That said there were a few minor issues I would like to address:
1) After the opening explanation there should be some kind of ready/start button as players have no idea what to expect.
2) There was no warning at the start that there would be audio, so when the beats started I had to scramble to plug in my headphones, turn on the audio, etc. Meanwhile not being able to follow along.
3) The "cumming"-buttons are not deleted when moving to the next section, so I ended up with three buttons.
4) The ending was a little short as I wasn't finished yet when she started wrapping up. I also would have preferred more encouragement during the orgasm to make it feel more like a big reward.
5) In general adding more teasing & taunting text during longer edges would increase the quality even more. There are currently a few points where you are just staring at images for quite a while.
6) Bug: Near the start of the game the following text appears and does not automatically advance:
- Spoiler: show
For fun I went back and checked what would happen if I clicked the "cummnig"-button and was a bit disappointed. The comments she made after were nicely done, but the ruin itself has no teasing, taunting, mocking, etc. to play around with the experience. I also doubt that 20 seconds would be enough to fully finish for everyone.
