Little late to the party, but I still wanted to leave a quick review.
The Good:
-The editing is impressive and fits well with the audio.
-The music seemed appropriate for the content.
-The choice of videos was good and complemented the audio well.
The Neutral:
-I've listened to the pure JOI audio that the video ends on before and adding video made some parts easier and others more difficult.
The Bad:
-Your post did not mention this was based on already existing audios and what they were. I realized well into the video that I heard the final audio before. Luckily I did not remember the ending at least, but it did lessen the experience.
-The audio got louder as the video went on. I had to adjust my volume down twice.
- Spoiler: show
- -When Joy asks to get a timer, in the last part of the video, it would have been nice if one was on screen. I actually expected one to appear as previous parts of the video did add similar features.
-It would have been nice to have some credits at the end. I really liked some of the StasyQ girls at the start and it'll now be much harder to find the right girl/video.
-It also seems appropriate if you base your video around someone else's audios to credit them at the end and in the post.
Thank you for all your hard work!
And please don't take my criticism too harshly, you made a great thing. I'm just trying to help you improve even more.