[Feedback] Alcina's Temptations

[Shymaroon]

Yeahhh, I decided to be that guy and make this tease. I found all this lewd cosplay and had to make a game out of it.
I hope I did the character(s) justice and created an enjoyable experience.

Here is the tease, Alcina's Temptations: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=50721

Everyone is welcome to leave feedback here. Did you encounter any bugs or issues? Were the timers too long or too short? Is the metronome sound weird or too loud? Was there anything unclear about the tease? Please let me know.

[Pizzadog]

Hey first off I want to say great tease and couldn't find any bugs but just wanted to ask how many possible ending were added into the game? Because I found a few but I haven't been able to actually get out of the building and was thinking it would be cool if it was possible.

[Lirven]

I really like the setting of this tease but I had an hard time understanding it.
Plus I reached one of the endings in less then 5 minutes.

What is not clear is:
- What are my duties? Is there a quest journal or something?
- What time is it and when's the curfew?
- Is there a place I can "save" what I find?

My gameplay on spoiler:

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The first time I encounter the Lady, she's upset I didn't prepare the supper.
The second time she's upset because I was still around the house without respecting the curfew.

After this I simply tried to restart the game, and as a main place I went immediately to the kitchen, searched, then dining room, searched. There was no command to prepare the supper, she was still upset.
So I moved on trying to find where I would be sleeping but end ended up finding her room for which I had the key and I was definitely not ready to edge/cum/ruin. The End.

[Shymaroon]

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Hey first off I want to say great tease and couldn't find any bugs but just wanted to ask how many possible ending were added into the game? Because I found a few but I haven't been able to actually get out of the building and was thinking it would be cool if it was possible.

Thank you! There are three endings:

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Two endings are with Lady D, and one is with her daughter Bela.

There is not actually a way to escape the castle, because...why would you want to? It would be kinda neat though.

[Shymaroon]

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I really like the setting of this tease but I had an hard time understanding it.
Plus I reached one of the endings in less then 5 minutes.

What is not clear is:
- What are my duties? Is there a quest journal or something?
- What time is it and when's the curfew?
- Is there a place I can "save" what I find?

My gameplay on spoiler:

Spoiler: show

The first time I encounter the Lady, she's upset I didn't prepare the supper.
The second time she's upset because I was still around the house without respecting the curfew.

After this I simply tried to restart the game, and as a main place I went immediately to the kitchen, searched, then dining room, searched. There was no command to prepare the supper, she was still upset.
So I moved on trying to find where I would be sleeping but end ended up finding her room for which I had the key and I was definitely not ready to edge/cum/ruin. The End.

Thank you, this is a lot of good feedback.

I think the best way I can answer your questions is to explain more what happens in the introduction section. The character you're playing is a thief in disguise. You don't want to perform any duties or care about the curfew, you're just trying to find treasure and avoid capture (although it's inevitable).

The real "goal" isn't to win the game, but rather to find the things hidden in the game.

(I actually originally wanted to have the options to willfully serve her, but...that would require another whole layer of complexity, and I wanted to get this tease out before the hype died down.)

As for the length of the tease, I was aiming for about 10 minutes, so I think I will increase the timers a bit in places where the dialogue goes by too quickly. If you are like me and have longer fapping sessions, my best advice is to play it a couple times to find more stuff, or to "warm up" with other stuff (the "art gallery" is partly for this).

[Shymaroon]

Update (6/4/21):

• Increased the duration of most timer portions (for better pacing of the dialogue, and to make the tease length closer to 10-12 minutes).

[Shymaroon]

Really enjoyed this tease but I'm struggling to get to any of the alternate endings though I'm certain I've come close. I was wondering if there was a guide available?

Sure, I'll give a "guide" for you and anyone who wants to just see all the scenes.

Obviously Spoiler-filled Guide:

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General tip: If you are getting unlucky searching for things, choose Search as your highest stat and search the kitchen for the monocle. After you find it, you should have a 90% chance to find most things (45% chance to find treasures).

Main Hall End:
Probably the ending you've achieved. Nothing needs to be discovered, just get caught by Lady D twice and the second time she will drag you to the main hall.

Bed Chamber End:
You must search for the key. It is in the dining room. Then discover the bed chamber; do so by searching in the side hall (room with the statues). You must be caught the first time and worship Lady D; after that, you can use the key to access the bed chamber.

Bela's End:
You must search for sanguis virginis. It is in the kitchen. If you successfully charm Bela, she will tell you this, but it is not necessary. You must be caught the first time and worship Lady D; after that, go to the wine room with sanguis virginis and talk to Bela.

Bela Foot Scene:
This is a shorter scene. Talk to Bela in the wine room and fail your attempt to charm her (chose Charm as your lowest stat). She will tell you to grovel at her feet.

Lady D Foot Scene:
This is a shorter scene. You must search for one of the treasures. They are in the side hall, attic, and dress room (side hall is easiest to acquire). You must get caught the second time, and if you have a treasure, Lady D will punish you for stealing.

[Raleighjeepguy]

Enjoyed this tease, looking forward to a continuation.