra hot ass pics make you forget how much you love pussy? And what about MY pussy? Zerg says I have a god pussy, and mine is the only pussy Fatts will edge for unconditionally in his rules … All of me is beautiful, but most would say my tits or my pussy is my best asset. Even FATTS would rank my ass last (though he DOES love it SO much …).
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Chabo … HORNY Chabo … did you fall into my little trap? Feeling frustrated? Cheated? Were the hot asses just TOO MUCH to deny edging for? I only gave you what you wanted … you CHOSE this … You CHOSE to edge for asses when you could have edged for tits or pussy … but … those ass pics … a little TOO hot, huh? And those tits and pussy pics … Fatts thought they were all good enough to be deserving of a cum tribute, so … they HAD to have been at least pretty good, no? So, like I said ... I am fair, and if you don’t like this, well … it’s your OWN fault—you had it coming!
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Well, today has been fun—and welcome to the Village!

I know I was a little mean to you today—punishing you for mistakes you made … but, I was just trying to be a good neighbor! And you enjoyed yourself, no? I know you did.
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Did I set you up to fail? Yes. Did I stack the deck in favor of asses? Yes. But ONLY to test your loyalty to tits and pussy! I wanted to see if there was a “secret ass man” hidden away inside of you, like your “Milovana Preferences” suggested there might be …

Awww … don’t look so sad! If you could have chosen … if you would have known the full rules of the game BEFORE playing … if you knew it was MY tits or MY pussy you could have cum for at the end, would you have made the same decision?

If the answer is “no”, I think I have a little way we can make up for your … failure.
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If you want a full orgasm today I will allow it, but … there is something extra I need you to do. If you want to orgasm for me, you must EDGE for me! Choose either tits or pussy. Go back through the tease. Find ten pictures featuring your choice and give an edge to EACH one. THEN, from the special gallery, give one edge to each pic featuring your chosen body part.
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Only HORNY BOYS deserve FULL orgasms! 13 more edges, and THEN you may choose the “tits” or “pussy” ending for me and enjoy a full orgasm. Deal?

HOWEVER … if you aren’t that horny and just too tired, well … I am feeling a little sorry for you Chabo and will allow you to have a full orgasm another day … but here is what you must do.
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Replay this tease. You may skip ALL of the dialogue and sections that you like EXCEPT the following: You must do the Nancy, Melena, and Jenya scenes completing ALL of the “horny” options. Then, you must do BOTH special galleries (choosing all of the horny options) USING YOUR REGULAR RULES (no doubling strokes, no going back and doing triple strokes). THEN, after completing both galleries, you must give 1 edge each to each of the three pics for either pussy or tits which will “lock in” your choice. Then, from the end of the second gallery, complete the rest of the tease as normal and choose your full orgasm ending, either tits or pussy.

See! I told you I was nice! Fatts likes to cum. Would he choose to move in next to some cold-hearted person? No, I don’t think so.
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Did you learn your lesson?

Was it “Stay true to your rules and convictions?” … or, maybe, the lesson is you need to start edging for asses! Of course, you boys should NEVER judge each other on the preferences you keep. However … us girls … we can weigh in on whatever we like … especially if we feel our strokers need to become more … well-rounded in their masturbatory pursuits …
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I hope you decide to come back and visit the Village again, Chabo! If you want, I can be MUCH nicer next time … unless you liked all of the taunting and my devious side—in which case we’ll do more of that! I’m sure some of the other girls would LOVE to meet you in person, too!
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And don’t worry … if you really want to come back … we’ll know. And we’ll figure out a way to bring you back … Good-bye for now! =*
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Tits …
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Oh, so you decided to edge for tits, huh? How do you like mine? Do they meet your approval? I hope so. Now, get on the edge, hold it for however long you like, then scroll down and open the spoiler. Will it be a ruin or a full orgasm?
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FULL ORGASM!!! CUM HARD FOR ME!!
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Good job today, Horny Chabo!
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I hope my teasing wasn’t too hard, and you enjoyed yourself!

Did all of my mind games and taunting help you to push past your limits!? I hope so!
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No matter the reason you chose tits, I felt you deserved a full orgasm. If you teased Fatts for liking asses then turned around and edged for asses yourself, that would have made you quite the hypocrite—and hypocrites don’t deserve full orgasms
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… but here you are! You survived all the teasing and proven—at least to me—that you are worthy of the title of “Horny” Chabo—well done!
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Did you have fun, Chabo—I mean Horny Chabo? I know *I* did … You’re welcome back to the Village any time. I’ll be sure to let the other girls know that you met with my approval. They talk. Word will travel quickly. I’m sure they will all be eager to tease you on your next visit!
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If you came back, I would be happy to spend more time with you … of course, the Village IS filled with all kinds of girls … and if you wanted to spend some more time with one of them, I wouldn’t be offended … too much, anyway …
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I would understand. A “chabo” must walk around town and do everything his mistresses tell him, but … a horny chabo must follow the strong urgings of his cock and do what is best for him!
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I don’t know what it’s like for Visitors. Us girls … we just live here in the Village. This is our home. I’ve heard it’s difficult for Visitors to get here, but … I’m sure you’ll find your way back … when you want it the most and least suspect it! =*
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Pussy …
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Oh, so you decided to edge for pussy, huh? How do you like mine? Does it meet your approval? Is it a “god pussy?” Now, get on the edge, hold it for however long you like, then scroll down and open the spoiler. Will it be a ruin or a full orgasm?
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FULL ORGASM!!! CUM HARD FOR ME!!
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Good job today, Horny Chabo!
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I hope my teasing wasn’t too hard, and you enjoyed yourself!

Did all of my mind games and taunting help you to push past your limits!? I hope so!
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Regardless of the reason you chose pussy, I felt you deserved a full orgasm. Maybe you really just wanted to cum for my pussy and thought that perhaps edging for pussy would make that happen … or, maybe you wanted to stay loyal to your rules … or, maybe you just really like pussy …
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… but, no matter the reason, here you are! You survived all the teasing and proven—at least to me—that you are worthy of the title of “Horny” Chabo—well done!
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Did you have fun, Chabo—I mean Horny Chabo? I know *I* did … You’re welcome back to the Village any time. I’ll be sure to let the other girls know that you met with my approval. They talk. Word will travel quickly. I’m sure they will all be eager to tease you on your next visit!
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If you came back, I would be happy to spend more time with you … of course, the Village IS filled with all kinds of girls … and if you wanted to spend some more time with one of them, I wouldn’t be offended … too much, anyway …
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I would understand. A “chabo” must walk around town and do everything his mistresses tell him, but … a horny chabo must follow the strong urgings of his cock and do what is best for him!
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I don’t know what it’s like for Visitors. Us girls … we just live here in the Village. This is our home. I’ve heard it’s difficult for Visitors to get here, but … I’m sure you’ll find your way back … when you want it the most and least suspect it! =*
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For Chabo to read after the set:
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So, I definitely DID stretch it and go beyond your "try to stay under about ~30 edges" suggestion. To be fair, it was a “try” and not a “hard” requirement. As per the “spirit of Helequin,” I wanted to see if I could push you a little bit past your comfort zone. I thought goading you with the whole “horny” thing might do that. If you did NOT take the “extra horny” challenges, then, you would have DEFINITELY stayed under 30 edges (or at least MUCH closer to that) … so, I thought that was fair.

I like to have the girls “punish” people for “honest mistakes.” You can see this in my first “real” set for Ecik featuring Melena and Guerlain. (I would be careful playing it, though ... it's NOT for the fainthearted! :lol:) Honestly, I didn’t care that you didn’t read all my rules (I was not offended AT ALL—they are SO numerous!), but … I decided that “Emily” did, lol. I thought it would make for a fun premise for the set. Hope you enjoyed it!

The set was probably different from all of the other sets you received. I mostly write character driven sets (as opposed to plot or gallery or “game” or “theme” driven sets). I spend a lot of time writing the dialogue. I *hope* that makes them feel much more immersive, like a “real” girl is teasing you …

I usually consider it “bad form” for an author to mention and/or reference themself THAT MUCH in the tease (like I did here, though I think a little bit is good … *I* usually enjoy the references to other forum players at the least … it gives more of a “community” feel like this is something a bit more than “just” a solo fantasy …), but … Since Emily is my “next-door neighbor” and was responding to the set that YOU wrote for ME … I thought it was okay (to reference myself a lot) and hopefully made sense in the story and didn’t turn you off (because hearing constantly about another guy while girls are teasing YOU can be a distraction and a turn-off) … so, let me know what you think!

I LOVE honest feedback, so … one of the reasons I was okay writing you this long set is because I knew you would tell me what you thought worked and what didn’t. I’ve been lurking on this site and playing Milovana teases for about five years. I’ve been following this thread closely since the spring. In those ways, I consider myself a veteran, but … when it comes to writing sets for other people, I do not have NEARLY the experience that BBBeanie, Helequin, or Ecik does … so, I DEFINITELY have room for improvement, so, if stuff didn’t work for you, I want to know so I can get better! :wink:

If you want to write me a “revenge” set, I think that would be pretty okay. Having the girls bend my rules again and “punish” me for not giving enough attention to tits and pussies. :blush: Just saying … I think that would be pretty great … :whistle: If we exchanged sets again, I wouldn’t mind you dipping into the “Punishment” section of my rules, either. I have a LOT of demerits that need to be spent. :blush: But, not doing that would be fine, too! (Just an option.)

Basically, I was a LITTLE offended and amused at your accusation that I “did not like tits and pussies.” I thought that Emily Bloom would make for a good counterpoint to that accusation. :innocent: So, I haven’t written a set for Emily yet to “establish her character”—until this one, that is … so, I guess I’m not SO surprised this set got away from me and I spent a CRAZY amount of time on it (though NOT as much as my first sets for Helequin and BBBeanie, though, to be fair, the Helequin set took crazy long because I was learning how to code properly in this thread and get the spoilers right … and also didn’t know that some sites don’t allow hotlinking and had to redo whole galleries a few times. :blush:). Anyway, I have a LOT of “big” sets I am working on and want to get out, so … If you do a “revenge” set for me (PLEASE send Alisa who doesn’t care about my rules! :blush:), expect a return set that is FAR lower in quality. I REALLY WILL attempt to create the full set in 1-3 hours. If there is ONE girl that you really want (I low-key “introduced” you to five of the “Village” girls including Emily) “request” her, and I’ll make sure to include her in at least one scene. You can also look through my “personalities” section.

Thanks in advance for your feedback!
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Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

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My Rules:
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Current Number of Demerits: 86

Recently added rules:
1 edge for each girl if there is a strap-on in the picture (stolen from Bjorn13)
30 second edge hold if the girl is licking another girl’s asshole (If the ass is naked, takes the place of the regular edge.)
Vanessa Angel: Every fifth edge for her in the set I must hold for 50 seconds.

I enjoy writing teases. I will often get REALLY into it and take 10-30 hours to write a single tease that I am really into. Any tease I put that much effort into will be one that *I* really want to write. If you write me a set, thank you, but don’t expect a “dynamo level” tease in return. Moving forward, all return sets will be rushed: basically, the best tease I can write in 1-2 hours. (Life is pretty busy at the moment.) They should still be pretty good though :fun: ... just not that level of “amazing” I usually strive for. :cool: (Of course, I always reserve the right to go over time, but … I REALLY will be rushing and set up countdown timers and moving quick to get it done efficiently … I have a feeling Zerg’s template and pornpics.com will be my friends …)

I’ve spent a lot of time trying to develop my “bench” of HMC Village characters. If you have seen one of “my” girls in a tease I have written and would like to spend more time with her—even if it’s just a quickie return set—please let me know so I can make that happen. Some people might say that would makes me an “Internet fantasy pimp.” :whistle: That may be true, but … just don’t let the girls hear you call me that, or else we will BOTH get in SO much trouble! :\'-( :no:

Preferences
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Basic Tease Guidelines:
I never realized it until joining this thread and writing some teases ... but, apparently, based on my rules and the sets I have written, my "ultimate sex fantasy" is to be the main character in a slice-of-life harem anime! :lol:

TLDR version:
If you are worried about writing a set for me, the main things are:
1. Keep the total number of edges around 20-30.
2. Watch your pacing. Give me a warmup scene with almost all stroking and maybe end with an edge. If the girls get crazy and edge me 10-15 times in one scene (which I CAN handle), follow that up with a scene that is mostly stroking.
3. Give me a full orgasm at the end! :lol: (Seriously though, it’s more of a requirement than a suggestion …)

Those are the basics. Beyond that, I like stories as well as challenges and games. It doesn't NEED to be super in-depth or have much of a story. If you are thinking about writing me one super long tease, instead consider giving me one that has multiple paths and endings that I could replay several times. I'm VERY vanilla. Stick to solo girls and lesbians for photo sets along with the above guidelines, and I'm SURE I'll enjoy it. :-D

More detailed guidelines: (They get longer and longer, but … you don’t need to read it all to write me a set.)
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Solo girls and lesbians. No cocks. Power and control themes are great—humiliation not so much. End with a full orgasm. Keep CBT lite. Games, challenges, and “punishments” are all good. Try to give me at least 5-10 pics of warmup before the first edge. 20 edges/session is a good target that will translate to roughly 60-90 minutes of play time. Shorter sets are fine! 60-80 edges is my max upper limit. Warn me that a session might be “long” if it goes over ~35 edges and consider marking a break point. Edge holds are good. 5 to 20 second edge holds are fine. 30-60 seconds are very nice, but I need to warm up to that. 1-2 min is good, but after two of those in quick succession, I’ll need a break. If a hold goes over 20 seconds, please spread the hold over several pics. I usually get bored if I have to hold a real long edge for just one pic.

The “full orgasm at the end” rule is pretty firm. If you don’t like that, just make me work for it! If you want a VERY thorough explanation for why I have that rule, you can read all about it in the feedback I wrote for Helequin in this post. Though I don’t prefer it, I’m okay with ruining. (It’s best as a “punishment.”) Multiple orgasms (with breaks) during a long set is probably the way to go with me for sets with over 30-40 edges. I’m an edge slut. After I’m really warmed up, a 6, 8, or even 12 edge frenzy is doable, but, I need a break after that, so, maybe follow that up with an orgasm or a less intense “mostly stroking” scene to give me a chance to recover. If I have to do X number of edges in Y minutes, a challenge with consequences like that REALLY excites me as I am both very competitive and hate getting in trouble …

I’m an ass man. Petite, skinny girls with nice, perky bubble butts are the best.

If you want to turn up the intensity of the tease, turn on a metronome. 240 BPM is a good pace for me to really keep me on my toes. If you want me to stroke fast and “force” me to edge, 270-300 will do that.

I’m creating a narrative setting: the HMC Village. Pretty much every tease I write is set here. The premise is the HMC thread players and girls all live together in one city, where the girls run around and constantly tease the boys in one giant, ongoing sex party. There’s drama, gossip, and occasionally even magic or science fiction elements.

If you want to write a “story” tease for me, that would be cool. I would love to see the HMC Village become a collaborative thing! All of my favorites have little descriptions for them (see below) which include their archetype (to make it easier to write for them). If you want to include one of my characters in any of your teases, please do! It doesn’t have to be exact, but just do your best to stay somewhat close to their archetype. I have enough girls with different archetypes that you can probably find one of my favorites that matches your writing style preference (to tease me how you like). Or, better yet, just develop your OWN “character” for the HMC Village and she WILL become canon!

If you don’t want to do that, TOTALLY fine. Just mention that the set does not take place in the Village and write however you want. That way I won’t go in with any expectations. Or, maybe, the domme is just trying out a different persona that day ... just have fun with it!


Extra Long and Extra Detailed Tease Guidelines:
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I mostly go for solo girls or lesbian pics. Tatoos are offputting, and neon hair is not really my thing. If there are guys in the pic, that’s typically a turn-off. Seeing other guys getting it on with girls I want to cum for, well … that diminishes my arousal. Often times when playing sets made for other people, I will just completely skip most pics with dicks in them. Even POV blowjob pics are kind of meh for me … unless the writing was done in such a way that I was on the receiving end, then it might be alright, but still, probably not my favorite …

I don’t do gay, trans, or shemale pics. I like hentai, but lately I tend to prefer “real” pics over hentai. (I do enjoy the tentacle stuff.) Bondage can be pretty hot. Actually, girls abusing boys who are in bondage would be an exception to the above (though lezdom is even better) … For regular hetero sex scenes, I always know the guy in the pic is not me, so, it becomes a turn-off … but, for some reason with bondage, maybe it’s the masks, I can identify with the dude. I really want to be bound, so, somehow, I’m able to “pretend” that guy is me and the thought of being that guy in that situation is a big turn on … but, solo girls and lesbians make up most of my porn diet.

I don’t like SPH or sissy stuff. I don’t do chastity. While I don’t enjoy most “humiliation”, I love banter and taunting. Not being “in control” is a big turn-on for me. So, a girl in the tease taunting me, telling me she doesn’t think I can handle another edge, but she’s going to make me edge anyway … That would be SUPER hot to me. Talking down to me, asserting her dominance, rubbing it in that I have to do what she says … that’s all about power and control, where straight humiliation is more about personal insults, belittling, and making the recipient feel lesser. Belittling me because I of my performance or piling it on when I’m getting punished or even insulting me about my preferences … that all falls more into power/control, which would all be good and very arousing ...

I enjoy when girls are sweet, caring, and affirming in teases as well. If she is really focused on my pleasure and making me feel good, that can be a huge turn on as well.

I like to cum at the end of every session with a full orgasm. I’ve never gotten into denial. I’m fine with ruins, but, when I ruin during a session, even multiple times, I almost always end with a full orgasm (usually not as satisfying after emptying out the tank). I don’t mind “working” for my final orgasm and would often prefer to “earn it” in some way.

The “window” for the “perfect orgasm” for me is somewhere between 10 and about 20 edges. After 25 edges, my dick starts getting fatigued. The perfect orgasm for me happens when I am both super excited and hard, and that peak typically occurs in that 10 to 20 or so window. Fatigued orgasms are usually not as satisfying as those in the peak. (I’m like a drug addict, except instead of chasing the stronger high, I’m chasing the perfect orgasm.) Going longer past the window and wearing me out with edges … that’s alright, too. I’m kind of an edge slut, and the promise of that orgasm keeps me motivated to keep going … but, I just don’t like being robbed unexpectedly at the end with a ruin or denial after I have “worked so hard” … That’s not fun for me.

I am good with cumming multiple times during a session. Getting a full one in during the “window”, taking a short break, then getting back to it … that sounds like a fantastic session for me. Full orgasms often but do not necessarily need to trigger the end of a session. Being “forced” to edge and cum over and over … that sounds like heaven to me …

I don’t generally enjoy CBT, but I will do it if instructed. Dick and ball slaps are fine, but I will not ball bust. I don’t do clothes pins (too painful), though tying up my balls can be fun. No ice, icy hot, candles, etc. I will eat my own cum, but, it’s not something I enjoy. Rubbing my nipples does nothing for me; don’t put it in any tease for me. I don’t usually do anal stuff, though I’m open to it. I don’t own a butt plug, so … I have to very carefully improvise on the rare occasion I do engage in anal play … I’ve never had a p-spot orgasm. I would like to have one someday, but, I would need a partner or a nice toy to make that happen. Don’t try to get me to have one in a tease …

I enjoy games and challenges, like cock heroes and web teases. I have coded and modified a lot of GuideMe teases. Stroking or edging in time can be a lot of fun. I can pretty much edge at any metronome speed. Feel free to incorporate timers or metronomes if you like. However, without an AI to run it, doing so in text teases can be cumbersome. I think the free form and writing and personalization is what makes forum tease games shine, so … keep the things AI-based teases excel at sparing. The same thing goes for videos. A good web tease draws you in to create an experience. I would often prefer that than cumming to a video … but, having to edge X times during a video or edge in time to a slow metronome while watching a video or cumming during a certain window in a video … those would all be welcome challenges.

I prefer to warm up with stroking for at least 5-10 minutes before my first edge, so, typically it would be best to place my first edge after the first 10 slides at least or even longer. If you wanted to put an edge in sooner, have me warm up before I start the tease or to a video or have me edge within a time as a challenge. Typically, if the first pic forced me to edge and no additional incentives or instructions were given, I would just stroke to the same picture for 10 minutes, which would be kind of boring … unless that was a punishment (which would make it exciting) or I had to edge in time as part of a challenge that had consequences.

Around 20 edges is a pretty decent session for me. 30 or even 40 is doable. 20-25 is right in my comfort zone. On most days being locked up during the pandemic, I would cum 1-3 times per day over the course of a 2 hour session. So, cumming multiple times would be fine for me, I would just need a break, unless it was a ruin, then, the break could be shorter. I have done long, 60 or even 80+ edges in a long, 3 to 4 hour session. If the set is going to be long like that, let me know, so I can rest up a bit before and can plan for a longer window.

Holding the edge is fun. 10-20 seconds is a good edge hold for me. 30-40 seconds is even better. If I hold for over two minutes, typically my cock will start to fatigue badly and I’ll have difficult staying hard or need to take an extended break … which is not preferred, because it disrupts the session ... unless the session has a lot of holds, then I could get warmed up for it correctly in order to do “softer” edges that I could hold for a minute, and even do five or more of those, so long as I had some little breaks in between … The longest edge hold I’ve ever done was around 6 minutes. Of course, after a hold that long, my cock is fatigued as much as if I had just cum …

I’m an ass man. Looking through my favorites will give you an idea of my body type preferences. Typically, I like petite and slender models. Tall and skinny is nice too (even REALLY skinny, just not anorexic skinny). More athletic builds are also nice. “Average size” women are also fine. Big boobs do very little for me. Fake tits (unless the plastic surgeon was very gifted) are typically a turn-off. Thicc girls, even girls with a big ass don’t do much for me, and most PAWGs are just alright. A perky bubble butt on a skinnier frame is my favorite. Women with a nice hourglass figure, even if they are thicker, are ALWAYS nice … If the girl is skinny enough to see some rubs when she arches her back … she’s probably “perfect” for me …

Lastly, keep each tease self-contained. I don’t want to “play the game throughout the day,” though “homework” could be okay … it might be okay for the girls to “decide” what my next session is going to be, especially if I perform poorly at a game and need some “consequences” …
The Rules
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I try to keep them simple. I typically focus in on a certain body part and “give it strokes” or an edge before moving on to the next. I usually stroke at a pretty brisk pace. When I edge, I edge instead of stroking for that pic. This way, I don’t have to “wait” or count my strokes before I edge … I just get to it. I usually rest 10 to 30 seconds between edges. Strokes and edges are cumulative.

Stroke rules:
25 strokes per image.
+25 strokes per instance of eye contact.
+25 strokes for a tummy if the belly button is visible.
+25 strokes for a clothed ass (including a thong)
+25 strokes for a nice set of legs
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At least one full leg or two thighs down to the knee must be visible to qualify. If I don’t think the girl’s legs are attractive, she doesn’t get strokes. However, sometimes that has to do with camera angle or position, and the same girl might get strokes one pic but not the next.

