FB: No cummies

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FB: No cummies

Post by billlr »

I personally think there should have been more of a buildup before he came.

Other than that, not a bad premise.

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Post by JelloBoy »

billlr wrote:I personally think there should have been more of a buildup before he came.

Other than that, not a bad premise.

Bill
Agreed, not much of a build up and the typos are distracting.
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