Loved the premise of being Elsas friend, and seeing her new apartment and roommates! Will be adding her, the red fox, and autumn to my favorites for sure!
With the red fox…I started edging without permission and got into a loop with starting over. After 4 tries…I did a total cool down…and was able to get through the section. This was my favorite section, not only because of the photos, but the challenge!
I went back at the end to Elsa…who denied me.
Will try again tomorrow! Such a fun set, thank you!
I enjoy a little bit of pain, edging, predicaments and choices/homework. Also like hardcore/kinky photos, videos/pmvs/bdsm (for videos, please keep to under 20 minutes, please). While I like glamour shots, I also like really nasty stuff Bondage…bdsm…cumshots…gangbangs…go for it! Open to alternative rules...feel free to stick with these or invent something entirely different! Also, love fun storylines, but they are not required..,but if you do, please keep them short, (1 to 3 set max)if you want to got this route. I also do not mind just straight up photos, as in the original spirit of this thread!
I’m a switch at heart! The first time I see a model in a set, if I would think of myself as a dom, I will stroke an extra 10 times. (First photo only) If I’d sub, slap balls once.
Angela white - was her former slave, stuck in her basement. I’m free now, but she doesn’t let me forget it (Doubles edges for her tits)
Elsa jean - my friend with benefits. Shes almost my girlfriend…except she likes to tease me with pet names, showing me off to her friends, and generally being cutely perverted. Not that I mind (double strokes)
Autumn falls - knows she’s my type, and wants to really make it known. (rate every pose a scale from one to 10, divide that by two and you get the amount of extra ball slaps)
Red fox - thinks I don’t deserve to edge in her presence! (All edges are 50 strokes, if I edge I go back to the last spoiler and restart)
… Well this was an unexpected bit of feedback. Glad to hear my set was appreciated. And I can say that Chabo's latest one for me was truly excellent, if you want to check it out. Unfortunately, I must agree with Chabo that my last one wasn't that great. Which is why I made one more before I went on a break.
But to answer your question I normally play on my phone. Alto, I could make an exception, I just find it more comfortable and I don’t always have access to a computer… at least not in a safe enough location.
Also, fair warning. If you play the set below, the one I just made for Chabo and play it whit the "say yes too every optional picture" mentality... well it's going to be a loooooong one for you. But you can probably make it trough.
Excellent set as always, I was a bit concerned that you would make it too easy or short after I had to ruined it last time. But no this was spot on. Best one I have had since I got here!
The edging and fast stroking was too much the first time I got here. But all the slapping and head stroking in the early stages was a good deterrent. Really didn't want to restart and do that multiple times.
“Favorite” might be miss leading this time. I didn’t bother with the majority of the ones you already know I love. Piper Fawn, Heidi Romanova and Mia sollis were all excellent.
All the early slow stroking set me up well:
This was also a hard one:
Two best non-nudes:
Struggled a bit on this one, so inviting:
This was my favorite, the one I scrolled back to at the end:
I Didn’t plan on making any more sets for a while, but I didn’t want my last one this year to be a bad one. Especially since you have made so many excellent ones for me and the last one was supposed to be a reward.
Warning! this could take a while... alto that mostly depend on you.
Also there is some ballbusting. If its not to your liking or just to much, ignore it.
Hello there stroker. You're probably wondering why you are here.
Well, keep stroking that cock and I'll explain. You have been selected for the game.
Each December one "lucky" guy that has been particularly naught, or should I say naught in a particular way, is chosen to participate in the game.
Before you, you see 10 doors. On each door there is a picture and something written.
This will give you an idea of what to expect behind the door. You may choose whether to enter or move to the next one.
Some of the doors may lead to something pleasant. Whilst others…
Well, let's just say that you may end up wishing that you hadn't entered.
If you cum before the end you have to ruin it, only at the end will you be allowed to cum.
You might be wondering why you shouldn't just skip all the doors and go straight to the end.
But there is a catch…
If you get to the last door and haven't had enough edges getting there…
You will be forced back again, to redo everything you just did.
Now, before you start opening doors there will be an obligatory warm up.
Good luck with the game stroker.
START!
*If you cum without permission, ruin it.*
*Keep track of all your edges from now until told otherwise.*
*You may pause briefly after each edge, just don’t cum.*
*Don't move past a door until you are sure that you don't want to open it; no going back.*
Hi there, remember me?
Sure you do, how could you forget!
You caught me in a bit of a festive mood.
I was just finishing of the Christmas decoration.
But I'm sure you have... other things on your mind. ;)
I was told to get you nice and ready for what's to come.
So... am I doing a good job...
Is that cock hard and throbbing for me?
Do you want to see my... tight.. wet... pussy?
You know what you have to do if I show it.
Mmm, not yet. Lets head to my bedroom first.
Continue:
There, much better, wouldn't you agree?
Are you enjoying your time here so far?
Stroking to my sexy little body?
Of course you are, you have no ide what's waiting for you...
... or maybe you do... maybe this isn't the first time you are stroking for me to day.
Are you getting nervous now, boy?
Good, edge for me!
Continue:
Hi there, stroker-boy!
I was just about to take a shower...
But I don’t mind a bit of an audience. ;)
Let me just get rid of these...
There, much better.
How does it feel, stroker-boy?
Knowing that I’m fully nude, that at any moment I could spread my legs and make you edge?
Knowing that a thin pane of frosted glass is all that stands between you... and an edge?
For now, just keep stroking.
Did it ever occur to you that this might be it?
Just stroke, stroke, stroke. No edging. No cumming.
After all, isn't that what all beta-boys deserve? And isn't that what you are, a desperate little beta?
Well, I wouldn't be that mean… or would I?
No, I wouldn't. Edge for me!
… But then… some of the other girls might not be as nice as me. Good luck, beta-boy!
Welcome, boy, to my own little piece of nature.
Hmm, you have kind eyes…
Anyways, as I was saying; this is my place, so you better behave whilst you are here.
If you litter whilst you are here - leaking, cumming etc - I will punish you!
I will punch your balls hard, until you drop to the ground. Begging for mercy.
(stroke with your legs apart and whit your cock horizontally. So that if you leak it will drop straight down and become obvious.)
Sounds fair? Well it does to me and that's all that matters, my camp my rules.
Hmm, you really do have kind eyes… I like that.
And you edge for me, I like that too. Just don’t leek.
Anyway, I'm going to show you some pictures from some of my trips.
Continue:
Last year I was visiting family in Sweden.
They had this lovely little cottage near a lake.
And, I must say, it’s considerably warmer during the summers than you might expect.
Of course, at this time of the year It’s pretty much freezing.
Mmm, another edge, how generous of you!
Continue:
Now some pictures from my trip to Morocco.
It took a while to get used to the scourging heat.
But there were some rather...
Practical solutions to that problem ;)
Unfortunately that was all I had for you… for now.
Continue:
Well, you read the text on the door, and that can only mean one thing.
That you are a… filthy… pathetic… little… beta-boy!
Slap your balls whilst you stroke to me! And betas don't deserve to edge…
They don’t deserve to see pussy…
They don’t deserve to cum…
But… I suppose everyone deserves a chance...
So if you beg me, sincerely, to let you continue this tease, I might let you do that.
You are a beta and don’t deserve to continue:
Looks like this beta knows his place!
And to think that had you just been a bit more of a man, this wet pussy could have been yours!
Or perhaps you would have preferred to ram it in my ass.
But no, you're just a beta-boy. So you just get to ruin it for me, NOW!
Well… since you begged so nicely I’ll let you pass.
And to think that had you just been a bit more of a man, this wet pussy could have been yours!
Or perhaps you would have preferred to ram it in my ass.
But no, you're just a beta-boy. So you just get to the edge for me, NOW!
I wonder, did you enter here because of what it said on the door? Or because you know who I am and you think I’m hot?
Well I am hot, and I am a slut!
So either reason is fine.
However, what I didn’t mention...
Is that I’m also a cockteaser!
Give your balls one firm squeeze for me!
It’s important to stretch before vigorous exercise.
And I plan to do plenty of that later.
Now, let me show you a couple of places where I like to have sex!
This is my kitchen/massage parlor...
Where I offer “special services” practically for free!
Doesn't that sound nice.
Me letting some random guy, like you...
Fuck me sensless...
squeeze your balls again! Harder and longer then before.
In whatever ways he desires...
Let's move on.
This couch is great for all sorts of positions...
Blowjobs...
Doggy...
Or even good old fashioned missionary!
Just let your imagination go wild.
Unfortunately this is the end of your visit.
squeeze your balls and don't stop until you leave.
As you can see, I have some other guests to attend to.
Awww, no pussy for you, no edges. Too bad for you! Better luck with the next door. ;)
Did your curiosity take over?
Wondering what was ment with despair?
Wondering how that could relate to such a cute and innocent looking girl as me?
Well, you'll soon enough find out.
Feeling nervous, that tingling sensation of anticipation and dredd?
I’m about to take you on a trip, boy. EDGE for me!
Stay close to that edge, boy.
You never know when you might need it again...
EDGE for me again!
How many times have you edged by now?
How many doors have you opened?
I hope it’s a loot
I hope you can’t stop yourself from leaking a bit, everytime you EDGE!
Mmm, do you get it now?
That sense of despair, of desperation?
Not knowing if you’ll be going over the very next time you… EDGE!
AHHH, so close, so desperate!
Just a little bit more and you could just...
EDGE!
HAHAHA! Well done stroker, I hope I get to see you again soon, that you will have to come back here again!
I have a confession to make...
This might be the Best gift ever… if you are into a lot of stroking and edging!
If this is your first time here go back to START! and redo everything! I hope you opened a lot of doors! ;*
Continue:
Are you okay? you look a bit... well, drained!
Was that a challenge for you?
At least by now you surely have had enough edges to enter the last door...
surely...
Unless...
No, that would be too cruel...
But then again maybe...
Maybe you had to open every door to get enough edges...
But we wouldn't be that cruel... would we?
Best to have another edge, just to be on the safe side.
HAHA! I can’t believe that you feel that!
You're not a real man!
You don’t deserve to stroke for my sexy body.
You don’t even deserve to stroke for my feet.
I don’t even think you deserve a proper orgasm!
Infakt, I’m considering ruining you right now!
Of course, depending on how many doors you have opened…
You might consider this a blessing...
To just surrender and let go.
That's what a true beta-boy would do now.
Hmm, I’ll make you an offer
You can ruin your orgasm for me or you have to watch all these pictures of me again… uncensored!
Think you are man enough to do that?
Ruin:
MMM, I like a man with balls…
Speaking of balls...
Start slapping yours! Not to hard. But 15 times per picture until you leave.
I must confess that I'm impressed, maybe you are an alpha after all.
Hey there, sexy boy!
Dame, you’re cute.
You can relax here with me.
No trix, no censures or anything.
Just relax and stroke that cock.
So, how many doors have you opened?
I'm guessing quite a few.
It must be getting hard for you…
Not to cum…
Whilst you stroke to our…
Petite...
Sexy…
Bodies!
I can’t even imagine your frustration.
When I’m horny…
I just satisfy my needs…
In whatever way…
Suits me in the moment.
Whether that means fucking sexy cute strangers…
Like yourself...
Or getting off using one of my toys…
Depends on my mood, I just do whatever I want.
Goodbye, sexy! Hope to see you again soon!
Hi there stroker; I wonder what you expected for this one…
Well, I bet you didn’t expect this!
Aww, nothing to stroke for but our faces…
However we have a proposition for you
You can ruin your orgasm for us now… so close to the end...
Or you have to stroke for us again…
Without the censure!
Mmm, that's right, the question is...
how many times can you see our pussies under this black mask? So what will it be?
Ruin:
Bold of you...
let’s see how well you’ll live up to it!
You know if you were a true fan of us…
You would have been familiar enough with this set…
To know when our pussies were on display.
And when they were not.
Wow! You actually did it, nice work stroker. See you around.
Well you got past the door but that's still not enough for my taste.
You're gonna have to edge a few more times to earn that orgasm!
Now you are nice and ready for me.
Reach that edge, one more time and…
Spunk that load all over me!
YES! Keep stroking until the last drop!
Thank you stroker, hope you had a good time. I certainly did!
Wow, that's impressive!
You have sertely earnt your orgasm!
Just get yourself to that edge! One last time!
Now, spunk that load all over me!
YES! Keep stroking until the last drop!
Thank you stroker, hope you had a good time. I certainly did!
Bjorn13 wrote: Fri Dec 03, 2021 7:20 pm
And a set for Horny_CHabo
@Bjorn: This was the waking up with Dillon Harper tease. I wanted to give you some feedback on it.
For every0ne else: I also included tips and suggestions for set writing in general. Anyone looking to raise their level as a tease writer (mostly I'm looking at the newbies here) should probably read this.
I didn't "fully" play it (I came three times the night before and tried this one "first thing" as per the suggestion, so ... my cock was still pretty fatigued and I skipped over some sections), but I wanted to give you some feedback on it. Chabo didn't really care for it, but, I did NOT think it was a bad set. IF you are open to some constructive criticism, keep reading.
Okay, so, I LIKED the premise: a "girlfriend experience" type of tease with Dillon Harper ... it's the start of a strong set.
One thing I've noticed you do a couple of times is "tell" about the girls. Such as,
"She’s fucking hot, a diva, but a hot one! And she’s the best chess player out of all of us too."
"Miss Jane sure loves working in her garden."
"Well she told me that you spent some time with her. She generally doesn't get along with others, you must have made some impression on her."
and I've noticed some other similar lines before from other sets. My advice would be show don't tell.
