Strangetown - Mind Fuck

[Ashesndust]

Pretty much first draft, so there may be errors. If you find any, please post here and let me know so I can fix them. Comments welcome. This is the next to the last teast in the series.

[crazydreamer]

Just a small spelling error.. For the six strokes per second you have something like six seconds per second.. But I love the tease and the girl is incredible!

[ohyesplease]

Very Nice tease, like always by your hand. but i do not understand: when Kate asks the name of the girl, one cannot decie for "Amy" but that is her name, isn't it?

Kind regards

[camipco]

Just wanted to say I just started working my way through the strangetown series (I'm at windows) I'd skipped them up until now. I'm glad I went back - it's really a superb series. Great writing, great use of all the options in flash, nice picture selection, and just all round all kinds of hot. Thank you!

On the subject of which, I have a feature request (yes, I know this is the wrong forum).

It would be cool to have a page which was a portal for tease series (perhaps an admin could pick the teases that qualified, rather than let authors put up lots of intended-first-parts-of-never-continued-series, and yes I'm counting myself among authors who would do that). The page could have a link for each series, perhaps with a rating for the series as a whole, and go through to a "playlist" like page which displayed the teases in the series in order.

[Incubo]

I don't know if it's an error or if you meant for it be like that, but everytime I get to the Monty Python question, there is no correct answer. Am I just going crazy or was it intended that way?

[Ashesndust]

Thanks for the kudos, Camp.

And Incubo...you must learn PATIENCE grasshoppa. And that's the only hint I'll give.

[Incubo]

Ah ha!
You devious devil.
So you meant to drive me completely insane with that.
I knew it!