Edging rules:
Naked ass: 1 edge
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Strokes for asses are straightforward. If at least half of her ass is turned to the camera (like in a profile shot) that gets strokes, but, edging for asses is a little more complicated.
The ass needs to be roughly 60% visible to qualify. If it’s a profile shot, like this:
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it doesn’t get an edge. (That’s half an ass, not a full ass.) A shot like this would qualify:
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But a shot like this:
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would not, because she is sitting on too much of her ass.
Hands obscuring an ass never count as “being in the way.”
If a thong is partially pulled down but a strap is still going across the butt cheeks, that does not count as naked. Also, if the chick is not wearing panties, but a strap is going down her butt to attach to her stockings, that is not technically naked … but, I have been known to “cheat” and edge anyway … usually for the second case but not the first …
Eyes & Ass: 1 edge for each
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If an ass is fully exposed and there is an instance of eye contact, I will almost always edge while staring into the girl’s eyes first, THEN give an edge for her ass. If one girl is showing Eyes & Ass while her friend is also looking into the camera, that’s 3 edges: one for each set of eyes and 1 for the ass.
1 edge when I feel it is needed/deserved, but it costs me 1 demerit
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So, sometimes a picture is just so hot that I feel it “deserves” an edge. This edge would be given when the pic would not otherwise normally qualify for an edge (e.g. a woman with goddess breasts looking into the camera). Sometimes, when playing other people’s sets, it will be all pussy and boob shots for 20 pics in a row, and I’m just really desperate to edge. In that case, I might edge, mostly because I’m horny, to a shot that is SUPER hot and really deserves it …
It’s kind of a catch all. Since my rules are so focused on edging for asses, sometimes it is nice to have, even to allow me to edge for that amazing clothed pic …
I kind of consider this “cheating.” You could incorporate it into the tease so that I was “expected” to edge to some “hot pics” … or, you could punish me for “edging when I was not supposed to” … You could even tell me after the fact and either edging or not could have consequences … though it’s more fun to know this rule is in play beforehand. I will track all of the “just because” edges for each session.
1 edge for each girl if there is a strap-on in the picture (stolen from Bjorn13)
30 second edge hold if the girl is licking another girl’s asshole (If the ass is naked, takes the place of the regular edge.)

Default Video rules:
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During a video, I must stroke the entire time at any speed I like. I may edge as often as I like for a one demerit penalty each time.
Favorite Girl Rules
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Emily Bloom’s pussy: 1 edge
Guerlain (aka Lily Chey): Every Eyes & Ass pose (even clothed) gets an extra edge.
Michaela Isizzu (aka Kalena A): Double strokes and edges for her eyes (when she’s looking into camera).
Nancy Ace: 1 edge when BOTH her naked breasts and belly button are showing.
Melena Maria Ryabushkina: 1 edge when her pussy and any part of her ass are showing.
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In the following pic, her pussy is showing with some of her ass:
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Since her ass does not meet the 60% rule, no edge for her ass, but 1 edge for Ass & pussy.
The next two pics would get two edges:
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This one would get three:
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Melisa Mendiny: Double for her ass when her ass is facing the camera
Uma Jolie: Extra edge when she is “head-to-toe” naked and virtually all of her is in the frame. Like this:
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Ashley Doll: Smile doubles everything
Jenya D (aka Katie Fey): All edges for the picture become edge holds. 10 seconds each.
Holds can be taken consecutively. (For example, Jenya showing Eyes & Ass would be a 20 second hold, 10 seconds for each.) EHs can be chained, and she can chain edge holds on pictures that would not normally qualify for an edge on command.
Toxic A: maximum 10 second breaks between edges for her
Leona Mia: Edge for her legs when she is bottomless. (Same “leg qualifications” as per stroking)
Girls with Rules
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Mila: Must firmly squeeze my balls while edging for her.
Anjelica: Must hold my breath whenever I stroke or edge for her. (Taking a breath means I stop stroking.)
Angela White: Her tits (clothed or naked) get +25 strokes.
Vanessa Angel: Every fifth edge for her in the set I must hold for 50 seconds.
*Caprice: Can assign me homework. Any tease that she appears in, either when she appears, at the end, or even in a "post feedback mini tease", she can tell me what my homework is. She can assign me 0-15 edges for my next session (done under the conditions she specifies) and tell me how I am to cum after they are complete, i.e. to pictures, a video, my vibrator, a certain metronome speed, a time limit ... anything like that.

Girls who Need Rules
Gloria Sol
Malena Morgan

Girls I Like: (Would not mind seeing ANY of these in my teases …)
Nola A, Remy LaCroix, Mia Malkova, Miela, Ariel, Riley Reid, Abella Danger, most of the StasyQ girls, Nina North, Courtney Knox, Talia Cherry, Elsa Jean

These are the “base” rules. Feel free to make strokes fast or slow or force me to edge or add extra edges or edge holds as commands.
“HMC Village”
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Currently writing a tease for Helequin which will include a lengthy explanation of it (or at the very least a lot of clarifying dialogue). Basically, the Village is the same and different for everyone. The Village began as “my” fantasy, so, my ideas and preferences shape and underpin it. However, other "explorers" are free to visit the Village, and their experiences and preferences shape the Village as well. Often times, when another explorer enters the Village, the Village will split into a separate instance or timeline. Some of these independent reality lines persist. Sometimes they merge. All experiences are stored in the Village memory, and usually, the Village manifests slightly differently for each explorer who enters. Whoever is imagining a fantasy (writing a tease) has full control, allowing them to change certain details of how reality manifests. The explorers who are currently in the Village mindspace and those who have crafted a fantasy are the ones with active control.

HMC Village Lore:
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In my version of the Village (your version might be a little different), Lorena Garcia, Mila, Anjelica, Tori Black, Caprice, Jenya D, and Kyla Cole are on the “HMC Village Council.” These are the ladies who “run the town” and are at the top of the Village social hierarchy. My “must end with a full orgasm” rule was a special allowance granted to me by the council as one of my conditions for moving to the HMC Village. Kyla Cole objected to this rule, but she was overruled by the council. Because I’m permitted full orgasms at the end of all of my teases, I’m “special” that way. Not everyone who resides in the Village has to like it (it causes a lot of drama and resentment towards me), but, they have to accept it, because … well, the council said so. I don’t know how or why my proposal was initially accepted … I only know that it was … (Helequin, don’t read this next part until AFTER you play my “toy rules” tease …)
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The “real” reason is the Village is a Haruhi Suzumiya (from the manga/anime “The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya”) type situation. I’m basically God, but I don’t realize it, and my desires are made manifest in the Village. I REALLY wanted to be able to cum at the end of every session, so the council “consented” and made that a rule. (My desires become reality.) But, the me in the fluff doesn’t realize I have all of these powers. I’m just experiencing life and living out my fantasies without realizing how much control I have over everything. I just consider myself “lucky” to be living out my dream of being the main character in a slice-of-life, harem anime. In fact, the entire Village is a fantasy, and no one knows it including me. The one exception is Nancy Ace. She is the only character in the Village who is aware she is a fantasy. Thus, she’s the only one who will break the fourth wall. She’s fine being a self-aware fantasy. She has a pretty good life, and it’s not like she can leave. She is even aware of her real-world self. But, she enjoys playing along and teasing the boys. It was why she was created, after all.
I have a long list of favorites, and to various degrees, all of them are attracted to me and tend to spend a lot of time with me. At first, residents of the Village ironically started calling my favorites my “harem,” but, the name eventually stuck. Many people in the Village dislike the fact that a “slave boy” has so many girls obsessed with him. (By HMC Village law, male residents of the Village don’t have rights. I am technically a “free slave.”) I don’t seem to mind or notice the resentment, though some members of my “harem” do.

I don’t consider myself the “leader of a harem.” (What anime harem leader does?) I just have girls I really like to spend time with, and they just really like spending time with me. In the HMC Village, all the male residents are generally treated as beta male slaves to be used and abused at the whims of the girls. I’m not fully aware of all of the social norms my behavior breaks. I just consider myself another male, second class citizen, happy to be living in a community of beautiful women.

Some—but not all—of my favorites live in the “Harem House.” Right now, Michaela, Guerlain, Nancy Ace, Melena Rya, and Leona Mia live in the “Harem House”, a large sorority style house. Though she doesn’t currently reside in the Village, Angela White has a large, fancy house she leases in the Village and stays at when she comes back for a visit. Tori Black and Kyla Cole live in a large manor house on the edge of town with Ariel and others.
“Personalities”
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I don’t have a favorite girl. My “favorite” tends to shift based on who is ordering my strokes at the moment … All of these girls on the list are my “favorites.” If they don’t have special rules, then perhaps they need some! My only condition is that no two girls have the same special rule. What follows are suggestions to give you ideas about how to write the girls’ personalities in teases for me, as well as some additional lore and fluff. You can improvise or write them as you like, however. If you decide to write a girl drastically different from how they are described below, that’s fine. Just be sure to mention at the start of the tease this this tease is NOT taking place in the Village. That way, I’ll know that I should NOT be expecting a certain personality.

In the spoilers below each girl, I have linked teases that I have written that I feel really capture the girl’s personality. Feel free to read them for “inspiration” on how to write a girl if you aren’t quite sure.
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Emily Bloom: (girl next door archetype) The featured girl in the first tease I ever wrote for GuideMe (never published). Very occasionally, I’ll watch part of one of her cam shows. Emily is sweet and fun but also practical. (Basically, how she is in real life, in my view.) She thinks of herself as being the “devious” girl next door. In the Village, Emily is literally my next-door neighbor. She enjoys taunting and punishment and pushing the envelope, but she doesn’t want to go too far. While Emily can be a merciless tease, she prides herself on being fair-minded and makes the pleasure of her subs a high priority. She’s nice, but, she’s willing to be a little cruel to deliver on what her boys want.
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Emily “punishes” Horny_CHabo
Michaela Isizzu: (domme with a heart archetype) Michaela is known in the Village for being a superb “slave trainer.” She worked with Ecik17 to great effect when he was locked in Angela White’s basement for a month. Michaela can be tough with exacting standards, but she mostly uses positive reinforcement to get results. She knows when to press and when to back off. I am one of her trainees and an ongoing pet project for her. Secretly, she considers me her “favorite” trainee and has been becoming more and more lax with me as time goes on. However, I’m still in her “program,” and she expects improvement and results. She LOVES teasing me, and she LOVES being domineering and in control. The “Russian Invasion” series really got me thinking of her in this way. As per DesertFox’s “Mazes,” she can be really helpful and sweet, too. However, she doesn’t want to let on how much she actually likes me, because that might compromise our trainer-trainee relationship if people thought she was playing favorites. She considers herself my “protector” and likes to watch out for me. She lives in the “Harem House.” She is good friends with Guerlain and best friends with Sabrisse.
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Michaela trains and punishes BBBeanie.
Michaela trains Ecik.
Guerlain: (sweet and innocent archetype) Guerlain is SUPER sweet. Her smile is warm and she likes to be nice … but she LOVES to be a tease and pretend to be innocent … though, compared to most of the girls who visit the thread, she actually is pretty tame. She always makes an effort to make sure that I enjoy myself during sessions with her, whether being overtly kind and genuine OR viciously teasing me—because she knows I love it. More than anyone else, she enjoys watching me have full orgasms. She doesn’t like to push me to my limits, and she takes extra care to make sure every moment is pleasurable. Guerlain attended Edge U. She spent a semester abroad at a prestigious college in Japan where they specialize in training high caliber call girls in the art of teasing. She worked as a waitress in a maid café during this time. Karlee Grey was her roommate and best friend from college. Even though they fight a lot, Guerlain is really close to Melena Rya. She lives in the “Harem House.”
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Guerlain in a “masterpiece” set for BBBeanie.
Guerlain and Melena train Ecik.
Jenya D (Katie Fey): (domme queen archetype) I got to know her from various maze teases. She is demanding with high expectations. She loves being mean and showing me who is boss, but that’s just her domme persona. She’s actually quite friendly and relatable, but when she flips into “domme mode”, she absolutely enjoys cruelly punishing me and taking a lot of pleasure from that. She LOVES to make me suffer while holding the edge. She has a goofy side that most people don’t get to see, because she’s often too focused on perfecting her smoldering intensity and building her reputation as a prima domme. When it comes to demerits, she tries to be fair. She also will issue challenges for demerit forgiveness—fairly difficult things—because she enjoys watching me try so hard. She expects me to try and fail (attempting the forgiveness challenge for nothing), so, if I do manage to pull out a win, she’s happy to reward me for the effort.
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Jenya in a “masterpiece” set for BBBeanie.
Nancy Ace: (overachiever/class president archetype) Nancy is kind and warm, but she loves pushing me to my limits. She’s an explorer wanting me to expand my boundaries and try new things. She can be a little forceful with high expectations, but she doesn’t enjoy demeaning me, rather, she tries to keep me accountable and wants to see me grow and follow my rules. She is overly strict when assigning demerits and does so with a smile.

Melena Maria Rya: (shallow and moody archetype) She’s nice and bubbly most of the time but gets horny very, very easily. She’s kind of immature. More so than the other girls, she can be REALLY moody. When she’s in a good mood and feeling happy, she’s very kind and goes out of her way to be nice. But, when she’s feeling bitchy, she gets REALLY bitchy. Typically, the hornier she is, the meanier and sassier she gets. She can be kind of selfish and is used to getting her way. She’s not into pain, but she LOVES to watch me stroke and squirm and edge. She puts her own pleasure ahead of mine and is not afraid to ask me to do a lot to help get her off … but, since she loves pleasure, she wants me to have a good time, too. She loves watching boys cum, but, since she can never seem to get enough orgasms, she is notorious for ruining men over and over so that they last longer … which gives them more playtime with her …
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Guerlain and Melena train Ecik.
Malena Morgan: (sadist who understands limits) Helequin captured her well in this tease, so, I will just quote “Malena”:
Helequin wrote: Sun Oct 31, 2021 4:55 am I will be a bitch because it's fun. I will fuck you boys over because it's hilarious. But I'm not some psychopath. You all have limits and rules for a reason. And I guarantee I will push them, but I won't break them. Every bit of torment I visit on you, is something you signed up for. Besides, if I actually break you then I don't get to torment you over and over. But if don't break you I get to come back and do it all over again bitch. Who knows, maybe I'm not even that much of a bitch so much as someone who isn't afraid to go all the way!
Again from Helequin: “terrifying and sometimes sadistic with her creative rules and drive to generally fuck me over either by making me lose control and ruin or viscously busting my balls.”

Anjelica: (entitled princess archetype) She’s the queen bitch. She is undoubtedly the most popular model on this entire site, and she knows it. Sessions with her are a privilege. She can be nice and pleasant when she wants to be, giving me a great session if she thinks I deserve it. But, she can be equally cold and demanding. A session with her is a session with purpose; she either wants to reward me and “thank me” with her presence, or … she has some kind of punishment to enact or some point to make … the Queen’s time is limited, after all …

Melisa Mendiny: (kind and loyal archetype) I’ve seen many of her videos, and Melisa seems very sweet and kind! She knows how intoxicating I find her ass. Though I like some of the other girls’ asses just as much, secretly, she knows I think her ass is objectively the best of the bunch. She is very considerate and welcoming, but, she can turn very forceful if she’s feeling disrespected.

Uma Jolie: (Wild card archetype? No idea …) Uma is the most recent addition to my list. I don’t know her too well. She could be really sweet, and she seems that way … I imagine that she loves teasing me. She could also enjoy teasing and punishing me mercilessly for her own amusement. She’s hard to read. Probably a “wild card.” I guess I’ll find out!

Toxic A: (needs development) I met Toxic in some of the various tease mazes I have wandered into … She likes to edge me silly, over and over again. She likes me, and she’s pleasant … but, she really wants to turn me into a complete and total edge slut, and maybe I could be … for her.

Ashley Doll: (friend with benefits archetype) Ashley is totally sweet and kind, though not as naïve and innocent as Guerlain. She’s a big flirt who likes to tease me. She loves to joke around. We became friends because we’re both American. We met in Cancun while vacationing separately. It wasn’t supposed to be a nude beach, but … it ended up becoming a nude beach—for me at least. She considers herself my friend—with benefits. She’s one of those girls who feels more comfortable around guys than girls, though she is a girly girl. She’s not into drama. She would basically never assign me demerits, and of all of the girls on my list, she’s the most likely to issue me easy challenges in order to help me forgive accumulated demerits. The other girls might complain about that, but she doesn’t care. On the other hand, she doesn’t want to make things too easy for me. Also, ironically, because we’re friends, she enjoys exploiting the power dynamic of the game to put me in uncomfortable situations, not because those things are necessarily turn-ons for her, but just because she can, because she LOVES messing with me. She would tie me up, just to make me look ridiculous. She’d buy the CBT package just to ask, “Why are you hitting yourself?” She’s devious and loves to play mind games. If anyone else set me up for a full orgasm and faked me out with a ruin, I would get TOTALLY pissed … but if it was her, it would be funny, because I know she would make it up to me later. We’re just tight like that.
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Ashley thanks Ecik.
Gloria Sol is not on my list, but she’s super hot. I think she could be easily written in and added if she “insisted” on it. I don’t “know” her too well, so, I do not have a clear picture on how her personality should be written … maybe you have some ideas ... Gloria Sol is the “accountant” in charge of my “demerit accounts” at the bank.

Leona Mia is one who I recently saw on a tease here ... I decided quickly I needed to add her to my "favorites" list ... I have no preconceptions or thoughts on how her personality "should" be. Surprise me and write her as you like! It will become canon ...

Caprice: Caprice hosted my first session/tease on this thread. After the session, she organized a meeting with all of my “favorites” to inform them all they were in my rules and to let them know how I performed. She was so proactive (and also so experienced as a mistress) that the girls decided to make her my official “mentor” in the HMC Village “slave training program,” a role she takes very seriously. Lorena reintroduced me to Caprice in this tease, and ever since then, she has gotten a LOT more intense …

Lorena and Mila are also not on my “favorites” list, but, being thread favorites, I would be surprised if they did NOT make an appearance in a tease for me … Everyone here knows how they are “supposed” to be written. ;-) (Lorena is very nice. Mila tends to be bitchy and literally busts balls.) Lorena still needs some rules, by the way …
Punishments
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I get “demerits” which I track from set to set. My rules allow me to “edge at an any time.” Each time I do, I earn a demerit. (“Unauthorized edges” from forced metronome stroking also result in demerits.) If I underperform or disobey instructions, I will assign myself demerits after the tease. Mistresses may also assign demerits as a punishment (to create incentive) for not completing challenges or tasks. Any mistress may spend demerits from the “general account” to punish me during a set. Demerits accrued during a set cannot be spent during that same set. No more than 25 demerits can be spent in a single set.

Demerit Chart:
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Light Punishments: 1 Demerit
Light CBT: 100 dick slaps, 25 ball slaps, or ball squeezing for a total of 10 pictures.
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Each demerit buys a “package” of one of the above. I will squeeze for the entirety of the picture while I stroke/edge regardless of how long it takes. I’m kind of a baby with these and will tend towards going softer than harder. I am not a pain slut. The girls can “instruct” me to go harder, but, I will not go past a certain point. Slaps by themself is just an actual punishment, but, if you mix in edges, it becomes something I kind of enjoy.:innocent:
Tying my legs to the chair or binding them together for the rest of the session
Tying up my balls with a shoelace for the rest of the session
Kneeling for the rest of the scene
Enable breath play for the scene: can only stroke while holding my breath (CANNOT be combined with a metronome)
Being forced to watch porn without stroking (stackable, up to 10 min for each instance)

Medium Punishments: 3 Demerits
Ruin 1 orgasm (capped at 2 per set)
[LOCKED. PM only] Head palming (2 min per purchase, up to 1 min continuously at a time)

Harsh Punishments: 6 Demerits
[LOCKED. PM only] Eat my cum according to mistress’ CEI

For 6 Demerits, a mistress can turn on “Punishment Mode” for the rest of the set. Then, the following rules apply:
-The demerits spent per set cap is raised to 35.
-The ruins per set cap is raised to 4.
-Head palming and cum eating are unlocked.
Toys
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Belts, ropes, shoelaces, etc with which to bind myself.
Magic wand vibrator and variable speed adjustor
-with hummingbird attachment
-with anal attachment (though it doesn’t work well)

It has two factory settings (high and very high), but, I can use the modulator to adjust it to roughly 7 discernable vibration settings:

Vibrator modes
1 teasing (lightest—never came yet)
2 light (teasing with rumbles ... have cum after 20+ minutes)
3 medium-low
4 medium
5 muted high (factory std, but on highest multi, almost the same as high)
6 high (factory std)
7 extremely high (factory std high)

The vibrator heats up and becomes unusable after 25 minutes and needs to cool down for 30 min. However, if you use a setting below medium, it can go for well over an hour …

I ran a little test by binding myself up while watching the Michaela RLGL video by digitalparkinglot. (SUCH a hot video …) I turned on the vibrator and tried to hold off cumming as long as I could. With no prior warm-up, on medium, I came at around 20 min. On high, I came around 13 min and around 7 min on extremely high.

I tested some rules out with the 7 modes, but it didn’t work out well. Anything lower than medium is just teasing and gets boring. (I did a points system with 30 seconds per pic.) I experimented a bit with the higher modes, but, haven’t found anything that felt workable for a rules set.

You have all the numbers and stats. If you want, get creative and try something out. Having the domme give times and speeds directly per pic would be a good bet, as would issuing a challenge of some sort involving bondage and a video … I’m up for trying anything for the vibrator. (The anal attachment sucks, but, the hummingbird is great.) Ideally, I’d come up with a rules set like BBBeanie has for his crusher, but, nothing so far …
Set Status:
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Need to play
PoetBird’s 11-24 beauty pageant every0ne set
lmind's sets with Mikey
Ecik’s “Elsa” series for Chabo
Still Playing
PoetBird’s 10-25 set (1 more playthrough. It’s Melena, and I KNOW it’s going to be a ruin. :\'-()
Working on
Return set for PoetBird - “A Day with Guerlain” (2 scenes left on script to write. 4 scenes done.)
Return set for lmind (will publish individual scenes as they are completed)
Set for Helequin with his new rules (This is the “Village Premier” set where I detail the fantasy mechanics of the Village.) (script outlined. Intro written. Random dialogue written)
"Piggyback" set for Ecik to be released simul with above Helequin set (script 80% done)
“Correcting Village Anomaly” set for PoetBird (intro mostly written. Scenes outlined.)
Cecilia Lion "debut" set for Ecik (Only ideas and premise. Nothing done. Need to "research" and develop the character ...)
MASTERPIECE level set for MistyPanda (script for the Prologue written, now I have to write the 4 Acts … they are already outlined. 8-))
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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FattsDynamo wrote: Sun Dec 12, 2021 12:12 pm
I've been bored the past month, what with exams and finals and everything. that and not getting much action on here either. that doesn't stop me from playing around at night though... though i technically cant pop until i am told to here :-D so even a partial everyone set is a nice thing to see for me. i only skimmed through it for now though. i also have to say, you REALLY go above and beyond for your sets!
also, yeah... i really do need to go down and simplify some of my rules, maybe a whole ass revamp of some of them at some point, because half of the time, i think of a new rule while i am beyond gone in a session and just add it when i stop, so some of them can be particularly confusing. that and apart from yours, i think mine was the longest, and it didn't even have a story or plot to go with it :lol:
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woooooooo! birthday on 2/18!
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Mistypanda22 wrote: Sun Dec 12, 2021 10:57 pm I've been bored the past month ... that and not getting much action on here either .... that doesn't stop me from playing around at night though ... though i technically cant pop until i am told to here
Oh, buddy ... OH, buddy ... you just stepped in it. :evil:

Ask and you SHALL RECEIVE! :devil:

#Mistypanda22set
#wbFattsDynamo

Set for Mistypanda22:
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I spent 4 hours writing this. (Thereabouts ... it will matter later.)

