A night with your ex

wonkywanker · Post by **wonkywanker** » Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:50 pm

ok so no one has ever left any feedback for any of my teases, oh no i think once they did, anyways love it? hate it? let me know.

brown868 · Post by **brown868** » Wed Feb 28, 2007 7:36 pm

I really liked the tease. I have to be honest, i usually don't vote 5 if there's an option to cum in the end, but this one was an exception. Doesn't hurt that I think Raven is one of the sexiest women in all of the teases. Love the fact that she starts out dressed normally and it takes a little bit before she's naked. The only think I would suggest is a little more CBT, but that's just my taste. Keep it up man.

wonkywanker · Post by **wonkywanker** » Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:26 pm

hey thanks man, i would prefer more cbt to but i wasn't making the tease for me, not sure but i think most people don't want lots of cbt would have to do a poll n find out. Also i usually get a bit horny whilst writing a tease and suddenly go mad with the cbt.

glad you enjoyed it, don't forget to vote for me lol.

wonkywanker · Post by **wonkywanker** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:22 am

I've just started (though i don't know when it'll be ready) "A morning with your ex", it'll follow the same routine kinda as the current one, but the ending will be totaly diffrent, could also do a "a afternoon with your ex" have a little mini series

so sugestions about how to improve the current one would be helpful so i can put it to good use whilst making the next one

blue_down_under · Post by **blue_down_under** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:09 am

I gotta disagree with you about people not wanting cbt, use the tags system, the lowest rating in that whole list is 3.5 i think, most of them are rated above 4 too. A Painful Experience has a rating of 4.5! (http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=87). I think its safe to say most of us love cbt, and I'd encourage you to throw some into the next tease, hell, i'd encourage you get carried away with it.

havemercy · Post by **havemercy** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:01 am

I gave your tease a 5. It was awesome and I chose the no cum option, so I can't wait for your next one.

I was a little glad to see only a few ball slaps in a tease so good. All the other good teases have in them lots of CBT, this is probably the best tease with no CBT. So great job, keep it up.

And please keep Raven as the face of the with your ex series that you plan on doing, she's so hot.

wonkywanker · Post by **wonkywanker** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:25 am

don't worry she will be in the next two, three depending on how much people like it.

i had great fun making it, was very time consuming though lol.

lagavulin_nl · Post by **lagavulin_nl** » Wed Mar 07, 2007 8:57 pm

Great story, great tease and I love Raven. Can't wait to see the next one in this series. One of my favorites along with the roomies from hell series which of course included Raven as well

wonkywanker · Post by **wonkywanker** » Thu Mar 08, 2007 1:03 pm

well it wont be done for a while, got some work that has to be done, so don't expect it any time soon

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