Ahem. It has come to my attention that you wrote a tease with this title.
"Ever wondered just how far / low you will go - the longer you are denied? Shall we find out?' interim - what happened when the slave girl Verity found out the slave boy had been lusting after her"
It is huge! That is one huge title! I mean, holy shit, that's one huge title!
That's all.
A Letter to Kajirus
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Re: A Letter to Kajirus
Actually,
several other teases written by the same author
also have rather long titles.
I agree that is one long title,
so long it's hard to see who wrote the tease.
several other teases written by the same author
also have rather long titles.
I agree that is one long title,
so long it's hard to see who wrote the tease.
to thine own self be true
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Re: A Letter to Kajirus
yeah, that's a long ass title! it's amazing we even need the story after a title that long.
and why we're on the topic of odd grammar, all2true, dude, why do you type like your trying to make a haiku?
and why we're on the topic of odd grammar, all2true, dude, why do you type like your trying to make a haiku?
Re: A Letter to Kajirus
blue_down_under wrote: all2true, dude, why do you type like your trying to make a haiku?
Haha just noticed that now that you mentioned it.
Re: A Letter to Kajirus
In all fairness if he's got a widescreen monitor or a really high resolution, it might not seem as bad for him.
Re: A Letter to Kajirus
sorry guys - I do indeed have a widescreen
hope you like the tease itself though!
respect pet
hope you like the tease itself though!
respect pet
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Re: A Letter to Kajirus
I am a published poet, authorblue_down_under wrote:yeah, that's a long ass title! it's amazing we even need the story after a title that long.
and why we're on the topic of odd grammar, all2true, dude, why do you type like your trying to make a haiku?
have a few painting on private display.
Sometimes I slip into poetry without even noticing it.
Usually simple end rhyme.
As for bad grammer, I have dylexia.
Kanji loves long titles (5)
Unique among all authors (7)
still, teases are good (5)
There, is that better?
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Re: A Letter to Kajirus
I still do not see,
why you need to press enter
every other word?
why you need to press enter
every other word?

