Now a little constructive criticism when playing this production. There's a very nice progression from softcore to hardcore at the end. I especially like the girls selected for the first half. The one thing that bothered me was that the visual changed quickly at the exact same time that the stroke beat were changing which diverted my attention to the beatmeter, and missing a piece of the action unfortunately. It happened often enough for me to make this comment. Another thing to look for is that it's preferable not to overlap text over other text. It occurred on some occasions. Overall, a good first production from the creator.
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