SOME guys (including myself) like to know something about the girls that are teasing us, but ... even *I* don't find these lines particularly effective ... so: show don't tell. Instead of "telling" us how these girls are, SHOW us! Give them dialogue. If they are shy, give them lines that SHOW us they are shy ... like, include an "Ummm ..." or have them use language that shows they are not confident. If they are a diva, make them TALK like a diva. They should be demanding, full of drama, and compliment themselves. Show don't tell.
Now, this is NOT easy to do with a girl who shows up for 1 scene like Kaleesy and Miss Jane do here. For something that short, I would just tend to skip giving those personal details and focus on the action or just describing the girl. 1 scene is NOT long enough to get to know a girl. If I have time to get to know a girl, THEN her personality might start to become a turn-on. She seems "more real" which makes the experience more immersive. But, generally, if a girl is going to show up for one scene then disappear forever, focus on skin and not substance. Here, Kaleesy is a "diva", but, that's just a random detail that doesn't mean anything to me. Unless you know that I am attracted to divas, it does nothing for me. Saying that a girl is "nice and kind" ... that doesn't add anything to the experience of stroking my dick. It'd be better to just skip it ... again, UNLESS you are going to show me through her dialogue that she is "nice and kind." THEN, that makes her a little more three dimensional.
Here is a PERFECT example of "showing not telling". Helequin wrote me an amazing set that included Lorena. He wrote Lorena SO WELL, that I basically had fallen in love with her by the fifth pic. He SHOWED me that Lorena was "nice and kind." He didn't JUST tell me. Although, he did in his rules so I knew that was coming, but ... just telling me wasn't enough. What made the impact was showing me. Actually, that WHOLE SET is an exemplar of how to write good dialogue and make fleshed out characters. The thing is, ALL of those girls were ALREADY well developed in terms of their character and personality. So, since Helequin already had a clear idea of who those characters were in his mind, he was then able to write them SO effectively.
Just something to think about. My advice, unless you have plans for them, leave the girls that show up once and leave devoid of character. Porn photographers are pretty good. They do a good job "capturing" the essence of the models. Most of the time you don't need to provide "background" details.
One notable exception to this would be if you plan on bringing the character back. Ecik wrote a WHOLE TEASE for me where he JUST introduced Guerlain's friends. I LOVED that. Really, you should read it to see what I am talking about. So, this would be an EXCEPTION to my general advice above, BECAUSE ALL of these girls will show up as characters in the next set (which is posted and I need to play). In this case, he is spending the time to develop the characters, and he was able to write SO WELL that he was able to BOTH tease me AND reveal background about them AT THE SAME TIME. Tough to do. But now, because he spent the time introducing them to me, the NEXT set I play will be MUCH more immersive, and all of those background details will matter. Normally, however, if there are no future plans, just spend 100% of the time on teasing and 0% on background.
This next bit is basically only pertinent to Bjorn ... (for anyone reading this who is NOT Bjorn and wants to save some time)
All that being said, I REALLY liked Kaleesy. SUCH a great model, (I just LOVE those cute, skinny, and petite girls!), and ... I really LIKED that she is super smart, plays chess AND is a diva! But, here's the thing ... in the context of THIS tease, that line didn't do much for me. I'm looking at a pretty girl I know nothing about. She's basically just a piece of sexy meat I'm masturbating to. I don't "know" her. I don't have an emotional connection to her (like I might for a character in a book or film or TV show) because I don't KNOW her ... so, by itself, in the context of a short scene ... that line doesn't do anything. HOWEVER, I think it is a GREAT starting concept for a character. In fact, *ahem* ... ummm ...
::exhales then takes in a deep breath::
If you wanted to write me a tease where Kaleesy "moves into" the Harem House (which is the house where a bunch of my "favorite girls" all live in "the Village" which is an imaginary fantasy setting where I set most of my teases), that would be PRETTY awesome. If you were interested in "developing a character" I would LOVE to get to know Kaleesy better and have her tease me. I haven't figured them out yet, but ... I would probably give her her own special "favorite girl" rule in my rule set ... I don't really have a "diva" yet in my "harem" of favorite girls ... the fact that she's smart and plays chess appealed to me ... Nancy is SUPER smart in the lore, and it'd be nice for "Nancy" to have another friend ... plus, divas cause drama and I LOVE drama in my teases!
So, yeah, no pressure and it's fine to decline, but ... if you wanted to practice "developing" a character, I would be SUPER interested in a set that featured Kaleesy and would LOVE to get to know her better.
Time wise you are "taking a break" and I really should be too, but ... I've been stuck on trying to write a couple sets. I've been wanting to write a set for you, but ... it will probably be a while. So, maybe January when you "come back" might be a good time to do a "set exchange." Think about it! You can definitely use some of that time to consider what kind of personality Kaleesy should have. I recommend something that is fun that you would really enjoy writing for. My "Melena" character is amazing and SO FUN to write for ... if anything I know she is popular with Ecik, so ... I like sending her to tease him.
Anyways, back to the set ...
So, "showdon't" tell is pretty good advice for writing (for dialogue especially), but here's another one for writing for pics: "When you show, tell." You "show" us with the pic, but then you tell us what we see:
"Are you feeling lucky she bent over to show you her amazing ass?"
I am showing you a pic of her ass, so then I tell you that. Here, I've given you some context by explaining or "telling" you what she is doing. The text description adds another level of engagement to it. Also, I make it personal by involving you: "Are you feeling lucky ..." helps to pull you into the tease.
"What would you do to that heavenly pussy?"
Again, I am SHOWING you a pussy, and so I TELL you that. Asking the reader to imagine what they would do is a SIMPLE yet VERY effective technique to employ for teasing dialogue. Don't overuse it, but, it is a good one to throw in. They may or may not have been imagining what they would do, but, if you ask them to, they WILL FOR SURE, and then you just pulled them deeper into your tease.
Adding a descriptor to the body part as well is HIGHLY EFFECTIVE, ESPECIALLY if the "host girl" is doing the describing. "Amazing ass." "Heavenly pussy." Longer descriptions are good, too, but even SHORT ones help to more fully engage the brain ... which, technically speaking IS the largest sex organ. I could probably give an hour seminar on how to write good tease dialogue, but, that's enough for now!
The hospital seemed like a bit of a missed opportunity story wise. You probably didn't have much time, but, it would have been pretty great to get at least ONE scene with some sexy nurses. Instead, we got this plot about a hospital but it didn't flow. Instead, the "hospital" ended up being an awkward break that disrupted the story. Also, I didn't know whether or not Jane was okay. LATER, when Dillon got back, I found out she was okay, but ... had I played the tease as intended, I probably would have stopped a few times throughout the day to wonder if Jane was okay ... but that's just me. I'm a weirdo that gets too immersed in stories, lol ... but ... telling me immediately that she was alright would have been better. Thinking about someone being hurt, even if it's a "pretend' someone ... that kind of kills the mood for "sexy time" a little bit ... How you wrote it was realistic, because if someone rushes off to the hospital, you do NOT immediately know if things are going to be okay, but ... that's not the best for storytelling purposes, at least not in an erotic tease ...
So, the thing that REALLY made me want me to play this set and give feedback was Chabo's feedback saying the ending descriptions did not work for him. So, a couple of thoughts on that.
First, GOOD JOB on saying that the player could edge whenever they wanted. Most of the time, the player WANTS to be controlled by the girls and their rules, but ... I think it's a nice change of pace to give the player "free reign" every once in a while. ESPECIALLY if you want to create a natural pace and flow ... which is what you WANTED TO DO with a "girlfriend experience" ending with Dillon ... So, GREAT JOB, man! Your tease design instincts were RIGHT ON THE MONEY with that one.
My only constructive criticism point on that, would be to have made the WHOLE ENDING "free stroking" not JUST "free edging." Getting rid of ALL of the constraints—being able to edge when I wanted AND not have to count strokes—would have been the best design choice for creating a nice, relaxing final scene with Dillon ... that would REALLY let the player take their time, enjoy the scene, go at their own pace, and do what feels natural. True, they can do that anyway when they are stroking on their own time ... but, the difference here is that you have created an elaborate fantasy. At that point, they should be FULLY IMMERSED in the tease, and so "acting as they want" becomes a part of the fantasy experience. Story wise, Dillon has been threatening to make them cum for a while (since the last tease). The player wants that and is fully engaged. You've ALREADY teased them and gotten them warmed up. Usually the girls are calling the shots, so ... letting the player have full control is rare for sets on this thread, and I think the final ending to a "girlfriend experience" tease means using that choice to full effect.
When I played it, that's what *I* did: free stroking and edging. Maybe Chabo wasn't in the mood. Maybe he was constrained by having to do X number of strokes. I don't know why he didn't like it but I LOVED the ending, LOVED the writing ... the build up was good and slow. The pacing was great. The pictures you picked were AWESOME and matched what you wrote. I loved that she started with a blowjob and finished with sex.
"*Her cries of pleasure gradually turn into incoherent moans.*"
*Your bodies press together, your sweat mixing with hers.*
When Chabo said he didn't like them, I just immediately assumed that was a problem with your execution, that you inserted them in awkwardly and too quickly. NOPE! That was NOT the case. It was VERY well done, in my opinion.
Honestly, people don't write very many sex scenes for teases on this thread. So, to be fair, I haven't read that many, but ... FOR SURE, that was THE BEST sex scene I have ever read on this thread. Well done, sir!
Almost all of my "favorite girls" do mostly "solo girl" photo shoots or lesbian. Truly, playing this scene made me wish that I liked more models that did hardcore, because the POV pics and final product here were SO GOOD ... but, I basically can't replicate it with ANY of my favorite girls, because they don't shoot sets like this.
Just a couple more things ...
When she got out the dildo, she should have said something like, "You just sit there and watch me while you stroke. I think we both need to get warmed up before we really get started."
Instead she said, "Mmm, time to get my little friend out. I can tell I've got some catching up to do. ;*" So, I was like, "Well, what am *I* here for then? You don't need me around to do that ... Really? *I'm* here, a flesh and blood man, and you want to play with your dildo 'friend'?" So, I would have written that other line instead, to BOTH tease AND give context to the action.
The last bit, and this is a SIMPLE one to fix ... Don't bury the "cum" instructions in the middle of a paragraph:
"Just hold it a bit longer for me, pleaaaaaase. *she whispers in your ear.*
EDGE! - try and hold it as long as you can before cumming and moving on."
Don't do that. Instead, it should have been:
"Just hold it a bit longer for me, pleaaaaaase. *she whispers in your ear.*
EDGE! - hold it as long as you can then scroll down."
CUM FOR ME!! CUM RIGHT NOW!!
*She cries out in ecstasy, and, for an indeterminable time after, all you can hear is the eco of that cry mixed with the thunderous thumping of your own heart.*
Make the cum instructions clear and abrupt. The way you did it was confusing and takes away the suspense. It's best to hold, scroll down, THEN be told to cum abruptly. That's best practice.
And that ending ... WOW!
"*You both lay there, panting heavily. She nuzzles close to you, nibbling on your ear whilst she gently caresses your cock with her hand. Sending shivers along your spine.* ...Thank you... that was... amazing."
*Her legs and arms wrap around you. And the last thing you here before falling asleep is Dillions exhausted voice whispering one word.*
I just LOVED that ... SO good! PERFECT ending to an AMAZING ending sequence!
The cum on her lips ... I just now realized that I came in her pussy, so ... how would she get cum on her lips? ... DOESN'T MATTER ... usually, I get turned off by cumshots but, the story was SO immersive, even if it WAS NOT PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE I knew that was my cum on her lips, and that was SO sexy ...
Even that final pic ... it's like we were cuddling or something and I couldn't get a clear view of her! SO well done!
"Mine. " I don't even find Dillon super attractive ... she's like a 7 for me, but ... that "Mine. " I REALLY wanted to be Dillon's and was SO glad that I was! PERFECT ending line for a "girlfriend experience" tease.
LOVED it. LOVED it, loved it, LOVED it! BEST ending sex sequence I have played on this thread, MAYBE even this SITE. Not 100% on that, because ... I've played so many and can't remember them all but definitely best on the thread that I have read and quite possibly best I've seen on Milovana.
And maybe Chabo just wasn't immersed or maybe I'm just super imaginative and easily get sucked in ... or maybe having to count strokes prevented him from fully immersing himself ... whatever it was, I just wanted to let you know that *I* thought this was a VERY good set, and I didn't like the idea that you thought it was bad when it DEFINITELY wasn't ... and I'm a very critical person (if you couldn't tell by my crazy amounts of criticism, lol), so, I wouldn't lie and say it was good when I thought it was bad.
Okay, so, that's that ... I just spent like 3 hours writing this when perhaps I should have been working on one of my MANY sets that is in production ... ... but, I think you have a LOT of potential and talent and wanted to spend some time investing in a person, so, I hope my advice was useful and helps you to improve your set writing in the future!
And REALLY DO go and read the Helequin and Ecik sets I linked above. Those guys are MASTER tease writers.
If I had any teases I felt were compatible with your rules, I would also recommend one of mine. Unfortunately, that is NOT the case, HOWEVER ... SOON I will drop a set for Chabo AND one for PoetBird ... both of those you SHOULD be able to actually play, and you can see my approach to set writing. (It is VERY character driven, lol). If you are interested in checking out any of the sets I wrote, check out my rules. Under the "Personalities" section, I cross-linked the teases I wrote for the various girls to their description in the section. So, for example, if you want to read a set that features "Michaela", open the spoiler at the bottom of her section, and you can get to her teases from there.
