Ruin Quickly For Samui [Remake]

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Ruin Quickly For Samui [Remake]

Post by TrashDick » Mon Mar 12, 2018 7:25 pm

This is a feedback thread for my remake of my old tease "Quick Ruin For Mistress Samui."
The old tease is no longer available, "Ruin Quickly For Samui" should be considered the completed and final incarnation of it.

Did you like the tease? Did you not? Why/Why not? Anything I could do better?
Would you like to see some kind of sequel? Any suggestions for such a thing?

Anything that comes to mind, feel free to share it! :-D
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Re: Ruin Quickly For Samui [Remake]

Post by Quarz » Tue Mar 13, 2018 12:34 pm

The tease does what it says on the tin.
By its nature it is too short to be a great tease, but it has its niche and will probably see occasional use from me.

Only small point of improvement I would give is to not directly loop back to the prior page, when pressing "Reply 2" on the "no" path, but instead loop over an extra page.
On one hand because some reaction, possibly indicating that that path goes nowhere, would be nice, but also because every time something loops to a prior page without explanation I wonder whether that is intended (it is, but I felt compelled to look at the sourcecode to make sure).

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Re: Ruin Quickly For Samui [Remake]

Post by TrashDick » Tue Mar 13, 2018 4:40 pm

The page with the three options is intended to teach you how Samui reacts to your attitude.

-Accepting her orders is what she intends for you to do.
-Begging for mercy or permission to have a real orgasm will get you punished until she breaks you.
-Trying to refuse the whole ordeal will simply piss her off and she'll do even worse to you for it.

The point of option 2 is not to trick you into punishments until you figure out it's a loop, it's to teach you that trying to beg for a full orgasm will only make her hurt you more. To that end, I decided intentionally to only loop back to the same page so that it was immediately obvious that you're in a loop.

I considered having multiple punishments to randomly send you to, but I felt it went against teaching the lesson.
I'll probably still go back and worth on changing it though.
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Pussy-Free Archive: (For those who aren't allowed to see pussies)
http://imgur.com/a/qnzuv
Pussy-Visible Archive: (All pics that show pussy)
http://imgur.com/a/k5XeA

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Re: Ruin Quickly For Samui [Remake]

Post by plugache » Wed Mar 14, 2018 1:55 am

hey, slightly irrelevant but I was wondering if you ever plan on making a part 2 to Mei's Cuck training tease. I thought you were inactive up until this point but I see you're still making teases. :)

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Re: Ruin Quickly For Samui [Remake]

Post by TrashDick » Wed Mar 14, 2018 9:38 am

I do plan to.
It's just that I'm a truly horrendously inconsistent worker, so it can take any amount of time really. I've already made and thrown away 4 versions of it. :closedeyes:
Archive of full-sized pictures that I've used in my teases:
Pussy-Free Archive: (For those who aren't allowed to see pussies)
http://imgur.com/a/qnzuv
Pussy-Visible Archive: (All pics that show pussy)
http://imgur.com/a/k5XeA

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