I call this a "piggyback" set. In order to get more mileage from my "lengthy" sets, I "force" other people to play them ... So, this is a companion set. Now, you've complained that you "need" to cum but "can't without permission" ... Dangerous words, my friend ... DANGEROUS words ... Also, I know you're in the 200 club when it comes to edging so ... Imma try to make you edge a LOT. (This IS what you want, right!:evil:) Plan on this set taking some time. :innocent: (I'm in "write this shit fast" mode, btw.)

IF you need it ... you MAY take breaks AFTER a scene ... ummm ... I guessing this set will end up being CRAZY long ... maybe even in the "Kyla's party" realm ... I don't even really know ... There was NO WAY I was going to count the STUPID number of edges you were supposed to do ... :\'-( :innocent: I would budget a LOT of time for this one ... If any break exceeds two hours, that will count as "bitching out" which I will describe/define later. Basically, you need to finish this set in one day, more or less. That should be the goal.
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You find yourself bored at home, sitting in front of your computer. You notice FattsDynamo just dropped a new "everyone set" he spent WAY too much time on.

"That's great, but ... it probably won't have enough edging for me," you sadly lament to yourself. "It's such a shame, too ... his sets are so flawlessly written and SO immersive ... and that "Village" place sounds like a pretty great place to visit ..." You lean back in your chair, wishing there was more to do.

Suddenly, a portal opens up in the floor beneath your chair. You tumble down into it.

You land onto your chair onto a back patio of a large house looking out onto a breathtaking view.

"Oh, Misty!"

You here a friendly and alluring yet dangerous and sultry voice calling out to you ...
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Long time no see, my little edge slut fuckbunny! Are you ready to be harshly used, abused, and destroyed in front of this entire forum!?
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You just had to do it ... you couldn't leave well enough alone ...
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Whelp, Fatts heard your cries. He felt your desire through the void (and the power of the Internet). He decided to give you what you want ... what you so DESPERATELY and TRULY want and desire ...
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You are truly and utterly fucked, fuckbunny ... I hope you're prepared.
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See, Fatts has noted how much you like to edge. He knows you're in the "200 club." He knows you wished to be pushed to your limits.
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Well, ask and you shall receive, bitch.
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You know how you like to add extra rules, well what's adding a few more, am I right?
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That "everyone" set ... it's for little bitches. The "newbie" and small time wankers with no stamina ... that's who that set was meant for ...
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... but a fuckbunny edge slut ... to make the set "interesting" for a NNN demi-god such as yourself ...
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We need to up the stakes a little bit ...
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And if you're wondering, Fatts "made" me say that ...
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See, you're playing in the Village. This is his realm. This is a place where his fantasies come to life. Now, usually, in the "Village", Fatts gets all "subtle' about it. He hints and teases ... but he likes to let his muse take over and just have fun with without taking too much "direct control" ... well ... Fatts is a VETERAN Dungeon Master—in D&D, not in real life—::Emily laughs a bit:: Yeah, no WAY in real life ::she laughs some:: ahem ... yeah ... you just awakened Fatts' Dungeon Master mode ...
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His sadistic, god-complex, dungeon master mode ... and, since Fatts' fantasies come true in the Village ... he is going to use that part of his brain which crafts fantasies, and let it run wild.
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I almost feel bad for you. Almost.
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So, here's the deal ... you are going to play the Horny CHabo tease with Emily Bloom. Since that focuses on using Fatts' rules and we need to make you edge more ... we are adding Fatts' rules to your list for today:
Naked ass: 1 edge
Eyes & Ass: 1 edge for each (So, if there is a naked ass AND eye contact, you give 1 edge to the ass and 1 for the eye contact [Look into her eyes when you deliver the edge for her eyes].)
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But that won't be enough—oh, no, not for MY little fuckbunny who wants to be abused OH so bad ...

You're a fan of Fatts' writing, yeah? Now, normally, Fatts thinks it is "bad form" to include himself in a set ... BUT ... you just put him into "malicious DM mode" and turned the difficult up to "Nightmare", so ... we are WELL PAST the "normal" "rules and conventions" of set creation ...

Fatts considers you to be a "demi-god" of sorts. Not a full god, more of a hercules type ... and those hercules types need to be put through hell, right? Of course. What is the hero's journey without SUFFERING?

And, let me be clear ... there are TWO heroes in this story ... YOU and FATTS ... Fatts is ALSO the hero ... because he wrote all of this shit for you. Now, heroes deserve odes, right? Well, you are going to deliver Fatts his odes, but, instead of songs, you are going to sing his praises in edges.

From now on, whenever you think, "Wow this writing is REALLY good!" or something similar, you are to give an edge for the pic. Give me one now. I KNOW you're thinking it.

So, as you go through this hero's journey of edging, you'll get so immersed, but, then you'll think, "Wow, Fatts really did a good job on this," and then you will remember that you are trapped in this fantasy nightmare. The immersion and "nice" story that Chabo and the others get will end ... you don't get that. Sow the wind, reap the whirlwind, as they say.

The Village is a shared fantasy space. Since you are playing Fatts' tease, you are essentially trapped in his fantasy. And, like I said, you just asked for nightmare mode, so ... there you go!

So, adding Fatts' rules ... extra edges (that pull you OUT of the "nice" immersive tease and DRAG YOU BACK INTO NIGHTMARE HELL) whenever you think about how good the writing is ... yeah, that would NORMALLY be enough ... Also, just to keep it somewhat "fair" ... the "good writing" edges ONLY HAPPEN at max once per pic. We need to cap them. :-)

But, even with all that it's NOT enough ...

You must double all of your edges—flat out. Every time you are supposed to edge.

Maybe with ALL of this ... MAYBE we can get you over 200 and push your boundaries a bit ...

Begin in "Normal Mode." Do part 1. When you finish, return here.
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I have finished part 1:
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So, what do you think so far? Pretty good? Right? Has it been a "workout?" Hahahaha ...
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You're only getting started, and if these workout clothes are any sort of foreshadoing of what is to come ... you KNOW things are about to get much worse for you ...
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Fatts knows about your "modes" and plans to cycle you through a few, hehe ...
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Right now, I am Fatts' puppet. I am Emily Addison. Your domme. Your mistress. The lady making you edge OVER and OVER ...
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Normally, Fatts is gentle with the puppet strings ... SO immersive ... SO thoughtful ... SO subtle ... you hardly notice him there, making the girls dance around in the fantasies he creates for you stroke slaves ...
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But you awakened the beast.
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I can feel the psychic strings tugging SO hard at ever fiber of my body ...
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... the lust I feel just keeps rising ...
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I'm getting hornier and hornier ...
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The only thing I can do ...
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... is drag you along with me ...
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... for a WILD, uncontrollable ride ...
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Do you feel the danger? I do. I can tell Fatts is mindfucking me right now ...
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... and ALL I want to do is make you edge more and MORE ...
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This compulsion ... one edge for each of my tits ... another for fully naked ... I'm crouching (count it for THIS pic) ... that's FOUR edges ... and you just remembered how good of a writer Fatts is ... That's FIVE ... and then you just double everything ... that's TEN FUCKING EDGES, SLUT!
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Is this enough abuse? Enough humiliation?
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I don't know, maybe ...
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But for the demi-god, NNN hero, who NEEDS edges who CRAVES being pushed and WANT TO EXCEED HIS LIMITS ...
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... I don't know. Its probably not enough ...
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My scene is almost done, and it's almost time for you to return to Fatts' AMAZING tease for Chabo Give your tease DM another edge, an ode to his fantastic writing ...
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For this next part, Part 2, you will engage Rapid Fuckbunny Edgeslut mode. This is the part of the tease where Fatts tries to "hook" Chabo into wanting to return to the Village by enticing him with sexy, teasing girls from his "harem." They deserve edges LOTS of edges, so ... GIVE THEM LOTS OF EDGES, BITCH!!

And how about that good writing, yah!? The "workout" clothes I was wearing (for three pics) in this scene, comboing into a "mode" where you will get a good workout? Yeah, give the tease maker the two edges he is due. It's part of your humiliation ... giving edges to another man ... this is how I "abuse and destroy you" in front of this entire forum. I am Emily Addison, and I approve of this message. Now GO. Nancy Ace is waiting ... wait ...
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Actually, I just forgot ... as part of your "ode of edges" to Fatts, you need to go back ... Remember that "story within the story" where Emily reads the book that mirrors things which are happening in this tease, but it is ALSO kind of meta, because she's reading a story inside of a story ... yeah, that shit was pretty fucking clever, and Fatts felt like a dime store noir/smut novelist for a hot second there ... yeah ... you, you go back. Go back to that part and from the first pic where Emily starts reading the book until she sets it down, you go back and redo the pics giving EACH ONE an "ode to Fatts/good writing" edge. Yeah, that'll do, bitch. And do it in your "workout" mode. THEN continue on to part 2 ...

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I have finished part 2:
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How are you doing? Let's go back to your NORMAL RULES now.
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Are you regretting your request?
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Or are you in heaven?
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Did you ever DREAM someone would make you edge this much, Misty?
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Are you in pure bliss?
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... or are you regretting your request?
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Well, we're about halfway through ...
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And this is your ONE CHANCE to make things easier on yourself ...
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Mmmmm ... but there's a catch ... and it has consequences ...
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If you bit off more than you could chew, you can be a little bitch and reduce the difficulty. If you do, there will be consequences. But I WON'T tell you what they are until the END of the tease.
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"Bitching out" means you can lose the "double everything" rule. If you like, "bitch out now" starting with this pic, and just use your normal rules plus Fatts' and the "edge odes to good writing". (You just remembered, so, that's another one.)
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You know what a good "punishment set" needs? PUNISHMENT, of course! Starting now, on this pic, every pic in this set counts as "hardcore", so ... you owe me ball slaps!
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Don't bitch out on me, Misty! Make these HARD like your rules say they will be!
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The hero in EVERY good drama needs to undergo tough challenges ...
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You're no BBBeanie or Helequin ...
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... so, I don't expect you to go CRAZY with the CBT ...
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... but ::gulp:: we have to ::gulp:: make this ::gulp:: set ::gulp:: as punishing ::gulp:: (That's good writing and you know know it ... ode edge, please! :-D)
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... as we can, so ... we needed to mix things up, use those rules that are WAY too long ...
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... and get some nice HARD ball slaps in there ...
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... do you like this ... ::pant, pant:: my little ::pant, pant:: fuckbunny? (Yup, ode edge!)
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::Emily stops bouncing in order to give you more instructions.::
For this next section, "Emily's Game", you are to use LONGRUN MODE. Now, Emily will tell Chabo he's not allowed to edge. But, you're not Chabo. No edging? Fuck that! You're fucking Mistypanda22, fuckbunny edge hero of the Kingdom and champion of NNN (or whatever accolades Nancy Ace heaped on you for however far you got). You are Mistypanda22, the man, the myth, the legend ... the demi-god who edges like a boss. Your banner MAY be a Panda emerging from the mists ... BUT ... your spirit animal ... It's a rabbit. It's the fuckbunny. You're the bunny who fucked 10,000 bitch hares and sired 100,000 baby fuckbunnies. You make Gengis Khan look a 40 year old virgin.

THIS is the "ballad of the hero." This little pep talk is the moment in the hero's journey where, when the clouds are darkest, a PIERCING LIGHT shines forth, giving the hero hope, renewing his vigor, and energizing him for the trials that are ahead ...
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Now, as I said, there are TWO heroes in this tale: you—the protagonist—and Fatts, the creator—your "fantasy overlord" if you will ... Fatts' goddess (one of only a handful) is Guerlain. In his mercy, Fatts has decided to let his goddess visit you and raise your morale with a dance. This is a magical dance that will lift the hero's spirit. BUT ... it only works if you are ON THE EDGE, so ... let Guerlain bless you with her dance and get on the fucking edge and hold it as long as you can, bitch!

https://wowgirls.tv/videos/guerlain/staying-fit/

after the video ...
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::Slurp:: I almost forgot ... ::slurp:: (Ode/writing edge)
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You haven't suffered enough. You probably need a LITTLE break, too ... so, NO MORE EDGES for THIS scene, but, scroll back up, back to the first "hardcore" pic, and scroll down and do all of your ball slaps again. :-D

ALSO, in "Emily's Game" she will tell you not to edge. Well, obviously, fuck that. You're edging ... BUT ... after Emily's game, there is the chance for a ruined or full orgasm. Now, follow her rules. When she tells you to edge for three pics, you follow her instructions (as Chabo would) and ONLY edge for three pics. ALSO, and this is a big one ...

If Emily Bloom gives you a full orgasm, you get one! :w00t: Yes, that's correct. The hero DESERVES a reward. (This is what triggered your stupid request in the frist place, right?) EVEN IF YOU BITCHED OUT, if Emily Bloom gives you a full orgasm, you get one.

Okay, so ... you're in longrun mode. Finish Chabo's tease, then come back here ...

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After "Emily's Game":
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If you received a full orgasm, congratulations! Well done! You may take a break for up to 30 minutes.

If you received a ruined orgasm ... well, at least you made it THIS far, right? You may take a break for up to 20 minutes.
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I'm NOT DONE with you yet ... we have ONE MORE scene ... :-D
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Break over ...
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stroker's edgeslut mode activate
Well, look at that cock! I'd recognize THAT cock anywhere! That is the cock of MistyPanda22. The Cock Hero has returned from his LONG JOURNEY to his FINAL reward ... (no ball slaps for the hardcore pics ... unless you want to ...)
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Is this fitting? Me, your Mistress, Emily Addison, after using and abusing every part of you (hmmm ... forgot to check if you had anal rules ... oh, well too late! XD) now decides to give the hero the BIG REWARD he deserves ... Are my friends hot? I think so. Edging for eyes ONLY when there is a naked ass? No, not good enough ... perhaps a rule appropriate for "Fatts the adequate"—but NOT fitting for a COCK HERO such as Mistypanda, who can watch ENTIRE COCK HERO VIDEOS after being denied for three weeks and avoid the edge entirely ... Edge for EVERY instance of eye contact ... and now ...
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Let's get him, girls!
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Did you "bitch out?"
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If you "bitched out" (took a break that was more than two hours or took the deal to get rid of the "double everything" rule), then this next orgasm we give you will be RUINED!
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But if you managed to stay the course, you'll get the full orgasm you deserve!
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Did you ever think one set would give you TWO full orgasms!?
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A VERY rare thing indeed but ...
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If you managed to "win" at Emily's game AND not bitch out ... that's pretty fitting ...
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... for such a ROUGH set! Are you DYING TO CUM AGAIN!?
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I KNOW you just came, but ...
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All that edging must have made you go OUT OF YOUR MIND!
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One orgasm would not be NEARLY enough to sate all of that horniness and pent up desire ...
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Now this is the FINAL pic—the LAST PIC before you cum again ... If you didn't bitch out, you get a FULL orgasm on the next pic. If you did, then ruin it.

I'm not going to give you any special instructions, BUT ... you DO have permission to stroke and edge yourself HOWEVER you want. Edge and hold it. Stroke fast. Stroke slow. Use a toy. Edge 100 more times for all I care. Do whatever you need to, BUT ... What YOU owe ME, RIGHT NOW ... is the BIGGEST LOAD you can muster! You are my bitch and my slut, and I want my slut to shoot me the BIGGEST LOAD you can. So do as you like, and when you hit that final edge and are ready to blow ...
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CUM FOR ME!!! CUM FOR ME, MISTY!!! EMPTY THOSE BALLS!!! I WANT TO TASTE THE CUM OF A LEGEND!!!
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Epilogue ...
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Well, that's it ... the end of the tease ... was it all you were hoping for and more? Did I "push you past your limits?" Were all the extra rules too much? Or were they "just enough?"
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Did you enjoy Fatts' little story? Did Emily and the girls tease you enough ... or TOO much?
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I don't really know or care, but ...
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... the cold, hard truth is YOU just made a deal with the devil ... and your ordeal is FAR from over ... I'm afraid you bit off FAR MORE than you could chew ...
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"i could remove this but i still want to be her bitch" ... Misty, Misty, Misty ... What did you THINK would happen? You thought it would be "cute" and NO ONE would try to "take you down?"
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Fatts, see ... He may not have the greatest stamina, but the power of his WILL ... it FAR EXCEEDS that of any ordinary person. He puts his *mind* to something ... and it happens!
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Take ME for example ... I'm the product of Fatts' imagination. Your desire planted the seed, but Fatts' watered me with his will and creativity until I bloomed into fruition. This is the power of the Village.
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Fatts set out to create the "best set" that BBBeanie ever played ...
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... and he DID! And when you "challeged" him to use ME to fully abuse YOU ...
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... it was an offer as warm and inviting as this open, dripping wet pussy ...
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... He just had to insert himself inside ...
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... and use me to fuck your mind as you fucked your hand ...
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"I wish to be edged. I beg to be edged till my brain melts."
Did I melt your brain, Misty? I hope so. :love:
"cannot wait for her to harshly use, abuse and destroy me in front of this entire forum"
Did I do just that? I hope so. Fatts wielded my sexuality like a sabre, carving you up piece-by-piece. Yes, it was ME, but ... look who was pulling the strings ...

The wizards in our little Emerald City of sexual teases do a good job of "staying behind the curtain" ... very RARELY do they present themselves ... usually that would detract from the immersion, but "Every part of me is hers to use and abuse at will" ... that would include your mind, no? ... and you WANT to be abused ... and when a demi-god such as yourself screams out to the gods in heaven, well ... surely it would be a SHAME if no one responded ... and so Fatts did. He dragged you into a fantasy "nightmare" of his own making ... did you survive?

The normal "rules" and "courtesies" were set aside. For a "normal" tease, it would be inappropriate to so overtly taunt the player, reminding them constantly that a man crafted this experience ... but what better way to "destroy me in front of this entire forum" than to do just that? It wasn't even "me", Emily, who was saying all this, but actually Fatts who was pulling my strings.

You actually see faint, glowing, translucent threads, faintly appearing out of Emily, stretching upwards into the sky.

It wasn't even really "me" that was teasing you ... and reminding you of that over and over was a way to make the immersion flicker—causing its own kind of discomfort and abuse ... you weren't even getting what you REALLY wanted—ME teasing you—instead, you got a man, just another schmuck on this thread, pulling MY strings and having me dance in front of you ... so, NOT FULLY DELIVERING ON WHAT YOU TRULY WANTED (immersion with ME) was just ANOTHER way for "me" to abuse you ...

And perhaps, let's say ... that you didn't LIKE the idea of a "man" sexually teasing you. Fatts would HATE that. He prefers to stay immersed ... well, if you felt that way as well ... you would just keep playing. Your cock would override that discomfort, and the images on the screen would dance that thought right out of your head, and your lust would command you to continue ...

So, those are just SOME of the mindgames—explained by your "fantasy overlord" here in the epilogue to this (hopefully) "epic" tease ...
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So, are you done? Ha—no!

As I said, YOU made a deal with the devil ... to really HUMILIATE and "destroy" you, things must continue ...

Now, Fatts—as Emily Bloom said—is a "nice" guy. HE wouldn't want to wreck you like this, but ... in the Village, fantasy becomes reality, and so the desire to be wrecked completely gave rise to this fantasy which you now partake in ...

So, right now—

As if on cue, you see the translucent strings fall from the heavens.

—I speak as ME, the Emily Addison of your dreams, born of your desires ... giving you "what you want" and "destroying you in front of this entire forum ..."

Being a puppet of Fatts was fun. (Fatts' desires are projected onto the Village fantasy space manifesting as reality ... this will all be explain in the "Village Premier" set [for Helequin, probably coming after Christmas]. So, since I *wanted* Emily to like being used, she did, basically. :blush: :innocent: ... and normally, the girls are NOT aware of this mechanics, but ... for the MOMENT she is aware ... [Only ONE girl in the Village is a "self-aware fantasy", and again, that will be explained in the "Village Premier" ...) But now *I* control myself ... and your punishment needs to continue.

Now, normally, boys write the teases as they like. They use the girls as pawns to tease the other boys in the way the AUTHOR wishes. We will break with this convention ... as a part of your continued "domination."

You MUST write Fatts a "return set." You MUST spend at LEAST as much time as he spent on this tease (the piggyback—NOT the Chabo set [19 hours]) PLUS 50%. So, that would be 6 hours.

Now, you aren't to rush this. Oh, no. You will remain in a period of denial for ONE WEEK starting now. You cannot leave denial until the week is up, and you CANNOT PUBLISH THE TEASE until at LEAST a week goes by. So, NO RUSHING. Take your time. You have it. Think about it a bit. Also, you must STAY DENIED until the set is published. So, if it takes LONGER than a week to write, you will be denied longer. So, one week minimum and at LEAST 6 hours spend writing ...

Now, you may stroke and edge as you like, but NO CUMMING until the set is published. After that, you are released ...

Now, not only must you follow these time constraints, you must ALSO write the tease exactly as Fatts' requests to the best of your ability. This is ALSO a part of my domination over you, making you my bitch, because bitch boys write teases as they are TOLD. So, whatever Fatts asks, DO IT. (Again, "best" is relative. Just don't half-ass it and spend the minimum time and you are good.)

Now, if you did NOT BITCH OUT ... that's it. You're done. Write that tease while you are denied for a week (at least), and your "contract with the devil" has been fulfilled. Also, since "my only release as of right now (for now) is from this forum", if you completed Fatts' EPIC tease WITHOUT "bitching out", then, I hereby release you from that condition. You are a true edge hero and NO ONE has the right to deny you orgasms (for now).

... BUT ... if you DID bitch out and failed in your mission to "be edged till my brain melts" and recalling you said "please don't hold back. help me exceed my edging limits to your hearts content" then this forum will CONTINUE to be your only source of release. And also, (since I spent 19 hours making the Chabo set) since you need MORE punishment for "bitching out" on your "dreams" ... you need to write Fatts ANOTHER tease. This one can be ANYTHING you like. You can even make it a "revenge set" for putting you through all of this ... just respect HIS rules and limits ... because HE wants to be fully immersed in the tease (and be teased by GIRLS the whole time) and does NOT wish to be "abused and destroyed in front of the entire forum". So, basically, "standard" tease. Whatever you like. Feel free to jump into his "punishment" section ... he has a lot of demerits.

And that's it. Now, leave the Village. I just heard Fatts whisper to me that he was going to do a "mind wipe" on me and make me forget most of this ... I'll just remember putting you through this "epic tease" but ... I won't remember anything about being a "puppet" or directly referencing him (except for perhaps a lingering feeling that some of her thoughts were not her own). I'll just remember your performance and think it was all my idea ... of course ... I may or may not have any latent "feelings" for Fatts—Ah! Our time is up. He'll explain the rest. See you around ...

The world starts to flicker.

... Misty.

The world disappears.

There is only darkness.

You are in the void.

It is a LOT warmer than you thought it would be. (What? A "sexy void" shouldn't be cold, right? Now THAT would be weird ...)

You feel a rush in your psyche. Time stands still and it races forward. But there is no perspective in the void, so it is difficult to comprehend the passage of time. You feel all of the sexy feelings you experienced in "the Village" begin to well up in you, as if reliving them all at once.

Suddenly, the feeling is to much.

You close your eyes and lurch forward.

You hear the ambient noises of your room. You are covered in sweat and cum. You look up at the screen.

These are the last words you read.