I'm not expecting any sets from you, by the way. Take a break and go do "life" stuff. But, when you come back, if you want to do a "set exchange" ... and IF you want to practice writing and developing a character ... I'm TELLING YOU ... a set where I help "Kaleesy" move into the Harem House ... that would be SO amazing!
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Hello again, StokkEN. It's been a while... Ready for another session with me?
Same rules as last time. No props or toys required -- just that nice, hard dick of yours and a lot of lube!
All accidental ruined orgasms today count as 1 disciplinary strike each, but if you think you can immediately keep going, without any break, then you may continue the set. If you make it all the way to the end, following every instruction, then those disciplinary strikes are erased back to zero.
If you can't make it, however, and you take a break or quit, then all strikes stay.
Anjelica's hair is "dirty blonde" today. Treat her as a blonde, according to your rules.
I must say, I was very happy and impressed with your performance when we first met.
I wore my favorite booty shorts and edged you hard, remember? I started fast and gave you basically no chance to warm up.
But you held yourself together, did everything I told you to do, and managed to avoid any embarrassing ruined orgasms...
Since then, I've come to think of you as one of my "favorites."
It's true! You're on my list!
I even have special rules for you...
What-? You think you boy-toys are the only ones with "lists of favorites" and sexy "special rules"?
This is as much a game to us girls as it is for you boys. Perhaps even moreso...
Although our game is a bit more... competitive.
Would you like to know the rules to the game we play with you and your defenseless dick? Would you like to know how we use your body's most intimate, involuntary responses to score "points"...?
Awww, I'm afraid that information is Girls' Eyes Only. Oh well!
Honestly... It's better if you don't know what my friends and I are repeatedly, systematically doing to you. It's better if you just relax, join me in the flow, and we can just get lost together... Like this...
So... Every time I force you to edge, I want you to look me in the eyes. We're in this together. Don't take your eyes off me, ever...
Yes... I want to see a big, eager smile on your face, while your cock pulses with pleasure.
When I reel you back from the edge of climax, I want to hear you say "Thank you, Anjelica." -- I want to hear the bliss and gratitude in your voice, every time I don't let you cum.
Edge as hard as you can for me, baby -- every time.
Good start. Keep going...
You're doing great so far, baby. Having fun, yet?
Good boy. Keep going...
You do realize that we're just getting started, right? Are you even leaking precum yet?
No -- That's not what I mean by "leaking." That's barely even "dripping." Keep going... I'll show you.
"Dripping" is when I've edged you so hard, so many times, that your cock starts involuntarily pulsing on its own, even when you aren't touching it...
...and enough precum collects at the tip, that it drips to the floor or runs down the side of your shaft like a tear of frustration, completely untouched.
"Dripping" is when you are desperate for me to take your dick into my expert hands -- when every touch makes you gasp with sweet relief...
"Dripping" is when simple stroking starts to become unbearable -- when you start to beg and plead for the edge...
...and then I give it to you -- I graciously permit you to edge -- and you feel that familiar, powerful, pulsing surge...
...you feel an intense electric tingle gathering and spreading from your core...
...and it feels so good!
...until you slam into that edge, let go, and all those amazing sensations culminate in a single, untouched, reflexive contraction...
...your dick flexes to push out that one, single droplet of precum...
...and you watch it drip to the floor -- Your body's tribute to me.
That's what I call "dripping"!
"Leaking" is something much more than that. Follow me outside, StokkEN, and I'll show you...
You know what I like about you, StokkEN? -- Besides your wonderful stamina and total devotion, of course. -- You edge for the usual naked body parts, like most of my boy-toys do...
...But you edge even harder for certain, very specific articles of clothing...
...like one of my all-time favorite edge-toys: lmind.
According to his old rules, we did not even require him to edge for nipples, ass, and pussy. We made him edge for sneakers, sports bras, booty shorts, ponytails, stockings, and things like that. -- Yes, sneakers... like these!
In other words, we did not even have to get naked to edge lmind into submission. In fact, we edged him HARDER with our clothes ON! And he liked it that way.
Just. Like. You.
You -- and your "thing" for booty shorts...
Recognize this outfit?
A few days ago, I gave lmind a little taste of this outfit -- just a quick tease to whet his appetite. But today, I'm going to absolutely wreck you with it.
That's right, baby. You're going to hold some edges for me...
Promise me you won't quit, ok? Even if you lose control and ruin all over yourself, promise me you'll keep going...
These edges are my gift to you, for being such a good, strong, obedient boy. So remember to look me in the eyes, smile, and say "Thank you, Anjelica."
Show me how grateful you are... how ecstatic you are... how badly you need me to edge you again and again...
Beg me to keep going. Beg me for more!
Mmmm... good... Now, as I was saying earlier about "leaking"...
"Leaking" precum is something much more than just "dripping."
And I want to watch you to leak for me...
You're good at this. With my help, and a little tough love, your cock can put on a fantastic show. I'm going to make you give me exactly what I'm looking for...
80 strokes and holding the edge for 30 seconds... over and over again... I'm not quitting anytime soon, baby. I promise.
Hang in there. Don't stop. Be strong for me!
"Leaking" is when your cock goes from producing single, isolated drips of precum, to continuously throbbing and pulsing out a steady stream...
The flow becomes constant, the entire time I'm edging you...
The flow doesn't stop, even when you let go -- even when you're not touching yourself at all.
Flex your PC muscles and pump it out, baby. I want to see an unbroken strand of glistening ecstasy, running from the tip of your dick, every time you let go. Show me physical proof that my body turns you on!
I want to watch you produce a literal puddle of precum. We're not stopping until I'm satisfied.
The amount you leak is the measure of how much I turn you on. It is the measure of how happy you make me.
So leak for me, baby. Make me a happy girl.
Does this help?
Of course it does...
Focus on my body, baby. Don't look away. Tell me how sexy I am.
Mmmm... Yes... You wanted this. You knew I was devious and a little cruel sometimes, but you wanted me anyway...
You knew about how I edged and denied lmind, in my sexy long dress, but you wanted me anyway...
You knew about how I gave him a nearly impossible task so I could ruin and deny him again, but you still wanted me anyway...
After what I did to him -- twice! -- did you really think I was going to let you cum?
Ohhh... StokkEN, you brave, foolish boy... Look me in the eyes, keep stroking, listen closely, and learn this one essential lesson, before I'm through with you...
If you haven't figured it out by now... All I ever wanted was to see you leak. All I wanted was to watch that precum dribble helplessly down the side of your dick. I wanted you to show me how sexy I am, by making the biggest puddle of precum that you could...
And instead... You couldn't help but ruin yourself...
...And then you kept going! When it comes to making sexy puddles of frustration, it doesn't get much better than that. So... Good boy! You did great today! I'm proud of you!
What are you waiting for, sexy? Focus on my body, hold another 30 second edge, and CUM for me! You earned it!!
Yes! That's what I like to see -- a boy completely drained of all his cum. I did it!
I love knowing that I have that power over boys like you -- the power to absolutely drain your balls, one way or another, whenever I feel like it. You know you love it, too.
Go rest and recharge now, baby. Clean yourself up, and erase your demerits back to zero. Then find another leaky edge-toy and send him to me. Oh... and don't tell him what I just did to you. The surprise is part of the fun!!
Ohhh... StokkEN, you brave, foolish boy... Look me in the eyes, keep stroking, listen closely, and learn this one essential lesson, before I'm through with you...
If you haven't figured it out by now... All I ever wanted was to see you leak. All I wanted was to watch that precum dribble helplessly down the side of your dick. I wanted you to show me how sexy I am, by making the biggest puddle of precum that you could...
And you stayed strong the entire time, while I edged you over and over and over again...
But I wanted a puddle of frustration, and I'm going to get it. Now, focus on my body, hold another 30 second edge, CUM, and RUIN it!
Ahhh... Yes... That's better. That's what I like to see. A boy's cum, dribbling down... Expertly extracted, if I do say so myself. And that pleading look on your face! Wow! You are so hot, StokkEN! You turn me on so much right now! Get back to the edge and hold it for 30 seconds, one more time for me...
I love knowing that I have that power over boys like you -- the power to drain your balls, one way or another, whenever I feel like it. You know you love it, too.
Go rest and recharge now, baby. Clean yourself up, and give yourself one demerit. Then find another leaky edge-toy and send him to me. Oh... and don't tell him what I just did to you. The surprise is part of the fun!!
THE END
(for now...)
FattsDynamo wrote: Thu Dec 02, 2021 11:19 am
Here's a SHORT return set for lmind. (Basically a mini set.)
Great concept! The fabled Village. Like something you think you saw, out of the corner of your eye, but when you look for it... it's gone. I'm looking forward to my next visit; I want to make a good impression; and I'm excited to hear that Caprice is in charge of the welcoming committee. Since I'm new, I could probably use Guerlain's innocent touch to ease me into the community. Beyond that, I trust the girls to know what's best to get the most out of me. I live to please!
The session length was good. If the girls want to keep me longer, then they can, as long as they break my "orientation" into short sessions like that. And if they don't want me to cum between sessions, or if they have other between-session homework, I will obey their wishes.
Important! I do not have enough free time to do a traditional "set." I only get tiny, isolated, unpredictable pockets of free time, 15 to 30 minutes here and there, every few days or so. So if you want to make something for me, it probably can't follow the usual routine of stroking and edging for a long sequence of sexy pictures. It should probably resemble more like "homework," with short tasks.
That is a major limitation, but maybe also an opportunity for creativity. I leave that to you and to the girls who find that interesting.
Since I can't do traditional "sets" of pictures, I do not have the usual per-picture rules. Instead, I will do my best to complete any challenges, tasks, etc., that fit into 15-30 minute windows -- with pictures for narrative, inspiration, reward, or whatever you want. Multiple tasks can be included in the same tease -- I will do them separately over a few days and won't cum in the meantime.
Example Short Tasks:
Spend 10 minutes reading the narrative and looking at the pictures...
...without touching myself, or
...while stroking at a certain pace, or
...while flexing my PC muscle and trying to cum without touching myself, or
...while palming or slapping my cock (yikes!), or
...while edging (a certain number of times; repeatedly; or holding them), or
...while building up to cum at the end (ruin or full), or
...any combination of those.
Tasks like that. If a girl wants to get creative with this general idea, I totally welcome it!
Preferences:
Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun.
Sneakers, sports bras, yoga pants, high socks, and ponytails.
Thanks for the set! Seeing as I am in chastity for a couple more hours at the time of writing, I thought I'd make your return set first. Feedback will follow as I complete the set!
Hi, stroker! Are you in a rush?
I hope not, because your orgasm might depend on it today
But I won't explain until later, that way it will be much more fun for me!
Aaand probably much harder for you
Go a little faster, we're going to build up to your first edge
A little faster now
And edge for me!
Take a short brake, ten seconds, and no touching!
And edge again!
And rest
And edge! Ride this one for 10 seconds as well
Good stroker! Now take your hands off, no touching until i say!
Now the challenge begins! And I'm going to explain the premise of this task now. You will be getting an opportunity to cum today, but only if you follow my instructions very closely, down to the smallest detail. Understand? I'm only going to say this once, so you better listen carefully and take notes, so you know exactly what to do when the time comes, we don't want you to lose out on an opportunity to cum because you didn't listen, do we? Good! Oh, I did mention no touching during this part right? Yes, good!
So in order to cum, I'm going to have you partake in a game of my creation. I've actually had a lot of fun playing this game with other boytoys, so I think we're going to have a lot of fun today! Well me at least, your level of fun will likely be decided by how well you're performing, since, you know, that's ultimately what's going to decide if you're going to cum or not. And let's be honest, that's why you're here, isn't it? To try and earn an opportunity to cum? That's why you keep coming back to us girls, begging us to toy with you, tease you, and play with you however we want.
So if you want to have fun today you're going to listen very, very carefully to what I am about to say. Losing out on this opportunity would be devastating. Think about that for a second, the feeling of having the chance to earn your own pleasure, by good old manual labour, and then throwing it all away by not being attentive to my words. That would be horri... What's that? Why am I talking so much? Why to get you as far away from the edge as possible of course! You see, to cum you're going to have to flex your PC muscle, there will be no more touching for you today, you can cum whenever you want to, after i say "go". No not that time, the next time I say it!
You can try for as long as you want, and you can even watch porn if you want to. I even added a few suggestions to help you get started! Feel free to thank me! Now without further ado, it is time to say: READY...... SET..... GO!
*Door 1 Open
*Door 2 Open - No Cum dripping (well a lot of Precum but none dropped)
*Door 3 Closed- eventhough I really like beeing called a Beta
*Door 4 Open
*Door 5 Closed
*Door 6 Open - started again by Door 1 and replayed all open Doors
"Maybe you had to open every door to get enough edges...
But we wouldn't be that cruel... would we?"
This was just amazing... I planned on doing like 12 Edges because the boarder was there last time, but these Sentences just did me do a lot more...
*Door 7 Open - Did not ruin. Slapped my balls 15 times for each picture and edge for every pussy. I was so desperate already these slapps made me almost cum.
*Door 8 Open
*Door 9 Open
Did not ruin. A lot of Edges here. I was so close to cumming... so desperate to cum... no way I would ruin it now.
*Door 10 Closed - bug? no Spoiler there... Well would have not entered after all.
Had exactly 20 Edges so I got an Full Orgasm. It was one of the best ones I ever had for real.
Thanks for this amazing Set. I liked everything about this Set. It was the perfect pacing for me. Just about doable for me... no kidding like a handfull of Edges more and i would have busted bad... so everything was perfect. Liked how you used the BETA and Censor Theme, I like this Setting eventhough I did not ruin it eventhough I was told 2 time that a real BETA would have ruined it freely to censored stuff.
