Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Hello everyone!
This is my first tease ever. Please let me know if there are any bugs and how your experience of the tease was.
This is my first tease ever. Please let me know if there are any bugs and how your experience of the tease was.
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Hi ! I cannot do your tease (the oral part) because of NNN, my dom told me to don't do sexual task.
BUT, I can say a few think for improve your tease !
You can, maybe, do the choice to have the introduction, because is very long (for me), and when you don't want to have a stories (like me ) you can now go in action ^^
another thing, useless but more imersive for your stories, puts color in text for each character ^^
i hope it's help you a little bit, however i think it's a good tease !
BUT, I can say a few think for improve your tease !
You can, maybe, do the choice to have the introduction, because is very long (for me), and when you don't want to have a stories (like me ) you can now go in action ^^
another thing, useless but more imersive for your stories, puts color in text for each character ^^
i hope it's help you a little bit, however i think it's a good tease !
If you want to see my work for tease, tips, help, or just talk, join my discord ! https://discord.gg/ana5WPG3Nv
Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Coloring the different persona's was already on my to do list. Just couldn't wait to get it uploaded.
Also added a skipforward option inside the introduction. You can now skip the introduction or skip even futher inside the tease.
Also added a skipforward option inside the introduction. You can now skip the introduction or skip even futher inside the tease.
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
I rarely enjoy teases this focussed on blowjobs. However in this case I just love how messy it gets. It's also quite well written.
Sadly my deepthroat capabilities are not good enough to complete it quite as intended.
I look forward to seeing more from you
Sadly my deepthroat capabilities are not good enough to complete it quite as intended.
I look forward to seeing more from you
Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
You missed an item in the item list and it looks like there should be a piece of dialog here that isn't here
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
I will add the woodenspoon to the itemlist forgot about that punishment
Futhermore by 'your place on the ground' just means however you like in this case. I think the tease is too long to hold 1 position like on your knees for example.
How you should position your laptop / monitor: I use a glass wall inside my bathroom, sticking your didlo with suction cup at he glass wall/door allows you to place your laptop behind the glass and read while performing a blowjob.
However you could also use a door. Just open it and use a doorstop or something to keep it in place. When you place the dildo on the very edge of your door you can watch past the door and place your laptop behind on a small table.
I believe there are other possibilities so just be creative!
Futhermore by 'your place on the ground' just means however you like in this case. I think the tease is too long to hold 1 position like on your knees for example.
How you should position your laptop / monitor: I use a glass wall inside my bathroom, sticking your didlo with suction cup at he glass wall/door allows you to place your laptop behind the glass and read while performing a blowjob.
However you could also use a door. Just open it and use a doorstop or something to keep it in place. When you place the dildo on the very edge of your door you can watch past the door and place your laptop behind on a small table.
I believe there are other possibilities so just be creative!
Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Love the tease my throat will be sore for a while trying to complete it all.
I think the only improvement would be to add a something to remind you how deep to go and how much to pull out. Being out of breath and being so turned on makes remembering stuff hard .
I think the only improvement would be to add a something to remind you how deep to go and how much to pull out. Being out of breath and being so turned on makes remembering stuff hard .
Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Not really a spoiler, but spelling
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
This is done really really well.
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Just finished the tease, all 2,5 hours of it and I absolutely loved it. Intense, long, the writing was so good that it didn't matter that I got really tired, with a sore throat: I just had to finish it. It absolutely improved my throat sucking skills, and I loved
Spoiler about the end:
There was also a missing image, or at least it bugged out when I got to a prompt that said: "You feel a hand on your throat" (not an exact quote, but searching for "throat" should get you there). It showed the outline of a square, with the background of the tease showing, rather than the image itself.
A random suggestion:
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Spoiler about the end:
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There was also a missing image, or at least it bugged out when I got to a prompt that said: "You feel a hand on your throat" (not an exact quote, but searching for "throat" should get you there). It showed the outline of a square, with the background of the tease showing, rather than the image itself.
A random suggestion:
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
I loved it!! I played the last 2 parts on separated sessions tho! Thanks you for giving the option of skiping parts btw!!
Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
excellent tease. Hope you make more of this kind
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Re: Feedback: Caprice Throat Training
Great tease! Hope you do another tease in the future, cheers!
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