the "Look back" choice. I'm not sure why, maybe I don't like to rush or maybe I liked the idea of my character being drawn to her/ not wanting to leave already (or maybe I wanted to see "more" of her). Especially since you get to choose between spiritual/shy/flirty. I actually tried them all. Anyway I thought it was cool.
What irritated me slightly was the mix of timers and clicking next. I wasn't always sure whether I was supposed to click or not and at one point I stared at the screen for a while before realizing I needed to click. Overall I felt I clicked quite a lot.
Content was great, though. I like how you write and I'll be sure to check out the next part.
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undeniable_denial wrote: Sat Jan 25, 2020 10:07 pm
What irritated me slightly was the mix of timers and clicking next. I wasn't always sure whether I was supposed to click or not and at one point I stared at the screen for a while before realizing I needed to click. Overall I felt I clicked quite a lot.
Content was great, though. I like how you write and I'll be sure to check out the next part.
I just figured out while making Part 2, how to use Timers, Buttons and Clicks in a better way
It kinda felt weird for me, too. But now I know better
Really enjoyed both parts. Its actual stroking plays out really well, the storytelling is great, and the edging at the end was tough! Any idea how long you plan to make the series? Keep up the great work
I did encounter a bug in part B where in the bathtub, if you endure the entire thing, the button to say you are going to cum stays on the screen for the rest of the tease, and if you click it, it takes you all the way back. I clicked it once i finished the tease to see.
I did encounter a bug in part B where in the bathtub, if you endure the entire thing, the button to say you are going to cum stays on the screen for the rest of the tease, and if you click it, it takes you all the way back. I clicked it once i finished the tease to see.
Fixed. Thank you! Forgot two markers
Banditsecond wrote: Sun Jan 26, 2020 7:59 pm
Really enjoyed both parts. Its actual stroking plays out really well, the storytelling is great, and the edging at the end was tough! Any idea how long you plan to make the series? Keep up the great work
Appreciate it
Chapter 1 will end either in a part E or F. Not quite decided.
Chapter 2 is already in my head, as well as Chapter 3
Based on the first two chapters, you're one of the best new content creators we've had here in a while. Thanks for contributing! I don't have any real critique to offer, either. There will always be places where I might want a faster pace, or a slower one, and of course I'd love to have my personal favorite fetishes featured more, but the concept and execution, including model choice, is excellent. Thanks rayray77!
The storyline is amazing! One of the best tease recently with nice story. It helps a lot to keep you through the entire tease rather than just stroking to some photos. The models are stunning too, what are the names of the models?
It's always the question, if you should release these parts one by one or make them all ready to be released and then publish each day one Part.
I do like the second option, but then parts sit finished on my pc and ... yeah. Always a difficult decision for me.
Wow, the adventure just keeps getting better! I really like where you are taking the story. Thank you for all your work and thanks also for introducing me to Alisa, who is absolutely stunning
Really awesome series, i am finding me checking the site every day to see if a new chapter has come out
I usually don't like webteases too much because i feel they are a bit too linear, but yours is different. The storytelling is great, the models too and there are even a few choices to make here and there to make it feel like you are actually having a part in what's happening
Awesome work 
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