[FEEDBACK] Edge Tower - The Beginning

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[FEEDBACK] Edge Tower - The Beginning

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Hey guys, it's my first tease. Fairly short. Please leave your feedback and suggestions.
Here's the link : https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=45087
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Edge Tower - The Beginning

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I cant say anything about first tease.. It was nice. And starting point is nice, maybe there is stroy tease? or just teasing with different models with levels?? But I hope you make more :)
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pepez wrote: Wed Apr 01, 2020 8:16 pm I cant say anything about first tease.. It was nice. And starting point is nice, maybe there is stroy tease? or just teasing with different models with levels?? But I hope you make more :)
Thank you. Please look forward to the upcoming part(s) :-D
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redditaddict420 wrote: Wed Apr 01, 2020 8:59 pm I liked the tease and the story it's setting up. I also haven't seen Malena in a while, so that's refreshing.

And now for a bit of criticism, it was slightly annoying having to click to continue during the stroking phase. Generally, I prefer having text clickable while there's nothing going on, and having it move on its own while I have something to do.

And it felt a bit anticlimatic to be allowed to cum during the test, unless you're planning to use that somehow in the next parts.

Looking forward to the next part(s)!
Thanks for the honest feedback :-D . Will definitely implement them in the next one. And yes there are some surprises :-P
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I second what addict said. In Eos, I noticed, you can get the arrow command to go with a hit on the space bar. That would be better for the 'edge & hold.' A full click does kill the momentum.
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I think it's a good first tease. l'll keep my eyes for the next one.
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