No favorite pictures this Time because I just liked almost every single Picture in this set. For real. It was just amazing.
Just some small things I disliked just a little bit:
*Not a real fan of Ball squezzing. Slaps or Clothespins are better.
Basic Rules (everything accumulating!!!)
Girl 20 Strokes (per Girl)
Pussy +1 Edge (per Pussy)
Ass +20 Strokes (per Ass)
Tits +20 Strokes (10 per Tit)
Feet +20 Strokes (10 per Foot) (You can expand the Rules for Shoes or/and Socks) You can influence these Rules in your Sets.
You can add: Strokes, Edges, Ballslaps, clothspins.
Special Rules
Elsa Jean: doubles for Feet. (40 Strokes (20 per Foot))
Turn ONs
Check out my List of favorite Girls.
See my Profile for Turn ONs/OFFs
Wishes / Ideas:
Story Story is necessary!!! short, simple Storys are enough.
Simple Neighbor, School Friend, Ex-Girlfriend Storys,...,... will be fine.
Create a single Story Set or start a Set series. I like both ways.
Edge
I have pretty bad Stamina. I need breaks after Edges. Try to stay under ~30 Edges.
Iam getting better at Edges :D
Cum
The Set needs to have an Full Orgasm or a ruined one.
Can be decided by Luck, Guessing, my behaviour through the Set, Cruel intention of the Girls, etc.
lmind wrote: Wed Dec 08, 2021 8:38 pm
Great concept! The fabled Village. Like something you think you saw, out of the corner of your eye, but when you look for it... it's gone. I'm looking forward to my next visit;
Yeah—thank you! I'm going to be teasing some of that ... you'll see a bit in the next set I publish—which will be my horny chabo return set which is CLOSE to being done ... Whenever I finally finish writing the Helequin set (AFTER Chabo, AFTER PoetBird, and probably after I do some more of your minis) ... THAT will be the "big reveal" for the Village ... and the companion set I've already started writing for Ecik builds off of and plays with some of the elements that will be given in the Helequin "Village Premier" set ... I was kind of looking for a way to explain both the Village AND this forum and what we do ... clearly, I'm trying to build hype (and HOPEFULLY I'm not overselling it ) But, I think it's pretty good.
lmind wrote: Wed Dec 08, 2021 8:38 pmCaprice ... Guerlain
I think I'm detecting some hints.
lmind wrote: Wed Dec 08, 2021 8:38 pm
The session length was good. If the girls want to keep me longer, then they can, as long as they break my "orientation" into short sessions like that.
Yup! That's the plan ... I was going to do one long set, but, then I read your rules, so ... I'll still "deliver" one "long" set ... I'll just publish it one scene at a time basically ... I was going to drop a bunch at once and let you pick and choose as you have time, but ... I'll probably just put them out one at a time as I write them ... you'll get them faster that way.
lmind wrote: Wed Dec 08, 2021 8:38 pm
And if they don't want me to cum between sessions, or if they have other between-session homework, I will obey their wishes.
I'll "let the girls decide." If it was one long session, I'd just have you cum at the end, but ... since now (just now) I decided to publish one at a time, I'll leave it to each individual girl whether or not they want to make you cum (and how you cum ) at the end of each mini-set/scene. Consider the "story" to be continuous then, but treat each set as a stand alone. I may have to include some homework ... We'll see! Again, I'll "leave that up to the girls." So, you may have full, ruined, or denial at the end of each set. With your rules being what they are where you only want at max 30 min sessions ... I'll basically just be writing a "full" set one scene at a time ... it's kind of different from the usual "create 5-6 scenes and publish the set." Making each set playably self-contained is an interesting design constraint ... should be fun!
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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First of all, thank you for all the good tips! I have always considered myself a bit of a armature writer and was born with a penchant for words. None of the tips were necessarily new to me, but it is always good to be reminded and to put it in context of this game. So again thank you, genuinely appreciated!
I read through (didn’t play) Helequins set you linked to and, dam, I see what you mean! The writing was excellent, such a tease. A really clever way to introduce characters. Each character was well written and different players would get different favourites, depending on their preferences. Which in turn would give the author a good idea of what the players like based on the feedback.
I especially loved reading Malenas part. Teasing, dominant, a pusher of boundaries. Dam, that was hot!
“Mostly nice? Did you catch me on a good day I don't remember or something?”
“Edge hard slut! When I take control of you, you will fucking know it.”
“I will be a bitch because it's fun. I will fuck you boys over because it's hilarious. But I'm not some psychopath.”
Had I played that set I’m not entirely sure I would have gotten past her … Alto the part about not being a psychopath is a bit questionable. Especially since one of her reasons for “respecting” limits and rules are:
“if I actually break you then I don't get to torment you over and over. But if I don't break you I get to come back and do it all over again bitch.”
Mielas part was also great. Again super teasing but this time not really that dominant. Rather… flexible, almost “service minded”, if she is dominant then it’s only because she knows that is what turns the player on:
“...The way it all turned Vennyo on, made him harder and teased him more. That mutual back and forth of him trusting me enough to be that vulnerable and of me to indulge him without harming him…”
All of this made me realize - or rather, reminded me - that I really love being teased.
That's such a difficult concept to grasp. It can be dominant, but it’s not mean; playful, yet not funny; sometimes subtle and sometimes sublime. It is ecstasy and dread, the thrill you get from not knowing what awaits you; not knowing what the next picture will bring. Not knowing if it will send you to new levels of bliss or frustration. A girl can tease you for the things that turns you on; or for things that you didn’t even realize would turn you on! Or they can tease you by pushing your boundaries and limits; making you experience new pleasures that you previously would never have thought of. It is frustration and satisfaction, intertwined and inseparable. And I guess, in a way, that's what every player here is truly after, just in their own way, with their own preferences and desires… Anyway, I probably shouldn't give you any more inspiration or ideas; it seems that you got plenty enough of that already.
PS: as I was reading this back I realized that this might be a bit misleading. I'm okay with dominant girls; just not full on abusive or mean. The reason I liked Malena so much has more to do with the way she... embodied the essens of "tease", if that makes any sense to anyone but me, rather than her dominans.
Also, that last girl, Lorena? I think. Anyway, she made a good argument. Like in general I agree with you, I prefer to get to cum at the end. But sometimes, denial/ruin can be insanely hot! Part of what made Chabos last three sets so awesome for me was the connection between them. Yes it was super frustrating getting ruined at the end of the second one AND even worse spending days being super horny. But that's part of what made the final end in the third set sooooooo good! But yes, if a set end with a ruin/denial and then nothing! That's just unsatisfying, the satisfaction comes from the complete journey. The teasing, the denial and finally the release. Not just teasing, denial and...
your expression should go:
And not:
As for the Dillion set in particular, It's really nice to hear that someone appreciated it. And for the most part I agree. I think the main reason Chabo didn’t like it was simply because that style of narrative just wasn't his cup of tea and because he isn't as turned on by Dillion as he used to be. It would be like someone sending me a bunch of pictures of skinny teens, sure I might get horny enough to get off to it, but that's not the point. Of course I couldn't have known this when I posted the set, and therefore I don’t think I made any mistakes on this part.
The reason I said that it was “bad” wasn't because I failed to see the good parts, but rather because I succeeded in seeing the bad parts. The break in the middle felt forced. It might have worked if you actually got to visit the hospital. The set was a bit short and generally rushed. I also agree with your critique of show don't tell. I was actually considering tying things into a future set where I would start "showing" the characters more. But, not only was I over committing, but I could have done it a lot more… smother. Still, it’s awesome that you liked the writing so much. I wasn't sure if it was the wrong type of narrative for this thread in general; or just not for Chabo in particular. So it’s good to know that some of you appreciate that sort of writing. (no disrespect to Chabo of course!)
As for Kaleesy moving into the Harem House… I’ll have a word with Nancy about that, I’m sure we can - at the very least - sort out a visit.
Glad you liked it! Based on your previous feedback I felt pretty confident that you would. But I was still a bit concerned that you might not have opened enough doors (or too many) and that that would leave the set a bit unsatisfying for you. Originally planned to have 24 doors. You know, because of Christmas and all. But that would have been too much work and each encounter would have to have been a lot shorter. I feel like it was better to go with the “less is more” option. So that each encounter was more like a mini set, rather than a few pictures with basically no writing.
Good thing that you opened door 6. I tried to make that one as tempting as possible. Both because it was the only one that made you go back to the start and her teasing was meant to motivate you to open more doors… It appears that it was successful! Just a question, did you play with the no leaking rule at door 2 the second time you were there? Obviously it doesn't really matter now, just curious.
It was probably for the best that you skipped door 5, seeing how close you were to go over before the end. But, personally, I’m quite pleased with both the writing and the pictures in that one. So feel free to go back and open it now if you like.
Also sorry if it was a bit unclear but door 10 WAS the ending.
… just realized that i wrote door 10 twice, which probably didn’t help.
I made my last set for a while. But if anyone wants to make me a set then feel free. I'll write feedback when I have the time. I'll probably make new sets again at the end of January/start of February.
Stroking style:
Blonde - fast strokes
Brunette - slow strokes
Red head - head only
Unnatural Hair - tight grip whilst squeezing balls.
(Unnatural hair = blue, green, pink etc. Not coloured red, blonde or brunette.)
Special:
Strap-on - follow all normal rules and edge ones for every girl in the picture.
Siri (Dahl) - Edge whilst squeezing balls hard and stroking only the head.
Heidi Romanova or Mia sollis - replace strokes with cock slaps.
Piper Fawn - hold the edge 30 sec
Proxy Paige - replace stroking with; one edge for every visible nipple, pussy and ass in the picture.
Other favourites:
Jess B
Faye Reagan
Summer Hart
Carisha Maja
Sapphire Blue
Veronica Vain
Paige Rad
Replace special rules:
Any of the girls in the "Other favourites" section can replace any special rules. Just say so at the start. For example if you say; Carisha Maja will replace Siri for this set. Then I have to follow Siri's instructions for every picture of Carisha Maja.
I like girls only but it is not a must.
I generally prefer girls with a full natural figure. (Though there are some exceptions - like Mia Sollis and generally fit girls or girls with intense eyes.)
Siri is a great example. Not skinny and not too fat. Alix Lakehurst can look good but is generally a bit too much for my taste, so that's my limit. No skinny girls that could be mistaken for a boy, duckbeaked Hollywood wifes or bimbos. If that's your thing, good for you, it's not for me.
I like a bit of story/context but to me the pacing is more important than getting the pictures to make sense. I do love to get teased by the girls, whether in a dominant or playful way doesn't really matter. And consistency of the character is rather important.
I can’t edge too many times in a row without mixing it up, going back and forth between edging and stroking is fine. And I've never held an edge for more than maybe six or eight minutes, at most. Lots of stroking with a few specials is also fine.
I'm unlikely to follow through with Pot or denial/ruin endings, explicit consequences helps; both to punish me if I fail and to motivate me not to fail. So if you want to keep it simple just let me cum. (Otherwise see optional for more info)
Optional:
(These rules are purely optional and you don't have to read this.)
Cocks in pictures:
I said I prefer girls only and this is mostly true. Some pov stuff is fine, and the longer the set goes on the less I care. Some gangbang pictures towards the end can even be a turn on. Just not in every set.
Fail state:
If you like, you can suggest a consequence for failing the set (or/and punishments for failing or refusing to do part of it). This is strictly optional and I can not guarantee that I will do it. Only that, if it is within my limits, I'll try.
Limits:
Cbt: I can handle cockslaping, toothpaste, and just about manage icyhot, hot wax.
Hard no: anal/ass play, excessive humiliation or exhibition.
(I can do stuff outdoors, forests and such or on a bus, if it's safe enough. Just nothing too risky.)
Clarification:
A punishment can be short, simple, long, complex etc. It's up to you. I'll give feedback on it. Of course if you come up with a good one you can use it multiple times. (Especially since it might take several sets before I fail.)
Examples; edge daily for a week with no cumming. Edge five times outdoors at different locations and ruin once before going inside. For your next tease mix a tiny bit of icyhot in the lube. And if it is a punishment for failing a part of a set, for instance having to take a break to stop me from cumming early then you can force me to redo part of the set. Or add a modifier etc.
Optional Ending:
Hold the edge as long as possible before cumming; whilst watching a Lesbian pov or taken(futa)* pov video of your choice. Can have consequence for not lasting long enough.
Pmvs and challenges:
A set can contain some pmvs with instructions. For example; edge as many times as you can to the video with 10 seconds break after each edge. There can be consequences depending on how well I do. These don't have to be explicit. There can be other similar challenges in the set, it's up to you.
* normally not my cup of tea, but for some reason these are a turn on for me.
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Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
First of all, thank you for all the good tips! I have always considered myself a bit of a armature writer and was born with a penchant for words. None of the tips were necessarily new to me, but it is always good to be reminded and to put it in context of this game. So again thank you, genuinely appreciated!
Yay! I'm glad my advice was helpful! I always find it a struggle writing teases. I'm a perfectionist. I want to make something PERFECT (or pretty close) before I put it out there ... but, in the time I write ONE "high quality" tease, I could probably have put out at least 5 or 6 "satisfactory" teases, so ... it's hard to balance. Most people would probably rather get 5 "good" teases instead of one "amazing" tease, so ... I have trouble finding the right amount of effort ... and THEN, I get a REALLY GOOD idea and vision, something I'm excited about ... and then I do EVERYTHING I can to make that happen ... which usually involves going full "Dynamo mode" and investing WAY too much time on it! So, I will NEVER judge someone for taking a shortcut when tease writing ... I just consider myself that crazy person who can't say no!
Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
I read through (didn’t play) Helequins set you linked to and, dam, I see what you mean! The writing was excellent, such a tease. A really clever way to introduce characters.
Yup! That's why I wanted you to see it. I basically asked him to "introduce" me to some of the "girls he plays with" and BOY he did, lol!
Hell yeah Malena is SUPER fucking sexy ... I want her to tease me SO bad, lol! Yeah, all those lines of hers got me too ...
So, again, the thing to remember, is that Helequin and others have probably written or received LOTS of teases involving these girls, so much so, that Helequin had CLEAR visions of and insights into these characters, so ... all he had to do was imagine the character that was ALREADY in his head and just write her in a way that matched the idea that was already fully formed. I've been taking a similar approach with "my" "Village" girls ... of course, as you pointed out, pretty much everybody here WANTS to be teased and dominated on some level, but ... my girls tend to be much softer ... so, I can deliver better on that. Helequin tends to like more intense, so ... he does that probably WAY better than I EVER will! BUT, I LOVED his Lorena, so ... he can write "soft" well, too!
I don't care for hardcore, but, apparently this set for Ecik was very effective. So, I thought that was interesting, because, I don't really like hardcore, but, I was able to write a "good" hardcore set so ... I guess "yay" for me, lol! BUT ... I didn't really "enjoy" writing the set, because I MUCH more enjoy writing dialogue for character driven sets, but ... Ecik and I started collaborating on a new character for me to tease him with ... ALSO he really likes my "Melena" character, so ... I send her to tease him when I can. The current set I'm working on for him (FAR from being published any time soon) features Melena, but, if you want to "see" "Melena" for yourself, this set I wrote for Ecik I think is quite good. (Since you told me you read and liked Helequin's set, have you noticed this post suddenly become an advertisement to read the sets I wrote? ) She will make another major appearance in my next PoetBird set which is somewhat close to being done ...
Ecik does an AMAZING job of writing plot/theme-based teases. He has LOTS of great, creative ideas. His recent set for Stokken about "goonfit" is a GREAT example. His Halloween "every0ne set" (I misspell every0ne so this post doesn't show up in the search results) is another good one. I was able to play it, so you should ALSO be able to play it. Keep in mind, your edging rules are model specific, so, if you want to edge during the set, you'll need add a rule like "edging for pussy" or edging for 9/10 or 10/10 pics or something like that ...
The only bad thing about you playing sets I write (for other people) is I tend to like and write for skinnier petite girls. (Not all, but mostly.) Of course, if I write specifically for you, I would DEFINITELY include a scene that either includes one of your favorites or a "healthier" model (NOT a super skinny girl). So, to that end, most of "my" characters tend to be based on skinny, petite models. BUT, if you have a clear idea for a personality, you can paste any model into that personality. The only challenge is if that model already has a well developed personality on the thread, such as Mila. The benefit of having a "well developed personality" is that the player already comes in with background knowledge and experience. There is less to explain and "show" and all of the memories of past experiences with her help to create anticipation and immersion. Hele did SUCH a good job on that set ... even just that ONE scene with Miela ... no way I could write her as well as Helequin because I'm not yet super familiar with the character, but ... I could definitely do a decent job of it, because the idea is already out there ...
Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
Anyway, I probably shouldn't give you any more inspiration or ideas; it seems that you got plenty enough of that already.
Don't worry too much ... I already have a pretty good concept and outline for the tease I want to write for you ... So, I should have just asked directly earlier, but, can you run a metronome AND view the webtease at the same time on your phone? A metronome is fairly innocuous and doesn't give too much away ...
Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
As for the Dillion set in particular, It's really nice to hear that someone appreciated it. And for the most part I agree. I think the main reason Chabo didn’t like it was simply because that style of narrative just wasn't his cup of tea and because he isn't as turned on by Dillion as he used to be. It would be like someone sending me a bunch of pictures of skinny teens, sure I might get horny enough to get off to it, but that's not the point. Of course I couldn't have known this when I posted the set, and therefore I don’t think I made any mistakes on this part.
I think that's an accurate description of what happened. However, I have one thing to add ... for me, Dillon DEFINITELY fits into my skinny/petite girl body type preference, but, for me, she's just like a 7 (where all my favorite girls are 9s and 10s) ... HOWEVER, your writing was so good, that I didn't really care that she wasn't the "perfect" model for me. Your writing made the difference.
BUT, here is the flipside ... good writing (like Helequin's) can take a skinny girl like Malena and make her extra sexy to you ... but, even if your writing is "bad" if you choose good models that the player likes ... they are BASICALLY GUARANTEED to enjoy the set ... so, good writing can turn a "meh" model into a sex goddess, but, even if your writing is not great, you can SAVE your set just by picking models the player really likes ... of course, there are limits. Ecik said my set featuring Ashley Doll was very well written, but even with that, she's not a model he would like featured in sets moving forward. Of course, it was basically a "solo model set", so, I took a risk selecting her for that, but ... at the time, he said he was open to anything (including hentai which he really doesn't like) and ALSO he was doing like easy mode stroking rules for NNN, so ... it was going to be a short set with no possibility of orgasm anyways, so ... it was fine ... and, I suppose I did make an impression on him with her, because he added her to his rules, but ... the rule was NOT to edge for her! So, even WITH good writing that the player really likes, there ARE limits on how effective you can make a model!
Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
The reason I said that it was “bad” wasn't because I failed to see the good parts, but rather because I succeeded in seeing the bad parts.
Very fair. That makes sense.
Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
I also agree with your critique of show don't tell. I was actually considering tying things into a future set where I would start "showing" the characters more.
So, I think there are basically 3 effective ways to "introduce" a character.
The first way would be that "Guerlain telling me about her friends" type of way that Ecik set that I posted. There, the "host" "describes" her friends. I think that works best only if you are doing a multi-part tease. In the set I am about to publish for Horny Chabo (that I just about finished writing the script for tonight ... I'm like 12 hours into development on that set.:eyeroll:) I have Emily Bloom "tell" about her friends. It's decent. The hope is one of more of the characters will appeal to Chabo, and then in a future set I write, I can use that character and KNOW it will be effective.
The second way would be the "show don't tell" way, which is what Helequin did. It IS possible to fully capture the essence of one character in a single scene, but ... in order to do that well, your writing needs to be GOOD and you ALREADY need to have that character fully developed ... because you have limited time, so, EVERY SENTENCE needs to give or reveal some detail about that character. If the character is not well defined with a clear personality it will just be another regular scene ...
The third way is the one that I mostly use, lol. Go full "Dynamo mode" and make an ENTIRE SET basically featuring that model. There is enough time and space so that even if the writing isn't SUPER clear, the time is enough to make an impression, and you can clearly communicate all of your ideas about the essence of who and what that character is. That can be a risk, though, so, make sure the model you use fits into the player's preferences. Then at the very least, even if they don't end up liking the personality, they will have fun stroking to a pretty girl. (And that is probably what didn't work for Chabo. He wasn't turned on by that personality and style and ALSO did not like the model ... but like you said, you couldn't have known.)
And then the OTHER thing ... what if the player has a preconceived idea about what the personality of that model should be? For example, I knew that Faye Reagan was a favorite of PoetBird's, but, he did not have ANY information in his rules about her "personality." So, in that set I am working on for him, Faye Reagan appears, but she is "nice." Turns out PoetBird likes her best when she acts like a cold bitch, lol. Oops! But, even if it is NOT the ideal personality, it's Faye Reagan pics, so ... I'm sure he'll be able to edge to them no problem, lol ... BUT ... I actually started on a script for PB where Faye Reagan is "mean" so ... but, who knows when I will finish that, lol! TOO MANY GOOD IDEAS NOT ENOUGH TIME!
Bjorn13 wrote: Thu Dec 09, 2021 11:20 am
As for Kaleesy moving into the Harem House… I’ll have a word with Nancy about that, I’m sure we can - at the very least - sort out a visit.
NO I WANT HER TO MOVE IN!! ::catches breath::
Okay. Let's "start" with a visit, but ... IF that goes well ... and I will work REALLY hard to make sure it does ... maybe THEN she'll move in. (FYI, when it comes to matters of things that happen in "the Village" ... I ALWAYS get my way, lol ... but, that will be fully explained as to why that is in the "Village Premier" set (next one for Helequin, probably not till after Christmas, realistically ...)
And this just came to me ... I have NO IDEA what special rules I would use for her ... Other than Mila (who I squeeze my balls for when I edge) and Anjelica (who I hold my breath for when I stroke), I don't really have any ideas for Kaleesy ... IF she was a diva that liked to abuse her boys a bit ... there are a number of things in my "punishment" section of my rules that she could "adopt" and basically be able to do to me "for free" as part of her special rule ... idk. Mila and Anjelica have rules but aren't in my "favorites" list, so ... Kaleesy COULD potentially become another favorite who has some CBT type special rule ... nobody like that "lives" in the Harem House ... THAT could be interesting ...
BUT ... mostly I'm curious to see what direction you adopt and take her in. Don't listen to me. Make her your own. If you have a great idea and concept that is fun for you to write (and a CLEAR vision of what that character is, not just "generic girl") then she becomes real. That energy and passion that you have for the character will come through in the writing, and the clearer the picture of her you have in your mind the better you will be able to write her.
I think it was Chabo who observed that I spend a lot of time on this site. He was correct. I've basically stopped watching Netflix and playing much video games and this is how I've been spending much of my free time, lol. Yeah, I should probably follow your example and take a break for a while ... after I publish my Chabo and PoetBird sets which are both ALMOST done!
I enjoy writing teases. I will often get REALLY into it and take 10-30 hours to write a single tease that I am really into. Any tease I put that much effort into will be one that *I* really want to write. If you write me a set, thank you, but don’t expect a “dynamo level” tease in return. Moving forward, all return sets will be rushed: basically, the best tease I can write in 1-2 hours. (Life is pretty busy at the moment.) They should still be pretty good though ... just not that level of “amazing” I usually strive for. (Of course, I always reserve the right to go over time, but … I REALLY will be rushing and set up countdown timers and moving quick to get it done efficiently … I have a feeling Zerg’s template and pornpics.com will be my friends …)
I’ve spent a lot of time trying to develop my “bench” of HMC Village characters. If you have seen one of “my” girls in a tease I have written and would like to spend more time with her—even if it’s just a quickie return set—please let me know so I can make that happen. Some people might say that would makes me an “Internet fantasy pimp.” That may be true, but … just don’t let the girls hear you call me that, or else we will BOTH get in SO much trouble!
Basic Tease Guidelines:
I never realized it until joining this thread and writing some teases ... but, apparently, based on my rules and the sets I have written, my "ultimate sex fantasy" is to be the main character in a slice-of-life harem anime!
TLDR version:
If you are worried about writing a set for me, the main things are:
1. Keep the total number of edges around 20-30.
2. Watch your pacing. Give me a warmup scene with almost all stroking and maybe end with an edge. If the girls get crazy and edge me 10-15 times in one scene (which I CAN handle), follow that up with a scene that is mostly stroking.
3. Give me a full orgasm at the end! (Seriously though, it’s more of a requirement than a suggestion …)
Those are the basics. Beyond that, I like stories as well as challenges and games. It doesn't NEED to be super in-depth or have much of a story. If you are thinking about writing me one super long tease, instead consider giving me one that has multiple paths and endings that I could replay several times. I'm VERY vanilla. Stick to solo girls and lesbians for photo sets along with the above guidelines, and I'm SURE I'll enjoy it.
More detailed guidelines: (They get longer and longer, but … you don’t need to read it all to write me a set.)
Solo girls and lesbians. No cocks. Power and control themes are great—humiliation not so much. End with a full orgasm. Keep CBT lite. Games, challenges, and “punishments” are all good. Try to give me at least 5-10 pics of warmup before the first edge. 20 edges/session is a good target that will translate to roughly 60-90 minutes of play time. Shorter sets are fine! 60-80 edges is my max upper limit. Warn me that a session might be “long” if it goes over ~35 edges and consider marking a break point. Edge holds are good. 5 to 20 second edge holds are fine. 30-60 seconds are very nice, but I need to warm up to that. 1-2 min is good, but after two of those in quick succession, I’ll need a break. If a hold goes over 20 seconds, please spread the hold over several pics. I usually get bored if I have to hold a real long edge for just one pic.
The “full orgasm at the end” rule is pretty firm. If you don’t like that, just make me work for it! If you want a VERY thorough explanation for why I have that rule, you can read all about it in the feedback I wrote for Helequin in this post. Though I don’t prefer it, I’m okay with ruining. (It’s best as a “punishment.”) Multiple orgasms (with breaks) during a long set is probably the way to go with me for sets with over 30-40 edges. I’m an edge slut. After I’m really warmed up, a 6, 8, or even 12 edge frenzy is doable, but, I need a break after that, so, maybe follow that up with an orgasm or a less intense “mostly stroking” scene to give me a chance to recover. If I have to do X number of edges in Y minutes, a challenge with consequences like that REALLY excites me as I am both very competitive and hate getting in trouble …
I’m an ass man. Petite, skinny girls with nice, perky bubble butts are the best.
If you want to turn up the intensity of the tease, turn on a metronome. 240 BPM is a good pace for me to really keep me on my toes. If you want me to stroke fast and “force” me to edge, 270-300 will do that.
