I just did the tease and I absolutly love it. Great idea and way of writing(didn't notice any mistakes, but I'm not english native as well)
I would be more than happy if you could make a part 2.
Thanks for your effort and time you spend creating this tease.
If you make a part 2 make sure, to inform me ;D
Outstanding job... one of my favorite teases so far... please definitely continue. I'm a native English speaker and I found very few mistakes, and those that were there were not bad enough to distract me.
If everything else is going to be n teaseme / guideme -- please leave instructions on how to get there and how that works.
Just completed part 1 and looking forward to part 2 and hopefully you decide to continue after that. One of my favorite teases already, the metronome is always a big plus to me. Keep up the good work
I agree, this is an excellent tease. My only suggestion is that you have a skip button for the story exposition for those playing it a 2nd or 20th time thru. English seems good to me.
I really appreciate the positive feedback. Didn't expected that
Part 2 is halfway done, but I will take my time for making it (and future parts). I rather put in a little more work and time to do it better than rushing something.
Really great work. The story is very nice. I just don't get that part why he lost his consciousness outside and woke up inside again.
There are a few minor mistakes, mainly to and too... but overall I'm really looking forward to part 2.
Oh and there is a timer missing, a few timers in that last but one scene. You can't skip and there is no timer or a very, very long timer...
ThomasKu wrote:
Oh and there is a timer missing, a few timers in that last but one scene. You can't skip and there is no timer or a very, very long timer...
Should be fixed now. I don't know why, but Nyx just killed the timers at the transfer.