Sleek 5

[eatsl]

https://de.spankbang.com/5a6uz/video/sleek+5

It's basically a spor edit this time as i used his essential mix for the main parts, music from the pom-poms for the intermissions.

First half has a beatmeter, but i wanted to change up the rules from then on in order to ease it up a bit.

Feedback would be much appreciated.

[s53ken]

My 2 cents...

1: Beatmeter is very hard to follow. Make it more simple beats or we will have to focus on the meter not the girls.

2: Endroll would have been great - many people want to find more about particular girls.

3: Related to 1, I did not like the non beatmeter part. We need a bit more instruction like you did with yellow/red/green bars in the middle of the clip.

4: The girl selection is excellent.

5: Ask some volunteers to proofread. For example, the correct spelling is "surely".

[LondonGent]

Feedback would be much appreciated.

You've got some excellent taste in women, but this video feels a bit jumbled and unfinished to be honest. Some of your earlier Sleek videos have been better (IMHO!)

It was nice to have beats but they were incredibly fast and complex to follow, even when scripting this rather than playing it. Then they just gave up half way through and went back to coloured bars. If you're going to mix both styles in future, spread the beat-bar sections in-between freestyle sections and it'll feel more natural.

Mini-game idea was fun, but got a bit 'samey' by the third time. It's also not a good way to end the video - felt like more of a tease than a release. Perhaps different girls or slightly different rules would mix it up a little.

There was also not much progression or change throughout the video. It started one level of softcore and stayed there for 1.5 hours. No breaks, no harder content, just the same (very well chosen) type of scene. I'm a big fan of softcore but I'd suggest building it up a little as the video goes on, for example starting non-nude and finishing with solo masturbation or light even lesbian/vanilla sex scenes.

All that said, I'm a big fan of this and your other videos. I'll look forward to your next release and if you ever need volunteers to beta-test then please count me in.

In the meantime, here's a funscript and estim file for this video. Hope others enjoy playing it as much as I did

CH Sleek 5 (LG script).funscript
CH Sleek 5 (LG e-stim).mp3

[thebears73]

https://de.spankbang.com/5a6uz/video/sleek+5

It's basically a spor edit this time as i used his essential mix for the main parts, music from the pom-poms for the intermissions.

First half has a beatmeter, but i wanted to change up the rules from then on in order to ease it up a bit.

Feedback would be much appreciated.

cant view the video, says its private, despite being registered and logged in.

[LondonGent]

cant view the video, says its private, despite being registered and logged in.

Same for me now. Hopefully it's not gone for good!

[digitalparkinglot]

Didn't your Mom always tell you to never leave the house without wearing clean underwear AND nothing on the internet is ever gone for good.

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Hey LondonGent, you've become the master at creating fantastic estim files to go with CH videos. Can you be persuaded into writing a tutorial on how you do the wizardry that you do?


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[LondonGent]

Hey LondonGent, you've become the master at creating fantastic estim files to go with CH videos. Can you be persuaded into writing a tutorial on how you do the wizardry that you do?

I'm flattered that you think so! I'm using quite a handful of different programs at the moment, some more polished than others, but I'll see if I can put a basic guide together soon

[frenchdude]

Eatsl, I just played Sleek 5, with LondonGent E-Stim file.
It’s was 1.5 hours of pure bliss !
Thank you so much for this production and thanks to LondonGent for the stim file