Feedback - The Wild Siren Ranch

[doug_flutie]

I finished my first webtease, and hope it was fairly successful. Let me know what you think.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=4997

Also, I noticed an error that I did not catch before, and fixed it. Hopefully that didn't ruin anyone's potential fun.

[all2true]

Welcome to forum posting!
Always glad to see a new writer!
Thank you for you post and tease.

I was very impressed with your flash tease
have not yet gone the whole way through (limited time in real life)
But The way you posted pictures in pictures
and the genral plot line,
very well done.

[sexualreflex909]

Hey would just like to say, its EXTREMELY unsafe to leave your balls tied up using a elestic band for any length of time, as the elastic keeps tightening its likely to cause castration!

[doug_flutie]

Thanks for the replies. About the rubber band issue, it is meant to not be on very tight at all. I hope I made that clear enough in the tease. I'll review what I have written down, and make any changes that may be required for safety.

[twitchytoy]

doug flutie !!

i remember there was this really delicious limited edition cereal called "flutie flakes!"