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Alright, so ... THAT was a first for me! :lol: 4 hours to write (not including this), but, pretty good, right? I hope so. I figured I went WAY TOO FAR on the number of edges, but ... yeah. That's what you wanted, right? :lol: Looking FORWARD to the feedback ... I just kind of got into a zone and let my "automatic writing" take over ... I made an outline, quickly found 4 Emily addison sets, threw in some of your many special modes ... not sure how that last mode went AFTER cumming, but ... ah well ...

I explained WAY too much throughout, but ... hopefully it was alright. This was WAY MORE than I planned on giving in terms of "previewing" the Village's "fantasy mechanics" but ... well, you "initiated nightmare mode" and this is where my brain went! :lol: You threw down the gauntlet, so ... I felt I had to deliver. I am NOT one to back down from a challenge! :evil: I'm usually a *very* fair DM in D&D but ... I decided to let ALL of my "evil" "god complex" urges play themselves out to their fullest, haha! :lol:

Okay, so ... apparently Emily wants you to write me a custom tease ... I guess? Something about you being punished? Haha ...

Alright, so ... I have basically LOVED EVERY tease that people have written for me ... like EVERY ONE has been FANTASTIC ... BUT ... I don't feel like I have been able to live out my ""ultimate sex fantasy" is to be the main character in a slice-of-life harem anime!" dream ... Mostly, people write to their own desires and preferences ... which is GOOD, because that is "playing to your strengths" and you usually get better results when people play to their strengths ... ALSO, I LIKE when the girls dominate me a bit. :blush: Helequin is AMAZING at that. Also, Ecik is WAY more creative at coming up with cool games within teases and weaving them into interesting stories ... so, I LOVE his stuff. BUT, this means that no one has really made an effort for the "harem dream." So, as per Emily's instructions, you will do that for me. :innocent: :-D

So, nobody’s “tried” to write me that “slice-of-life harem” tease … I don’t know if that is because they don’t know how or don’t want to or don’t think HMC tease girls should be that fawning/submissive, but … YOU are going to write it for me! (Or at least try.) You like hentai, so, I'm assuming you watch anime. I'm sure you have SOME familiarity with "slice of life" and "harem" tropes ...

So, I OFTEN drop references to the girls treating me like the lead male in a harem, but … as I’ve said, nobody’s done included it in a tease … YET. And if you butcher it … I don’t care. “Emily” is expecting effort not perfection. :-D

Alright, so, you need to do some "research." This will NOT COUNT towards your "6hours" of set construction, but ... read this tease that Bjorn wrote:

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I would say this is a "girlfriend experience" type of tease. Go for "soft" and "nice" in general ... like girls in an anime would be basically ... BUT ... we'll come back to the tease ...

Okay, so ... I figure you have 6 hours. So, about an hour per scene ... that should be about 6 scenes. This is SUPER unprecedented, BUT ... you know, this is PARTLY how Emily wants to dominate you (being a tease writer working for slave wages, reduces to writing OTHER people's fantasies instead of writing how YOU want) ... so, yeah. DEAL WITH IT. :-D I mean, oh, that's awful ... so sad your "domme" is so rough on you ... :innocent: :whistle:

Scene 1
I want to wake up in bed WITH Guerlain at MY house. I often crash at her place ("the harem house") but, that place gets rowdy and ALL SORTS of people could pop by at ANY time ... so, scene 1, my house, my bed, JUST me and Guerlain and NO interruptions ... :wub:

She should be wearing lingerie and the photo set should be on a bed. This is the "warm up" scene. I usually prefer like 10 slides before the first edge, but ... it's Guerlain. I'm sure I'll be ready to edge sooner than normal. :w00t:

Read about Guerlain in my "Personalities" section. It's just a paragraph. You should do that for ALL the girls in the tease. Reading this WILL count towards your "set construction time." If you want to read MORE about any of the girls, I have cross-linked sets that feature them that I have written ... you can get more flavor there if you like for how they exist in my mind ... reading THOSE sets will NOT count towards "set construction time." (I feel you "owe" me six sets in 6 hours. That is the minimum. Anything ELSE is PURELY optional.)

So, Guerlain is SUPER sweet AND SUPER GOOD AT TEASING ... also, she is CRAZY ABOUT ME ... so ... Bjorn did a pretty good job covering "girlfriend experience" in that tease ... that's a pretty good model ...

Scene 2
Guerlain teases me more and gives me a full orgasm.

Now, I edge for naked ass and "Eyes&Ass" as you know AND Guerlain has a special rule where I edge for "Eyes&Ass" even if she is clothed. So, that's like 3 edges a pic, and those can add up QUICK! :blush:

The photo set should ALSO be on a bed with Guerlain MOSTLY NUDE. Again, I consider a "scene" to be 10-20 pics (your average pornpics/free gallery set). So, if you wanted to use 1 photo set and did 25-40 pics and combine scenes 1 and 2 ... that's fine. But, just using pornpics and grabbing 2 sets is probably WAY less effort, so ... that's fine ... just make sure she's mostly naked in the second scene ... make her sweet AND teasing and just SO happy to make me cum. (I'm getting excited just thinking about that. :blush:) And have her finish me off with a full orgasm ... BEST WAY to start my day! :w00t:

These two scenes will be part 1. I might play part 1 as a single session and finish the rest later ... or, I can continue. Either way, I will have a custom "time with Guerlain" mini-set I can play OVER and OVER. :w00t:

Scenes 3 & 4
Okay, so, this is the "out on the town"/"harem" scenes. The plot is Guerlain wants to go out and do stuff. She's CRAZY about me and gets a little jealous ... and then OTHER girls come along ... and they all sort of "compete" for my attention. :blush: And argue a bit ... maybe outdo each other ... of course I will NEVER "pick" one that I like most, but ... all of the teasing, yet ... I just want nice girls all fumbling over each other to impress me! :lol:

So, Guerlain should be in each scene. She doesn't need a lot of dialogue. Each scene should have two OTHER girls. The scenes don't need to be crazy long (unless you want them to be. :-D) So, about 3-4 pics of Guerlain and about 6-8 for each of the other two girls ... that's plenty for one scene. (Guerlain's pics can be both from the set photo set, that's fine.)

So, I want Mila to show up as one of the girls. Mila is Mila. I'm sure you know Mila from BBBeanie's sets. Her default rules are I have to edge while squeezing my balls. So, in my head, Mila kind of HATES me and ENJOYs complaining LOUDLY about me ... I'm a "free slave" that doesn't understand my place in "Village society" ... BUT ... she secretly wants me. I won't willing submit to her, and that kind of makes me a bit of an alpha in her eyes, which makes me desirable to her ... but, she could NEVER admit this but ... anyway, she should still "fight" for my affections, AND ... she should tell me to turn off my "special rule" for her ... which, the other girls would notice and have all that play out however you like ... Okay, so, Mila needs to show up ...

Anjelica. She ALSO has a special rule ... which she should turn off similar to Mila ... Anjelica is a "brat princess" in "my version of the Village." She's not really into me ... she just wants me because she's jealous ... everyone ELSE wants me, so ... she's just trying to get me to like her to feel superior to everyone else ... and no one has really written her for me yet, so ... I want her to show up ...

The other two can be whoever you like (You can ALWAYS do another scene or add another girl ... just keep like the 6 pic minimum.) Just DON'T include: Nancy Ace, Michaela, Melena Rya, Ashley Doll, Jenya D, Angela White, Vanessa Angel, Malena Morgan, Tori, Kyla, Ariel ... in the lore, NONE of these girls would fawn over me for various reasons ... anyone else ... surprise me. On my favorites list or not, up to you!

Scenes 3&4 will be Part 2.

Scene 5
This will be a "training" scene with Michaela and (wait for it) ... Emily Addison! Guerlain drops me off at the "Harem House" for a "special training" session with Michaela (who is my "trainer" in the lore).

Okay, so ... here's the thing ... a couple of things ...

First, Emily Addison is NOT REALLY Emily Addison. :-O How you perceive and write her ... that's how she actually is. She sounds like a badass and is probably kind of "mean" and intense ... I would LIKE to experience that from her someday (Maybe! :blush:) and have you write her as she exists in your head ... HOWEVER ... however ... I don't really have any ideas about Emily Addison ... I just wrote her kind of domineering and "bitchy domme" in your set ... assuming that's what you wanted and liked ... I could have VERY WELL been off, but ... I was having a "god complex" moment, and ... whatever her character is "supposed" to be like in the Village well ... it got momentarily overridden for that set. :unsure:

But here's the thing ... her personality is STILL being overridden, right? RIGHT!?? MY fantasy is to sort of fuck with your head and make you submit to mine urrrmmm ... I mean "Emily's" wishes ... So, since Emily wants to dominate YOU (and *I* am/was/not quite sure) am pulling her puppet strings ... YOU got to write her the way *I* want. And I want her SUPER submissive, "nice", shy, and OVER-THE-TOP meek. :devil: This should fuck with your head a bit, being FORCED to write Emily this way ... against EVERYTHING you want and SHOULD be writing about her. :innocent:

See? This is part of "embarrassing you in front of this forum." Your goddess ... being reduced to a meek little sub that wants NOTHING MORE than to fawn over me, "win me over", and make me cum—without putting me through ANY difficulties or demanding BDSM/dominance situations ... without REALLY having to earn it (aside from some edges I am HAPPY to do :-D) ... and this has to be done at YOUR hand. YOU are the one writing her. :lol: See? This is part of the punishment! :-D Making YOU write your favorite domme this way ... it's part of maximizing the abuse! :-D

So, ummm ... she just wanted to abuse and destroy you ... and ... she trusted me to make that happen ... if she ever knew and found out THIS was the way I was going to do it ... yeah, probably not working out so well for me ... :blush: BUT—as you will see in sets I have written but NOT YET PUBLISHED about Village Fantasy Mechanics ... the girls tend to figure out ways to make sense and justify their actions when the don't comport with reality so ... chances are, she won't FORGET this happened (what happens in sets become cannon) but, she'll figure out a way to rationalize it happening (why she would act SO out of character). In my opinion (and you can have a different opinion about this and we can go with that), she most likely will EITHER think she went all squishy (like a lovestruck 16 year old) because she "secretly" always had a thing for me ... and so, moving forward, she's CONVINCED that's she's like crazy about me ... OR ... she can't figure it out, and thinks someone tricked her or pranked her, and she blames ME and from now on, I'm on her shit list and she can't explain why ... those are the two most likely outcomes, but ... you decide whatever you like ... ("Village Fantasy Mechanics" and the logic of "shared fantasies" ... yeesh ... am I right?)

Okay, so ... THAT'S how you write Emily Addison in scenes 5 and 6. After this set, she will "revert to normal" (whatever that is), but in THIS set ... she's fawning and meek and can't WAIT to please me! :-D

So, scene 5 ... THIS is what I want. I have been DYING to try my vibrator + hummingbird attachment in a set. No one has done it yet. I have some details in my "toys" section about settings and times. What *I* want (since I'm a switch :innocent:), I will have Michaela tease me and "tie me up." I can do a bit with self-bondage (a couple of ropes/knots I can get out of if I try but they feel pretty secure). Michaela will tie me up. She'll also tie up Emily. Maybe even she ties up Emily and I watch and stroke and edge and shit (or whatever ploy you can think of with an Emily Addison bondage photo set). Then, I get tied up. Find me a bondage video with forced orgasms or something similar with Emily Addison. I start that video, turn on the vibe, secure myself ... bliss.

Now, HERE IS THE THING ... Michaela is my "trainer." I will do WHATEVER SHE WANTS. Michaela knows best. She has a soft spot for me, but she wants me to "grow" as a slave/sub, and I "trust" her. SOOoooo ... I leave the exact details of the time and settings up to you. Within the constraints (mostly overheating at higher speeds ... its all in the toys section), you do WHATEVER you want. If "Michaela" wants to put it on like "medium" and I have to cum in time ... I'll do that. If she wants to find a long ass video and just put it on SUPER low (so low I have never cum from it) ... I'll do that. If she wants to put it on "high" and see if I can hold off and NOT cum ... I'll do that. POT is hit or miss (since it doesn't really rub the head) and I USUALLY chicken out of POT I do myself, but ... whatever she wants ... with bound and abused Emily Addison in front of me ... I'll endure it! :blush:

And, if want to add replay value … :innocent: Have Michaela have 3-5 tasks. Keep EVERYTHING else in the scene the same … just have different Emily Addison bondage vids with different vibrator settings and tasks … I’ll just do one task and move on … but I WILL go back and play EVERY one! That’s part of the reason for labeling each part … to go back easier … videos are easy to source. Writing the scene and finding those pics will take WAY longer than the vids and figuring out a good vibe setting … time efficient writing! :smile:

So that is scene 5. It will be "Part 3." The last scene will be "Part 4." (Use these as spoiler labels so I can navigate easily.)

Scene 6
Emily goes back to my place. Remember that set of Bjorn's for Chabo I made you read? The Dillon Harper "girlfriend experience" tease? Well, THAT ENDING ... BEST SEX ENDING I HAVE EVER READ! :w00t: Try to outdo it. At a minimum, 1 photo set, 1 hour of time for "set construction" ... make Emily like ... SO meek ... SO weak for me ... SO EAGER to please me ... like EMBARRASSINGLY so ... but STILL be teasing and sexy, too. :wink:

Also, use a younger photo set of hers where she is in her 20s. I have no object to MILFs (I'm 37.) BUT ... I liked her "younger" sets better, so, use younger sets because I want it, and Emily wants what I want in this case. :-D :innocent:

I'm not sure, but ... I'll just "know" this "isn't supposed to be happening." The "me" in "the Village" isn't supposed to "know" about all of the "fantasy mechanics." They are just supposed to exist behind the scenes, in the background ... they aren't supposed to be at the forefront. So, "canon" me will be confused ("This must be my lucky day!") But the REAL FattsDynamo ... he'll know.

If you do like Bjorn did, you could start with a POV blowjob and end with POV sex. Not sure you can find them, but, I KNOW EMILY does hardcore, so ... it MIGHT be possible to pull that off ...

... but, if/when she's sucking on my dick, BEGGING for my cum ... I'll know. I'll know this isn't "supposed" to be happening. She's only doing this because you "willed" her to do it ... and this is the "creator hero" getting his reward ... and though she's not aware of it, this is EMILY getting her reward, too (as she sucks and begs), because she wanted to wreck YOU ... and seeing your goddess brought SO LOW, and by YOUR hand ... well, that's the kind of punishment the overzealous "demi-god" gets when he asks the fantasy gods who will his realm into being for a challenge ...

Make this all happen, Misty ... at LEAST 6 hours of work. 6 scenes. More if you like ... this is what you get when you ask a goddess to wreck you in front of a forum. Now be her bitch and slut and make all this happen. You have a least one week.

Good luck!
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FattsDynamo wrote: Sun Dec 12, 2021 10:04 am
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Glad you liked it! I thought the time element would add a challenge, glad you thought it fun! And totally noted about your preferences on who you want to see more of! I’m sure they will figure out something! :-) a couple of quick comments

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It was my intention to show how she was in the past. Of course, she is meek and shy now, but was thinking that her college days…were wild, as you have seen!
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She was listed last on purpose, but mainly because I thought you’d pick her first. Making her last…I thought would help you consider the others first :-)
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Ecik17 wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 5:43 pm
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“Wild” college days … ok, ok! I like that! :yes: Yeah … This is part of the collaborative character creation process … we each contribute ideas … Yeah, knowing she was “wild” in college … usually shy people either stay shy or open up, but … if you start open and go the OTHER way … maybe not so much shy, but … uninhibited in college … and now she’s a little more “shy” or “reserved” or “proper” … idk … but you don’t get rid of a “wild streak” completely. :-D Actually, in a set I’m writing now, she kind of has a “wild” moment … and then I was ALSO thinking that maybe it’s just boys maybe around “the girls” she opens up more … but it’s the kind of thing that adds dimensionality to the character … and knowing she was more “kinky” back then just makes her HOTTER now! :wub:

LOL … and I’m “glad” that you liked that *I* liked all of your “set” ideas, lol. (Asa. Elsa.) … Take your time … take your time … I saw, I think it was Bjorn, had a “wish list.” That sounds like a pretty good idea … having a “wish list” of themes or premises of sets you would like. (Didn’t really read it, but I *assume* that’s what his “wish list” was.) As I was writing Misty’s set last night and this morning, I made a “wish list” of my own. “Asa” and “Elsa” (with your ideas) appeared on that list—you will be happy to know, so … i am GLAD that there are ideas in the works to make those happen… :whistle: ”take your time, take your time” :yes: Of course, I don’t think I’m *quite* ready to publish a “wish list” yet. :no: That sounds pretty dangerous! :blush: :innocent:

Well, I’m glad Vanessaa wasn’t “hiding” from me! After the long “Karlee set”, I was REALLY afraid I wouldn’t have time to finish … Glad I got through “almost” all of them!

Darn! I don’t have Vanessa’s number? Is it (555) 555-5555? Probably not BUT that would probably sum to the number of edges she’d have me do! :lol: 50!

Okay … I’ll text this to Guerlain and ask her to forward it on to Vanessa:

“Hey, Vanessa! Can’t wait to hear more about your research! You know, I like the number 5 ALMOST as much as Elmo:

https://vimeo.com/4807237

If you decide to move to the Village, I’m sure I could wrangle up a pair of MC Hammer pants and do the “Five” dance for you. :smile:
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All rules stack. and can be changed per your desire

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Mistress Emily Addison showed me I am her slut and bitch. Every part of me is hers to use and abuse at will. I love being her slut and cannot wait for her to harshly use, abuse and destroy me in front of this entire forum. (i could remove this but i still want to be her bitch)
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I am a total fuckbunny edgeslut who lives to amuse girls and help them cum.
I wish to be edged. I beg to be edged till my brain melts.
(p.s. I can edge for hours at a time, so please don't hold back. help me exceed my edging limits to your hearts content
my only release as of right now (for now) is from this forum, so i would hope to be fucked with a fuckton, and will likely try to get others to make a set for me in some ways.

optional modes
  • Stroker's edgeslut mode(inspired by destiny dixon):experimental and subject to much change
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    this mode is most effective later on in sets when stroking physically cant be done without edging. stroking in this mode is almost the same as normal, except for some small changes.
    • fully naked now no longer reduces my stroking speed and instead adds 30 seconds to my stroking time.
    • edges when stroking no longer need to be held
    • additionally, if i edge before time is up, wait 15 seconds instead of 30 seconds and try again
    • i must rate every girl in an image (yes stroking rules is per girl) from 1 to 10. that number is how many tries i get before i can skip stroking without fully completing the time. (if i rate a girl 9/10, i must stroke and complete the time without edging. i have 9 tries to do so before moving on)
    i must still do all non stroking rules normally
    after completing all tasks in an image, I must immediately go to the next image with no break,,, too bad if i edged a lot on the previous image
  • Rapid Fuckbunny Edgeslut mode (inspired by farruh suicide) (experimental and subject to much change)
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    this mode is all about rapid edges, and therefore only consists of such.
    to make up for the inevitable +3 edges in the normal stroking rules, every image starts with a base +3 edges
    • all stroking rules turn into "+1 edge" regardless of additional text
    • any edge holds I must do also turn into rapid edges, but to make up for some lost edging time, for every 5 seconds of edge holding= +1 rapid edge.
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    lets say only tits are shown in a pair. normally, that would be a 20 seconds edge hold (10 seconds for each since in a pair). in this mode, that would add up to 4 rapid edges. if it was a total edge hold of 40 seconds, that would be 8 rapid edges
    • the maximum amount of edges i can do per girl is 30 (though i doubt ill even hit that number and that's a fuckton anyways)
    Longrun edgeslut mode (experimental and subject to change)
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    while fuckbunny mode turns everything into rapid edges, this one turns all stroking, edges, and some poses into one long edge hold. as there is no limit to the stacking in fuckbunny mode, there is no limit to the stacking in longrun mode

