FB: Performing for Kelly

[chewit]

Hi guys,

Let me know if you find any errors with the Kelly tease! Should be a random ending to decide if you cum or not, it seems to work fine in the NYX editor.

Chewit

[dix]

Took a look through the tease. (Couldn't actually do it as Miss Jay has me locked up ) All seems to be in order. Brillient tease BTW, just the right amount of everything in there. A little bit of edging, a little bit of pain and the random ending is always a good thing.

d.

[rocket]

I was wondering. Maybe I read it wrong but I think the stroke mistress told us to ruin our orgasm as punishment, but then actually continued to have us edge. Is this right? It was during the second visit to her. The redheaded one.

[nomeuno]

Yeah, you read it right. If you ruin it properly ... you should be able to edge again quickly. i found to ruin it properly it merely takes the edge off, but most of the cum is still backed up in there. And the desire for a full blown is heightened even more. chewit....... THANK YOU AGAIN.... The stuff You're putting on here is GREAT and i really appreciate the teases, the girls and the fllow of the story. Thanks.

[slaveamy]

Very nice tease :) I did notice a few mistakes, some of the longer paragraphs went below the screen and were unreadable.

Other than that awesome tease although you need to do more for girls ones as Amy for girls rocked :)

[ThomasKu]

Definitely one of the beste teases I've ever seen and done! Pretty girls, a good pace for building up to that edging. And random is always good.
Just a few little things, that really didn't bother me. e.g. She could say something like "You must not stop! The only stopping is, wehen you got OVER the edge and ruined it!" Instead of "You know what to do..."

So, thanks for that great piece of work!