Looking for a proofread of my next video

[Qiubi]

Hello i just finished writting all the "history" and how my english isn't the perfect i want someone that proofread and correct my work.

(there's like 150 or 250 lines of text) (short lines etc... what you can expect from a video of JOI, whrere a lot of them are just fine and no need correction)


the archive it's a .txt so will be easy to correct as just delete the wrong word and put the correct one, etc....

[Qiubi]

no one?? there's just a few lines... probably 20-30 minutes maximun, they are short lines not even full sentences all the time....

will be a hentai video JOI and people like my JOI videos, that's because i want to a proofreader to make it 100% nice and correct this time.

[doyouevenodd]

i can do it

[Qiubi]

i can do it

i will send it via MP to you

[doyouevenodd]

Turns out it's a bit more kinky than i'm used to but I'm giving it a shot :)

[MaoMao3974]

Hello i just finished writting all the "history" and how my english isn't the perfect i want someone that proofread and correct my work.

(there's like 150 or 250 lines of text) (short lines etc... what you can expect from a video of JOI, whrere a lot of them are just fine and no need correction)


the archive it's a .txt so will be easy to correct as just delete the wrong word and put the correct one, etc....

I know a couple have offered already, but also happy to assist!

(edit) just noticed the dates! assume this is all done was some time ago this was posted!