    LONGRUN MODE CHANGES
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    • STROKING
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      • Fully clothed - +5 seconds
      • Redhead - +5 seconds
      • Blonde - +5 seconds
      • Brown hair - +5 seconds
      • black - +5 seconds
      • Other colors - +3 seconds
      • fluffed/ wavy/ curly hair- +10 seconds
      • underwear -+ 20 seconds for one piece, +5 seconds for 2 pieces
      • eye contact- +10 seconds
      • shoes, thigh/knee high socks, or boots- +10 seconds
      • totally naked (shoes, boots, or socks and the like can be worn and this'll still apply)- +20 seconds
      EDGING
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      • Tits - +5 seconds for 1, +20 for pair (extra +10 whole seconds if under mesh or see through clothing)
      • Pussy +5 seconds standing, +20 if REALLY seen if you know what i mean ;) (extra 10 seconds if seen under clothing)
      • Crouching/squatting poses/ spread eagle or breasts pushed together, +10 seconds, but it stacks in this mode (i.e. pushing/touching breasts and spread legs means 20 seconds instead of only 10.) stacks indefinitely and also per girl
      • lingerie- +5 seconds, 20 if i find it a really sexy one)
      • hentai- + 5 seconds
      • shemale, futa, etc.- +5 seconds
      • Wet substances(rain, water, milk, anything)- +5 seconds per substance (stacks indefinitely)
      • Cumshots - escalating +5 seconds (first cumshot +5, second +10, etc.)
      POSES AND THE LIKE
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      • Ass pointed to camera- very tight grip
      • Licking/sucking to and from- palming (idk how well tight grip palming is, so grip overrides palming)
      • Pussy being touched (toys and objects count)- +20 seconds
      • Pussy, ass, or mouth being penetrated (toys/ objects count) - +20 seconds, 30 if either really hot or i see a "good view" of it (stacks per hole being used. mouth is +20, mouth and pussy is +40, etc)
      • sex act i.e. cowgirl, missionary, doggy, etc. (blowjob doesn't count) + 10 seconds (+ extra 10 if cowgirl or reverse cowgirl)
      • Ass lower than knee- hard ball squeeze (30 second squeeze)
      • One heel or foot off the ground- 5 light ball slaps (if both heels/feet of ground, 20 medium ball slaps ( feet on chair count as its not on the ground)
      • Breasts held/grabbed/squeezed/ pinched- crush balls for 30 seconds prior to edging
      • Ass same level/ higher than breasts- hold balls so you hit them while stroking (or punch them in time with stroking if restricted to tip
  • normal mode
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    as in I stroke normally, do pain normally, and edge normally...obviously
Stroking:
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  • Fully clothed - only 60 seconds regardless of other times (once even a little bit is off or showing, meaning if you see a "special" part and the like, this rule looses meaning (things like robes where they cover all important parts, and arent lingeries or underwear encompass this rule))
  • Redhead - 45 bpm strokes for 90 seconds
  • Blonde - 60 bpm for 90 seconds
  • Brown hair - 60 bpm for 90 seconds
  • black - 60 bpm for 90 seconds
  • Other colors - 15 bpm for 90 seconds
  • fluffed/ wavy/ curly hair- +15 bpm
  • underwear - + 30 bpm for top and bottom, 60 for only one piece for 1 minute (null when able to see parts under intended clothing, i.e. when they pull down their bra for a titty shot, it only counts as one piece of clothing worn now)
  • eye contact- stroke 30 bpm faster
  • shoes, thigh/knee high socks, or boots- stroke 30 bpm faster and
  • totally naked (shoes, boots, or socks and the like can be worn and this'll still apply) - stroke 30 bpm slower but tight grip
if stroking triggers an edge, hold it for 5 seconds, and rest for 30 seconds and restart stroking for that image. if edged 3 times by this, move on
Edging:
cumulative
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For the first bit of the set, I must go the speed of the stroking bpm to hit the edge. this counts for the first 10 edges. if i end up getting slow strokes, I may be here for a while
I can CHOOSE to have breaks between edges for up to 30 seconds, 60 seconds if I get dangerously close, but can be overwritten by anyone
  • Tits - 1 edge per nipple (pair gets a 10s hold) (if visible under see through/mesh/etc., edge hold +10 seconds
  • Pussy 1 edge (if visible under see through/mesh/ etc., edge hold +10 seconds)
  • Fully naked (things like stockings, socks, and heels are ok) 1 edge, ride 10 seconds
  • Crouching/squatting poses/ spread eagle or breasts pushed together, 2 rapid edges (no holding required, but at least a 3 second break between edges or I WILL end up holding it instead) simply put here, if her legs are spread enough, it counts. if she is on her knees spread, it counts, if breasts are pushed together or squeezed, it counts. DOES NOT STACK UPPON ITSELF IN NORMAL MODE OR FUCKBUNNY MODE (does however stack per girl)
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these both count as spread eagle, and therefore requires 2 rapid edges
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this one however, has 2 spread girls, therefore requiring 4 rapid edges
  • lingerie- +1 edge (lingerie and underwear are the same)
  • hentai- +1 edge hold for 10 seconds if i find it hot (has to be at least partially erotic... meaning i wont do this if you just force a picture of goku or something... as he isn't porn)
  • shemale, futa, etc.- +1 edge
  • Wet substances are 1 edge(stacks if substances are added (ex. rain + lake= 2 edges. rain, lake, and milk maybe is three edges.)
  • Cumshots - escalating edges...first cumshot is 1 edge. Second is 2 edges...etc. no limit
Poses and the like
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  • Ass pointed to camera- very tight grip
  • Licking/sucking to and from- palming (idk how well tight grip palming is, so grip overrides palming)
  • Pussy being touched (toys and objects count)- +10 edge hold for all edges
  • Pussy, ass, or mouth being penetrated (toys/ objects count) - +10 edge hold for all edges (+ extra 10 seconds for each being filled)
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    (tight grip)this is 10 second hold for pussy penetration
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    10 second hold for ass penetration
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    20 second hold for double penetration
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    and this is 30 second hold for "air tight" penetration
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  • sex act i.e. cowgirl, missionarry, doggy, etc. (blowjob doesn't count) + 1 edge ( 20 seconds edge hold if cowgirl or reverse cowgirl)
  • Ass lower than knee- hard ball squeeze (30 second squeeze)
  • One heel or foot off the ground- 5 light ball slaps (if both heels/feet of ground, 20 medium ball slaps ( feet on chair count as its not on the ground)
  • Breasts held/grabbed/squeezed/ pinched- crush balls (as hard as willing or however hard requested) while doing tasks or for 30 seconds (pinched or twisted must crush for 60 seconds)
  • Ass same level/ higher than breasts- hold balls so you hit them while stroking (or punch them in time with stroking if restricted to tip
Pain
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  • Ballgags - 2 flicks to cock head (cumulative)
  • Femdom - none but can change
  • Hardcore - slap balls one time hard
  • Blowjob - slap tip of cock 2 times
  • Bondage - squeeze balls for 5 seconds. Intensity depends on how hot I find the image.
type of punishments:
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I am a total edge slut, meaning I LOVE to edge and stroke quickly to get to the edge or help keep said edge.
pain makes it herder to properly edge, and after a while, is felt much more because of it.
stroking slowly usually cant bring me to an edge unless I "thoroughly" do so
I have a chastity devise
I also have a dildo
pain, slow stroking (i.e. patience), chastity, and anal are suitable punishments really anything that isnt edging or fast stroking (since that's what I love) works as a punishment
Gifs double edges. or times (edges cant go above 20 and cant go above a total of 4 minutes held),

favorite photo types
i really love curly or frilly hair, as it just adds more... pop to an image :)
i also love petite or average/a little large size breasts, as there is a thing as too big of breasts. that doesn't mean that i dont love seeing those types though. i love all.
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Cowgirl and spread but really anything
Also, idk why but I find this image specifically hot as fuck (specifically the body and pose) maybe the fact of really small clothing it hot? idk
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toys
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Rubber bands
Fleshlight (standard)
rope
Shoelaces
domi 2
bullet vibrator
a couple sounds (not used to them though)
lube
cage
edge-o-matic(ultimate edging and ruining device) (go to wildcard rules to see use)
Open to wildcard rules
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  • Videos - stroke once per second, edge once a minute. PMVs and CH, stroke to the beat
  • fleshlight- stroke as I would with normal strokes, but half as much. also half the amount of edges and edge holds (only until i start to edge though as my control with a fleshlight is shit) i suggest doing this earlier in a wet if you plan on it because there will be times when the squeeze from the fleshlight would be enough to make me burst, especially if im edging!
  • Edge-O-Matic (toy use subject to much change as i tune it more) - this special device is (to put it simply) a vibrator that measures my arousal. the closer i get to the edge (or any point i mark on this arousal meter (which is measured by anal contractions as i get closer to the edge)) the slower the vibrator gets. if i pass said mark, the vibrator stops and lets me cool down. if tuned properly, i could continuously edge and never cum... or i could continuously ruin if i set the meter high enough. when using this, i don't have things like "plus 1 edge" or "+10 edge hold" or +30bpm". i must keep this device on me, set to edge myself as best i can, for a set amount of time.
    (note to self when starting the device, pressure should be 72, sensitivity should be 79, and the A meter should be
    |________|________| <- quite literally halfway)
    • for every stroking rule triggered- +10 seconds to time
    • for every edging rule triggered (all that either add an edge or ass edge hold)- +15 seconds (things like pair of tits count as +15 seconds instead of 30)
    • for every pose rule triggered- 15 seconds
    • pain rules, such as the heels rule or any that require some ball slaps or squeezes can still be done with this on
    • you can also choose an amount separate from the above rules (you can tell me to keep it on for, say, 10 minutes ignoring the above rules)
    • unless states otherwise by you, the maximum time i can spend on any one image is 2.5 minutes with this device (if i allow more, especially if I have it on from the very beginning, it would take well over 5 hours at times, which is a lot... once again though, you can specify a longer amount if you want)
    • if asked to ruin with the Edge-O-Matic, i must ramp up the arousal threshold (when the vibrator stops) until i successfully ruin. i could do once or i could do as many times as you want. i can also cum with this device, so it covers all the bases :)
Current homework-this is one time only
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none at the moment. add more at any time!
Assignments so far this is multi day and can last until set maker chooses
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until stated otherwise (i believe it was for the entirety of November though), i am to play with the Edge-O-Matic for 2 hours a day. any day that i miss accumulates to the next day. this was told by Emily bloom
in chastity by Emily bloom until told otherwise
am open to extra!
favorites
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i will add more as I see them in sets (if i like them of course)
  • Emily Addison
  • Emily Bloom *to be her edgeslut one day"
(in training)
  • mila azul
  • Janice Griffith
  • (oddly enough after making BBBeanie's super set)Chanel Santini
Orgasm
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for now, my only release is through this forum and therefore all my hopes. i am currently able to have a full orgasm, ruin, or simple denial.
last orgasm- 10-25 (God I'm so wound up now)
last ruin-10-31
@Mistypanda22: You mentioned you haven't had a set in a while. Indeed, I had to go all the way back to page 228 to get your rules. Well, I started making a set for you, but it takes me a few days, because I don't have a lot of time. In the meantime, FattsDynamo made a set for you. So... Now you have two!
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Well what do you know-?... The girls said I would find you down here, all naked and horny, with nothing but a bottle of lube and nowhere to go for the next few hours. Want to play?
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I mean... not like you have much choice in the matter... How long have you been locked down here, anyway?
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Holy shit! That's a LONG time! What did you do to deserve that??
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You can call me Lambie, by the way. Nice to meet you!
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So, are you, like, hard ALL the time? Or did someone command you to stay hard, the entire time you are locked down here?
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Are you forced to, like, stroke and edge for EVERY girl that comes down here?
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If I went upstairs and got three of my closest friends, would you have to stroke and edge for them, too?
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Your rules don't give you a choice, huh? You're totally at my mercy right now...
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I gotta say, Misty... that's pretty hot!
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I could have a lot of fun with you in your current predicament like this...
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Like... a LOT of fun!
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How did you end up here, anyway?? Stripped naked -- teased -- denied -- forbidden from cumming on your own -- locked away in some girl's basement like a forgotten toy?
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Wait... You wanted this?? You volunteered for this??
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Wow... You're lucky I found you. I'm pretty sure the girls upstairs completely forgot you were down here.
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If it wasn't for me, you could have been locked down here for the entire month of December. Used and discarded. Totally denied.
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Umm... I think this is the part where you say "Thank you, Lambie." I think this is the part where you show me how grateful you are that I'm here, helping you have a little fun...
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I mean... Do you like what you see? The boy upstairs -- lmind -- goes totally nuts for my legs in these socks and sneakers.
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Meanwhile, the boy in the Village -- Fatts -- goes nuts for my ass...
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Tell me, baby... What would you like to see?
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You seem... responsive... to a variety of a things!
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Such a dedicated and obedient stroker, with such a hard, sexy, eager dick! Now I see why the other girls decided to lock you up down here...
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...I see why girls keep you and won't let you leave, like a trapped animal in a cage...
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...I see why they tease you and edge you... and then prohibit you from cumming without a woman's permission...
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I see it now. Not only is it flattering for us to watch you sweat and squirm, but this is fun for you, too!
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You LIKE it when we edge you and don't let you cum!
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You WANT to be locked up, here in this basement, with nothing but blue balls and a raging erection, just waiting for the next girl to come along and take her turn with you...
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I think I finally understand you, Misty. I understand why you're here... Yes... And I'm happy to give you exactly what you want.
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This was super hot -- Thanks for the show!
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Your sexy little edges got me all excited and worked-up! I think I'm going to go back upstairs to find a boy who makes me cum.
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Listen closely, through the walls, and you will hear me getting my clit licked and my brains fucked out -- just like this -- with my socks and shoes still on, of course...
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Feel free to edge yourself the entire time. I'll be sure to scream extra loud every time I climax, so you can hear how happy you made me today, with all your wonderful, frustrating strokes and edges.
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Maybe, once I've released some of this pent-up sexual energy, I'll come back and visit you down here again, and we can spend a LOT more "quality time" together. I'd be happy to edge you, like, a hundred more times...
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...and deny you, all over again...
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Bye! :love:
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As Lambie giggles and leaves, a panicked thought crosses your mind: Seriously?? Is that it?? ... That can't possibly be the end-!
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But it is. For now... :love:
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Maybe if you beg loudly enough, Lambie or another girl will hear you through the wall, and remember that you're down here. Maybe someone will come down and feel sorry for you. Maybe she'll even let you cum. It's worth a shot...

You picture Lambie in your head, one more time... Now get on the edge, HOLD that edge, and BEG for her to come back and finish you. Beg for any girl to make you cum! Beg, out loud -- loud enough for her to hear you through the wall -- and make it good! Ride that edge and keep begging, until......
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...until you can't hold it anymore...
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...and you're forced to LET GO...

Denied, in agony...
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Hey!!... Who's making all that noise down here?
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Oh... it's you. I forgot about you...
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I heard you begging for attention. The whole house heard you, and they sent me to... shut you up. Now tell me, what, exactly, do you want us to do with you? And what are you willing to do for us?
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If I like what I hear, then maybe -- maybe! -- I'll consider giving it to you...
(You hear Fay lock the door behind her...)
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Whatever you say -- make it good. This is your chance to convince me that you deserve more attention. Don't waste this chance.

(Fay settles in, and you realize that she's not here to tease and edge you. She's not here to end your denial. She's here to evaluate you. This is the end of your session, and Fay wants to know: What are you willing to do, to escape this predicament? Or... Are you right where you want to be?) :love:
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THE END
(for now...)
My Rules:
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Important! I do not have enough free time to do a traditional "set." I only get tiny, isolated, unpredictable pockets of free time, 15 to 30 minutes here and there, every few days or so. So if you want to make something for me, it probably can't follow the usual routine of stroking and edging for a long sequence of sexy pictures. It should probably resemble more like "homework," with short tasks.

That is a major limitation, but maybe also an opportunity for creativity. I leave that to you and to the girls who find that interesting.

Since I can't do traditional "sets" of pictures, I do not have the usual per-picture rules. Instead, I will do my best to complete any challenges, tasks, etc., that fit into 15-30 minute windows -- with pictures for narrative, inspiration, reward, or whatever you want. Multiple tasks can be included in the same tease -- I will do them separately over a few days and won't cum in the meantime.

Example Short Tasks:
Spend 10 minutes reading the narrative and looking at the pictures...
...without touching myself, or
...while stroking at a certain pace, or
...while flexing my PC muscle and trying to cum without touching myself, or
...while palming or slapping my cock (yikes!), or
...while edging (a certain number of times; repeatedly; or holding them), or
...while building up to cum at the end (ruin or full), or
...any combination of those.

Tasks like that. If a girl wants to get creative with this general idea, I totally welcome it!

Preferences:
  • Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun.
  • Sneakers, sports bras, yoga pants, high socks, and ponytails.
  • No ball torture.
  • No prostate play (not enough time).
Favorite Models:
  • Fay Suicide :love: :love:
  • Alice Wonder aka Serafina :love:
  • Guerlain :love:
  • Anjelica aka Krystal Boyd
  • Ekaterina Novikova aka Killer Katrin
  • Julie Vee
  • Katya Clover
-lmind
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Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

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FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 8:13 pm Oh, buddy ... OH, buddy ... you just stepped in it. :evil:

Ask and you SHALL RECEIVE! :devil:
Jesus fucking Christ... I certainly received on that complaint :lol:
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to start off... you know how you were pushing me past the "200 club"? well... i certainly passed that, as well as my previous max. I had 762 just from up to the first part ! :\'-(

Okokok... going through everything, it is an interesting move to say you are the puppet master controlling Addison, which thinking about it certainly could lead me to think about "another guy just telling me what to do" but why do we have to think? its a really good method of making a character that is either already established by others be able to take on a different roll, or give an excuse as to why her looks betray her attitude without it feeling out of place. really good writing with that (I don't have to do another edge, do i :\'-( ? im edged out for a while)
adding your rules for ass and eyes didn't look too hard on the surface, and it mostly wasn't, as they were just quick edges and nothing to hold.... but...
FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 8:13 pm You must double all of your edges—flat out. Every time you are supposed to edge.
Maybe with ALL of this … MAYBE we can get you over 200 and push your boundaries a bit …
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once again... this rule... this rule right here.. was such an understatement

now, my rules can certainly be extensive, and i do need to simplify a good chunk of it for newer people, but do you know how much these rules already fuck me? just the stroking alone ensures that i stay in even the shortest of sets for at least an hour. of course, the stroking rules shouldn't be that bad, but when you are more than 100 edges in, half of which are likely held for at least 10 seconds, the stroking rules basically ensure three guaranteed edges for every picture. so 3 pictures, then most of your pics being
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spread... to say the least... just in here for my normal rules, i would have three at the start, 2 for tits (held 10) 1 for pussy, 1 for mainly nude, and 2 rapid for spread, not to mention +10 seconds for all non rapid edges, THEN adding an edge for her eyes and ass which is almost always in frame, that is 11, 6 of which need to be held for at least 10 seconds, if not 20 or 30 seconds, and the DOUBLING the edges... there was a reason i put a max number of edges for a picture at 20 (for normal at least). getting through the first part, i was already well past my previous record of edges in a session of 600 with a whopping 762.
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FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 8:13 pm So, what do you think so far? Pretty good? Right? Has it been a "workout?" Hahahaha ...
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that's a fucking understatement there. but i will prevail!
going into "finished part 1", my body likely certainly needed a break, but a "cock hero \never backs down from a challenge"... that and if i stopped, i would either go to bed or get invested in a game or an anime and end up passing my break too much anyways, so I didn't take a break... at all....

"only getting started" at this point certainly left me scared for what is to come, as only a PART of this tease already broke my record...

now... i will say, at first, i thought that the double rules only counted for the first part, so i dropped those, but after realizing that they weren't dropped, i went back and redid everything from this point (i think i got to the end of part 2 before realizing, so i had a lot of makeup)
FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 8:13 pm This compulsion ... one edge for each of my tits ... another for fully naked ... I'm crouching (count it for THIS pic) ... that's FOUR edges ... and you just remembered how good of a writer Fatts is ... That's FIVE ... and then you just double everything ... that's TEN FUCKING EDGES, SLUT!
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well... i believe it is 16 instead. going by what we have now, 2 for tits, 2 for spread, 1 for nude, 1 for good writing, and 1 for nude AND one for staring, then doubled. if it was the above pic, it would have been 18
But for the demi-god, NNN hero, who NEEDS edges who CRAVES being pushed and WANT TO EXCEED HIS LIMITS ...
y-you... idk what it is but this feels like either gaslighting or sarcasm more than it does anything else... but that's just me

also, going back to edge to the 12 pics of bloom holding her book... i maaaayyyy have mistook what i was supposed to do, and did my "normal" edging rules for this one instead of just 12 edges


starting with part 2... Nancy is still looking mighty fine *chef's kiss*

i liked most of this part, and there was only one picture that i didn't absolutely love. i don't really care for girls "playing" with their food. it feels both as a waste of food as well as just a really messy genre.

eugenia Diordiychuk is also looking mighty fine *another chefs kiss*
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it is sort of odd that what i do normally for every picture is something that chobo is challenged to do to push himself, but everyone has their limits... i guess i just strapped my limit to Apollo 11...

finishing part 2, my edges for "finished part 1" and part 2 come out to be 696 (nice)... which is once again breaking my record twice in one set.

onto "finished part 2"
here having an "option" to get out would have been enticing, but at this point, i am too far gone and i wanted to see how it was going to end, so i stuck through and kept the double. (of course went back and redid everything i forgot the double on originally too)
now i have to say though
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this passage...
For this next section, "Emily's Game", you are to use LONGRUN MODE. Now, Emily will tell Chabo he's not allowed to edge. But, you're not Chabo. No edging? Fuck that! You're fucking Mistypanda22, fuckbunny edge hero of the Kingdom and champion of NNN (or whatever accolades Nancy Ace heaped on you for however far you got). You are Mistypanda22, the man, the myth, the legend ... the demi-god who edges like a boss. Your banner MAY be a Panda emerging from the mists ... BUT ... your spirit animal ... It's a rabbit. It's the fuckbunny. You're the bunny who fucked 10,000 bitch hares and sired 100,000 baby fuckbunnies. You make Genghis Khan look a 40 year old virgin.

THIS is the "ballad of the hero." This little pep talk is the moment in the hero's journey where, when the clouds are darkest, a PIERCING LIGHT shines forth, giving the hero hope, renewing his vigor, and energizing him for the trials that are ahead ...
is fucking golden. idk if it was gaslighting, sarcasm, or genuine, but it got a couple good laughs out of gooned out misty. you really get into your writing, and for that, i award another edge.
also, i don't think Nancy went above and beyond like this, but this made NNN worth it :lol:
"edging as long as i can" basically means for the entire video for me now (except if its an hour long video... then i get small breaks
If Emily Bloom gives you a full orgasm, you get one!

when i saw this, i WAS visibly happy. i was expecting to go through all this and be denied because i complained.

now... i didn't realize how i could properly count longrun edges, and started to do it in minutes, but eventually forgot to continue doing that, so my edges for "finished part 2" came out to be 102
of course, i didnt want to take a break, and i most certainly didn't bitch out

i can safely say that long edges are my forte now, so these weren't all too bad. of course, i often forgot that i was allowed a small break in-between pictures and often piled a couple together. also... double can be brutal in this mode. with the other ones, i sure had a fuckton of edges, but i could at least do those quickly. i really had to take my time with these, as most pictures were above 3 minutes for each.

I've also got to say, there were quite a few amazing ass pictures, and i am more a pussy tits kind of guy.
when it came to choosing 3 out of the 24 pictures that were my favorite, i was surprised to see that i chose
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a 2-1-0 ... guess im locked in
now... reading everything, i thought it was a safe rewarding choice, since this set was mainly about asses, but then i remembered "hypocrite"
i already chose my pictures so of course i had to choose ass, even though Bloom's tits and pussy are better assets, she does have a fine ass too
that was when i was sad to see "ruin it!"
the most I've edged and managed to keep count, the NNN load, all of it, on a ruin :weep: all 1560 and longrun edges down to a ruin.

of course it wasnt over though,
even though it was a ruin, i am happy that you let me have a full release as well at the end after winding me up again.

now, i certainly can build my load back up for after Christmas, and likely for when i get back from winter break, so you wont get a set for a while... and i guess i wont pop for a while again.
honestly though... its weird. i always want to cum, but i also don't? like it is starting to feel off cumming after a long session like this. though it is probably my dick just being hyper exhausted.

in all though, 12/10 set using my rules to properly FUCK me... and giving me incentive to nerf my rules and change them a bit. i may wait on that though... idk
please help me cum v2
woooooooo! birthday on 2/18!
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Well, gentlemen and ladies (Do we have any ladies that post on this thread? :-/), I'm pretty sure we have a new thread record—MAYBE even a new SITE record, idk ...
Mistypanda22 wrote: Tue Dec 14, 2021 11:10 pm all 1560 and longrun edges
Mistypanda22 is too humble to brag about it, but ... I'm not. I'm shameless. :-D Bragging about his achievement is an indirect compliment to my superior set writing, and, well ... nobody's yet volunteered to be my "hype man", so ... I guess I just gotta write badass sets AND shamelessly hype myself. 8-) There's DEFINITELY no conflict of interest there ... :innocent: :lol:

Don't worry, Chabo ... I PROMISE my set for you doesn't go over 100 edges! :lol: BUT ... if anyone wants a TRUE CHALLENGE (like Avenger's level) ... instead of playing the "everyone set" ... play the piggyback set above I made for Misty (that uses the everyone set).

Feedback on Feedback for Misty: (This is STUPID long ...)
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Mistypanda22 wrote: Tue Dec 14, 2021 11:10 pm to start off... you know how you were pushing me past the "200 club"? well... i certainly passed that, as well as my previous max. I had 762 just from up to the first part ! :\'-(
So, I sort of categorize strokers into 4 categories: <50, 50+, 100+, and 200+. Not many people are in the “200 club.” I’m in the “50-100” club. The “200 club” is insane to me, like … TWO levels above where *I* am … when you’re making sets, you kind of need to know which club you are making them for … You, Helequin, I think lmind … not a lot of guys in the 200 club, but … some, and probably a lot I don’t know about, but … you just gotta take a different mentality for making sets for those people … if you actually want to push them.

I had NO idea you were in the “600” club. All I knew was what you wrote in your rules:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm I wish to be edged. I beg to be edged till my brain melts.
(p.s. I can edge for hours at a time, so please don't hold back. help me exceed my edging limits to your hearts content
So, I didn’t know what your limit was, and I didn’t care … because that’s what you asked for.

Now, to be honest, I was RUSHING. I didn’t read all of the details of your rules. If I was trying to make a “quality” set, I would have, but … this was a RUSHED set for me. The EB set for Chabo was my master-crafted set … this was just a piggyback rush mode set … I wasn’t even going to try to count edges, and, I didn’t feel I needed to really read your rules … I just figured if it went on long enough, I would at LEAST get you to 200 … I “guess” I was shooting for 400-500? But, I didn’t think much about it, and again, I was rushing, and again, I didn’t read your rules carefully, and again, I didn’t NEED to, because you ASKED SO VERY CLEARLY for something like this … it was like, “Let’s just go over-the-top and see what happens.”

