Yeah, I joined two weeks ago, but I was playing with the webteases and cockhero videos ever since 2015 as a guest.imtoosexy wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:24 am says you joined 2 weeks ago, the first page looks like a commercial ..
have no idea what this site is about
Funny thing is you should check out Uberman's "The Awesome Competition". My tease is inspired by his. Not to mention his tease also recommended the fleshlight although there is no need for it. Another one that I saw is "Pressure II" which is open to both. Also, it is *fleshlight* not flashlight.imtoosexy wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:24 am It says you joined 2 weeks ago.
The first page looks like a commercial ..
You have no idea what this site is about
Go use a flashlight
Plus, I thought this community is open to many styles rather than exclude one type or am I mistaken? I guess the community changed a lot. 
to this lovely community and nice to see you introducing yourself with a webtease 
Hey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome!FCK88 wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:19 pm Hi nerdchat
First of all,
Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.
Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism
KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future
True, true.spaisin wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:02 pm Eh, don't be discouraged.. one person jumped to conclusions, that doesn't say anything about the community.
For the story, I hope to make the second and third parts more "plot twisty" (can't spoil too muchspaisin wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:02 pm I haven't done your tease properly.. I checked the start, seemed all right - if a bit simplistic in its "storytelling" or "immersion" however you wanna put it.. I might play it properly later, but I haven't been really into teases lately thou, so, no promises.
Just wanted to balance that weird "you don't belong here" a bit, keep at it, you'll get there :)
) to make things interesting. Also, as for the "you don't belong here", I guess I made the characters sound a bit too aggressive lol. I will be sure to diversify the second and third parts' characters a lot more. As for the error, I will be sure to check it out and fix it. Also, thanks for the feedback!Hello! Thanks for the feedback and thank you very much for playing my first tease! I will be sure to add them into the next two parts/teases! Once the trilogy is complete, I will be sure to adding in big updates to make the experience more accessible and fun.
You're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my sidenerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 amHey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome!FCK88 wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:19 pm Hi nerdchat
First of all,
Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.
Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism
KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future
*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
)FCK88 wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:13 amYou're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my sidenerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 amHey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome!FCK88 wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:19 pm Hi nerdchat
First of all,
Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.
Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism
KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future
*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha
, but on a more serious note, what I meant was the device you used to see the tease like a tablet or laptop or something. Sorry for being very vague! I used my laptop and ran it using the TeaseMe-program - that's where I encountered the many errors :)nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 5:15 amFCK88 wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:13 amYou're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my sidenerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 am
Hey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome!
*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha
I think it must be the TeaseMe program since I already tried this tease out on both my tablet and laptop, and it worked fine on both devices. In addition, if the TeaseMe program required optimization, then that must be the reason why you are experiencing errors since I don't know much about it and never optimized this tease. I will look more into that program for more info.FCK88 wrote: Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:55 pmI used my laptop and ran it using the TeaseMe-program - that's where I encountered the many errors :)nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 5:15 amFCK88 wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:13 am
You're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my side
I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha
