[Feedback] Cruel Countdowns

[SamLeOht]

I've noticed an error in the text:

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At some point, one of the girls says "Oh! Into single digits now" but it should be 'Oh! Into double digits now" since it's at 99.

And a suggestion:

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In room 1, when she says "Here we go," I thought it meant that the edge holding was finished. I forgot she was talking about her top (and since earlier we had to stop stroking when the top was off). It made it way easier of course. Maybe some kind of reminder to keep holding even if the top is off could be added? Perhaps something like "Here we go. Keep holding and don't let the [...].

[intermolecularpyro]

I've noticed an error in the text:

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At some point, one of the girls says "Oh! Into single digits now" but it should be 'Oh! Into double digits now" since it's at 99.

And a suggestion:

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In room 1, when she says "Here we go," I thought it meant that the edge holding was finished. I forgot she was talking about her top (and since earlier we had to stop stroking when the top was off). It made it way easier of course. Maybe some kind of reminder to keep holding even if the top is off could be added? Perhaps something like "Here we go. Keep holding and don't let the [...].

Thanks for this, I've made those changes. Only took a few minutes!

[MotoMike]

One of the best - very creative and nice ability to return to a saved state.

[Edgemycock]

this tease is awesome, I played it a couple of times since the release. definitely appreciate your work!