[Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
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Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
My third probably won't be ballbusting, i am out of ideas besides ballbusting futanari part2.
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Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
meh, what a shame, there is no fun jerking to other cocks ...
Will wait for new inspiration!
Will wait for new inspiration!
Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
I keep reading this as Dave Cameron and expecting the former British Prime Minister to show up
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Hahahaha, thats...funny?
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This exact tease? No
But the number of pages that has more than 5 litres are very few.
But the number of pages that has more than 5 litres are very few.
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Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
BTW Dove Cameron was quite evil & dominating as a black-clad assassain / villian in the last few episodes of 'Agents of SHIELD'
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Hey there!
First, I want to say this is really well done. I like the idea, I like the rising and falling intensity that builds over time, and Dove is certainly a nice choice. It's definitely a brutal tease
I do want to talk about safety, though. Specifically, the drops on pages 5, 9, 18, and 38. The physics behind weight drops make them dangerous in a way that the lifts, swings and jumps are not. Here's why.
For a wrist height drop, I raise a bucket 0.5 m and let it fall. Let's say my scrotum can stretch about 0.02 m. The fall is 25x as long as the stop. This means my balls are pulled with 25x weight. So, a wrist height drop of 4 liters of water is like hanging 100 liters of water for a moment. This also happens so fast that there's no time to react. The rest of the tease does a great job of building up gradually, but this one can be a big surprise
This wont happen to everyone. Some people have a scrotum that can stretch more. If your slave's scrotum can stretch 0.05 m, then the multiplier is 10x instead of 25x. It's like hanging 40 liters of water instead of 100. If the shoelace can stretch another 0.05 m then it's like hanging 20 liters. That's why drops are so dangerous. What can be painful but safe for one person can be disaster for another person, and little things like the shoelace/cord you use make a huge difference. You can't know when you write the tease if the person who does it will have a 5x or 10x or 25x weight multiplier.
There is an easy fix, though. Instead of this:
The other pages could have similar edits.
Page 9:
First, I want to say this is really well done. I like the idea, I like the rising and falling intensity that builds over time, and Dove is certainly a nice choice. It's definitely a brutal tease
I do want to talk about safety, though. Specifically, the drops on pages 5, 9, 18, and 38. The physics behind weight drops make them dangerous in a way that the lifts, swings and jumps are not. Here's why.
For a wrist height drop, I raise a bucket 0.5 m and let it fall. Let's say my scrotum can stretch about 0.02 m. The fall is 25x as long as the stop. This means my balls are pulled with 25x weight. So, a wrist height drop of 4 liters of water is like hanging 100 liters of water for a moment. This also happens so fast that there's no time to react. The rest of the tease does a great job of building up gradually, but this one can be a big surprise
This wont happen to everyone. Some people have a scrotum that can stretch more. If your slave's scrotum can stretch 0.05 m, then the multiplier is 10x instead of 25x. It's like hanging 40 liters of water instead of 100. If the shoelace can stretch another 0.05 m then it's like hanging 20 liters. That's why drops are so dangerous. What can be painful but safe for one person can be disaster for another person, and little things like the shoelace/cord you use make a huge difference. You can't know when you write the tease if the person who does it will have a 5x or 10x or 25x weight multiplier.
There is an easy fix, though. Instead of this:
You could say this:Now lift the bucket as far as it will go and let it go
This sounds like a little change, but it's huge. The weight multiplier will be 3x this way. It doesn't matter how stretchy the scrotum or shoelace are, it's just always 3x. It also builds up gradually. If I lift the weight as high as it can go and drop it, then it goes from no weight on my balls to 100 liters in about 0.01 seconds. That's faster than human reaction time. If I hold the bucket as far forward as it can go, then it goes from no weight on my balls to 12 liters in about 0.3 seconds. If it's too painful, I'll reflexively bend my knees in time.Now lift the bucket. Hold it as far forward as it will go. The shoelace should point straight forward and be tight. Now, drop it.
The other pages could have similar edits.
Page 9:
Page 18:Now hold the bucket as far forward as you can again, hehe you know what to do.
Page 38:How happy are you for finally having something carryable down there? Hold it forward again and drop it.
Hope that helps, and thanks for an awesome tease and new idea!Hold the bucket forward again.
Do 10 strokes.
Is your arm getting tired? Drop the bucket.
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Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
Alright
Noted and changed, that was helpful, i am glad you guys are here.
Thanks
Noted and changed, that was helpful, i am glad you guys are here.
Thanks
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Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
An update... it's been quite some time since this tease but i will post it anyways, 2 things:
First: I was away for some matters...but i am here and working on a new tease...any ideas are welcome.
Second: I corrected some minor mistakes in my tease and made it somewhat more doable(still harsh to complete)
First: I was away for some matters...but i am here and working on a new tease...any ideas are welcome.
Second: I corrected some minor mistakes in my tease and made it somewhat more doable(still harsh to complete)
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Re: [Feedback] for ''Dove Cameron is going to rip your balls off''
I've played hundreds of the teases on here, and I've got to say, I've not liked any of the others nearly as much as I love this. Such extremely brutal instructions, but she still has a "shut up and do it" attitude, while continuing to push you further. It is so amazing. NoMercy is a pretty accurate username . I don't know if you'd be willing to do a tease like this again, but if so I would absolutely love it
I'm looking forward to seeing the new tease you're working on
I'm looking forward to seeing the new tease you're working on
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