I’m creating a narrative setting: the HMC Village. Pretty much every tease I write is set here. The premise is the HMC thread players and girls all live together in one city, where the girls run around and constantly tease the boys in one giant, ongoing sex party. There’s drama, gossip, and occasionally even magic or science fiction elements.
If you want to write a “story” tease for me, that would be cool. I would love to see the HMC Village become a collaborative thing! All of my favorites have little descriptions for them (see below) which include their archetype (to make it easier to write for them). If you want to include one of my characters in any of your teases, please do! It doesn’t have to be exact, but just do your best to stay somewhat close to their archetype. I have enough girls with different archetypes that you can probably find one of my favorites that matches your writing style preference (to tease me how you like). Or, better yet, just develop your OWN “character” for the HMC Village and she WILL become canon!
If you don’t want to do that, TOTALLY fine. Just mention that the set does not take place in the Village and write however you want. That way I won’t go in with any expectations. Or, maybe, the domme is just trying out a different persona that day ... just have fun with it!
I mostly go for solo girls or lesbian pics. Tatoos are offputting, and neon hair is not really my thing. If there are guys in the pic, that’s typically a turn-off. Seeing other guys getting it on with girls I want to cum for, well … that diminishes my arousal. Often times when playing sets made for other people, I will just completely skip most pics with dicks in them. Even POV blowjob pics are kind of meh for me … unless the writing was done in such a way that I was on the receiving end, then it might be alright, but still, probably not my favorite …
I don’t do gay, trans, or shemale pics. I like hentai, but lately I tend to prefer “real” pics over hentai. (I do enjoy the tentacle stuff.) Bondage can be pretty hot. Actually, girls abusing boys who are in bondage would be an exception to the above (though lezdom is even better) … For regular hetero sex scenes, I always know the guy in the pic is not me, so, it becomes a turn-off … but, for some reason with bondage, maybe it’s the masks, I can identify with the dude. I really want to be bound, so, somehow, I’m able to “pretend” that guy is me and the thought of being that guy in that situation is a big turn on … but, solo girls and lesbians make up most of my porn diet.
I don’t like SPH or sissy stuff. I don’t do chastity. While I don’t enjoy most “humiliation”, I love banter and taunting. Not being “in control” is a big turn-on for me. So, a girl in the tease taunting me, telling me she doesn’t think I can handle another edge, but she’s going to make me edge anyway … That would be SUPER hot to me. Talking down to me, asserting her dominance, rubbing it in that I have to do what she says … that’s all about power and control, where straight humiliation is more about personal insults, belittling, and making the recipient feel lesser. Belittling me because I of my performance or piling it on when I’m getting punished or even insulting me about my preferences … that all falls more into power/control, which would all be good and very arousing ...
I enjoy when girls are sweet, caring, and affirming in teases as well. If she is really focused on my pleasure and making me feel good, that can be a huge turn on as well.
I like to cum at the end of every session with a full orgasm. I’ve never gotten into denial. I’m fine with ruins, but, when I ruin during a session, even multiple times, I almost always end with a full orgasm (usually not as satisfying after emptying out the tank). I don’t mind “working” for my final orgasm and would often prefer to “earn it” in some way.
The “window” for the “perfect orgasm” for me is somewhere between 10 and about 20 edges. After 25 edges, my dick starts getting fatigued. The perfect orgasm for me happens when I am both super excited and hard, and that peak typically occurs in that 10 to 20 or so window. Fatigued orgasms are usually not as satisfying as those in the peak. (I’m like a drug addict, except instead of chasing the stronger high, I’m chasing the perfect orgasm.) Going longer past the window and wearing me out with edges … that’s alright, too. I’m kind of an edge slut, and the promise of that orgasm keeps me motivated to keep going … but, I just don’t like being robbed unexpectedly at the end with a ruin or denial after I have “worked so hard” … That’s not fun for me.
I am good with cumming multiple times during a session. Getting a full one in during the “window”, taking a short break, then getting back to it … that sounds like a fantastic session for me. Full orgasms often but do not necessarily need to trigger the end of a session. Being “forced” to edge and cum over and over … that sounds like heaven to me …
I don’t generally enjoy CBT, but I will do it if instructed. Dick and ball slaps are fine, but I will not ball bust. I don’t do clothes pins (too painful), though tying up my balls can be fun. No ice, icy hot, candles, etc. I will eat my own cum, but, it’s not something I enjoy. Rubbing my nipples does nothing for me; don’t put it in any tease for me. I don’t usually do anal stuff, though I’m open to it. I don’t own a butt plug, so … I have to very carefully improvise on the rare occasion I do engage in anal play … I’ve never had a p-spot orgasm. I would like to have one someday, but, I would need a partner or a nice toy to make that happen. Don’t try to get me to have one in a tease …
I enjoy games and challenges, like cock heroes and web teases. I have coded and modified a lot of GuideMe teases. Stroking or edging in time can be a lot of fun. I can pretty much edge at any metronome speed. Feel free to incorporate timers or metronomes if you like. However, without an AI to run it, doing so in text teases can be cumbersome. I think the free form and writing and personalization is what makes forum tease games shine, so … keep the things AI-based teases excel at sparing. The same thing goes for videos. A good web tease draws you in to create an experience. I would often prefer that than cumming to a video … but, having to edge X times during a video or edge in time to a slow metronome while watching a video or cumming during a certain window in a video … those would all be welcome challenges.
I prefer to warm up with stroking for at least 5-10 minutes before my first edge, so, typically it would be best to place my first edge after the first 10 slides at least or even longer. If you wanted to put an edge in sooner, have me warm up before I start the tease or to a video or have me edge within a time as a challenge. Typically, if the first pic forced me to edge and no additional incentives or instructions were given, I would just stroke to the same picture for 10 minutes, which would be kind of boring … unless that was a punishment (which would make it exciting) or I had to edge in time as part of a challenge that had consequences.
Around 20 edges is a pretty decent session for me. 30 or even 40 is doable. 20-25 is right in my comfort zone. On most days being locked up during the pandemic, I would cum 1-3 times per day over the course of a 2 hour session. So, cumming multiple times would be fine for me, I would just need a break, unless it was a ruin, then, the break could be shorter. I have done long, 60 or even 80+ edges in a long, 3 to 4 hour session. If the set is going to be long like that, let me know, so I can rest up a bit before and can plan for a longer window.
Holding the edge is fun. 10-20 seconds is a good edge hold for me. 30-40 seconds is even better. If I hold for over two minutes, typically my cock will start to fatigue badly and I’ll have difficult staying hard or need to take an extended break … which is not preferred, because it disrupts the session ... unless the session has a lot of holds, then I could get warmed up for it correctly in order to do “softer” edges that I could hold for a minute, and even do five or more of those, so long as I had some little breaks in between … The longest edge hold I’ve ever done was around 6 minutes. Of course, after a hold that long, my cock is fatigued as much as if I had just cum …
I’m an ass man. Looking through my favorites will give you an idea of my body type preferences. Typically, I like petite and slender models. Tall and skinny is nice too (even REALLY skinny, just not anorexic skinny). More athletic builds are also nice. “Average size” women are also fine. Big boobs do very little for me. Fake tits (unless the plastic surgeon was very gifted) are typically a turn-off. Thicc girls, even girls with a big ass don’t do much for me, and most PAWGs are just alright. A perky bubble butt on a skinnier frame is my favorite. Women with a nice hourglass figure, even if they are thicker, are ALWAYS nice … If the girl is skinny enough to see some rubs when she arches her back … she’s probably “perfect” for me …
Lastly, keep each tease self-contained. I don’t want to “play the game throughout the day,” though “homework” could be okay … it might be okay for the girls to “decide” what my next session is going to be, especially if I perform poorly at a game and need some “consequences” …
I try to keep them simple. I typically focus in on a certain body part and “give it strokes” or an edge before moving on to the next. I usually stroke at a pretty brisk pace. When I edge, I edge instead of stroking for that pic. This way, I don’t have to “wait” or count my strokes before I edge … I just get to it. I usually rest 10 to 30 seconds between edges. Strokes and edges are cumulative.
Stroke rules:
25 strokes per image.
+25 strokes per instance of eye contact.
+25 strokes for a tummy if the belly button is visible.
+25 strokes for a clothed ass (including a thong)
+25 strokes for a nice set of legs
At least one full leg or two thighs down to the knee must be visible to qualify. If I don’t think the girl’s legs are attractive, she doesn’t get strokes. However, sometimes that has to do with camera angle or position, and the same girl might get strokes one pic but not the next.
Strokes for asses are straightforward. If at least half of her ass is turned to the camera (like in a profile shot) that gets strokes, but, edging for asses is a little more complicated.
The ass needs to be roughly 60% visible to qualify. If it’s a profile shot, like this:
it doesn’t get an edge. (That’s half an ass, not a full ass.) A shot like this would qualify:
But a shot like this:
would not, because she is sitting on too much of her ass.
Hands obscuring an ass never count as “being in the way.”
If a thong is partially pulled down but a strap is still going across the butt cheeks, that does not count as naked. Also, if the chick is not wearing panties, but a strap is going down her butt to attach to her stockings, that is not technically naked … but, I have been known to “cheat” and edge anyway … usually for the second case but not the first …
If an ass is fully exposed and there is an instance of eye contact, I will almost always edge while staring into the girl’s eyes first, THEN give an edge for her ass. If one girl is showing Eyes & Ass while her friend is also looking into the camera, that’s 3 edges: one for each set of eyes and 1 for the ass.
1 edge when I feel it is needed/deserved, but it costs me 1 demerit
So, sometimes a picture is just so hot that I feel it “deserves” an edge. This edge would be given when the pic would not otherwise normally qualify for an edge (e.g. a woman with goddess breasts looking into the camera). Sometimes, when playing other people’s sets, it will be all pussy and boob shots for 20 pics in a row, and I’m just really desperate to edge. In that case, I might edge, mostly because I’m horny, to a shot that is SUPER hot and really deserves it …
It’s kind of a catch all. Since my rules are so focused on edging for asses, sometimes it is nice to have, even to allow me to edge for that amazing clothed pic …
I kind of consider this “cheating.” You could incorporate it into the tease so that I was “expected” to edge to some “hot pics” … or, you could punish me for “edging when I was not supposed to” … You could even tell me after the fact and either edging or not could have consequences … though it’s more fun to know this rule is in play beforehand. I will track all of the “just because” edges for each session.
1 edge for each girl if there is a strap-on in the picture (stolen from Bjorn13)
30 second edge hold if the girl is licking another girl’s asshole (If the ass is naked, takes the place of the regular edge.)
Emily Bloom’s pussy: 1 edge
Guerlain (aka Lily Chey): Every Eyes & Ass pose (even clothed) gets an extra edge.
Michaela Isizzu (aka Kalena A): Double strokes and edges for her eyes (when she’s looking into camera).
Nancy Ace: 1 edge when BOTH her naked breasts and belly button are showing.
Melena Maria Ryabushkina: 1 edge when her pussy and any part of her ass are showing.
In the following pic, her pussy is showing with some of her ass:
Since her ass does not meet the 60% rule, no edge for her ass, but 1 edge for Ass & pussy.
The next two pics would get two edges:
This one would get three:
Melisa Mendiny: Double for her ass when her ass is facing the camera
Uma Jolie: Extra edge when she is “head-to-toe” naked and virtually all of her is in the frame. Like this:
Ashley Doll: Smile doubles everything
Jenya D (aka Katie Fey): All edges for the picture become edge holds. 10 seconds each.
Holds can be taken consecutively. (For example, Jenya showing Eyes & Ass would be a 20 second hold, 10 seconds for each.) EHs can be chained, and she can chain edge holds on pictures that would not normally qualify for an edge on command.
Toxic A: maximum 10 second breaks between edges for her
Leona Mia: Edge for her legs when she is bottomless. (Same “leg qualifications” as per stroking)
Mila: Must firmly squeeze my balls while edging for her.
Anjelica: Must hold my breath whenever I stroke or edge for her. (Taking a breath means I stop stroking.)
Angela White: Her tits (clothed or naked) get +25 strokes.
Vanessa Angel: Every fifth edge for her in the set I must hold for 50 seconds.
*Caprice: Can assign me homework. Any tease that she appears in, either when she appears, at the end, or even in a "post feedback mini tease", she can tell me what my homework is. She can assign me 0-15 edges for my next session (done under the conditions she specifies) and tell me how I am to cum after they are complete, i.e. to pictures, a video, my vibrator, a certain metronome speed, a time limit ... anything like that.
Girls who Need Rules
Gloria Sol
Malena Morgan
Girls I Like: (Would not mind seeing ANY of these in my teases …)
Nola A, Remy LaCroix, Mia Malkova, Miela, Ariel, Riley Reid, Abella Danger, most of the StasyQ girls, Nina North, Courtney Knox, Talia Cherry, Elsa Jean
These are the “base” rules. Feel free to make strokes fast or slow or force me to edge or add extra edges or edge holds as commands.
Currently writing a tease for Helequin which will include a lengthy explanation of it (or at the very least a lot of clarifying dialogue). Basically, the Village is the same and different for everyone. The Village began as “my” fantasy, so, my ideas and preferences shape and underpin it. However, other "explorers" are free to visit the Village, and their experiences and preferences shape the Village as well. Often times, when another explorer enters the Village, the Village will split into a separate instance or timeline. Some of these independent reality lines persist. Sometimes they merge. All experiences are stored in the Village memory, and usually, the Village manifests slightly differently for each explorer who enters. Whoever is imagining a fantasy (writing a tease) has full control, allowing them to change certain details of how reality manifests. The explorers who are currently in the Village mindspace and those who have crafted a fantasy are the ones with active control.
