I took your (Caprice's?) advice and went for the Extreme version this time. I’m... goanna need some more practice...
Some more things I have noticed, to be considered in the next release (which we all await!
). Not meant as complaint in any way, just that this is such a wonderful tease that I try to fine-tune it every chance I get!
I got to the third or fourth floor and did additional pain, later I was bounced back to the second floor, and after a while got promoted again with the phrase "
You really impressed me tolerating this additional pain". But I had not taken any additional pain for a long time, not on this floor, and certainly not in this visit to this floor.
I understand from a programming point of view what is happening here, the variable for additional pain get set on the higher floor, and remains set and read on the lover. But from the user/story perspective it gets a bit unrelated. But I understand this can be a case where the implementation of a correction would prove much more work than motivated by the user experience.
Picture colleen-(14) is used in two pages in a row, picture colleen-(15) never used at all.
On Page id="colleen7", the text is "
Then just hit the button and someone else will take care of you...". But there is no button to hit! Normally a button is not needed, as there are no audio files associated with that page. But her comment becomes a bit strange without it, and her answer on next page as well...
Spelling mistakes:
Is:
Version 2.x - Check the forum for release nodes
Should be:
Version 2.x - Check the forum for release notes
Is:
Of course I know how painful this could be but this will only while a moment...
Should be:
Of course I know how painful this could be, but this will only last a moment...
Is:
Don't worry... I have dildos in a size of a hourse dick!!!
Should be:
Don't worry... I have dildos in a size of a horse dick!!!
Is (appears multiple times in code):
Come one...
Should be:
Come on...
Is (appears multiple times in code):
I'm disappointed from you!
Should be:
I'm disappointed in you!
I deleted all Emergency buttons on pages where there are no stimuli files. I just don’t think there should be a button there, because you have no need for Emergency on a silent page, and it usually don't go with the story, as the silent pages often are the first introduction page, or the last one when you have succeeded, and there you don't press Emergency. Not a big deal, but that unnecessary button bug me for some reason. Yea, I'm strange...
What I did was to go to the first girl in the code,
<Page id="ava1">, then search for
</Page>. If the line above contains
<Button xxxxxxx </Button>, then I deleted that row, because that combination,
<Button xxxxxxx </Button> directly followed by
</Page> is a silent page, with a button.
Not very advanced, just a lot of clicking next in the search box...
And now, since someone seems to have tipped off Caprice about boys resting in the hallway (
), I found a new way to rest.
- Spoiler: show
- Clicking the Elevator button, and then return to the hallway, will give 10 seconds of rest, and can be repeated as desired.
This actually is not only resting, it is pure cheating! The Caprice I know and love wouldn't tolerate this. I think, once you have entered and exited to the elevator more than two or three times it is no longer a mistake, and there ought to be a consequence. A session with the elevator girl seems fair, since you were so keen on seeing her over and over again... Then lock the door to the elevator for the rest of the session (when you click the Elevator button only a picture of a locked door is displayed).
Well, until next time, when I find more things to fiddle with...
