[Feedback & Bug Report] Pee Holding GFE

[Ddevil]

Hey there, I made a thing!: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=45583

Please report here if you encounter any bugs and leave feedback, if you have any.

Thanks.

[ghlinh]

Hi, really happy to find a new pee holding tease here. I love them and I'm sad there's not a lot of them here. Especially ones that combines holding and edging. And ones that aren't only focused on drinking a lot of water and simply wait.

I loved that you wrote a story with dialogs, really helps to get in the mood. It was fantastic.

However, there's a few suggestions I'd like to make.

The tease is a bit long. Holding it for 2 hours is really difficult, especially after the exercises and the positions that made me wet myself a bit. I couldn't hold until the end. I suggest to give some release before the end. Maybe add some optional pants wetting or simply peeing for a few seconds and stop.

Related to the first comment, there's no option to end the tease like a "I can't hold it anymore" button. If you can't hold, the only option is to close the page. I'd like to see a proper closure like a bad ending when I can't reach the end.

And finally, for some of us who like the idea of losing control while holding, it's a bit frustrating that you make us do exercises or positions made to weakens the bladder and leak a bit but you don't check if it happened or comment on that. I love when I lose control a little bit and be punished for that

Anyway, keep up the good work, it was a pleasant trip and the story you told around the tease was great !

[Ddevil]

Thanks for the response.

So I mostly wrote the tease just to practice writing stories around teases and to convince myself that my English is good enough for that. So that part at least was a reasonable success.

As for the difficulty, I really have a massive problem with normalizing difficulty of pee holding. Even with only my own bladder the time I can do it comfortably varies massively (2 hours can be nothing sometimes, other times I'll be dying in the middle of a 2 hour period...). And then on top of that every person has different endurance.

I didn't include any wetting in the tease because... well, I'm not into that, really. So I just wrote it as a lose condition, you know? Like in most standard chastity teases if you orgasm, then it's just game over, you failed, try again tomorrow or something like that. These teases sometimes include options to click the button and get some response in case you fail, but not always, so I figured it's fine if my tease won't have it either.

In retrospect it's not the best decision as it's getting mixed reviews and I'm guessing that's the most common complaint, I think. Not sure though, because for some reason nobody leaves any negative feedback. And here I thought that people on the internet are more likely to comment if they're mad at something!

[ghlinh]

If wetting is not your kink, I understand you didn't put any in it. Didn't comment because I was mad, just a bit frustrated. I've been searching for the perfect holding tease for me but I can't obviously tell people how to write them for me (I could do it myself but I like the idea of someone else teasing me)

I'll keep following your work if you do more because I really liked the way you wrote the story

[qatguy]

hi.

i too, enjoyed your peeing tease, but i also agree, there needed to be a failed button.

i should have peed, at start, like it suggested, and about 45 minutes in, i had to release all my bladder pee.

it was fun, dont get me wrong.

thanks again.

gavin.

ps: if you want me to, i am volunteering to be a tease tester for you, for your next pee tease.

pps: next holding tease, please tell all of us, to keep their pants and underwear on the whole time.

[Lestat]

Liked it and mostly agreed with what has already been said, especially the implementation of a failure button (and consequences ^^). I would also like to have some skip buttons for some parts, like waiting parts, I globally found the tease too long.

I will play your next one anyway.

Thanks for your work.

[Erikgoede]

I really loved your tease. I loved your writing and use of the pictures. The tease was really encouraging to finish great job.

Making cumming at the end of the tease an option is for these kind of standalone teases a great option. Espacially with the 'default' option so you don't know for sure if you get to cum or not, but if you are in a chastity period this a perfect tease to complete without having to ignore the cum instructions.

Futhermore the length was indeed really hard but I dont blame you because it is really difficult to make a 'perfect' pee holding tease because everyones bladder and stamina is diffrent. On top off that, it is really hard to combine peeholding with a punishment because people who love pee holding doesn't necessarily has to love 'wetting yourself', 'pee drinking' or any other kink.

Love to see more of you in the future.

PS: your english was good overal so just keep writing

[CuteEboy]

I thought it was very well written and I don't know why it's rated relatively low, this is easily a 5* from me. I personally found it too easy, even drinking more than was required. You only had to drink 500ml, and my total bladder capacity is ~1500ml. Next time I would probably add a difficulty setting requiring you to drink more water on the higher settings and less at the lower.

[Ddevil]

Thanks for all the feedback guys!
I've already made some improvements to the tease, but more importantly I'm trying to learn for the future!

[CarmenCD]

Very nice challenge and interesting story. It's also great that you don't have to drink excessive amounts of water in short time, but rather let the nature do it's normal thing with help of time. It's more realistic scenario.

I couldn't hold it until the end because of my small bladder and bad control over my bladder, so a button " I peed myself" with specific ending to the story would be welcome too. Maybe also an option to keep holding in wet clothes after wetting and continue a challenge or even option to change clothes, get extra punishment for that and continue as well.
I love the combination of teasing and holding as well. I only missed more options what you are wearing during the challenge. Some crossdressing options, like high heels, pantyhose, panties, skirt or dress would be great for those of us who like to crossdress when holding.

Maybe a version of similar challenge while holding in public would be great too. Traveling from one public bathroom to another, doing edging there, locked in a stall.