In my version of the Village (your version might be a little different), Lorena Garcia, Mila, Anjelica, Tori Black, Caprice, Jenya D, and Kyla Cole are on the “HMC Village Council.” These are the ladies who “run the town” and are at the top of the Village social hierarchy. My “must end with a full orgasm” rule was a special allowance granted to me by the council as one of my conditions for moving to the HMC Village. Kyla Cole objected to this rule, but she was overruled by the council. Because I’m permitted full orgasms at the end of all of my teases, I’m “special” that way. Not everyone who resides in the Village has to like it (it causes a lot of drama and resentment towards me), but, they have to accept it, because … well, the council said so. I don’t know how or why my proposal was initially accepted … I only know that it was … (Helequin, don’t read this next part until AFTER you play my “toy rules” tease …)
The “real” reason is the Village is a Haruhi Suzumiya (from the manga/anime “The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya”) type situation. I’m basically God, but I don’t realize it, and my desires are made manifest in the Village. I REALLY wanted to be able to cum at the end of every session, so the council “consented” and made that a rule. (My desires become reality.) But, the me in the fluff doesn’t realize I have all of these powers. I’m just experiencing life and living out my fantasies without realizing how much control I have over everything. I just consider myself “lucky” to be living out my dream of being the main character in a slice-of-life, harem anime. In fact, the entire Village is a fantasy, and no one knows it including me. The one exception is Nancy Ace. She is the only character in the Village who is aware she is a fantasy. Thus, she’s the only one who will break the fourth wall. She’s fine being a self-aware fantasy. She has a pretty good life, and it’s not like she can leave. She is even aware of her real-world self. But, she enjoys playing along and teasing the boys. It was why she was created, after all.
I have a long list of favorites, and to various degrees, all of them are attracted to me and tend to spend a lot of time with me. At first, residents of the Village ironically started calling my favorites my “harem,” but, the name eventually stuck. Many people in the Village dislike the fact that a “slave boy” has so many girls obsessed with him. (By HMC Village law, male residents of the Village don’t have rights. I am technically a “free slave.”) I don’t seem to mind or notice the resentment, though some members of my “harem” do.
I don’t consider myself the “leader of a harem.” (What anime harem leader does?) I just have girls I really like to spend time with, and they just really like spending time with me. In the HMC Village, all the male residents are generally treated as beta male slaves to be used and abused at the whims of the girls. I’m not fully aware of all of the social norms my behavior breaks. I just consider myself another male, second class citizen, happy to be living in a community of beautiful women.
Some—but not all—of my favorites live in the “Harem House.” Right now, Michaela, Guerlain, Nancy Ace, Melena Rya, and Leona Mia live in the “Harem House”, a large sorority style house. Though she doesn’t currently reside in the Village, Angela White has a large, fancy house she leases in the Village and stays at when she comes back for a visit. Tori Black and Kyla Cole live in a large manor house on the edge of town with Ariel and others.
I don’t have a favorite girl. My “favorite” tends to shift based on who is ordering my strokes at the moment … All of these girls on the list are my “favorites.” If they don’t have special rules, then perhaps they need some! My only condition is that no two girls have the same special rule. What follows are suggestions to give you ideas about how to write the girls’ personalities in teases for me, as well as some additional lore and fluff. You can improvise or write them as you like, however. If you decide to write a girl drastically different from how they are described below, that’s fine. Just be sure to mention at the start of the tease this this tease is NOT taking place in the Village. That way, I’ll know that I should NOT be expecting a certain personality.
In the spoilers below each girl, I have linked teases that I have written that I feel really capture the girl’s personality. Feel free to read them for “inspiration” on how to write a girl if you aren’t quite sure.
Emily Bloom: (girl next door archetype) The featured girl in the first tease I ever wrote for GuideMe (never published). Very occasionally I’ll watch part of one of her cam shows. Emily is sweet and fun but also practical. (Basically how she is in real life, in my view.)
Michaela Isizzu: (domme with a heart archetype) Michaela is known in the Village for being a superb “slave trainer.” She worked with Ecik17 to great effect when he was locked in Angela White’s basement for a month. Michaela can be tough with exacting standards, but she mostly uses positive reinforcement to get results. She knows when to press and when to back off. I am one of her trainees and an ongoing pet project for her. Secretly, she considers me her “favorite” trainee and has been becoming more and more lax with me as time goes on. However, I’m still in her “program,” and she expects improvement and results. She LOVES teasing me, and she LOVES being domineering and in control. The “Russian Invasion” series really got me thinking of her in this way. As per DesertFox’s “Mazes,” she can be really helpful and sweet, too. However, she doesn’t want to let on how much she actually likes me, because that might compromise our trainer-trainee relationship if people thought she was playing favorites. She considers herself my “protector” and likes to watch out for me. She lives in the “Harem House.” She is good friends with Guerlain and best friends with Sabrisse.
Guerlain: (sweet and innocent archetype) Guerlain is SUPER sweet. Her smile is warm and she likes to be nice … but she LOVES to be a tease and pretend to be innocent … though, compared to most of the girls who visit the thread, she actually is pretty tame. She always makes an effort to make sure that I enjoy myself during sessions with her, whether being overtly kind and genuine OR viciously teasing me—because she knows I love it. More than anyone else, she enjoys watching me have full orgasms. She doesn’t like to push me to my limits, and she takes extra care to make sure every moment is pleasurable. Guerlain attended Edge U. She spent a semester abroad at a prestigious college in Japan where they specialize in training high caliber call girls in the art of teasing. She worked as a waitress in a maid café during this time. Karlee Grey was her roommate and best friend from college. Even though they fight a lot, Guerlain is really close to Melena Rya. She lives in the “Harem House.”
Jenya D (Katie Fey): (domme queen archetype) I got to know her from various maze teases. She is demanding with high expectations. She loves being mean and showing me who is boss, but that’s just her domme persona. She’s actually quite friendly and relatable, but when she flips into “domme mode”, she absolutely enjoys cruelly punishing me and taking a lot of pleasure from that. She LOVES to make me suffer while holding the edge. She has a goofy side that most people don’t get to see, because she’s often too focused on perfecting her smoldering intensity and building her reputation as a prima domme. When it comes to demerits, she tries to be fair. She also will issue challenges for demerit forgiveness—fairly difficult things—because she enjoys watching me try so hard. She expects me to try and fail (attempting the forgiveness challenge for nothing), so, if I do manage to pull out a win, she’s happy to reward me for the effort.
Nancy Ace: (overachiever/class president archetype) Nancy is kind and warm, but she loves pushing me to my limits. She’s an explorer wanting me to expand my boundaries and try new things. She can be a little forceful with high expectations, but she doesn’t enjoy demeaning me, rather, she tries to keep me accountable and wants to see me grow and follow my rules. She is overly strict when assigning demerits and does so with a smile.
Melena Maria Rya: (shallow and moody archetype) She’s nice and bubbly most of the time but gets horny very, very easily. She’s kind of immature. More so than the other girls, she can be REALLY moody. When she’s in a good mood and feeling happy, she’s very kind and goes out of her way to be nice. But, when she’s feeling bitchy, she gets REALLY bitchy. Typically, the hornier she is, the meanier and sassier she gets. She can be kind of selfish and is used to getting her way. She’s not into pain, but she LOVES to watch me stroke and squirm and edge. She puts her own pleasure ahead of mine and is not afraid to ask me to do a lot to help get her off … but, since she loves pleasure, she wants me to have a good time, too. She loves watching boys cum, but, since she can never seem to get enough orgasms, she is notorious for ruining men over and over so that they last longer … which gives them more playtime with her …
Malena Morgan: (sadist who understands limits) Helequin captured her well in this tease, so, I will just quote “Malena”:
Helequin wrote: Sun Oct 31, 2021 4:55 am
I will be a bitch because it's fun. I will fuck you boys over because it's hilarious. But I'm not some psychopath. You all have limits and rules for a reason. And I guarantee I will push them, but I won't break them. Every bit of torment I visit on you, is something you signed up for. Besides, if I actually break you then I don't get to torment you over and over. But if don't break you I get to come back and do it all over again bitch. Who knows, maybe I'm not even that much of a bitch so much as someone who isn't afraid to go all the way!
Again from Helequin: “terrifying and sometimes sadistic with her creative rules and drive to generally fuck me over either by making me lose control and ruin or viscously busting my balls.”
Anjelica: (entitled princess archetype) She’s the queen bitch. She is undoubtedly the most popular model on this entire site, and she knows it. Sessions with her are a privilege. She can be nice and pleasant when she wants to be, giving me a great session if she thinks I deserve it. But, she can be equally cold and demanding. A session with her is a session with purpose; she either wants to reward me and “thank me” with her presence, or … she has some kind of punishment to enact or some point to make … the Queen’s time is limited, after all …
Melisa Mendiny: (kind and loyal archetype) I’ve seen many of her videos, and Melisa seems very sweet and kind! She knows how intoxicating I find her ass. Though I like some of the other girls’ asses just as much, secretly, she knows I think her ass is objectively the best of the bunch. She is very considerate and welcoming, but, she can turn very forceful if she’s feeling disrespected.
Uma Jolie: (Wild card archetype? No idea …) Uma is the most recent addition to my list. I don’t know her too well. She could be really sweet, and she seems that way … I imagine that she loves teasing me. She could also enjoy teasing and punishing me mercilessly for her own amusement. She’s hard to read. Probably a “wild card.” I guess I’ll find out!
Toxic A: (needs development) I met Toxic in some of the various tease mazes I have wandered into … She likes to edge me silly, over and over again. She likes me, and she’s pleasant … but, she really wants to turn me into a complete and total edge slut, and maybe I could be … for her.
Ashley Doll: (friend with benefits archetype) Ashley is totally sweet and kind, though not as naïve and innocent as Guerlain. She’s a big flirt who likes to tease me. She loves to joke around. We became friends because we’re both American. We met in Cancun while vacationing separately. It wasn’t supposed to be a nude beach, but … it ended up becoming a nude beach—for me at least. She considers herself my friend—with benefits. She’s one of those girls who feels more comfortable around guys than girls, though she is a girly girl. She’s not into drama. She would basically never assign me demerits, and of all of the girls on my list, she’s the most likely to issue me easy challenges in order to help me forgive accumulated demerits. The other girls might complain about that, but she doesn’t care. On the other hand, she doesn’t want to make things too easy for me. Also, ironically, because we’re friends, she enjoys exploiting the power dynamic of the game to put me in uncomfortable situations, not because those things are necessarily turn-ons for her, but just because she can, because she LOVES messing with me. She would tie me up, just to make me look ridiculous. She’d buy the CBT package just to ask, “Why are you hitting yourself?” She’s devious and loves to play mind games. If anyone else set me up for a full orgasm and faked me out with a ruin, I would get TOTALLY pissed … but if it was her, it would be funny, because I know she would make it up to me later. We’re just tight like that.
Gloria Sol is not on my list, but she’s super hot. I think she could be easily written in and added if she “insisted” on it. I don’t “know” her too well, so, I do not have a clear picture on how her personality should be written … maybe you have some ideas ... Gloria Sol is the “accountant” in charge of my “demerit accounts” at the bank.
Leona Mia is one who I recently saw on a tease here ... I decided quickly I needed to add her to my "favorites" list ... I have no preconceptions or thoughts on how her personality "should" be. Surprise me and write her as you like! It will become canon ...
Caprice: Caprice hosted my first session/tease on this thread. After the session, she organized a meeting with all of my “favorites” to inform them all they were in my rules and to let them know how I performed. She was so proactive (and also so experienced as a mistress) that the girls decided to make her my official “mentor” in the HMC Village “slave training program,” a role she takes very seriously. Lorena reintroduced me to Caprice in this tease, and ever since then, she has gotten a LOT more intense …
Lorena and Mila are also not on my “favorites” list, but, being thread favorites, I would be surprised if they did NOT make an appearance in a tease for me … Everyone here knows how they are “supposed” to be written. (Lorena is very nice. Mila tends to be bitchy and literally busts balls.) Lorena still needs some rules, by the way …
I get “demerits” which I track from set to set. My rules allow me to “edge at an any time.” Each time I do, I earn a demerit. (“Unauthorized edges” from forced metronome stroking also result in demerits.) If I underperform or disobey instructions, I will assign myself demerits after the tease. Mistresses may also assign demerits as a punishment (to create incentive) for not completing challenges or tasks. Any mistress may spend demerits from the “general account” to punish me during a set. Demerits accrued during a set cannot be spent during that same set. No more than 25 demerits can be spent in a single set.
Each demerit buys a “package” of one of the above. I will squeeze for the entirety of the picture while I stroke/edge regardless of how long it takes. I’m kind of a baby with these and will tend towards going softer than harder. I am not a pain slut. The girls can “instruct” me to go harder, but, I will not go past a certain point. Slaps by themself is just an actual punishment, but, if you mix in edges, it becomes something I kind of enjoy.
Tying my legs to the chair or binding them together for the rest of the session
Tying up my balls with a shoelace for the rest of the session
Kneeling for the rest of the scene
Enable breath play for the scene: can only stroke while holding my breath (CANNOT be combined with a metronome)
Being forced to watch porn without stroking (stackable, up to 10 min for each instance)
Medium Punishments: 3 Demerits
Ruin 1 orgasm (capped at 2 per set)
[LOCKED. PM only] Head palming (2 min per purchase, up to 1 min continuously at a time)
Harsh Punishments: 6 Demerits
[LOCKED. PM only] Eat my cum according to mistress’ CEI
For 6 Demerits, a mistress can turn on “Punishment Mode” for the rest of the set. Then, the following rules apply:
-The demerits spent per set cap is raised to 35.
