[FEEDBACK] Take that Knot!

[SilverSlut]

Hey guys!

I've been a lurker here for a really long time (since before I joined). I've posted in like two places max. I've just been here for the teases, honestly... :P

I finally gave in to the temptation and made one of my own! I've basically made a tease based around what works for me. I'm just hoping that someone else out there is similar enough to me to enjoy it, too!

Hopefully that link works. I haven't published the tease yet. I'd like feedback first.

The tease is released! Hope you guys (now that it's in the tease list) enjoy!

Honestly, this 'getting feedback' part scares me since the tease is basically tailored exactly to my inner desires. I'll try to remember that criticism here is of the tease, not of my deeper desires/kinks.

So here's what I would like to know: (Come back to see these after you've done the tease)

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• How is tease length? I tried to keep pictures rotating fast enough to stay fresh, but that may make the whole thing go too quickly?

• Are there any images in there that violate guidelines? I tried to get rid of any that were even borderline, but more eyes are better eyes.

• Did any problems show up with the beats? Like, sounding *very strange* or overlapping? I don't know how to fix that, but I'd like to know.

• Was any of the text too... I dunno... cringe? I like it, but maybe I didn't do so well and I need to know.

• For reals don't look at this question until you've finished the tease:

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  If you selected the "doesn't want gay stuff," did the gay pictures at the very end bother you? They go by very quickly, but if it ruined the ending for you then I should probably go through and apply that option to them.

I know it's fairly niche (furry, very specific toys, etc.), but I'd love to see what you guys think!

EDIT: Changes so far

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• Increased timers in the inflatable section (2.5x, roughly)

• Fixed issue where you'd get sent back to the beginning of the tease

• Decrease overall amount of clicking required

[Omnom5432]

really good tease, one thing i'd suggest is change the warm up a bit so there's less clicking once the playing has started, maybe skip the metronome getting faster and faster for that bit and say something like "do 10 thrusts on your own pace"

[TheHenchmen]

Tried the tease, but don´t have "knotted" dildos.
I wanted to use a big dildo with a massive middle instead (difficult to get in, so it fits this requirement.

2 issues:
The tease bugged out after the "orgy" section and send me back to the start.
The inflatable buttplug section would be great if it would give more time to finish off. It´s "Pump" (slowly) "Stroke (a few seconds) and then back to the start. I think the sensation of a pumped plug needs more time.

Generally, I think the inflatable buttplug tease deserves a section for its own.

[SilverSlut]

really good tease, one thing i'd suggest is change the warm up a bit so there's less clicking once the playing has started, maybe skip the metronome getting faster and faster for that bit and say something like "do 10 thrusts on your own pace"

Hmm, yeah that's a point. Clicking on stuff can wreck the pacing for sure. I'll see what I can do about that, probably tomorrow.

2 issues:
The tease bugged out after the "orgy" section and send me back to the start.

HECK.
If you can tell me exactly when that happened (relative position in tease, what buttons got clicked/if it just happened on its own, etc), I'd be very grateful. That's the kind of thing I want to iron out for sure.
Okay turns out I was a dumb. I found the issue. It didn't even bug out, I just had the wrong page in that button...

The inflatable buttplug section would be great if it would give more time to finish off. It´s "Pump" (slowly) "Stroke (a few seconds) and then back to the start. I think the sensation of a pumped plug needs more time.

I was wondering whether that would be an issue, tbh. I was really unconfident about some of the specific timings. I'll be going in and lengthening those timers considerably. Right now they're set to a range. What would you think if the range was 30-60 seconds instead? Or would a set time be better, in your opinion?

Thanks for trying it out!

[TheHenchmen]

The inflatable buttplug section would be great if it would give more time to finish off. It´s "Pump" (slowly) "Stroke (a few seconds) and then back to the start. I think the sensation of a pumped plug needs more time.

I was wondering whether that would be an issue, tbh. I was really unconfident about some of the specific timings. I'll be going in and lengthening those timers considerably. Right now they're set to a range. What would you think if the range was 30-60 seconds instead? Or would a set time be better, in your opinion?

Thanks for trying it out!

Increase the time by a few seconds on the "stroke" pages so you get to enjoy them.

Alternatively, take out that section and build a tease on its own around it.