[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]New Tease

[fenway]

Hi, I just thought I'd start a forum about the tease I posted.

Any thoughts, issues, bugs, or suggestions for improvement?

Please let me know.

Thanks!

Fenway

[xxhiasxx]

Hi thanks for making the tease in the first point.

so I've noted a couple of points that might help but please take it with a grain of salt (is it the right usage of the term? sorry, non native speaker)

Positive:

- Usage of a fleshlight in general (although it doesn't really change the way the tease is played--more about that in the negative points)

- Usage of different mistresses to cover different personal preferences regarding looks etc.

Negative:

- The fleshlight usage is pretty much the same as you would be stroking with your hand. It could be integrated in some creative ways like having to eat it out like a real pussy. Another way would be to allow only a certain position from a real life situation like e.g. have it in a fixed position on a desk and imitate a doggy position.(maybe let every mistress have its favourite position you have to imitate with your fleshlight)

- You could also clarify when to use your hand and when to use your fleshlight and if you do use either of those you could introduce the stroking technique with if you are interested in that

- Missing interactivity: I would love to have a button for edging when you are not allowed and also one for accidentally ruining your orgasm since some timers and bpms which you are stroking at are really difficult. Those buttons then could be used to skip to a further(or backwards) part in the tease and also give you the appropriate punishment.

Now my personal experience: Using a fleshlight is much more stimulating than using just my hand so i think some of the timers or the amount of stroking between the edges could be shorter. Also a short break in between would help to lube it up again or maybe just calm down since you're pretty much stroking non stop.
After the checkboxes "edged mistress" which you are presented you could also offer another option called "ruined mistress" to maybe address people who are more interested in ruined orgasms than just edging over and over again.(me :D)

I do like the tease though and maybe my input helps in future developments.

Stay horny and best regards

[fenway]

Sooo truth be told, I try to write teases that build endurance for me to use for "practice"

They're supposed to be difficult with a Fleshlight for that reason.

But yes, I agree with the lack of interactivity. I need to learn how to use the editor more effectively as right now, I spend 20 minutes per page trying to get them to be interactive which would take forever to complete even a short 150 page tease... D:

Definitely working on it though! Thank you for your input

[indyc]

I wish it only took me 20 minutes to create each page of my own haha. I didn't play much but I am mainly commenting because you were asking for feedback and I didn't see many chiming in.

I suggest entering no to "do you have the fleshlight yet" giving you the option to go get it instead of ending the tease. I can't imagine someone who sat through a 20 second tease giving you very many stars and I can imagine a minority actually stopping there and lowering your rating.

I also agree about the lack of choices, it feels very on rails currently. Because of this I did not want to explore it very much. You could even have a randomizer about what sequence the girls show up in a place or 2 if your intensity levels allow. If you end the tease early by failing or choice I don't personally want to go through all the waiting before I see or read something new.

Spoiler: show

I liked being "spoken" to by 2 girls a time and the return to a previous girl in a different outfit

Being called "slut" may not be for everyone. Perhaps you can give an option to enter what your callout will be but have it default to slut. I suggest something in your future title alluding to the fact that it will be a "torture" of sorts that the girls keep referencing. Also provide a link to your tease in your opening thread, sometimes I go looking for games that need feedback and it is a minor annoyance to go find it.

Your pick of girls is a bit above average for my tastes. Beyond that my only request is for something unique for your elevator pitch: Some experience that I can only find in your tease. Good luck!