Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
Hi! I tried your both cock heros and now i will put my impressions here for you. I will divide both Edge heros in topics.
Thanks for your thoughts, that was actually a good and detailed review.
Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
Girls selection: Well, we have many new faces in the adult industry here, i guess. The only really known face is Jada, which for me is so good because she is hot as hell, i mean, THAT ASS... even the protagonist knows she is pro in the art of making any men cum.
I didn't want to mix up too many producers so i picked only one. ITC had perfect content for the story. Of course I wanted to use good looking girls but the scenery; beach and jungle and such was the main thing in the Part 1.
There is something about Jada, I just end up choosing her in every project...
Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
Beats: We have something new here: The command only displays and you have to stroke, no beats to follow, just a command. For me, slow was a torture but the idea is that, just to stay aroused, stroke green command is fine, i managed to handle and being calm. Free style is my favorite: I managed to control myself and have lots of pre cum (after a pre cum, edging is way easier for me). The edge command... i confess i almost cum at some times but i managed to resist the urge. The precise moments of edging was so good to me, watching those girls lost the battle against the protagonist.
I saw this style (ball going up or down) in Ultimate Edging Challenge - Blowjob Edition and I liked it, the design is my own.
I also want to focus more on the girls, not to stare the beatmeter too intensively.
Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
Music: Well, its the weakest part on your production. The ¨chill island vibe¨ just turned me off a little bit, to be very honest.
I know, music just isn't my thing, I'm better at visual things. Back then I also made a decision not to use known songs in my videos. If you mean the first song in the round 1, it just fit the scene perfectly and was meant to be funny. But everyone has their own taste.
Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
I liked the end, or no end, without a cum reward round, but not a denial either. You have the freedom to cum or not, after all.
No reward in Part 1, because that was the idea in the story.
Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
Edge hero 2, the great dildo, Afterglow
Spoilers about the story:
- Spoiler: show
- It starts 3 months after the first one. Jada invitation makes me crazy, all the girls are very easy rounds but the battle with Jada is specially hard if you can´t handle edging, i had difficulty here but i survived. The last round with Angela was easier then Jada and the cum reward at the end is a bless. I think that story is not ended because if he cum for Angela, i think a third episode should be amazing, maybe he needs to use the dildo he got in the end of the first episode, but it is your call to make another one or not.
Yes...Jada round is not easy. When you are thinking you gonna win, she just recovers and makes you work harder.
The clip of Angela wasn't too exciting so the round is not extremely hard even though she's the Boss. But it was the best POV vid I had of her.
Girls selection: Again, i only know Jada and Angela here. Great choice choosing many different names of the industry, the girls are incredible gorgeous and all are promises in the adult industry.
First 5 girls are less known and "easy" because of that but I'd say Kelsi is famous and Gina is well known too these days.
Guilherme_1988 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 20, 2021 12:44 pm
Final conclusion: The journey is very pleasurable from the start to the end. Your production is almost perfect for a first creation, the whole story is the perfect ingredient to have fun.
I'm happy with the result, there is always room for improvement, of course. More of positive feedback might motivate me to make Part 3.