FB: The Tournament: Slave Induction

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Hello everyone!

I would really appreciate if I could get some feedback for my latest tease, which can be found here https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=31099

This series would most likely be a trilogy, so advice as to how the next 2 teases can be improved would be taken and applied to the best of my ability.

Ps: The lack of ballbusting in this tease would be more than made up for in the next one! :-D
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Love the theme!

:thankyou:
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The only time that I was disappointed was when the tease ended :\'-(

I very much look forward to part two :w00t:
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I love where this tease is going, and I love the theme you established. The only thing I would do differently going forward (and this is just my personal taste and preference) is more explicit CBT. It can be challenging to find a good CBT theme, but you have it! I can't wait For the next installment!!
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And what I mean by explicit CBT is that there are a couple of times where the requirements seemed arbitrary. I also didn't read your post about more ball busting, which has me more excited than ever!
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arthurb wrote:Love the theme!

:thankyou:
illtaket42 wrote:The only time that I was disappointed was when the tease ended :\'-(

I very much look forward to part two :w00t:
Thank you for your kind words! :-D Part 2 is gonna waaay better
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ellendebarge wrote:And what I mean by explicit CBT is that there are a couple of times where the requirements seemed arbitrary. I also didn't read your post about more ball busting, which has me more excited than ever!
Yeah I get what you mean ;-) The next tease will most probably be a flash tease, so requirements will be made especially explicit! Thanks for your feedback :-)
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when is it coming out?
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ellendebarge wrote:when is it coming out?
Earliest by next month, sorry but I'm really busy at the moment
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