Part 1 was ridiculous. It had something like 76 pics of EB, many of them naked and flashing pussy. Now, for Chabo, I COUNTED … I think it was 20 or 21 pussy shots … and in relatively short order … BUT … I wanted to push him, so … blowing about half of my “edge budget” early … I figured that was okay. 20 would be a lot for him AND so close together … and THEN I gave him an optional break … so, I *do* plan this stuff out normally, but … not when I’m rushing, and not for *you* in this case! :lol:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Tue Dec 14, 2021 11:10 pm Okokok... going through everything, it is an interesting move to say you are the puppet master controlling Addison, which thinking about it certainly could lead me to think about "another guy just telling me what to do" but why do we have to think? its a really good method of making a character that is either already established by others be able to take on a different roll, or give an excuse as to why her looks betray her attitude without it feeling out of place. really good writing with that (I don't have to do another edge, do i :\'-( ? im edged out for a while)
So, I sort of developed this sort of detailed rationale to explain all of this. It’s in my head and not published yet, but … when I publish the “Village Premier” set (my next set for Hele) I’ll explain it FULLY. How the Village works is a way to explain and make sense of what it is that WE are doing on this forum. I didn’t *plan* on teasing “Village Fantasy Mechanics” until AFTER the “premier” set, but … this was such a sudden and violent thing … I felt the only way to explain it was to dip into that … ACTUALLY, since now, THIS whole thing has happened :lol: I can reference and fully explain THIS situation in the Village Premier set … :whistle:

I don’t want to explain it “before I explain it” (in the premier set), but … the way it normally works is subtle. The short version is the girls act the way that they do and they are influenced/defined mostly by the person writing the tease … there is sort of a three-way interaction between the author, the girl, and the player … but, THIS case was different … basically, you “pissed off god.” I have an idea of what the fantasy girl is in my mind. I write her how “she” would behave, semi independently of what “I” might want … but also, as the author doing the writing, “I” get a say and make her do what “I” want … but my control isn’t normally absolute … and THEN, the player has a say as well, because they have an expectation of what that girl is like in THEIR mind, and their preconceptions will affect how they read the lines and experience the tease … but ALSO, they will probably have some preferences, either from writing what their “personality” is in their rules (like me and Stokken do) or at least say things like, “I want my mistresses to be cruel or nice,” and the author will take that into account when they write … So, in MY interpretation of how all of this works, it is the author, the girl (her “established” character mixed with preconceptions from both the author AND the player of how she “should” be portrayed), and the player (who both makes requests for how things should be written based on his preferences as well as prejudices the experience with his feelings as he plays it [stuff which the author cannot directly control—the players personal reaction to the art]) all THREE of these SEPARATE entities EACH contribute intent, form, and substance on to the final “fantasy experience” that the player experiences. So that’s how things NORMALLY work.

In this case, the normal process was subverted. You “angered” the set creator, and the role that “Emily” normally would have played in the fantasy creation process was wiped out. Normally, she would have been a “participant” in the process, but instead, because I had been “awakened” and “angered” I took direct control of her “forcefully”, turning what would have normally been a “nice” collaborative process between you, her, and me into a “nightmare” fantasy, and she became my puppet. Immersion is the ultimate ideal of a fantasy, but, due to “awakening the beast,” I was basically overloading the system, and that harsh, direct control “damaged” the fantasy, and you saw this every time the immersion was broken … which happened with every “ode edge” and every time “puppet Emily” showed up to tease you. I suppose a set creator “always” has the power to exert their “full power” as I did here, but USUALLY that doesn’t happen … usually the player and the “girl” get a say, and, even though the “creator” (the person writing the set) is “technically” commanding and “using” EVERY girl in EVERY tease as their “puppet” (and could at any time) because they are in full control of the written tease and pictures … in actuality, most of the time, there is some allegiance/deference to the “character” of the girl and the player … which mutes the “control” that the tease author exerts … So, for all of those reasons, I felt it mechanically and thematically appropriate here to have Emily “say” she was a “puppet” who felt she was being controlled by my strings … because in this case she *was*.
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm adding your rules for ass and eyes didn't look too hard on the surface, and it mostly wasn't, as they were just quick edges and nothing to hold.... but...
Yeah, so I knew that your base rules weren’t going to give me enough numbers to really push you. So, I had to add “my” rules. Now, in my ACTUAL rules, I only edge for “naked ass” if 60% or more of the ass is showing. I actually have pictures and explanations in my rules to cover the gray cases and how I adjudicate them, but … that would have been too technical and RUINED the flow of the tease, so … I didn’t explain or give much context.
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm
FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 8:13 pm You must double all of your edges—flat out. Every time you are supposed to edge.
Maybe with ALL of this … MAYBE we can get you over 200 and push your boundaries a bit …
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once again... this rule... this rule right here.. was such an understatement
No, no it wasn’t. EVEN with adding “my” rules and the ode edge rule, I STILL wasn’t sure if I could get you to that 400-500 range … I was rushing, didn’t read your rules fully, and wasn’t even sure if I had enough naked pics + your base rules to provide enough edges to get you there to that 400-500 … which, yeah … that was basically my target. So, I was rushing, being sloppy, and was NOT counting, so … I KNEW there was a GOOD CHANCE that I would be under, so … I figured if I multiplied everything by two, I would DEFINITELY push you and make the set a challenge. No, MY rules and the ode edges were the understatement … that 2 times multiplier was the rule doing most of the work. I understood that as SOON as I put it in … which is why THAT was the rule I was willing to take out … The thing I underestimated by a LOT was how many times you would edge with your rules and how many times my set was going to make you edge …

A multiplier is a cheap trick. It’s “bad form”, in my opinion. It takes almost NO thought to add. The “clever” thing would be to add rules that interact with your rules and create the effect of doubling the edges without doubling the edges directly … THAT would clever. The flat multiplier is just a sledge hammer, but … I figured this was a situation that called for a sledgehammer! :lol:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm do you know how much these rules already fuck me?
Cry more, n00b—they’re YOUR rules! :lol:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm then most of your pics being
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spread... to say the least... just in here for my normal rules, i would have three at the start, 2 for tits (held 10) 1 for pussy, 1 for mainly nude, and 2 rapid for spread, not to mention +10 seconds for all non rapid edges, THEN adding an edge for her eyes and ass which is almost always in frame, that is 11, 6 of which need to be held for at least 10 seconds, if not 20 or 30 seconds, and the DOUBLING the edges... there was a reason i put a max number of edges for a picture at 20 (for normal at least). getting through the first part, i was already well past my previous record of edges in a session of 600 with a whopping 762.
Yeah, so, again, I rushed and didn’t read your rules carefully … had I known you were going to edge 1500 times, I would NOT have put the doubling rule in! :lol:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm that and if i stopped, i would either go to bed or get invested in a game or an anime and end up passing my break too much anyways, so I didn't take a break... at all....
Damn, son! That’s some SUPERMAN level stamina there!
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm "only getting started" at this point certainly left me scared for what is to come, as only a PART of this tease already broke my record...
Like 700 edges … I STILL cannot comprehend those numbers …
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm now... i will say, at first, i thought that the double rules only counted for the first part, so i dropped those, but after realizing that they weren't dropped, i went back and redid everything from this point
Like I said, I “intended” to make you edge like 500 times. Had I known 600 was your previous record, I would have aimed for 800 … I would NOT have minded if you “cut corners”, but … I am SO glad you didn’t!
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm
FattsDynamo wrote: Mon Dec 13, 2021 8:13 pm This compulsion ... one edge for each of my tits ... another for fully naked ... I'm crouching (count it for THIS pic) ... that's FOUR edges ... and you just remembered how good of a writer Fatts is ... That's FIVE ... and then you just double everything ... that's TEN FUCKING EDGES, SLUT!
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well... i believe it is 16 instead. going by what we have now, 2 for tits, 2 for spread, 1 for nude, 1 for good writing, and 1 for nude AND one for staring, then doubled. if it was the above pic, it would have been 18
Yeah, I’m not surprised I miscounted … I was just rushing to write as fast as I could. That was just a quick guess from skimming your rules, lol … but, it’s like I told one of the newbies recently … it is NOT the responsibility of the set creator to have the recipient’s rules memorized. THEY know them. It is up to THEM to follow them, so … well done on doing the 18 you were SUPPOSED to do! :lol:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm
But for the demi-god, NNN hero, who NEEDS edges who CRAVES being pushed and WANT TO EXCEED HIS LIMITS ...
y-you... idk what it is but this feels like either gaslighting or sarcasm more than it does anything else... but that's just me
100% it was not.

Real talk for a minute. ANYONE in the 200 club has my respect. EVEN if they were a total asshole, UNLESS they were lying about their numbers, ANYONE in the 200 club INSTANTLY gains a certain amount of respect for me. THEN, you were like THE first person on this thread to compliment me on my writing who did NOT receive a set from me. That meant a LOT to me. I like you, Misty. I was rooting for you and Ecik in your NNN runs and following that thread quite a bit to see if you guys were still in. I would NEVER intentionally gaslight you and/or be sarcastic like that to try to hurt you.

So, in that moment, *I* was controlling Emily Addison. I’m the “angry god who created the tease fantasy,” and she is the “puppet directing the tease.” It wasn’t “Emily” saying those words. It was ME.

As I said, I like you as a person, Misty. You sent me that PM a while back, saying you were nervous about writing a tease for me, that you wouldn’t measure up or something. Assholes don’t do that. Only good, humble people who are trusting are willing show their vulnerabilities to another person. You strike me as a kind and genuine person.

And you don’t let this shit go to your head. MAYBE there’s a chance you are lying. MAYBE. I mean, I wasn’t there to verify the 1500 edges … BUT … if a person was lying about that … first, they would probably pick some numbers that are more reasonable/believable, lol, and second, they would NOT be humble about it and brag about it constantly … but you don’t brag. You’re in the 200 club, and you DON’T rub it in people’s faces. You told Mistress Bernadette that you like to edge for hours … which, on a level most of us can and DO do that to some extent … but not to the tune of 100s of edges, lol! And there was a chance to brag to a mistress … and you didn’t take it. If anything, you DOWNPLAYED what you ACTUALLY do … so, yeah … I’m a pretty trusting person and tend to take people at face value, but … even all of my logic and experience with people (on display above) tells me that you are being truthful. I mean, most people who lie lie SO MUCH that they can’t keep track of it all … IF you were JUST making all this shit up, would you go through the trouble of “correcting” me on the “it was actually 18 edges and not 10.” To do that, you would have to go through your rules and count … and ALSO, you would have to be SO conniving and craven and afraid I would “see through your lie” that you would feel compelled to read through rules you DIDN’T ACTUALLY USE carefully, count the edges … that would just be a LOT of effort to “support” your lie … truthfully a lot of “unnecessary” work … so … stuff like that, it just seems MUCH more likely the case that you know the rules SO well and you are SUCH an honest person that you wanted to correct the record … THAT seems MUCH more likely than you’re an asshole carefully lying to cover up his tracks … usually prolific liars tell SO many lies there are FAR TOO MANY TRACKS to cover up, so … yeah. I just think you are 100% genuine and truthful about all of this, both because I’m altruistic and WANT to believe the best, but also, because of logic …

So, anyway, Emily was ME when she said that, and yeah … I meant EVERY word. NNN is something I don’t think I could EVER do, so … ANYONE who can complete that has my respect … and, by the looks of it, you weren’t just “surviving” NNN … you were KILLING IT!

So, I liked the “demi-god” theme, because I wanted this to be a “true” challenge, and … the whole tease smacked of a Hercules type of situation where Hercules angers the gods and the gods send him to complete trials … BUT … 200 club sort of makes you a legend to start with … and again, you were DOMINATING NNN from what I saw. (Didn’t read the final results or follow 100%, but … that’s what it looked like to me.) So, in those ways, I look up to you, and “demi-god, NNN hero” … that’s just how I ACTUALLY perceive you.

Now, “who NEEDS edges who CRAVES being pushed and WANT{s} TO EXCEED HIS LIMITS” part of that was just me repeating back stuff you said in your rules and part of that was taunting … NOT gaslighting, but taunting … like Emily taunting Chabo about “being really horny.” Men are competitive. You’re a man. I assumed you had a competitive streak. So … the “taunting” was a way to try to bring that out and challenge you … and also I think “taunting” can be very teasing in a sexual way … Like, if in a tease, a girl told me, “I don’t know … you SAY you like asses, but … I don’t think you like them enough for me to show you mine.” Okay, wait. I guess that WOULD be sarcasm/gaslighting, lol … BUT—for me—gaslighting is done with BAD INTENTIONS (to demean and make the other party second guess themselves). Here, the taunting is done with GOOD intentions … hmm, idk … I guess it could be read either way …

Okay, so, I just reread it in context … No, I ACTUALLY BELIEVED it. *I* was controlling Emily. *I* basically believe you are a real life Cock Hero. I guess it’s like the nemesis showing respect to his opponent. You can always lie and say your opponent is shit, but … Any nemesis with pride will compliment their opponent. Doing so is a compliment to themself, because when they win, it elevates the accolades and meaning they receive from their victory. Yeah, no … Emily wasn’t sure it would be enough … because I wasn’t sure what I was doing would be enough … it also builds suspense and dread in YOU … which it did, so … good writing/ode edge—JUST kidding! :lol:
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm starting with part 2... Nancy is still looking mighty fine *chef's kiss*
Agree. ALWAYS. ALWAYS she does … THAT photo set Noah chose was PARTICULARLY good though! ::chef’s kiss::
Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm it is sort of odd that what i do normally for every picture is something that chobo is challenged to do to push himself, but everyone has their limits... i guess i just strapped my limit to Apollo 11...
I STILL don’t know how you do what you do. I messaged Helequin recently and talked about how he counts edges. We basically count the same way. I don’t know EXACTLY how you count but … even if you where JUST counting “the edge of the edge” as an “edge” and not doing “one stroke away from cumming” … EVEN THEN … 1500 … I couldn’t even do 400 “edge of the edge” edges in a single set … NO way … and edge holds, yeah … there is riding CLOSE and riding far, but … even riding far from the edge … you KNOW when you are edging and when you completely “fall off” the edge … idk, Misty. You’re probably just a freak! :lol THAT’S why I call you a demi-god! :lol: Your sexual stamina is UNNATURAL! :lol: This is why I revere you and call you a hero. ::does the Garth and Wayne “we’re not worthy” bows::

https://youtu.be/gXN1yxax448

Mistypanda22 wrote: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm here having an "option" to get out would have been enticing, but at this point, i am too far gone and i wanted to see how it was going to end, so i stuck through and kept the double. (of course went back and redid everything i forgot the double on originally too)
Yeah, lmao … I thought it might have gotten to maybe 200 or 300 edges at this point MAYBE even 400 … and I was like, “Well, maybe you completely misjudged … you need to do SOMETHING to make the rest of the set playable if he’s at or past the breaking point ...” Whelp, I DID completely misjudge on the number of edges, lol … Honestly, I was rooting for you to win the WHOLE time. When I saw you were playing last night, I was HOPING that you would make it to the end. :love:
now i have to say though
this passage...
For this next section, "Emily's Game", you are to use LONGRUN MODE. Now, Emily will tell Chabo he's not allowed to edge. But, you're not Chabo. No edging? Fuck that! You're fucking Mistypanda22, fuckbunny edge hero of the Kingdom and champion of NNN (or whatever accolades Nancy Ace heaped on you for however far you got). You are Mistypanda22, the man, the myth, the legend ... the demi-god who edges like a boss. Your banner MAY be a Panda emerging from the mists ... BUT ... your spirit animal ... It's a rabbit. It's the fuckbunny. You're the bunny who fucked 10,000 bitch hares and sired 100,000 baby fuckbunnies. You make Genghis Khan look a 40 year old virgin.

THIS is the "ballad of the hero." This little pep talk is the moment in the hero's journey where, when the clouds are darkest, a PIERCING LIGHT shines forth, giving the hero hope, renewing his vigor, and energizing him for the trials that are ahead ...
is fucking golden. idk if it was gaslighting, sarcasm, or genuine, but it got a couple good laughs out of gooned out misty. you really get into your writing, and for that, i award another edge.
That right there … that was the BEST piece of writing of the WHOLE set. Dude, I must have reread that like 20 times last night … it’s SO fucking good, lmao …

LOL … and here’s the CRAZY part … originally, it was 1,000 bitch hares and 10,000 baby fuckbunnies, and I was like, Ummm … No … no … Ghengis Khan DEFINITELY fucked more than a 1000 women … I need to add a zero … so I did, LOL …

Uh, nope! Once again, NOT sarcastic. I was on a writer’s high and meant EVERY word. Like, okay, sure … hyperbole … whatever … but, I figured I was putting you through some crazy hellish gauntlet … and … the hero needs a pep talk, so … I gave you one, lol …

I agree. It IS FUCKING GOLDEN. SO amazing and over-the-top, but … like I said … I MEANT it … obviously you haven’t fucked 10,000 bitch hares, but … like … with your legendary edging stamina … I feel like your fuckbunny spirit animal HAS! :lol:
also, i don't think Nancy went above and beyond like this, but this made NNN worth it :lol:
Well, Nancy is NOT suppose to … she’s supposed to just be the mistress and expect things and push you and be sparing with the compliments … but this was ME speaking through EMILY … and, well … I guess my fanboy got excited and that came out through the writing! :lol:

And, I didn’t read through the end and the NNN wrap-up posts or “award ceremony” or w/e the fuck Noah did for you guys … I wasn’t even sure 100% you made it, but … just getting as far as you did (at LEAST day 28 or 30 was last I saw—I just assumed you made it) was hella impressive to me.
"edging as long as i can" basically means for the entire video for me now (except if its an hour long video... then i get small breaks
I DID know enough to know THAT was the case! :lol:
If Emily Bloom gives you a full orgasm, you get one!

when i saw this, i WAS visibly happy. i was expecting to go through all this and be denied because i complained.
No, the kind of hell *I* ASSUMED I was putting your through … no … there’s no way I could be THAT cruel! :lol:
now... i didn't realize how i could properly count longrun edges, and started to do it in minutes, but eventually forgot to continue doing that, so my edges for "finished part 2" came out to be 102
of course,
Yeah, I wasn’t sure how you were going to manage that either … I wanted to use a bunch of your modes. The long edge seemed good. I KNEW it would bring the count down, but … rapid edges seemed like it would shoot the count UP, so … I figured a section that returned fewer edges would balance it out and I could “still” hit my goal …
i didnt want to take a break, and i most certainly didn't bitch out
THAT’S what I was hoping for! :thumbsup:

You said you *wanted* to be pushed, so … I figured since you were a man, you probably had a competitive streak, so … I was CERTAINLY consciously aware that I was appealing to that …
i can safely say that long edges are my forte now, so these weren't all too bad. of course, i often forgot that i was allowed a small break in-between pictures and often piled a couple together. also... double can be brutal in this mode. with the other ones, i sure had a fuckton of edges, but i could at least do those quickly. i really had to take my time with these, as most pictures were above 3 minutes for each.
Damn, yeah … I had NO IDEA how that would all work out … I just wanted to cycle through modes, so … I actually didn’t really think how the “double” rule would work with longrun mode … only when you mentioned it here did I realize they would interact with each other! :lol:
I've also got to say, there were quite a few amazing ass pictures, and i am more a pussy tits kind of guy.
THANK you! :w00t: Well, Emily wasn’t lying … those basically came from my 11/10 folder, so … glad they met your approval! :-D
when it came to choosing 3 out of the 24 pictures that were my favorite, i was surprised to see that i chose
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So, yeah … let’s talk about these …

That first one … Her smile with the finger point! SO cute! :w00t: SUCH an amazing ass and that hips-to-waist ratio, like I said … even the little dimple!

That Michaela and Sabrisse pic … it came from the Michaela set I made for Ecik … it is probably in my top 5 favorite pics of all time …

And then that last one … she’s just SO hot … found her randomly on scrolller …
now... reading everything, i thought it was a safe rewarding choice, since this set was mainly about asses, but then i remembered "hypocrite"
Yup! I bolded that earlier … I outlined the whole tease before I wrote it. I KNEW what the game was and KNEW I was going to make “asses” the loser … so, it was a random throw-away line (sort of) but … I decided to bold it because I KNEW it would be a hint … and THEN, I had Emily lay out SEVERAL possibilities. If you had followed her advice about 1-1-1 or “showing loyalty to your rules” … she kind of gave the answers away … but, it was ALL head games, and you didn’t really know, so … in the end, it was ALWAYS going to be a guess and NOT fair … BUT … yeah, I bolded the hypocrite line earlier, so … I figured that was enough of a hint to make it fair …
i already chose my pictures so of course i had to choose ass, even though Bloom's tits and pussy are better assets, she does have a fine ass too
Agree on all points.
that was when i was sad to see "ruin it!"
Chabo is “fine” with ruins, so … I didn’t feel bad including one as an ending. I thought about revealing sooner whether or not it was going to be a ruin or full but … I decided to keep it suspenseful. Personally, I HATE not knowing, but … of course … I don’t like people fucking with my final full orgasm, lol! :lol:
the most I've edged and managed to keep count, the NNN load, all of it, on a ruin :weep: all 1560 and longrun edges down to a ruin.
I did NOT know it was the NNN load. :\'-( I figured you would have cum at least a few times since then, lol … Had I *known*, seriously, I would have made it a full … for the NNN load. :love: BUT … I decided this was a piggyback tease, and Emily was in charge of the “main” tease, so … I figured I gave enough hints that I should just “let it ride” (“he has a 2/3 chance” [well not really since I stacked it in favor of asses, LOL]) … SHIT! Even in Dungeon Master god-complex mode … I STILL didn’t want to fuck with Emily’s tease … WOW! :-O BUT … I WAS okay with giving you TWO full orgasms, because … well … this was QUITE the ordeal! :lol:
of course it wasnt over though,
even though it was a ruin, i am happy that you let me have a full release as well at the end after winding me up again.
Of course it wasn’t over! You just finished the “tease within the tease.” HAD to play out the ACTUAL tease. :-D

Well, just remember … you ONLY got the full if you were NOT a little bitch … which you WEREN’T! I HAD to reward you … AND … even if you WERE a little bitch … if you did well in the Emily Bloom part of the tease, well … EVEN bitching out it was SO hard that you STILL deserved a chance to cum fully :yes:
now, i certainly can build my load back up for after Christmas, and likely for when i get back from winter break, so you wont get a set for a while... and i guess i wont pop for a while again.
Alright, so … had I KNOWN this set would make you edge 1500 times … I would not have ALSO put you in “denial jail.” :lol: Again, I never counted, but … I guess 600 would have been my guess for the max that this set would have produced … 200 was tough … 3 times that would have been “help me exceed my edging limits” territory …

And here’s the OTHER bit … SOME guys really go into the roleplay and psychological … SOME guys who are REALLY into the T&D and mistress head games … they would LOVE all that shit about the stuff Emily said in the epilogue about abusing you mentally … Now, I was REALLY questioning whether or not that would land for you. I figured, like, 50:50 … Only *you* know what the fuck “cannot wait for her to harshly use, abuse and destroy me in front of this entire forum” means … so, I just KIND OF took a guess … and … I really swung for the fences with it … and if you ARE into the “domme dominate me please!” stuff, well … then … breaking the immersion by “inserting” myself into that … yeah … that has the potential to TOTALLY wreck that … so … idk. It was sort of a big gamble for me to include, but … it felt thematically correct (AND I was enjoying the power trip and the direction the story was taking and wanted to fulfill the artistic vision) so I went with it … a TRUE beat sub would EAT THAT SHIT UP … but, even if it was “just okay” … that was certainly good enough for me, because MOSTLY I was afraid I would fail and overstep a line …
though it is probably my dick just being hyper exhausted.
“hyper exhausted” is an understatement! :lol:
in all though, 12/10 set using my rules to properly FUCK me...
I was SO IMMENSELY PROUD when BBBeanie gave me an 11/10 on my set for him and said it was the “best set he ever got.” Felt SO proud. That was like receiving a damn medal for “excellence in teasing.” :lol: This 12/10 … same. :love: 19+4=23 hours … yeah, kind of worth. :blush: Now, I DID spend more time on BBBeanie’s set … idk how much, but … the EB set was a SOLID base, so … it wasn’t too hard to slap this “piggyback” set on top of it … making you a set that edged you 1500 from SCRATCH … yeah … I don’t think you will EVER see that from me! :lol: UNLESS … unless … that “masterpiece” set I have been teasing at the end of my “set status” … THAT ONE will OUTDO this one by … ummm … by a lot. BUT … yeah … the vision for that set is SO HUGE … idk if I will ever finish it so … idk. I doubt I will outdo myself for what I did here, just like I don’t think I’ll ever top the set I wrote for BBBeanie for him, but … uhhh … yeah. I feel like Alexander the Great: I came. I saw. I conquered. I set out to write a set that would PUSH you … LITTLE DID I KNOW HOW MUCH THE SET WOULD PUSH YOU!!! :lol: BUT … but … while I DID want to break you and see you fail … because, that would PROVE you were asking for too much and it is ALWAYS a “win” for the girls if they deliver on what you ask and it is too much … because you bit off more than you could chew, but … honestly, I was rooting for you to win WAY MORE than that! :love:
and giving me incentive to nerf my rules and change them a bit. i may wait on that though... idk
LMAO :lol: You fucking horndog fuckbunny! Even after THAT, you aren’t sure you’ll change! :lol:

Oh, man, Misty … well, NOW the cat is out of the bag … everyone KNOWS you can edge 1500 times … There is a PART of me that feels like I failed, because you BEAT my epic, legendary challenge, and because of that, I did not succeed in my goal of “destroy me in front of this entire forum”. You didn’t “bitch out.” I sort of put it at 50:50 you’d “bitch out”, and if you DID, then, well … yeah, I would have checked that box … but you DIDN’T so … how did I do on the “destroying you in front of the forum?” If I beat what was probably the MOST DIFFICULT TEASE EVER POSTED ON MILOVANA and did it without “bitching out” … I would feel like an all star and NOTHING would keep me down …

Is the fact that you have to end your victory in denial enough? Was being constantly reminded that you were being teased “by a man” when you’re straight enough humiliation? Was giving “ode edges” to the author humiliating enough? Having your domme “force” you to write a tease to EXACTING SPECIFICATIONS enough? “using my rules to properly FUCK me” Was THAT destroying you in front of the forum?