-The ruins per set cap is raised to 4.
-Head palming and cum eating are unlocked.
Belts, ropes, shoelaces, etc with which to bind myself.
Magic wand vibrator and variable speed adjustor
-with hummingbird attachment
-with anal attachment (though it doesn’t work well)
It has two factory settings (high and very high), but, I can use the modulator to adjust it to roughly 7 discernable vibration settings:
Vibrator modes
1 teasing (lightest—never came yet)
2 light (teasing with rumbles ... have cum after 20+ minutes)
3 medium-low
4 medium
5 muted high (factory std, but on highest multi, almost the same as high)
6 high (factory std)
7 extremely high (factory std high)
The vibrator heats up and becomes unusable after 25 minutes and needs to cool down for 30 min. However, if you use a setting below medium, it can go for well over an hour …
I ran a little test by binding myself up while watching the Michaela RLGL video by digitalparkinglot. (SUCH a hot video …) I turned on the vibrator and tried to hold off cumming as long as I could. With no prior warm-up, on medium, I came at around 20 min. On high, I came around 13 min and around 7 min on extremely high.
I tested some rules out with the 7 modes, but it didn’t work out well. Anything lower than medium is just teasing and gets boring. (I did a points system with 30 seconds per pic.) I experimented a bit with the higher modes, but, haven’t found anything that felt workable for a rules set.
You have all the numbers and stats. If you want, get creative and try something out. Having the domme give times and speeds directly per pic would be a good bet, as would issuing a challenge of some sort involving bondage and a video … I’m up for trying anything for the vibrator. (The anal attachment sucks, but, the hummingbird is great.) Ideally, I’d come up with a rules set like BBBeanie has for his crusher, but, nothing so far …
Need to play
Ecik17’s 12-6
PoetBird’s 11-24 beauty pageant every0ne set Still Playing
PoetBird’s 10-25 set (1 more playthrough. It’s Melena, and I KNOW it’s going to be a ruin. ) Working on
Return set for Horny Chabo (script 95% done. 4 scenes completely done. Main gallery picked)
Return set for PoetBird - “A Day with Guerlain” (2 scenes left on script. 4 scenes done.)
Return set for lmind (will publish individual scenes as they are completed)
Set for Helequin with his new rules (script outlined. Intro written. Random dialogue written)
"Piggyback" set for Ecik to be released simul with above Helequin set (script 80% done)
“Correcting Village Anomaly” set for PoetBird (intro mostly written. Scenes outlined.)
Cecilia Lion "debut" set for Ecik (Only ideas and premise. Nothing done. Need to "research" and develop the character ...)
MASTERPIECE level set for MistyPanda (script for the Prologue written, now I have to write the 4 Acts … they are already outlined. )
"We are complicit in our own deception. Otherwise, we will never be seduced, and there's nothing more wonderful than a seduction to which we are willing and eager." -Eric Weinstein
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Currently INACTIVE on HMCP thread — My Rules
I've never been one to leak that much, in the sense that Anjelica explained, but damn, at a point there a steady stream was pouring out! Don't think I've ever held that many edges in a row, it was madness! Didn't even know there were that many images in that set, let alone clothed! I was seriously considering just knocking myself over the edge and resigning, but I managed to hold on, only to be rewarded with that very same thing, including a disciplinary strike! Thinking I might have to change that 'heart of gold' line in her description. And don't get me started on the writing, that was some masterful stuff, I was dying to read what was coming next, she was driving me mad! And when she hit me back with the stuff I wrote myself, man that just knocked the air out of my stomach. All in all, very impressed, I might have to take some inspiration from you in the future!
Characters (I want the emphasis of my rules to be built around a set of characters, that might also visit the other players once they are developed. I would love for authors to introduce new characters, and if they feel inclined, add a character description for other authors to use. Included is a list of characters introduced so far, and a list of my favorite models to choose from (or not, I'm open to new models as well))
Anjelica
Tease that loves to edge boys until they're dripping in precum. Sadistic, but not in a mean way, more like a cute bratty way. Doesn't live far from me.
Asa Akira
Friend of Anjelica. Helped me scout for houses in the area.
Britney Amber
My next door neighbour. She is a bored housewife, with a husband who seems to be permanently "away on business". She is nice but bored, and passes the time by teasing me. A nip slip every now and then, a strategically placed workout session by the window. She has several other men she teases this way, which I find humiliating. Last time we met she brought two guys to fuck in front of me
Gloria Sol
Friend of Britney. Sweet girl who studies psychology at the university. I've helped her with some sexual experiments for her studies. She likes to tease, but she likes to please even more. She takes it easy on me, but not TOO easy
Riley Reid
Britneys personal trainer and yoga teacher. She's been helping me "loosen up my glutes" so to speak, and all times for anal are doubled while at her gym. She never lets me cum
Kira Noir
My "Goonfit" instructor (more on goonfit below). Works at the same studio as Riley
Censored image - 2 edges and hold second one for 30 seconds
Useful link: https://blur.pics/
Anal - excludes stroking and edging:
Can use my Handy to make a makeshift fucking-machine, if requested
Buttplug - Make myself ready for anal (must be the first image for anal)
Anal with dildo - Slow fucking with small dildo 30 sec
Anal with dick - Medium fucking with medium dildo 30 sec
Anal with BBC - Slow fucking with large dildo 30 sec
DP with BBC - Fast fucking with large dildo 30 sec
Ballbusting:
Piercing - 5 medium slaps per piercing
Tattoo - 5 hard slaps
Latex - 3 really hard smacks with “sock-mace”
Bondage and other toys:
Images of ring or ballgags, nipple clamps or clothespins/zippers - I wear the item, and try to mimic the photo to the best of my abilities, I also have weights and string for this
Bondage images - I mimic the photo as good as I can
I generally enjoy cuckold (extra plus for interracial) and femdom porn the most, but I also enjoy compilations, sissy/bbc encouragement, joi and generally any other form of mainstream porn
Not all of these rules fit for every video, so specify which ones are active, by rule number, for the given video (might be extended later)
Rule 1: Mimic the girl in the video with a medium dildo, if she sucks, I suck, if she gets fucked, I get fucked, she gets spanked, I spank my balls
Orgasm chance depends on a disciplinary system. Disciplinary strikes are earned for disobeying orders, or cumming without permission. Girls can add strikes arbitrarily if they're mean, or remove them if they're nice. This is the only way to lose strikes.
Also like to get creative with orgasms, facial, cumplay, cei, during anal, whatever you can come up with
Current disciplinary strikes: 0
Last full orgasm: 13th of november
Last ruin: 3rd of december
Goonfit is a type of experience that anyone can have, as long as the rules of goonfit are observed. so what are they?
First, you never quit during goonfit! once you start stroking, you do not stop until all strokes, And edges are done for that photo. If you must edge..then you hold the edge, one second for each stroke that is remaining. and…between photos, you can only take a 2-3 second break. We want you to sweat. We want you to edge. We want you to goon!
Second rule of goonfit: never cum during goonfit. if you do cum, you will ruin it! No shame if you do ruin…just come back tomorrow and try again!
And the last, and most important rule of goonfit: sustain the gainz!. Yes…with a Z. Why? Because it’s goonfit! If you get through the workout, I’ll show you how. But, to sustain the gainz…you have to count every edge you do. but that won’t be hard..,right?
I think you are all warmed up, So, let me tell you the workout today! Today…you will choose (in any order), exercises…to go faster…get stronger…and then a special “finisher” exercise with me at the end! Now, choose an exercise, and let’s get goonfit!
In addition to this, every edge during a goonfit class translates to an hour in chastity, e.g. 24 edges amounts to 1 full day in chastity. My current record for consecutive days in chastity is four, but I'm open to potentially breaking this
For a few months now, on-and-off, I've been exploring totally hands-free, no-touch orgasm. I've tried many, many times and succeeded very, very few times -- which, if you think about it, is the textbook definition of tease and denial. I do it to strengthen my pelvic muscles (stronger orgasms), to further master my own biological reflexes (longer, better sex), and to demonstrably prove how totally enthralled and devoted I am to the beautiful women I serve -- that I would happily devote 100% of my energy to their pleasure and that simply playing my part in their happiness, all by itself and nothing more, is enough for me to reach my own peak, when they permit me to reach it. The orgasm achieved that way is also its own kind of special, extended pleasure-plateau experience (because you get there so agonizingly slowly), with a unique, unsatisfying, ruin-like comedown that leaves you immediately wanting more. Sign me up!
I also do it for the challenge. Because I love a good challenge.
It takes a long time, a LOT of work, and an absolutely, jaw-droppingly sexy setting. "Setting" can mean the right teasing conversation, the right amount of bondage, a long playful build-up, the right "encouraging" words whispered in my ears, an 11/10 stunning mental picture, the heat of thighs around my ears, or any combination of those things. Even then, like I said, my "success" ratio is still very low.
Katya did a great job establishing that setting. By edging me a little first, she set me up perfectly for a frustrating, sweaty, exhausting PC workout -- the best I've had in a while. She got me SO CLOSE, my whole body was shaking, but I couldn't cross the finish line. Nothing to do with her (she was phenomenal). It's just a very challenging task. If I had more time... maybe-? probably-?... There's no way to know. An extra hour could just as easily have been another hour of desperate leaking, curling toes, and nothing more.
Conversely, on a different day, I think Katya would have succeeded. She did everything right. It's just impossible to predict, which makes it such a fantastic tease!
The videos were great, although I'm not a fan of when videos spend a lot of time zoomed-in on pussy. I'd rather see her face or whole body. I wish I could just watch the last minute of the first video on repeat. I manually repeated it like 15 times, and eventually just paused on this image:
I hope Katya enjoyed my valiant, fruitless effort. I'm ready to try again!
Important! I do not have enough free time to do a traditional "set." I only get tiny, isolated, unpredictable pockets of free time, 15 to 30 minutes here and there, every few days or so. So if you want to make something for me, it probably can't follow the usual routine of stroking and edging for a long sequence of sexy pictures. It should probably resemble more like "homework," with short tasks.
That is a major limitation, but maybe also an opportunity for creativity. I leave that to you and to the girls who find that interesting.
Since I can't do traditional "sets" of pictures, I do not have the usual per-picture rules. Instead, I will do my best to complete any challenges, tasks, etc., that fit into 15-30 minute windows -- with pictures for narrative, inspiration, reward, or whatever you want. Multiple tasks can be included in the same tease -- I will do them separately over a few days and won't cum in the meantime.
Example Short Tasks:
Spend 10 minutes reading the narrative and looking at the pictures...
...without touching myself, or
...while stroking at a certain pace, or
...while flexing my PC muscle and trying to cum without touching myself, or
...while palming or slapping my cock (yikes!), or
...while edging (a certain number of times; repeatedly; or holding them), or
...while building up to cum at the end (ruin or full), or
...any combination of those.
Tasks like that. If a girl wants to get creative with this general idea, I totally welcome it!
Preferences:
Lean, sporty, often small-breasted girls who just want to have fun.
Sneakers, sports bras, yoga pants, high socks, and ponytails.
thanks for the set, i played it yesterday. The pictures you chose were great, you know i love asian girls. i just wish you had engaged with my rules a bit more, or created some sort of theme. just stoking to unrelated pictures can get a bit stale. The videos were a nice change of pace (the one with the girl hanging upside down was very insteresting ) . I absolutely loved the last pmv, and it did not take me long to cum.
hey thanks for the reply. I dont think there is anything wrong with making return sets. I just did not want Bjorn13 to feel like he has to make a set for me. Its cool if he wants to but i dont expect it, some newer player may feel like they absolutely need to make one every time. I have made many return sets myself but often the other persons rules are not compatible with me and i know i could not make a decent set for him. Or i simply dont have the time (like in Bjorn13s case) and would have to half ass something.
Bondage…bdsm…cumshots…gangbangs…go for it! Open to alternative rules...feel free to stick with these or invent something entirely different! Also, love fun storylines, but they are not required..,but if you do, please keep them short, (1 to 3 set max)if you want to got this route. I also do not mind just straight up photos, as in the original spirit of this thread! 
(double strokes)
And betas don't deserve to edge…
If you were interested in "developing a character" I would LOVE to get to know Kaleesy better and have her tease me. 
I don't really have a "diva" yet in my "harem" of favorite girls ... the fact that she's smart and plays chess appealed to me ... Nancy is SUPER smart in the lore, and it'd be nice for "Nancy" to have another friend ... plus, divas cause drama and I LOVE drama in my teases! 
I could probably give an hour seminar on how to write good tease dialogue, but, that's enough for now! 
SO well done!
... but, I think you have a LOT of potential and talent and wanted to spend some time investing in a person, so, I hope my advice was useful and helps you to improve your set writing in the future! 
... just not that level of “amazing” I usually strive for. 
(Of course, I always reserve the right to go over time, but … I REALLY will be rushing and set up countdown timers and moving quick to get it done efficiently … I have a feeling Zerg’s template and pornpics.com will be my friends …)
(Lorena is very nice. Mila tends to be bitchy and literally busts balls.) Lorena still needs some rules, by the way …
Thinking I might have to change that 'heart of gold' line in her description. And don't get me started on the writing, that was some masterful stuff, I was dying to read what was coming next, she was driving me mad! And when she hit me back with the stuff I wrote myself, man that just knocked the air out of my stomach. All in all, very impressed, I might have to take some inspiration from you in the future! 
