Request: Hell with Mel

[patchwolf]

Hey str0be!

Are we ever going to see some more of the Hell with Mel series? That one and the Piper series are my two favourites... hope I can spark some creative... juices. (Gee, there's a word loaded in "in-your-end-o")

[all2true]

I also loved the series,

Many people apprecaite having aa series tease because
they are in long term denial.

[str0be]

I guess there is demand for more Hell with Mel.

I had always planned on continuing the series, but I've been pretty busy with other stuff. I guess I should re-read the previous few parts and see what I can come up with. I know that I left off part 7 with a choice and I was procrastinating about how to do that justice in the next part. I figured my options would be the following,

1- do it as a flash tease but basically just have two branches based on your choice in part 7.
2- do 2 seperate 'traditional' teases. Which one you do based on your previous choice.
3- do a 'traditional' tease and just have the reader's 'chastity' determined by their previous choice.

I think I know how I'll proceed, but I'd love to hear what people think.


Thank you for the kind words. Since you all stroked my ego a bit here, it's only fair that I help you stroke... well you get the idea.

Stay tuned for Hell with Mel (Part 8)

str0be

[str0be]

ok, just finished whipping up a part 8. I'm going to do up 9a and 9b as the alternate paths based on what the reader did at the end of part 7.

str0be

[big90]

All this time I'd hadn't registered, but for this I had to.

The Hell with Mel series is hands down (ahem) my favorite not only because of the writing but also the model, it just all works so well together and is such an awesome fantasy.

More in any form would be appreciated, but I agree with the idea to not change formats now, and to do traditional teases instead of flash ones, but like I said, anything would be great.

Thanks for your hard work thus far, and I'm looking forward to the new ones.

Cheers

90

[droog]

Ditto to that.

The "tone of voice" she used, casual "oh, and I sold your car. Now why don't you..."

The only one I go back to repeatedly.

Ditto to the poster who veto'd flash teases. They are just not the same...

-droog

[str0be]

parts 8, 9a and 9b are up. Let me know what you think.

After getting those done, I'm again flush with ideas, so I'd say it would be a good bet that I'll be posting more parts.

str0be

[patchwolf]

Excellent work mate. Thank you for that, and I'm definitely looking forward to any more that you create.

[patchwolf]

Part 10: Sexy as hell. One of the best in the series so far. :) Well done, and I hope to see more.

I'll stroke your ego, so I can stroke my....

[str0be]

Thank you for the kind words. It is always a good motivational tool to hear that people enjoy your work. If you want to get more specific with what you liked or what made this part better than the others, I might be able to make future installments even better.

str0be

[Incubo]

I like the series stobe, but perhaps not for the same reasons others do.
I read them because they're well written and I kind of like teases that tell a story.
Hell with Mel does that. Now, I'm not into the feminization things, so as far as a "tease" goes, it doesn't do much for me, but it's still an interesting story.
I like that you've developed a personality/attitude for the model. Like I said, not necessarily an attitude I'd want to be around, but I like that you've done that. Makes her seem like a real person as opposed to just some random photos.
Keep up the good work.
(as a side note: loved the hotel one too. I just found that girl the other day while doing the translation one. Smokin'. Was planning one with her as well, but you beat me to it. )

[str0be]

Now, I'm not into the feminization things, so as far as a "tease" goes, it doesn't do much for me, but it's still an interesting story.

I did realize that all of my teases were feminization and that was partly why I did the hotel one the way I did. I want to explore some other stuff. I figure Mel will always have at least some aspect of that in the story because it's what the story is about, but at some point I'll probably be doing another series without it, just to see where it goes.

I like that you've developed a personality/attitude for the model. Like I said, not necessarily an attitude I'd want to be around, but I like that you've done that. Makes her seem like a real person as opposed to just some random photos.

Thank you very much. I've tried hard to make sure she's a character as opposed to just a picture that shouts orders. I'm glad to see that I've achieved some success with that.


str0be