Is this somehow loosely based or inspired by the doki doki literature club? I see some similarities...
I will however not read the answer to the question until I have seen the end, since that might be a major spoiler. Somehow, I am a bit afraid since that thought crossed my mind
More than a little :) Started off as a lot more, but I think I diverged a decent amount although of course some of the main themes stick around. Starting out in my mind Fran was Monica, Hailey was Sayori, Xia was Natsuki and Caprice was Yue, but as soon as I actually put my personas for them into motion that ended pretty quickly...
More than a little :) Started off as a lot more, but I think I diverged a decent amount although of course some of the main themes stick around. Starting out in my mind Fran was Monica, Hailey was Sayori, Xia was Natsuki and Caprice was Yue, but as soon as I actually put my personas for them into motion that ended pretty quickly...
I catched that pretty early in the game I think. It was just after day two when I got a bit angry at the tease for...
...only allowing me to see two girls on the weekend. I mean, it is two hole days, I can visit more than two people!
And somehow I remembered I have been confused/angry about the same thing before... I couldn't pin it down for hours. I kept asking myself if I played the tease before and have somehow forgotten? Then finally 18 hours later I remembered it was the same way in the literature club. And at that moment I saw more similarities, like the girls fighting, one kept asking crazy questions...
After day 5 (I believe?) - monday evening - it was crystal clear the whole story was blatantly copied
Oh btw I am mad at you for deleting the total hotness Caprice is first, not that evil bitch Xia
Nice work, I love to read an interesting story. The story for me is the difference between a 5-star and a 3-star rating.
Reasons to have oranges at home:
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
More than a little :) Started off as a lot more, but I think I diverged a decent amount although of course some of the main themes stick around. Starting out in my mind Fran was Monica, Hailey was Sayori, Xia was Natsuki and Caprice was Yue, but as soon as I actually put my personas for them into motion that ended pretty quickly...
I catched that pretty early in the game I think. It was just after day two when I got a bit angry at the tease for...
...only allowing me to see two girls on the weekend. I mean, it is two hole days, I can visit more than two people!
And somehow I remembered I have been confused/angry about the same thing before... I couldn't pin it down for hours. I kept asking myself if I played the tease before and have somehow forgotten? Then finally 18 hours later I remembered it was the same way in the literature club. And at that moment I saw more similarities, like the girls fighting, one kept asking crazy questions...
After day 5 (I believe?) - monday evening - it was crystal clear the whole story was blatantly copied
Oh btw I am mad at you for deleting the total hotness Caprice is first, not that evil bitch Xia
Nice work, I love to read an interesting story. The story for me is the difference between a 5-star and a 3-star rating.
Y'know, I'm not entirely sure that was even an intentional link! I remember wanting to do something like that where you have to not see someone for a while, but I don't know that Doki made me do that...but it might have. Odd coincidence if not though :)
And hey, I only copied like, 90, maybe 95% of the story! :P I felt by the end it was more heavily inspired than the copy it had started out as though. Multiple endings, for one!
And Xia takes offense at that
Glad you enjoyed it though, it was an interesting one to make for sure
I guess it is mostly about the betrayed character. It is not about a little whack or two, which i like just as much as the next guy. She always seemed uninterested in me, or even playing. She would have loved to keep me locked up for a month and would not even let me have a glance at her tits.
I got Ending 2. I lied to Fan though, I will not come back
Although I do have the code for another ending (where hottie Caprice might be still alive), I might try that.
Reasons to have oranges at home:
1. they're healthy
2. smells nice
3. Milovana
I guess it is mostly about the betrayed character. It is not about a little whack or two, which i like just as much as the next guy. She always seemed uninterested in me, or even playing. She would have loved to keep me locked up for a month and would not even let me have a glance at her tits.
I got Ending 2. I lied to Fan though, I will not come back
Although I do have the code for another ending (where hottie Caprice might be still alive), I might try that.
Just leaving my appreciation for your work Shattered. All of your teases, without exception, are just perfect in every little detail. Thank you! Ps: Hailey, considering all of her appearances in your teases, is an great example of how to build characters and make readers care about them.
ZoraRoyalSlave wrote: Tue Aug 06, 2019 7:46 pm
Just leaving my appreciation for your work Shattered. All of your teases, without exception, are just perfect in every little detail. Thank you! Ps: Hailey, considering all of her appearances in your teases, is an great example of how to build characters and make readers care about them.
Thanks, always appreciated :) I do try to make it 'more' than just a tease, I can't resist trying some sort of story and character development She will return eventually...
I load 033
1st I get to a page with glitched text and image
There you go. It's off.
Although Mrs. Domina, I don't feel so good....
This one seeing my breasts is too much.
then after a few pages:
Of course I mean you. She's a little...off, isn't she?
Dammit...Why does everything have to be so complicated?
and then upon pressing 'Continue' blank screen. Absolutely nothing I can do or click, just a background. It is possible it broke?
Would be awesome if you could explain what to do as I don't think I got to the end of the tease as it's just so weird and buggy looking. I tried reloading and redoing on different browsers and waiting quite a while but nothing.
I load 033
1st I get to a page with glitched text and image
There you go. It's off.
Although Mrs. Domina, I don't feel so good....
This one seeing my breasts is too much.
then after a few pages:
Of course I mean you. She's a little...off, isn't she?
Dammit...Why does everything have to be so complicated?
and then upon pressing 'Continue' blank screen. Absolutely nothing I can do or click, just a background. It is possible it broke?
Would be awesome if you could explain what to do as I don't think I got to the end of the tease as it's just so weird and buggy looking. I tried reloading and redoing on different browsers and waiting quite a while but nothing.
It works in flash but not html5, strange.
Not sure why can you try in flash?
I load 033
1st I get to a page with glitched text and image
There you go. It's off.
Although Mrs. Domina, I don't feel so good....
This one seeing my breasts is too much.
then after a few pages:
Of course I mean you. She's a little...off, isn't she?
Dammit...Why does everything have to be so complicated?
and then upon pressing 'Continue' blank screen. Absolutely nothing I can do or click, just a background. It is possible it broke?
Would be awesome if you could explain what to do as I don't think I got to the end of the tease as it's just so weird and buggy looking. I tried reloading and redoing on different browsers and waiting quite a while but nothing.
It works in flash but not html5, strange.
Not sure why can you try in flash?
Flash version worked once I re-enabled it back in chrome! Thanks, you have some serious talent as a writer/game designer I have to say and I say it as a game dev myself ;)
I promise, if I have the chance, i will repeat that words in her face 
You can certainly choose to go against her at a lot of points...BTW which ending did ya get?