However Most men would be turned off purely by the fact the whole tease was composed of images of other men - the humiliation aspect of it was brilliant - but i feel if the tease felt more like it was narrated by a woman that would have been excellent. an example would have been the very first page - a woman talking about her pathetic slaves and how she wants you to do what theyre doing - then for the next few pages showing the pics every so often there could be a picture of the woman with a bit of narration, just to help the flow and the picture part of it, as it is you kind of jump straight in without any storyline - the humiliation would be ten times better if it was directly shown to be said by a woman - and men would enjoy the eroticness if there where images of women to wank to every so often
. I really like the fact you seem to have researched a bit into the torture methods around - it seems like you've read a few teases and tried to get a feel for what feels bad (good
) - but the teases where something new is introduced are always the best - its a lot to ask for but perhaps a bit of devius thinking will help you apply the torture methods into new scenario's - even better would be thinking of new stuff - its very hard but originality is always best. all in all however I have to say I appreciate the difficulty in making a tease - I made one and found it pretty hard to find the privacy to compose all the pictures and the text and its pretty hard to try and make your tease seem like it has something new to offer - so just saying thanks - it seems like your interested in the subject and the fact that you seem to already know the favourite torture techniques probably means that after a few 'practise' teases, you will be able to come up with some good stuff.