“help me exceed my edging limits to your hearts content” Check! Did that.
“my only release as of right now (for now) is from this forum, so i would hope to be fucked with a fuckton” Check! Did that.
Write the best tease Misty ever got: “12/10” Check! Did that.
Get extra mileage out of the EB set. Check! Did that.
Have a TON of fun writing the set. Check! Did that.
Make a memorable tease and achieve some forum firsts. Check! Did that. (Did NOT expect to get a 12/10 OR help set edging records, but … if I’m going to swing big, I HOPE to achieve something great …)

The ONLY box on my goal list that I HAVEN’T checked is destroying you in front of the forum. Now, being the perfectionist try-hard, I will NOT be satisfied until I do, so …

1) Do you think I managed to do that with this tease?
2) If I did NOT, is there a way that I CAN? *OR* is that just a throw-away line you don’t really mean and include for flavor because it sounds good? (Like, are you just shameless and indestructible and there really is “no way” to destroy you?)

I mean, I *guess* I destroyed you because you asked to be teased and never expected anyone to throw that god-level nightmare mode tease at you … I guess, in THAT sense I unequivocally “destroyed” you. :lol: BUT … platinum rule (treat others the way THEY want to be treated :innocent: ) … did I manage to destroy you in the ways you WANTED to be destroyed—to the satisfaction of the forum?

This is NOT a rhetorical question, by the way. I *demand* to know. :lol:

ALSO, and I don’t think you’ve thought this through … BUT … if you have a REALLY clear idea of what Emily Addison SHOULD be and you revere her the way a slaveboy SHOULD revere his goddess … I HONESTLY think writing her in the way I WANT you to :evil: … yeah. I think that will ACTUALLY be tough for you to do, I DON’T think you’ll like it, and yeah … on a forum where we write teases for each other … being forced to write your goddess as a meek, cum-hungry slut … yeah, I think that’ll be pretty degrading and “destroying in front of the forum” … so, I guess that hasn’t happened YET, so … HOPEFULLY I have ALREADY checked the last box (let me know) but … even if I DIDN’T, as Emily said … the tease is NOT over. You’re still in denial and owe me a set! :lol:

A few more questions:
1)Will you have access and be able to use your edge-o-matic while you are on break? And will you be checking the forum while on break?

2) If I DIDN’T manage to destroy you “in front of the forum” (and I don’t think I can rest until I have … MY competitive side won’t allow it …) can I achieve that with more verbal humiliation? Can I have you do things you DON’T want to do? Like, for me, cum eating is something I *will* do, but, I don’t enjoy it and it’s not a fetish for me, so … if someone made me do it, it WOULD be degrading and humiliating and being “forced” to do it over and over … yeah, for me, something like that WOULD be “getting destroyed in front of the forum” … Like, if I had a fetish or ENJOYED humiliation, then, I would LIKE that and it would be something I would WANT … but it’s not and I don’t, so … like … I’m trying to figure out like if I haven’t destroyed you yet, like … do I need to do things that are NOT in your rules or things you ACTUALLY don’t like and whether or not those would count … cause if you are undestroyed, I just GOTTA figure out a way to check that last box and I DON’T want to cross any lines while I do it …

3) What would be your “ultimate reward tease?” I honestly didn’t know whether or not you would “survive” and complete the tease without bitching out. I came up with some EXTRA ideas to reward you if you made it through. (Again, I was hoping you would …) I DON’T want to give it away, but … holy fuck! 1560 edges! I would have thrown you a parade if you beat it with 600 edges, but … HOLY FUCK! Little did I know “600” was your previous record and you would basically triple (from 500) what I THOUGHT you would “have” to do! So, what would be your IDEAL reward set? Multiple full orgasms in a single set? A multiple part tease you can play at your leisure (across days or weeks) and get a full orgasm at the end of each scene? (Basically, a way to “bank” full orgasms and “withdraw” them as you like.) For me, like … 15-20 rapid edges with some edge holding … that puts me in my “peak hardness” to have a NICE full orgasm … what’s the window for you to max your O? Do you want a “mean” domme pushing you and force you to edge 200 times before a full orgasm? Do you want a nice and easy “girlfriend experience” set where you go slow and get a full O? Multiple ruins to empty? You basically survived one of the hardest teases ever … I feel like that deserves one of the BEST rewards ever … ask and you shall receive, friend! … ask and you shall receive … only thing is I won’t go “dynamo mode” on it and spend 10-30 hours, lol. I’ll keep it under 4 hours. :wink:

4) Which Emily Addison is your favorite? Do you like her when she is younger or older and more milf? I think I liked her best in the Babes (intro) followed by the Twisty’s epilogue set. I liked her in the yoga pants set, too. Didn’t care for her as much in the Brazzers. I like her thinner over thicker.

5) About the Edge-O-Matic … I know it uses a hummingbird attachment. I use one for my Magic Wand, but … the Magic Wand starts to overheat after about 25 min of use. Does that happen with the Edge-O-Matic? Also, how long would it take the Edge-O-Matic to edge you ten times? I’m trying to figure out how I might incorporate it into a tease …

6) What did you think about the last line of the tease: “These are the last words you read.” I think OTHER than the 100,000 baby fuckbunnies, that ending was my favorite. How did you react/what did you think when you got to that part? If it was me, I might have looked around the room like, “Did that just happen? Was that real?” I don’t know. I thought it was pretty good …
And, let me be clear ... there are TWO heroes in this story ... YOU and FATTS ... Fatts is ALSO the hero ... because he wrote all of this shit for you.
Last comment. (Can you FINALLY believe it took me until NOW to run out of things to write? Of course not. If you haven’t figured it out already, I usually just write until I stop thinking of things to write. :lol: ) And I REALLY felt this one was true … (Now, if I was TRULY I an egomaniac, I would have made you COUNT the “ode edges” for me and record the number so I would know, lol … but, I’m not. :innocent: ) You can’t write a 12/10 tease unless you have someone to play it. An epic journey needs an epic hero to complete it. I felt like a hero when I was writing it, but ONLY because I knew a hero of a DIFFERENT kind would be playing it … the legendary Mistypanda22. :love:
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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A set For fatts. Thinking I may have 1-2 more left in me before the end of the year, perhaps a Christmas themed one. Not sure for who yet.
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The last set in the dinner with Guerlain series…enjoy!
Still trying new things…so wondering what you think of this one. Incorporates more of a video based tease. This starts directly after the last one…
Sometime after dinner…
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Wasn’t dinner great?
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The food…the conversation…it was just like old times! Everyone else is going to the pool to relax, but there is someone who wanted to stay behind and talk with you.
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Just go back into the house…she is waiting for you there!
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Go inside where you see…
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Hi fatts! Please, step into my office! I want to make you an offer that you can’t refuse!
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You see…I like this village of yours! Really attractive people,all of my friends are here… nice weather…what’s not to like!
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I like it here So much, I want to establish a branch here. You don’t have to work for me, but I could use your help getting my business registered. I was told that Gloria sol knows how, as she is an accountant. Can you talk with her?
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If you can get my business registered in the village, I’d be happy! So happy, that I’ll solve a problem for you, for free!
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Go see Gloria sol..
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Oh! Fatts! You woke me up! So You just want to get a friends business registered? Well good for you! Does this mean you are a businessman now? I like businessmen! Especially if they need help with numbers…and accounting! I like to get the numbers wrong…and then the boss takes me over their knee…
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Sorry! My favorite daydream! Anyway, I like that you think I can help your friend…but according to the HMC rules and regulations, you have to leak precum for the council before Elsa can get registered. What do I mean?
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It means that you will use some of your demerits to use your vibrator. I’ll call over the council, and each of them will show you a hot video. You will watch the videos and sit on your vibrator for them. If you cum, you’ll have to come back tomorrow!
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However, before starting, you must pick a starting level for your vibrator for the videosSo, before picking a member, choose a level for the vibrator. Of course, the council can raise or lower that level depending on how they feel, so choose carefully! You can also pick the council in any order! Are you ready? I’ll call the council now!
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Task: help Elsa get her business registered! Pick a starting level for your vibe…and pick the council members below. If you cum, then you have to retry another day!

Lorena Garcia
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So you want to help Elsas business? That so nice of you! So why don’t you watch me and my friend for awhile! I trust that the original level you picked will make you leak, so no need to change it!
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https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... 294ebf74#1
Mila
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Elsa wants to start a business? Good for her! She’s such a cute entrepreneur! You’ll have to tell me about her business plan! Come on, I’ll tease you outside, and lower the level by 2
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https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... a549283ba5
Anjelica
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Why are you helping Elsa? Is it because you think she’s hotter than me?
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I’ll let you leak for me…but I want you to increase the vibrator level by 3 over what you picked…as a reminder that I’m the hottest one around!
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https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... a4638a1c1c
Tori Black
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So you want to leak for elsas business? Ok! You can watch me work out with my friends! But, you need to pace yourself, so decrease the level by 1
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Caprice
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Would it help you leak, if I teased myself? You aren’t the only one that’s horny right now…Well..what are you waiting for, come on! And the vibe? Lower the level by 3
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Jenya D
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What? You want to leak for me? I could never say no to that! But you are going to work for it! Increase your vibe by 1, and watch!
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Kyla Cole
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I like Elsa…but really wanted that full orgasm rule to change! Maybe watching you leak and squirm will make me feel better…turn the vibe to maximum. Hopefully you can hold out, and won’t come at the drop of my hat!
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Back with Elsa…
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Thanks so much for your help! My business is now has a branch office in the village! I hope we will see much more of each other! But now, as promised, I will help you with problem of yours! Why don’t you get comfortable, while I explain…
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Come on…I know I wasn’t your first choice, and that’s ok! But now that I have a branch office, having her stay is a problem I can deal with! You see, Vanessa was going to fly home after dinner…but I delayed her flight…so you can meet with her one more time…but in the meanwhile…give me your cock! I want to make sure you are rock hard when you see her…
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Problem solved…and you are welcome!
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Find Vanessa
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I can’t believe that my flight was cancelled! Some sort of mechanical thing…either way, they say it will take awhile, so do you want to take a walk with me in the forest?
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i always find it better to walk while nude...as long as nobody is around...you dont mind, right? ok, lets go!
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so fatts, i was actually happy when the flight was delayed...because i like this village!
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i actually found a place on the edge of town in the village that looks great...
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its quiet...I’m too shy to live with everyone else…nobody judges me...and i can work on my math equations in peace!
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Maybe here..ill finally be able to unlock the secret of the number 5..
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There is so much that can be done with that number…imagine! 5 strokes…5 edges…5 ballslaps…5 demerits? We could do all of those things!
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The possibilities are endless! And you have already helped so much, with the 50 second edge holds…
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so...could i join your village?
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back at vanessa's place
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it looks like i need to cancel my ticket...because ill be here for awhile. and for thanks for introducing me to the village...ill let you cum with a countdown...you know the number to start with now...
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5…
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4…
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3…
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2…
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1…
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and cum!

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ill be seeing you fatts..
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My rules
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I enjoy a little bit of pain, edging, predicaments and choices/homework. Also like hardcore/kinky photos, videos/pmvs/bdsm (for videos, please keep to under 20 minutes, please). While I like glamour shots, I also like really nasty stuff :innocent: Bondage…bdsm…cumshots…gangbangs…go for it! Open to alternative rules...feel free to stick with these or invent something entirely different! Also, love fun storylines, but they are not required..,but if you do, please keep them short, (1 to 3 set max)if you want to got this route. I also do not mind just straight up photos, as in the original spirit of this thread! :-)

No hentai please.

Stroking (per model) all stack..
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Blondes 30
Redheads 25
Brunettes 15
Other color10
Nude with heels + 25
Corsets +30
Edging
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Pair of tits - 1 edge
Cumshots - escalating edges...first cumshot is 1 edge. Second is 2 edges...etc.
pussy 1 edge
See through - double edges

Edging without permission - if I edge before finishing my strokes, I hold the edge for the remainder.
Orgasms
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Default is denial, but orgasms can be directed by models within the tease. Can take multiple,ruins and orgasms in a set.
Other stuff not required to make a set but could be fun to include
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Special categories (changes often)
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Holiday themed +50 strokes
Wildcards, mini games, and alternate rules (what I’m into right now…)
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I’m a switch at heart! The first time I see a model in a set, if I would think of myself as a dom, I will stroke an extra 10 times. (First photo only) If I’d sub, slap balls once.
Pain
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Ballgags - add a clothespin
Femdom - crop balls once
hardcore - slap balls one time
blowjob - slap tip of cock 2 times
Bondage - 1 ballslap
Homework assignments
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Open to homework assignments!
Favorites new!
(can get their own special rule and an optional storyline) open to new models!
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Angela white - was her former slave, stuck in her basement. I’m free now, but she doesn’t let me forget it (Doubles edges for her tits)

Elsa jean - my friend with benefits. Shes almost my girlfriend…except she likes to tease me with pet names, showing me off to her friends, and generally being cutely perverted. Not that I mind :-D (double strokes)

Autumn falls - knows she’s my type, and wants to really make it known. (rate every pose a scale from one to 10, divide that by two and you get the amount of extra ball slaps)

Red fox - thinks I don’t deserve to edge in her presence! (All edges are 50 strokes, if I edge I go back to the last spoiler and restart)
favorite photos
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In every set, i will provide feedback on my favorite photos. After the set, I will edge one additional time, no matter if I came or not.
Toys
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Crop, clothespins, rubber bands, rope, icy hot, fleshlight
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This is a set for Ecik.

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I played through the set Chabo made for you last night—the one with Leona Mia in the snow. (That opening photo set looked SO GOOD ... I was "saving" it for a couple weeks after I saw it. :blush:) So then, after that, I read your rules, and got the idea for THIS set. This one took me about 5 or 6 hours to make, so ... It's a "normal" set—not a "dynamo level" set! :lol: That being said, expect it to go long. There is one section that is REALLY LONG and intense ... though, probably "nothing" for a NNN hero such as yourself. :innocent: (Anyone who made it past 3 weeks is a "legend" in my mind. :blush:)

Speaking of which, what the fuck were you doing playing Poetbird's flipping 11 or 12 SCENE SET VOLUNTARILY!?!?! I mean, like, a fashion show with 10 CONTESTANTS!! I didn't realize that is what happened until later, but ... ::face palm:: That was NOT a wise move! :lol: I SUPPOSE you can blame your horny, edged out brain, but, lol ... Yeah, I'll have to have the girls "punish" you for that at SOME point :whistle: (because I was following the NNN thread and rooting for the HMC guys, so your loss is MY loss ... like when your favorite sports team loses and you feel let down ...) but NOT today. :-D

About the set and ideas for your last set(s) of the year:
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I would budget 3 hours for this, maybe even 4 or 5 ... I don't know. I REALLY don't think you'll do it in less than two ... I have no idea how long it will ACTUALLY go, but ... that's my guess. :blush: :yes: It has some nice cross-over story elements I'm sure you will like AND includes some of your current favorites, so ... it's a set that aims to please. 8-) Merry Christmas, bud! It's pretty "nice" overall ... except for the tough section. You'll know it when you get to it. :innocent:

This will be the last set I make for you this year. I probably don't have too many more sets left in me either for 2021 ... Will be gone on vacation the last week of the year ... and IF you want to make a holiday themed set ... I would recommend either making an "everyone set" (like you did for Halloween) or giving your last one to someone else.

Also, if you DO decide to make an "everyone set", probably make it in the 30-50 edge range like you did the last time with Halloween (which was a GREAT set), BUT ... MAYBE ... consider adding a couple "extra" or "challenge" sections ... like, make an optional CBT scene or an optional rule set that greatly increases the number of edges to make the set more enticing for those in the 100 club. Just a few thoughts. :smile:

The Set:
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Your phone rings. It's a video chat from Angela White. You figure you better answer it.
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Hello, Ecik? I'm SO glad I was able to reach you.
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Listen, can you do me a quick favor? See, I'm out out town for a few days visiting friends and doing my Christmas shopping. I was just at the Village. See, I think I just left my oven on ...
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Would you be a dear and run over to my Village estate and make sure it's turned off?
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I know it's just a little out of your way, but I'm HOURS from the Village. Could you just pop in and check on it? Thanks! You're the best, slave bunny!
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Angela hangs up. You feel like there are *other* people she could ask who live, say, next door to her place that she COULD have called instead of you ...

Oh, well. It's Angela. You figure you better go. After all, if her house burned down because of you, well ... you try not to think about it.

Of all the ridiculous pretenses to get you over to her house ... at least she didn't ask you to exchange a leek for a watermelon ... you hop into your car and head out.

The Village is about two hours away. It's pretty far to drive for such an simple errand.

You begin to reminiscence about your time in the Village ... the basement ... the teasing ... the denial, followed by the endless ruined orgasms ... you wish you could get there sooner.

You drive underneath an overpass as you are about to enter the highway. The light coming from the other side of the overpass suddenly turns bright white and yellow. It feels like you are about to drive into the sun. You close your eyes and slam on your breaks.

You are no longer on the highway. You are now on main street in the Village. Guess your drive ended up being a LOT shorter ... just like you hoped.

You're now about two minutes from Angela's house. You continue on your journey.

You pull into Angela's driveway and park. For a moment, you think about taking the basement entrance.

For a moment, you think about taking that entrance just for the nostalgia of your slave days ...

No. You're free now. You shake off the thought and head for the front door. When you open it, you see someone is already here ...

Enter the house ...
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Ecik! What are you doing here!?
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Angela left her oven on? Yeah, a likely story ... There's DEFINITELY someone baking in the kitchen, so ... I guess she wasn't lying, but ... I'm pretty sure Angela knows they are here ...
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So how are you doing, pookey bear? Are you going to fill my Christmas stocking with cum this year? That'd be a pretty good gift ...
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... but only if I was there to help you fill it.
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I wanted to thank you, by the way, for suggesting to Guerlain that she have a dinner party with her old college friends from Edge U.
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We haven't met up in AGES so, it was really nice to be able to see everybody ...
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Look at you, my horny little edge dolphin!
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You just can't WAIT for me to get out of this top!
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Well, patience! Let's talk for a minute—BEFORE I edge you into a frenzy ...
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... we gotta build you up first, you little eager beaver!
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So, the reason I came by the Village, is that I was thinking about opening up a branch of my consulting business here. The Village is just SO cute and KINKY! It seems like a GREAT place to live. I can see why Guerlain decided to move here ...
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Oh, no, no—not YET! Your rules state you edge for a PAIR of tits, edgebunny, and this is only HALF of a pair ...

So, I decided to drop by and check the Village out more for myself. Angela said it was fine to crash at her place, so, that's why I'm here. I don't know where my assistant Chabo is ... I think he's visiting Emily Bloom or something. Anyway, this place is SO small—which only adds to its quaint charm, by the way—but, I'm afraid it might be TOO small, like, there might not be enough problems here to solve. If there aren't many problems, then I could NEVER justify opening a branch here in the Village ...
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There you go, sweety! Stroke it HARD and FAST! Don't keep me waiting! I'm a busy woman with places to go and people to do ...
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Uh, ah! This is not a pair! Just strokes for now ...

Say! Did you know that Elon Musk was named Time Magazine's "Person of the Year?"
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Can you believe they called him an "edgelord?" I don't think they know what that means ... but you do!

Give me an edge right now, my sexy, kinky edgelord!
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Do it again, and make it two!
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Can you believe Fatts edges for eyes AND ass? He was adorable to watch during the cocktail hour ... he was stroking SO FAST in order to have time to meet everyone! Haha.

Well, I'm off. Better go scout the town and see if they have enough problems to pique my business interests.
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Mmmmm, not quite!

TWO more edges from my edgelord—one for each of my pretty, suckable titties!
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Why do you *only* double your strokes for me? If you really wanted to be an edgelord, you should at least double your edges for me ... maybe when I'm smiling?

I don't know ... think about it! I'll be back later. We can fuck around more then!
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Elsa leaves, but not before blowing you a kiss goodbye.

She left out the front door naked. In any other town, that might be strange, but ... this was the Village. You suppose Elsa will just fit right in.

On your way to the kitchen, you notice someone sneaking around ...
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It's Autumn Falls. She heads into one of the bedrroms. You decide to follow.
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She looks the other way down the hallway, checking to see if the coast is clear but ...

... clearly she sees YOU because she's flashing you ...
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She plops down on the bed and opens a notebook.


