This is only my second tease, and I decided to start a series.
The first tease is designed to be a slow, easy, getting started tease, with no toys, pain and nothing too challenging.
Pure tease and denial if you like.
The series will build and involve more challenging elements as it progresses.
Let me know what you think.
Ginjon x
Friends with Benefits 1: Feedback
Re: Friends with Benefits 1: Feedback
No feedback so far? Not sure why... I thought part 1 of your tease was really good, and I hope to see more of it. Some things I liked:
Good choice of pictures
The pictures went along with the story pretty well
The mix of different instructions was good, too. (I hate instructions like "Stroke 500 times.")
The story itself was pretty good and was very well written (good spelling, grammar, etc.).
The story opens the door for a ton of future extensions!
On a personal level, I always enjoy teases with a younger (but not TOO young) sexy girl who's in control but isn't a total bitch.
I look forward to seeing part 2! Maybe in future parts we'll hear more about what her ex used to do to her...
Good choice of pictures
The pictures went along with the story pretty well
The mix of different instructions was good, too. (I hate instructions like "Stroke 500 times.")
The story itself was pretty good and was very well written (good spelling, grammar, etc.).
The story opens the door for a ton of future extensions!
On a personal level, I always enjoy teases with a younger (but not TOO young) sexy girl who's in control but isn't a total bitch.
I look forward to seeing part 2! Maybe in future parts we'll hear more about what her ex used to do to her...