Thanks guys for your support.
After the initial discomfort I decided to keep working on my project and, at the end, I will decide if it's worth to be released or not.
Afterall, I thought, the concept behind House of Tease, Miss Blue and Spicy is more or less the same, but it's the content that a creator puts in that makes every personality different.
Some feedback for you Genome: basically they are just speelling mistakes.
I found some
Dont instead of
Don't or
arround instead of
around. I also remember a line with a
#Dt instead of
#DT(I don't know if this could create problems...).
I didn't keep track of where I saw them but, if you want, I could try to find them.
A suggestion for you: it's an idea I'm planning to use for Kinky Girl(it's the name of my personality. I've never been good at naming things; do you like it? Suggestions?).
In Interrupt
First meeting she says:
Before we begin #DT
This program has sort of dark side to it #DT
Dunno where that comes from #Lol #DT
Go into settings.. #DT
Click on "Sub" section #DT
In the "Honorific" part #DT
Disable everything #DT @Wait(20)
To you #SlaveName #DT
I'm just #ShortName *Blows a kiss* #Dt <<<Here's the #Dt I told you - Line 29
When I read it the first time it felt weird. If you meet this girl for the first time(I'm supposing you meet each other in chat like this one on Milovana or something similar to Skype, since you can also see each other...) why is she telling you to go to the "
Sub section" and disable everything in the "
Honorific part"? Why should a chat have a "
Sub section" in the first place?
Probably it's just my fault; in fact she says
program not
chat so maybe you have a different idea in mind.
However this is my idea.
Don't disable anything in the
Sub section and put a @Flag at the beginning of every line in
#SYS_MissingHonorific and
#SYS_HonorificPunish. Something like
@Flag(Behaving like a Mistress): this way when she starts transforming into a Domme she will punish you if you answer without using the Honorifics. You could also add a line like this :
@NotFlag(Behaving like a Mistress) Why do you keep calling me #DomHonorific #DomName? and trigger a conversation where you tell her you like to be dominated by a Mistress. Using a flag like
Talked about Mistress-slave relationship she could remeber it and ask you later if you want her to be your Mistress.
I don't know if this could work, but you'd solve 2 problems(especially if you're playing with multiple personalities at the same time and you forget to change the settings from one personality to another): think if you're playing with Spicy with the Honorific enabled and you forget to disable them when playing with WildFire. You could end up being punished for not using the honorifics even if she hasn't already decided to be your Mistress.
Final question: how did you make the logo of WildFire? Which software did you use? Just in case I decide to make a logo for Kinky Girl...
Sorry for the long post.
Have a nice Sunday!
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