(FEEDBACK) Beta - The Mansion

[Jazzlikeattorney2000]

Hi all,

Ive posted my first webtease and planning on running it as a multi part series that gets into more intense and lengthy teasing, humiliation etc. This is just a snippet of what im looking to do. Ultimately you will control what your destiny and path is with everything tying into the same story, growing with each edition and improving if you play the previous versions first.

Was going to use the normal editor, then found the EOS and it is so much better and much more suited with the branching options. I have beat meters and audio that ill incorporate into future releases, but hadn't sorted that for this one.

Id love some feedback on the tease and idea.

[qatguy]

i really loved the part, about being told to strip naked, then to redress.

that was fun.

[Jazzlikeattorney2000]

i really loved the part, about being told to strip naked, then to redress.

that was fun.

Thanks, Ill be incorporating quite a few out of the box interactions. In a similar vein to that, issue is just getting the balance right, so it doesn't impact other actions.

Appreciate the feedback.

[Kristycookie]

I liked the writing and images. I just wish it was longer / more edging, so I will wait patiently :)

[Jazzlikeattorney2000]

Thanks Both,

Yes it was short as it was only an introduction and testing of concept.
The Day 1 installment is much longer, trying to keep it under an hour though

[DeadpoolJr]

Just gone through and I already love it! Awesome concept, well written and some brilliant picture choices (as well as the endings being fantastic too).

Impatiently waiting for the first instalment!

[Jazzlikeattorney2000]

Just gone through and I already love it! Awesome concept, well written and some brilliant picture choices (as well as the endings being fantastic too).

Impatiently waiting for the first instalment!

Not too long now, the majority is finished. Only 1 part left.
Ive got some time off work shortly that ill be using to focus on testing and cleaning it all up.