Feedback: The Mystical Maze: Part 1

[Morexis]

Hello everyone!

After more than a month, I'm back again with another MyLittlePony / clop webtease.
"The Mystical Maze: Part 1" (https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=41896) is a standalone game that is part of a bigger series of webteases that I'll release in the future. It relies heavily on randomness, providing the player with a new and unique experience every time they play it.

After releasing my last game, "Evening at Fluttershy's" (https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=41639), someone told me to create a feedback thread here. Since I didn't do it last time, I want to redeem myself with this thread.

Well, I hope you enjoy the game and I'm excited to hear your feedback!
I'll also gladly any questions about the game, if you have any.

[Roblsforbobls]

Thanks so much for making this! I've played it just once so far, but I can't wait to play it again and see who else I meet. This story was surprisingly engaging for being a room-to-room tease, and I'm curious as to what is happening and why. I loved how each pony has different styles of instruction and very vibrant personalities. I thought it was really cool how you introduced the setting first before the new pony - the emphasis on breaks and anticipation made it a lot more enjoyable that it otherwise would have been.

During my playthrough I

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came to Pinkie Pie

because of course I did. It was what I wanted from the start of the tease, and I was so excited to actually get that chance that I

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decided to cum with her rather than keep going, to build that orgasm more, and see the end of the ride.

I'm excited to play this one again, I think it will be one of my favorites on this site. I wonder what the next part will bring?

[Morexis]

Thanks for the nice words, I'm glad you like it.

I also wanted to thank you for helping me with EOS and providing me with the structure for this game. I would've never figured that out on my own. ^^

Well, good luck for the next times you play the game. Not all endings are as enjoyable as Pinkie's.

[dewwd]

I'm not normally turned on by MLP and I only had like 7-8 minutes to burn so I thought I would just check this tease out and not stroke.

WTF was I thinking

Holy fuck, when humanized they're hot as HELL! Your taste is awesome, and the dialog is hot as FUCK. The timing isn't too long on any one particular picture, and the girls talking about how hot their bodies are is specifically DAMN sexy. The tomboyishness, the flirting, all of it.

5 minutes in and I'm pumping away, despite having nowhere near enough time to enjoy and finish... my poor blue balls

You get two thumbs-up for this one man, PLEASE do more!

[Morexis]

Haha I'm glad you had a great time!

I tried to use as many humanized images as possible for people like you, who don't usually follow MLP and clop. I hope you didn't mind the non-humanized pictures, I had to use some because I couldn't find a better fitting humanized image.

More is coming soon

[Roblsforbobls]

I'll also gladly any questions about the game, if you have any.

I was playing around with this tease again, and I think I may have found a bug:

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I told Twilight I didn't want to cum with her, and she disappeared. Immediately afterwards I was taken to the page where she says she's glad I said yes. So basically the game ends when you meet her lol

Feel free to PM me if my explanation didn't make sense. Thanks again for making this tease, it certainly does have a good amount of replayability and is still one of my favorites

[Morexis]

Hmm, that definetly shouldn't have happened.

Were you sent to the next page immediately or did you first go to the transition page with the "..."? There was a mistake in the code because of which this would be possible if you were sent to the transition page. In that case, I just fixed the faulty part and that shouldn't happen again. Thanks for pointing it out!

If you really went from one page to the next without the transition page, there probably was an error in EOS. The code doesn't allow going to the next page directly here.
I don't know if you've heard about the problems with EOS in the last couple of weeks. Some webteases were almost unplayable because much of the more complicated code didn't work, so that might also be the reason for the bug you found. Luckily, those issues have already been fixed, so that shouldn't happen again.

Thanks again for making this tease, it certainly does have a good amount of replayability and is still one of my favorites

Good to hear that you still enjoy playing it! Replayability was one of my main focuses for this game.