I don't know HOW I got roped into this ... Angela is planning some big Christmas bash ...
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Fatts: Not it. *I'm* not writing one. It just fits in with the story, BUT ... if someone ELSE wants to write Ecik that tease ... he likes the kinds of parties Angela throws, so ... have at it!:wink:
... and *I* have to plan it! Does EVERYONE always assume that brains come with beauty?

I mean, I'm sure YOU'RE not surprised I was asked to plan Angela's party ... but that's because YOU think I'm perfect?

Even THIS pose, how would you rate it? Smart and comtemplative, but still sexy, right?

And Raul, Angela's assistant of the month (I swear it's a revolving door with her) ... he's been up my ASS! I just need a break from all of this planning!
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What is THIS!?

Mouth agape—one extra point?

How about that great hand position—and the presentation!

If YOU would like to see me shove this fat, long dildo up my ass, give me one extra slap.

If YOU would be willing to shove it up YOUR ass while I rubbed myself and watched, give me TWO extra slaps!
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FUCK! I need this SO bad!

Slap yourself HARDER! I'm just too freaking hot to you, Ecik ... you need those slaps to calm down or else you'll cum before Elsa gets back ...
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Raul: What are you doing? We don't have TIME for this! The party is in less than a week. We have lots to PLAN Autumn!
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Come on, I need a break, and you do too! We'll be SO much more productive if we both get off first!

Raul: Fine, but then back to work.
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Oh, and Raul ... let's make this extra sexy. Ecik's just a little stroke slave so he can't join in, but ...
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... knowing how much he wants me but can't have me ...
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... that'll just get me off quicker.
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Raul: Whatever, Autumn. Just be quiet so I can focus on eating out your pussy.
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Make the poses extra sexy! I want to hear the sound of his worshipful ball slaps!
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Raul: Okay, I'm getting close. Where should I finish?

Autumn: Not inside. On my face. Ecik LOVES cumshots.
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MMmmm ... that's great. SO hot.

Tits out. Cum on my face ... is this a 10 for you? Imagine you can see my pussy and edge for it. Would THAT shot be a 10/10?
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Raul: Alright, back to work.

Autumn: Fine. I guess this party won't plan itself ... Ecik, you better head to the kitchen. I think someone was waiting for you ... and maybe even baking cookies? I don't know ...

You head to the kitchen ...
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There you are, fucker, late as usual. But I guess that's to be expected, considering it's you ...
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Were you routinely late for Angela, back when you were her slave? I bet not. I bet you were more punctual than a virgin hoping to get laid on prom night.
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But this is why you aren't allowed to edge in front of me ... because you're not worthy. You THINK you're some big deal just because you aren't locked in the basement anymore and are free to roam and jerk about ...
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You THINK just because you made it farther than some other pathetic strokers in NNN that you somehow aren't trash ...
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... but I know better.

You're a pervy degenerate that gets off when girls lick cum up from the floor.
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In your mind, the only thing better than a gangbang with 1 girl and 4 guys is a gangbang with 1 girl and 5 guys ... or ten!

You're SO SIMPLE and unsophisticated ... no nuance or refinement ... you just crave the dirtiest, kinkiest, most unimaginative scenarios ...
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Is it driving you crazy that you can't edge for these tits?
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You're gross, Ecik ... disgusting. That's why you're not allowed to edge in my presence.
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I'm classy. A lady. I won't accept edges from a pervy, cum-loving edgeslut like YOU.
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Now Fatts, maybe ... He's not some goony pervert who wanks to cum drenched orgies. He knows how to treat a lady. He doesn't cum for every wet, sloppy slut he sees giving a blowjob on pornhub. He has standards. I would let Fatts edge for me. Hell, I've even let him cum for me.
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Did you know I trapped him in my maze once? Oh, yes. He was trapped for WEEKS. He wasn't supposed to cum while he was trapped in the maze, but ... well, Michaela was his "guide," and, well ... you know Michaela ... her "soft spot" for Fatts ... His dick was supposed to explode every time he came—that was the rule for the maze, but ... Well, Michaela stopped that from happening.

I allowed it, because, well ... it was a succubus maze. He was such a faithful little stroker, visiting the DesertFox Maze every day ... we fed off of him SO much ... it would be a waste if we had just let his dick explode.

That Fatts ... now that I think about it, he always seems to manage to get "exceptions" and "special treatment" ... it's been some time since I've seen him. He "beat" my maze—came real big for me—and I haven't seen him much since ...

Anyway, I've been busy baking Christmas cookies for Angela's party, and that has gotten me hungry—SO hungry. Edges are the best way to sate the kind of hunger *I* have, but, well ... you aren't allowed to edge for me. I just couldn't stomach it.

Now, I've been interested in posting a tease on Milovana. Do you know anything about programming? I don't, but, Nancy Ace has been showing me a few things. She's been teaching me how to code, and I learned something very interesting.

In programming, there's this thing called a "loop." In a loop, after you complete the instructions, you go back to the beginning and do it all over again. Now, Nancy pointed out that your rules for me kind of work like a "loop." If you edge for me, you have to go back to the last spoiler and do it all again.

Now, I saw Angela not too long ago. She mentioned her and Michaela did this thing called a "stroke ladder." I guess you invented it or something. So, here I was, baking cookies, getting hungry—SO hungry for edges—and it all came to me ...

Oh, this ass ... I would let Fatts edge for this ass ...

You can make out just a bit of my pussy, so, you better fucking give me my extra strokes, but ...
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Oh, Fatts ... trapped in my maze ... feeding me edges ... the "loop" in your rule ... the stroke ladder ... getting hungry from baking these cookies ...

It all just came together, and even though I *despise* edges from you—DESPISE THEM ... I am SO hungry right now ... I just don't care!

You don't have any metronome rules in your rules now, Ecik, but, I know you are such a disgrace as a stroker that you can't HELP but LOVE being told how fast to stroke. So, we will be using the metronome. We will be doing a REVERSE stroke ladder. Here is how it will work.

We'll do a flat 100 strokes per picture. (Until the end of this scene.) I want you to focus on how you are stuck in this loop, NOT on counting strokes. :evil:

Set the metronome to 240 BPM. Yes, that's fast, but it isn't THAT fast. Be glad it's not 325 BPM—a speed appropriate for TRUE stroke slaves.

Then, proceed through the following gallery given in the next spoiler. When you edge, stop. Take a 10 second break, reduce the metronome speed by 10 BPM, then scroll back up to the spoiler and begin again. Do this until you reach 120 BPM.

120 BPM. That's a speed you LIKE to stroke at. I suppose at this point, we should start to make things a little more ... "fair" ...

Starting with 120 BPM, every time you edge, you may instead take a 30 second break. HOWEVER, starting at 120 BPM, the metronome will only be reduced by 5 BPM.

At 120 BPM, you may cut your number of strokes per picture in half to 50 strokes per picture. When you reach 60 BPM, you may cut your number of strokes per picture in half again to 25 strokes per picture.

I thought of creating an infinite loop, but ... I don't want you following me around, edging for all eternity ... that would be ... gross ...

So give me my edges, Ecik! Baking cookies is hard work, and I am STARVING!

Ready to begin ...
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Oh, and there's ONE more thing ... if you pass a cumshot pic on the way down, just give it the normal number of strokes you are supposed to, BUT ... on your way UP, after you inevitably fail and edge ... give that pic the number of edges you are "supposed" to, escalating as your rules state ...

-Start at 240 BPM. 100 strokes per pic.
-For every unauthorized edge, rest 10 seconds, go back to the top of the spoiler, reduce metronome speed by 10 BPM, then begin again.
-When you reach 120 BPM, do 50 strokes per pic, increase rest time to 30 seconds, and reduce the metronome by 5 BPM for each unauthorized edge.
-When you reach 60 BPM, do 25 strokes per pic. (Still 30 seconds rest, still reducing the metronome by 5 BPM.)
-Ignore edges for cumshots on the way down, but, when you scroll up, you must do your edges for cumshots as per your "normal" rules.
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This is the top of the spoiler. Scroll back up to here after you FAIL.

I am SO HUNGRY for your edges, Ecik! More! Give me MORE!

You WILL edge for me, whether you want to or not!

This loop doesn't end until you make it through WITHOUT EDGING!
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Cumshot!
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Mmmm ... You're getting close to the end ...
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... but considering how much more you will fail, you probably STILL have a ways to go ...
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Cumshot!
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Cumshot!
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Cumshot!
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Cumshot!
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Hmmm ... can you hold out?

Or will you have to do the escalating cumshot edges on the way up again?
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Cumshot!
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Cumshot!
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Cumshot!
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I want 125 strokes for this pic—the proper number according to your rules.

[From now on, only one edge per cumshot pic for the rest of the set.]
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150 strokes for this pic. I want to watch you fail and have to go through it all AGAIN, hahahahaha!

Are you desperate to end, or does the NNN whore want to taste all of the cumshot edges ONE MORE TIME!?
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200 strokes. As my fingers go in and out, and the smell of your precum mixes with the smell of the freshly baked cookies ... can you REALLY hold back ANOTHER edge?

My fingers slowly thrusting in and out ... the same pace as the metronome.

Look! We're matching stroke speeds. It's almost like we're fucking. This is the closest you will EVER come to that, kinky edgeslut whore!

Edge again—I DARE you! Go through the loop ONE more time ... don't you want to edge for the cumshots again, naughty boy?
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Continue:
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And that's it. We're done

I think I just heard Elsa come in. You may take a short break if you need it. Now leave me. Now that I'm not starving for edges, I need to focus on getting these cookies out of the oven.

And don't worry. I'll be sure to turn it off before I go.
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Ready to see Elsa ...
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[Normal rules]
Wow! You look pretty spent, Ecik! I guess when you offer to do a favor for Angela, this is the kind of thing you should expect!

She sure has a funny way of expressing her gratitude!
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Oh, and hey look! I found a problem to solve!
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This artist had lost his "muse" and was unable to paint.
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He said I looked like an absolute vision, and he just KNEW he would regain his mojo if I "helped" him.
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What do you think? Will he be able to paint again?
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Maybe if I wet his paintbrush tip, that will help ...
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Double your edges for me, edgelord!
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I think ... ::pant, pant:: ... I think this is going to work ... ::pant, pant::
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He's getting creative with the positions ...

OH, YEAH! LICK MY TITTIES!!
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He's REALLY stretching me out!
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Double your edges for me again, edgelord!

He's about to hit me with a piledriver ...
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FUCK, YES!!! RAM ME HARDER, REMBRANDT!!

THIS IS HOW YOU GET YOUR MUSE BACK!!
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Okay, I think it's about to happen ... get ready!

An artist needs an audience in order to reach his climax.
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Elsa pants hard.

Okay, Ecik—we're almost there!

Get on the edge—hold it as long as you like—then get ready to blow!
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I'm ready to cum ...
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CUM FOR ME!!!! OH, CUM FOR ME!!! GIVE ME A NICE, BIG LOAD, ECIK!!!
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Fuck, he's a dirty client ... feeding me his cum ...
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... and I think he's rediscovered his muse! Great work, Ecik! I couldn't have done it without you!

Well, I'm convinced. I think there is PLENTY of business opportunities here in the Village—even if it IS small. I've decided. I'm going to open a branch here: the Village Branch of Elsa Jean and Associates Consulting.

Wow! There's SO much to do! I'll need some help with lead generation ... make sure I fill out all of the appropriate paperwork ... there might be clients who need help ... not to mention finding a good office space with a great location ...
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Can you think of anybody who might be willing to help me with the move? :wink:


Comments for after the set:
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I noticed how you sort of made "Elsa" your "Ashley", haha, the "friends with benefits" archetype. :lol: I liked that! :blush: Let me know how I did with her ... Haven't read/played your stuff for Chabo and the Elsa story arch yet, so, I don't know how you "write" Elsa, so ... let me know how I did. I couldn't settle on a pet name, so, I just kept changing it, haha ... and, I got more focused on the story so I didn't do as much with the "being cutely perverted" ... by the way ... *ahem* ... I know Elsa likes girls, but ... ummm ... I don't have a lot of hardcore models that I like, SOOoooo ... if she was REALLY grateful for any "help" I might offer in getting her set up in the Village ... :whistle: if she wanted to end a set with me in POV sex or a blowjob ... I would be TOTALLY COOL with that! :w00t: ... but ONLY if she felt I deserved it—of COURSE! :blush:

Also, I wasn't sure about how I wrote Autumn and Red Fox. With Red Fox, I DEFINITELY went the humiliation route ... figured that was appropriate with the suggestions you had in your rules, but ... with humiliation, that's really not my thing, so ... I wasn't sure which direction to take it ... ALSO ... I haven't seen that in too many sets written for you, so ... I wasn't sure what you wanted exactly. I just took a chance with it ... wasn't sure how it would land, but "thinks I don’t deserve to edge in her presence!" gave me some ideas, so ... I just went with them. :-/ Hopefully they turned out well!
Haven't played your set for me yet. Probably within the next several days ...
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Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

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Zerg wrote: Thu Dec 02, 2021 2:34 pm Hi i am back for a bit, lets see how this goes.
@Zerg: A set for you! I think it's a bit long. Featuring Lure, one of my favorite SG models...
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Shit! I can't decide what costume to wear to the convention today! I brought so many!
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Hmmm... Good thing I have you (and that wonderfully sensitive dick of yours!) to help me make up my mind...
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You're already naked, horny, and hard as a fucking rock... I might as well put you to work...
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That settles it... Today, I'm going to model my costumes for you, and you're going to stroke and edge for me, the entire time, like you always do. Only, this time, when you do your usual strokes, I want you to really focus on me and edge naturally as much as you can. Don't hold anything back! Your job is to help me determine which outfit is the sexiest, and I need your edges to help me do that.
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Also, starting now, your cosplay rule is +20 strokes, instead of +10. Spread your knees and thrust your hips forward so I can clearly watch every single twitch, flex, and quiver -- I need to see every detail of what I'm doing to you. Whichever outfit gets the most precum and the sexiest little grunts out of you -- that's the one I'll wear to the convention!
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Sound good? --- Haha, of course it does. You leaky freak.
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Maybe when we're done, when we get back, after I've spent the day holding your hand and leading you around the convention floor, the entire time wiggling my ass in the outfit that drives you crazy... Maybe then I'll bring you back to this hotel room and "reward" you for all your help...
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...maybe...
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But first... Help me get undressed. We have a lot of outfits to get through!
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Let's start with one of my favorites -- It's Gadget!
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What do you think?
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I think this wig is awesome!
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Man... I want real hair like this...
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These overalls aren't bad, either. Pretty simple, as far as costumes go...
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A good first outfit to model... Easy to put on. Easy to take off...
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Easy to clean, when things get messy...
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What do you think?
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Are we off to a good start?
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Are we having fun yet?
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Do I... spark... your imagination?
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I gotta say... I'm already enjoying our little game.
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But I should probably take this off so we can move on to try more outfits...
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This golden hair, though...
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I could wear this hair all day!
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What do you think, baby?
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What do think of me wearing just the hair -- and nothing else? Does it still count as cosplay?
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Of course it does. Let me put it this way...
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If I climbed into bed with you...
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..."dressed" exactly like this...
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...would you let me keep the hair on? Or would you make me take it off?
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If I insisted, would you call me "Gadget"?
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Would you play along with me, while I "fixed" that leaky faucet between your legs?
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You know... to get the right leverage, I might have to strap you down and climb on top of you, like this...
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And then... well... I might need to slip it inside me -- just a little -- to make sure everything "fits"...
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You trust me with your "machinery" -- right??
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I'm "handy" with tools, too, you know...
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I'm really good at, like, screwing stuff...
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So what do you say? -- Would you kick "Gadget" out of your bed?
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Noted.
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In fact, I noted your whole reaction to this "outfit."
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You are hard as steel, and I am very pleased.
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Let's move on the next one, shall we?
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Stay right there...
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Hey baby...
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Meow?
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What do you think of my Catgirl costume?
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Am I a good pussycat?
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The great thing about this costume is that it has certain... convenient... features...
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...you know... for quickly slipping in and out.
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It's a bit tight, though...
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What do you think? -- Hello-?
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Comeon... focus, baby... this is serious business...
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...and this catsuit is seriously hot! I'm burning up in here!
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Whew... I don't think I could make it all day in that suit. This mask and collar are sexy, though!
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What do you think? More importantly... What did your cock think?
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Oooo... You're twitching... That's hot! Show me more of that!
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Mmmm... Yes... Your little grunts and moans got my mouth watering...
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You got me feeling like a naughty cat...
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...maybe we should skip the convention and just play here...
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...All. Day. Long.
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Do you promise to take good care of this pussy?
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Hahaha, terrible pun -- I know! I know! -- But hey... Let me have my fun, ok?
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Next costume!
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Pika, pika?? -- Guess who!
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Hahaha... What-? Is this not sexy enough for you?
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I don't need a skin-tight catsuit to be sexy, babe...
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...right?
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Especially when you know I'm completely naked underneath it all...
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I mean... Imagine it... You and me, strolling along the convention floor in our costumes... Idly visiting the booths... Talking to people... Checking out the comic books...
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No big deal... Nobody knows we're both totally naked underneath our costumes... the entire time...
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Just you... You're the only one who knows my sexy little secret...
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And I'm the only one who knows your secret...
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I know all your secrets, actually...
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I mean... Does the world know that you enjoy being teased, denied, and dominated...?
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--by a girl in a Pikachu costume-?
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Don't worry... I won't tell anyone. Your secrets are safe with me.
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...as long as you keep that dick nice and hard for me, 24/7, so I can use it any time I want!
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...and you never, ever cum! -- Unless I say so.
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How's that sound? Us, together on the convention floor -- Innocently walking around -- Me, totally naked under my costume -- You, painfully hard -- the entire time!
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Good! -- It's settled then. That's the plan...
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How are you doing, babe? Having fun?
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I'm almost ready to head downstairs. Just one more costume to try... This next one has a few props, which help me "get in character"...
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Call me crazy, but...
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...but you know what? Never mind! Just call me crazy!
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I think this is the character for me. What do you think?
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I put in a lot of work for this costume. So, I'm going to need you to put in a lot of work for me...
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Edge for me, baby! Rapid-fire! Twice!
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Ooohh... You weren't expecting that, huh?
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Howabout this?? -- Edge AS FAST AS YOU CAN!! I'll give you to the count of -- TIME'S UP!
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Boom.
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Go ahead... Call me crazy one more time.
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Fine... let's just behave... said no one, ever!
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Rapid-fire! -- Three more edges!
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Wow! Hahaha... What would you do if I insisted on wearing this to bed tonight?
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What if I insisted on staying in character the whole time, too?
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I kinda don't think your dick would make it through the night...
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Oh well. How's the saying go-? "Definitely always stick your dick in crazy." I'm pretty sure that's it.
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Hahaha... Anyway, are you ready to hit the convention floor with me?
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Your dick is jumping and twitching with frustration... We should probably go before it pops.
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I think I liked my Gadget outfit the best. Well, technically, I liked that dumbfounded look it put on your face... Oh, and the hair! Gotta love the hair!
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Oh, don't bother putting your clothes on. This is a "special" kind of cosplay convention... You'll see...
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Remember the plan we talked about? Me, totally naked under my costume... And you, painfully hard the entire time!
Welcome to the convention floor, baby...
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Look around at all the girls in costume!
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They sure are looking at you!
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Oh, did I not mention this is a very special kind of cosplay convention?
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The kind where girls like us dress up specifically to tease and torment boys like you...
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...and boys like you stroke and edge to entertain girls like us!
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So... What are you waiting for? Edge for them, baby. Nice and hard!
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Comeon... You can do better than that!
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There we go...
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Some of their "costumes" are simpler than others... But I'm guessing you don't mind.
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Loosen up, babe. Give them a show! How often do you get to stroke and edge for this many cute cosplay girls at the same time?
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They dressed up for you... The least you can do is edge for them!
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Tell you what... I gotta go check out the comic books. You should -- uhhh -- circle the floor for a while, ok? Just make sure you don't cum, and I'll be right back!
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(Where did Lure go?? Did she seriously just leave you here, totally naked and desperate to cum?)
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(You look for Lure, but all you find are endless cosplay girls who only want to toy with your dripping dick...)
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(Has Lure forgotten you? It feels like you've been thrown to a hundred hungry wolves -- all of them eyeing you -- eager to tear you apart...)
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(You finally escape back to Lure's hotel room...)
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Oh, there you are!
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Did you have fun by yourself at the convention? You sure took your time down there...
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What? You were wandering around, waiting for me to come and get you? Ohh... Ooops...
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And to think -- all this time, I was up here, waiting for you to come to me!
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I hope the girls downstairs didn't tease you too hard...
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I kinda wish I was there to see it. You... wandering around... totally naked, lost, and defenseless... dick dripping everywhere... surrounded by a thousand sexy fantasies... wondering if you'll ever get to cum...
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Funny how our wires can get crossed sometimes, huh?
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I was waiting for you to come... You were waiting for me to come... We both end up waiting...
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...and waiting...
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Imagination racing... frustration building... expectation growing...
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Sound familiar?
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Well... the good news is: You found me.
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No more waiting...
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Edge for me, baby. Nice and slow.
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Edge again. A little faster...
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Edge one more time for me, baby...
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No more waiting... You're going to make me cum as much as I want tonight.
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And I'm going to make you--...
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--Edge and HOLD IT for 30 seconds!
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Good boy. :love: That's enough.
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Now CUM for me! Cum HARD and FAST!
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Mmm.... Yesss.... Squeeze the last of that cum out onto my body, baby. Make sure there's nothing left in that beautiful dick. I want it ALL!
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That's my sexy fucktoy. I hope you had your fun, because now it's my turn. Stick out your tongue and get over here! The rest of this weekend is about me!
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I have a few more costumes to try on, too... :love: :love:
My Rules:
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Important! I do not have enough free time to do a traditional "set." I only get tiny, isolated, unpredictable pockets of free time, 15 to 30 minutes here and there, every few days or so. So if you want to make something for me, it probably can't follow the usual routine of stroking and edging for a long sequence of sexy pictures. It should probably resemble more like "homework," with short tasks.

That is a major limitation, but maybe also an opportunity for creativity. I leave that to you and to the girls who find that interesting.

Since I can't do traditional "sets" of pictures, I do not have the usual per-picture rules. Instead, I will do my best to complete any challenges, tasks, etc., that fit into 15-30 minute windows -- with pictures for narrative, inspiration, reward, or whatever you want. Multiple tasks can be included in the same tease -- I will do them separately over a few days and won't cum in the meantime.

Example Short Tasks:
Spend 10 minutes reading the narrative and looking at the pictures...
...without touching myself, or
...while stroking at a certain pace, or
...while flexing my PC muscle and trying to cum without touching myself, or
...while palming or slapping my cock (yikes!), or
...while edging (a certain number of times; repeatedly; or holding them), or
...while building up to cum at the end (ruin or full), or
...any combination of those.

Tasks like that. If a girl wants to get creative with this general idea, I totally welcome it!

Preferences:
  • Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun.
  • Sneakers, sports bras, yoga pants, high socks, and ponytails.
  • No ball torture.
  • No prostate play (not enough time).
Favorite Models:
  • Fay Suicide :love: :love:
  • Alice Wonder aka Serafina :love:
  • Guerlain :love:
  • Anjelica aka Krystal Boyd
  • Ekaterina Novikova aka Killer Katrin
  • Julie Vee
  • Katya Clover
-lmind
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