Strangenight

[Slavesven]

Hope you like it,

any and all reactions; thoughts, bugs, positive and negative feedback welcome!

[camel]

Thanks. I thought it was really hot. I'm not into eating my own cum, I clicked "no" to it at least 5 times, but the edging got the best of me, and I could feel my resolve crumbling, and that was a big turn-on.

Some thoughts...

* Look at how texturedmushroom sets and clears (using the Unset command) values in his script here: http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=2644. You could use it to set/clear whether or not clothespins are already on. It was a little silly when I got "put clothespins on your nipples" 5 times in a row.

* I liked the sound.

* It's "ruler", not "rule". ("Rule" is a word, but it's a law or judgement, not a stick.)

* I would have liked extended edging to be one of the punishments.

* The first woman in the tease looks... drugged. (just my opinion)

* The main model during edging was REALLY hot. (the Blue Fantasies girl)

* I think you want to say "you did very well" at the end. I don't remember your exact words but I think it was something like "you are very well done", which isn't really what I think you meant.

* When you were saying "down strokes only", it was rare that you ever reversed that with some new instructions. I wasn't sure if "down strokes only" was meant for just that frame or until told otherwise.

I know some of these are 'criticisms', but please don't take it badly. I'd've given it a 4 or 5 if we were allowed to vote for Nyx teases! Despite some of the grammar errors, this one was great at seducing and then getting more and more intense.

[Slavesven]

thanks camel,

well it was the first time i worked with flash
and i will fix the bugs and the other things.
it is just a test script.

thanks sven